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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 17, 2008 13:36:35 GMT -5
I like the idea, but I kinda got confused.
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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on Apr 23, 2008 16:22:18 GMT -5
Sorry for making it a little confusing I was in a rush! Well, thanks to all that read and comment! ;D ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
CHAPTER 10: Don't We All Love Andy?
Prue answers happily,"yes!" Prue runs up to Andy and kisses him. Andy says,"What happened I don't remember anything that happened over the past few years!?" Prue cleared her throat. Prue says,"You remember that I'm a witch right?" Andy answers,"yes." Prue says sadly,"You died and I did my sister,Piper, brought me back from the dead. And, I found out that I have a half-sister Paige that continued the Power of Three for about a year and a half."
Prue looked at Andy hopeing he could understand. Andy says,"I died?" Prue answered,"Yes...." Andy hugged her and gave her a passionate kiss. Andy says,"Thanks for bringing me back!" Prue smiled and kissed him back then said,"I wouldn't know what to do without you!"
Piper came into the attic in shock. Piper exclaimed,"What is he doing here?" "You brought him back to life!?" Prue answered,"Yes...I wouldn't know what to do without him!" Piper says,"Your acting like a teenager Prue!" "We can't use personal gain!" Prue says,"But you brought me back!" Piper felt mad so she froze Andy. Piper says,"Because we needed you!"
Phoebe came in the room and said,"Andy?" in shock. Prue said,"Yeah?" Phoebe says,"He's still hot!" Piper says,"She brought him back to life!" Phoebe was in complete shock to even say anything.
Just then, a demon comes in. The demon grabs Andy,still frozen, and says,"You can't bring mortals back to life!" "If so they all go to me!" Piper unfreezes him. Piper blows up the demon. Phoebe says,"Let's check the book."
To Be Continued In Chapter 11: The Demon That Collects Souls
Wanna find out if the demon takes Andy's soul? Find out in the next chapter. So comment to get the next chapter.
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~*Alicia*~
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It's a love story <3
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 23, 2008 19:56:51 GMT -5
Great story!
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 24, 2008 0:31:28 GMT -5
Fantastic.........much better. ;D
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He's fighting through my freezes. He's adjesting or something
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Post by ♥ Frozen Piper ♥ on Apr 24, 2008 2:17:49 GMT -5
this is interesting. cant wait to see what happens next
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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on Apr 27, 2008 16:30:04 GMT -5
Thanks so much!!! You guys rock! So, here's the next chapter!!!! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Chapter 11: The Demon That Collects Souls
Phoebe flipped threw the book tiredly. Phoebe yawned. Phoebe screamed,"Found it!" Prue looked nervous. Prue says,"What is it?" Phoebe says,"The demon's name is Chakane oooh wierd name! But, anyway it collects the souls that weren't supposed to come back from the dead!"
Prue said sadly,"I can't believe it!" Piper says,"Andy's sleeping upstairs in your room." Prue says,"Ok" Phoebe says,"I need to get back to work."
Phoebe ran downstairs. Paige came in. Paige says,"I really need a boyfriend." Phoebe says,"Piper told ya?" Paige says,"Ya she brought someone back from the dead!!"
Prue went up to her room. Prue yelled,"Andy!?" Andy wasn't there. Prue screamed,"Andy!" The demon appeared and Andy was being sucked the life out of.
Prue moved objects to hit the demon. Prue screamed,"No!" Piper, Phoebe, and Paige came. Piper came and froze the demon. Prue moved Andy with her mind. Piper unfroze him. Paige threw the potion at the demon. Prue hugged and kissed Andy. Prue says,"The demon's gone." Prue cried tears of joy.
Phoebe went to her room. Cole appears and says,"Phoebe forgive me!"
TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 12: Cole's Back!
Wanna find out if Cole is accepted back? Comment to get the next chapter!
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Post by Simymonna on Apr 27, 2008 16:34:32 GMT -5
Great Story! so far! ;D
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~*Alicia*~
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It's a love story <3
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 27, 2008 21:15:07 GMT -5
Great update! Love your story <3
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on May 1, 2008 13:54:33 GMT -5
Awesome chapter Destiny
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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on May 2, 2008 15:31:13 GMT -5
Thanks you guys for the awesome comments! Thanks also to the new reader of my story! Well, I better give ya the chapter! ;D -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
CHAPTER 12: Cole's Back!
Phoebe says,"Never Cole!" "What are you doing back? Why do you keep on following me?" Cole shouts,"Because I love you! D*mnit!" Phoebe hits Cole. Phoebe shouts,"Your never gonna be good!" Cole grabs her and kisses her. Phoebe looks at him then kisses back.
Piper's in the kitchen making a bottle of milk for Wyatt. Piper kisses Wyatt. Leo walks in saying,"Something's wrong!" Piper says,"What's wrong now!?" Leo says,"There's a demon in town looking for Paige!" Piper says,"Paige is looking for a new job."
Prue and Andy were walking threw the park. Prue says,"I'm so happy were back and everything." Andy hugged her. Andy says,"I'm gonna need a job though." Prue says,"Don't worry I did a spell which makes everybody forget you were dead." Andy shaked his head. Prue says,"What?" Ady looked at her and said,"It's not gonna work." Prue looked sad. Prue said,"Why wouldn't it?"
Paige went to her interview for her job as a Day Care center watcher of kids. Paige calls it. Paige says,"Well I really like kids and I really want to work with them." Mrs. Rainer says,"You start this job right now!"
Phoebe and Cole are having sex. Phoebe had a preminition. Phoebe saw Paige about to get killed by one of Cole's demon friends. Cole saves Paige. Phoebe made a moan and says,"Cole we need to save Paige she's about to get attacked." Phoebe and Cole got dressed. Cole shimmered there with Phoebe.
Paige screamed,"Phoebe help!" Cole attacked his friend. Cole said,"Leave the girl's alone!"
TO BE CONTINUED IN Chapter 13: Accepted?
Wanna find out if Cole's accepted into the group? Andy's ok with Prue's idea? And, if Paige is OK? Comment to get the next chapter and find out. Thanks! ;D
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on May 2, 2008 16:01:44 GMT -5
Love it<3 Great update! You're an awesome writer, can't wait for more. Can't wait to see what happens between Andy and Prue, will he accept the idea? Hard one.
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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on May 4, 2008 13:03:11 GMT -5
Thanks! ;D I'm gonna give you the update now! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Previously On The Power of 4!
Prue asked Andy if it was ok to live again and erase everyone's memories that they died. Phoebe ad Cole reconnected their love. Paige was being attacked by one of Cole's friends.
Chapter 13: Accepted?
Prue says,"Why wouldn't it?" Andy says,"Because I don't like that. Am I still a cop?" Prue says,"Yep...they don't remember any of those charges of you supposably killing that demon's partner." Andy says,"I'll try it but if I don't like it I want you to send me back."
Paige says,"Cole your here!?" Phoebe says,"Yeah come on let's go!" Cole says,"Why are you bothering Paige, Matthew?" Matthew says,"Don't tell me your good again are you?" Cole says,"Yeah I am." Matthew attacks Cole fiercely. Cole shoots a fire ball at him. Matthew dies.
Piper and Leo rushed to the scene. Piper says,"Cole!" Piper tries blowing him up. Phoebe yelled,"No!" "He's good now!"
Paige, and Piper sat down on the couch trying to get this threw their head. Phoebe says,"And I still love him." Piper says,"What about Prue?" "Remember what he did to her?"
Prue ran into the room and saw Cole. Prue moved the chir with her mind and threw it at him. Phoebe says,"No Prue!" Phoebe gets hit by a lamp while tring to save Cole.
TO BE CONTINUED IN Chapter 14: It's Bad!
Wanna find out what happens to Phoebe? and Andy? Comment to get the next chapter! ;D
Thanks!
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Post by pipercharmedphreak on May 4, 2008 13:34:54 GMT -5
Very nice update. You are a very talented writer! I really want to read the next chapter! PLEASE update soon!
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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on May 18, 2008 13:44:15 GMT -5
Thanks for that lovely comment. Sorry it took me so long to reply back! ;D ----------------------------------------------------------------------
Chapter 14: It's Bad!
Prue says,"Pheebs! Are you ok?" Prue hugged Phoebe. Prue says,"I'm sorry hun." Phoebe says,"Well now Cole's one of the good guys!" Phoebe exclaimed,"He saved Paige's life."
Prue looked at Paige. Paige nodded. Prue says,"I can't believe this!" Piper looks at Prue and says,"I know!" Prue says,"He tried to have kids with me to make you jealous!" Phoebe says,"The demon in him is gone now!"
Prue says,"I can't believe this!" Prue looked at everyone. Prue said,"I have too much to deal with!" Prue ran upstairs. Andy came back from his first day of work sadly. Andy looked around the room. Andy says,"Where's Prue?" Paige says,"Upstairs!"
Piper says,"I got to get to P3." Leo exclaims,"I'll go with ya." Phoebe ehemmed. Phoebe says,"Please heal me first!"Leo healed Phoebe. Phoebe says,"Thank you!"
Piper and Leo orb to P3. Piper says,"We need to really fix this place up since I've been pregnent and all." Leo agreed.
Phoebe and Cole sat on the bed. Phoebe says,"So who was this Matthew guy again?" Cole says,"He was an old friend of mine but now he's my enemy. He comes back to life after every time you kill him." "There's only one way to kill him." Phoebe asks,"What way?" Cole says,"Killing me."
TO BE CONTINUED IN Chapter 15: Killing Cole?
Wanna find out if Cole dies for Phoebe to save the sisters? Comment to find out and get the next update!
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