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Post by coltoncharmed on Aug 31, 2018 20:20:57 GMT -5
Pheebs you really have done a good job with that press release re-write of mine. If more agree, use that one as an official press release.
Maybe I can rework other parts of my version for something else later. Re-reading mine I realized it didn't come out the way I thought it would. That online dating part maybe could be reworked with something that gets a Warren to go undercover for it.
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 1, 2018 1:17:33 GMT -5
Just popping in quick enough to repost this update from the previous page that included the press release credits.
Anyone want to edit it to include anything that was added today, go for it.
As always, feel free to re-edit, comment or ask questions. My edits are always just suggestions. As usual, I'm not completely thrilled with what we have, so if anyone has suggestions of their own on how to improve it, let's hear them!
Particularly since I've added credits, if anyone wants to PM me any corrections, I'll fix this.
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Post by pheebs on Sept 1, 2018 8:30:15 GMT -5
Thanks, Es, much appreciated for doing this. I'll update this and add the new additions, but might wait until more give feedback on them.
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Post by pheebs on Sept 1, 2018 10:00:35 GMT -5
I was playing around with some ideas and came up with these, and got inspiration from suggestions in the thread. What do you all think?
I've also added a previous press release, that is sorta the beginning of the arc, or just to get a picture of where the story carries over.
As always, feel free to re-edit, comment or ask questions. If you want to re-edit this whole arc completely, go for it. If you have other ideas, let us all know here?
For now, I've put these as part of our First Season, but should it be held off and left for Season Two?
What do you all think, especially since it's a story that carries a few episodes, and the way I've been working this story, It seems to have taken a life of its own that it could definitely be an arc now? I also am not sure a story like this fits our First Season?
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Post by Ruth Marie on Sept 1, 2018 21:41:16 GMT -5
Maybe the second season?
I'd also have it that they can't tap into the full powers. Can't do what our Element Warrens can. I'd add conflict that this coven cant handle the powers.
But I think maybe we could have fun with two stories for Prudence and Patience dealing with the coven and Paige and the rest in Salem with the friend and Piper freaking out her employee is a warlock with the Warlock test.
Maybe no need to involve them all coming together. I'd like two separate stories for a few episodes.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 2, 2018 0:00:52 GMT -5
I see you all have been busy. I did my own new press release. My own one is a little Prudence-centric with learning about her past too. Pheebs, Maybe we could even find a way to combine our ideas and episodes together somehow. Especially the parts about Prudence and her past, since yours is about her coven days and mine was her honeymoon with Allen. I'm sure we can somehow work these together unless we want to have one in one season and another in another. Nothing says we can't have two separate episodes that dabble into Prudence's past. Just don't think two in one season is a good idea. As we always say, feel free to re-edit, comment or ask questions. If you want to re-edit this whole arc completely, go for it. If you have other ideas, let us all know here?
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Post by summerreading on Sept 2, 2018 0:10:23 GMT -5
Just popping in quick enough to repost this update from the previous page that included the press release credits. Anyone want to edit it to include anything that was added today, go for it. I'm going to go ahead and add the new additions from the previous page. While we work on figuring out what we want out of the latest additions today. As always, feel free to re-edit, comment or ask questions. My edits are always just suggestions. As usual, I'm not completely thrilled with what we have, so if anyone has suggestions of their own on how to improve it, let's hear them! Particularly since I've added credits, if anyone wants to PM me any corrections, I'll fix this.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 2, 2018 0:19:19 GMT -5
Maybe the second season? I'd also have it that they can't tap into the full powers. Can't do what our Element Warrens can. I'd add conflict that this coven cant handle the powers. But I think maybe we could have fun with two stories for Prudence and Patience dealing with the coven and Paige and the rest in Salem with the friend and Piper freaking out her employee is a warlock with the Warlock test. Maybe no need to involve them all coming together. I'd like two separate stories for a few episodes. We could certainly do that, Ruth. I agree that having Piper freaking out about another employee being a warlock, and this being how they do the warlock test like in 'They're Everywhere' would be a fun story for the Warrens in Salem. We could even ditch the whole plot about Bridget and her coven trying to steal their powers, and let Prudence and Patience just solve the murder of one of the members in Philadelphia, and stopping Bridget instead, minus the part in stealing powers or Maybe Bridget even tries to even frame Prudence or Patience for the murder or even Andrea. Lots of possibilities. Unless others like the idea of Bridget and her coven being the big bads of a season of 'Elemental Charmed'. What does everyone else think?
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Post by Granny Charmed on Sept 2, 2018 0:34:30 GMT -5
I actually like the idea of Bridget and the coven being the big bads dears.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 2, 2018 0:40:37 GMT -5
I'm glad you do Granny. I just think we need to come up with a storyline, or further develop what Pheebs already came up with.
But Bridget being the one to get Andrea ill, that would send Prudence and Patience to town to help her, while her other members of the coven dealing with the Warren's in Salem, and one of them having to pretend to be a friend for months is very interesting.
I just think we need to get a much better motivation for why they are doing this with wanting to steal their powers.
Pheebs might have an explanation for her ideas, so I hope she can clarify it for us?
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Post by Granny Charmed on Sept 2, 2018 0:45:36 GMT -5
All part of the fun of brainstorming dear. We can have two *totally* different stories with the same basic idea and story arc. One taking the arc this direction and the other doing it another way. Then find a way to combine them together later.
I look forward to seeing what you all come up with. Looks like we do have a storyarc on our hands now.
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Post by pheebs on Sept 2, 2018 5:35:57 GMT -5
All part of the fun of brainstorming dear. We can have two *totally* different stories with the same basic idea and story arc. One taking the arc this direction and the other doing it another way. Then find a way to combine them together later. I look forward to seeing what you all come up with. Looks like we do have a storyarc on our hands now. That's exactly right. No right or wrong way to do it. Someone may have an idea someone or others didn't consider. I like the suggestions you all came up with on my edit. If you have time - All of you or anybody is free to do so. Feel free to show how you all would rewrite it or do it differently.
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Post by coltoncharmed on Sept 2, 2018 8:43:16 GMT -5
Maybe the second season? I'd also have it that they can't tap into the full powers. Can't do what our Element Warrens can. I'd add conflict that this coven cant handle the powers. But I think maybe we could have fun with two stories for Prudence and Patience dealing with the coven and Paige and the rest in Salem with the friend and Piper freaking out her employee is a warlock with the Warlock test. Maybe no need to involve them all coming together. I'd like two separate stories for a few episodes. We could certainly do that, Ruth. I agree that having Piper freaking out about another employee being a warlock, and this being how they do the warlock test like in 'They're Everywhere' would be a fun story for the Warrens in Salem. We could even ditch the whole plot about Bridget and her coven trying to steal their powers, and let Prudence and Patience just solve the murder of one of the members in Philadelphia, and stopping Bridget instead, minus the part in stealing powers or Maybe Bridget even tries to even frame Prudence or Patience for the murder or even Andrea. Lots of possibilities. Unless others like the idea of Bridget and her coven being the big bads of a season of 'Elemental Charmed'. What does everyone else think? I do like them being part of an arc. Maybe they do something to convince Prudence, Paige or Andrea and make them think they killed a member of the coven with an illusion or like what Barbas did to Phoebe in Sympathy for the Demon when she thought she killed Paige. Certainly could be a warlock power or something, or they are working with one or someone else.
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Post by Ruth Marie on Sept 2, 2018 16:23:00 GMT -5
Maybe the second season? I'd also have it that they can't tap into the full powers. Can't do what our Element Warrens can. I'd add conflict that this coven cant handle the powers. But I think maybe we could have fun with two stories for Prudence and Patience dealing with the coven and Paige and the rest in Salem with the friend and Piper freaking out her employee is a warlock with the Warlock test. Maybe no need to involve them all coming together. I'd like two separate stories for a few episodes. We could certainly do that, Ruth. I agree that having Piper freaking out about another employee being a warlock, and this being how they do the warlock test like in 'They're Everywhere' would be a fun story for the Warrens in Salem. We could even ditch the whole plot about Bridget and her coven trying to steal their powers, and let Prudence and Patience just solve the murder of one of the members in Philadelphia, and stopping Bridget instead, minus the part in stealing powers or Maybe Bridget even tries to even frame Prudence or Patience for the murder or even Andrea. Lots of possibilities. Unless others like the idea of Bridget and her coven being the big bads of a season of 'Elemental Charmed'. What does everyone else think? Lots of ideas. I do agree with others that making them the big bad is interesting. But I like the warlock test story as a story for Paige, Piper and Phoebe in Salem. Nothing says, you can't have it both ways. A story with the coven in Philadelphia and then bring them or the surviving ones back later in a season for the end of season arc?
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Post by prudencehalliwell on Sept 2, 2018 16:42:03 GMT -5
Love Dangerous Desires. what a fantastic episode on our hands. Still think S4 or now S5 plots need fixing. Since its only 12 episodes and I'm sure Summer, you didn't know what we were heading towards for seasons. I think we could play it that Peyton isn't on the loose for long maybe 2-3 episodes. I'd love a Halloween episode too. It will fall nicely in S4 on Oct 31st since we might aim for 5, so it wouldn't be in the final season. It would be in Season 4. Are we going to plot a birthday episode for one of the Warrens. Maybe even Prudence's 70th in S1 or Patience's 50th. Maybe we should get birthdays and dates sorted in the character thread. OH! I almost wish we could change Prudence's age to 69, Patience's to 49, Paige's to 39, Piper to 29 and Phoebe to 19 just so we could celebrate each of their "0" birthdays. Although if we do that, you'd almost want to celebrate it each year and TV years just aren't the same as real years, with birthdays coming up at strange times during the series. But Prudence hitting 70 (too bad she won't be hitting 75, but we'd have to wait til S6 for that, and that would be way too many episodes!) or Patience hitting 50...especially if they're something like my family where my brother's birthday October 9th, my sister's is October 11th and my mom's is October 14th, so we always celebrated all three together - that's definitely an interesting idea... And if like Melinda Warren, if our Mary Ann Warren (or even Jenna Warren)'s birthday was on Halloween with both Prudence's and Patience's birthday near Halloween...that could truly be fun! It could be a good introduction to them before they show up in the S1 finale and the S2 series premiere.... No need to show them - kinda like what happened in 'Something Wicca This Way Comes' where Melinda was mentioned and not shown... just mention them... What do you guys think? If we come up with a good birthday idea, I'll gladly shove Prudence's starting age to 69 and Patience's to 49. That sounds great or we could give each Warren just one birthday episode throughout the series but just one. Depends on if the idea is good.
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Post by prudencehalliwell on Sept 2, 2018 16:46:07 GMT -5
This coven story could also work Witch Stock in. But just the part of the warlocks pretending to be Prudence's friend like the one who was with Grams.
You guys are really set on this story it seems. Look forward to how this arc develops.
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Post by prudencehalliwell on Sept 2, 2018 16:48:03 GMT -5
If any magical creatures are added, Definitely hope we consider in terms of Classic Charmed canon of S1-3. Also make them part of the standalones and that's it. I really think not too many really. Not to the extent S5-8 was. Pheebs I liked that you had them invisible to all even witches but that Patience's earth element meant she was the only one who could communicate. I really will hate them not being invisible or a little less mysterious and unseen. Using the earth element to communicate with them. I absolutely love.
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Post by Granny Charmed on Sept 2, 2018 20:19:32 GMT -5
OH! I almost wish we could change Prudence's age to 69, Patience's to 49, Paige's to 39, Piper to 29 and Phoebe to 19 just so we could celebrate each of their "0" birthdays. Although if we do that, you'd almost want to celebrate it each year and TV years just aren't the same as real years, with birthdays coming up at strange times during the series. But Prudence hitting 70 (too bad she won't be hitting 75, but we'd have to wait til S6 for that, and that would be way too many episodes!) or Patience hitting 50...especially if they're something like my family where my brother's birthday October 9th, my sister's is October 11th and my mom's is October 14th, so we always celebrated all three together - that's definitely an interesting idea... And if like Melinda Warren, if our Mary Ann Warren (or even Jenna Warren)'s birthday was on Halloween with both Prudence's and Patience's birthday near Halloween...that could truly be fun! It could be a good introduction to them before they show up in the S1 finale and the S2 series premiere.... No need to show them - kinda like what happened in 'Something Wicca This Way Comes' where Melinda was mentioned and not shown... just mention them... What do you guys think? If we come up with a good birthday idea, I'll gladly shove Prudence's starting age to 69 and Patience's to 49. That sounds great or we could give each Warren just one birthday episode throughout the series but just one. Depends on if the idea is good. Exactly so - wouldn't want to do it just for the sack of having a birthday episode. I love the idea and press release for Paige and Phoebe's. That episode I liked very much.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 2, 2018 21:36:41 GMT -5
All part of the fun of brainstorming dear. We can have two *totally* different stories with the same basic idea and story arc. One taking the arc this direction and the other doing it another way. Then find a way to combine them together later. I look forward to seeing what you all come up with. Looks like we do have a storyarc on our hands now. That's exactly right. No right or wrong way to do it. Someone may have an idea someone or others didn't consider. I like the suggestions you all came up with on my edit. If you have time - All of you or anybody is free to do so. Feel free to show how you all would rewrite it or do it differently. We could certainly do that, Ruth. I agree that having Piper freaking out about another employee being a warlock, and this being how they do the warlock test like in 'They're Everywhere' would be a fun story for the Warrens in Salem. We could even ditch the whole plot about Bridget and her coven trying to steal their powers, and let Prudence and Patience just solve the murder of one of the members in Philadelphia, and stopping Bridget instead, minus the part in stealing powers or Maybe Bridget even tries to even frame Prudence or Patience for the murder or even Andrea. Lots of possibilities. Unless others like the idea of Bridget and her coven being the big bads of a season of 'Elemental Charmed'. What does everyone else think? I do like them being part of an arc. Maybe they do something to convince Prudence, Paige or Andrea and make them think they killed a member of the coven with an illusion or like what Barbas did to Phoebe in Sympathy for the Demon when she thought she killed Paige. Certainly could be a warlock power or something, or they are working with one or someone else. We could certainly do that, Ruth. I agree that having Piper freaking out about another employee being a warlock, and this being how they do the warlock test like in 'They're Everywhere' would be a fun story for the Warrens in Salem. We could even ditch the whole plot about Bridget and her coven trying to steal their powers, and let Prudence and Patience just solve the murder of one of the members in Philadelphia, and stopping Bridget instead, minus the part in stealing powers or Maybe Bridget even tries to even frame Prudence or Patience for the murder or even Andrea. Lots of possibilities. Unless others like the idea of Bridget and her coven being the big bads of a season of 'Elemental Charmed'. What does everyone else think? Lots of ideas. I do agree with others that making them the big bad is interesting. But I like the warlock test story as a story for Paige, Piper and Phoebe in Salem. Nothing says, you can't have it both ways. A story with the coven in Philadelphia and then bring them or the surviving ones back later in a season for the end of season arc? This coven story could also work Witch Stock in. But just the part of the warlocks pretending to be Prudence's friend like the one who was with Grams. You guys are really set on this story it seems. Look forward to how this arc develops. Well done Team Charmed Cafe, everyone throwing ideas into our pot. Everyone giving ideas and I appreciate it, Team! I had some fun of my own last night coming up with my own, taking on-board everyone's ideas, and rewrote Pheebs press releases. So in my next post, I'll start sharing my ideas. Maybe later we can find a way to combine them all at a later date.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 2, 2018 23:08:47 GMT -5
Here are my edits of Pheebs ideas for her press releases, and taking onboard all the requests by members here. As always, feel free to edit, ask questions or change it back to the original ideas.
As always, feel free to re-edit, comment or ask questions. If you want to re-edit this whole arc completely, go for it. If you have other ideas, let us all know here?
For now, I've put these as part of our Second Season. Just because of all the requests and ideas on possibly having it being as part of an arc. Again, anyone is free to change it, or revert back to the original ideas Pheebs came up with?
I'm not as satisfied with this as I originally hoped.
What do you all think?
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