Generation X~Ch 7,8,9,& 10 up 1 more review needed

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Author: CharmedPiper23

This story dosnt have anythign to do with Charmed but i have thought of so many things for it and so many plot twists and drama that i think you'll all love it. If i have my way this will be like watching a tv show but you'll br reading it instead. Im working on having an opening sequence like all shows and on having music but im not sure the music thing is possible. For right now ill just tell you a little about the story and the Characters.


The story is about a man named Shaun Matthews who owns a billion dollar company. He has been working on a project that will alter peoples DNa giving them super power. Everythign he does has been insired by the X-men. After a a big disaster he has completed the process with Five people. Their identities have been kept a secret from the government for the safety of the (mutants) only Shaun himself knows their true identities. Somehow someone has gotten hold of this pocess and has copied it creating a group of his own superpowered people. The problem is unlike Shaun who did this to help protect the world he's made them to harm it.

Here is a profile of the people.
Name: Aaron Fox*Cyclops
City of Birth: Miami, Florida
Age: 28
Born: April 18, 1975
Eyes: Brown
*When using powers glowing red
Hair: Dirty Blonde/Brown
Height: 6’2”<br>Weight: 185Lbs.
Occupation:
*Current: unknown
*Past: Secret Service
Build: Large
Character: Based on Cyclops
Qualifications: Known for combat abilities
Excellent leadership abilities
Powers: Body absorbs solar energy from the sun and converts it into Concussive beams shot from the eyes
Power changes: He does not need to hide his eyes behind a ruby quartz visor. He is able to control the beams so as to fire them at will.

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Paige Wonders *Feral*
Hair: Blonde
City of Birth: New York City, New York
Age: 25
Born: August 30, 1978
Eyes: Brown
*Yellow cat eyes when using powers
Height: 5’6”<br>Weight: 130 Lbs.
Occupation:
*Current: unknown
*Past: Bartender
Build: Medium
Character: Based on Wolverine
Qualifications: Highly skilled in art of combat and gymnastics
Known for big temper and frequent fights
Powers: Cat like abilities including super strength, speed, agility, sight, smell, and hearing
Power changes: doesn’t have a super healing ability, and doesn’t have adamantium claws. Grew more feral and catlike abilites instead of healing but not having adamantium claws was expected. Her being a female not a male my be a factor.

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Nmae: Clare Mylantra *Storm*
City of Birth: St Louis, Missouri
Age: 26
Born: August 14, 1977
Eyes: Brown
*When using powers white
Hair: White
Height: 5’7”<br>Weight: 127 Lbs.
Occupation:
*Current: Unknown
*Past: Personal trainer
Build: Medium
Character: Based on Storm
Qualifications:
*Known to be able to keep her temper down and to be very calm and siren
*Known to have excellent combat abilities
Powers: To control the wind
Power Changes: Storm can only control the wind her Power over lighting, snow, water and mists are yet to be seen.

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Name: Danny Sanders *Hazard*
City of Birth: Las Angeles
Age: 24
Born: December 18, 1979
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Dirty Blonde
Height: 5’11”<br>Weight: 140 Lbs
Occupation:
*Current: Unknown
*Past: Student
Build: Large
Based on Iceman
Qualifications:
* Is known to have a calm but builds up his frustrations till he explodes.
Powers: power to create ice
Power Changes: does not seem to have enough control to turn his body into ice

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Name: Erik Kemerich *Nightcrawler*
City of Birth: Berlin, Germany
*moved to Boston when he was 5
Age: 24
Born: December 18, 1979
Eyes: brown
Hair: Dark Brown
Height: 5’11”<br>Weight: 140 Lbs
Occupation:
*Current:unknown
*Past: Acrabat in the circus
Build: Medium
Character: Based on INightcrawler
Qualifications:
*is also an acrabat and German
*is very religious
Powers: power to teleport, also seemsto have his acrabatic skills improved
Power Changes: He dosn't seem to have the power to stick to walls and does not look like Nightcrawler he has no blue skin or a tail.

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Name: Shaun Matthews
City of Birth: Miami
Age: 30
Born: February 23, 1974
Eyes: Hazal
Hair: Brown
Height: 5’10”<br>Weight: 175 Lbs
Occupation: CEO of Tech. Enterprises

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*******BAD GUYS*******

Name: Magneto
All things unknown except for powers
Powers: control of metal possiblely more powers

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Name: Mystique
All things unknown except powers
Note: we may never discover any of her real information her power of trasforming will make it almost immposible.
Powers: transformation

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Name: Sabertooth
All things unknown except powers
Powers: super strength and improved senses, dosnt seem to have the long claws and teeth or the more catlike look like in the comics

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Name:WhiteQueen
Information unknown except powers
Powers: shot beams from her forehead that can make people forget thigns or knock them unconcious.

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Name: Pyro
INformation unknow except many thats he has shown signs of being a slight Pyromaniac and a little crazy
Powers: to control fire.

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~The year is 2001 in an island of the coast of San Diego. There’s is an experiment occurring that can change the world. The experiment is run by A young Genius Shaun Mathews, who is only 27 years old.
*It’s Shaun and four other people dressed in Military uniforms. They are in a room with windows facing a large circular room below them.*
Shaun: Then once that is done we insert the thermal nuclients to stabilize the molecules.
General: this is all very interesting but when do we get to see it done.
Shaun: have a little patience General this is a highly delicate project which requires procession and patience.
General: yes, yes we understand this but we are on a time schedule.
Shaun: it’ll me just another moment. Just to fill you in on one last piece of information. The person will be receiving the power of Magnetism. Magnetism is part of everything including our bodies plus basically everything in the world so it will be the easiest power to create within someone.
General: sounds reasonable to me.
*in the room below them*
Lab assistant: Dr. Bäumer all is ready for the procedure.
Dr. Bäumer: K let me just check it all out. What is this? What is this?
Lab assistant: What Sir.
Dr. Bäumer: You don’t have enough power added to the Molecular Evolution Grid. The results wont be the same.
Lab assistant: but sir I was told only to apply that much power nonsense I know what im doing
~he triples the power of the Molecular Evolution Grid. Then Shaun catches sight of what he was doing.
Dr. Bäumer: there now we are ready to start. Start the machine.
Shaun: *yelling through the glass* No don’t be a fool David that’s too much power.
David(Dr. Bäumer): be quiet Shaun I know what I’m doing, I’ll prove to you and everyone else that I am truly the smarter one.
Shaun: David noooo!!!
~ The machine starts up. It like a ring and it has four poles sticking out of it pointing to the middle. The Pole’s start to shoot lightning they contact each other in the middle of the ring. You can tell something is wrong and it looks like its overloading then a red lights start going off and a voice comes up and says.
Speaker voice: Warning, Warning Core Melt down in 10 minutes all employees most evacuate.
~ the ring from the pressure of the power applied to it crashes onto the ground and tuck right in the middle of it is David screaming his lungs out. Then as a result of the meltdown that whole room is looked up tight including the windows that Shaun is watching from.
Shaun: David!!! David!!!! DAVIDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!
~the windows are completely closed with metal.
General: come on with have to get out of here.
Shaun: right lets go
~he leads them down the hall way to the elevator
*mind u the red light is still on with the Warning still going through the speakers but now they have only 8 minutes*
they exit the elevator and there are men in white coats everywhere. They enter a type of white subway car but smaller. It takes them out of the building and off the island just as the building explodes. Later on they are going through the ditch that was once the building. A policeman comes over to Shaun.
Policeman: I’m sorry sir but it looks like no one survived nothing at all made it through the blast what ever it was, was a big blast.
Shaun: thanks officer.

ooc: here is the long awaited sig by the way i wanted to put music somehow but not possible so if you have kaza or i tunes or w/e look for harder to breathe by Maroon 5 thats liek the themes song for the show lol

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Chapter 2

~all you see is ocean then the camera starts like rushing through the water and you start to enter a city as you travel through a river seeing the Lincoln Memorial. Then letters are typed at the bottom. *2010 three years later* Then he starts speeding through the street of Washington D.C goes around the capital takes a look at the White House then you see the top of the Pentagon It rushes in and nest thing you see is white then you hear the ring of an elevator and the doors open to reveal a very new high Tec. Looking hallway.
Soldier: this way sir
~you see Shaun walk out of the elevator
Shaun: thanks
~he walks down the hallway there is a big glass door in front of him that opens automatically. Inside is a huge computer room with a huge screen. Below them are like 20 guys on computers.
General: hello
Shaun: Hello again General Hammen
Hammen: so what do you have to show us this time.
Shaun: everything. The experiment has finally been preformed on all of them and it has been successful on all of them. We used the Characters Cyclops, Storm, Wolverine, Iceman, and Nightcrawler.
Hammen: And what were the results.
Shaun: Well we did try to regulate a few things. An example was that we wanted Cyclops to be able to control his powers and we were successful in doing this we were also successful in stopping Nightcrawler from growing a tail and having blue skin. We also ad some things not happen. Storm only has the power to control the wind no electricity no rain nothing. Iceman also cant turn his body into ice and Nightcrawler doesn’t have the ability to stick to walls but that didn’t surprise us.

Also the person selected for wolverine who by the way is a girl hasn’t gained the ability to heal. She also does not have adamantium claws but that never truly was his power. She does have very keen senses strength she is more like a feral.
Hammen: interesting. So who are these men and women.
Shaun: nice try general but part of our deal was that these peoples identities would be kept secret and that still stands.
Hammen: Fine I understand but we also have something to tell you. Recently in the Europe area we have been getting reports of a man who can rip open a metal safe door without even touching it. Sounds Familiar.
Shaun: Well that was the objective for the first experiment three years ago but we were told no one survived that so its impossible.
General: well maybe someone did cause these show signs of control over metal and who ever it is, is smart they managed to keep this information from us for almost a year now. We have been on it now and have received a report that he may be coming here to the untied States. We will keep our eyes open but you may be called on soon.
Shaun: we’ll be waiting for the call until then goodbye.
Hammen: Goodbye

*******Later in the outskirts of New York city you see a car going through a long drive way it zooms out to show you an estate with like 1000 acres of land on it the it zooms up to a beautiful house (like the one In the picture of the Sig) then u see Shaun get out of the car and enter the house. He goes to a wall and presses a button the wall opens up and he steps inside its an elevator. He goes down two stories. The enters a control room for the Danger room

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Chapter 3 The Danger Room

~Shaun was in a round room with Window all around him. There were computers all around him too. He goes up to one of the windows and looks down. Below him is a humungous round room. It was completely silver. In the room were five people but the room wasn’t a normal room it was very special and very dangerous.

Aaron *Cyclops* was walking across the room they had just started another session of training. He was use to this by now for he had trained using these sessions for weeks now. He remembered his first time stepping into the room how he was scared silly. But now he stood in the same room fearless of what was too come. All of a sudden a panel on the side of the room disappeared and out game a huge gun that fired on Aaron he quickly tuned around and used his eye blasts to cancel out the laser beams then destroy the weapon.

At the same time a huge round machine came up from the ground large claws came out and striked where Paige *Feral* stood just a moment ago. With her amazing senses and quick moves she jumped out of the way. Danny *hazard* went to help her but a wall came up in front of him then the floor sank into the ground and a hole opened in the wall and released a huge Metal ball that chased him a round what was like a ring.
Clare *Storm* had used her power over to wind to fly up into the air when a robot came out of the ground and tried to attack her she used her power over the wind to rise it into the air and let it fall onto the ground breaking. She saw Danny was in trouble so she used the wind to slow down the ball. Taking his chance Danny used his power of ice to create an ice bridge which he used to get back onto the main level.~

Danny: Thanks Clare.
Clare: No problem
Paige: Aaron a little help here

~feral jumped off the machine and pounced on a robot that was right behind him while Cyclops used his eyes beams to destroy the machines with the claws. Bamf, Bamf, Bamf, Bamf all of a sudden you see two robots fall to the floor and break apart. Bamf you see Erik *Nightcrawler* standing next to Aaron. ~

Aaron: good job. Paige, Erik take care of the robots me, Danny, and Clare will take care of the bigger machines.

~Danny turned around and froze another Laser cannon that had come out from the wall, it shattered into pieces. Then he formed pointy ice bergs that he threw at a machine that had come out from the ground that swung around five maces, destroying it. Storm formed a little tornado which destroyed two machines that had come out from the roof that fired electrified ropes.

Feral jumped behind a robot and round kicked him sending it flying into the wall and shattering. She jumped dodging a laser it had fired at her she ran along the wall then pushed off it doing a spinning kick. Nightcrawler teleported behind a robot grabbed it then teleported it to the top of the room let it go making it crash on the floor.

Before he could teleport out the electric ropes caught him but Cyclops cut him lose with his laser eyes and he teleported back to the floor grabbing two robots behind Aaron and sending them flying backwards with a kick.. Suddenly all the robots machines guns everything just stopped then went away. Then you hear over the loud speaker.

Shaun: great job guys why don’t we meet in the War room. See you there.

~they exit the danger room and take an elevator to the main floor. The ngo through a door and sit down a circular table.

Aaron: hey what’s up Boss

occ: I hope I’m not confusing u by switching between their nicknames and their real names I’m just trying to get you use to what nickname each character has tell me if you have problems

to be continued

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Chapter 4 The War Room

~they are all seated on a round table. The room had silver walls like the whole underground base. On the roof above the table there is a machine and the seat where Shaun is sitting seems to have the controls to this machine.
Shaun: hey everyone I just came back from my meeting at the pentagon.
Paige: Oh fun
Aaron: what they say.
Shaun: well he’s still mad he cant find out who you are.
Erik: surprise, surprise.
Shaun: but he also had some information for us.
Clare: will we finally be seeing some real action
Shaun: you might.
~he presses a button on the council in front of him the machine on the roof above the table started to glow all of a sudden there was a 3-D picture of a caped man, it was a hologram.
Shaun: well this man has been causing trouble in Europe but not normal trouble. He’s pulled a metal safe door from its hinges with out even touching it.
Danny: how is that possible he would have to have powers like us.
Shaun: well a while back when we first tried the experiment we used the power of magnetism. The experiment was well a failure it caused a huge explosion no one exposed to the machines survived or at least we thought no one had. We also believe he has copied the procedure and used it to make others like him. Very little is known about them but they are believed to be heading here.
Erik: how convenient
~the image changes to a costume then to another and continues till its shown five different costumes then repeats the process. These are your costumes now follow me and you’ll suit up.
Clare: ohh sounds cool.
Paige: cant wait
~they leave the room and enter the main hall way again
Shaun: the women’s dressing room is to the left of the elevator and the men’s is the door to the right of the elevator. The costumes have your names on it.
Danny: got it

*Shaun waits for a bit and then they come back out*
Cyclops was wearing a visor for his eyes.
Cyclops: K I don’t get this if I don’t need the visor to control my power why am I wearing it.
Shaun: well this guy obviously knows about the x-men which is where all you characters are based from if he thinks you need the visor all it can do is help you.
Cyclops: k guess it makes sense
Shaun: what you all think
Clare: neat
Feral: cool like the trench coat
Aaron: not bad
Danny: cool
Nightcrawler: very comfortable.
Shaun: alright then. Follow me let me show you the jet.
Aaron: the Jet???
Danny: oh man this is awesome we get a jet!!!!
Feral: awesome

To be continued
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Ch 5 Joy ride

~you see the door open and light shine into the hanger then the lights in the hanger slowly start to turn on and the camera starts to scan the bottom of the plane first the it starts to give you the view from the top.
Aaron: wow impressive.
Clare: I’ve never seen anything so beautiful not even the military has something like this at least not to my knowledge.
Erik: amazing
~teleports on top of the plane then around it then inside then back.
Erik: its incredible not to mention Beautiful inside and out.
Danny: where did you get the money to build this.
Shaun: I own a billion dollar company that give you a hint
Danny: well yah but still its amazing.
Shaun: well lets take a look inside
~the ramp is already down it is below the plane and comes down from the floor of the plane. They step inside. You see a lot of fold down chairs and then a big room with 8 beautiful big sliver chair with a bunch of councils everywhere and then in the very front two seats fro the pilot and co pilot.
Shaun: Aaron I know you know how to fly a plane this one is very different from anything you’ve flown.
Aaron: yes I can recognize must things except this plane also has vertical thrust!!
Shaun: yes it does but the Vertical Hanger door hasn’t been finished yet so you’ll be taking off horizontally for now. Just follow the path ahead of you. Make sure to keep a steady and fast speed cause you’ll be flying out of the hanger door not lifting off. Don’t worry about getting in either we have magnets on the hanger door and runway to help you keep it strait.
Clare: who’s going to be the co-pilot
Shaun: funny you ask because its you.
Clare: but I don’t know how to fly a plane like this.
Shaun: maybe not like this but you’ve had training in it. Danny you are in charge of this council here it’s the only council left to control . From here you can control the defense systems and keep a watch on radar engine stability and damage of the ship. Your mainly a back up for the cockpit tough.
Shaun: ready fro a test drive
Aaron: now
Shaun: what time can be better.
Aaron: I guess. K everyone buckle up.
~e presses a couple of bottom and you see all the lights turn on then he presses a couple more buttons and you hear the engine start up.
Aaron: k engines started prepare for take off.
~he moves up the handle which increase the speed of the plane moving it forward faster and faster till the lights of the tunnel are flying by.
Shaun: press the red button at the top it will open the hanger
~he does and then you see a look from the outside. There’s a water fall that crashes down into the ocean. All of a sudden a huge rock pops out from the water fall making the water separate it lifts up revealing a metal door that opens up and the jet flies out of it.
Aaron: we are outside, now lifting the wheels.
~another view from outside you see the wheels lift up and then hide inside the plane.
Aaron: wheels up all systems stable.
Shaun: told you, you would be fine
Aaron: it’s a big plane but easily controlled.
Shaun: well why don’t you have some fun with it see what it can do.
Aaron: sounds good to me.
~He raises the speed then lowers the planes closer to the water making it fly up behind the plane because of the engines. You see a far away view of the plane and you see water flying in the air making a wake from the plane. Then you see getting closer and closer till its right in front of you and it passes you. Then your back inside.
Clare: its amazing
Shaun: Thanks care to try the weapon system.
Aaron: sure
~presses a few buttons. The you outside the plane again at the bottom. You see a part of the bottom move and a missile lower. Then your inside the plane again and a red screen shows up you see a targeting sign.
Aaron: fire away
~he shoots the missile and you see it fly away from the ship and then explode on impact of the water.
Aaron: k last step then well turn back vertical landing and take off.
Paige: but where can we do it all there is, is water
Erik: (smiles) the plane can float cant it.
Shaun: sure can
Danny: you really are amazing
Aaron: aright then. Slowing down speed tuning on vertical engines. Horizontal engines off. Creating decent. Turning engines off…. NOW!
~there’s a small bump.
Aaron: landing was successful.
Shaun: k now try the take off.
Aaron: got yeah. Vertical engines on full power.
~you hear the engines turn on again then you see the ship take off.
Aaron: turning on horizontal engines and turning vertical engines off. K done. Everything was successful. No returning home.
Paige: you really are incredible Shaun I mean this the house the base everything its amassing.
Shaun: well thanks
Aaron: reaching the base now.
Shaun: k you know what to do.
Aaron: opening bay doors.
~you see the same thing as before a huge rock pops out from the water fall making the water separate it lifts up revealing a metal door that opens up.
Aaron: wow its like the jet has taking control of it self.
Shaun: that the magnetic pull
~you see the plane fly in and next thing they are in the hanger and outside of the plane. Ring, ring, ring, ring~
Shaun: excuse me
~grabs his cell pone mumbles some stuff then closes the cell phone.
Shaun: got to go to work see you guys later
Erik: k later
Everyone: see yah

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Ch 6 Just Relax

*sorry I haven’t posted in a while but I’ve been busy with school.

~Shaun leaves and goes back to work while the rest of them just go to the first floor of the manor and relax.
Danny: I called the main TV
Paige: not if I can get there first
~they run to the family room and Paige gets there first
Paige: ha I win maybe next time you should get super speed powers rather then ice powers.
Danny: ahh shut up. Fine we can watch TV but you better not pick some fashion channel or home décor or something like that.
Paige: well I was thing about watching the Heat and Nicks game today but ill watch the home décor channel just for you.
Danny: What!!! I completely forgot about the game. Give me that remote
~jumps at her but she easily doges it
Paige: you want it you’ll need to get it.
Danny: no problem
Aaron: shut up you two just watch the game you both want to see it
Paige: ahh come on Aaron we were just having fun
Danny: yeah just some fun
~surprises Paige and grabs the remote
Danny: hah got it
Paige: what ever just turn it on to the game
Aaron: I’m going to make a sandwich any one want
Danny: oh ,oh me, me
Paige: me too, me too Pleaseeee
Clare: ill help you out there Aaron the kids need a lot of attention.
Danny: oh very funny
Paige: Mommy, Daddy if I eat all my food can I have desert Pleaseeee.
~Starts laughing
Danny: oh shut up
~They all laugh
Aaron: Hey where’s Erik
Clare: that’s a good question I haven’t seen him since we got back up to the mansion
Aaron: strange
Danny: not really ever since we got here he’s been well quiet and alienated kind of weird if you ask me
Paige: oh shut up he’s probably just not use to being around a lot of people. Oh the games is back on.
Aaron: ill go find him Clare can you finish the sandwich.
Clare: yeah sure no problem
~Aaron leaves and goes up the stairs then goes down a hall and knocks on the door
Erik: come in
~Aaron opens the door
Aaron: why are you here, why don’t you join us downstairs
~you zoom in on a rosary he is praying
Erik: Thank you but no thanks I’m quite fine here
Aaron: well when your finished oh praying the rosary will you join us
Erik: oh well yes I guess. I’m sorry if I may seem distant but I’m use to be by myself.
Aaron: no problem we figured its funny how you do remind me of Nightcrawler.
Erik: well I think that was the purpose. You know to find people that were very alike to the characters in the comics to form a more compatible match.
Aaron: yes I guess I am like Cyclops hardworking and very strict.
Erik: yes I guess you are. Well I had just finished the rosary, so let us go
Aaron: k
~they leave the room and come down the stairs and into the family room Clare passes them sandwiches.
Clare: hey Erik I made you a made you a sandwich too.
Erik: thank you very much. So who is winning the game.
Danny: the nicks by 20 points they got this game in the bag
Paige: but its only the first quarter the heat can easily come back you never know who could win.
Erik: I think the heat will I would place money on them
Danny: yeah well I would bet against you. How much you thinking
Erik: oh I’m sorry I was not being literal I don’t bet.
Danny: you don’t bet why
Erik: it is against my religion
Danny: yeah, yeah what ever the time outs over anyways.
~ all of a sudden the channel switches and an alarm sounds plus red lights flash every where. The new channel is a news report about Tech. Enterprises being held hostage
Aaron: well I think I get it now. Hurray suit up and meet at the plane we take off in 5 min.
~next thing you see is the waterfall with the rock coming up separating the water then the hanger door opening and the Jet flying out.

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Ch 7 Tech. Enterprises

***Aaron’s perspective***

The plane slowly descends down from the sky. The long vertical pool swirls from the wind generated from the wind of the plane.
The plane extends four legs helping land the plane over the pool.
*Camera slowly moves upwards*
In front of us was Tech. enterprises building. I was know as one of the most beautiful building in New York and I could see why. It was a tall building about 80 floors high. The building had one main tower made entirely of glass but it twirled and had curves distinguishing it from any other we had ever seen. Then there were two other smaller towers both made of glass and both with the same unique curves and style but these were smaller and were about only 50 stories tall. The bottom of the building was made of the more usual concrete walls but it has beautiful pre-cast columns and statues plus all the way at the top of the building water flowed down the 80 stories then entered a unique waterfall type structure built into the concrete walls which emptied into the long vertical pool behind us. In fact the whole compound for the buildings had a lot of land just for trees statues a little park some pools, lakes, rivers, and waterfalls.
“Never new how well off Shaun was I mean even his office building is amazing” yeah your right Aaron said Paige I’ve never seen anything like it before either. “Yeah but we have another problem Aaron the entire buildings locked tight and Aaron and a bunch of other people are inside” said Clare
“No problem I said’ I concentrated hard and then opened my visor a beam of power shot out and hit the iron door blocking our entrance forcing it to fly open. “ Okay the path is clear let’s go.”<br> We slowly entered the building. As far as we could see the big long lobby was clear of any possible threats but there were plenty of hostages. “Feral, Nightcrawler, and Hazard you get the hostages out of here meanwhile Storm and me will go get Shaun.” Nightcrawler went to get one of the hostages free when he removed the tape covering her mouth she screamed “above you.” I looked up and saw something or someone fall from the roof I tried to hit him with one of my beams but I missed. He landed on the floor in front of Feral and grabbed her throat “Hello pretty lady the names Sabertooth you’ll do well to remember it.”
He threw her across the room and at the same time a Women popped out from behind the front desk. A yellow glowing orb appeared on her forehead suddenly it flew across the room hitting Erik and sending him flying across the room as well but he didn’t get up. “ERIK!” “He’ll be fine for now at least” the women was dressed in white boots with a mini white skirt and a white tank top not to mention a white coat with fur for the collar.
“You @#%$” I yelled at the same time a white cloud came into view the women ducked and it hit the desk behind her turning it into ice. “ You missed” she said “ I wont miss again I promise you that” Danny replied back.
“ Aaron watch out,” Clare cried. I turned around to see the man who called himself Sabertooth preparing to swing a punch at me. I was about to hit him with one of my energy blasts when Feral got up. She ran towards the man then jumped into the air and twirled her body in midair hitting him in the face with one foot and then hitting him in the stomach with another making him fly across the room.
“ Cyclops, Storm go we can take care of them,” “ okay good luck” I replied back then grabbed Clare’s hand and we ran towards the elevator.
We reached a big metal door that was there to block any people from entering the business rooms without permission. “ Stand back” I said then opened my visor and blew up the door. “Lets go” storm said to me.



Ch 8 The 80th floor

***Aaron’s perspective***

We entered the elevator and pushed the button for the top floor which was where Shaun’s office was and where he was must likely being held hostage. The elevator stopped at the 80th floor and we exited it. In front of us was two oak doors “that has to be the office let me take care of.” she cut me off “Allow me to take care of this.” Her eyes turned white and a wind flew through the hall forcing the doors open.
Storm and me barged into the room. Inside was Shaun and a man dressed somewhat as magneto from the comic but not as stupid. However I couldn’t see his face it was hidden from his mask no surprise there. On the wall beside him was Shaun he was pined to the wall by metal beams that were crushed into the wall.
I immediately opened my visor and sent an energy beam his way but he created some type of force field stopping my beam from hitting him. He must have created a magnetic field and used it as a shield. Then he sent a metal trashcan across the room making me trip and fall down on the floor.
Storm was about to try her luck with him when I saw a small pedestal behind her start to change color and grow bigger until I realized it was actually I women. She had red hair was about 5”8 which was about storms height and she seemed pretty fit. “Storm behind you.”<br>Storm ducked just in time to dodge the women’s two kicks. She had jumped and in midair tried to double kick her in the face. He could only figure her name was Mystique just like the other characters from the comics. Mystique tried to kick her again but Storm blocked her kick with her hand then kicked tried to kick her but she did a back flip avoiding the attack.
As this fight was going on I got up and tried to hit him again but her just created his shield again. This time I didn’t try to break the shield I just aimed at the desk it blew up and flew into the air distracting him. As he was distracted I shot another energy beam at him but I only hit his shoulder. However it was enough to send him flying backwards. I used by beams to break the metal cuffs that were holding Shaun’s legs but before I could free his hand he used his power to pull a metal beam from the wall and hurl it at me.
I dodged it causing it to hit the wall but before I could return the attack he thrust his hands forward creating some type of sound wave making me fly back into the hall. He must have created another magnetic field but this time he forced it on me.
Meanwhile Storm was still in the middle of a fight with Mystique. After Mystique did a back flip she ran toward Storm and did a double kick, which Strom blocked. Then she did a spining kicked which storm dodged and returned with her own spinning kick but this one hit its target.
Mystique recovered and got a knife from her pants. She swung it at Storm but she dodged it. Her eyes turned White and a gust of wind sent Mystique crashing into a wall. The knife got knocked out of her hand and landed on the floor. She immediately reached for it and threw it at Storm who docked out of the way just in time so that the knife was literally only inches from her face. Mystique got up and went towards her for another attack but Storm turned around and swung her hand upwards creating a tremendous wind that made her fly back into the wall and this time she didn’t get up.

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Ch 9 The Lobby

***Aaron’s perspective***

Meanwhile down in the lobby Feral and Hazard were in a heated fight. Danny jumped forward dodging the women’s mind blast he tried to hit her again with his power but she too dodged. Becoming more creative he but his hand on the floor making the floor in front of him turn to ice and when she tried to run at him she slipped and fell on the floor. He ran over to her to try and freeze her in place but she tried to kick him before he got close enough. He jumped back which gave her enough time to get up and hit him with one of her mind blasts.
However this time the blast didn’t send him flying across the room actually it did just the opposite he couldn’t move at all. “What have you done to me” he asked “ its my power silly I have the power to mess with peoples minds make them forget things make them see things, make them freeze in place or overload their brain sending them flying like your little friend over there.” “You @#%$” “ Thanks she replied your sweet” she gave him a kiss “ and the name White queen” “I guessed” he replied back.
Suddenly your hear a BAMF and you see Nightcrawler behind her he grabs her and then he teleports again then you see him reappear in a cloud of smoke sending her slamming into a wall. “ That wasn’t very nice” she said “ well maybe you should have given me a bigger dose of that power of yours” “with pleasure” she shoots another of her mind blasts at him but he teleports out and it goes strait through the cloud of smoke. Meanwhile giving Danny time for the effects of her powers to wear off.
As the fight between White Queen, Hazard, and Nightcrawler was going on there was also a fight between Feral and Sabertooth.
After Feral had kicked Sabertooth across the room she went to go check on Nightcrawler but before she even reached him Sabertooth grabbed her from behind and through her across the room. She aligned herself correctly in mid-air so that she landed on her hands then flipped back wards so her feet land on the lobby desk.
Sabertooth infuriated she had landed without a problem jumped toward her. Paige grabbed him in midair and threw him onto the desktop. When he hit the desktop he brought his leg up hitting her in the head and knocking her off the desk. Then he swung around and tried to kick her in the head again but she ducked.
He jumped from the desk and was met with a punch from Feral but he dodged it and tried to punch her in the stomach but she grabbed his hand then swung around and round kicked him in the face knocking him to the floor. “You’ll pay for that” he cried the cam running at her but she humped in the air avoiding his attack and then spun in mid-air so that when she landed she was facing him again. “ You sure I’ll pay cause I think I’m doing just fine.” Paige told him making him even madder he charged at her again this time she kicked him sending him backwards then brought her leg up to do a kick where she would hit his head knocking him strait to the ground but he grabbed her and sent her flying into a wall.



Ch 10 Two down three to go

***Aaron’s perspective***

This is when I got blown out of the room. “Cyclops!” “Shut up Storm” said Magneto and then used the magnetic field to make her fly into the wall behind her. I ran back into the room. “Storm!” “What did you do to Mystique you little witch?” he asked her? Then using his power he used the metal in the room and made it form around her chest. After the metal formed around her chest causing her arms to be useless he lifted her off the floor and flung her out the window. : STORM NOO!!” I tried to stop him but he created a magnetic field in front of me stopping me from getting to her. She crashed to the Window and started falling to her doom.
Meanwhile back in the lobby Sabertooth jumped on top of the desk to get Feral but she kicked him right were it really hurts then jumped up and did a spinning kick sending him flying and then she landed on the desk.
At the same time Hazard had just become free from White queen’s power effects and formed three icicles in his hand and flung them at her but she easily dodged them. Nightcrawler teleported behind him “go take care of her ill make sure Ferrell’s okay” “okay don’t worry she wont be a problem for me” Hazard replied. Hazard charged towards White queen and grabbed her arm making it begin to freeze. She countered by trying to hit him with a mental beam but he dodged it.
That’s when another person walked in. “okay the first floor is secure. What in hell is going on” he sees all the people fighting and sees one person standing in the middle of the lobby. He closes his fist which activates a flamethrower only a small flame come out but he opens his fist making it fly into his hand then thrust his hand forward and the small flame turns into a hug column of fire then envelopes Nightcrawler and blows up the front of the lobby.