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[thesonandheir]

Charmed

Busy witches by Thesonandheir



Leo Leo leo?, (Leo Orbs in) what?, don't what me mister, what?, I said err Leo you left Wyatt at Magic School that's what, sorry I'll go get him,( Leo orbs out) phoebe comes downstairs, I have a deadline tonight that I didn't even know about! Sorry phoebe you're the columnists not me I can't help you I’m frustrated enough already, meanwhile Paige is at a temp job, so he needs the checks? yes and I also need you to pick up my daughter at her school please, sure thing mister crisp anything else, no thanks Paige that's all, okay see you later (she walks out and drives to the bank) but she gets stuck in traffic, dang it I'm going to be late. wait, I have an idea, Paige gets out of the car and orbs to the bank but there's a big line up at the check-in, but she gets out her notebook with all her spells on it she reads spell the speed up time spell and suddenly she's at the front of the line. Thank God for spells, what? said the clerk, nothing I’m here to pick up a check please, okay name please, page here to pick up a check for Sean Keller here's the signature, okay here you go ,thank you ,(page exits the bank meanwhile at the Manor) piper's washing the dishes, what a day. Totally agree a voice says from behind her, piper turns around, excuse me, hello Piper, piper's eyes pop open, ppp? Piper falls to the floor knocked out cold, wow pipers still the same after all these years, phoebe walks in, Piper what was that noi.. , Hi phoebes, Prue wha wha wha what how what why are you here? What is going on? , I’m here to visit you, piper gets up, phoebe I had the craziest.. Prue? What is going on? She's visiting said Phoebe, after all these years now you come visit! Yeah, why? Says Piper, just to say hi and meet Paige where is she? She's at her temp job phoebe said (meanwhile page is in the car with Kylie) mister crisps daughter, so what's up said Paige, (kylie stares at her) what's wrong Kylie? Leave me alone, Kylie says, I’m just trying to make conversation, (page parks at Mr. Crisps offices) here you go, Kylie gets out of the car and Paige drives away. She gets to the manor and walks in, phoebe Piper hello? Paige walks into the living room what's going on? Hi Paige says Prue, Prue? What the? Where's Phoebe and Piper? Phoebe and Piper are walking down the stairs, oh hi Paige. Hey guys why is Prue here? Oh she's just visiting, says Phoebe where's Leo he was supposed to be picking up Wyatt from Magic School? What about Chris? Asks page, Billy’s watching him, says Piper. How was your day page? Asks phoebe, it sucked, said page. Orbing sounds are heard in the background, well I think it's about to get worse says Phoebe, Paige turns around oh what is it now? Asks page .you used magic for personal gain page and frankly we as Elders can't allow that. What is he talking about Paige? Shouts piper. well everything was running slow today, slow you think that's an excuse page, shouts piper as she blows up the grandfather clock, really again? Says phoebe. I’m afraid I'm going to have to take your powers page says the Elder. Wait what? I'm sorry says the Elder, no you can't take them, says page. All of the sudden a demon shimmers in and throws an energy ball at Piper she falls to the ground, Paige look out! The demon tries to throw an energy ball at her but she dodges it, the demon shocks the Elder and calls for a darklighter but just us the darklighter fires his Arrow page jumps in the way and it hits her. Paige Shouts Prue as she Squints her eyes and sends the two enemies flying, she grabs the arrow and flings it at the darklighter and it disappears, (Leo orbs in) and quickly heals page, she gets up. the demon morphs into his human form, mister crisp? Page says in disbelief, hello page and goodbye, just as Crisp is about to throw an energy ball Kylie orbs in, Kylie? Says crisp. Hi daddy, says Kylie menacingly as she grabs a knife off the table and throws it into his chest and he burns then disappears Kylie? Says page, hi Paige says Kylie. What’s going on? Says page. Well Paige he's not my dad he... Kidnapped me and forced me to help him. oh sweetie it's ok, said page I’ll take you home, (Paige and Kylie orb out) well Piper ,Phoebe , I guess I have to go bye Prue bye they say as they hug her, Prue disappears, well I guess I should bring the Elder back bye, Leo says, wait where's Wyatt? Asks Piper. well he's up visiting grams, says Leo, oh okay but make sure he's back soon,( Leo orbs out and interrupts Piper) Leo? Leo? Did you hear me Leo? The end.

[thesonandheir]

Sorry if its a little choppy its my first fanfic i just wanted to hear your guys opinion on it. 

[Melinda Halliwell]

I understand yes.

It would be nice if the words were spaced and out and on separate lines paragraphed as it was a bit confusing reading all of it bunched up together but other than that a good effort then.

[thesonandheir]

Charmed

Busy witches by Thesonandheir



Leo Leo leo?, (Leo Orbs in) what?, don't what me mister, what?, I said err Leo you left Wyatt at Magic School that's what, sorry I'll go get him,( Leo orbs out) phoebe comes downstairs, I have a deadline tonight that I didn't even know about! Sorry phoebe you're the columnists not me I can't help you I’m frustrated enough already,

meanwhile Paige is at a temp job, so he needs the checks? yes and I also need you to pick up my daughter at her school please, sure thing mister crisp anything else, no thanks Paige that's all, okay see you later (she walks out and drives to the bank) but she gets stuck in traffic, dang it I'm going to be late. wait, I have an idea, Paige gets out of the car and orbs to the bank but there's a big line up at the check-in, but she gets out her notebook with all her spells on it she reads spell the speed up time spell and suddenly she's at the front of the line. Thank God for spells, what? said the clerk, nothing I’m here to pick up a check please, okay name please, page here to pick up a check for Sean Keller here's the signature, okay here you go ,thank you ,(page exits the bank meanwhile at the Manor) piper's washing the dishes, what a day. Totally agree a voice says from behind her, piper turns around, excuse me, hello Piper, piper's eyes pop open, ppp? Piper falls to the floor knocked out cold, wow pipers still the same after all these years, phoebe walks in, Piper what was that noi.. , Hi phoebes, Prue wha wha wha what how what why are you here? What is going on? , I’m here to visit you, piper gets up, phoebe I had the craziest.. Prue? What is going on? She's visiting said Phoebe, after all these years now you come visit! Yeah, why? Says Piper, just to say hi and meet Paige where is she? She's at her temp job phoebe said



(meanwhile page is in the car with Kylie) mister crisps daughter, so what's up said Paige, (kylie stares at her) what's wrong Kylie? Leave me alone, Kylie says, I’m just trying to make conversation, (page parks at Mr. Crisps offices) here you go, Kylie gets out of the car and Paige drives away. She gets to the manor and walks in, phoebe Piper hello? Paige walks into the living room what's going on? Hi Paige says Prue, Prue? What the? Where's Phoebe and Piper? Phoebe and Piper are walking down the stairs, oh hi Paige. Hey guys why is Prue here? Oh she's just visiting, says Phoebe where's Leo he was supposed to be picking up Wyatt from Magic School? What about Chris? Asks page, Billy’s watching him, says Piper. How was your day page? Asks phoebe, it sucked, said page. Orbing sounds are heard in the background, well I think it's about to get worse says Phoebe, Paige turns around oh what is it now? Asks page .you used magic for personal gain page and frankly we as Elders can't allow that. What is he talking about Paige? Shouts piper. well everything was running slow today, slow you think that's an excuse page, shouts piper as she blows up the grandfather clock, really again? Says phoebe. I’m afraid I'm going to have to take your powers page says the Elder. Wait what? I'm sorry says the Elder, no you can't take them, says page.



All of the sudden a demon shimmers in and throws an energy ball at Piper she falls to the ground, Paige look out! The demon tries to throw an energy ball at her but she dodges it, the demon shocks the Elder and calls for a darklighter but just as the darklighter fires his Arrow page jumps in the way and it hits her. Paige Shouts Prue as she Squints her eyes and sends the two enemies flying, she grabs the arrow and flings it at the darklighter and it disappears, (Leo orbs in) and quickly heals page, she gets up. The demon morphs into his human form, mister crisp? Page says in disbelief, hello page and goodbye, just as Crisp is about to throw an energy ball Kylie orbs in, Kylie? Says crisp. Hi daddy, says Kylie menacingly as she grabs a knife off the table and throws it into his chest and he burns then disappears. Kylie? Says page, hi Paige says Kylie. What’s going on? Says page. Well Paige he's not my dad he... Kidnapped me and forced me to help him. oh sweetie it's ok, said page I’ll take you home, (Paige and Kylie orb out) well Piper ,Phoebe , I guess I have to go bye Prue bye they say as they hug her, Prue disappears, well I guess I should bring the Elder back bye, Leo says, wait where's Wyatt? Asks Piper. well he's up visiting grams, says Leo, oh okay but make sure he's back soon,

( Leo orbs out and interrupts Piper) Leo? Leo? Did you hear me Leo? Leo get back here says piper, Leo! Leo, Leo orbs in, what? Leo asks. Leo can you go to Wyatt and bring him back here? says Piper viciously, well he's having fun with grams Leo says innocently, bring him back here now Piper says, Leo orbs out.

Meanwhile page is bringing Kylie back home. Well here's your home says page, yep this is my home hopefully everybody remembers me, says Kylie. What do you mean asks page. Well see will put a spell on me so nobody would recognize me Mister Crisp when he took me he kind of went with it said Kylie. Who is Will asks page, will is.. A witch she tried to rescue me from the demon, see the demon mister crisp was working with these vampires and that's how will came across to me she saved my life now I better go see if she can break the spell. All right if you insist let's go, says page as they orb out. They orb into willows place. Willow? Willow its kylie where are you? Kylie shouts, I’m right here kylie who's that you have with you? Willow asks, oh this is Paige she is a white lighter too answers Kylie. Oh, where did you meet her? Willow asks, I met her in San Francisco she saved my life from Mr. Crisp aka the demon as you know they Vanquish demons too answers Kylie.



Hello, Paige willow says. Hi Willow says page, oh speaking of introductions where's Buffy I want her to meet page? Asks Kylie, buffy someone's here to meet you shouts willow, coming says Buffy as she walks down the stairs. There's someone I want you to meet says Kylie, buffy is about to great page but then she stops dead in her tracks when she sees her face Oh my God a Charmed One? Says buffy, how did you know? Asks page. Well see here page we have kind of been looking for you people for a while and we kind of gave up, answers Buffy. What do you mean you have been looking for us? Paige demands. Well I mean like one of our " friends" has powers that we don't understand so we thought you would know. Answers buffy, who? Who has powers that you don't understand? Asks page, well see Kylie was actually found by that friend and she was brought to us because we are the closest friends he has right now, says Buffy. Who? Who is this person you're talking about I demand to meet him or her whichever one it is? Demands page, she is names Steven and we think he has demonic powers and he's been helping us kill vampires for a while now, answers buffy, Steven there's someone here to meet you, shouts willow, alright I'm coming, answers Steven. Hello Steven so I understand that you have demonic powers says page, yes I guess so, says Steven nervously. What's your last name? Page asks. I don't know I was kind of an orphan until buffy found me and discovered my powers, the man at the orphanage said I was from San Francisco and all I remember is an older gentleman dropping me off there. And for some reason he was wearing a white robe, Steven answers. You said a white robe. Paige asks, yes a white robe and he had grayish hair with nice calming eyes and that's all I remember about him, answers Steven.



Meanwhile at the Manor piper is holding the phone. Come on come on pick up the phone come on Phoebe, says Piper anxiously waiting for Phoebe to pick up the phone, all of the sudden Paige orbs in with a young boy. Oh hello page who's that you have with you? Piper asks. Well he is half demon or full demon I don't know but from what it sounds like an elder dropped him off at an orphanage and a Slayer named Buffy picked him up because of his powers and they tried to contact us and also here's the thing Buffy’s also Kylies charge answers page okay but what is he doing here? Demands Piper, we have to try to figure out what is going on with him, answers page. And how do you suppose we do that? Says Piper. Easy elders get down here we need to talk to you Paige shouts, an elder orbs in, yes page what is it? We found a kid and he said and I quote an older man drop him off at an orphanage and you was wearing a white robe page answers, oh well you see page and Piper you -aren't supposed to find this out but you have a brother, the Elder answers... We what? Yells Piper why weren't we told this earlier how did this even happen? , demands Piper. Well you see, Piper your mother sort of her spirit became pregnant and we Elders think it's because the Angel of Destiny made it happen but we don't know why and we were unsure of what would come, so we dropped him off at an orphanage for his own safety and didn't tell you for your safety answers the Elder. What do you mean for her safety?

he is our brother for goodness sakes why would you hide this from us? Paige demands, we are unsure of that but now that you know you must take care of him, teach him how to use his powers do anything you can to keep him protected in the world protected and especially yourselves. The Elder says right before he orbs out. Oh, my God, now we have a brother piper says, I guess its true page says, let's get this training started before any demons come along just then a demon shimmers in and throws an energy ball at piper! But before it could hit Piper it got flung back at the demon somehow in the demon was stunned. Who did that? What was that? Piper and Paige both asked. that was me girls, answers Steven, as the demon gets up and when he does Steven Shimmers behind the demon and throws an energy ball right at his back and the demon blows up.



Wow he has a lot of powers says page as another demon this time with a Vampire comes in and tries to attack them but Just then buffy appears in throws her stake at the vampire as he turns to dust. Hey, guys thought id help you guys out and bring Steven back in the process. Buffy says, well he's not coming back says page, and why is that? Says Buffy. Because he's our brother page answers, well dang it I’m going to miss him bye Steven, bye bye Buffy, Steven says as Buffy disappears, well let's get this started page says, just as Phoebe walks in the door. Oh hi Phoebe this is our ...., yes I know I heard the whole thing on the phone I finally picked up and then I heard you guys talking and I was waiting there waiting there and then I just heard the whole thing happen so I rushed down here to see what all the commotion was and meet him in the process answers Phoebe. Hello Phoebe says Steven, hi Steven says Phoebe welcome to the family she says as they all hug under the chandelier, then just that moment the chandelier starts glowing blue and lights form around the sisters and their brother, what's going on? Asks Steven, our powers are joining together to create the power of.. Four, the power of 4 I guess now is what we are called the four Charmed Ones here to protect innocence against demons and warlocks phoebe says as the image turns to black... But then it fades back to color and you see a man appearing in the middle of the street out of nowhere and he turns around to face the camera and you recognize him as Cole. Perfect he says before the credits start rolling... Credits roll the end that was Charmed busy Witches written by Thesonandheir

[thesonandheir]

in a way it kind of goes with two things #1 Buffy crossover and #2 if they had a brother, i just thought of compiling them together to make one big fan-fiction story. and Cole's back because I HAD TO!!!