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Post by adzpower on Apr 11, 2016 17:37:08 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback Tim, always good to hear, and yeah I thought it would be interesting to have had these demons posing as humans for all this time, subtly spying on the sisters without them knowing it. Kind of feeding back any info they thought was worth it back to the big bad until it was finally time to test them in battle so to speak.
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Post by jdpm1991 on Apr 11, 2016 17:53:58 GMT -5
OP shouldn't it be May 21st, 2001? Since Season 4 takes place in 2001?
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Post by adzpower on Apr 12, 2016 3:10:03 GMT -5
Ooh good question, well, what I've done is set the opening part in 2016 as if the story continued 10 years after Forever Charmed with Piper, Phoebe and Paige, 15 years exactly since Prue died, BUT I wanted the demon, Titus to be a big enemy of the sisters and get fed up of losing all the time, so he called Tempus and rewound time to 2001 to make it so they never discovered Paige and Prue lived, and I'm carrying the story on from there, with Prue, Piper and Phoebe, a re-imagined season 4. And I've started them off in July so that Phoebe has been missing down in the underworld for 2 months.
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Post by Melinda Halliwell on Apr 12, 2016 13:18:43 GMT -5
So Tempus wasn't destroyed for good season 3 end meaning he could rewind time here then.
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Post by adzpower on Apr 12, 2016 13:40:03 GMT -5
Yeah I see it more as he needs to recharge his batteries and can then use his powers again. I think of him as an immortal being.
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Post by Melinda Halliwell on Apr 12, 2016 16:17:35 GMT -5
Because time is infinite so as long as that exists and his powers are linked to it then so will he?
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Post by adzpower on Apr 12, 2016 17:06:04 GMT -5
Couldn't have said it better myself Melinda, excellent summary there.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 12, 2016 17:37:40 GMT -5
I liked how you had Prue hope that Rex and Hannah were in a better place.
I'm glad you're not subscribing to Kern's outdated black and white morality.
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Post by adzpower on Apr 19, 2016 18:22:38 GMT -5
Chapter four is now up, would love to hear any thoughts.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 19, 2016 23:54:30 GMT -5
The part about the demons slaughtering a restaurant full of people seemed more like something that would happen on Supernatural, not Charmed.
Loved Phoebe's frisky clone.
When the little boy was introduced at the end, I knew it was Tyler, before his name was mentioned.
Good chapter.
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Post by adzpower on Apr 20, 2016 3:56:48 GMT -5
Yeah I knew it was very Supernatural-esque. But I was trying to make The Source seem more intimidating. In the show he just came off as a big bore, he didn't kill anyone, he barely hurt anyone, and this is the guy who's supposed to be the embodiment of all evil.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 20, 2016 11:23:35 GMT -5
And you did a good job. As I said, the massacre seemed more like something Azazel (or any other Supernatural big bad) would have done.
Nice to have a Source one can take seriously, not a whiny half faced loser that one can laugh at.
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Post by adzpower on Apr 20, 2016 12:46:04 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback Tim, always appreciated : )
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Post by Deleted on Apr 20, 2016 17:45:48 GMT -5
You're welcome.
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Post by adzpower on Apr 22, 2016 14:35:04 GMT -5
chapter five now available.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 22, 2016 16:28:21 GMT -5
Wow, you moved fast with this one.
Prue and Darryl meet a "Ms. Matthews". I wonder if they'll ever find out who she really is.
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Post by adzpower on Apr 22, 2016 17:39:19 GMT -5
Hehe, you'll have to wait and see : )
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Post by adzpower on Apr 29, 2016 18:09:28 GMT -5
Chapter six is up, sorry it took a bit longer, all I will say is that life got in the way.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 30, 2016 0:02:47 GMT -5
You sent Prue to London. Cool.
In the series they never left San Francisco.
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Post by adzpower on May 6, 2016 17:21:27 GMT -5
For anyone interested I'd like to apologize for the delay in the next chapter, I've had a very stressful week, my mother was admitted to hospital for a suspected brain bleed so I've been there most of the week and haven't really had the time to write.
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