Prue's Empath
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 7, 2008 20:25:51 GMT -5
[shadow=black,left,300]* I know none of my stories ever get reviews well they do ,but rarely ,so I just decided I'll make a story I really really like and see if anyone starts to care! hehe*[/shadow]
Paige stepped into the Halliwell Manor for the first time,since her first meeting with Phoebe,and Piper from the vanquish of Shax.She looked around to see if anyone was around and fled into the kitchen carrying a bag.
"Excuse me?"Said a voice behind her.She turned to see Piper Halliwell the Middle Child that now became the oldest."Just cause your our sister doesn't mean you can just walk into the house!"Said Piepr sarcastically.She took the bag off of Paige's back as Phoebe came into the room.
"Hey Paige!"Phoebe said running over and giving Paige a hug.Phoebe was dripping with sweat from practicing Martial Arts ,down in the basement,with Cole.
"Phoebe,go take a shower!"Piper said as Paige pushed Phoebe off of her.Phoebe started giggling as this played out in front of her.
"Uck!"Paige yelped as she started shaking her body and flicking her hands."That is gross!"She said wiping off her own shirt.She looked down and back up,"Go take a shower!"Paige jingled in along with Piper.
"I'm sorry!"Phoebe said laughing as the basement door opened and entered Cole Turner.
"Phoebe we need to finish practi...Oh hey Paige!"Cole said seeing Paige was in the room.He looked at her as she waved.
"Hurry up and finish so I can give you a hug!"Paige said as Piper started laughing.
"Alright already!"Phoebe said as she continued downstairs Cole at her heels.
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Prue's Empath
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 8, 2008 20:59:55 GMT -5
Paige turned to Piper,"So...Should we try to bag up on my karate skills?"Paige said acting like she was karate chopping something.She stopped and giggled as Piper stared at her.
"No...Phoebe is the only one that gets to practice since she doesn't have that great of an active power,"Piper said putting some dishes away,"but we can practice potions!"She said smiling as Paige gave a gross look,"Come On Paige,They may smell bad ,but they help in nearly any vanquish!"
"Yeah,yeah...I know ,but they are so disgusting with the ingredients you have to put in em!"Paige said as she walked over to Piper.Piper giggled slightly as she bent back and pulled out the potion pan,"You want me to get the book?"Paige asked looking at Piper.
"Yeah,that would be a nice idea,"Piper said as she started to set everything up.Paige gave a sarcastic look and then turned to begin her journey up the stairs of the old Halliwell Manor.
(20 Minute time lapse)
Piper looked toward the basement door,"huh...Phoebe and Cole have been practicing for a little while longer than I expected!"Piper said thinking since it was about 20 minutes ago she came upstairs,"and Paige has been in the Attic for a little while!"suddenly blue orbs appeared forming Leo,Piper's lover slash husband,He looked at her smiling.Piper looked at him only she wasn't smiling,"Phoebe has been downstairs with Cole for way to long,and Paige I sent her up to get the book and she has been up their for twenty minutes!"Piper said as Leo gave an odd concerned look.
Leo turned away from Piper and opened the basement door,"I don't hear anything,"he said as he went down a few steps.Leo turned to see Cole laying on the ground looking well beat with a few bruises and a little blood on his face,"Piper you might wanna come down here!"Leo yelled as he raced downstairs and looked around trying to find Phoebe,but she was gone.Leo ran over to Cole and started to heal some of his wounds,"Screw the rules,"he said to himself as Cole took a deep breathe.
Cole looked at Leo as Piper came down the stairs and stopped at the last one."Where's Phoebe?"Cole asked looking at Leo and then at Piper.
"We don't know,do you remember anything?"Leo asked looking at Cole as he sat up then Leo helped him to his feet.Piper ran over to them,"Piper said you had been here for a little while to long...so I decided to come check on you!"
Cole looked at Leo,"All I remember is we,well me and Phoebe,were practicing and suddenly a demon shimmered in behind her,I threw an energyball at him,but he shimmered away and began to use his invisibility powers to beat me,then I guess he knocked me out and I don't know,I didn't see anything after that..."Cole said as a sudden BOOM happened up stairs and a small scream.
"Paige!"Piper yelled turning away from Cole and racing up the basement stairs and up the attic stairs.She flew open the door to see....
........................................... Reviews and you'll find out!
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 9, 2008 12:05:02 GMT -5
I like it. Good story so far.
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Prue's Empath
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 9, 2008 16:04:04 GMT -5
Paige flying into a pile of clothes and a demon standing across the room with his hand held high.Piper looked at him as he started to throw an energy ball at Paige.Piper flicked her hands and he exploded,"Ha!"She said running over to Paige.She helped Paige to her feet.
"Thanks!"Paige said pulling down her shirt and pushing the hair out of her own face.
"Why didn't you tell me you were being attacked upstairs?"Piper yelled at Paige as she rushed over to the book of Shadows.
"Sorry I didn't know I had to call for my mommy every time I might get a boo boo!"Paige said sarcastically.Piper looked at Paige.
"Paige I'm serious,Demon's and any supernatural being is much more dangerous than any boo boo!"Piper said as She picked up the book and started to head downstairs.
"Ah stop being such a worrywart Piper!"Paige yelled as Leo and Cole entered.Leo looked at Paige.
"What's going on?"Leo asked as Piper was walking downstairs and Paige was heading towards him.
"Piper's acting like my mom!"Paige said pushing past Cole and Leo.Leo and Cole turned and followed the girls into the kitchen.
"Well did you find Phoebe?"Cole asked looking at Paige and Piper.Paige gave a look of ...what are you talking about...as she looked at Cole.
"Phoebe's missing?"Paige asked looking at Piper and Cole.
"Yea,and right now I am going to have to be your mother!"Piper said sarcastically as she set the Book Of Shadows down beside the stove.
.................................................................................................... Thanks Melissa Sweetie.I am hoping you like thee update and I hope I get some more reviews!
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~*Alicia*~
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 9, 2008 16:59:45 GMT -5
I love it!! You're an awesome writer! More, more!! I can't wait till you update!!
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 10, 2008 0:17:01 GMT -5
Oh wow. Phoebe is missing. Not good. I like the update. Hope to read more soon.
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 10, 2008 14:10:05 GMT -5
Piper was boiling up a batch of yucky smelling potion,"OK The demon I saw looks like part of a tribe and also the slaves of this man here,"Piper pointed to a page in the book,"So this is the potion we need to vanquish him!"Piper looked at Paige and the guys.She then turned off the stove.
"Larkish,"Paige asked looking at them,"Sounds more like a fish then a demon!"Paige giggled.
"Well he is a demon and he's very dangerous!"Piper said taking some vials out of the shelf and walking back over to the stove.She pulled out a baster and began placing the potion in the available vial which was 6,"Ok I made 6 3 for me and 3 for you,If you see him you must throw all three each has a different ingredient added!"Piper said handing Paige 3 potions.
"Ew,why does this job have to always be icky?"Paige asked taking the vial from Piper's hands.
Piper rolled her eyes,"Paige,get used to it,we battle demons everyday now it's your turn to help us out!"She said placing her own 3 vials in her jacket's pocket.She looked up at Paige,"You ready...Leo,Cole,just stay here and make sure the demons don't come here with Phoebe or anything!"Piper said turning to Paige,"Can you orb?"Piper asked looking at Paige.
"Yea ,but not very well?"Paige said walking over to Piper and taking her hand.
Piper looked at Paige,"Well it's better than nothing!"Piper said as she waved bye to Leo and Cole and Paige orbed them in the underworld.Piper and Paige wobbled as they formed shape as the orbs went away,and they were standing in the underworld,"OK,we need to find Phoebe so if you can kill any demon possible,you know you should only throw potions at Larkish,and make sure you don't use them on anyone else,also when you are killing other demons try and be as quiet as possible!"Piper said whispering.
Paige looked at Piper then looked around quietly,"How do you kill something quietly?"Paige asked seeing a sudden movement and a demon walk up."Uh Pole!"Paige yelled as it orbed to her and she telekinetically aimed it at the demon,he exploded as Piper smiled.
"Nice,and that is how to quietly kill a demon!"Piper said as they continued through the hell below.
........................................................................................................... OK thanks guys! I love your reviews and thank you Alicia that is very sweet and makes me feel so much better about writing! and thanks Melissa your awesome at writing!Tune in!
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~*Alicia*~
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 10, 2008 17:21:37 GMT -5
Can't wait till you update! I love your story!
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 10, 2008 18:54:28 GMT -5
Paige and Piper killed a total of 10 demons till they came to an area were they heard Phoebe saying something along the lines of,"Oh god don't let me lay down here and rot,Please help my sisters find me,Oh lord!"Piper and Paige turned the corner of a rock and seen Phoebe sitting there,"Thank God!"Phoebe said getting up and giving them a hug.
"Phoebe!"Piper said helping her to her feet and hugging her back.Piper smiled as Paige looked around she seen no demons.She was kinda worried and concerned about this scene they were placed in.
"OK,I'm not the smartest one here ,but this seems to easy!"Paige said looking at her sisters.The youngest sister gave a frown waiting for something to happen.
Piper looked at Paige with an agreeing face,"You are kinda right"Piper said looking at Phoebe.Phoebe looked at Piper her face blank like she was hiding something.
"Maybe they are going to try and kill us when we...get home!"Phoebe said quickly thinking of an idea.Piper and Paige nodded as they all three turned out of the cave from where they had found the baby sister.The three held arms and Paige was about to orb.
Phoebe looked up at squinted and the doors behind them shut,just before Paige orbed the three up and back tot he manor.Phoebe smiled evily as they materialzed into the manor the smile was faded and gone.
....................................................................................................... Thanks Alicia,I hope you like the update!Thanks for the great comment Alicia glad you are liking the story!I'm going to bless the both of you Melissa and Alicia for being such loyal readers!
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~*Alicia*~
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 10, 2008 18:57:01 GMT -5
This story is so good! Everything just keeps getting better!
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 10, 2008 21:12:36 GMT -5
Paige looked at Phoebe,"You are acting oddly!"Paige said looking at Piper now.Piper nodded,"You aren't acting like yourself,and I seen you squint that door closed!"Paige said nextly.She stared at Phoebe as Phoebe's eyes went black.
"That's because,"Phoebe's voice became demonic,"I am no longer your sister,I'm tired of this Unbreakable Pain between us!"Phoebe yelled as her body shot out Fire as Paige and Piper screamed and were thrown backgrounds their bodies burnt,but able to stay alive.Paige coughed,as Leo orbed in.
"Piper,Paige,Phoebe?"Leo said as he seen Phoebe,"where's Paige and Piper!"Leo yelled as Phoebe shot some flames toward them.Paige flew her hand up.
"Flames!"they flew back and Phoebe flamed out and back in.Phoebe gave an evil glare as she flamed out.Leo looked as Phoebe left.He turned and ran over to heal Piper,Piper slowly healed.She looked up as Leo ran over and healed Paige.
"What's going on?"Pier asked looking at Leo.
"Phoebe is evil!"Paige said remembering Phoebe's words,I'm Tired of this Unbreakable Pain,Paige felt a tear,"I think we did something!"Paige said as Cole walked in.
"No I did!"Cole said looking at them,he threw a fireball at them,as Piper quickly froze him and the fireball.
"I'm so confused!"Paige said as Piper and Paige were helped up bye Leo.
"Cole turned Phoebe evil,again,and we have to save her,again!"Piper said putting her hands on her hips and blowing at a bang from her hair had fallen in front of her face.
............................................................... Thanks Alicia! Hope you like the update!
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~*Alicia*~
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 10, 2008 21:59:23 GMT -5
Like I said this just keeps getting better and better!
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 10, 2008 23:14:57 GMT -5
Piper and Paige and Leo were now in the kitchen,Cole was still frozen upstairs.Piper had the book open and boiling a power stripping potion.She dropped in some poppy seeds.
"So do you think the spell will work,I mean the Evil Enchantress isn't the same person Phoebe was,Phoebe isn't a past life!"Paige said as Piper was fixing The Evil Enchantress potion.Piper wasn't listening she was to busy measuring the ingredients.
"You guys have to be careful though,Phoebe is consumed by the Source ,again and she will not even think twice before she tries and might succeed to kill both of you,Cole is in control of her mind."Leo said being a worrywart of himself.Piper nodded.
"Yes and She will try I guarantee if Cole is beside her he will make her!"Piper said as she turned off the stove,"OK,it needs to set for about 5 minutes and then it will be ready!"Piper said closing the book and walking over to the kitchen doors,"Come on,we gotta try and remain positive!"Piper said.
Leo looked at Paige Paige gave an odd look,"Piper being positive,this is new!"She said as herself and Leo followed Piper into the living room.
Down in the underworld Phoebe was standing in a dark barely lit area as a flame formed,"Cole?"Phoebe asked as Cole flamed in.
"Yes!"He said in an angry voice.
"Did you get them?"Phoebe asked as he walked over to her.She gave him a kiss which seemed to lighten his soul.Phoebe looked at him.
"Phoebe,this isn't right,we both need to be good,not evil...that human half needs to die so I can keep myself evil!"Cole yelled knocking things off of a table.
"Baby,We can make your human half evil,together,I wanna stay evil,it's fun!"She said smiling as he turned.Cole's eyes shifted from black to his blue eyes.
"Phoebe this isn...,"Cole fell to the ground,"I can't do this anymore,your sisters will find you,and they will make you vanquish!"
Phoebe ran over to him.He looked at her,"Phoebe I love you ,but I can't risk your life and I want is to be together!"Cole said looking at her.
"Cole I can't go back to my sisters',they gave me an Unbreakable Pain and I don't want to be with them,they don't trust you and that has broken me more then any death could ever!"Phoebe said as Cole's eyes flashed black.
"We must be careful though,or else they will kill me and if you don't agree they will kill you!"Cole said looking at her.She stared up into his eyes.
......................................................................................................... Hey, Hope you liked my update! Tell me what y'all think and thanks again Alicia!
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 12, 2008 14:51:46 GMT -5
Piper paced back and forth in the living room,"OK the potions are ready,why haven't they arrived,they aren't on cue!"Piper said looking at the floorboards as her heels clicked in place.She looked at her sister and Leo,"Well!"Piper shouted.
Paige jumped,"um...Piper we aren't on a show,this is real,somethings don't turn out how they should!"Paige thought up quickly.Piper rolled her eyes as Paige stood up,"I'm sorry ,but I'm new,I don't know how to calm you!"Paige said Piper looked at Leo.
"Leo!"She said as he turned.Piper looked at him as he stood up.
"Paige is right,and you shouldn't get so worked up,over an off cue battle!"Leo said rubbing Piper's shoulders.Piper gave in and let her shoulders fall and her hang lower.
"You're right!"Piper said as a flame sounded.Piper instantly found her Adrenalin and her body became set.Paige turned to see,Phoebe and Cole smiling.Cole waved her hand sending them flying across the room,his good side pulled through as he did this.
"Phoebe we can't do th..."He said as his good side failed to pull completely through.Phoebe looked at her sisters as they flew back and hit the fireplace and a mirror.
Paige was thrown back by the telekinetic push from Cole's arm as Piper felt it to.Paige flew back wards into the mirror,as Piper hit the fire place.Leo orbed out as Cole threw and energy ball.Leo then orbed back in.Paige was out of it,her body was bleeding as Piper stood up,"Leo heal Paige...I can' handle them!"Piper said as Leo looked at his wife then ran over to Paige, his hands gleamed a yellow and orange mist over her back as he began to use his healing essence.
Piper flicked her hands and Cole blew back wards.Phoebe smiled as Piper froze her,"I told you not to trust him,again!"Pipers aid as Paige ran up to Piper.Cole got up as Phoebe unfroze.Piper threw down two f her potions,Phoebe fell to the ground as Cole squinted from the potion.Paige looked at them and threw down the other two of hers.Cole looked at them as he took with him ,a blood red mist like a spirit that came out of Phoebe.
Piper looked at this as it played in front of her.Paige looked as well as she seen Cole explode she smiled,"That was awesome!"She said. Paige frowned as Phoebe stood up,her tears were slowly come out of her eyes.
"Phoebe..."Piper said as Phoebe put up her hand.Phoebe looked at them as a tear streamed down her cheek followed by another few.
"Your not my sisters!"Phoebe screamed as she ran upstairs into her room.Piper looked at Paige.Paige shrugged as Piper put her head down.Leo walked over to Piper.
"She needs a little time alone!"Leo said putting his arms around Piper.Piper looked up.
"I hope you right.."She said with a slight sadness in her voice.Paige looked at Piper and rubbed her arm.
"I'm sure she'll be OK..."Paige said ,but Paige was unsure as well,in her voice it spoke.
.......................................................................................................... No Reviews,*sniffle-sniffle* Hope you guys shoot me some reviews soon!
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 12, 2008 15:03:20 GMT -5
How did I manage to miss so many updates? Awesome story. I'm glad they found Pheebs, but I can't believe she is possessed. WHOA. These updates are fantastic. I wanna read more. ;D
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~*Alicia*~
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 12, 2008 15:11:55 GMT -5
This story is great!! Hope you update soon!! Can't wait!!
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 12, 2008 15:12:38 GMT -5
(3 Days Pass)
Piper is leaning against the wall opposite of the staircase banner,"Phoebe...Come Down and eat!"Piper yelled up the stairs case.Leo walks up and leans against the banner,"I don't know what to do..."Piper said sadly,her baby sister's heart was broken.
"Go be a sister and a mother!"Leo said as Paige came up to Piper.Piper looked down at the floorboards.She slowly looked up to see Paige.She smiled and took Paige's hands.They walked up the manor's stair case.The both of them entered Phoebe's bedroom,music was playing.Piper looked at her baby sister laying on the bed crying.Piper walked over to the bed and laid down behind Phoebe.She laid up against her sympathetically.
Paige looked at them as she walked over and laid down in front of Phoebe.She took Phoebe's hand and held it against her chest and kissed it softly,as Piper took her own hand and placed it on top of Phoebe's hair,she brushed down softly,"It's gonna be OK sweetie."Piper said kissing Phoebe head softly as she put her arm around her.
THE END
......................................................................................................... There's the ending and you may see the ending to be a bit familiar to another episode!*wipes tears* that scene always made me cry,had to make it the ending!
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 13, 2008 18:53:17 GMT -5
Awww. I love this ending. It's so sweet. I always cry at this scene. A perfect ending.
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Prue's Empath
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 13, 2008 19:14:03 GMT -5
Thanks!
If anyone wants to read any more of my stories,my most recent is " Pulling Through It All "
It's about a girl that is 12 and she is with step-parents who beat her severely ,but when family comes to visit she can't talk or anything,this little girl wants to become a singer,every night she writes lyrics for a song she wishes she could sing with her lovely voice to everyone,but she can't and she thinks she will never be able to,but soon her Uncle Jean gets very suspicious about the living arrangments the little girl,Julia,and her step mother,Grace and the stepfather,George,have in their house.
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~*Alicia*~
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It's a love story <3
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 14, 2008 15:30:18 GMT -5
*sigh* Love the ending! And that ending makes me cry as well!
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