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Post by SimplyAretha on Jan 3, 2005 2:25:51 GMT -5
"I don't believe it!" Leo says raising his voice. "I don't believe a D*mn word that you're saying! Why would I do that? Why would i separate my two kids, and why would I let Wyatt do such a thing! I don't believe either of you! I-" Apollyon flames in behind Leo. He has battle scars all over his face. He wears black and red robe. "Wow, I can kill all of the Halliwells in one shot," He laughs. At the sound of his voice, Leo spins around and stares at his new guest. "Kirsten? Do you have any of that potion left? The one that I made you the last time I was here?" I ask telepathically. "No, but I have the recipie," she replies. "can you make it?" "No," "Then I'm going to have to go and make it" "Thats gonna be a problem." "No kidding" I I then send a message to Chris. "You're going to have to distract him while Kirsten and I go and try to make this potion" "Okay," He sends back. I send a message to Jaymz. "Do you think that you can help Chris distract Apollyon?" "Sure."[/i] Jaymz bends down on one knee and says, "Master, I was just about to kill the Witches, when you came in." "Oh?" Apollyon says. " I was sent to you from the future Source. Wyatt Halliwell. He told me I was to come and help you." I look over to Kirsten and nod. Then we both orb out.
When we get to the old warehouse we go inside. The eight kids are safe and sound, so kirsten and i go to the kitchen and start to make the potion. "So, what's this potion for again?" Kirsten asks "It a potion that will kill on contact." "And this will be able to kill the source?" "I don't know. I hope so, but i have a feeling that it's not going to be enough." "Well, what are we going to do?" "hmm, well, we do have two generations of Charmed Ones here. mayble that will be enough." " I hope so" Kirsten says as she starts the potion.
A few seconds pass by of complete silence. All of a sudden, the demonic alarm goes off. "What the he11 is that?" Kirsten asks over the noise. "It's my demonic alarm" Ray yells to his sister. "Well, where's the demon?" Kirsten asks. "Were you looking for me?" a voice calls from behind us. We turn around and...
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Post by SimplyAretha on Jan 3, 2005 2:26:25 GMT -5
We turn around and we see Apollyon and a few of his top demons. Each demon has a Halliwell in a headlock. Jaymz is shimmered in with a sword to his throat. "Thought you could fool me?" Apollyon laughs as he telekinetically picks up the half done potion and puts it over my head. He then starts to tip the potion, like he is going to pour it over my head. "What the heck do you think you're doing?" Chris calls from a doorway that is behind Apollyon and his "men." Apollyon on turns around looks at Chris. "Shut Up CJ!" Kirsten yells at her brother. "You don't know what you're doing!" Apollyon puts a small grin on his face and says," What are you going to do, CJ. You're not even old enough to curse." The 12 year old looks at him with such anger and hatred. He raises his hand above his head and makes an iceball. "Pretty good for a kid," the demon that has Piper in a headlock laughs. CJ swings his arm in a pitching type motion and releases. The ball goes probably 35 mph and hits Piper's demon square in the nose."What do you think now?" Apollyon snorts. "Kid" He then tips the pot with the potion in it and starts to pour it on Kirsten and I. I grab her and try to orb out, only to find that he has put an anti-orbing spell on the warehouse. I grab Kirsten and pull her away. "Behind you!" Leo yells. Kirsten and I spin around and see Carpathia standing infront of us. "Crap" Kirsten says. Carpathia levitates CJ and then drops him at his side. "This your brother?" he asks Kirsten as he puts a knife up to his throat. "Yes," "Good, then this can be a mass murder." All of a sudden I get an idea. CJ? Yeah? Where's Ray? Upstairs. Use your power and tell him to get over to the manor and check on Wyatt. Tell him not to bring him back here though. Also that if he needs any help, call for Kip. Chris nods his head in agreement and then starts to do as I say.
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Post by SimplyAretha on Jan 3, 2005 2:26:48 GMT -5
"Stop moving!" the demon that holds CJ says. CJ stops, as if to comply, but then elbows the demon in the stomach. At this, Carpathia makes a fireball and throws it at CJ. CJ ducks and runs over to Kirsten and me. Not knowing what else to do, I orb the three of us upstairs.
When we get upstairs, Kirsten, CJ, and I go looking for the rest of Kirsten's siblings. Once we round them up, I orb them "up there". When I come back, CJ is on the floor badly burned and Kirsten is nowhere to be seen. I rush over to Chris and start to heal him. When he awakes I ask," What happened?" CJ shakes his head. "I don't know. Apollyon just attacked us. His atheme skimmed Kirsten's arm and a fireball hit me. I don't remember much else." At that moment Kirsten walks in. "You guys okay?" "Yeah, You?" CJ asks. "Fine" "You're healed?" "She is?" I ask. "I am?" she asks. "CJ, get out of here NOW!" I say "What? Why?" "CJ!" I yell as I create a fireball. As I start to thow it Chris jumps on me and I throw the fireball off in a different direction. I push CJ off of me and make another fireball. This time I'm able to thow it. The fireball hit's Kirsten and explodes. When the explosion disappears Apollyon is standing there. Chris looks at him with a hateful glare. "What did you do to my sister!" he cries. Apollyon laughs and Chris throws an iceball at him. "Cyro!" Apollyon calls. Apollyon then makes his own iceball and throws it at CJ.
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Post by SimplyAretha on Jan 3, 2005 2:27:14 GMT -5
CJ dives out of the way, but doesn't do it fast enough. The iceball clips his right leg and he falls to the floor. I grab CJ and orb him out.
I orb him to the manor where Ray and Wyatt are. "What's goin on?" Ray asks. "No time," I say. "Go down to the basement and stay down there. Even if you here someone above you. CJ, use your magic to protect your brother and Wyatt. CJ nods and I orb out. I orb back to the warehouse, but no one is there. Where the hell are they? I wonder. Then it hits me. The underworld. Duh!
I orb down to the underworld and I see all of my friends in cages. The cages are heavily guarded by darklighters, bounty hunters, and warlocks. Jaymz is in a cage by himself. It looks like his cage has an electric charge. Everytime he touches it, it gives off an electric current. Dan, as i said before, is Kirsten's youngest brother, sees me and cries, "BECCA!"
The guard turns around, but I'm too fast for him. I dodge and roll behind a giant rock that is to the left of me. The guard looks up and doesn't see me. He then turns around and yell "Get the kid to shut up!" I look over to Dan, who looks like he is going to cry. Kirsten grabs him up in her arms and tries to comfort him. They speak in low voices, but i can make out most of what they say. "Kirst?" "....I don't doubt...." "But I d... I... saw her!" "I know, I believe you." "She's...." I hear Dan say, but I can't make out the rest. I guess he's telling Kirsten where I am hiding, because he points over to the rock that I'm behind. Kirsten doesn't respond, so he lets it drop.
How am I suppose to get over there? That place is too heavily guarded. I can't just waltz right up there. There's got to be a way... But what? What can I do? Then it comes to me. For the second time today, I'm not thinking straight. If I keep doin this, m gonna end up getting myself killed. Jaymz?
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Post by SimplyAretha on Jan 3, 2005 2:27:44 GMT -5
Jaymz? Is that you? Yeah. You can see me?I ask worriedly. No, I can sense that you're here though. Oh, So... How am I suppose to get over there? Dan's seen already seen me. I really don't know. I'll try to work something out with Kirsten and Chris. Okay.I say and I leave him to do what he has to. I guess it works because one of the guards yells"What the Hell?" and then I hear a loud crash. Then I hear a second guard say something like Herb and then run over to the first guard.
I stand up and look over the rock that I'm behind and see the guard that yelled "Herb", or something along those lines is dragging the guard that is on the floor out of the room. I look over to the cages and I see Dan stand up and start to point. "She's over there! I told you I saw her!" "Danny, shhh," Kirsten whispers. Rebecca? Come on. Get us out of here! Jaymz yells.
I get up and make my way over to them. I've always been good at picking locks. When I was younger I'd pick the lock to Wyatt's room and take things. Then I'd plant them in Chris's room. As I get up to the first cage, the one that has my parents, I start to concentrate on picking the lock. All of a sudden my brain freezes up and I can't think of how to pick the lock. I can hear footsteps coming around the corner. Maybe 10 minutes away. My hands move up toward the lock and I take a bobby pin out of my hair. I bend it and stick it into the lock. As I turn the lock I hear Chris say,"Hurry it up!" "I'm going, I'm going," I tell him. The footsteps are 6 minutes away. I turn the pin and the door clicks. I open it and everyone runs behind a rock. I head over to the second one and do the same thing. Now, the footsteps are 3 minutes away. I don't think I can make it, but as I think this thought the door clicks and swings open. Next I go to Jaymz's door. @#%$! This one is going to be harder. It's got that electric current running through it. I stick the pin in this door and start to jiggle it around, all the while I'm getting nasty shocks. I stop for a second and listen to the footsteps. They're about 30 seconds away. 1 minute tops. I can't do it. I can't. They're 15 seconds away.14,13,12,11,... I can't do it. 9,8,7,"Come on Rebecca!" Jaymz starts to panic. Four, Three, Two...
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Post by SimplyAretha on Jan 3, 2005 2:28:03 GMT -5
Onnneee. The door of the cage opens just as Apollyon comes in."Where do you think you're going?" he asks us. Run?I ask Run Jaymz responds and both of us bolt in an unknown direction. "Get outta here!!! Orb,Wave,Shimmer,Flame, Do What Every You Have to, But Get out of here!." I see a mix of everything as people are transporting others out of the dungeon. Jaymz and I are just about to orb out when Apollyon blinks and teleports himself right infront us us. He then uses CJ's power to create an iceball. Next, he talkes the iceball and puts Darklighter's Poison on it. He then puts a smile on and says,"Anyone want to play a game of catch?" Apollyon laugs and without waiting for an answer, he throws the ball at me. I doge it, but it follows me everywhere I go. I think back to when I was young and would read Harry Potter and how Harry got chased by a rouge Bludger. Great, Just great. I'm about to be killed and all I can think of is Harry Potter. I jump up and then I blow up the ball of ice. I then start toward Apollyon with an "I mean business" look on my face. "Nobody ever threates my family and lives to tell about it!" I yell. I notice an atheme in his cloak and OTK it over to me. I grip it tightly in my hand and walk toward him still. Jaymz tries to hold me back,but I push him away. I come up to Apollyon,lift up the atheme and when I'm about to attack, I notice something strange. He's not doing anything to stop me.This must be a trick.. "Are you going to put that thing through my heart or are you just going to stand there?"he asks."Because If you're just going to stand there I have more important things to do. This can't be right I think as I plunge the atheme into him. When the deed is done, I find out that I was right. This wasn't Apollyon. It was an Astryal Projection. I turn around to see the real Apollyon standing right behind us, watching, and waiting for what we might do next.
I don't know what to do, but Jaymz seems to. He pulls out a vile filled with a bluish-green potion. He fondles it in his hands for a second and then he gets ready to throw it at Apollyon. "How do you know that I'm the real one?" he asks. You've already made a fool out of yourself already. Are you sure you want to do it again.?" "It's a chance we're going to have to take" Jaymz says. God, He's braver than I'll ever be... Wait! Rebecca, what the hell is wrong with you? Whenever you're close to death you think about stupid things.. Like your love life! Geesh! Jaymz throws the vile and it hits Apollyon. Apollyon screams in pain as he grabs the area that he was hit in. "That's not going to hold him off forever, We've got to get that Potion made. It's the only chance we have at killing him and Carpathia." Before I can respond, or even nod for that matter he shimmers us out.
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Post by SimplyAretha on Jan 3, 2005 2:28:24 GMT -5
We shimmer into the manor, which is busling with... lack of a better word, creatures. Faries,Elves and leperchauns are being hearded past us my Phoebe, I can hear Kirsten and Piper in the kitchen trying to make the potion, and Paige trying to calm Wyatt, and Dan at the same time. Leo is orbing in and out trying to pass off recent aquired knowledge. Jaymz goes and tries to help Paige, while I go to Kirsten and Piper. "How's it coming along?" I ask. "How's it look," comes Piper's sarcastic remark. "It's okay. Were you able to get the potion recipe?" Kirsten asks. I walk over to them and put in some ingredants."Nope, but I've got a pretty good photographic memory." I asure as I put in a few more things. Piper looks at me like i'm a lunitic, but keeps working. I walk over to the refrigerator and pull out some milk. Then I go over to the cabinet that I think contains the spices and pull out pepper,dill, and a bayleaf. "What are you doing with that?" Piper scoffs as I pour some of the milk into a bowl. I ignore her and add a pinch of the spices. Then I say," These ingrediants mixed with what's in the potion will cause a chemical reaction, which will make a chain reaction and should be enough to kill anything. Even us, so you better not...some of the mixture falls to the ground... spill anything.
Kirsten takes the mixture of milk, dill, and pepper, and pours it into the rest of the potion. The potion explodes and Piper puts it into different vials. We go out into the livingroom and I see more...creatures than before. "What is this? A zoo?" Piper asks. No one responds and we sit on the couch. "I hope this works," Kirsten says. "We'll find out soon enough won't we?" I state just as Apollyon flames in.
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Post by SimplyAretha on Jan 3, 2005 2:28:45 GMT -5
"Oooh, a massmurder! I thought I was only going to get the halliwell boy, but now I get everyone!" Apollyon laughs. Piper doesn't."You're not going anywhere near him. You understand?" "Oooh, I'm so scared." he laughs again. He then grabs her by her arm. When she tries to freeze him, he calls for her power. Then he telekinetically picks her up into the air and freezes her from her neck down. Chris grabs a potion that he had made month's before and throws it yelling,"DON'T YOU EVER DO THAT TO MY MOTHER AGAIN!" The potion hits Apollyon,who is set on fire from the potion, just to reappear again. "Crap! That was suppose to work!" Again, Apollyon laughs. "Did you think you could kill me that easily?" "Yes," Kirsten says flatly just as Paige and Leo come into the room. ."What is with all this....She looks at Apollyon....noise.? paige asks. I grab a potion and I throw it at Apollyon. Again he bursts into flames. "Keep throwing them!"I yell and Piper,Paige,Leo,Chris,Kirsten,and I start to throw potions. After we each threw two, Apollyon ignites into a giant ball of flame. "Don't see that everyday," Paige remarks and the rest of us laugh. "Now, we've just got to kill the source." I say. "Well, what are we waiting for?" Paige asks. "I'll go get phoebe," Leo says as he heads for the basement.
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Post by SimplyAretha on Jan 3, 2005 2:29:11 GMT -5
Leo finally comes up with Phoebe. "What the hell was going on up there?" she asks. "umm, just vanquishing a demon." Chris says. "And now we get to go after another!" piper exclaims with fake excitement. "Oh whoopee!" "So are these potions gonna work?" Jaymz asks "They should" I say. "Thats asuring," Piper says flatly. Each of us pick up handfuls of potions and we teleport ourselves out of the manor.
I orb into a corner of Carpathia's chamber with the Girls, Jaymz,Leo,Chris and Kirsten surrounding me."You guys ready for this?" I ask. "As ready as I'll ever be," Kirsten says. "Good," I reply as I walk out of the corner. Everyone else follows. As we imerge a set of Carpathia's body guards notice us and start to come after us. Not wanting to waste potions, Jaymz grabs the axe type thing that one of the guards is using and attacks with it. Once we get through them we head up to Carpathia himself.
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Post by SimplyAretha on Jan 3, 2005 2:29:34 GMT -5
"Took you long enough," Carpathia laughed as he turned around to face us."Hope you didn't get lost."Chris grabs a potion and throws it at him."Did you think that you could kill me with one of those mesley potions? I thought you were suppose to be "Charmed." Chris and I turn red and we start throwing potions like maniacs. I guess that everyone else was offended by Carpathia's last remark because I see tons of potions fly past my head. They all hit Carpathia one after, but it barely harms him. He creates a fireball in his right hand and an energyball in his left. He then fuses them together to make one. "I didn't know that was possible" Paige replies and looks around to see everyone elses reaction. Her gaze falls on Leo. "Hey! Don't look at me. I don't know everything." Carpathia throws the fire/energy ball at the ground. The whole ground starts to shake as the energy runs through it. The flame catches the dirt on the ground, which makes a circle around us. "This is just great," Piper complaines."What do we do now? "Don't know," I tell her truthfully. "Just grab potions and throw them at him?!" Phoebe suggests. "It may work," Chris says as he picks up a potion. Carpathia again makes a fireball in one hand, and then makes the same in the other. He fuses them together and makes one giant fireball. Meanwhile, we are still throwing potions. Just as Carpathia is about to blow up he throws his giant fireball at us. We scramble to get out of the way, but the blast from the explosion,when it hits the ground, makes us fall.I know that I'm injured. That I probably have a broken arm and burns on my legs and arms. I try to get up and...."
What the Hell? Where am I? What am I doing here? I survey my surroundings and find that I'm in my own bed. Was that just a dream or did it really happen? I try to make myself believe that it was just a dream and I try to get up, OW! What is the exscruciating pain? I pick up my arm, Geesh! It hurts like the time I broke my arm. Then something echo's back to me.That I probably have a broken arm...That I probably have a broken arm "Oh no!" I say louder than I want. I pull off the covers and I see that I have burns on my legs. No wonder it hurt when I tried to get up.
What happened to me? Did it really happen, or was I just dreaming. And if I was just dreaming, then why do I have all of these burns and cuts. Am I going insane? Have I come down with this awful sickness that's making me hallucinate? And who is that standing in the corner? Am I imagining him too? Is this all just some stupid dream?
The figure walks out of the shadows and sits on the edge of my bed. Where have I seen him before? I know who that is, but I can't remember-I'm getting flashbacks. I'm in a dungeon and i'm getting kissed, A hotel room, Could you please spell that, J a y m z s i p o w i t z, I'm calling out for a Kayla,- I come back from my flashbacks. "Are you Jaymz Sipowitz?" " Ooh! Becca's got a boyfriend! Becca's got a boyfriend!" the figure on my bed yells and runs out of the room.
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Post by SimplyAretha on Jan 3, 2005 2:30:02 GMT -5
I really hope you like my story. I'm not too great with endings, but I hope this was OK. I wanted an ending that make you think. If it does, i have reached my goal. If you don't understand the ending, just tell me and I'll explain it to you.
I would appreciate it if you give some constructive criticism. Even if you want to tell me "You su*k Never write a story again", I would be fine with that. It may crush my ego of becoming a writer, but at least your honest. Thanks
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