A rough draft: What My Dream Charmed Would Look Like?

[BriannaWarren2.0]

This is just a summary of what each season would entail, I am still working on the finish product, I would just like to hear your thoughts on the rough draft of my version of Charmed before I finalise anything.


Season One

 
This is the season that we learn about the sisters destiny, what that entails and how it affects their lives whist trying to rebuild their already rocky relationship. 



Prue gets hired by the Buckland's, Rex is the third generation owner of the business meeting his wife Hannah at a meeting for warlocks, they fell in love and vowed to own the finer things in life, his grandfather collected magical items from Witches, Demons and Warlocks alike so that he could study them and later sell the item to elite cliental of the Auction House.

Final Villain: Rex and Hannah Buckland.

Season Two

 

Their relationship is on stable grounds, they have learnt and accepted their destiny, however now they learn about their ancestral roots and learn in the process that in a past life they were cousins, unfortunately Phoebe turned evil and had to be vanquished. 

The sisters after learning about their ancestry, they start to heavily focus on rebuilding the traditions that were lost throughout the family line, they also start thinking about the next generation and how they will raise them? What they need to do in order for them to be physically, mentally, emotionally and financially stable?

During the vanquish of The Buckland's they released the warlock who prosecuted their Ancestor Melinda Warren during the Salem Witch Trials, who makes it his mission to destroy the Charmed Ones, throughout the season, he releases warlocks onto the sisters, to weaken them before he finishes the job however he is vanquished and put back into the locket that Melinda trapped him in before her hanging. 

Final Villain: Matthew Tate.



Season Three

 The sisters are happily documenting their experiences as witches, they have been for the past year researching and putting into practice the traditions that where lost throughout their family history. Prue is waiting for Bane to finish his sentence in prison, she is in the process of buying Buckland and renaming it, Piper has quit working for Quake and is engaged to Leo and Phoebe is dating a lawyer by the name of Cole Turner as she is studying Psychology at college. 

However, we find out that Cole Turner, who Phoebe is currently in a relationship with is being processed by Balthazar, who was given to him by the Brotherhood Of The Thorn, to create a foothold in the mortal world whilst also being mercenaries for the Source, however unbeknownst to them, the Source will vanquish them as soon as they build a solid reputation. 

Final Villain: Brotherhood of the Thorn.



Season Four



 With Prue now owning Buckland, she is also renovating Bane’s dream house and will be moving in after construction is completed, she is just focused on making sure that Buckland’s now reopened as Prue Halliwell’s Auctions House reputation is in the clear.

Piper is opening up a Cafe near Prue’s work, she will be able to create a breakfast and lunch menu, she hires baristas and works closely with them to create a menu which will satisfy and impress her customers, something that she easily does. Leo and Piper buys the house next door to the Manor and after a few renovations they move in, during the last episode of the season.



Phoebe is still trying to find out where she is headed in her career with her now finishing schooling, she takes up a temp job at her former High School, aiming to make an impression on the students and to be someone she would have wanted whilst going through her rebellious stage in life, she ultimately gets the job as Baker’s High School psychologist, with the temp job being a trial. 

Phoebe and Cole have been in the process of rebuilding their relationship after the Brotherhood Of The Thorn situation, where Balthazor was stripped from him only leaving his mother’s powers: Shimmering, Energy Balls and Sensing, Cole is also opening up his Law Firm.



Final Villain: Not Sure Yet.


Season Five

 

With Piper moved out and Prue not far behind they all come to the decision that they will have family dinners at the Manor every Friday. 

The construction of Bane’s and Prue’s dream house is finally finished and she moves out. Prue has been able to gain a great reputation for her Auction House, Bane is released in the middle of the season and they start to build a life together. 

With Piper working at her Cafe, she is gaining a profit and building a stable clientele, she is being incredibly blessed with abundance. 



Phoebe and Cole are living in the Manor, with them both finding out that they are going to be parents, they are both incredibly happy and overwhelmed with bringing in new life to the world and to the Warren Bloodline. 
 
Phoebe and Cole bring their daughter Pearl Nicole Halliwell into the world, the child born is the Twice-Blessed Child, the exact child that the Source of All Evil as been waiting for (A child born from the greatest good and the greatest evil will have bring a child into the world when it seems like all hope is lost during an eclipse, to unite both sides to fight a common enemy). 

The child has the powers of Premonitions, Telekinesis, Shimmering and Energy Balls however with a dark ceremony (a demonic baptism when you reach 13) and a Wiccaning she will be able to gain so much more in the future. 

Prue and Piper are delighted to be aunts and are making sure that she is raised with a good moral compass. 

The Source recruits the Crone, an ancient motherly figure to demons to collect Pearl so that the Source can raise her to be the most destructive force that the world has ever seen, the Charmed Ones with Leo and Cole have to protect the next generation of Halliwell’s.

The season ends with the Crone being vanquished and Pearl receiving her Wiccaning by Grams.



Final Villain: The Crone 



Season Six



 With the Source struggling even more than normal to gain control of the underworld, he decides its in his best interest to have a meeting with the Triad, in order to kidnap Pearl. 

Meanwhile, Phoebe has been reading the entries of her ancestors from the Book Of Shadows to her daughter whilst on Maternity leave from Baker’s High, with her going back and fourth on going back to work after the ordeal with the Crone.

Cole suggests that Phoebe might want to write a book to help parents understand their rebellious children and how her experiences with being one may help parents see things from a different perspective, she starts writing her book: A Guide For Parents: Rebellious Teenagers and How To Help Them. 

Piper finds out she is pregnant with a daughter of her own, Leo and her start to prepare for their daughter’s arrival in the world. 

Prue and Bane are happy being the best aunt and uncle to their nieces with them vowing that they will be spoiling them.



Final Villain: The Triad. 



Season Seven

 

With his Council being vanquished by the Charmed Ones, the Source gets desperate and reckless, he comes to the conclusion that if you want something done right, you have to do it yourself. 

This season we find out that Phoebe is pregnant again with a daughter, after Piper gives birth to her daughter Patricia Melina Halliwell, Phoebe tells Prue that she is pregnant again but is afraid to tell Piper because she doesn’t want to steal her thunder, Prue consoles her and tells her she should tell Piper, which she does, and Piper is happy for both her and Cole.

Phoebe leaves her job at BHS and is signed with a publisher after the success of her first book. 

Pearl is successfully kidnapped by The Source with The Elders providing zero help stating that Pearl should have never been born, Leo becomes disfranchised by The Elders and tells Cole and Phoebe that The Elders aren’t going to help them with this one. 

Cole pissed off and fed up states that he wants to go to the underworld to find information concerning his daughter stating that he probably has favour that might come in handy, Phoebe warns him that he shouldn’t do that until they come up with a plan, Prue states that if he can go to the Underworld without being seen that he should, it might give them a clue of what they are up against. 

Cole goes into the Underworld with Leo a few steps behind him, making sure that he isn’t going against what he states, even though they trust him, they don’t trust the demons down there. Cole gets recon and goes to the sisters, she is only prepared to give them the information if they can protect her against the Source, which the Charmed Ones accept the offer, Kyra, who was supposed to be the next Seer doesn’t want to continue the demonic path and wants to help people.

The season ends with The Charmed Ones gaining a friend with Kyra and Pearl being home safe, then the arrival of Phoebe and Cole’s second daughter, Penelope Kyra Halliwell.

Final Villain: The Source. 



Season Eight



 With The Charmed Ones going against The Elders after their failure to help Phoebe’s daughter Pearl, Leo isn’t far behind after The Elders state that they would have wanted The Source to have taken Pearl so that the Charmed Ones would have ultimately had to kill her for the greater good, whilst also stating that any child that Phoebe have or will continue to have with Cole will never be recognised by them as innocents that need protecting, Leo becomes the first Fallen Whitelighter, proclaiming that children are innocent and that the greater good needs to protect them not abandon them. 

Leo tells the Charmed Ones everything that the Elders said about Phoebe’s children and that they will never protect them, which enrages Phoebe turning her into the Fury, with Cole having to be an only parent for the time being, Prue and Bane suggest that they have Pearl and Penelope at the Manor whilst Cole goes looking for Phoebe, he reluctantly agrees, after finding Phoebe at the Mausoleum and is extremely angry and attacks Cole but he is able to calm her down with her returning as the Phoebe he knows and loves, they return home to everyones happiness. 

The Charmed Ones decide that it’s time for The Elders to go down once and for all. 



This season is the final season that Cole is alive, he dies protecting his family, at the hands of The Elders. The Charmed Ones inflect themselves with the Nexus, this leads up to the battle in which the Elders reach their demise.

Final Villain: The Elders


Please ask me any questions or comments about my dream version of Charmed, however please keep in mind, as I have stated in the beginning of this post, that this is a rough draft and the final version will be better written and formatted. 

[Esmeralda]

I only have time to skim this, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. I just wish Pearl was born later and not be such a huge part - but that's me - I always want the sisters to star, not their kids or their guys, part of why I don't like Cole or Chris. But since this is YOUR Dream Charmed, do it the way YOU want it.

I have to leave Starbuck's soon, but I'm going to copy yours and work on it at home where I don't need the intersection. I hope you won't mind me editing it - my fingers are itchy!!!

[BriannaWarren2.0]

Jan 3, 2022 19:43:53 GMT -5 Esmeralda said:

I only have time to skim this, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. I just wish Pearl was born later and not be such a huge part - but that's me - I always want the sisters to star, not their kids or their guys, part of why I don't like Cole or Chris. But since this is YOUR Dream Charmed, do it the way YOU want it.

I have to leave Starbuck's soon, but I'm going to copy yours and work on it at home where I don't need the intersection. I hope you won't mind me editing it - my fingers are itchy!!!

Of course not, I hope you have fun with it, please tag me in it, I would love to see it. 

Thank you for your input, I'll definitely make sure that the sisters and their relationship plays a huge part in my dream Charmed. 

Enjoy your Starbucks! 

[Emmett]

I skimmed this BriannaWarren2.0, and liked what I saw. I'm looking forward to finding time, to give it a proper read-through.

I REALLY love what you've done with the sister's jobs and such, very well planned out with it happening organically. And how you did Piper's journey. I love her moving in next door, a way for her to move out, but still, be near her sisters.

I love what you did with Kyra. Always hated that the show lacked giving the sisters a long term female friend.

I've never worked on anything Charmed related in fanfics. I just don't think I'll ever have the time or will do it. But I just might do my own little dream Charmed write-up one time.

[Esmeralda]

ES: This is my edit of Brianna’s Dream Charmed. I haven’t changed anything, since it’s hers, but made it read smoother. I hope that’s okay with her. I just hope that she’s not upset when she finds out that when I read it rather than skimmed it, I didn’t like it as much, especially the last four seasons, but that’s okay. After all, it’s HER Dream Charmed, not mine, which I’ve posted many times.

LATER: Darn it! I was ALMOST done editing this when I lost the full document and have to do it over. Although I’ll admit that now that I’ve read it rather than just skim it, I don’t like it as much as I did, because it includes what I hate most about the last three seasons of Charmed: it stars a Twice-Blessed Child who is more powerful and more important than the sisters, who I feel should always star. I also don’t like the emphasis on who’s their latest enemy, but that’s me, not Brianna, and this is HER Dream Charmed, not mine.

So for now, I’m just going to edit the first four seasons. I’m not changing anything, only making it smoother. If Brianna likes what I do and wants me to, I’ll edit the other seasons.

EVEN LATER: Changed my mind just a bit. Because I read this before, I know what’s going to happen and what I think should’ve been included to make what happens fit better. Brianna, if you disagree with anything I do, especially if I misunderstand what you were trying to do (and I know this is just a rough draft so you can call this a rough edit), let me know and I’ll change it.

Also, I know that this is just a rough draft - you can count mine a very rough edit - so if I added anything that you wanted to do differently, don't be afraid to tell me and I'll change it.  I definitely want this to be YOUR Dream Charmed Without Pearl, not mine since I've done mine many times and although I do love this, it's just not MY Dream Charmed, not unless Phoebe ends up with Andy, Leo dies during 'Love Hurts' and stays dead and instead Piper falls for Dan and enjoys her half-normal life while Prue ends up with Cole, who's a warlock, not a half-demon and who they vanquish in the finale.  That's what would make it MY Dream Charmed!.

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This is just a summary of what each season would entail I’m still working on the finished product, I would just like to hear your thoughts on the rough draft of my version of Charmed before I finalize anything.

I’m including my comments to you as I go along. I hope they’ll be helpful.

Here we go!

BRIANNA’S DREAM CHARMED
Edited by Esmeralda

Season One

We meet the Halliwell sisters, discover they’re witches and learn with them what their destiny entails and how it affects their lives whist trying to rebuild their already rocky relationship. 

 They also meet Leo Wyatt, their whitelighter, and he and Piper fall in love.

Rex Buckland, the third-generation owner of Buckland’s Auction House, hires Prue. He met his wife, Hannah, at a meeting for warlocks where they fell in love and vowed to own the finer things in life. His grandfather collected magical items from witches, demons and warlocks alike so that he could study them and later sell the items to the elite cliental of the auction house.

Piper becomes manager of Quake when she really wants to own her own place whilst Phoebe continues the schooling she started when she was in New York before the sisters became Charmed. She has finished her basic classes and is now studying psychology.

I added these because they fit what you have happen to them later.

Final Villain: Rex and Hannah Buckland.

I LOVE what you do with Rex and Hannah – I might actually LIKE your Hannah – a first for me. But because I know from already editing this that Leo is part of this, I added him and Piper’s relationship. I’m wondering if you’ll do anything with Andy and what you’ll do with Phoebe.

Season Two

Having learnt and accepted their destiny, the sisters’ relationship is on stable ground. They learn about their ancestral roots and in the process, they learn about a past life where they were cousins. Unfortunately Past Phoebe turned evil and had to be vanquished. After learning about their ancestry, they focus heavily on rebuilding the traditions that were lost throughout the family line. They also start thinking about how they’ll raise the next generation and how they will raise them: what they need to do in order for them to be physically, mentally, emotionally and financially stable.

I’m not nuts about them already thinking about the next generation, but I can understand why you wanted this.  Having read the whole thing and knowing how important the next generation is to you (like a lot of fans’ Dream Charmed, the next generation is much more important than the sisters), I understand why you included the last line. For me, it’s much too soon – they’d do that when they first find out someone is pregnant. But that’s part of making this YOUR Dream Charmed, not mine.

But I LOVE them checking out their ancestral roots and deciding to rebuild the lost traditions. I think you should include ‘All Halliwell’s Eve’ as part of that, which might mean introducing Cole here. Speaking of, since I know what’s coming, I also think you should include Bane’s story in this season.

Vanquishing the Bucklands released the warlock who prosecuted their ancestor, Melinda Warren, during the Salem Witch Trials. Now Matthew Tate makes it his mission to destroy the Charmed Ones. Throughout the season, he siks warlocks on the sisters, hoping to weaken them before he finishes the job. But the sisters find the locket that Melinda cursed Matthew into before her hanging, so the sisters curse him back into the locket.

I love the idea of the Bucklands’ vanquishing leading to Matthew’s release – and love him being Melinda’s prosecutor.

Final Villain: Matthew Tate.

I love this rewrite of ‘The Witch is Back’, even if I wish they summoned her so she could help them and then take the locket with her into the afterlife so he can’t come back as he could here.

Season Three

After spending the previous year researching and putting into practice the traditions lost throughout their family history, the sisters happily document their experiences as witches

I LOVE this! Perhaps this is when you should do your version of ‘All Halliwell’s Eve’.

As Prue waits for Bane to finish his sentence in prison, she buys Buckland’s. She also begins work on Piper quits working at Quake and becomes engaged to Leo, while Phoebe dates a lawyer named Cole while continuing to study Psychology at college.

However, we find out that Cole is the son of the Source of All Evil. His father wants him to create a foothold in the mortal world. But Cole falls in love with Phoebe, which is actually exactly what the Source wants – a son who will become the most powerful force of evil ever born because he is both part of the Charmed line and the Source’s line He’s already planning on kidnapping his grandson and raising him evil.

Final Villain: The Source

Okay, I did what I said I wouldn’t do – changed what you wrote. But having read the full thing, I know you count Pearl as special because she is a child born from the greatest good and the greatest evil. Cole would not be the greatest evil if he wasn’t the son of the Source. If I’m misunderstanding what I think you did with Pearl (part of why I don’t like her and don’t want to edit the rest but will if you want me to), let me know and I’ll change it back.

Season Four

Still waiting for Bane’s release, Prue now owns Buckland’s, now known as “Prue Halliwell’s Auction House”, while also renovating Bane’s dream house, planning to moving in once he’s released since they are now engaged. She also focuses on making sure that her auction house’s reputation is in the clear. During the final episode, Bane is released and they start planning their wedding.

Piper opens up a café near the auction house. She hires baristas and works closely with them to create both a breakfast menu and a lunch menu that will satisfy and impress her customers. After getting married, she and Leo buy the house next door to the Manor. After a few renovations, they move in during the final episode.

Phoebe graduates from college and takes a temp job at her former high school, aiming to make an impression on the students and help them be someone she would have wanted to be whilst going through her own rebellious period. The temp job turns into a trial when the school ultimately hires her as Baker High School’s psychologist. In the last scene of the series, she announces that she’s pregnant – with a girl, so she and Cole become engaged.

Final Villain: NO ONE!!!

To me, the best final villain for what I count as the final season of “Charmed” would be no one, just concentrating on the sisters and their lives. But, of course, that’s because this would be what I would count as your last season, while you continue for four more. Actually I’d have only three seasons, since this, added to your Season Three, would make a perfect final season of my version of your version of “Charmed” while also setting up your spin-off, “Pearl”, which is your final four episodes.

Please ask me any questions or comments about my dream version of Charmed, however please keep in mind, as I have stated in the beginning of this post, that this is a rough draft and the final version will be better written and formatted.

So? What do you think of my editing and do you want me to do your sequel? Totally up to you.

Also, if you add more to these four seasons and *do* like what I did with this and want me to edit your newer versions, feel free to PM it to me and I can edit it before you post it – just give me credit. But that’s completely, totally up to you.

[Esmeralda]

Jan 3, 2022 19:47:46 GMT -5 BriannaWarren2.0 said:

Jan 3, 2022 19:43:53 GMT -5 Esmeralda said:

I only have time to skim this, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. I just wish Pearl was born later and not be such a huge part - but that's me - I always want the sisters to star, not their kids or their guys, part of why I don't like Cole or Chris. But since this is YOUR Dream Charmed, do it the way YOU want it.

I have to leave Starbuck's soon, but I'm going to copy yours and work on it at home where I don't need the intersection. I hope you won't mind me editing it - my fingers are itchy!!!

Of course not, I hope you have fun with it, please tag me in it, I would love to see it. 

Thank you for your input, I'll definitely make sure that the sisters and their relationship plays a huge part in my dream Charmed. 

Enjoy your Starbucks! 

Oh, yes, I truly had fun playing with yours - I hope you don't hate what I did with it TOO much. But PLEASE, don't change anything just because *I* would. This is YOUR Dream Charmed, not mine, and if you want it to star the next generation as is so obvious from your rough draft, then do it! There's a lot of fans who like the next generation (especially if they're girls) more than the sisters and will enjoy your version. I'm just not one of them.

[BriannaWarren2.0]

Jan 4, 2022 19:00:06 GMT -5 Esmeralda said:

ES: This is my edit of Brianna’s Dream Charmed. I haven’t changed anything, since it’s hers, but made it read smoother. I hope that’s okay with her. I just hope that she’s not upset when she finds out that when I read it rather than skimmed it, I didn’t like it as much, especially the last four seasons, but that’s okay. After all, it’s HER Dream Charmed, not mine, which I’ve posted many times.

LATER: Darn it! I was ALMOST done editing this when I lost the full document and have to do it over. Although I’ll admit that now that I’ve read it rather than just skim it, I don’t like it as much as I did, because it includes what I hate most about the last three seasons of Charmed: it stars a Twice-Blessed Child who is more powerful and more important than the sisters, who I feel should always star. I also don’t like the emphasis on who’s their latest enemy, but that’s me, not Brianna, and this is HER Dream Charmed, not mine.

So for now, I’m just going to edit the first four seasons. I’m not changing anything, only making it smoother. If Brianna likes what I do and wants me to, I’ll edit the other seasons.

EVEN LATER: Changed my mind just a bit. Because I read this before, I know what’s going to happen and what I think should’ve been included to make what happens fit better. Brianna, if you disagree with anything I do, especially if I misunderstand what you were trying to do (and I know this is just a rough draft so you can call this a rough edit), let me know and I’ll change it.

Also, I know that this is just a rough draft - you can count mine a very rough edit - so if I added anything that you wanted to do differently, don't be afraid to tell me and I'll change it.  I definitely want this to be YOUR Dream Charmed Without Pearl, not mine since I've done mine many times and although I do love this, it's just not MY Dream Charmed, not unless Phoebe ends up with Andy, Leo dies during 'Love Hurts' and stays dead and instead Piper falls for Dan and enjoys her half-normal life while Prue ends up with Cole, who's a warlock, not a half-demon and who they vanquish in the finale.  That's what would make it MY Dream Charmed!.

---

This is just a summary of what each season would entail I’m still working on the finished product, I would just like to hear your thoughts on the rough draft of my version of Charmed before I finalize anything.

I’m including my comments to you as I go along. I hope they’ll be helpful.

Here we go!

BRIANNA’S DREAM CHARMED
Edited by Esmeralda

Season One

We meet the Halliwell sisters, discover they’re witches and learn with them what their destiny entails and how it affects their lives whist trying to rebuild their already rocky relationship. 

 They also meet Leo Wyatt, their whitelighter, and he and Piper fall in love.

Rex Buckland, the third-generation owner of Buckland’s Auction House, hires Prue. He met his wife, Hannah, at a meeting for warlocks where they fell in love and vowed to own the finer things in life. His grandfather collected magical items from witches, demons and warlocks alike so that he could study them and later sell the items to the elite cliental of the auction house.

Piper becomes manager of Quake when she really wants to own her own place whilst Phoebe continues the schooling she started when she was in New York before the sisters became Charmed. She has finished her basic classes and is now studying psychology.

I added these because they fit what you have happen to them later.

Final Villain: Rex and Hannah Buckland.

I LOVE what you do with Rex and Hannah – I might actually LIKE your Hannah – a first for me. But because I know from already editing this that Leo is part of this, I added him and Piper’s relationship. I’m wondering if you’ll do anything with Andy and what you’ll do with Phoebe.

Season Two

Having learnt and accepted their destiny, the sisters’ relationship is on stable ground. They learn about their ancestral roots and in the process, they learn about a past life where they were cousins. Unfortunately Past Phoebe turned evil and had to be vanquished. After learning about their ancestry, they focus heavily on rebuilding the traditions that were lost throughout the family line. They also start thinking about how they’ll raise the next generation and how they will raise them: what they need to do in order for them to be physically, mentally, emotionally and financially stable.

I’m not nuts about them already thinking about the next generation, but I can understand why you wanted this.  Having read the whole thing and knowing how important the next generation is to you (like a lot of fans’ Dream Charmed, the next generation is much more important than the sisters), I understand why you included the last line. For me, it’s much too soon – they’d do that when they first find out someone is pregnant. But that’s part of making this YOUR Dream Charmed, not mine.

But I LOVE them checking out their ancestral roots and deciding to rebuild the lost traditions. I think you should include ‘All Halliwell’s Eve’ as part of that, which might mean introducing Cole here. Speaking of, since I know what’s coming, I also think you should include Bane’s story in this season.

Vanquishing the Bucklands released the warlock who prosecuted their ancestor, Melinda Warren, during the Salem Witch Trials. Now Matthew Tate makes it his mission to destroy the Charmed Ones. Throughout the season, he siks warlocks on the sisters, hoping to weaken them before he finishes the job. But the sisters find the locket that Melinda cursed Matthew into before her hanging, so the sisters curse him back into the locket.

I love the idea of the Bucklands’ vanquishing leading to Matthew’s release – and love him being Melinda’s prosecutor.

Final Villain: Matthew Tate.

I love this rewrite of ‘The Witch is Back’, even if I wish they summoned her so she could help them and then take the locket with her into the afterlife so he can’t come back as he could here.

Season Three

After spending the previous year researching and putting into practice the traditions lost throughout their family history, the sisters happily document their experiences as witches

I LOVE this! Perhaps this is when you should do your version of ‘All Halliwell’s Eve’.

As Prue waits for Bane to finish his sentence in prison, she buys Buckland’s. She also begins work on Piper quits working at Quake and becomes engaged to Leo, while Phoebe dates a lawyer named Cole while continuing to study Psychology at college.

However, we find out that Cole is the son of the Source of All Evil. His father wants him to create a foothold in the mortal world. But Cole falls in love with Phoebe, which is actually exactly what the Source wants – a son who will become the most powerful force of evil ever born because he is both part of the Charmed line and the Source’s line He’s already planning on kidnapping his grandson and raising him evil.

Final Villain: The Source

Okay, I did what I said I wouldn’t do – changed what you wrote. But having read the full thing, I know you count Pearl as special because she is a child born from the greatest good and the greatest evil. Cole would not be the greatest evil if he wasn’t the son of the Source. If I’m misunderstanding what I think you did with Pearl (part of why I don’t like her and don’t want to edit the rest but will if you want me to), let me know and I’ll change it back.

Season Four

Still waiting for Bane’s release, Prue now owns Buckland’s, now known as “Prue Halliwell’s Auction House”, while also renovating Bane’s dream house, planning to moving in once he’s released since they are now engaged. She also focuses on making sure that her auction house’s reputation is in the clear. During the final episode, Bane is released and they start planning their wedding.

Piper opens up a café near the auction house. She hires baristas and works closely with them to create both a breakfast menu and a lunch menu that will satisfy and impress her customers. After getting married, she and Leo buy the house next door to the Manor. After a few renovations, they move in during the final episode.

Phoebe graduates from college and takes a temp job at her former high school, aiming to make an impression on the students and help them be someone she would have wanted to be whilst going through her own rebellious period. The temp job turns into a trial when the school ultimately hires her as Baker High School’s psychologist. In the last scene of the series, she announces that she’s pregnant – with a girl, so she and Cole become engaged.

Final Villain: NO ONE!!!

To me, the best final villain for what I count as the final season of “Charmed” would be no one, just concentrating on the sisters and their lives. But, of course, that’s because this would be what I would count as your last season, while you continue for four more. Actually I’d have only three seasons, since this, added to your Season Three, would make a perfect final season of my version of your version of “Charmed” while also setting up your spin-off, “Pearl”, which is your final four episodes.

Please ask me any questions or comments about my dream version of Charmed, however please keep in mind, as I have stated in the beginning of this post, that this is a rough draft and the final version will be better written and formatted.

So? What do you think of my editing and do you want me to do your sequel? Totally up to you.

Also, if you add more to these four seasons and *do* like what I did with this and want me to edit your newer versions, feel free to PM it to me and I can edit it before you post it – just give me credit. But that’s completely, totally up to you.

I am in love with your edits, I prefer Cole being the Source's son, I was actually going to write him as Zankou's son but I love the idea of him being the Source's more.

I would love to read your edits on Pearl's spin off, I do think it should have it's own name so it different from the series about the sisters, maybe called The Destined One or something along those lines. 

[Esmeralda]

Jan 5, 2022 15:47:34 GMT -5 BriannaWarren2.0 said:

Jan 4, 2022 19:00:06 GMT -5 Esmeralda said:

ES: This is my edit of Brianna’s Dream Charmed. I haven’t changed anything, since it’s hers, but made it read smoother. I hope that’s okay with her. I just hope that she’s not upset when she finds out that when I read it rather than skimmed it, I didn’t like it as much, especially the last four seasons, but that’s okay. After all, it’s HER Dream Charmed, not mine, which I’ve posted many times.

LATER: Darn it! I was ALMOST done editing this when I lost the full document and have to do it over. Although I’ll admit that now that I’ve read it rather than just skim it, I don’t like it as much as I did, because it includes what I hate most about the last three seasons of Charmed: it stars a Twice-Blessed Child who is more powerful and more important than the sisters, who I feel should always star. I also don’t like the emphasis on who’s their latest enemy, but that’s me, not Brianna, and this is HER Dream Charmed, not mine.

So for now, I’m just going to edit the first four seasons. I’m not changing anything, only making it smoother. If Brianna likes what I do and wants me to, I’ll edit the other seasons.

EVEN LATER: Changed my mind just a bit. Because I read this before, I know what’s going to happen and what I think should’ve been included to make what happens fit better. Brianna, if you disagree with anything I do, especially if I misunderstand what you were trying to do (and I know this is just a rough draft so you can call this a rough edit), let me know and I’ll change it.

Also, I know that this is just a rough draft - you can count mine a very rough edit - so if I added anything that you wanted to do differently, don't be afraid to tell me and I'll change it.  I definitely want this to be YOUR Dream Charmed Without Pearl, not mine since I've done mine many times and although I do love this, it's just not MY Dream Charmed, not unless Phoebe ends up with Andy, Leo dies during 'Love Hurts' and stays dead and instead Piper falls for Dan and enjoys her half-normal life while Prue ends up with Cole, who's a warlock, not a half-demon and who they vanquish in the finale.  That's what would make it MY Dream Charmed!.

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I’m including my comments to you as I go along. I hope they’ll be helpful.

Here we go!

I added these because they fit what you have happen to them later.

I LOVE what you do with Rex and Hannah – I might actually LIKE your Hannah – a first for me. But because I know from already editing this that Leo is part of this, I added him and Piper’s relationship. I’m wondering if you’ll do anything with Andy and what you’ll do with Phoebe.


I’m not nuts about them already thinking about the next generation, but I can understand why you wanted this.  Having read the whole thing and knowing how important the next generation is to you (like a lot of fans’ Dream Charmed, the next generation is much more important than the sisters), I understand why you included the last line. For me, it’s much too soon – they’d do that when they first find out someone is pregnant. But that’s part of making this YOUR Dream Charmed, not mine.

But I LOVE them checking out their ancestral roots and deciding to rebuild the lost traditions. I think you should include ‘All Halliwell’s Eve’ as part of that, which might mean introducing Cole here. Speaking of, since I know what’s coming, I also think you should include Bane’s story in this season.

I love the idea of the Bucklands’ vanquishing leading to Matthew’s release – and love him being Melinda’s prosecutor.

I love this rewrite of ‘The Witch is Back’, even if I wish they summoned her so she could help them and then take the locket with her into the afterlife so he can’t come back as he could here.


I LOVE this! Perhaps this is when you should do your version of ‘All Halliwell’s Eve’.

Okay, I did what I said I wouldn’t do – changed what you wrote. But having read the full thing, I know you count Pearl as special because she is a child born from the greatest good and the greatest evil. Cole would not be the greatest evil if he wasn’t the son of the Source. If I’m misunderstanding what I think you did with Pearl (part of why I don’t like her and don’t want to edit the rest but will if you want me to), let me know and I’ll change it back.


To me, the best final villain for what I count as the final season of “Charmed” would be no one, just concentrating on the sisters and their lives. But, of course, that’s because this would be what I would count as your last season, while you continue for four more. Actually I’d have only three seasons, since this, added to your Season Three, would make a perfect final season of my version of your version of “Charmed” while also setting up your spin-off, “Pearl”, which is your final four episodes.

So? What do you think of my editing and do you want me to do your sequel? Totally up to you.

Also, if you add more to these four seasons and *do* like what I did with this and want me to edit your newer versions, feel free to PM it to me and I can edit it before you post it – just give me credit. But that’s completely, totally up to you.

I am in love with your edits, I prefer Cole being the Source's son, I was actually going to write him as Zankou's son but I love the idea of him being the Source's more.

I would love to read your edits on Pearl's spin off, I do think it should have it's own name so it different from the series about the sisters, maybe called The Destined One or something along those lines. 

YAY, Brianna! I'm so glad you like my idea of turning your Dream Charmed into two different series. I'll work on that at home and then post it the next time I'm here at Starbuck's. For now I'll just call it: "BRIANNA'S DREAM CHARMED...WITH PEARL"

In the meantime, since I mentioned it, I've decided to post my own True Dream Charmed. I've posted my Dream Charmed...with Children a number of times, but it's been a while since I posted my three-season version which unlike my other one never jumps the shark since no sister dies, no new one is introduced, there are no weddings until the very end, no kids and a bunch of other Jump the Shark moments that are part of so many Dream Charmeds - but that's okay. That's what makes them Dream Charmed!

If I really had a chance to rewrite Charmed, here's how I'd do it:

ES' DREAM CHARMED

Season One is similar to canon with some differences, mainly in the backstory and what comes from it.

Prue has never had a boyfriend because she closed her heart after the death of her mother. Instead she’s been taking care of her sisters and Grams. Roger isn’t her boyfriend, but just her boss at the museum, a job she keeps during the entire series - nope, no Buckland's.

Piper is the same as Canon Piper, except that she was never a banker…she didn’t have to since Prue was the one who took care of Grams. Otherwise, no need to change her or her and Leo’s story.

Phoebe is still the wild child and she is very surprised when she comes back from New York to find out that her just-as-wild high-school boyfriend is now an inspector with the San Francisco Police Department. Andy discovers her secret after she helps him solve a few of his cases. Just like Canon Andy, he can accept her as a witch, but not as a wife, at least for now, and since Phoebe is nowhere close to settling down, that’s fine with her, so they become lovers.

Andy's partner, Sheila Morris, wonders why Andy always seems to know what's up with the weird cases, but never learns the sisters' secret.

The other major difference is the finale which combines both “Love Hurts” and “Déjà vu All Over Again”. In order to stop the everlasting time loop, Piper must let Leo die…

After his death, the Charmed Ones no longer need a whitelighter to guide them which they needed during their first year as witches and we never hear the word whitelighter again, nor do we ever hear the word Elder, or, thank God, witchlighter. We never need to find out if dead men can sire children, which I believe would never have happened if Ted King hadn't left the show.

Other than these and the changes that would obviously be needed thanks to them--like the fact that it's Piper who thinks that Phoebe slept with her former boyfriend, Jeremy (who's the one who made her think so...) - the season is pretty much the same. Why change a good thing?

Obviously this changes Season Two, as Piper is the one who mourns her lost love rather than Prue. This is when she goes on strike, just like she did in the beginning of the Canon Season Three, and just like then, it's when she's almost the cause of a young girl losing her life that she changes her mind. But unlike Canon Season Three, Leo is never returned.

But then Dan moves in next door, halfway through the season, with the following episodes similar to the first ones in Canon Season Two, but Dan has no reason to be jealous of Leo...only of Piper's memories of him. Instead, when he finds out that Piper is a witch, he also finds out what Leo was, and can accept that, since he respects Piper's decision for letting Leo die. Much like Henry in Canon Season Eight, he decides that he can accept Piper as a witch and Piper finds herself falling for him, big-time, especially because he helps her have a normal life as a normal couple, something Leo could never do. With Dan's help, she decides to quit Quake and instead starts a restaurant of her own - P3. She hires a manager, Elise, so she can be the chief chef.

Meanwhile, Phoebe continues to use her premonitions to help Andy and Sheila solve crimes with the help of her sisters, keeping the focus of the show on those innocent of the reality of magic (my definition of innocents, so anyone who has powers isn't one), as we see all of the innocents and bad guys who we saw in Canon Season Two, with the exception of Sam who isn’t part of this--the only reason Victor left is Grams. Phoebe and Andy are still lovers, but don’t even consider marriage until Phoebe almost dies trying to save one of the victims of a crime they're trying to solve. Andy realizes that he loves her no matter if she's a witch or not and pops the question in a very romantic way, and she accepts.

We also see another bad guy, although if this was truly the first time we’d see the show, we wouldn’t know it. When the sisters end up having to testify at a trial, Prue takes a liking to District Attorney Cole Turner, and he returns the favor. But when he asks her out, she refuses. Only after she meets Cupid and becomes his ring, does she open her heart and accept Cole's offer.

The season finale is an episode similar to Canon “The Honeymoon’s Over”, except, of course, Piper is also part of it, since no one has gone (or could go) Up There without suffocating from the lack of air. This is when we find out that Cole is indeed trying to kill the sisters. Unlike Canon Cole, he’s not half-demon; he's a warlock who only pretends to care for Prue and simply wants to discover the sisters’ weaknesses so he can destroy them and take their powers. There is no Source or Big Bad in this Charmedverse — the one who comes closest to being that is Cole himself, who is more like a combination of Cole and Zankou, except he's a warlock and not a demon - in this Charmedverse, the only demons are "The Demons of... " who are the opposite of "The Angels of..." and appear as often as the Angels do...

Unlike Canon Season Two, since there is no "P3 H20" - no need to show anyone what could happen if a whitelighter falls in love with his charge - Prue never stops working at the museum, nor does she ever get her astral projection power. Instead all three sisters are gaining better control of their powers and can use them over larger distances as they work towards having the version of their powers that we saw in Canon 'Morality Bites'. That is indeed part of my series (how could my favorite episode not be?), except it's the season finale, and it's Andy and Phoebe who have Patty (not Melinda - Phoebe would want to continue the "P" tradition, besides naming her daughter after her mother) and it's Prue who is about to die...This is the season finale, although unlike the canon sisters, these sisters never forget that they are supposed to protect the innocent, not punish the guilty, and that the wrong thing done for the right reason is still the wrong thing – the ends do NOT justify the means – not when you have powers like theirs!

Season Three, the final season of my Dream Charmed, continues to have Phoebe helping Andy and Sheila solve crime, while also planning her wedding to Andy, so we continue to have the Bad Guy of the Week that I love, while also having the Cole story-arc that other fans love, even his fans might not like it as much, since Cole never truly loves a Charmed One, since he's pure warlock and not a half-demon. Meanwhile, Piper and Dan are becoming closer, and Prue thinks that so are she and Cole. Both Prue and Piper hope they're the ones who catch Phoebe's bouquet.

With these exceptions (and Phoebe and Andy not having to fight the Elders in order to get married since Andy's not dead), the season works pretty much like the original except that Piper never gets her explosion power and Phoebe never levitates.

Andy and Phoebe’s wedding happens about halfway through the season, working much like Leo and Piper’s so that Patty and Grams can be part of it (the only time they're corporeal in my Charmedverse), although there’s also plans for a big, huge public church wedding later on, since unlike Leo, Andy isn’t dead.

But rather than Prue interrupting it, it’s Shax who suddenly appears. The sisters vanquish him, but when they check the Book of Shadows, they find that he is just a warlockian hitman, so there is someone a lot worse out there. Phoebe tells Andy that she loves him and still wants to marry him, but only after they find and vanquish Shax’s boss.

The rest of the season works out similar to the original except, of course, there are no honeymooners, Phoebe continues to use her premonitions to help Andy and Sheila solve crimes while the sisters continue to save innocents.

But when Cole almost succeeds in killing the sisters, Prue has to accept the fact that the lawyer she loves is just the mask worn by a warlock who only pretended to love her and only wants her and her sisters' powers. Even though it breaks her heart, she joins her sisters in the grand finale as they battle and finally vanquish him.

The Angel of Destiny shows up and the sisters decide to give up their powers so they can live normal lives, with Prue finally deciding to quit the museum so she can try to live her own dream - that of being a professional photographer, something we've seen since the beginning of the series; Piper considering marrying Dan while happily running her restaurant where she's the chef; and Phoebe deciding to go back to school and become an inspector herself so she can continue to help Andy and Sheila solve crimes.

Only then do we see the big grand church wedding as Phoebe and Andy are married, the last scene of the series. It ends with Phoebe throwing her bouquet and both her sisters grabbing for it - but we don't see who catches it.  

If this sets up a spin-off, they'd have to find a new showrunner because I wouldn't be interested, even though I *did* write my "Es' Dream Charmed...with Children" which does include a death of a sister and Paige and a daughter from the future and a couple of weddings, but as I said, I've posted that a number of times so I won't now.

[Esmeralda]

BRIANNA'S DREAM CHARMED...WITH PEARL aka DESTINED
Edited by Esmeralda

PREVIOUSLY ON BRIANNA'S DREAM CHARMED...WITHOUT PEARL:

(Note: I'm mainly repeating this to remind myself how Brianna and I left the sisters in the previous series.)

CHARMED: Season Four

Still waiting for Bane’s release, Prue now owns Buckland’s, now known as “Prue Halliwell’s Auction House”, while also renovating Bane’s dream house, planning to moving in once he’s released since they are now engaged. She also focuses on making sure that her auction house’s reputation is in the clear. During the final episode, Bane is released and they start planning their wedding.

Piper opens up a café near the auction house. She hires baristas and works closely with them to create both a breakfast menu and a lunch menu that will satisfy and impress her customers. After getting married, she and Leo buy the house next door to the Manor. After a few renovations, they move in during the final episode.

Phoebe graduates from college and takes a temp job at her former high school, aiming to make an impression on the students and help them be someone she would have wanted to be whilst going through her own rebellious period. The temp job turns into a trial when the school ultimately hires her as Baker High School’s psychologist. In the last scene of the series, she announces that she’s pregnant – with a girl, so she and Cole become engaged.


DESTINED: Season One

Two years have passed since Phoebe and Cole became engaged. They're married now and their daughter is now a year old. The Turners still live in the Halliwell Manor while the Wyatts live in the house next door and the Jessups live in Bane's dream house. The sisters have family dinners at the Manor every Friday. Prue has gained a great reputation for her auction house. Piper's café makes a profit and has build a stable clientele, Abundance blesses her incredibly and she never whines. Bane helps Prue with the auction house; Leo is a real handyman while taking care of all of his charges and Cole is now district attorney.

Phoebe stays home with her and Cole's a daughter, Pearl Nicole Turner, the Twice-Blessed Child, the exact child that the Source of All Evil as been waiting for to fulfill the prophecy that when it seems like all hope is lost during an eclipse, a child born from the greatest good and the greatest evil will unite both sides to fight a common enemy. 

The child has the powers of premonitions, telekinesis, shimmering and is able to create and throw energy balls. However if she's wiccaned as a two-year-old and is baptized in a dark ceremony when she's 13, she will be able to gain so much more in the future.

Delighted to be aunts, Prue and Piper make sure that Phoebe and Cole raise Pearl with a good moral compass. However, the Source recruits the Crone, an ancient motherly figure, to collect Pearl so that the Source can raise her to be the most destructive force that the world has ever seen. The Charmed Ones with Bane, Leo and Cole's help must protect this oldest of the next generation of Halliwells.

The season ends with the Charmed Ones vanquishing the Crone and rescuing Pearl, whom Grams wiccans.

Final Villain: The Crone

I really like your use of the Crone here. As for the rest? *yawn*, but that shouldn't surprise you any. I'm sure other readers will LOVE it!

DESTINED: Season Two

Even as the Source plots how to kidnap Pearl now that the Crone is gone, Phoebe read the entries about her ancestors in the Book Of Shadows as to her daughter as bedtime stories. At Cole's suggestion, she works on writing a book to help parents understand their rebellious children and how her experiences can help parents see things from a different perspective. The book is a huge success and Phoebe starts planning her next book.

Piper has a daughter of her own; she and Leo name her Patricia Melinda Wyatt. finds out she is pregnant with a daughter of her own. Phoebe tells Prue that she is pregnant again but is afraid to tell Piper because she doesn’t want to steal her thunder. Prue counsels her so she tells Leo and Piper and they are happy for Prue and Cole and Pearl. When asked, Prue tells her that she already had her kids when she helped raise Piper and Phoebe and she and Bane will just enjoy spoiling their nieces.

Final Villain: None

I LOVE the idea of Phoebe writing a book about teenage rebellion rather than how to find love. Other than that, *yawn* I skipped the Source and the Triad since nothing happened.

DESTINED: Season Three

After the Charmed Ones vanquish his Council, the Source becomes desperate and reckless. He decides that if you want something done right, you have to do it yourself. He succeeds in kidnapping Pearl. Frantic, the Charmed Ones ask for the Elders' assistance but they disfranchise Leo and tell Cole and Phoebe that they aren’t going to help them with this one because Pearl should've never been born. Pissed off and fed up, Cole wants to go to the underworld to find information concerning his daughter since as the son of the Source, there are many demons whose favour could come in handy, Phoebe thinks he should wait until they come up with a plan while Prue thinks that if he can go to the Underworld without being seen then he should, since it could give them a clue of what they are going up against.

Cole goes into the Underworld with Leo a few steps behind him. He trusts Cole but doesn't trust the other demons. A Seer gives Cole recon, but she will only give them the information if they can protect her from the Source. The Charmed Ones accept Kyra's offer, especially when she reveals that she was supposed to be the next Seer, but she doesn’t want to continue the demonic path and wants to help people. The season ends with the Charmed Ones gaining a friend with Kyra and Pearl returned home safe in time to welcome her new little sister, Penelope Kyra Turner.

Final Villain: The Source.

LOVE the introduction of Kyra! The rest? *yawn*

DESTINED: Season Four

After the Elders failed to help Pearl, the Charmed Ones decide to get rid of the the Elders. After the Elders reveal that they were hoping the Source would take Pearl so the Charmed Ones would have ultimately had to kill her for the greater good, whilst also stating that any child that Phoebe have or will continue to have with Cole will never be recognised by them as innocents who need protecting, Leo becomes the first Fallen Whitelighter, proclaiming that children are innocent and that the greater good needs to protect them, not abandon them. He reveals everything to the Charmed Ones, which enrages Phoebe, turning her into a Fury. With Cole Pearl's only parent for the time being, Bane and Prue suggest that they bring Pearl and Penelope to at the Manor whilst Cole looks for Phoebe and he reluctantly agrees. He finds Phoebe in the Turner Mausoleum. Extremely angry, she attacks Cole, but he is able to calm her down with her returning as the Phoebe he knows and loves. To everyone's happiness, they return home where the Charmed Ones decide that it’s time for The Elders to go down, once and for all. But during the battle Cole dies at the hands of the Elders, trying to protect his family from them. The Charmed Ones infect themselves with the Nexus, leading up to the the battle where the Elders reach their demise.

Final Villain: The Elders

I'll never understand why fans always want the Elders to end up being evil, just because the canon show messed them up. Not me. They'll always be wise and good in mine; ones who deserve to be the leaders of Good. But, of course, that's because I believe in black-and-white morality in fantasy shows no matter how unrealistic that is.

Now had you come up with another villain, this last one would've been my favorite since it's all about the Charmed Ones, even if it's just about Phoebe and Cole, outside of the girls going to live with Auntie Prue (love that!) and Leo a Fallen Whitelighter (not nuts on that...I'd hope he'd figure a way to save the Elders - say if it's only their leader, Odin (HATE HIM!) who is leading them in the wrong direction, with Leo ending up becoming the new Chief Leader since there's no one who's more good than Leo. But, as usual, that would be part of MY Dream Charmed: Chosen, not most fans'.).

So? What do you think? Anything need changing? And are you going to add more to and of these or perhaps turn this into a trilogy by showing what happens in the future with Pearl, Patricia and Penelope when that eclipse occurs? Now THAT I could find interesting! I always thought that much as I hate Chris, had we seen more of the future (say an entire arc or even an entire season), I might have felt differently...well, maybe if he was played by someone else.

[BriannaWarren2.0]

Jan 7, 2022 20:32:01 GMT -5 Esmeralda said:

BRIANNA'S DREAM CHARMED...WITH PEARL aka DESTINED
Edited by Esmeralda

PREVIOUSLY ON BRIANNA'S DREAM CHARMED...WITHOUT PEARL:

(Note: I'm mainly repeating this to remind myself how Brianna and I left the sisters in the previous series.)

CHARMED: Season Four

Still waiting for Bane’s release, Prue now owns Buckland’s, now known as “Prue Halliwell’s Auction House”, while also renovating Bane’s dream house, planning to moving in once he’s released since they are now engaged. She also focuses on making sure that her auction house’s reputation is in the clear. During the final episode, Bane is released and they start planning their wedding.

Piper opens up a café near the auction house. She hires baristas and works closely with them to create both a breakfast menu and a lunch menu that will satisfy and impress her customers. After getting married, she and Leo buy the house next door to the Manor. After a few renovations, they move in during the final episode.

Phoebe graduates from college and takes a temp job at her former high school, aiming to make an impression on the students and help them be someone she would have wanted to be whilst going through her own rebellious period. The temp job turns into a trial when the school ultimately hires her as Baker High School’s psychologist. In the last scene of the series, she announces that she’s pregnant – with a girl, so she and Cole become engaged.


DESTINED: Season One

Two years have passed since Phoebe and Cole became engaged. They're married now and their daughter is now a year old. The Turners still live in the Halliwell Manor while the Wyatts live in the house next door and the Jessups live in Bane's dream house. The sisters have family dinners at the Manor every Friday. Prue has gained a great reputation for her auction house. Piper's café makes a profit and has build a stable clientele, Abundance blesses her incredibly and she never whines. Bane helps Prue with the auction house; Leo is a real handyman while taking care of all of his charges and Cole is now district attorney.

Phoebe stays home with her and Cole's a daughter, Pearl Nicole Turner, the Twice-Blessed Child, the exact child that the Source of All Evil as been waiting for to fulfill the prophecy that when it seems like all hope is lost during an eclipse, a child born from the greatest good and the greatest evil will unite both sides to fight a common enemy. 

The child has the powers of premonitions, telekinesis, shimmering and is able to create and throw energy balls. However if she's wiccaned as a two-year-old and is baptized in a dark ceremony when she's 13, she will be able to gain so much more in the future.

Delighted to be aunts, Prue and Piper make sure that Phoebe and Cole raise Pearl with a good moral compass. However, the Source recruits the Crone, an ancient motherly figure, to collect Pearl so that the Source can raise her to be the most destructive force that the world has ever seen. The Charmed Ones with Bane, Leo and Cole's help must protect this oldest of the next generation of Halliwells.

The season ends with the Charmed Ones vanquishing the Crone and rescuing Pearl, whom Grams wiccans.

Final Villain: The Crone

I really like your use of the Crone here. As for the rest? *yawn*, but that shouldn't surprise you any. I'm sure other readers will LOVE it!

DESTINED: Season Two

Even as the Source plots how to kidnap Pearl now that the Crone is gone, Phoebe read the entries about her ancestors in the Book Of Shadows as to her daughter as bedtime stories. At Cole's suggestion, she works on writing a book to help parents understand their rebellious children and how her experiences can help parents see things from a different perspective. The book is a huge success and Phoebe starts planning her next book.

Piper has a daughter of her own; she and Leo name her Patricia Melinda Wyatt. finds out she is pregnant with a daughter of her own. Phoebe tells Prue that she is pregnant again but is afraid to tell Piper because she doesn’t want to steal her thunder. Prue counsels her so she tells Leo and Piper and they are happy for Prue and Cole and Pearl. When asked, Prue tells her that she already had her kids when she helped raise Piper and Phoebe and she and Bane will just enjoy spoiling their nieces.

Final Villain: None

I LOVE the idea of Phoebe writing a book about teenage rebellion rather than how to find love. Other than that, *yawn* I skipped the Source and the Triad since nothing happened.

DESTINED: Season Three

After the Charmed Ones vanquish his Council, the Source becomes desperate and reckless. He decides that if you want something done right, you have to do it yourself. He succeeds in kidnapping Pearl. Frantic, the Charmed Ones ask for the Elders' assistance but they disfranchise Leo and tell Cole and Phoebe that they aren’t going to help them with this one because Pearl should've never been born. Pissed off and fed up, Cole wants to go to the underworld to find information concerning his daughter since as the son of the Source, there are many demons whose favour could come in handy, Phoebe thinks he should wait until they come up with a plan while Prue thinks that if he can go to the Underworld without being seen then he should, since it could give them a clue of what they are going up against.

Cole goes into the Underworld with Leo a few steps behind him. He trusts Cole but doesn't trust the other demons. A Seer gives Cole recon, but she will only give them the information if they can protect her from the Source. The Charmed Ones accept Kyra's offer, especially when she reveals that she was supposed to be the next Seer, but she doesn’t want to continue the demonic path and wants to help people. The season ends with the Charmed Ones gaining a friend with Kyra and Pearl returned home safe in time to welcome her new little sister, Penelope Kyra Turner.

Final Villain: The Source.

LOVE the introduction of Kyra! The rest? *yawn*

DESTINED: Season Four

After the Elders failed to help Pearl, the Charmed Ones decide to get rid of the the Elders. After the Elders reveal that they were hoping the Source would take Pearl so the Charmed Ones would have ultimately had to kill her for the greater good, whilst also stating that any child that Phoebe have or will continue to have with Cole will never be recognised by them as innocents who need protecting, Leo becomes the first Fallen Whitelighter, proclaiming that children are innocent and that the greater good needs to protect them, not abandon them. He reveals everything to the Charmed Ones, which enrages Phoebe, turning her into a Fury. With Cole Pearl's only parent for the time being, Bane and Prue suggest that they bring Pearl and Penelope to at the Manor whilst Cole looks for Phoebe and he reluctantly agrees. He finds Phoebe in the Turner Mausoleum. Extremely angry, she attacks Cole, but he is able to calm her down with her returning as the Phoebe he knows and loves. To everyone's happiness, they return home where the Charmed Ones decide that it’s time for The Elders to go down, once and for all. But during the battle Cole dies at the hands of the Elders, trying to protect his family from them. The Charmed Ones infect themselves with the Nexus, leading up to the the battle where the Elders reach their demise.

Final Villain: The Elders

I'll never understand why fans always want the Elders to end up being evil, just because the canon show messed them up. Not me. They'll always be wise and good in mine; ones who deserve to be the leaders of Good. But, of course, that's because I believe in black-and-white morality in fantasy shows no matter how unrealistic that is.

Now had you come up with another villain, this last one would've been my favorite since it's all about the Charmed Ones, even if it's just about Phoebe and Cole, outside of the girls going to live with Auntie Prue (love that!) and Leo a Fallen Whitelighter (not nuts on that...I'd hope he'd figure a way to save the Elders - say if it's only their leader, Odin (HATE HIM!) who is leading them in the wrong direction, with Leo ending up becoming the new Chief Leader since there's no one who's more good than Leo. But, as usual, that would be part of MY Dream Charmed: Chosen, not most fans'.).

So? What do you think? Anything need changing? And are you going to add more to and of these or perhaps turn this into a trilogy by showing what happens in the future with Pearl, Patricia and Penelope when that eclipse occurs? Now THAT I could find interesting! I always thought that much as I hate Chris, had we seen more of the future (say an entire arc or even an entire season), I might have felt differently...well, maybe if he was played by someone else.

I am glad you liked a few aspects of my next generation, knowing how you feel about the next generation I can understand why you are hesitant or flat-out disliking them, which in my opinion is okay as fans we aren't going to agree with everything but I love how you can respect my Dream Charmed + Destined.

I am hoping to show the future with Pearl, Patricia and Penelope when the eclipse occurs, I am still trying to figure out the details, hopefully you and everyone else will enjoy it, however I understand that everyone may not like it but hopefully everyone can enjoy it regardless. 

[BriannaWarren2.0]

After revising the final Villain, I have decided to change it, my new final Villain for Destined: The Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse. 

[forbuss]

Jan 3, 2022 19:34:51 GMT -5 BriannaWarren2.0 said:

This is just a summary of what each season would entail, I am still working on the finish product, I would just like to hear your thoughts on the rough draft of my version of Charmed before I finalise anything.


Season One

 
This is the season that we learn about the sisters destiny, what that entails and how it affects their lives whist trying to rebuild their already rocky relationship. 



Prue gets hired by the Buckland's, Rex is the third generation owner of the business meeting his wife Hannah at a meeting for warlocks, they fell in love and vowed to own the finer things in life, his grandfather collected magical items from Witches, Demons and Warlocks alike so that he could study them and later sell the item to elite cliental of the Auction House.

Final Villain: Rex and Hannah Buckland.

Season Two

 

Their relationship is on stable grounds, they have learnt and accepted their destiny, however now they learn about their ancestral roots and learn in the process that in a past life they were cousins, unfortunately Phoebe turned evil and had to be vanquished. 

The sisters after learning about their ancestry, they start to heavily focus on rebuilding the traditions that were lost throughout the family line, they also start thinking about the next generation and how they will raise them? What they need to do in order for them to be physically, mentally, emotionally and financially stable?

During the vanquish of The Buckland's they released the warlock who prosecuted their Ancestor Melinda Warren during the Salem Witch Trials, who makes it his mission to destroy the Charmed Ones, throughout the season, he releases warlocks onto the sisters, to weaken them before he finishes the job however he is vanquished and put back into the locket that Melinda trapped him in before her hanging. 

Final Villain: Matthew Tate.



Season Three

 The sisters are happily documenting their experiences as witches, they have been for the past year researching and putting into practice the traditions that where lost throughout their family history. Prue is waiting for Bane to finish his sentence in prison, she is in the process of buying Buckland and renaming it, Piper has quit working for Quake and is engaged to Leo and Phoebe is dating a lawyer by the name of Cole Turner as she is studying Psychology at college. 

However, we find out that Cole Turner, who Phoebe is currently in a relationship with is being processed by Balthazar, who was given to him by the Brotherhood Of The Thorn, to create a foothold in the mortal world whilst also being mercenaries for the Source, however unbeknownst to them, the Source will vanquish them as soon as they build a solid reputation. 

Final Villain: Brotherhood of the Thorn.



Season Four



 With Prue now owning Buckland, she is also renovating Bane’s dream house and will be moving in after construction is completed, she is just focused on making sure that Buckland’s now reopened as Prue Halliwell’s Auctions House reputation is in the clear.

Piper is opening up a Cafe near Prue’s work, she will be able to create a breakfast and lunch menu, she hires baristas and works closely with them to create a menu which will satisfy and impress her customers, something that she easily does. Leo and Piper buys the house next door to the Manor and after a few renovations they move in, during the last episode of the season.



Phoebe is still trying to find out where she is headed in her career with her now finishing schooling, she takes up a temp job at her former High School, aiming to make an impression on the students and to be someone she would have wanted whilst going through her rebellious stage in life, she ultimately gets the job as Baker’s High School psychologist, with the temp job being a trial. 

Phoebe and Cole have been in the process of rebuilding their relationship after the Brotherhood Of The Thorn situation, where Balthazor was stripped from him only leaving his mother’s powers: Shimmering, Energy Balls and Sensing, Cole is also opening up his Law Firm.



Final Villain: Not Sure Yet.


Season Five

 

With Piper moved out and Prue not far behind they all come to the decision that they will have family dinners at the Manor every Friday. 

The construction of Bane’s and Prue’s dream house is finally finished and she moves out. Prue has been able to gain a great reputation for her Auction House, Bane is released in the middle of the season and they start to build a life together. 

With Piper working at her Cafe, she is gaining a profit and building a stable clientele, she is being incredibly blessed with abundance. 



Phoebe and Cole are living in the Manor, with them both finding out that they are going to be parents, they are both incredibly happy and overwhelmed with bringing in new life to the world and to the Warren Bloodline. 
 
Phoebe and Cole bring their daughter Pearl Nicole Halliwell into the world, the child born is the Twice-Blessed Child, the exact child that the Source of All Evil as been waiting for (A child born from the greatest good and the greatest evil will have bring a child into the world when it seems like all hope is lost during an eclipse, to unite both sides to fight a common enemy). 

The child has the powers of Premonitions, Telekinesis, Shimmering and Energy Balls however with a dark ceremony (a demonic baptism when you reach 13) and a Wiccaning she will be able to gain so much more in the future. 

Prue and Piper are delighted to be aunts and are making sure that she is raised with a good moral compass. 

The Source recruits the Crone, an ancient motherly figure to demons to collect Pearl so that the Source can raise her to be the most destructive force that the world has ever seen, the Charmed Ones with Leo and Cole have to protect the next generation of Halliwell’s.

The season ends with the Crone being vanquished and Pearl receiving her Wiccaning by Grams.



Final Villain: The Crone 



Season Six



 With the Source struggling even more than normal to gain control of the underworld, he decides its in his best interest to have a meeting with the Triad, in order to kidnap Pearl. 

Meanwhile, Phoebe has been reading the entries of her ancestors from the Book Of Shadows to her daughter whilst on Maternity leave from Baker’s High, with her going back and fourth on going back to work after the ordeal with the Crone.

Cole suggests that Phoebe might want to write a book to help parents understand their rebellious children and how her experiences with being one may help parents see things from a different perspective, she starts writing her book: A Guide For Parents: Rebellious Teenagers and How To Help Them. 

Piper finds out she is pregnant with a daughter of her own, Leo and her start to prepare for their daughter’s arrival in the world. 

Prue and Bane are happy being the best aunt and uncle to their nieces with them vowing that they will be spoiling them.



Final Villain: The Triad. 



Season Seven

 

With his Council being vanquished by the Charmed Ones, the Source gets desperate and reckless, he comes to the conclusion that if you want something done right, you have to do it yourself. 

This season we find out that Phoebe is pregnant again with a daughter, after Piper gives birth to her daughter Patricia Melina Halliwell, Phoebe tells Prue that she is pregnant again but is afraid to tell Piper because she doesn’t want to steal her thunder, Prue consoles her and tells her she should tell Piper, which she does, and Piper is happy for both her and Cole.

Phoebe leaves her job at BHS and is signed with a publisher after the success of her first book. 

Pearl is successfully kidnapped by The Source with The Elders providing zero help stating that Pearl should have never been born, Leo becomes disfranchised by The Elders and tells Cole and Phoebe that The Elders aren’t going to help them with this one. 

Cole pissed off and fed up states that he wants to go to the underworld to find information concerning his daughter stating that he probably has favour that might come in handy, Phoebe warns him that he shouldn’t do that until they come up with a plan, Prue states that if he can go to the Underworld without being seen that he should, it might give them a clue of what they are up against. 

Cole goes into the Underworld with Leo a few steps behind him, making sure that he isn’t going against what he states, even though they trust him, they don’t trust the demons down there. Cole gets recon and goes to the sisters, she is only prepared to give them the information if they can protect her against the Source, which the Charmed Ones accept the offer, Kyra, who was supposed to be the next Seer doesn’t want to continue the demonic path and wants to help people.

The season ends with The Charmed Ones gaining a friend with Kyra and Pearl being home safe, then the arrival of Phoebe and Cole’s second daughter, Penelope Kyra Halliwell.

Final Villain: The Source. 



Season Eight



 With The Charmed Ones going against The Elders after their failure to help Phoebe’s daughter Pearl, Leo isn’t far behind after The Elders state that they would have wanted The Source to have taken Pearl so that the Charmed Ones would have ultimately had to kill her for the greater good, whilst also stating that any child that Phoebe have or will continue to have with Cole will never be recognised by them as innocents that need protecting, Leo becomes the first Fallen Whitelighter, proclaiming that children are innocent and that the greater good needs to protect them not abandon them. 

Leo tells the Charmed Ones everything that the Elders said about Phoebe’s children and that they will never protect them, which enrages Phoebe turning her into the Fury, with Cole having to be an only parent for the time being, Prue and Bane suggest that they have Pearl and Penelope at the Manor whilst Cole goes looking for Phoebe, he reluctantly agrees, after finding Phoebe at the Mausoleum and is extremely angry and attacks Cole but he is able to calm her down with her returning as the Phoebe he knows and loves, they return home to everyones happiness. 

The Charmed Ones decide that it’s time for The Elders to go down once and for all. 



This season is the final season that Cole is alive, he dies protecting his family, at the hands of The Elders. The Charmed Ones inflect themselves with the Nexus, this leads up to the battle in which the Elders reach their demise.

Final Villain: The Elders


Please ask me any questions or comments about my dream version of Charmed, however please keep in mind, as I have stated in the beginning of this post, that this is a rough draft and the final version will be better written and formatted. 

I absolutely LOVE this! What really stood out to me are the villains you chose. The Crone was the best villain in season five and probably one of my favorite villains in the show. They definitely should have kept her around longer as the actress was very interested and made some great choices while only having a 2 episode arc.

The elders as the main villain in season eight may just have been enough to save it. I think by the sisters overthrowing the elders it would have been a true way for them to move on with their lives - this would have made the epilogue in Forever Charmed way better.

Is there any chance that The Seer could remain the main villain of S4? It would have been cool if we got to see some cross over with the Crone and the Seer hatching a plan together, since they were both preoccupied with the Charmed ones children.

[BriannaWarren2.0]

Aug 2, 2022 11:33:11 GMT -5 forbuss said:

Jan 3, 2022 19:34:51 GMT -5 BriannaWarren2.0 said:

This is just a summary of what each season would entail, I am still working on the finish product, I would just like to hear your thoughts on the rough draft of my version of Charmed before I finalise anything.


Season One

 
This is the season that we learn about the sisters destiny, what that entails and how it affects their lives whist trying to rebuild their already rocky relationship. 



Prue gets hired by the Buckland's, Rex is the third generation owner of the business meeting his wife Hannah at a meeting for warlocks, they fell in love and vowed to own the finer things in life, his grandfather collected magical items from Witches, Demons and Warlocks alike so that he could study them and later sell the item to elite cliental of the Auction House.

Final Villain: Rex and Hannah Buckland.

Season Two

 

Their relationship is on stable grounds, they have learnt and accepted their destiny, however now they learn about their ancestral roots and learn in the process that in a past life they were cousins, unfortunately Phoebe turned evil and had to be vanquished. 

The sisters after learning about their ancestry, they start to heavily focus on rebuilding the traditions that were lost throughout the family line, they also start thinking about the next generation and how they will raise them? What they need to do in order for them to be physically, mentally, emotionally and financially stable?

During the vanquish of The Buckland's they released the warlock who prosecuted their Ancestor Melinda Warren during the Salem Witch Trials, who makes it his mission to destroy the Charmed Ones, throughout the season, he releases warlocks onto the sisters, to weaken them before he finishes the job however he is vanquished and put back into the locket that Melinda trapped him in before her hanging. 

Final Villain: Matthew Tate.



Season Three

 The sisters are happily documenting their experiences as witches, they have been for the past year researching and putting into practice the traditions that where lost throughout their family history. Prue is waiting for Bane to finish his sentence in prison, she is in the process of buying Buckland and renaming it, Piper has quit working for Quake and is engaged to Leo and Phoebe is dating a lawyer by the name of Cole Turner as she is studying Psychology at college. 

However, we find out that Cole Turner, who Phoebe is currently in a relationship with is being processed by Balthazar, who was given to him by the Brotherhood Of The Thorn, to create a foothold in the mortal world whilst also being mercenaries for the Source, however unbeknownst to them, the Source will vanquish them as soon as they build a solid reputation. 

Final Villain: Brotherhood of the Thorn.



Season Four



 With Prue now owning Buckland, she is also renovating Bane’s dream house and will be moving in after construction is completed, she is just focused on making sure that Buckland’s now reopened as Prue Halliwell’s Auctions House reputation is in the clear.

Piper is opening up a Cafe near Prue’s work, she will be able to create a breakfast and lunch menu, she hires baristas and works closely with them to create a menu which will satisfy and impress her customers, something that she easily does. Leo and Piper buys the house next door to the Manor and after a few renovations they move in, during the last episode of the season.



Phoebe is still trying to find out where she is headed in her career with her now finishing schooling, she takes up a temp job at her former High School, aiming to make an impression on the students and to be someone she would have wanted whilst going through her rebellious stage in life, she ultimately gets the job as Baker’s High School psychologist, with the temp job being a trial. 

Phoebe and Cole have been in the process of rebuilding their relationship after the Brotherhood Of The Thorn situation, where Balthazor was stripped from him only leaving his mother’s powers: Shimmering, Energy Balls and Sensing, Cole is also opening up his Law Firm.



Final Villain: Not Sure Yet.


Season Five

 

With Piper moved out and Prue not far behind they all come to the decision that they will have family dinners at the Manor every Friday. 

The construction of Bane’s and Prue’s dream house is finally finished and she moves out. Prue has been able to gain a great reputation for her Auction House, Bane is released in the middle of the season and they start to build a life together. 

With Piper working at her Cafe, she is gaining a profit and building a stable clientele, she is being incredibly blessed with abundance. 



Phoebe and Cole are living in the Manor, with them both finding out that they are going to be parents, they are both incredibly happy and overwhelmed with bringing in new life to the world and to the Warren Bloodline. 
 
Phoebe and Cole bring their daughter Pearl Nicole Halliwell into the world, the child born is the Twice-Blessed Child, the exact child that the Source of All Evil as been waiting for (A child born from the greatest good and the greatest evil will have bring a child into the world when it seems like all hope is lost during an eclipse, to unite both sides to fight a common enemy). 

The child has the powers of Premonitions, Telekinesis, Shimmering and Energy Balls however with a dark ceremony (a demonic baptism when you reach 13) and a Wiccaning she will be able to gain so much more in the future. 

Prue and Piper are delighted to be aunts and are making sure that she is raised with a good moral compass. 

The Source recruits the Crone, an ancient motherly figure to demons to collect Pearl so that the Source can raise her to be the most destructive force that the world has ever seen, the Charmed Ones with Leo and Cole have to protect the next generation of Halliwell’s.

The season ends with the Crone being vanquished and Pearl receiving her Wiccaning by Grams.



Final Villain: The Crone 



Season Six



 With the Source struggling even more than normal to gain control of the underworld, he decides its in his best interest to have a meeting with the Triad, in order to kidnap Pearl. 

Meanwhile, Phoebe has been reading the entries of her ancestors from the Book Of Shadows to her daughter whilst on Maternity leave from Baker’s High, with her going back and fourth on going back to work after the ordeal with the Crone.

Cole suggests that Phoebe might want to write a book to help parents understand their rebellious children and how her experiences with being one may help parents see things from a different perspective, she starts writing her book: A Guide For Parents: Rebellious Teenagers and How To Help Them. 

Piper finds out she is pregnant with a daughter of her own, Leo and her start to prepare for their daughter’s arrival in the world. 

Prue and Bane are happy being the best aunt and uncle to their nieces with them vowing that they will be spoiling them.



Final Villain: The Triad. 



Season Seven

 

With his Council being vanquished by the Charmed Ones, the Source gets desperate and reckless, he comes to the conclusion that if you want something done right, you have to do it yourself. 

This season we find out that Phoebe is pregnant again with a daughter, after Piper gives birth to her daughter Patricia Melina Halliwell, Phoebe tells Prue that she is pregnant again but is afraid to tell Piper because she doesn’t want to steal her thunder, Prue consoles her and tells her she should tell Piper, which she does, and Piper is happy for both her and Cole.

Phoebe leaves her job at BHS and is signed with a publisher after the success of her first book. 

Pearl is successfully kidnapped by The Source with The Elders providing zero help stating that Pearl should have never been born, Leo becomes disfranchised by The Elders and tells Cole and Phoebe that The Elders aren’t going to help them with this one. 

Cole pissed off and fed up states that he wants to go to the underworld to find information concerning his daughter stating that he probably has favour that might come in handy, Phoebe warns him that he shouldn’t do that until they come up with a plan, Prue states that if he can go to the Underworld without being seen that he should, it might give them a clue of what they are up against. 

Cole goes into the Underworld with Leo a few steps behind him, making sure that he isn’t going against what he states, even though they trust him, they don’t trust the demons down there. Cole gets recon and goes to the sisters, she is only prepared to give them the information if they can protect her against the Source, which the Charmed Ones accept the offer, Kyra, who was supposed to be the next Seer doesn’t want to continue the demonic path and wants to help people.

The season ends with The Charmed Ones gaining a friend with Kyra and Pearl being home safe, then the arrival of Phoebe and Cole’s second daughter, Penelope Kyra Halliwell.

Final Villain: The Source. 



Season Eight



 With The Charmed Ones going against The Elders after their failure to help Phoebe’s daughter Pearl, Leo isn’t far behind after The Elders state that they would have wanted The Source to have taken Pearl so that the Charmed Ones would have ultimately had to kill her for the greater good, whilst also stating that any child that Phoebe have or will continue to have with Cole will never be recognised by them as innocents that need protecting, Leo becomes the first Fallen Whitelighter, proclaiming that children are innocent and that the greater good needs to protect them not abandon them. 

Leo tells the Charmed Ones everything that the Elders said about Phoebe’s children and that they will never protect them, which enrages Phoebe turning her into the Fury, with Cole having to be an only parent for the time being, Prue and Bane suggest that they have Pearl and Penelope at the Manor whilst Cole goes looking for Phoebe, he reluctantly agrees, after finding Phoebe at the Mausoleum and is extremely angry and attacks Cole but he is able to calm her down with her returning as the Phoebe he knows and loves, they return home to everyones happiness. 

The Charmed Ones decide that it’s time for The Elders to go down once and for all. 



This season is the final season that Cole is alive, he dies protecting his family, at the hands of The Elders. The Charmed Ones inflect themselves with the Nexus, this leads up to the battle in which the Elders reach their demise.

Final Villain: The Elders


Please ask me any questions or comments about my dream version of Charmed, however please keep in mind, as I have stated in the beginning of this post, that this is a rough draft and the final version will be better written and formatted. 

I absolutely LOVE this! What really stood out to me are the villains you chose. The Crone was the best villain in season five and probably one of my favorite villains in the show. They definitely should have kept her around longer as the actress was very interested and made some great choices while only having a 2 episode arc.

The elders as the main villain in season eight may just have been enough to save it. I think by the sisters overthrowing the elders it would have been a true way for them to move on with their lives - this would have made the epilogue in Forever Charmed way better.

Is there any chance that The Seer could remain the main villain of S4? It would have been cool if we got to see some cross over with the Crone and the Seer hatching a plan together, since they were both preoccupied with the Charmed ones children.

Yes, I can make season four's villain the Seer, I love that idea!