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Post by Melinda Halliwell on May 6, 2016 17:35:53 GMT -5
Oh dear hope she'll be okay. Of course you should take your time uploading the next chapter which we understand about. Family comes first of course.
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Post by adzpower on May 7, 2016 11:27:55 GMT -5
So the new chapter is finally out, thank you for the patience. I'm especially happy with this chapter because I've essentially created an origin story for The Seer which is something I felt was sorely missing from the show, enjoy! And as always, any feedback is greatly appreciated.
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Post by Deleted on May 7, 2016 11:55:35 GMT -5
You gave the Seer her origin story.
I liked that you went into her background and told us how she ended up where she was when we saw her on the show.
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Post by adzpower on May 17, 2016 17:05:32 GMT -5
Just posted a new chapter, honestly this one was a bit of a slog to write, not because its complicated but because I've had almost no time to do any writing in the past couple of weeks, so what is actually a fairly short chapter turned into days of writing bit by bit due to timing constraints, anyways, the story is coming together now and the next few chapters are going to be quite pivotal in my version of season four.
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2016 23:46:37 GMT -5
Once again we have a death scene that would seem more at home on Supernatural than on Charmed.
The sisters failed an Innocent here, but at least they gave a damn about it.
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Post by adzpower on May 19, 2016 15:35:13 GMT -5
Chapter nine is now out, on the actual page on fanfic.net I had to call the chapter something else, I didn't realise they had a word limit for chapter titles, but it's virtually the same, I just cut one word out. Thus begins the Dark Phoebe storyline, hopefully done much better than how Kern did it. More explanations will come later on how she turned.
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Post by Deleted on May 19, 2016 23:39:45 GMT -5
Interesting that Piper thinks that Paige Matthews looks like family. Why do you think that is  |
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Post by adzpower on May 21, 2016 13:49:50 GMT -5
Chapter Ten is now out, enjoy!
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Post by adzpower on May 23, 2016 17:32:56 GMT -5
Chapter eleven now available.
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2016 23:26:28 GMT -5
The Seer's plan finally comes to fruition.
Was the Julie in this story the same demon we saw late in Season Four, who tried to put the moves on Cole?
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Post by adzpower on May 24, 2016 4:18:22 GMT -5
Yep, same demon : )
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Post by adzpower on Jun 27, 2016 16:23:17 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jun 27, 2016 17:06:55 GMT -5
Hey, the sisters summoned a spirit to get the right information.
Wish they'd done that on the show...
The new chapter was well worth the wait.
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Post by adzpower on Jun 28, 2016 3:00:55 GMT -5
Thanks Tim, its good to be back.
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Post by adzpower on Jul 2, 2016 3:37:08 GMT -5
Chapter 13, got a very exciting couple of chapters coming up now.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 2, 2016 19:15:07 GMT -5
I'm glad they got the creeps who were taking the animals. I'm a proud supporter of my local Humane Society. The thought of anyone hurting an animal makes me see red. Chris calls Prue "Mom". Huh  |
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Post by adzpower on Jul 5, 2016 17:10:56 GMT -5
Chapter 14 is now out, hopefully it'll clear some things up hehe.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 5, 2016 23:45:51 GMT -5
Your take on Chris Crossed. Pretty good. Although the time twists can give one a headache if they think too much about them |
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Post by adzpower on Jul 6, 2016 5:10:34 GMT -5
Haha, yep I gave Phoebe a headache in the story to mimic how confusing it can get.
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Post by adzpower on Jul 12, 2016 13:51:51 GMT -5
Chapter 15 now out. I love writing possible futures, always fun.
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