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Post by staceface510 on Oct 10, 2005 21:51:57 GMT -5
GEEZ! Just stop there! Soooo mean! lol! The love part was a little sappy...but hey! Who doesn't enjoy a good love story now and then? Great update!
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Post by charmedfreak92 on Oct 13, 2005 21:23:42 GMT -5
Hi! Ive just recently registered on thsi site, but ever since like fifth grade id come to this site, (and now im in eight grade), and I LOVE LOVE LOVE your fanfic. SO KEEP IT UP!!
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Oct 16, 2005 1:02:49 GMT -5
Wow...you really did a good job on this update! I love the part between Mel and DJ and the part between Leo and Cole arguing, it was so great! I hope you can post the next update really soon.
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Post by elenarae on Oct 25, 2005 12:10:23 GMT -5
Loved the update! Hope to see more soon.
I can just imagine Cole taking his anger and frustration out on the demons that just shimmered in! They better watch out!
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Nov 16, 2005 20:51:44 GMT -5
OKay Leigh...you have to update this story soon!! It's been over a month and I'm anxious to know what happens! I'm not pressureing you, but I'm just wondering when your next update will be! Please post soon!
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Post by Faithfully charmed on Nov 18, 2005 8:22:21 GMT -5
OK if you don't update soon, I'm gonna ask these guys to start singing with me, and it won't be pretty. I said it before and I will say it again - "I love this story!!" ;D
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Post by IlovesmesomeChris on Nov 25, 2005 0:26:04 GMT -5
THe reason i regestered with this site was to complement you on such an amazing story! don't make me regret it! lol jk keep up the good work!
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Post by hollypop on Dec 14, 2005 13:44:30 GMT -5
Leigh.. I'm a BIG fan of your story too. Just to let ya know that all of us are waiting It really is a good story. It just 'unfolds' in my head like one very big movie.
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Post by leigh19 on Dec 16, 2005 23:32:07 GMT -5
NOT AN UPDATE (sorry if you got your hopes up.)
I just want to thank you for all of your wonderful comments and reassure you that I am not dead and have not forgotten about the story. I have started the next chapter (which should also be the last chapter) but I have not had time to finish it between work, school, essays and exams. I'm on break on the 21st, and if all goes well I should have an early Christmas present for ya'll.
Once again I'm sorry- and I'm truly touched by your sweet comments. It means a lot to me that people are enjoying it, and I feel *terrible* for making you wait this long.
I hope it will be worth it though. It should be long and should (hopefully) tie everything up.
*hugs*
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Post by Jamison on Dec 17, 2005 1:20:31 GMT -5
i've only read pages 1-3 (on the forum) but amazing work! I can't wait to see what happens!!!
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Post by leigh19 on Jan 15, 2006 0:59:31 GMT -5
Well, I ended up spending my holiday in bed with the flu...no writing got done. I want people to know that i'm still trying though, so here's a mini update- hopefully it will remind people that I exist and that I still want to finish this. Enjoy (sorry that it isn't much- I hope more will follow this week)
XXXXXXX Chapter 25- (teaser) XXXXXXX Inspector Jameson drew a deep sigh and leaned back against the cold stone wall of the police station.
He was still thrilled about his accomplishments over these past few days (after all, he had pieced together the clues and managed to capture five of the culprits responsible for last night’s chaos)…but he still could not suppress the dread growing inside of him.
He had spent the past several minutes listening to some of the conversation his officers had recorded from within the jail cell containing the four ‘angels’. Although the quality of the recordings was not ideal, comments such as “They’ll come” and “Fifteen minutes” had come through clear enough to arouse his worry and suspicion.
This entire situation had not gone according to plan. He had captured the freaks easily enough, but instead of facing him with fear and respect they had stood up to him with cocky confidence. They had mocked him- made threats. The brown haired boy had proved to be particularly tiresome and had mentioned that their ‘powerful friends’ would soon be on the way to rescue them. Jameson still was not sure what to make of this comment and he wondered just how powerful these ‘friends’ could be. He was not particularly worried about facing more angels, but the thought of more ‘demons’ sent a chill down his spine. The young demon girl had not seemed to be a threat, but he imagined that there were older and scarier demons out there which could create more complications. He had seen things last night…terrible things…and he did not relish the idea of coming face to face with a terrifying scaly beast.
Jameson furrowed his sweaty brow and tried, unsuccessfully, to calm his thoughts.
It made little sense to think that big scary demons might rush in at any moment to rescue the angels- after all, angels were good and demons were bad, weren’t they? Why would they want to help each other out?
From his perspective, it defied all reason…
He nervously bit his lip- as much as he wanted to, he knew that he could not depend on such logic. As strange and irrational as it all seemed, he had found four angels and one demon in the same house. And, to make matters even more complicated, it seemed that the demon was related to at least some of the angels. The entire situation difficult to digest and he could only hope that the results of the blood tests and further questioning would help to clear up the uncertainty swirling around in his head.
Could the demon girl, Melinda Turner, really be the cousin of Christopher and Wyatt Halliwell?
How had all three teens- who were quite obviously not normal- managed to live regular lives for all of these years?
Why had they suddenly been exposed…?
Sighing heavily once again as he forced himself off the wall, Jameson began to walk back to his office. He knew that this was not the time to concern himself with unanswerable questions. Right now, he needed to make a few more phone calls and collect himself before this night became even more chaotic. According to one of his officers, the feds had caught wind of the story and were now on their way. The local news station would also be arriving within the hour to capture footage of the freaks and Jameson, despite his fatigue, wanted to be there to take full credit for their imprisonment.
Trying to push his lingering worries aside, the man continued his trek down the abandoned hallway. He had to focus on the good aspects of the situation…
Soon, his face would be broadcast across the country as he retold his harrowing tale.
Soon, he would be praised for his bravery and skill.
Soon, he would be famous…
A smile tugged at the corner of his mouth as he contemplated these more positive aspects of the situation. If everything went smoothly, the benefits of his actions would far outweigh his worries. So far, the angel’s threats and seemed to be empty ones and he could still hope that these so called ‘friends’ would not arrive. And, even if help did come, there was a good chance that it would be too little too late…the increased security provided by the fed’s and the proof recorded by the media would make it almost impossible for his specimens to escape and conceal themselves. They would be forever exposed…and he would be forever notorious…
Jameson’s heartbeat began to quicken…victory was so near…he could feel it.
Unless something went wrong in the next little while, his success was almost guaranteed.
He rounded another corner, his smile widening with every step.
He knew that as the seconds ticked by, his victory grew nearer.
It was coming.
Soon…
‘BANG’
A loud and resonating noise suddenly echoed through the dim hallway, breaking the man away from his smug thoughts. Jameson froze misstep and reached down to grasp the handle of his gun…
He could hear the sound of his own blood pumping in his ears…he turned abruptly, hoping to see some indication of what had made the sound.
There was nothing within his range of vision, but he could make out more faint noises coming from his left…coming from where he had the angels imprisoned…
Fearing the worst, and knowing that his self-satisfaction had been premature, Jameson took off down the hallway, hoping that he wasn’t too late…hoping that his glory hadn’t already been lost...
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Post by GoldnWlf on Jan 18, 2006 17:42:41 GMT -5
YAY You updated! Awesome awesome awesome. I hope you are feeling better and that you update soon. I have no idea how you are going to get out of this without doing something silly like the cleaners... I can't wait to see where you are going to take your story.
Please don't keep me waiting long!
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Post by prue on Jan 18, 2006 19:44:48 GMT -5
very, very, very good! i totally love this story!!!! i do hope that you are feeling better now and that everything goes well with the rest of this story! cannot wait for the next update!
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Post by IlovesmesomeChris on Feb 5, 2006 18:06:18 GMT -5
golly good!!!!!!!!
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Post by leigh19 on Feb 8, 2006 0:48:48 GMT -5
One Year and 1,645 posts later...I have decided to end my time at the Cafe and unfortunately will not be updating this story here. Thank you all so very much for the great feedback- I truly appreciate it. I'm not sure when (or if) I'll get around to finishing this, but you can check fanfiction.net for updates. Here is a link to this story: www.fanfiction.net/s/2170505/1/ and my Profile: www.fanfiction.net/u/296661/Once again, thank you all very much. I've had a blast. -Leigh
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