Post by mcharmed21 on Jan 3, 2005 19:30:13 GMT -5
Author: angelfire78
A Surprise Visitor
Hi, this is my first fan fiction. I have been reading the stories on this board for some time and most of them are so good. This story won’t get out of my head, so I’m hoping writing it down helps. Please let me know what you think.
This is set after the Legend of Sleepy Halliwell. One change though, Phoebe guesses who Chris is, but she hasn’t asked him to confirm that the little boy in her premonition is him.
Prologue
Piper is alone in the manor, Phoebe is working late, and Paige is at Richard’s. Wyatt is at Darryl’s house for a sleepover. Piper is cleaning the house and comes across a picture of Leo, Wyatt, and her; she picks it up and looks at it longingly and tears roll down her cheeks. Leo orbs in behind her and says hi. Piper quickly wipes away her tears and turns around, “Hey, what’re you doing here?”
Leo is looking all around as if searching for someone, and he says,”I just had some time, thought I’d look in on Wyatt. Is he around?” You can tell Piper is a bit disappointed from the look in her face. “Actually, no. He’s over at Darryl’s.” “Oh. Mmmm Ok then I…” Leo looks directly at Piper for the first time. “Piper, were you crying?” “No, not really, well, ok maybe a little (she lifts the picture she’s holding), we were so happy and then… I still love you Leo, and I tried, I really tried to move on, but I can’t!” “I love you too Piper, you know I do!”<br>
They move closer together and kiss.
[Fade out]
***********
Chapter 1
They’ve seen everyone off after Wyatt’s birthday party. Piper’s watching Leo play with Wyatt. Wyatt’s giggling.
Piper: Wyatt really misses you, you know.
Leo: I miss him too. I can’t seem to let go, Piper and I’m putting everyone at risk by staying here. I should be Up There now.
Piper: You’ve just been looking out for all of us. You know Chris can’t heal yet and with so much demon fighting…<br>
A sound of something crashing in the kitchen and Paige can be heard screaming Phoebe’s name. Piper and Leo look toward the door as Paige brings Phoebe in and helps her sit.
Piper: See what I mean…<br>Paige (concerned): Phoebe, what happened?
Phoebe: I just had a premonition of all of us getting attacked.
Leo: Where? When?
Phoebe: Right here and I’m not sure when
Piper: I’d guess, right about now
Paige, Phoebe, Leo (look up surprised): Wha…<br>
They find they’re surrounded by 4 demons. Piper gestures to blow them up but nothing happens. Wyatt’s across the room in his playpen with his shield up but when Leo tries to orb across to get him, his powers don’t work.
Demon 1: Don’t try it, your powers won’t work. That’s been taken care of.
Paige: Piper, blow him up!
Piper (flicks her hand): Not workin’<br>Demon 2: Enough of this, let’s do it. Kill them all except her (pointing at Piper).
All 4 demons have fireballs in their hands and they throw it right at the Charmed Ones and Leo. Phoebe tries to jump up and levitate but she can’t. The fireballs come right at them and … go right through them. Everyone is gaping.
Demon 1: This is not supposed to be happening.
Demon 3: Yes, I only agreed to the attack when I was told their powers won’t work.
Paige: Guys, did you do that?
Demon 2: It’s not them, it can’t be. It must be him.
Piper: Ok, I’m getting tired of this, him who?!
Demon 4: Quick, find some other way to kill them. We only have a minute or two before he senses that we’re here.
Chapter 2
The girls and Leo are wondering what they can do to save themselves when suddenly the demons fall to the ground clutching their throats.
Chris (leaning against the doorway behind the Charmed Ones and Leo): Less than a minute actually.
Phoebe: Chris, what’s going on?
Chris: Don’t know, but I think we’re going to find out real soon. (Looking at the demons) Aren’t we?
Demon 2 (choking): Let us go.
Chris: I want to know who sent you. You wouldn’t have been able to make them powerless on your own.
The demons suddenly burst into flames and disappear, and a voice from the door says, “I did.” Chris turns around looking extremely surprised. The others are surprised too. Phoebe whispers, “Cole…”
Chapter 3
Cole walks into the room slowly, “Hi Chris,” then looking at all of them in turn, “Piper, Phoebe, Paige, Leo; quite a family gathering you have here.”<br>Paige: This can’t be real. We vanquished you.
Cole: Yes you did, in another dimension. You survived it, now why did you imagine I wouldn’t?
Phoebe: We went to your apartment…<br>Cole: Ah yes. You see, I didn’t want you to know I still existed. I didn’t, make that don’t, want to exist in your lives anymore. I just, well, let’s just say I took, or is that am taking? a long break from witches! Time travel is confusing.
Chris: Cole, what’re you doing here? And why are you sending demons to kill my…charges?
Paige: Wouldn’t be the first time he’s done that!
Leo: Chris, how do you know Cole? How do you know each other?
Piper: Yeah. Definitely interested in hearing that story.
Chris ignores all of them and is still looking at Cole. He looks stunned. “Cole?”<br>“I can’t let you do this anymore Chris. You really need to come home now.”<br>Chris (resigned now), “So he turned you too.”<br>Cole, “No, he can’t do that. He simply showed me what my life would be like if they were alive. They would never let …” Chris cuts him off and says, “I can’t believe that you would come back to make sure your life won’t be miserable when I’m doing my best to ensure that the whole of San Francisco isn’t.”<br>Phoebe: Oh, I can believe it.
Piper: This conversation is very fascinating, really! But if I don’t get a quick update on what’s happening here, something’s gonna …<br>Paige (whispering to Piper): Have you forgotten? We don’t have our powers!
Piper: Yeah, got that. So why did those fireballs go through us?
Chris is looking completely distracted. “Look, I’m sorry I can’t answer your questions right now but I need to talk to Cole.” Cole is looking at the charmed ones, “It went through you?” To Chris, “You used the spell? For all of them?” Leo (suspicious), “What spell?” “Yes, after Bianca I couldn’t take any chances.” Cole looks mad and a little upset, “You don’t know what that spell can do.” Chris looks somber, “I do know, but there was no choice. I have to protect them. That’s the only way.”
Phoebe: What is the only way?
Piper: OK, Chris, first off, you can’t have a private conversation with 4, make that 5, people around you. You have to tell us what’s going on. Second, how, no why, do you know my sister’s demon ex-husband in the future?
Paige: You’ve got to be kidding. This can’t be happening.
Cole: See, this is exactly what I’m talking about. Chris, why do you feel saving them is the only way? Maybe the only way is for you to come back and fight…and use all your powers!
Leo: What powers?
Chris (looks away), “I don’t know what he’s talking about. You’ve seen me use my powers…telekinesis, orbing…” Cole, “If you don’t want to discuss that, let’s discuss what you’ve accomplished since coming back. How have you helped them?” To Leo, “Has he trained you to fight?” “He hasn’t, the Valkyries did though!” Looking at both of them, “Why do I need training?” Cole, “You sent him to Valhalla?” Leo glares at Chris who’s looking everywhere and finally looking at Leo, “I didn’t send him anywhere.” (Obviously the denial doesn’t convince anyone.)
Chris is talking fast now to change the subject. “Look I am doing all I can here. I will be successful, I have to be; and then I’ll come back Cole. I promise.” “Then prove it. Prove to me that you have not become soft living here, with them.” “Soft? Chris? He has us chasing demons all the damn time.” “What do you want me to do?” “Fight me…and win!”
*****
Thank you for all the reviews. It encourages me to continue.
A Surprise Visitor
Hi, this is my first fan fiction. I have been reading the stories on this board for some time and most of them are so good. This story won’t get out of my head, so I’m hoping writing it down helps. Please let me know what you think.
This is set after the Legend of Sleepy Halliwell. One change though, Phoebe guesses who Chris is, but she hasn’t asked him to confirm that the little boy in her premonition is him.
Prologue
Piper is alone in the manor, Phoebe is working late, and Paige is at Richard’s. Wyatt is at Darryl’s house for a sleepover. Piper is cleaning the house and comes across a picture of Leo, Wyatt, and her; she picks it up and looks at it longingly and tears roll down her cheeks. Leo orbs in behind her and says hi. Piper quickly wipes away her tears and turns around, “Hey, what’re you doing here?”
Leo is looking all around as if searching for someone, and he says,”I just had some time, thought I’d look in on Wyatt. Is he around?” You can tell Piper is a bit disappointed from the look in her face. “Actually, no. He’s over at Darryl’s.” “Oh. Mmmm Ok then I…” Leo looks directly at Piper for the first time. “Piper, were you crying?” “No, not really, well, ok maybe a little (she lifts the picture she’s holding), we were so happy and then… I still love you Leo, and I tried, I really tried to move on, but I can’t!” “I love you too Piper, you know I do!”<br>
They move closer together and kiss.
[Fade out]
***********
Chapter 1
They’ve seen everyone off after Wyatt’s birthday party. Piper’s watching Leo play with Wyatt. Wyatt’s giggling.
Piper: Wyatt really misses you, you know.
Leo: I miss him too. I can’t seem to let go, Piper and I’m putting everyone at risk by staying here. I should be Up There now.
Piper: You’ve just been looking out for all of us. You know Chris can’t heal yet and with so much demon fighting…<br>
A sound of something crashing in the kitchen and Paige can be heard screaming Phoebe’s name. Piper and Leo look toward the door as Paige brings Phoebe in and helps her sit.
Piper: See what I mean…<br>Paige (concerned): Phoebe, what happened?
Phoebe: I just had a premonition of all of us getting attacked.
Leo: Where? When?
Phoebe: Right here and I’m not sure when
Piper: I’d guess, right about now
Paige, Phoebe, Leo (look up surprised): Wha…<br>
They find they’re surrounded by 4 demons. Piper gestures to blow them up but nothing happens. Wyatt’s across the room in his playpen with his shield up but when Leo tries to orb across to get him, his powers don’t work.
Demon 1: Don’t try it, your powers won’t work. That’s been taken care of.
Paige: Piper, blow him up!
Piper (flicks her hand): Not workin’<br>Demon 2: Enough of this, let’s do it. Kill them all except her (pointing at Piper).
All 4 demons have fireballs in their hands and they throw it right at the Charmed Ones and Leo. Phoebe tries to jump up and levitate but she can’t. The fireballs come right at them and … go right through them. Everyone is gaping.
Demon 1: This is not supposed to be happening.
Demon 3: Yes, I only agreed to the attack when I was told their powers won’t work.
Paige: Guys, did you do that?
Demon 2: It’s not them, it can’t be. It must be him.
Piper: Ok, I’m getting tired of this, him who?!
Demon 4: Quick, find some other way to kill them. We only have a minute or two before he senses that we’re here.
Chapter 2
The girls and Leo are wondering what they can do to save themselves when suddenly the demons fall to the ground clutching their throats.
Chris (leaning against the doorway behind the Charmed Ones and Leo): Less than a minute actually.
Phoebe: Chris, what’s going on?
Chris: Don’t know, but I think we’re going to find out real soon. (Looking at the demons) Aren’t we?
Demon 2 (choking): Let us go.
Chris: I want to know who sent you. You wouldn’t have been able to make them powerless on your own.
The demons suddenly burst into flames and disappear, and a voice from the door says, “I did.” Chris turns around looking extremely surprised. The others are surprised too. Phoebe whispers, “Cole…”
Chapter 3
Cole walks into the room slowly, “Hi Chris,” then looking at all of them in turn, “Piper, Phoebe, Paige, Leo; quite a family gathering you have here.”<br>Paige: This can’t be real. We vanquished you.
Cole: Yes you did, in another dimension. You survived it, now why did you imagine I wouldn’t?
Phoebe: We went to your apartment…<br>Cole: Ah yes. You see, I didn’t want you to know I still existed. I didn’t, make that don’t, want to exist in your lives anymore. I just, well, let’s just say I took, or is that am taking? a long break from witches! Time travel is confusing.
Chris: Cole, what’re you doing here? And why are you sending demons to kill my…charges?
Paige: Wouldn’t be the first time he’s done that!
Leo: Chris, how do you know Cole? How do you know each other?
Piper: Yeah. Definitely interested in hearing that story.
Chris ignores all of them and is still looking at Cole. He looks stunned. “Cole?”<br>“I can’t let you do this anymore Chris. You really need to come home now.”<br>Chris (resigned now), “So he turned you too.”<br>Cole, “No, he can’t do that. He simply showed me what my life would be like if they were alive. They would never let …” Chris cuts him off and says, “I can’t believe that you would come back to make sure your life won’t be miserable when I’m doing my best to ensure that the whole of San Francisco isn’t.”<br>Phoebe: Oh, I can believe it.
Piper: This conversation is very fascinating, really! But if I don’t get a quick update on what’s happening here, something’s gonna …<br>Paige (whispering to Piper): Have you forgotten? We don’t have our powers!
Piper: Yeah, got that. So why did those fireballs go through us?
Chris is looking completely distracted. “Look, I’m sorry I can’t answer your questions right now but I need to talk to Cole.” Cole is looking at the charmed ones, “It went through you?” To Chris, “You used the spell? For all of them?” Leo (suspicious), “What spell?” “Yes, after Bianca I couldn’t take any chances.” Cole looks mad and a little upset, “You don’t know what that spell can do.” Chris looks somber, “I do know, but there was no choice. I have to protect them. That’s the only way.”
Phoebe: What is the only way?
Piper: OK, Chris, first off, you can’t have a private conversation with 4, make that 5, people around you. You have to tell us what’s going on. Second, how, no why, do you know my sister’s demon ex-husband in the future?
Paige: You’ve got to be kidding. This can’t be happening.
Cole: See, this is exactly what I’m talking about. Chris, why do you feel saving them is the only way? Maybe the only way is for you to come back and fight…and use all your powers!
Leo: What powers?
Chris (looks away), “I don’t know what he’s talking about. You’ve seen me use my powers…telekinesis, orbing…” Cole, “If you don’t want to discuss that, let’s discuss what you’ve accomplished since coming back. How have you helped them?” To Leo, “Has he trained you to fight?” “He hasn’t, the Valkyries did though!” Looking at both of them, “Why do I need training?” Cole, “You sent him to Valhalla?” Leo glares at Chris who’s looking everywhere and finally looking at Leo, “I didn’t send him anywhere.” (Obviously the denial doesn’t convince anyone.)
Chris is talking fast now to change the subject. “Look I am doing all I can here. I will be successful, I have to be; and then I’ll come back Cole. I promise.” “Then prove it. Prove to me that you have not become soft living here, with them.” “Soft? Chris? He has us chasing demons all the damn time.” “What do you want me to do?” “Fight me…and win!”
*****
Thank you for all the reviews. It encourages me to continue.