Post by Xenith on Jul 2, 2005 21:47:43 GMT -5
Trying to get the right ending to this thing is driving me nuts. As such I'm not sure if I will have it finished especially this being 4th of July weekend, however I did want to get something out so I'm posting most of what I have...
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-=Teaser=-
[Scene: A Supermarket parking lot. A glamoured Phoebe is carrying bags while talking to a glamoured Piper who is pushing a stroller with baby Chris in it. As they approach their car a man can be seen finishing unloading groceries from his cart into his Pick-up truck.]
Phoebe: Not only that when dinner was done he actually pushed the check towards me! The nerve asking a girl out and then pushing the check towards her. And of course old garlic breath wanted a goodnight kiss. He's lucky I didn't give him a goodnight kick!
Piper: Honey...
Phoebe: Piper you are so lucky to have found your soul mate. It's not about finding the guy to father my daughter anymore, it’s about finding the guy who's right for me to have a daughter with. What I wouldn't give to have what you and Leo have. (They reach Piper's red Jeep and start loading groceries into it. Across from them the guy hurls his cart towards the cart rack to the left of Piper's car. The cart however swerves and speeds towards Chris's stroller. Piper sees it at the last minute and freezes everything.)
Piper (angry): What kind of ignorant person just throws his cart when people are standing right there? That would have hit Chris. (She grabs the thrown cart and roughly moves it slightly. Phoebe looks at the guy and turns pale. Piper looks at her near frozen sister.)
Piper (annoyed voice turning to concern): Phoebe?
Phoebe: Cal Greene's the kind of person.
Piper: Cal...? Oh...
Phoebe: Unfreeze him I want to give him a piece of my mind.
Piper: Phoebe...
Phoebe (angry): I said Unfreeze him! (Piper steps in front of the cart, then motions to unfreeze everything. Piper pretends to stop the cart. Phoebe walks over to Cal.) Just who do you think you are?
Cal: Excuse me?
Phoebe: Why did you just throw that cart? You could have hurt my nephew.
Cal: Not my problem. (He gets in his car.)
Phoebe: What do you mean not your problem?
Cal: Well if you're stupid enough to park next to cart corral. Now outta my way broad before I run you over. (He sticks his left arm out his window).
Phoebe: You listen here Mr. Hotshot ball player... (She grabs Cal's arm and is thrown into a premonition.)
[Premonition - Cal's Point of View. He walks down the steps of an apartment building glancing up at a window. He sees the words Villa Montgomery above the door. He then goes around and gets in his truck turns on the ignition and the radio looking at the clock showing 11:15.
Radio: And we are back! Now who's ready for Gwen Stafani's latest single! I know I am. (The car goes dead.)
Cal: The hell now. (He gets out of his truck and lifts up his hood and looks in. He messes with a few things then feels a searing pain in his back. His eyes are then forced open and removed by something too blurry to make out.) ]
Piper: Charlotte! Charlotte! (Phoebe blinks as she comes out of the premonition.) (quiet voice) Phoebe, are you okay?
Phoebe (Shaky voice): Yeah....
[Travelogue]
[Opening Credits]
-=Part 1=-
[Scene: Phoebe & Piper walk into the door to the Townhouse carrying grocery bags. Piper is pushing Chris's stroller. They are in heated discussion. As soon as the door closes they revert back to their normal forms.]
Phoebe: I'm not saving Cal Greene!
Piper: Phoebe we have to it’s our job. (Paige enters from the living room)
Paige: Hey, Did you bring...
Phoebe: No Piper, our job is to save the innocent.
Piper: Cal is our innocent
Phoebe: Cal is far from innocent.
Piper: Phoebe, no one deserves do die like that, not even Cal.
Phoebe: Piper don't you understand, if we don't save Cal then that future we saw. It can never happen.
Piper: Phoebe, that future already can't happen (she motions towards Paige), not to mention that you don't have an active power, and I am happily married with two beautiful sons. (She reaches over and picks up Chris from his stroller)(to Chris in babytalk voice:) Did you enjoy your nap little man?
Phoebe: All that matters is that he is still the low-life scum with no respect for other people especially women. Give him a year if that and I don't see anything that suggests that he would think twice about sexually assaulting someone. We can't give him that chance.
Piper: Phoebe listen to me, choosing not to save an innocent is the same as punishing the guilty. We can't do that! You were given this vision for a reason.
Phoebe (speaking fast and agitated): Maybe I wasn't meant to have this vision? What about Miles? You told me I wasn't supposed to have that vision.
Piper: That was different. (Piper walks over to a playpen places Chris in it and touches a crystal)
Phoebe (agitated): Different how? I had an emotional connection with Miles just like I have an emotional connection to Cal, a different type of connection but still a very strong one.
(Piper throws up her hands and sighs)
Piper: We'll discuss Cal later, for now can we agree to at least figure out what the demon is that attacked him. We're gonna have to vanquish him eventually.
Phoebe (perturbed): Fine
Piper: Paige, go get the book and look for any demons that steal eyes.
Paige: Besides Oren and Cree?
Piper: We vanquished them?
Phoebe: Wouldn't be the first time a vanquished demon came back. Maybe we should warn Eva.
Paige: That ought to be a fun conversation, hey Eva remember us you went to our funeral when we faked out deaths, by the way your families greatest nemesis is back.
Piper: Hopefully not everyone will take it as bad as Mitch...
Phoebe: Speaking of Mitch, Paige I've been meaning to ask you why he looked at me like that...
Piper (annoyed): Later Phoebe, right now Paige needs to check the Book.
Phoebe: But what about Oren & Cree?
Piper: Does Cal strike you as a Gypsy?
(Paige orbs out and shortly orbs back in with the Book of Shadows. She heads over to a stereo that is sitting on a table)
Paige: Do you mind if I listen to a little music while I look? Your yelling gave me a bit of a headache. (She turns on the radio)
Radio: This is DJ Spazz filling in on KITS 105.3 and after this news break we are going to have the world premier of Gwen Stefani's latest single on and it’s only on KITS.
Phoebe: What! But that's supposed to be tomorrow. The demon attacked when that song was just coming on the radio and the DJ said it was the world premiere?
Piper: I thought you said it was 11:15 when the demon attacked? It's 2:00 Phoebe.
Phoebe: I saw his radio's clock and it definitely said 11:15, leave it to Cal to be too stupid to set a clock right.
Paige: We better hurry where are we going?
Piper: Phoebe said it happened outside of a place called the Villa Montgomery (Piper & Paige join hands) Phoebe let's go.
Phoebe: I haven't changed my mind; I just can't save that monster.
Piper: Phoebe if you won't do it to save Cal then do it to stop the demon from getting what it wants.
Paige: That's never a good thing. (Phoebe sighs then sulks over to hold Paige's other hand)
[Scene: Parking Lot of the Villa Montgomery apartments. Cal walks out and opens the door of his truck. He gets in and starts the ignition with the radio turning on.]
Radio: And we are back. Now who's ready for Gwen Stafani's latest single? I know I am. (The car does dead.)
Cal: The hell now. (He get out of his truck and lifts up his hood and looks in his hood. A warlock blinks in behind him. Piper steps from behind the lounge and freezes everything. The warlock does not freeze. The warlock pulls out an athame.)
Piper: Step away from him Mister! (The warlock ignores her)
Phoebe: Didn't you hear her ugly, step away from the creep. (The warlock prepares to stab Piper motions with her hands to blow him up and the warlock is tossed back slightly. He looks in their direction with empty eye sockets)
Piper: That got his attention.
Paige: Didn't do much else... Car! (Orbs surround the car and it disappears reappearing over the warlock where it drops on him crushing him.)
Phoebe: Go Paige! (The car is lifted up off the ground by the Warlock who drops it on its roof then blinks out.)
Piper: Dam it!
-=Part 2=-
[Scene: Townhouse living room. Phoebe is sitting looking through the book of shadows with Piper standing over her shoulder. Paige is standing across the room]
Piper: Anything yet?
Phoebe: Unfortunately yes...
Piper: Isn't having the evil in question in the book a good thing?
Phoebe: That's not what I meant. You'd be surprised how many warlocks in here have bad eyesight.
Paige: Yes but how many of those can survive having a car dropped on them? (The phone rings. Piper answers it.)
Piper (to phone): Hi Da... (Pause) Oh... God. (Pause) We'll be right there. (Pause) I'll tell her. (She looks at Paige and who has a worried look on her face)
[Scene: an empty parking garage. Daryll is standing over a body of a corpse who has a large wound in the stomach and is bleeding profusely from the mouth. The Charmed Ones orb in behind a van. Paige is glamoured as a mustached man wearing a CSI outfit. Her sisters are in their normal alternative forms but also wearing outfits.]
Paige: This is never gonna work...
Phoebe: You fooled us before.
Paige: That was appearance only. I can't act that male-like, that is a lot of male cops over that. I can't do this
Piper: Sure you can, just... think like a man.
Phoebe: Prue did it once.
Paige (to herself barely audible): I am a man. I am a man. I am a man. (She walks from behind the van attempting her idea of a man’s strut. She scratches her crotch. Her sisters walk in pace behind her) Sup homies. (The cops look at her with a very confused look on their faces.)
Piper (barely audible to Paige): Think like a white man...
Paige: Umm... I mean I'm Matthew and these are my partners we're with Crime Scene Investigation. Where is the body? (More dumbfounded looks from the cops including Daryll)
Daryll: (Pointing at the body right in front of him.) I believe this is the body. (One cop tries to stifle laughter)
Piper: Well of course we knew that.
Phoebe: Just following procedures for special cases.
Paige: And standard procedure requires us to be alone when we examine the body. So everyone is dismissed. (Most of the cops leave all though a few veterans linger.)
Daryll: You heard the man, new standard procedures. Let's move. (Daryll & the remaining cops turn to leave)
Paige: Actually inspector Morris if you could stay behind we have a few questions.
Daryll (to cops): Go on men. I'll be there shortly. (The officers leave) (To Paige:) What the hell do you think you are doing?
Piper: Wasn't this your idea.
Daryll: I thought the Chief Inspector might be here so I though you should pose as coroner, out of town investigators, something. I did not tell you to come as a cross between Yentl & Inspector Clouseau... Now enough with the disguises! (The Charmed Ones return to their normal looks)
Phoebe: So why did you call us exactly. (Daryll looks down at the body). That's not what I meant. I thought you said you were done with us, with magic?
Daryll: Look let's just say that Sheila & I did a little soul searching, and after what happened with the Nights of Terror. Well it showed us that all of your demons aren't really your demons. They are going to be there in our life, hurting innocent people, regardless if you are in our life or not. This doesn't mean I want you to use any magic on me. (He looks at Paige) You orb me again without my permission and I swear to god I will throw your ass in jail for assaulting an officer. (He cracks a smile.) Now do your thing, I’m going to make sure that none of the others come back in the mean time.
(The sisters crouch down and look at the body for the first time.)
Piper: Phoebe, are sure you want to do this. I know you have a thing about getting premonitions of the dead.
Phoebe: Daryll's counting on us to find this killer; we can't let him down after he just let us back in his life.
Paige: But your power...
Phoebe: It isn't as strong since I got it back. I'll be fine. (She reaches out hesitating for a minute then touches the dead man's hand and is thrown into a premonition.
[Premonition - 3rd Party Point of View.
The man is talking on his cell phone with his right hands. A briefcase is in his left. He walks through the empty parking garage.
Man (to phone): Calm down... Yes I've been watching the polls. (Pause) If you'd just let me think a minute, look now I'm on the wrong floor. (Pause) Harry? Harry are you there? (The warlock blazes in behind him stabbing him in the back with the athame. The man swings his briefcase catching the warlock in the head. The warlock does not flinch. The athame in the warlock's hand begins to blaze with fire. He stabs it into the man’s mouth.)]
Phoebe: (Coming out of her premonition) It was him...
Paige: Him who?
Phoebe: The warlock, the one that tried to kill Cal. It just isn't right. Why wasn't I given a premonition to save this person? Why would the elders have us save the person least deserving?
Paige: Would someone please explain what exactly this Cal person did that's so bad?
Piper: Look about 6 years ago we went to some kind of alternate future. In that timeline Cal assaulted & murdered one of Phoebe's friends. Future Phoebe used her powers to kill him which started a huge witch hunt.
Paige: So wait you wanted him to die for something that he might do in the future? Doesn't that sound like someone else that we fought against...
Phoebe: This is nothing like Gideon; Wyatt is a sweet innocent child now. Piper you were there, you saw how much of a jerk Cal currently is. It’s only a matter of time before he crosses over that line.
Paige: If we vanquished people for being jerks then we probably would have vanquished Chris when we first met him... Phoebe you have to let go of whatever animosity you have towards Cal and move on. We have a warlock to vanquish!
Phoebe (sniffles): You're right. (Paige rubs Phoebe's back)
Piper: Is it just me or is that guy missing his tongue.
Paige: Ewww... First eyes, mow a tongue? If I didn't know better I'd say it was the monkeys...
Phoebe: Monkeys?
Paige: You know (she covers her eyes, then covers her ears, then covers her mouth.) I think that someone might have put the monkey's curse on our friend the warlock.
Phoebe: But how is he able to find and kill people without his senses?
Piper: we developed a sort of 6th sense as sisters; maybe the warlock developed some kind of other sense?
Phoebe: Let's get back to the manor, I think I might have an idea as to which Warlock we're looking for now. (She touches the dead man's hand) I'm sorry. (She launches into another premonition.)
[Premonition - 3rd Party Point of View (all done with an unsteady faded camera).
A man walks up to his apartment door. 35B is on the door. The man walks in the door and tries to turn on the lights. They do not work.
Warlock (in the dark): I've been waiting for you Mr. Umbala!
Mr. Umbala (nervous stutter): Who's there? How… How did you get in?
Warlock: You have something that belongs to me. (He blinks in behind Mr. Umbala and stabs him with a flaming athame. He then reaches over and holds both of Mr. Umbala's ears.)]
Piper: Phoebe, did you see his next target?
Phoebe: Yeah, and he definitely has something to do with the curse. Right before my premonition ended he reached for the guys ears. (She shivers)
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-=Teaser=-
[Scene: A Supermarket parking lot. A glamoured Phoebe is carrying bags while talking to a glamoured Piper who is pushing a stroller with baby Chris in it. As they approach their car a man can be seen finishing unloading groceries from his cart into his Pick-up truck.]
Phoebe: Not only that when dinner was done he actually pushed the check towards me! The nerve asking a girl out and then pushing the check towards her. And of course old garlic breath wanted a goodnight kiss. He's lucky I didn't give him a goodnight kick!
Piper: Honey...
Phoebe: Piper you are so lucky to have found your soul mate. It's not about finding the guy to father my daughter anymore, it’s about finding the guy who's right for me to have a daughter with. What I wouldn't give to have what you and Leo have. (They reach Piper's red Jeep and start loading groceries into it. Across from them the guy hurls his cart towards the cart rack to the left of Piper's car. The cart however swerves and speeds towards Chris's stroller. Piper sees it at the last minute and freezes everything.)
Piper (angry): What kind of ignorant person just throws his cart when people are standing right there? That would have hit Chris. (She grabs the thrown cart and roughly moves it slightly. Phoebe looks at the guy and turns pale. Piper looks at her near frozen sister.)
Piper (annoyed voice turning to concern): Phoebe?
Phoebe: Cal Greene's the kind of person.
Piper: Cal...? Oh...
Phoebe: Unfreeze him I want to give him a piece of my mind.
Piper: Phoebe...
Phoebe (angry): I said Unfreeze him! (Piper steps in front of the cart, then motions to unfreeze everything. Piper pretends to stop the cart. Phoebe walks over to Cal.) Just who do you think you are?
Cal: Excuse me?
Phoebe: Why did you just throw that cart? You could have hurt my nephew.
Cal: Not my problem. (He gets in his car.)
Phoebe: What do you mean not your problem?
Cal: Well if you're stupid enough to park next to cart corral. Now outta my way broad before I run you over. (He sticks his left arm out his window).
Phoebe: You listen here Mr. Hotshot ball player... (She grabs Cal's arm and is thrown into a premonition.)
[Premonition - Cal's Point of View. He walks down the steps of an apartment building glancing up at a window. He sees the words Villa Montgomery above the door. He then goes around and gets in his truck turns on the ignition and the radio looking at the clock showing 11:15.
Radio: And we are back! Now who's ready for Gwen Stafani's latest single! I know I am. (The car goes dead.)
Cal: The hell now. (He gets out of his truck and lifts up his hood and looks in. He messes with a few things then feels a searing pain in his back. His eyes are then forced open and removed by something too blurry to make out.) ]
Piper: Charlotte! Charlotte! (Phoebe blinks as she comes out of the premonition.) (quiet voice) Phoebe, are you okay?
Phoebe (Shaky voice): Yeah....
[Travelogue]
[Opening Credits]
-=Part 1=-
[Scene: Phoebe & Piper walk into the door to the Townhouse carrying grocery bags. Piper is pushing Chris's stroller. They are in heated discussion. As soon as the door closes they revert back to their normal forms.]
Phoebe: I'm not saving Cal Greene!
Piper: Phoebe we have to it’s our job. (Paige enters from the living room)
Paige: Hey, Did you bring...
Phoebe: No Piper, our job is to save the innocent.
Piper: Cal is our innocent
Phoebe: Cal is far from innocent.
Piper: Phoebe, no one deserves do die like that, not even Cal.
Phoebe: Piper don't you understand, if we don't save Cal then that future we saw. It can never happen.
Piper: Phoebe, that future already can't happen (she motions towards Paige), not to mention that you don't have an active power, and I am happily married with two beautiful sons. (She reaches over and picks up Chris from his stroller)(to Chris in babytalk voice:) Did you enjoy your nap little man?
Phoebe: All that matters is that he is still the low-life scum with no respect for other people especially women. Give him a year if that and I don't see anything that suggests that he would think twice about sexually assaulting someone. We can't give him that chance.
Piper: Phoebe listen to me, choosing not to save an innocent is the same as punishing the guilty. We can't do that! You were given this vision for a reason.
Phoebe (speaking fast and agitated): Maybe I wasn't meant to have this vision? What about Miles? You told me I wasn't supposed to have that vision.
Piper: That was different. (Piper walks over to a playpen places Chris in it and touches a crystal)
Phoebe (agitated): Different how? I had an emotional connection with Miles just like I have an emotional connection to Cal, a different type of connection but still a very strong one.
(Piper throws up her hands and sighs)
Piper: We'll discuss Cal later, for now can we agree to at least figure out what the demon is that attacked him. We're gonna have to vanquish him eventually.
Phoebe (perturbed): Fine
Piper: Paige, go get the book and look for any demons that steal eyes.
Paige: Besides Oren and Cree?
Piper: We vanquished them?
Phoebe: Wouldn't be the first time a vanquished demon came back. Maybe we should warn Eva.
Paige: That ought to be a fun conversation, hey Eva remember us you went to our funeral when we faked out deaths, by the way your families greatest nemesis is back.
Piper: Hopefully not everyone will take it as bad as Mitch...
Phoebe: Speaking of Mitch, Paige I've been meaning to ask you why he looked at me like that...
Piper (annoyed): Later Phoebe, right now Paige needs to check the Book.
Phoebe: But what about Oren & Cree?
Piper: Does Cal strike you as a Gypsy?
(Paige orbs out and shortly orbs back in with the Book of Shadows. She heads over to a stereo that is sitting on a table)
Paige: Do you mind if I listen to a little music while I look? Your yelling gave me a bit of a headache. (She turns on the radio)
Radio: This is DJ Spazz filling in on KITS 105.3 and after this news break we are going to have the world premier of Gwen Stefani's latest single on and it’s only on KITS.
Phoebe: What! But that's supposed to be tomorrow. The demon attacked when that song was just coming on the radio and the DJ said it was the world premiere?
Piper: I thought you said it was 11:15 when the demon attacked? It's 2:00 Phoebe.
Phoebe: I saw his radio's clock and it definitely said 11:15, leave it to Cal to be too stupid to set a clock right.
Paige: We better hurry where are we going?
Piper: Phoebe said it happened outside of a place called the Villa Montgomery (Piper & Paige join hands) Phoebe let's go.
Phoebe: I haven't changed my mind; I just can't save that monster.
Piper: Phoebe if you won't do it to save Cal then do it to stop the demon from getting what it wants.
Paige: That's never a good thing. (Phoebe sighs then sulks over to hold Paige's other hand)
[Scene: Parking Lot of the Villa Montgomery apartments. Cal walks out and opens the door of his truck. He gets in and starts the ignition with the radio turning on.]
Radio: And we are back. Now who's ready for Gwen Stafani's latest single? I know I am. (The car does dead.)
Cal: The hell now. (He get out of his truck and lifts up his hood and looks in his hood. A warlock blinks in behind him. Piper steps from behind the lounge and freezes everything. The warlock does not freeze. The warlock pulls out an athame.)
Piper: Step away from him Mister! (The warlock ignores her)
Phoebe: Didn't you hear her ugly, step away from the creep. (The warlock prepares to stab Piper motions with her hands to blow him up and the warlock is tossed back slightly. He looks in their direction with empty eye sockets)
Piper: That got his attention.
Paige: Didn't do much else... Car! (Orbs surround the car and it disappears reappearing over the warlock where it drops on him crushing him.)
Phoebe: Go Paige! (The car is lifted up off the ground by the Warlock who drops it on its roof then blinks out.)
Piper: Dam it!
-=Part 2=-
[Scene: Townhouse living room. Phoebe is sitting looking through the book of shadows with Piper standing over her shoulder. Paige is standing across the room]
Piper: Anything yet?
Phoebe: Unfortunately yes...
Piper: Isn't having the evil in question in the book a good thing?
Phoebe: That's not what I meant. You'd be surprised how many warlocks in here have bad eyesight.
Paige: Yes but how many of those can survive having a car dropped on them? (The phone rings. Piper answers it.)
Piper (to phone): Hi Da... (Pause) Oh... God. (Pause) We'll be right there. (Pause) I'll tell her. (She looks at Paige and who has a worried look on her face)
[Scene: an empty parking garage. Daryll is standing over a body of a corpse who has a large wound in the stomach and is bleeding profusely from the mouth. The Charmed Ones orb in behind a van. Paige is glamoured as a mustached man wearing a CSI outfit. Her sisters are in their normal alternative forms but also wearing outfits.]
Paige: This is never gonna work...
Phoebe: You fooled us before.
Paige: That was appearance only. I can't act that male-like, that is a lot of male cops over that. I can't do this
Piper: Sure you can, just... think like a man.
Phoebe: Prue did it once.
Paige (to herself barely audible): I am a man. I am a man. I am a man. (She walks from behind the van attempting her idea of a man’s strut. She scratches her crotch. Her sisters walk in pace behind her) Sup homies. (The cops look at her with a very confused look on their faces.)
Piper (barely audible to Paige): Think like a white man...
Paige: Umm... I mean I'm Matthew and these are my partners we're with Crime Scene Investigation. Where is the body? (More dumbfounded looks from the cops including Daryll)
Daryll: (Pointing at the body right in front of him.) I believe this is the body. (One cop tries to stifle laughter)
Piper: Well of course we knew that.
Phoebe: Just following procedures for special cases.
Paige: And standard procedure requires us to be alone when we examine the body. So everyone is dismissed. (Most of the cops leave all though a few veterans linger.)
Daryll: You heard the man, new standard procedures. Let's move. (Daryll & the remaining cops turn to leave)
Paige: Actually inspector Morris if you could stay behind we have a few questions.
Daryll (to cops): Go on men. I'll be there shortly. (The officers leave) (To Paige:) What the hell do you think you are doing?
Piper: Wasn't this your idea.
Daryll: I thought the Chief Inspector might be here so I though you should pose as coroner, out of town investigators, something. I did not tell you to come as a cross between Yentl & Inspector Clouseau... Now enough with the disguises! (The Charmed Ones return to their normal looks)
Phoebe: So why did you call us exactly. (Daryll looks down at the body). That's not what I meant. I thought you said you were done with us, with magic?
Daryll: Look let's just say that Sheila & I did a little soul searching, and after what happened with the Nights of Terror. Well it showed us that all of your demons aren't really your demons. They are going to be there in our life, hurting innocent people, regardless if you are in our life or not. This doesn't mean I want you to use any magic on me. (He looks at Paige) You orb me again without my permission and I swear to god I will throw your ass in jail for assaulting an officer. (He cracks a smile.) Now do your thing, I’m going to make sure that none of the others come back in the mean time.
(The sisters crouch down and look at the body for the first time.)
Piper: Phoebe, are sure you want to do this. I know you have a thing about getting premonitions of the dead.
Phoebe: Daryll's counting on us to find this killer; we can't let him down after he just let us back in his life.
Paige: But your power...
Phoebe: It isn't as strong since I got it back. I'll be fine. (She reaches out hesitating for a minute then touches the dead man's hand and is thrown into a premonition.
[Premonition - 3rd Party Point of View.
The man is talking on his cell phone with his right hands. A briefcase is in his left. He walks through the empty parking garage.
Man (to phone): Calm down... Yes I've been watching the polls. (Pause) If you'd just let me think a minute, look now I'm on the wrong floor. (Pause) Harry? Harry are you there? (The warlock blazes in behind him stabbing him in the back with the athame. The man swings his briefcase catching the warlock in the head. The warlock does not flinch. The athame in the warlock's hand begins to blaze with fire. He stabs it into the man’s mouth.)]
Phoebe: (Coming out of her premonition) It was him...
Paige: Him who?
Phoebe: The warlock, the one that tried to kill Cal. It just isn't right. Why wasn't I given a premonition to save this person? Why would the elders have us save the person least deserving?
Paige: Would someone please explain what exactly this Cal person did that's so bad?
Piper: Look about 6 years ago we went to some kind of alternate future. In that timeline Cal assaulted & murdered one of Phoebe's friends. Future Phoebe used her powers to kill him which started a huge witch hunt.
Paige: So wait you wanted him to die for something that he might do in the future? Doesn't that sound like someone else that we fought against...
Phoebe: This is nothing like Gideon; Wyatt is a sweet innocent child now. Piper you were there, you saw how much of a jerk Cal currently is. It’s only a matter of time before he crosses over that line.
Paige: If we vanquished people for being jerks then we probably would have vanquished Chris when we first met him... Phoebe you have to let go of whatever animosity you have towards Cal and move on. We have a warlock to vanquish!
Phoebe (sniffles): You're right. (Paige rubs Phoebe's back)
Piper: Is it just me or is that guy missing his tongue.
Paige: Ewww... First eyes, mow a tongue? If I didn't know better I'd say it was the monkeys...
Phoebe: Monkeys?
Paige: You know (she covers her eyes, then covers her ears, then covers her mouth.) I think that someone might have put the monkey's curse on our friend the warlock.
Phoebe: But how is he able to find and kill people without his senses?
Piper: we developed a sort of 6th sense as sisters; maybe the warlock developed some kind of other sense?
Phoebe: Let's get back to the manor, I think I might have an idea as to which Warlock we're looking for now. (She touches the dead man's hand) I'm sorry. (She launches into another premonition.)
[Premonition - 3rd Party Point of View (all done with an unsteady faded camera).
A man walks up to his apartment door. 35B is on the door. The man walks in the door and tries to turn on the lights. They do not work.
Warlock (in the dark): I've been waiting for you Mr. Umbala!
Mr. Umbala (nervous stutter): Who's there? How… How did you get in?
Warlock: You have something that belongs to me. (He blinks in behind Mr. Umbala and stabs him with a flaming athame. He then reaches over and holds both of Mr. Umbala's ears.)]
Piper: Phoebe, did you see his next target?
Phoebe: Yeah, and he definitely has something to do with the curse. Right before my premonition ended he reached for the guys ears. (She shivers)