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Post by kitsuneopal on Mar 10, 2006 22:56:30 GMT -5
cliffhangers...making me hungry for more....... This is a wonderful story
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Post by hydrokinisis on Mar 11, 2006 18:33:24 GMT -5
GREAT UPDATE!!! I just can't wait to see what happens next!!! ;D
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Post by prue on Mar 12, 2006 19:39:44 GMT -5
OH MY HEAVENS! This was great!! I can't wait for more! You have such a great talent! Keep it coming!
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Post by hollypop on Mar 14, 2006 7:25:13 GMT -5
I have to admit that for awhile I was a bit confused and worried about continuity but I do think that you're doing a great job as a whole. I can also tell that you are really enjoying writing this. And you should, it's a FanFic to be proud of
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Post by ~Empath~ on Mar 14, 2006 22:24:34 GMT -5
GREAT UPDATE!!! I just can't wait to see what happens next!!! ;D OH MY HEAVENS! This was great!! I can't wait for more! You have such a great talent! Keep it coming! I have to admit that for awhile I was a bit confused and worried about continuity but I do think that you're doing a great job as a whole. I can also tell that you are really enjoying writing this. And you should, it's a FanFic to be proud of Thanks for the comment you guys!!! Your encouragement and comments are greatly appreciated! Act V should be up sometime this weekend and then the Sixth Act I think you guys will love...it's bittersweet! Also after this I will be starting..."Charmed: The Next Generation" so I'll keep writing!!! Thanks Once Again! *[Soul Of The Empath]*
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Post by ~Empath~ on Mar 15, 2006 17:30:17 GMT -5
Here is Act V!!!! I really hope you guys have enjoyed this fan-fiction The End Power of Three, Parts One and Two as a whole. One more act after this and this will be The End of The Charmed Series Finale I would have written and would like to see and The Beginning of A New Generation of Charmed.
Enjoy Act V, Act VI will be up sometime this weekend!!!
*[Soul of The Empath]*
ACT V
CONT. From Act IV
Prue/Asmodeus is watching over the ball. Asmodeus then steps out of Prue’s Body and Prue’s Body falls to the floor. He then uses his powers to shimmer Prue’s Body into this arms.
Asmodeus: Let’s see what the Charmed Ones will do now…
Asmodeus then picks up Prue’s soul and shimmers out
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EXT. – Alley – Night
Paige is still fighting Prue/Shax. All of a sudden the Prue part of Shax fades and she is left fighting Shax. She still seems to be winning, though there are times when Shax gets the best of her.
Paige: You know what…I’m tired of this
Paige stops to say the spell to Vanquish Shax
Paige: Evil Wind that blows…
Shax then throws an energy ball and Paige orbs out, unable to finish the spell. Paige then orbs back in
Paige: Evil Wind that Blows…That which forms below
Shax in mid-vanquish is still throwing an energy balls at Paige, either interrupting Paige or making her orb out so that she won’t get hit
Paige: This is harder than I thought…
Paige then orbs out and Shax follows
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INT. – Halliwell Manor – Living Room – Night
Phoebe is still fighting The Source and all of a sudden, the Prue part of The Source fades leaving only the Source. Phoebe is still kicking butt, but the Source is using his power to flame in and out to evade her. Phoebe stops and starts to say the spell to Vanquish the Source
Phoebe: Prudence, Penelope, Patricia, Melinda….
The Source, flaming in and out, throws fireballs at Phoebe making Phoebe have to levitate to dodge them and lose concentration. The Source then flames out completely
Phoebe: (looking around) Come out, come out, wherever you are…
Phoebe then starts to walk out of the living room not watching her back. The Source flames in and makes an energy ball, he gets ready to throw it but Paige orbs in
Paige: Let’s Go…
Phoebe (not able to say much) What…?
Paige then orbs out with Phoebe and simultaneously Shax comes in and The Source throws his fireball knocking Shax across the room into the grandfather clock. Shax then gets up a little frazzled and screams
Shax: ARGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
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INT. – Magic School – Grand Hall – Night
Piper is still battling Zankou and all of a sudden, the Prue part of Zankou fades leaving only the Source. Piper is still able to blow him up, But Zankou is becoming immune to her blowing him up because he still has the Nexus inside him just as he did when he was Vanquished
Zankou: This is your end…
Piper: Zip It!
Piper then freezes him. Zankou seems to be getting immune to her freezing power too so she tries to say the spell to Banish A Suxen (Nexus)
Piper: From Ancient Time this Power Came….
Zankou breaks out of the freeze and throws an energy ball. Piper freezes it but it the fireball just slows down and it stops freezing all together and comes towards her so she jumps out of the way. Zankou then taking advantage of what he just done keeps throwing fireball at Piper and walking towards her while Piper is blowing them up and trying to get away from Zankou. Paige and Phoebe orb in.
Paige: (out of fear for Piper, not recognizing her power) Piper!
Piper then orbs, nearly escaping a fireball Zankou has throw and is standing in the middle of her sisters
Phoebe: (to Piper) Hurry…Take our hands.
Piper is standing in the middle and takes Phoebe and Paige hands. Zankou makes a Big Fireball and throws it towards the sisters. Paige and Phoebe use put up their hands and using the their individual powers along with the Power of Three send the energy ball flying back towards Zankou, knocking Zankou off his feet.
Phoebe: (feeling something) Uh oh…Here comes company.
The Source flames in and Shax wind travels in. They see the sisters and know that it is their chance to take them out. The Source makes a Huge Fireball and Shax makes a huge Energy ball. They then throw them at the Charmed Ones. Once again Phoebe and Paige using their individual powers along with the collective Power of Three send the energy balls back towards The Source and Shax knocking them off their feet.
Paige: Lets vanquish them…(looking at her sisters) Ready?
Phoebe and Piper: Ready.
They grip each other hands and they each begin to say a vanquishing spell simultaneously with one another with respect to the demon they were battling. Piper: To Banish A Suxen, Phoebe: To Vanquish the Source, Paige: To Vanquish Shax. The Camera shifts from one sister to the other as they say their lines to each spell.
Piper: From Ancient Time This Power Came, For All To Have But None To Reign
Phoebe: Prudence, Penelope, Patricia, Melinda, Astrid, Helena, Laura and Grace
Paige: Evil Wind That Blows, That Which Forms Below
They begin to say the ending of the spells all together
Piper: Take this power, show no mercy, for this power can no longer be!
Phoebe: Halliwell Witches stand strong beside us, vanquish this evil from time and space!
Paige: No longer may you dwell, death takes you with this spell!
All three of the Demons start to be Vanquished and before the blow…
Piper: Paige! Get us out of here!
Paige then orbs them out before the demons are fully vanquished. As they go, the three most powerful demons blow up and a sonic boom like the power of three tornadoes shifts through Magic school, Destorying it’s pillars and things start to collapse.
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FLASHBACK:
We see Piper, Phoebe and Paige sitting on the couch together. They are sitting down with the Book of Shadows adding things to the book.
Piper: Ok, we’ve added the Titans and Gideon
Phoebe: Zankou and updated information on the Avatars, Piper don’t forget Magic School
Piper: (writing in the book) How could I?
Paige: And now to add the most important things of them all…
Piper: What is that?
Paige: Prue…
Phoebe and Piper look at each other
Paige: Why are you looking at me like that for? The Book is not only for evil things, we can put good things in there too…
Piper: We know that, we just never thought of putting her in there.
Paige: Well, we have now so lets do it.
Phoebe: Ok, each one of us will write a little something about her.
Paige: What I had in mind is that we could say a little spell and let it come from our hearts….
Piper: Ok, Paige you start us off since you came up with the idea…
Paige then gets on the couch with Piper and Phoebe and moves them over so that she is in the in the middle.
Paige: Ok, rhyme time…We know with the power of three
Phoebe: Transcribe into the book, our destiny
Piper: From What we know and what we knew
Paige: We now dedicate a page in the book to our dear sister Prue
The Book the turns to an empty page and lights starts to form words and a place to hold a picture. The words then form and a Picture of Prue is put into place. The lights then stop
Piper: (reading what it says) Prudence Halliwell was born October 28th, 1970 to Patricia Halliwell, a witch and Victor Bennett, a mortal.
Phoebe: (reading on) Prue was the sister that fulfilled the part of prophecy of The Charmed Ones that Melinda Warren had foreseen. She had the power of Telekinesis and later on her powers grew and she was able to Astral Project.
Paige: (reading on) Prue, along with her sisters vanquished countless number of demons. But on May 17, 2001, the Demon Shax was the only demon that got an advantage of her and was her assassin. Prue was always the strong one who looked out for the family and is extremely missed.
Piper: (reading) After Prue’s Death, Piper and Phoebe met their baby sister Paige and Paige helped reconstitute the power of three?!?
Phoebe: Paige…
Paige: What? It’s true isn’t it…
They all start to laugh as the finish reading what the Book had now had on Prue. They then turn the pages and continue to update the book.
END FLASHBACK
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INT. – Halliwell Manor – Attic – Night
The Charmed Ones orb in wit their backs facing the book.
Piper: We did it…
Phoebe: Vanquished the three most powerful demons.
Paige: With the Power of Three…
Phoebe: But it’s not ever yet…
Piper: Asmodeus…
Paige: Don’t remind me…
Asmodeus: (you don’t see him but you hear his voice) She doesn’t need to, I’m right here…
The girls then turn around to see Asmodeus by the book but not touching it because he knows that it will not let him touch it.
Paige: Book!
The book then orbs over to the potion table. Piper gestures to blow Asmodeus up. But he bring up the white ball with Prue’s Soul.
Asmodeus: Ah…I wouldn’t do that if I were you, not if you don’t want to lose your sister’s soul.
Paige, Phoebe and Piper look at each other. Asmodeus then uses his power to show them Prue’s body also. Paige then gestures to orb Prue and Prue’s soul to her.
Asmodeus: I wouldn’t try that if I were you, not if you want to be orbed to the ocean.
Phoebe: What do you want?
Asmodeus: What I’ve always wanted…your powers. You see I though bringing back Prue would automatically make you guys want to give your powers, I even thought making her evil with the three most powerful demons in the whole evil community would make you want to give up your powers. But you fought, and you won the battle. Now it’s time for me to win the war.
Phoebe then comes up with an idea, but is not sure how it’s going to work.
Asmodeus: So what’s it going to be ladies. Your powers or lose your sister forever….
Phoebe then uses her powers to send her feelings to Piper and Paige. Piper, Phoebe and Paige then let tears fall from their eyes, knowing what they have to do.
Piper: You win…
The Charmed Ones then take each others hands and then they let their heads fall. You then see their astral selves come out
Asmodeus: What?
Piper: You wanted our powers…
Phoebe: Here they come….
The Charmed Ones then jump inside of Asmodeus just like Prue did to Vinceres in “Primrose Empath”. You then hear Asmodeus scream because he can’t handle all of the Charmed Ones individual power that was multiplied by power of three and then multiplied again by the power of three working together (so for a visual 3*3*3= 27 times the power). He then screams in pain
Asmodeus: AHHHHHHHHH!!!!! THIS WASN’T SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN!!!! AHHH!!!!!!
Paige: (voiceover) You can’t handle our powers…
Piper: Let alone the power of three…
Piper, Phoebe and Paige: (voiceovers) The Power of Three will set us free, The Power of Three will set us free, The Power of Three will set us free.
The Continue to say The Power of Three Spell and Asmodeus continues to scream in Pain. He then blows up and Prue’s Body Fall and her Soul flies into the air. As Asmodeus’s body blows up. You see the girls standing side by side with Piper in the middle and Phoebe on the sides. Prue’s soul then falls from the air and Piper Catches it with her hand.
Paige: It’s over…
Phoebe: We won…
Paige: What are we going to do with Prue’s soul?
Piper: This. (starting to say a spell) From Whence It Came, Return It Now, Put Back Prue’s Soul, Now make her again whole
The Ball breaks around Prue’s Soul and the essence of it goes back into Prue’s Body. The girls then Astral Project back to their bodies. Just as they do that, they see Prue waking up.
Piper: (seeing life in Prue, tears starting to form) Prue!
Prue: (faintly) Piper?
Phoebe: (getting a little teary) Prue!
Piper and Phoebe run over to Prue who’s on the floor and they sit down and give her a hug, Paige is still standing in the place she was before.
Prue: I’m back and the first sight I see is the floor. Thanks Guys.
Piper: (crying) That’s our Prue.
Phoebe: (crying) Yup.
Phoebe and Piper stop hugging Prue and turn around. Along with Prue they look and Paige who’s crying
Paige: Hey…I’m you baby sister…
Prue: (finishing her sentence) Paige…
Paige then chuckles a little as she lets out her happy tears
Prue: (to Paige) Well don’t just stand there, come give your big sister a hug.
Paige then goes over to her sisters and they all share one big hug. There is a Chime as something seems to have found their way into the attic.
Voice: Hello girls…
Everyone stops the hug and realize who’s voice it is and turns to face that person
Piper: (crying happily) Leo!
The Camera then pans to where Leo and the Angel of Destiny are standing.
END ACT V
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Post by kaleyfan245 on Mar 15, 2006 18:48:02 GMT -5
Bravo, this is truely a great story. I read it all today and it was awsome. You have a great talent, please finish this story i want to know what happens.
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Post by hydrokinisis on Mar 15, 2006 20:37:10 GMT -5
WOW, I mean....WOW.....No..what I really mean is.........WWWWWWWWOOOOOWWW!!! YOUR BEST UPDATE EVER!!! I can almost cry, I love it so much, what a great finale battle!!! ;D AMAZING JOB, EMPATH!!! BRAVO!!!
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Post by ~Empath~ on Mar 17, 2006 21:38:41 GMT -5
ACT VI
CONT. From ACT V
Piper face free-fall with tears. She gets up from where she has been hugging her sisters and goes to her husband and gives him the most passionate kiss she has ever given him. She then hugs him really hard
Piper: (crying) I thought I would never get you back…
Leo: No you didn’t, I know how hard you fought for me, The Angel of Destiny let me watch.
Piper then gives him another kiss, as she is so happy that she is able to see her husband again…They then stop and Piper stands by her husband
Leo: (Prue) It’s nice to see what you taught me was helpful to the girls.
Prue: (smiling) I see it was…
The Camera then goes to the Angel of Destiny.
Angel of Destiny: It’s nice to know how Destiny played itself out. You guys did it, you defeated the biggest Evil this world has ever seen.
Prue: And what’s nice is this evil took out a lot of upper level demons, it’s going to be years for evil to come up against you all again.
Paige: How do you know that, I thought Asmodeus took over you completely?
Prue: He had my soul, so part of me was still within me, it was just so much evil inside of me that the good was pushed to the background.
Phoebe: So what do we do now?
Leo: Well…we can all have normal lives now (looking at Piper).
Piper Smiles at her husband and gives him another kiss. Something then seems to be chiming in the background. The Camera then turns around to see Grams and Patty with Wyatt and Chris
Grams: Hello Darlings…
Every looks to see Grams, Patty Chris and Wyatt
Wyatt: Daddy!
Wyatt then runs to his Daddy and Leo picks him up.
Leo: Hey little man…what’s going on?
Wyatt: (in a cute babyish voice) I missed you daddy.
The Camera then goes over everyone’s face who’s crying and happy at the same time. Patty then walks up with Chris and Leo gives Wyatt to Piper and takes Chris from Patty
Leo: Hey little buddy…I saw you use your power. (he gives a little peck on Chris cheek). I am so proud of you…
Wyatt then gets down from his mother’s arms and runs over to his playpen. He then picks up a block
Wyatt: Chris! Catch!
Wyatt then throws the block towards Chris and Piper gestures to use her new power to stop it and catch it, but it freezes on it’s own. The Camera then pans to Chris with his hand out, freezing the block
Piper: My little buddy can freeze!
The Camera then pans to Paige, Prue and Phoebe getting off the floor and walking towards the others
Phoebe: I thought I knew the future, but I never saw anything as beautiful as this in any of my visions.
Paige: Well, what do you see now?
Phoebe: It’s not only what I see Paige, it’s what I feel too. We can finally be happy, we’ve fulfilled our destiny.
Paige: Too bad you didn’t have that girl you saw in your vision
Phoebe: Just because it didn’t happen now doesn’t mean it won’t happen. I still have faith that I will have my little girl.
Prue: Wait, you’re supposed to have a little girl?
Phoebe: Yeah…it’s complicated…
Prue, Phoebe and Paige reach where the others are standing
Grams: See, I told you girls.
Patty: Mom…
Grams: What? I did…
Piper: Thank You Grams and Mom
Grams and Mom smile. Behind everyone, another chime is coming. Sandra orbs down with Elise, Victor and Henry. Everyone turns around
Henry: Paige…
Paige: Henry!
Paige and Henry walks towards each other and once they reach each other, the give each other a passionate kiss
Henry: So I guess this mean that you won?
Paige: Yes, we won.
Paige then gives Henry another kiss. Victor then walks over to Patty and Grams
Victor: Patty…
Patty: Victor…I’m glad to see that you are alright.
Victor: I give up…you were right.
Patty: Right about what?
Victor: About the girls being witches…I though they were safer being mortals, and I still think they would have been safer being mortals, but what I am looking at right now is true magic, and it’s apart of the girls, and I understand now.
Patty and Victor turn looking at everyone interacting with each other. Elise then walks up to Phoebe
Elise: Wow…
Phoebe: Yeah…I’m sorry for involving you in all this.
Elise: Phoebe, it’s ok, it’s ok, I’m just glad to have been apart of all this, your secret life you kept away from me.
Phoebe: Really?
Elise: Are you blind? Look around you, at all the happiness, your family. This is truly magical. You have a very Charmed life, I’m just glad to be apart of it.
Elise gives Phoebe a Hug
Elise: And what makes it even better…I’m turning over the Bay Mirror to you.
Phoebe: What?!?!?
Elise: Yup. (To Everyone) Meet the new Editor-In-Chief Phoebe Halliwell.
Everyone smiles and Phoebe smiles
Phoebe: Then what are you going to do Elise, not to be offensive or anything, but the Bay Mirror was my life.
Elise: It was, now it’s yours…
Phoebe: I can’t take it…
Elise: Why?
Phoebe: Well, because…
Elise: No “well”’ or “because”. You talk about Destiny all the time, well now I’m taking control of mines.
Phoebe takes in what Elise is saying, she then comes up with one of her grand ideas
Phoebe: Speaking of Destiny…Hold that thought Elise.
Phoebe then goes off towards the Angel of Destiny. The scene goes over to Paige and Henry with Prue
Paige: (to Prue) Well how rude of Me. Prue, this is my husband Henry…Henry this is my big sister Prue.
Henry: Let me get this straight, the one who died 5 years ago.
Prue: Yeah, so how do you like magic now?
Henry: Well, getting beat up by magical suitors, being kidnapped and all the lucky stuff that has happened to be. (looks at Paige) I wouldn’t change it for the world.
The Camera then goes over to the Angel of Destiny
Angel of Destiny: (to Everyone) Well, I love this family reunion, but I have other Destinies to look over. Take Care everyone.
Phoebe: Wait!
Angel of Destiny: Yes…
Phoebe: Can you do me a favor…
Angel of Destiny: Is this pertaining to your child?
Phoebe: No…it’s for Elise, she’s gotten caught up in my destiny. I want to know if you could make sure she has a good Destiny after this one.
Angel of Destiny: Well…
Phoebe: Please.
Angel of Destiny: I will do it.
Phoebe: Elise!
Elise then walks over to Phoebe
Elise: If this is about the newspaper, no magic is going to stop me from giving it to you.
Phoebe: Thank you so much for everything Elise (gives Elise a hug). Go with this Angel, she’s going to make sure everything is ok for you.
Elise: What are you doing?
Phoebe: You gave something to me, now I want to repay the favor.
Elise: But…
Phoebe: No “Buts”, just trust me.
Elise then gives Phoebe another hug
Elise: Thank You Phoebe…
Phoebe: (tears falling) No problem…now go, you’re making me cry.
Elise: (letting tears fall) I love you Phoebe, you’re like the Daughter I never had.
Phoebe: (crying) I love you too Elise…
Elise looks at the Angel of Destiny and takes her hand. The two then leave in a bright light traveling at the speed of light. Phoebe is happy for Elise, She then turns around and walks back towards her family. Prue then walks over to Grams and Mom
Prue: Well I guess it’s time for me to go.
Piper: Do you have to go now? We just got you back.
Paige: Plus you’re like with your full body and all.
Phoebe: Stay…
Sandra: She’s right, you do have a choice, you can stay or you can go back…
We then go to Prue’s face, she’s making her decision
Prue: I have to go, a lot has change and I died for a reason…just like everything happens for my reason. This is my destiny and I accept it.
She then rest her head on Grams. She then goes over to the girls and the girls walks towards her. They then hug
Piper: (crying) We’re going to miss you, you after to come back and visit more often, I want the boys to know their Aunt.
Prue: Don’t worry Piper, I promise I will be back.
She then stops the hug and then she goes back over to Grams and Patty
Prue: You guys ready.
Patty: (crying) Yes…
Prue: I Love You All. Remember…The Power of Three has set you free.
Grams: Take Care My Darlings…
Grams, Patty and Prue, then leave in a swaddle of little lights. Piper, Phoebe, Paige, Leo, Victor and the boys turn around and look at Sandra
Paige: What happened to Billie? How is she adjusting to the afterlife
Sandra: She isn’t…the Angel of Destiny gave her and Christy back their lives and they’re memories are erased, they are living like none of this ever happened.
Phoebe: Their powers stripped?
Sandra: Yes, no evil will ever be able to use their power again…
Piper: Thank you Sandra…
Sandra: You’re welcome Piper. Take Care Everyone.
Sandra then orbs out. Everyone then look at each other, happy at what has been done and what they have accomplished.
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FASTFORWARD:
We are taken thirteen years into the future. Wyatt (16), Chris(14), Melinda(12), and Little Prue (11) are sitting in the Kitchen, eating food. Piper then comes in.
Piper: Come on you guys, the photographer is here…
Wyatt: Mom, your rushing us again…
Piper: Well I told you to eat a while ago and you didn’t so it’s your fault.
Wyatt then gets up and goes to the living room. Melinda, Chris, Little Prue, and Piper then follow
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INT. – Halliwell Manor – Conservatory (Family Room) – Day
There seems to be a magical photographer there to take a family picture. Everyone is there, Prue, Grams, Patty, Victor, Sam, Henry, Leo. They are all lining up with the little ones in the front.
Photographer: Is everyone ready.
Piper: Just a sec…(To Wyatt) Wyatt, I don’t want any funny faces in this picture ok.
Paige: Isn’t that the 100th time you’ve told him that?
Phoebe: Yeah Piper, give him a break…
Wyatt: Thanks Aunties.
Piper: Yada, Yada, Yada, Wyatt…you heard me right?
Wyatt: Yes Mom. Chris: Mom, I’m hot.
Piper: After you take the picture you will be able to get out of the suit ok. I just want one family picture with everyone is that too much to ask for?
Prue: You got the normal life, why the magical picture.
Piper: (giving Prue a mean look) Prue…
Photographer: Are you ready now? I have a magical wedding to shoot soon.
Piper: Ok, we’re ready.
The Photographer then gets his camera up. He then takes the picture and the scene freezes with the picture looking nice, except for Wyatt making a face and Little Prue and Melinda talking. The picture is then seen in a frame in Piper’s hand. She then sets it down on the table.
Piper: Guess nothing’s perfect…
Leo: I guess not.
Piper gives Leo a kiss, Wyatt, Chris, Melinda and Little Prue are running towards Piper and knocks down the picture. Piper then slows the frame down from falling and picks it up
Piper: I said no running in the house!
Leo: Piper…
Piper: (smiling) Don’t start Leo…
Leo: Ok…
Piper then takes his hand and the walk towards where Prue, Henry, Grams, Patty, Paige and Phoebe are
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INT. – Halliwell Manor – Front Door – Day
Victor is walking out the door towards his car. Wyatt, Chris, Melinda and Little Prue are standing at the door
Chris: By Grandpa!
Victor: Bye Chris!
Wyatt, Chris, Melinda and Little Prue look at each other
Little Prue: What are we going to do now?
Melinda: Aunt Prue taught me something…
Wyatt: What did she teach you?
Melinda: How to close the door with my powers.
Chris: She taught me too.
Wyatt: Well, I can do it better than all of you.
Little Prue: Oh Yeah…
Wyatt, Chris, Melinda and Little Prue then put up their hands. The Camera then goes outside of the Halliwell Manor. As the put up their hands, the door closes, Just like Prue has done. The Camera then pans up from the Lawn and the Manor.
END ACT VI
CLOSING CREDITS
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Post by kaleyfan245 on Mar 18, 2006 0:39:55 GMT -5
Bravo *stands up and claps* that was a awsome story, hopes charmed ends some way like that
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Post by ~Empath~ on Mar 18, 2006 16:53:47 GMT -5
Thank You Kaleyfan425...I hope that everyone enjoyed this fan-fiction or rather my version of the Charmed Finale. Thank You everyone for your comments and reviews and my new Project Charmed: The Next Generation will be starting something in Mid-April. Thank You once again!
*[Soul of The Empath]*
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hydrokinisis
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The Telekinetic Wave of Prue!!!
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Post by hydrokinisis on Mar 18, 2006 18:52:19 GMT -5
AMAZING FINALE, I LOVE IT, THE BEST FINALE I EVER READ!!! ;D
I can't wait to start Charmed:Next Generation
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prue
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Blessed Be The Power of Sisters!
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Post by prue on Mar 18, 2006 21:50:55 GMT -5
Wow. I can only hope that the finale Kern has thought up is 1/4 as good as this was. You did an outstanding job with this story. I look forward to your next one!
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Post by Astral Echo on Mar 21, 2006 13:51:47 GMT -5
So cheesy but so great at the same time, well done you are a great writer and I really enjoyed reading your Fic. This should do be the Finale and lets face it it is Forever Charmed!
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Post by hollypop on Mar 21, 2006 16:44:44 GMT -5
*Empath*... I read all your updates and now I have tears in my eyes. You did such a beautiful job- a really, really wonderful FanFic. It felt so much like a true episode- Congratulations on such a great accomplishment!
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kitsuneopal
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Post by kitsuneopal on Mar 21, 2006 22:55:37 GMT -5
This is one of the best stories out there, it was a real pleasure to read it.
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Post by Clare on Mar 27, 2006 15:08:05 GMT -5
Okay, One word - WOW!!!I loved the twist of how the great evil used Prue and i really liked how you told the story of what actually happened in All Hell Breaks Loose - its so sad too! And you told us why they couldnt call Prue's spirit like they could Grams' - because of the Elders! I love how they go to the great divide - which means we also find out what happens to the souls after being in limbo - i dont even believe in heaven but its still good!! Prue knew that she had another sister!!! AND PAIGE MET PRUE IN P3 OMG THATS SO COOL!! I really hope that it does end something like this!! It would be great to watch!! I also really loved how Prue had wrote a spell to defeat the most powerful demon ever and Piper found it and they used to it defeat the evils!! Piper gets a new power - YEY and Chris can freeze - how cute!! You really did put so much thought and effort into this fanfic - you can just tell!! It's absolutely amazing!! ;D Prue is saved and LEO COMES BACK!! ;D Plus it was good that Billie and Christy were given their normal lives back! This fanfic is so emtional!! Aww and Wyatt, Chris, Melinda and Little Prue closed the door!!! That was probably the best thing i've ever read, if the final Charmed ep is like that then it really would be a worthy finale!!! ;D WELL DONE!!!!!!!!
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P34e aka Jezzy
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Post by P34e aka Jezzy on Mar 30, 2006 2:00:38 GMT -5
My little empath I am so proud of you. I just found this fanfic a few days ago and I had to finish it quickly. It was very compelling and I found I felt like I was watching the show. You set every scene up so perfectly . Almost every loose end was tied and I feel the emotion and love that every Charmed fan wants to feel in the finale. BRAVO ......EXCELENT JOB. here's to you dear In One word...............AMAZING!!!!
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