Post by halliwellwitch12 on Mar 29, 2005 0:10:53 GMT -5
hey well this is the first fan fic i have ever done so after you read it please leave comments(They are well appreacheated!)
this story is going to be a little diffrent from the ep you all know, instead of the charmedones being girls they are going to be boys! there names are John,James, and jeffrey"jef for short" NOTE: THE EP MIGHT BE FOLLOWED IN SOME WAY!!
Appartmant:
We see a car pulling into a hotel parking lot, as soon as the car stops we see a beautiful young women come out of the car, and go inside her building. Then she unlocks her door and she goes in and takes her jacket off and puts her keys up. Then she goes over to her cat and feeds her and then pets her. Then we see her go over to a table there are candles there and she leans over to the candle and as soon as she touches it a fire starts and she does it again and again intill all the candels are lit. we hear her saying what sounds like a incantation, " Goddness of the moon and sun gather round, help in this guided space, and in this circle round" As she is saying this we see a shadow come beind her and then it just stays there. The women turns around and then gets up." You scared me" then the shadow goes over to her and stabs her. As she is folling to the ground the shadow just disappears, then the cat gets up and goes to the window and meoows then jumps out of the window and out of site.
Halliwell Manor:
We see somebody with an embrella in there hand walking on the sidewalk and then walking up stone steps to this beautiful house. He walks in puts his coat up and then goes to the living room sets down and turns on the tv. " James? Is that you?" James then answers yes. then we see Jeffrey come in from the next room he asks him why he was so late coming home, he tells him that tomorrow he is trying for the shef job and he needed to go to China Town to get the hurbs he needed. Jeffrey " Well remember that you were the one who need to stay home and wait for the repare man." james" Why do we need one i mean between you and me why can't one of us fix it?" Jeff" i don't know why, but u and i have both tried to fix it but it never got fixed so i just called one so we could get it over with" then James gets up off the couch and goes to the dining room. what is all this stuff? James asked? Jeff well i was in the basement today trying to find out where the game cube was but i found this, he pulled out a spirit board. James" I remeber this" then he turned it over, " to my dearist sons, let this help you find the light, let the power of 3 set you free love Mom." Jeff" You know that we have never found out what that ment." James" You know what i was thinking about what should we do with that extra room?" Jeff" Maybe we could rent it out and things might then get fun around here." James" What about if we give that room to John?" Jeff" WHAT??" "I mean it was willed to all of us." Jeff" ANd we haven't herd from him sence." james" You haven't but i have." James" the only reason you don't want him to come is because you never thought he had a vision of the future." Jeff" No, you never had a vision of a future." then the door opens and we see John walking thorought the door. John" HI, miss me?" James" Tons" then james ask then if he wanted to eat dinner with them? he told him yes and then they all whent into the kitchen for dinner.
john's room
We see John watching tv on his bed, then James comes in he tells him that dinner was great and that they should do stuff like that all the time. James" So how was Japan?" John" great, but then i missed you guys so i came back," then we see on the tv a dude talking to a lady, James tells john that the lady on tv is his girfriend. then the tv saids that a 23 yr old lady got stabbed tonight and it was the 4th women this month to get stabbed. James" Well good night i am going to go down stars and grab some grub then i am going to hit the sack." then he leaves the room when he leaves, john turns to watch tv then we turn to the window when we get there we see a persons shadow.......
N/a So that is how much i got so far. Here is what i left out that John went to japan after she had a fight with his brothers. And i forgot to tell u this u might know all ready but grams died 3 days ago i forgot to menton it but that all ready happened.
So please let the reviews come in.
this story is going to be a little diffrent from the ep you all know, instead of the charmedones being girls they are going to be boys! there names are John,James, and jeffrey"jef for short" NOTE: THE EP MIGHT BE FOLLOWED IN SOME WAY!!
Appartmant:
We see a car pulling into a hotel parking lot, as soon as the car stops we see a beautiful young women come out of the car, and go inside her building. Then she unlocks her door and she goes in and takes her jacket off and puts her keys up. Then she goes over to her cat and feeds her and then pets her. Then we see her go over to a table there are candles there and she leans over to the candle and as soon as she touches it a fire starts and she does it again and again intill all the candels are lit. we hear her saying what sounds like a incantation, " Goddness of the moon and sun gather round, help in this guided space, and in this circle round" As she is saying this we see a shadow come beind her and then it just stays there. The women turns around and then gets up." You scared me" then the shadow goes over to her and stabs her. As she is folling to the ground the shadow just disappears, then the cat gets up and goes to the window and meoows then jumps out of the window and out of site.
Halliwell Manor:
We see somebody with an embrella in there hand walking on the sidewalk and then walking up stone steps to this beautiful house. He walks in puts his coat up and then goes to the living room sets down and turns on the tv. " James? Is that you?" James then answers yes. then we see Jeffrey come in from the next room he asks him why he was so late coming home, he tells him that tomorrow he is trying for the shef job and he needed to go to China Town to get the hurbs he needed. Jeffrey " Well remember that you were the one who need to stay home and wait for the repare man." james" Why do we need one i mean between you and me why can't one of us fix it?" Jeff" i don't know why, but u and i have both tried to fix it but it never got fixed so i just called one so we could get it over with" then James gets up off the couch and goes to the dining room. what is all this stuff? James asked? Jeff well i was in the basement today trying to find out where the game cube was but i found this, he pulled out a spirit board. James" I remeber this" then he turned it over, " to my dearist sons, let this help you find the light, let the power of 3 set you free love Mom." Jeff" You know that we have never found out what that ment." James" You know what i was thinking about what should we do with that extra room?" Jeff" Maybe we could rent it out and things might then get fun around here." James" What about if we give that room to John?" Jeff" WHAT??" "I mean it was willed to all of us." Jeff" ANd we haven't herd from him sence." james" You haven't but i have." James" the only reason you don't want him to come is because you never thought he had a vision of the future." Jeff" No, you never had a vision of a future." then the door opens and we see John walking thorought the door. John" HI, miss me?" James" Tons" then james ask then if he wanted to eat dinner with them? he told him yes and then they all whent into the kitchen for dinner.
john's room
We see John watching tv on his bed, then James comes in he tells him that dinner was great and that they should do stuff like that all the time. James" So how was Japan?" John" great, but then i missed you guys so i came back," then we see on the tv a dude talking to a lady, James tells john that the lady on tv is his girfriend. then the tv saids that a 23 yr old lady got stabbed tonight and it was the 4th women this month to get stabbed. James" Well good night i am going to go down stars and grab some grub then i am going to hit the sack." then he leaves the room when he leaves, john turns to watch tv then we turn to the window when we get there we see a persons shadow.......
N/a So that is how much i got so far. Here is what i left out that John went to japan after she had a fight with his brothers. And i forgot to tell u this u might know all ready but grams died 3 days ago i forgot to menton it but that all ready happened.
So please let the reviews come in.