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Post by Assassin Witch on May 26, 2006 16:42:54 GMT -5
Es..hehe..honestly, this is the first time I've read it all. Not a Cole/Phoebe fan so I rolled my eyes at Coop turning into Cole because the Cole thing is over, imo at least. Paige pregnant...wasn't a big fan of that either, but that's just cause I can't really see that happening. The ending with Piper/Leo, the Boys, and the Ghosts..that really is a perfect ending to Charmed. And I agree with Vengeance that that does set up for our spin off.
Well done! This really was a First Place Fic!
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Post by prue on May 30, 2006 21:18:35 GMT -5
Es, you should have been a writer for Charmed! I loved it! I am voting for you for the fan fic of the month!
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Post by pipercharmedphreak on Aug 19, 2007 18:39:16 GMT -5
enjoyed it very much!
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Post by Piper3 on Nov 28, 2008 0:58:52 GMT -5
OMG Es! That was so good. That was seriously one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Between your "Her Last Day" fic and this one I can't decide which was better. Actually I think I can haha. Well they are different types so we will just say they are tied:] I loved how you made sure in the future they died when Chris was 14. I also love how Coop turned in to Cole, I feel like they should have been together all along. I love how Leo got his wings back. He was meant to be a whitelighter, he was just at his best that way. I love how you made Billie and Christy find the real truth and the charmed ones find their path again. But the best part was deffintely when Prue, Penny, and Patty were watching over everyone. So good Es. You are really like the best at fanfics. I love yours. Can't wait to read more of your future work. Great Job!
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Post by ~Andrew~ on Nov 29, 2008 20:52:42 GMT -5
Es, this story is great! From beginning to end I couldn't keep my eyes of the page. You got everything down just like it should've been. You truly have a talent. AMAZING!!!! ;D
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Post by Esmeralda on Nov 30, 2008 16:29:41 GMT -5
 Thank you so very much, all of you! Just keep in mind that I can't take credit for all of this...Team Wyatt was the one who put it all together, with me writing the draft version of most of the beginning and the end and Ro writing the draft version of most of the middle, writing the battle much better than I ever could and the rest of our teammates making it even better. But I'm sure they would also be glad that you all enjoyed this "What Should Have Been" fic.
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Thank you so very much, all of you! Just keep in mind that I can't take credit for all of this...Team Wyatt was the one who put it all together, with me writing the draft version of most of the beginning and the end and Ro writing the draft version of most of the middle, writing the battle much better than I ever could and the rest of our teammates making it even better.