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Post by Granny Charmed on May 12, 2018 19:39:13 GMT -5
I’m Working on it 😊 I keep remembering prue and phoebes dialog in Awakened and using it as a basis for them. When they were looking for a cure of piper. I’ve always envisioned them working together like that again when faced with pipers death. Not willing to settle. Anything to get revenge. Phoebe would be prues moral compass but eventually would always give in. Then when Leo refused to help Which would be the same with leo in my story as he’s off on his own agenda Sounds interesting dear. I can't wait to hear more about this. |
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Post by ljones on May 14, 2018 9:35:35 GMT -5
The circumstances surrounding "Awakened" and "Astral Monkey" did not reveal the sisters at their best. And this was before Prue's death.
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Post by Esmeralda on May 15, 2018 2:07:46 GMT -5
Curiosity, GZV. Will Paige be part of your story? Just like in the canon episode, I would think that if they let her be the assistant social worker she was supposed to be, she'd be the one who could help her sisters get passed Piper's death and be able to become better people rather than worse people as what happened on Canon Charmed.
The other possibility, of course, would be a ghostly visit from Piper if you don't use the stupid idea that seeing her ghost wouldn't help them accept her death - as long as it's just a ghostly visit and not a corporeal ghost visit, and *she's* the one to remind them of their destiny and that going back to protecting innocents would be the best way to honor her - reminding Phoebe about protecting the innocent, not punishing the guilty.
BUT it would be fun seeing Prue and Phoebe be something like Piper in 'Centennial Charmed' before they meet Paige - especially if Paige helps them as an assistant social worker *BEFORE* they find out she's their half-sister so all of that stress isn't on her.
Of course, if that doesn't fit your ideas for the story, just ignore this. I know what you come up with will be fantastic!
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Post by Esmeralda on May 20, 2018 0:16:46 GMT -5
GZV has started writing her story and asked me to edit it for her. Unfortunately, I've found it hard to do that because we don't agree with how she portrayed Phoebe. I edited it the way I thought it should be written and she disliked that as much as I disliked her version. At first I thought I'd have to leave the project.
Then we came up with an idea. We'd put both versions here and let you guys decide which one you like better and we'll go that way.
In both situations, the story is written as if GZV's story is the second part of a two-part version of "All Hell Breaks Loose", with the "Previously on Charmed" based on ShiningAllure's "The Story of Prue's Death".
GZV has asked me to post my version first, so here it is:
And here's GZV's original version with only the formatting edited and the addition of the flashbacks.
So? Which version do you prefer? We've both agreed to go with whatever you guys decide.
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Post by pheebs on May 20, 2018 0:44:44 GMT -5
GZV has started writing her story and asked me to edit it for her. Unfortunately, I've found it hard to do that because we don't agree with how she portrayed Phoebe. I edited it the way I thought it should be written and she disliked that as much as I disliked her version. At first I thought I'd have to leave the project. Then we came up with an idea. We'd put both versions here and let you guys decide which one you like better and we'll go that way. In both situations, the story is written as if GZV's story is the second part of a two-part version of "All Hell Breaks Loose", with the "Previously on Charmed" based on ShiningAllure's "The Story of Prue's Death". GZV has asked me to post my version first, so here it is: And here's GZV's original version with only the formatting edited and the addition of the flashbacks. So? Which version do you prefer? We've both agreed to go with whatever you guys decide. After reading both. I liked the first one. Just liked Phoebe better here. But you did ask us to pick and that is what I did. |
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Post by Esmeralda on May 20, 2018 1:14:07 GMT -5
Yup, that's exactly what we want to know. Anyone else?
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Post by prudencehalliwell on May 20, 2018 19:39:01 GMT -5
Like pheebs, I have to go with the first version, just plays out like I'd think the characters would react. But I had to be honest guys, and that is what you want of course.
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Post by tyler on May 21, 2018 10:39:47 GMT -5
First version!
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Post by Ruth Marie on May 21, 2018 21:31:02 GMT -5
Like the above members, I'm going for the first version too. It just feels a lot more natural and how I'd imagine it playing out, especially Phoebe.
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Post by CharmedFaith on May 21, 2018 21:51:47 GMT -5
I think Phoebe would've temporarily taken on the "big sister" role, Prue would be burying herself in work and Phoebe would have to pull her together and help her accept Paige.
I had made this video FOREVER ago, the different dynamics that could've played out helped keep my interest in the show after it ended.
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Post by Esmeralda on May 21, 2018 22:09:04 GMT -5
Wow! I think that's the first time I've seen a trailer where it's Piper who died - very, very well done! And I'm sure you've given GZV something to think about for her story. I always thought that if it was Piper or Phoebe who died, it would be Prue who would become the Fury.
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Post by West on May 21, 2018 22:21:53 GMT -5
I think Phoebe would've temporarily taken on the "big sister" role, Prue would be burying herself in work and Phoebe would have to pull her together and help her accept Paige. I had made this video FOREVER ago, the different dynamics that could've played out helped keep my interest in the show after it ended. Great video. Always nice to see versions where Piper dies. I find they are so rare when I always felt like the Phoebe/Prue relationship was the most interesting. A set-up where Piper dies really appeals to me the most over Phoebe dying, and of course we know where a Prue dying story goes. Of course, I'd want no Paige, but if a sister had to die I'd want it to be Piper. I just wonder how Paige's powers work if Piper dies? Prue becoming a fury if Phoebe or Piper dies always made sense to me. |
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Post by Granny Charmed on Jun 1, 2018 22:05:31 GMT -5
I think Phoebe would've temporarily taken on the "big sister" role, Prue would be burying herself in work and Phoebe would have to pull her together and help her accept Paige. I had made this video FOREVER ago, the different dynamics that could've played out helped keep my interest in the show after it ended. Fantastic job dear! That looks very good. I haven't seen too many of these trailers. Did you ever consider writing a story about this dear? |
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Post by coltoncharmed on Jun 29, 2018 20:41:42 GMT -5
I think Phoebe would've temporarily taken on the "big sister" role, Prue would be burying herself in work and Phoebe would have to pull her together and help her accept Paige. I had made this video FOREVER ago, the different dynamics that could've played out helped keep my interest in the show after it ended. Love this video. Very well done!!! Is there a story to go with it in say a fanfic? |
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Post by rebooted on Jul 26, 2018 13:53:26 GMT -5
I think Both Prue and Cole should have died in AHBL so that Piper and Phoebe could have focused on developing their relationship with Paige.
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Post by Ruth Marie on Jul 26, 2018 17:01:02 GMT -5
GZV has started writing her story and asked me to edit it for her. Unfortunately, I've found it hard to do that because we don't agree with how she portrayed Phoebe. I edited it the way I thought it should be written and she disliked that as much as I disliked her version. At first I thought I'd have to leave the project. Then we came up with an idea. We'd put both versions here and let you guys decide which one you like better and we'll go that way. In both situations, the story is written as if GZV's story is the second part of a two-part version of "All Hell Breaks Loose", with the "Previously on Charmed" based on ShiningAllure's "The Story of Prue's Death". GZV has asked me to post my version first, so here it is: And here's GZV's original version with only the formatting edited and the addition of the flashbacks. So? Which version do you prefer? We've both agreed to go with whatever you guys decide. Any updates on this story? No pressure just very curious about progress. |
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Post by Katie Warren on Jul 2, 2019 22:50:36 GMT -5
Saw this, given current discussions. Made sense to bump.
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Post by Elle Em on Jul 3, 2019 9:02:44 GMT -5
I think Both Prue and Cole should have died in AHBL so that Piper and Phoebe could have focused on developing their relationship with Paige. I agree, except Phoebe would also be mourning Cole instead of just mourning Prue. She already mourned Prue so little when it was just her who died, so I can only imagine what it would be like if Cole died too. And I don't think the show could have worked such intricacies of grief into the storyline. It definitely would have been nice to have the entirety of season 4 focused on getting to know and eventually bonding with Paige. |
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Post by heartofempathy on Jul 3, 2019 15:33:34 GMT -5
Piper dying phoebe would’ve turned evil and Prue would’ve shut off her emotions turn into a demon hunting witch....even more so.
Piper held things together. The thing is though, I feel that Prue would’ve found a way to bring piper back.
Pheobe never really had the chance to grieve with Prue, which is probably why her character went downhill because she had to be the glue.
However If Pheobe died
Piper would’ve shut down, piper never stayed out of contact with her, and turned into alternate universe self from coles birthday episode. Prue would’ve killed cole and turned into a super witch trying to save piper from herself, and not even accept Paige as much .
Piper and Prue when faced with lost are....for lack of better words selfish bitches...( look at how piper was ready to kill Billie in season 8 to get leo back)
Pheobe was always the one who accepted people
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Post by Jean on Jul 9, 2019 7:36:57 GMT -5
I think Both Prue and Cole should have died in AHBL so that Piper and Phoebe could have focused on developing their relationship with Paige. I agree, except Phoebe would also be mourning Cole instead of just mourning Prue. She already mourned Prue so little when it was just her who died, so I can only imagine what it would be like if Cole died too. And I don't think the show could have worked such intricacies of grief into the storyline. It definitely would have been nice to have the entirety of season 4 focused on getting to know and eventually bonding with Paige. Yeah, the show treated Prue's death so quickly, and I never liked the opening of S4 rushing through it. If Cole died too, I doubt they'd do much with it.
Part of why S4 just is so over the place, I didn't think they handled things, and it was just so Kern could make us forget about Prue and jump to Paige right away. I would of had Paige been a slow build-up, and let the full two-parter being all about mourning Prue, with just Piper, Phoebe, Cole and Leo for the first few. Let them find out who Paige is during the fourth episode at least.
And, I liked many of the Charmed novels with Paige based in S4, they did some pretty fun plots, and one of my favorites was Mirror Image. A few of them had better bonding stuff with Paige than the real S4. I'd go with all of S4 focusing on getting to know Paige, and some of the interesting plots in the novels being added to S4.
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