Post by pipers3rdson on Aug 11, 2005 15:21:35 GMT -5
Hey, guys I thought I would try my hand at writting a Charmed Series Finale. Sorry about the tenses throughout. Also, the beginning of Chapter 1 is more blunt, but towards the end of Chapter 1 I include much more dialogue and throughout the rest of the story.
*Chapter 1*
A demon finds an ancient scroll that tells of how evil can completely take over the world.The demon is able to find it
and the mechanics of it involve the demon saying the spell. This causes vanquished demons (even the source's power) as
well as demons living to be all consumed into one single entity. Next this demon blazes across the world destroying people,
towns, countries, very easily and out in the open. Then he goes and destroys all the elders, with no difficulty at all. Now, since Paige is a
whightlighter she gets a psychic shock when all the elders are destroyed (like when Prues clones are killed in "Which Prue
is it anyway?") Paige tells the sisters something is wrong and goes "up there" to see what is wrong, and then she
orbs there and it is empty, she is in dark space like void. The demon was so powerfull he was able to destroy the entire
"elder homeland". Paige comes back and tells them and they are shocked and confused. They ask Leo about it and he is confused
as well. As they are talking frantically, They are visited by the demon who attacks them for a bit. While the girls fight him he
exudes familiar characteristics. He does some
attacks that are similar the source, shax, etc. Then he tells the girls their fears in the voice or Barbas, then more demon banter in other voices, the voices are continuely changing while he talks. He messes with the girls
some more and then he leaves. The girls do their rally up and talk about what just happened. They talk about how the
The Entity (that is what I'll call this demon) had Shax's powers, the sources, and Barbas and how his voice kept changing and how they voices were familiar. Then leo gets extremely scared and shuts down and kinda walks off. Piper eventually weisels it out of him. Leo tells the back story of how this scroll was created as a last resort for demons, it pre dates the source even. It is the final plan demons had against good winning the eternal battle. Leo tells them how serious this is. Then the girls get around to turning on the tv and find out that Paris, Cairo, England Tokyo, etc, have all been destroyed. Then Leo says “it’s already started”, and Paige says “What, what’s starting”
Leo “the end of the world!” Then Phoebe says she’ll check the book, though Piper reminds them that this scroll pre dates the source, so it predates the book as well. So then they decide to go to magic school and when they all get there, it is a smoldering pile of rubble. Scattered through the rubble are teachers robes and then Piper gasps as she see’s a students hand showing through the rubble. The girls become ancy and scared and then decide to leave because they are sitting ducks out in the open. They return home. Paige blurts out “well then what the hell are we going to do” Piper “Paige we don’t need the sarcasm right now” Paige “How can we even take on a demon who is all past and current demons rolled up into this all powerfull thing?” Phoebe and Piper are quiet, along with leo sitting there with wyatt and chris. “Oh my girls. I think we can do something” Grams is standing there with her usual confident/cocky smirk.
Chapter 2 to follow if you guys like it. Tell me what you think ;D
*Chapter 1*
A demon finds an ancient scroll that tells of how evil can completely take over the world.The demon is able to find it
and the mechanics of it involve the demon saying the spell. This causes vanquished demons (even the source's power) as
well as demons living to be all consumed into one single entity. Next this demon blazes across the world destroying people,
towns, countries, very easily and out in the open. Then he goes and destroys all the elders, with no difficulty at all. Now, since Paige is a
whightlighter she gets a psychic shock when all the elders are destroyed (like when Prues clones are killed in "Which Prue
is it anyway?") Paige tells the sisters something is wrong and goes "up there" to see what is wrong, and then she
orbs there and it is empty, she is in dark space like void. The demon was so powerfull he was able to destroy the entire
"elder homeland". Paige comes back and tells them and they are shocked and confused. They ask Leo about it and he is confused
as well. As they are talking frantically, They are visited by the demon who attacks them for a bit. While the girls fight him he
exudes familiar characteristics. He does some
attacks that are similar the source, shax, etc. Then he tells the girls their fears in the voice or Barbas, then more demon banter in other voices, the voices are continuely changing while he talks. He messes with the girls
some more and then he leaves. The girls do their rally up and talk about what just happened. They talk about how the
The Entity (that is what I'll call this demon) had Shax's powers, the sources, and Barbas and how his voice kept changing and how they voices were familiar. Then leo gets extremely scared and shuts down and kinda walks off. Piper eventually weisels it out of him. Leo tells the back story of how this scroll was created as a last resort for demons, it pre dates the source even. It is the final plan demons had against good winning the eternal battle. Leo tells them how serious this is. Then the girls get around to turning on the tv and find out that Paris, Cairo, England Tokyo, etc, have all been destroyed. Then Leo says “it’s already started”, and Paige says “What, what’s starting”
Leo “the end of the world!” Then Phoebe says she’ll check the book, though Piper reminds them that this scroll pre dates the source, so it predates the book as well. So then they decide to go to magic school and when they all get there, it is a smoldering pile of rubble. Scattered through the rubble are teachers robes and then Piper gasps as she see’s a students hand showing through the rubble. The girls become ancy and scared and then decide to leave because they are sitting ducks out in the open. They return home. Paige blurts out “well then what the hell are we going to do” Piper “Paige we don’t need the sarcasm right now” Paige “How can we even take on a demon who is all past and current demons rolled up into this all powerfull thing?” Phoebe and Piper are quiet, along with leo sitting there with wyatt and chris. “Oh my girls. I think we can do something” Grams is standing there with her usual confident/cocky smirk.
Chapter 2 to follow if you guys like it. Tell me what you think ;D