Post by whiteangel58 on Jan 29, 2006 2:26:17 GMT -5
I didn't like the way 8.01 was written so i changed it, the demon and the sircumstence is still the same and i also changed the title! Hope u peeps injoy it!
8.01 The Charmed Ones Restored
The doors open slowly in front of the manor, we look in side to see the sisters standing there talking. Piper tells them that they have to go, they can't be late for there own funeral. Phoebe replies that it is a little weird that they are going to there own funural. Paige tells her that she knew that if they didn't fake there own deaths that they would be killed. Phoebe tells her that she knows but it still doesn't get any less weird. Piper replies to that and saids even though it is weird they still have to go. Piper waves a hand in front of her and she morphs into a nother. She nods at Paige and Phoebe and they copy her.They stand there for a moment and admire there transformations. Piper and Paige looked at each other and then headed toward the door, Phoebe closes her eyes and takes a big breath. She looks around the manor for a moment then heads out the door with her sisters.
3 pictures of the sisters are placed on top of a table, we see morners and majical creatures place white roses infornt of the pictures and walk on. We pan back from the table and see the sisters's disguised forms standing there watching the morners place the roses. Paige ask piper where leo is, piper tells her that since leo wasn't there when we died he is hiding from the elders so they can't find him. Paige nodds then looks forward. A man in a sute goes over to the table and places a rose down, he moves back and bows his head. Phoebe looks at the man, his face and body reminded phoebe of some one but she couldn't put a finger on it. She leaned closer to her sisters and asks them about the guy, paige and piper look over at the guy but don't recognize him. Phoebe contunes to look, she still can't figure out who it is. She tells them that she will be right back and leaves. As she is leaving piper wispers for phoebe to come back. Phoebe engorns piper and contunes to walk toward him. Phoebe stands near the man and looks forward, he looks sideways and notices that she is there. he turns and asks who she is, phoebe starts to say her name but stops and tells him her name is julie. She was phoebe's cousin from her dad's side, the man tells her that he is so sorry for her loss. Phoebe tells him thanks. she hold out her hand and ask what his name is, he holds out his hand and tells her that it is Justin. Phoebe shakes his hand and as she does she is pulled in to a priminition. She is in a hospital room, she laying on a bed screaming. justin is standing next to her telling her it is going to be ok. A voice tells her one more push, a nother scream is herd and then we hear a baby crying. the doctor cleans the baby and then hands the baby to phoebe. Justin smiles as he looks from phoebe to the baby. phoebe is pulled out of the priminition, she looks at justin as he stars at her. He asks if she is ok, phoebe nodds and tells him that it was good meeting him and walks off. She goes over to her sisters and stands there. Paige ask what happend and phoebe replies that she will tell her later. Piper shooses both of them as she watches Victor stand up to the podeum and make his speach. Victor tells the crowd that his 3 beautiful daughters were the best thing that happened in his life, even though he was not there for most of it he was still glad he could see them one last time. He went on to describe the sisters and he tell them a great quility in each. he raises is glass and makes a tost to them, everybody picks up there glass and saids each sister aloud. Everybody stakes a sip then starts to talk again, as victor was getting down a man comes up to him and starts to talk. He tells Victor that he is sorry for his loss. Then he starts to ask if they ever found the sisters bodys or leo's. Victor tells him that they searched the hole house and they didn't find them. The man pats victor on the back and tells him again for his loss. he smiles then walks off. Victor watches him walk off, he doesn't like the feeling he got from him, he shakes it off and heads for the sisters. He asks if they are ready to leave, piper wipes her eyes. He asks ask piper what is wrong, piper tells him that that was a nice speach he made. Victor thanks piper and tells her that he hopes that the sisters liked it. He winks at them as he saids this, the sisters nod and smile at him. Victor smiles at them and they head toward the car. Haz the demon victor was talking to watches him leave, he smiles then shimmers out.
Haz shimmers in, he walks over to the corner and a lighting bolt strikes. a seer appears and walks over to him, The seer ask what he wants. Haz tells her he want's to know how to become powerful, the seer's eyes turn white. Haz stands there for a moment wating for an answer, after wating for what felt like an eternity haz put his hands on her and tossed her across the room. The seers eyes turn back, she lays on the ground and watches him walk toward her. He asks her again what he has to do. the seer gets up and tells him that he has to steal one of the charmedones suns. Haz asks why, she tells him that if he grabs one he could use his power to form the underworld into what ever he wanted. Haz smiles at the thought, haz agrees and tells her that he will do it. He asks her if she knows a good time to start the plan, the seer replies that tomorrow night when the baby is asleep he needs to kill the grandfather and then the baby will be clear for the taken. He nods then shimmers out. The seer uses her power again, after a beat she stops. she grinds and then shimmers out.
A blond girl,billie, sits down at the table. She opens her laptop, as she does a map of the city appears. A red square appears and moves around the map, Billie taps on the table . "Come on, come on" she mumbles, a beat later it stops. "yes" she saids as she looks at her map, closes her lap top and leaves.
Victor puts down wyatt in his bed, he pulls the covers on him then walks out slowly of the room. Haz watches him enter the hallway, victor turns around and is startled to see him. He asks how Haz got in, he tells him that isn't important. He smiles as he forms a fire ball, we look upon victor's face as he sees the fire ball.
Piper and paige are in the attic fiting about how paige got a jingle today and almost responed to it. Paige tells her that she didn't so what's the problem. Piper tells her that if she would have gone that she would have exposed them or killed her. Paige appoligizes then ask piper where phoebe is, piper replies that she went to work to gather her things . she also tells her not to change the subject. A Explosion is herd down stairs, they look at each other then run down stairs. piper stops at the bottom and watches as the demon is about to kill there dad. A beat before he tosses the fire ball, billie comes in behind him and uses her power to send him flying. the demon lays on the ground as he looks at billie, he glars at her and shimmers out. Piper and Paige run over to victor and grab him, as they walk back toward the stairs haz shimmers in behind billie. Piper turns and tries to warn her, but is to late. Haz takes a knife and stabs her, he waits a min then they both shimmer out.
What's going to happen? Want to find out? Please review and u will see!
Thanks