Prue finding true love

[BriannaWarren2.0]

Mar 16, 2021 13:14:04 GMT -5 Esmeralda said:

Mar 16, 2021 4:03:29 GMT -5 BriannaWarren2.0 said:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully I'll be able to write something that people would enjoy reading, I'll definitely credit you.

I have never really loved the idea of Paige being a half-sister, I have always wanted her to be a descendant of P. Bowen, since it'll tie in their past lives, maybe Bowen and Baxter had a disagreement with the vanquish of Russell because one of the cousins thought they could have save her while the other thinking that she was past saving, with Bowen moving away, maybe to New York. 

Paige, she would be at the same level as Kyra with Premonitions, since her powers developed due to her powers not being bound as a child.

I would love if Leo started to question the Elders motives as well and decides to rebel against them too, bring the whole fallen angel element to it too, with him being able to have his powers so he won't be entirely useless. 

I like all of this, EXCEPT for the idea that if Paige isn't a sister or half-sister, I wouldn't want her to be able to become Charmed - although that's just me. I really do prefer the Power of Three being three sisters (or two and one half), not two sisters and one first-cousin-four times removed, which is what they'd be if P. Bowers and P. Baxter are cousins and P. Baxter is Grams' mother. Just not close enough to have that bond for me.

Of course if you want to make it so three Warrens can become Charmed (like what happened in 'Forever Crap', I mean 'Forever Piper", I mean 'Forever Charmed' where Grams, Patty and Piper were able to cast a Power of Three spell, go for it.

I am kind of torn between having her being the older-half sister, the younger half-sister or a cousin, I don't believe that just because three Warren's so happen to be born around the same time with the three powers of Melinda's that they are the Charmed Ones, I do believe that they have to be sisters.

If Paige was introduced earlier in season three, or even in the series as a whole, I would have preferred her to be a cousin (descendant of Bowen) of the sisters but because she wasn't I'll probably keep her as a sister however I would want to figure out whether or not Paige is the older or younger sister of Prue, Piper and Phoebe.

[Esmeralda]

Mar 16, 2021 13:41:11 GMT -5 BriannaWarren2.0 said:

Mar 16, 2021 13:14:04 GMT -5 Esmeralda said:

I like all of this, EXCEPT for the idea that if Paige isn't a sister or half-sister, I wouldn't want her to be able to become Charmed - although that's just me. I really do prefer the Power of Three being three sisters (or two and one half), not two sisters and one first-cousin-four times removed, which is what they'd be if P. Bowers and P. Baxter are cousins and P. Baxter is Grams' mother. Just not close enough to have that bond for me.

Of course if you want to make it so three Warrens can become Charmed (like what happened in 'Forever Crap', I mean 'Forever Piper", I mean 'Forever Charmed' where Grams, Patty and Piper were able to cast a Power of Three spell, go for it.

I am kind of torn between having her being the older-half sister, the younger half-sister or a cousin, I don't believe that just because three Warren's so happen to be born around the same time with the three powers of Melinda's that they are the Charmed Ones, I do believe that they have to be sisters.

If Paige was introduced earlier in season three, or even in the series as a whole, I would have preferred her to be a cousin (descendant of Bowen) of the sisters but because she wasn't I'll probably keep her as a sister however I would want to figure out whether or not Paige is the older or younger sister of Prue, Piper and Phoebe.

I wonder if you'd be happier if you keep Paige as a full younger sister of Prue, Piper and Phoebe who was hidden because the other three already have the three powers, and introduce another witch (think Billie...) as a Bowen. You can do whatever you want to do with Paige that you wanted to do with her as a Bowen, but let her be a full sister.

But, as always, don't do something just because I like it. It's YOUR fic so do what YOU feel is best. If you want Paige to be a Bowen and because she's a Warren and has the power of premonition, the third power, she can still become Charmed, then DO IT!

[goldeneye049]

I really like. I also prefer paige to be the fourth sister. What I would have preferred is for the elders take to Paige and erase the memories of Patty and Grams. Thus, the anger towards them would increase as it could have been an asset for the Charmed. Paige has the power of divination and orb and inherits that of her deceased sister.

[BriannaWarren2.0]

Mar 16, 2021 13:49:38 GMT -5 Esmeralda said:

Mar 16, 2021 13:41:11 GMT -5 BriannaWarren2.0 said:

I am kind of torn between having her being the older-half sister, the younger half-sister or a cousin, I don't believe that just because three Warren's so happen to be born around the same time with the three powers of Melinda's that they are the Charmed Ones, I do believe that they have to be sisters.

If Paige was introduced earlier in season three, or even in the series as a whole, I would have preferred her to be a cousin (descendant of Bowen) of the sisters but because she wasn't I'll probably keep her as a sister however I would want to figure out whether or not Paige is the older or younger sister of Prue, Piper and Phoebe.

I wonder if you'd be happier if you keep Paige as a full younger sister of Prue, Piper and Phoebe who was hidden because the other three already have the three powers, and introduce another witch (think Billie...) as a Bowen. You can do whatever you want to do with Paige that you wanted to do with her as a Bowen, but let her be a full sister.

But, as always, don't do something just because I like it. It's YOUR fic so do what YOU feel is best. If you want Paige to be a Bowen and because she's a Warren and has the power of premonition, the third power, she can still become Charmed, then DO IT!

I have come to the conclusion that Paige will be the full younger sister of Prue, Piper and Phoebe (who is the one killed by Shax sent by the Elders) and that Billie is a Bowen.

Paige will have Premonitions since it'll complete the Power Of Three, however unlike Phoebe she can see her visions like the Seer, so she isn't a carbon copy of Phoebe, she is unique.
Paige was kidnapped by the Elders for punishment about a rumoured affair between Patty and Sam.
Patty was searching for Paige when she was killed by the Water Demon.  

Billie has Telekinesis and Projection, just like she does originally, she also keeps the Athame which is a magical item she picked up after a Demon vanquish and thought it could have been useful in the future. 

[Esmeralda]

Mar 18, 2021 15:05:14 GMT -5 BriannaWarren2.0 said:

Mar 16, 2021 13:49:38 GMT -5 Esmeralda said:

I wonder if you'd be happier if you keep Paige as a full younger sister of Prue, Piper and Phoebe who was hidden because the other three already have the three powers, and introduce another witch (think Billie...) as a Bowen. You can do whatever you want to do with Paige that you wanted to do with her as a Bowen, but let her be a full sister.

But, as always, don't do something just because I like it. It's YOUR fic so do what YOU feel is best. If you want Paige to be a Bowen and because she's a Warren and has the power of premonition, the third power, she can still become Charmed, then DO IT!

I have come to the conclusion that Paige will be the full younger sister of Prue, Piper and Phoebe (who is the one killed by Shax sent by the Elders) and that Billie is a Bowen.

LOVE those ideas.

Paige will have Premonitions since it'll complete the Power Of Three, however unlike Phoebe she can see her visions like the Seer, so she isn't a carbon copy of Phoebe, she is unique.

Not nuts on that because it's that's what Phoebe should've had (since she's older and the first of these two to be Charmed) while Paige has the not-as-good version. That's what the Elders would do, since they wouldn't think that any of the original Charmed Ones would die. That's why I feel Paige should have Phoebe's EXACT power - the Elders would give HER power to Paige, so it would be exactly the same.

Although if you think that they were simply born with these powers, rather than have the Elders bestow those powers on them as I think, then what you're saying makes perfect sense.

Paige was kidnapped by the Elders for punishment about a rumoured affair between Patty and Sam.
Patty was searching for Paige when she was killed by the Water Demon.

OOOH! Love all of this. Actually if you wanted to, you could have Paige play Christy since this sounds like what happened to her. Just let her have the Seer power instead of the firepower, and let the Elders return her after Phoebe dies.

Billie has Telekinesis and Projection, just like she does originally, she also keeps the Athame which is a magical item she picked up after a Demon vanquish and thought it could have been useful in the future. 

Cool! Definitely like that.

[BriannaWarren2.0]

Mar 18, 2021 16:09:46 GMT -5 Esmeralda said:

Mar 18, 2021 15:05:14 GMT -5 BriannaWarren2.0 said:

I have come to the conclusion that Paige will be the full younger sister of Prue, Piper and Phoebe (who is the one killed by Shax sent by the Elders) and that Billie is a Bowen.

LOVE those ideas.

Paige will have Premonitions since it'll complete the Power Of Three, however unlike Phoebe she can see her visions like the Seer, so she isn't a carbon copy of Phoebe, she is unique.

Not nuts on that because it's that's what Phoebe should've had (since she's older and the first of these two to be Charmed) while Paige has the not-as-good version. That's what the Elders would do, since they wouldn't think that any of the original Charmed Ones would die. That's why I feel Paige should have Phoebe's EXACT power - the Elders would give HER power to Paige, so it would be exactly the same.

Although if you think that they were simply born with these powers, rather than have the Elders bestow those powers on them as I think, then what you're saying makes perfect sense.

Paige was kidnapped by the Elders for punishment about a rumoured affair between Patty and Sam.
Patty was searching for Paige when she was killed by the Water Demon.

OOOH! Love all of this. Actually if you wanted to, you could have Paige play Christy since this sounds like what happened to her. Just let her have the Seer power instead of the firepower, and let the Elders return her after Phoebe dies.

Billie has Telekinesis and Projection, just like she does originally, she also keeps the Athame which is a magical item she picked up after a Demon vanquish and thought it could have been useful in the future. 

Cool! Definitely like that.

I don't believe that the Elders should have the power to give or remove powers, I have always hated that when Phoebe's powers were stripped and she was rendered useless. 

Paige would have definitely resented the Elders for kidnapping her, after Phoebe dies, Paige is sent by the Elders to replace Phoebe so the Charmed Legacy can continue.

Prue is the one to summon Patty and to ask her who Paige is, that's when she tells her daughters about Paige and what happened to her, the Elders making her believe her daughter was kidnapped by a demon, she hunts them down with the demons she kills telling her that they never kidnapped a witch, while Patty is consistently gaslighted into believing that a demon must have kidnapped her daughter. 

Cole would be in the Underworld for Phoebe's vanquish, he is unaware of what happened, when Cole shimmers in, Leo is the one who tells him what happened after Cole seeing Prue, Piper and Leo upset.
Cole is saying that doesn't make any sense because Shax is a transactional demon and that no demons are paying Shax, so either it was a demon who happens to look like Shax or someone else payed him since he doesn't vanquish people for free, even the Source has to pay him in one way or another.  
Cole is pissed off after the possibility that someone sent Shax to kill Phoebe with Prue calming him down reminding him that Phoebe will always love him and that she never gave up hope on him.  

[Esmeralda]

I liked Phoebe having her powers stripped, but I thought Paige should've had hers, too. Sorry, but by this point, I thought the sisters were more demonic than the demons and really didn't like any of them.

As long as you have the Elders actually being demons, I like all of your ideas. Otherwise, I'd hate them as much as the canon ones. I HATE the Elders being evil - it makes them too human! - which is why I prefer them in S1-3 where we never see them.

I prefer our version of Cole bringing a dead Phoebe to the Manor where Leo (who has just healed Prue and Piper) tries to heal her but can't because she's already dead. But as always, do what feels right to you.

I also prefer our Paige, but again, do what feels right to you.

[BriannaWarren2.0]

Mar 19, 2021 3:07:37 GMT -5 Esmeralda said:

I liked Phoebe having her powers stripped, but I thought Paige should've had hers, too. Sorry, but by this point, I thought the sisters were more demonic than the demons and really didn't like any of them.

As long as you have the Elders actually being demons, I like all of your ideas. Otherwise, I'd hate them as much as the canon ones. I HATE the Elders being evil - it makes them too human! - which is why I prefer them in S1-3 where we never see them.

I prefer our version of Cole bringing a dead Phoebe to the Manor where Leo (who has just healed Prue and Piper) tries to heal her but can't because she's already dead. But as always, do what feels right to you.

I also prefer our Paige, but again, do what feels right to you.

That is perfectly okay, we don't have to agree on everything. 

I like the idea that he wasn't there to protect her, he was in the Underworld trying to get information about who the Charmed Ones mystery attacker was, then Shax killed Phoebe. 

[Esmeralda]

Mar 19, 2021 8:34:09 GMT -5 BriannaWarren2.0 said:

Mar 19, 2021 8:34:09 GMT -5 BriannaWarren2.0 said:

I liked Phoebe having her powers stripped, but I thought Paige should've had hers, too. Sorry, but by this point, I thought the sisters were more demonic than the demons and really didn't like any of them.

As long as you have the Elders actually being demons, I like all of your ideas. Otherwise, I'd hate them as much as the canon ones. I HATE the Elders being evil - it makes them too human! - which is why I prefer them in S1-3 where we never see them.

I prefer our version of Cole bringing a dead Phoebe to the Manor where Leo (who has just healed Prue and Piper) tries to heal her but can't because she's already dead. But as always, do what feels right to you.

I also prefer our Paige, but again, do what feels right to you.

That is perfectly okay, we don't have to agree on everything. 

I like the idea that he wasn't there to protect her, he was in the Underworld trying to get information about who the Charmed Ones mystery attacker was, then Shax killed Phoebe. 

YAY! Glad that you're the type who can agree to disagree!

I like your idea for why Cole's not with them, but I prefer our idea of it being both Prue and Leo who feel guilty for not being able to protect her while like canon, Cole feels dreadful because Phoebe was in the Underworld tying to save her.

That leads into this scene:

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Charmed: Rewritten

STARRING:
Shannen Doherty as Prue
Holly Marie Combs as Piper
Alyssa Milano as Phoebe

CO-STARRING:
Brian Krause as Leo
Julian McMahon as Cole
Dorian Gregory as Darryl

2x01: "Ye of Little Fate"
Season Premiere

ACT ONE

ALYSSA MILANO (v.o.):
Previously on Charmed Rewritten…

A tornado of wind twists through the front door, blasting it open. PRUE quickly shoves PAIGE behind her protectively as she and PIPER look towards the door with dread. The tornado knocks the two of them to the floor, sending the two sisters sailing.

A clap of thunder sounds before the tornado calms down, revealing SHAX. Paige takes several fearful steps back.

PAIGE:
Prue?! Piper?!

PRUE:
No!

Prue jumps up, shoving Paige out of the way just as Shax throws an energy ball at her. It sends Prue crashing literally straight through a wall.

Piper pushes herself up. Paige screams as Shax throws an energy ball at Piper, sending her crashing through the wall as well. Shax then turns to Paige.

PAIGE:
Oh, God...

Shax throws an energy ball at Paige, but she panic-orbs and the energy ball flies through the orbs. But when PAIGE orbs back in, another energy ball sends her flying, crashing through a window.

Just as Paige goes sailing, LEO orbs in.

LEO:
Piper! Prue!

He rushes towards them, stumbling over the debris from the smashed walls. Shax tilts his head to the side, watching Leo. A cruel smile twists his face.

Leo holds his hands over Prue and Piper. First his hands and then the sisters begin to glow golden, but before Leo can have a significant effect on them, he doubles over in pain.

LEO:
Phoebe...

A badly-wounded COLE, carrying a limp and lifeless-looking PHOEBE in his arms, shimmers in.

COLE:
Leo, it’s...

SHAX:
The end.

Cole and Leo both realize that Shax is there too late. Shax throws an energy ball at Leo, sending him crashing into the wall to fall limply to the ground.

Cole, still holding Phoebe, doesn’t have time to react as the next energy ball catches him and sends them both crashing into a wall.

Cole lands twisted next to Phoebe’s limp form with one arm draped over her. He tries to lift his head up, pain shining in his eyes but his head drops back down against the debris.

Shax looks around at the the wreckage of the Manor and the crumpled bodies of the Charmed Ones and those they are closest to, pleased. He then turns back into the tornado of wind and flies out the front door. The glass on the door smashes as it slams shut.

BLACKOUT

FADE IN:
INT. FOYER - CONTINUOUS

We hear a soft groan of pain.

Cole is moving, trying to push himself up. He groans again and his eyes open as he stirs. As he regains consciousness he jerks upright a little too quickly. He lifts a hand to his head.

As his vision clears, his eyes fall upon Phoebe’s broken frame and the blood that surrounds her. He quickly cradles her. Her head lolls lifelessly to one side as he pulls her into his arms.

COLE:
Phoebe... Phoebe?

There is no response from Phoebe and Cole hugs her tighter, letting out an anguished cry.

CUT TO:

INT. UNDERWORLD – THE LAIR OF THE SOURCE - SIMULTANEOUS

Cole's anguished cry echoes off the walls.

THE SOURCE wraps his claw-like hands around the arm rests of his chair and lets out a deep frightening laugh. This laugh trails off as a pair of MID-LEVEL DEMONS shimmer into the Lair of the Source. They drop to their knees and bow their heads.

DEMON #1:
Belthazor escaped.

DEMON #2:
With his witch.

DEMON #1:
The witch was fatally wounded. It is doubtful he will be able to get her to her whitelighter in time.

THE SOURCE:
The Seer has already informed me of this failure.

A familiar tornado swirl appears in the fiery lair of the Source of All Evil. It calms and reveals SHAX. The assassin drops to the ground, kneeling before the Source.

SHAX:
It has been done as you have commanded, my Master.

THE SOURCE:
(to the demons)
Your mess has been cleaned up for you, but you have still failed me.

The Source forms a pair of fireballs and tosses them at the two demons. They burst out into flames and let out screams as they are vanquished. The Source snaps his finger, summoning a DARKLIGHTER.

THE SOURCE:
I want you to go and finish the job. Kill the Charmed One’s whitelighter.

The darklighter smiles, pleased with his mission. He bows his head to the Source, then dark-orbs out.

CUT TO:

INT. FOYER - CONTINUOUS

Cole is still rocking in place with Phoebe’s body. Not far from him Leo stirs. Cole notices and looks helplessly towards him.

COLE:
Leo... please, you have to help her.

Leo moves towards Cole and holds a hand over Phoebe’s chest, but no golden glow appears. Cole looks at Leo, holding to Phoebe desperately.

COLE:
Why isn’t it working? Leo? Why isn’t it working?!

LEO:
I can’t... Cole... there’s nothing I can do, she’s already gone.

COLE:
No. NO! Try again.

LEO:
She’s gone, Cole. I can’t heal the dead!

COLE:
She’s not dead! Try again, damn it!

LEO:
I... I’m sorry... I have to help the others...

Leo moves away towards Prue and Piper who are in worse condition than they were and fading fast. He holds his hands over them, the golden glow appears and the two sisters slowly come to.

PRUE:
(blearily)
Paige. Leo, where’s Paige?

PIPER:
(blearily)
Go! Forget about us; we’re gonna be fine. Heal our innocent.

Leo looks up, directing a pained expression towards Cole who is glaring at him with accusation. Leo goes towards the window that Paige crashed through.

COLE:
Forget about her! What about Phoebe?!

A cloud of orbs appears in front of Leo, forming into the familiar figure of “By the Book” NATALIE. Leo looks at her in confusion.

LEO:
Natalie? What are you doing here?

NATALIE:
Seeing to my charge. I believe you should see to yours.

LEO:
(confused)
But...

NATALIE:
(shaking her head)
You know better. Charge-whitelighter confidentiality; it’s a rule. Now stick to the rules and finish healing your charges, Leo.

Leo watches Natalie as she climbs through the window to take care of Paige, and he moves back towards his own charges.

Neither Piper nor Prue have noticed Natalie. They've managed to open their eyes and after calling to each other and knowing the other is, well, still alive, they both call out for Phoebe. When there is no answer, they look around and spot Phoebe in Cole's arms. When they realize that their baby sister isn’t moving, even though they both are just barely conscious themselves, they slowly, painfully make their way over to Cole who is stroking the side of Phoebe’s face.

COLE:
Come on Phoebe... please... please... You can’t leave me. I can’t live without you. You're my salvation! How can I live without you?

Leo reaches Cole and Phoebe at the same time as Prue and Piper. He raises his hands to Prue’s and Piper’s forehead, but as soon as they begin to glow, Cole grabs them and instead puts them over Phoebe’s heart.

COLE:
She’s not dead. She can’t be! I won’t let her be. Now heal her!

But no sooner are Leo’s hands over Phoebe’s heart than the glow is extinguished. Both sisters and Cole let out a wail of anguish, still unable to accept what they already know—Cole has lost his love; Prue and Piper have lost their baby sister; Leo has lost a charge way before her time.

Off their agony:

OPENING CREDITS ROLL

Again, feel free to use anything in that that will fit with yours, and again do what you feel works best for yours, since our Paige was their friend and innocent in S3 while yours has been kidnapped for more than 20 years, so, of course you'd do it differently.

[BriannaWarren2.0]

Mar 19, 2021 9:42:23 GMT -5 Esmeralda said:

Mar 19, 2021 8:34:09 GMT -5 BriannaWarren2.0 said:

That is perfectly okay, we don't have to agree on everything. 

I like the idea that he wasn't there to protect her, he was in the Underworld trying to get information about who the Charmed Ones mystery attacker was, then Shax killed Phoebe. 

YAY! Glad that you're the type who can agree to disagree!

I like your idea for why Cole's not with them, but I prefer our idea of it being both Prue and Leo who feel guilty for not being able to protect her while like canon, Cole feels dreadful because Phoebe was in the Underworld tying to save her.

That leads into this scene:

------------------------------
Charmed: Rewritten

STARRING:
Shannen Doherty as Prue
Holly Marie Combs as Piper
Alyssa Milano as Phoebe

CO-STARRING:
Brian Krause as Leo
Julian McMahon as Cole
Dorian Gregory as Darryl

2x01: "Ye of Little Fate"
Season Premiere

ACT ONE

ALYSSA MILANO (v.o.):
Previously on Charmed Rewritten…

A tornado of wind twists through the front door, blasting it open. PRUE quickly shoves PAIGE behind her protectively as she and PIPER look towards the door with dread. The tornado knocks the two of them to the floor, sending the two sisters sailing.

A clap of thunder sounds before the tornado calms down, revealing SHAX. Paige takes several fearful steps back.

PAIGE:
Prue?! Piper?!

PRUE:
No!

Prue jumps up, shoving Paige out of the way just as Shax throws an energy ball at her. It sends Prue crashing literally straight through a wall.

Piper pushes herself up. Paige screams as Shax throws an energy ball at Piper, sending her crashing through the wall as well. Shax then turns to Paige.

PAIGE:
Oh, God...

Shax throws an energy ball at Paige, but she panic-orbs and the energy ball flies through the orbs. But when PAIGE orbs back in, another energy ball sends her flying, crashing through a window.

Just as Paige goes sailing, LEO orbs in.

LEO:
Piper! Prue!

He rushes towards them, stumbling over the debris from the smashed walls. Shax tilts his head to the side, watching Leo. A cruel smile twists his face.

Leo holds his hands over Prue and Piper. First his hands and then the sisters begin to glow golden, but before Leo can have a significant effect on them, he doubles over in pain.

LEO:
Phoebe...

A badly-wounded COLE, carrying a limp and lifeless-looking PHOEBE in his arms, shimmers in.

COLE:
Leo, it’s...

SHAX:
The end.

Cole and Leo both realize that Shax is there too late. Shax throws an energy ball at Leo, sending him crashing into the wall to fall limply to the ground.

Cole, still holding Phoebe, doesn’t have time to react as the next energy ball catches him and sends them both crashing into a wall.

Cole lands twisted next to Phoebe’s limp form with one arm draped over her. He tries to lift his head up, pain shining in his eyes but his head drops back down against the debris.

Shax looks around at the the wreckage of the Manor and the crumpled bodies of the Charmed Ones and those they are closest to, pleased. He then turns back into the tornado of wind and flies out the front door. The glass on the door smashes as it slams shut.

BLACKOUT

FADE IN:
INT. FOYER - CONTINUOUS

We hear a soft groan of pain.

Cole is moving, trying to push himself up. He groans again and his eyes open as he stirs. As he regains consciousness he jerks upright a little too quickly. He lifts a hand to his head.

As his vision clears, his eyes fall upon Phoebe’s broken frame and the blood that surrounds her. He quickly cradles her. Her head lolls lifelessly to one side as he pulls her into his arms.

COLE:
Phoebe... Phoebe?

There is no response from Phoebe and Cole hugs her tighter, letting out an anguished cry.

CUT TO:

INT. UNDERWORLD – THE LAIR OF THE SOURCE - SIMULTANEOUS

Cole's anguished cry echoes off the walls.

THE SOURCE wraps his claw-like hands around the arm rests of his chair and lets out a deep frightening laugh. This laugh trails off as a pair of MID-LEVEL DEMONS shimmer into the Lair of the Source. They drop to their knees and bow their heads.

DEMON #1:
Belthazor escaped.

DEMON #2:
With his witch.

DEMON #1:
The witch was fatally wounded. It is doubtful he will be able to get her to her whitelighter in time.

THE SOURCE:
The Seer has already informed me of this failure.

A familiar tornado swirl appears in the fiery lair of the Source of All Evil. It calms and reveals SHAX. The assassin drops to the ground, kneeling before the Source.

SHAX:
It has been done as you have commanded, my Master.

THE SOURCE:
(to the demons)
Your mess has been cleaned up for you, but you have still failed me.

The Source forms a pair of fireballs and tosses them at the two demons. They burst out into flames and let out screams as they are vanquished. The Source snaps his finger, summoning a DARKLIGHTER.

THE SOURCE:
I want you to go and finish the job. Kill the Charmed One’s whitelighter.

The darklighter smiles, pleased with his mission. He bows his head to the Source, then dark-orbs out.

CUT TO:

INT. FOYER - CONTINUOUS

Cole is still rocking in place with Phoebe’s body. Not far from him Leo stirs. Cole notices and looks helplessly towards him.

COLE:
Leo... please, you have to help her.

Leo moves towards Cole and holds a hand over Phoebe’s chest, but no golden glow appears. Cole looks at Leo, holding to Phoebe desperately.

COLE:
Why isn’t it working? Leo? Why isn’t it working?!

LEO:
I can’t... Cole... there’s nothing I can do, she’s already gone.

COLE:
No. NO! Try again.

LEO:
She’s gone, Cole. I can’t heal the dead!

COLE:
She’s not dead! Try again, damn it!

LEO:
I... I’m sorry... I have to help the others...

Leo moves away towards Prue and Piper who are in worse condition than they were and fading fast. He holds his hands over them, the golden glow appears and the two sisters slowly come to.

PRUE:
(blearily)
Paige. Leo, where’s Paige?

PIPER:
(blearily)
Go! Forget about us; we’re gonna be fine. Heal our innocent.

Leo looks up, directing a pained expression towards Cole who is glaring at him with accusation. Leo goes towards the window that Paige crashed through.

COLE:
Forget about her! What about Phoebe?!

A cloud of orbs appears in front of Leo, forming into the familiar figure of “By the Book” NATALIE. Leo looks at her in confusion.

LEO:
Natalie? What are you doing here?

NATALIE:
Seeing to my charge. I believe you should see to yours.

LEO:
(confused)
But...

NATALIE:
(shaking her head)
You know better. Charge-whitelighter confidentiality; it’s a rule. Now stick to the rules and finish healing your charges, Leo.

Leo watches Natalie as she climbs through the window to take care of Paige, and he moves back towards his own charges.

Neither Piper nor Prue have noticed Natalie. They've managed to open their eyes and after calling to each other and knowing the other is, well, still alive, they both call out for Phoebe. When there is no answer, they look around and spot Phoebe in Cole's arms. When they realize that their baby sister isn’t moving, even though they both are just barely conscious themselves, they slowly, painfully make their way over to Cole who is stroking the side of Phoebe’s face.

COLE:
Come on Phoebe... please... please... You can’t leave me. I can’t live without you. You're my salvation! How can I live without you?

Leo reaches Cole and Phoebe at the same time as Prue and Piper. He raises his hands to Prue’s and Piper’s forehead, but as soon as they begin to glow, Cole grabs them and instead puts them over Phoebe’s heart.

COLE:
She’s not dead. She can’t be! I won’t let her be. Now heal her!

But no sooner are Leo’s hands over Phoebe’s heart than the glow is extinguished. Both sisters and Cole let out a wail of anguish, still unable to accept what they already know—Cole has lost his love; Prue and Piper have lost their baby sister; Leo has lost a charge way before her time.

Off their agony:

OPENING CREDITS ROLL

Again, feel free to use anything in that that will fit with yours, and again do what you feel works best for yours, since our Paige was their friend and innocent in S3 while yours has been kidnapped for more than 20 years, so, of course you'd do it differently.

It's impossible to agree with everything, I will always love to hear other peoples opinions on things. I love reading your FanFiction, it's beautifully done.