Esmeralda
Charmed
S2 "What If...?"
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Twenty Years Gone....But Never Forgotten.
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Post by Esmeralda on Aug 13, 2006 22:17:06 GMT -5
REVIEWING PART TWO:
Oh, 4Ever!! What an absolutely totally fantastically wonderful update!! No doubt about it; you've got to just summarize the parts that are the same as finale and make your original stuff the major part of it, because they are tremendous!!
From your not having Billie coming to ask the Charmed Ones' forgiveness and ending up vanquishing both Christy and herself--AND the Magic School, I hope! (you pleased EVERY Charmed fan with that, I'm sure! AND using the Power of Three spell to protect the sisters!! YES!!) to using both Paige's memory dust and the spell to send everyone home, to the wonderful love scenes between each of the three couples (I giggled at all of Coop's tired old lines!) to that fantastically wonderful scene between Cole, Turner & Phoebe, this very simply rocks!! Especially making Cole & Turner cupids, including LIttle Turner with his arrows! That simply made me MELT!!
I truly think that we should figure a way to combine both of your fic and my Charmed Forever, including the parts of the others' that we like best, and come up with a HECKOVA Forever Charmed rewrite!!
What I can't believe is that I'm only halfways through this!! I can't wait to see what you come up with for the rest of this!! And best of all, I don't have to wait; I get to read it right now!!!
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Esmeralda
Charmed
S2 "What If...?"
Fan Fic Winner
Twenty Years Gone....But Never Forgotten.
Posts: 21,920
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Post by Esmeralda on Aug 13, 2006 22:19:21 GMT -5
REVIEWING PART THREE:
Oh, 4Ever, an absolutely totally fantastically wonderful chapter!! This is truly how Phoebe's wedding should've gone rather than that quick glimpse that we saw on the show!! And having Melinda Warren doing the ceremony was the frosting on the cake, as was Prue and Andy and the Morrisses, all people who truly should've been part of it. It makes me wish you had Paige do a flashback to her own wedding and let us see how very much better that actually was than the rush job the show was!!
I can't WAIT to see how you end this!! On to the next!!
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Esmeralda
Charmed
S2 "What If...?"
Fan Fic Winner
Twenty Years Gone....But Never Forgotten.
Posts: 21,920
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Post by Esmeralda on Aug 13, 2006 22:23:33 GMT -5
Very, very nicely done, 4Ever!! A LOT better than just the quick glimpses on the show!! Don't you REALLY think that it should've been two hours long, like most series finales are?? I loved all the names and the reasons for the names and I absolutely adored who you chose for each Charmed Ones' guide and the relationship each had!! Once more, girl, absolutely fanastically wonderful job! Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with all of us!! Oh, for all of you other readers who enjoyed this as much as I did, check out the beautiful banner that 4Ever did for this fanfic at my new site: p068.ezboard.com/fcharmedandcomplete57541frm35Like her fic, the banner simply rocks!! |
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hannahpotter
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[glow=green,2,200]Prue Fan Club Member
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Post by hannahpotter on Aug 14, 2006 4:36:20 GMT -5
they should have shown prue
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Post by pipercharmedphreak on Aug 16, 2007 16:23:44 GMT -5
i loved it!!!
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Post by charmedforever122 on Nov 13, 2008 13:50:07 GMT -5
Oh my gosh, that was an amazing story, I love the scene when Prue comes back. ;D
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Post by ~Andrew~ on Nov 19, 2008 22:24:06 GMT -5
This is the most remarkable story ever!!! It is soo beautifully written and I love it 1000 more times then the finale! If kern saw this he would go nuts. The last few parts were my favorites. I mean that is because the beginning was basically retelling the whole serie finale with a few extra parts. I do love how it started of with Piper confessing that she loved paige so much! Also I love when Phoebe goes all levitaty on Dumain's behind! It's not a secret on this site that I love Phoebe's martial arts skills  . Also the whole idea of Cole becoming a cupid was kinda weird but in a very good way. And his child with the bow and arrow made me laugh also in a good way. The whole idea of them having a son, Turner was a very beautifully written part. Also the whole wedding ordeal was wonderful. How everyone reunited and andy and darryl saw each other and then all the uncles bonded and how prue and paige became best friends ( i like it how paige turns the nickel with her power and then prue gives her five). Also the way Prue bonded with Wyatt and how Wyatt called andy uncle andy was so great it almost made me tear lol. Anyways the whole story was wonderfully, magnificently written! Blessing for you ;D You really made my day now that I read this story. Now I can pretend that forever charmed was a bad dream and that fourever charmed was the real finale! |
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Esmeralda
Charmed
S2 "What If...?"
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Twenty Years Gone....But Never Forgotten.
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Post by Esmeralda on Apr 5, 2011 21:26:54 GMT -5
Very, very nicely done, 4Ever!! A LOT better than just the quick glimpses on the show!! Don't you REALLY think that it should've been two hours long, like most series finales are?? I loved all the names and the reasons for the names and I absolutely adored who you chose for each Charmed Ones' guide and the relationship each had!! Once more, girl, absolutely fanastically wonderful job! Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with all of us!! Oh, for all of you other readers who enjoyed this as much as I did, check out the beautiful banner that 4Ever did for this fanfic at my new site: p068.ezboard.com/fcharmedandcomplete57541frm35Like her fic, the banner simply rocks!! Was re-reading this fanfic and found this. Since my "new site" no longer exists, here's the banner that 4Ever made for this fanfic:  Isn't it perfect for this fic? The more you look at it, the more it will remind you of parts of this fic - the last two parts SO should've been the last hour of Charmed's two-hour series finale rather than that rush job we got on the show! |
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Post by Reality Bites on Apr 6, 2011 4:03:01 GMT -5
I've FINALLY read this after remembering how Es gave this fic so much praise. Mainly because Es, bumped the story to showcase the banner. And it lived up to the hype! This story was really good and I enjoyed the new changes given to the series finale. Very well done Fourever Charmed! Very well done! ;D
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Esmeralda
Charmed
S2 "What If...?"
Fan Fic Winner
Twenty Years Gone....But Never Forgotten.
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Post by Esmeralda on Dec 4, 2013 7:59:48 GMT -5
Decided to bump this one up. Always the way I wish Charmed had ended.
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Post by Chrisaholic on Dec 6, 2013 10:34:40 GMT -5
That was great and indeed, a better end for the show.
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Esmeralda
Charmed
S2 "What If...?"
Fan Fic Winner
Twenty Years Gone....But Never Forgotten.
Posts: 21,920
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Post by Esmeralda on Dec 6, 2013 13:24:30 GMT -5
 Glad you liked it! |
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. Also the whole idea of Cole becoming a cupid was kinda weird but in a very good way. And his child with the bow and arrow made me laugh also in a good way. The whole idea of them having a son, Turner was a very beautifully written part. 
Glad you liked it!