father son issues-can leo and chris save deidre?

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a girl orbed into the attic.chris droped his pen and was about to send her flying out of the window
deidre: woah i wouldn't do that
deidre hand long black hair with purple eyes.which matched her purple skit and purple sleeve less shirt
chris: why not.
deidre: why are you staring at me. haven't you ever seen a witch/whitelighter before?
chris: every time i look in the miror.what's your name?
he stuck out his hand
deidre: deidre,so where are piper and leo?
she shook his hand
deidre: i came from the future............. like 12 years older than you.no mom,no dad,faimlyless.i heard from a friend that you were here so i decided that you could help me...
chris: with what?
chris: amy,wyatt and bianca's child has killed all the elders,again and now she's after me,since i'm the last of our kind
chris: how can i help?
deidre: can i just hang with you............
chris: well....
deidre: i'll put it this way,if you don't i'll tell them all more about the future.....heheheheh
chris: creepy evil laugh
piper comes up stairs holding wyatt.phoebe and paige trail behind her with leo in tears.
chris: why is leo crying?
piper: he sprayed peper in his eyes.
phoebe: who's that?
chris: she's my.............girl friend
deidre turns twards chris to give him a look but before he can say any thing he spins her around and draws her into a kiss.
paige: okay... any way chris can you heal leo?
chris folds up his hand in a "wait a minuet" way
phoebe: sheesh you can detach your self from her any time now
deidre: sorry

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deidre's hair wipped in the wind as her and chris walked through the park.on sunny days such as this one they would go to the park on their "dates" which was really an escuse to get out of the house and talk about future things.
chris: so how old are you
deidre: same age as you
chris which would be?
deidre: 22
chris: okay okay
deidre: have you been getting premenitions lately
chris: whaen you say premenitions .......do you mean small ones or
chris and deidre: huge revelations
chris smiled,they had been doing that alot
deidre felt a tear run down her cheek.she wasn't upset,or was she?chris leaned over to wipe the tear from her cheek but as he did this he fell into her arms and a huge premenition hits them
~~premenition~~
little deidre (age 7) runs down the steps of the halliwell manor
deidre: daddy!daddy! look waht i can do
daddy steps out from the shadows but his face is still hidden
daddy:deidre sweetie,that's nice but me and mommy have to go
deidre: where are you going?
daddy: don't worry,we'll be back soon.now come give daddy a hug.
deidre ran up and gave her father a hug.kinda like the way chris did.
end premenition
they both snap out of the trance as he looks into her eyes
chris: woah.......that was huge
deidre:maybe a little too huge..
she grabs his hands as she feels light headed and faints....

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chris orbs in
chris: leo,paige? any one?
he frantically puts his arms out as his hands start to glow but nothing happens.paige orbs in.
paige: what happened?
chris: we had this premenition together
paige: you have premenitions!?together?
chris: hello? my girlfriend is dying in my arms!
paige: leo
leo and piper orb down as he puts his hands out in a different way they begian to glow red as deidre's eyes flutter
she looks around the room frantically as chris bends down she backs against the wall
deidre:do i know you?
tell me what you think

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chris' jaw droped open when he heard her say that"snap outa it" chris thought to himself" i don't really love her or do i?"
a smile formed around deidfre's curved lips.
deidre: just joking
chris becomes angry
chris: you almost die and then when you finally came to,you pretended you had amneisa
deidre sencing his anger
piper: maybe we should leave you to alone.
piper grabed paige and walked down the steps,leo followed behind
paige from stairs) but i wanna listen too!!
leo: oh will you stop wining
deidre: was that a hint of worry in your voice?
chris looks around to see if paige is around
chris: will you stop evsdropping!!
paige: sorry
chris: i care for you deidre but...
deidre: don't worry.i feel the same way,i'm not going any where
they stare into each others eyes and then deidre breaks away
deidre: so,you wanna finish our date?
chris: this time lets have a real one
deidre grabs chris' hand and orbs out