Post by oddball7 on Jan 7, 2005 22:30:22 GMT -5
Saving Elder Leo: A Prue Story
Author: charmed2008
I lay in bed thinking about my beloved sisters. I haven’t seen or heard from them in over 4 years. I missed them terribly, but as long as I was a whitelighter I was never to contact or talk to them. I remembered the day that I died. It wasn’t a normal day, our magic had been exposed to the media, so we had to struggle with them outside of our Victorian manor. Even more so, we had the source’s assassin on our butts. The doors to the manor swung open and there in a gust of wind was Shax, the assassin. He threw an energy ball at Piper and me, and we were pushed against the wall. Leo was able to heal his beloved wife, but he was too late to save me. I was gone, gone from the earth, to what I thought was forever, but I was brought straight to my mother and my grams. They comforted me, then told me I had a greater destiny to fulfill as “A Healer or Whitelighter.”
Edited by: charmed2008 at: 9/4/04 2:10 pm
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OOh sounds intriguing..please continue!
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oh nice twist! i cannot wait for more. update soon
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This looks like the begining of a really great fanfic C2008, I SOOOO hope you continue it!
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C1008 you are a great writter!
it is a good story!
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nice please update soon ow ow ow ow ow ow
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Yay!! You posted it!! It's fantastic! And it's off to a really interesting start, please please PLEASE update soon, or I'll annoy you by saying it over and over again!
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Thank you everyone who reviewed!!!
The Elders told me that I was never to contact or to see my sisters ever again, and if I did contact them, then I would have my wings clipped and sent to hell. I was assigned to a middle aged women that was designed to be a witch but didn’t know she was one yet. So I had to become friends with her, her name was Paige, Paige Matthews. I was told to watch her carfully and closely, for she was to have a greater future than me. Prue hunny are you ok said Andy her husband. Yes Andy I’m fine, I’m just thinking about my sisters. Like always Andy said softly to where Prue couldn’t hear him.
Sorry if its not long, i havent had much time to updte it.
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Oh, C2008! Just when I thought I'd run into a fanfic that had a chance of being one of my favorites, you had to write conversation and forget all about new paragraphs, quotation marks, commas, etc., all the things that makes it readable. Oh, well! What I usually do with stories like these, that intrigue me, but that I find hard to read, is wait until it's totally completed, set a good-sized block of time, and work my way through it. So I'm looking forward to when you write "Completed" after it! Because there's no doubt I want to work my way through this one! I love the idea of Prue becoming a whitelighter, and, even more, being Paige's whitelighter, even if Paige is younger than Prue, so her being middle-aged doesn't make much sense, and even the fact that Andy is her husband. Yeah, have fun writing it!!
See ya in the chat room!!
Edited by: Esmeralda at: 8/12/04 12:57 am
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aww thanks Es, but you wont have to wait, someone has offered to put all that stuff in there for me!
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YES!!! I'm *so* very glad! Actually, depending upon your answer, I was going to make the same offer myself!!! But if someone else wants to, that's fantastic! Coz I truly like the premise of this story and didn't want to have to wait until it's done! Hope between the two of you that you update soon!!!
Author: charmed2008
I lay in bed thinking about my beloved sisters. I haven’t seen or heard from them in over 4 years. I missed them terribly, but as long as I was a whitelighter I was never to contact or talk to them. I remembered the day that I died. It wasn’t a normal day, our magic had been exposed to the media, so we had to struggle with them outside of our Victorian manor. Even more so, we had the source’s assassin on our butts. The doors to the manor swung open and there in a gust of wind was Shax, the assassin. He threw an energy ball at Piper and me, and we were pushed against the wall. Leo was able to heal his beloved wife, but he was too late to save me. I was gone, gone from the earth, to what I thought was forever, but I was brought straight to my mother and my grams. They comforted me, then told me I had a greater destiny to fulfill as “A Healer or Whitelighter.”
Edited by: charmed2008 at: 9/4/04 2:10 pm
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OOh sounds intriguing..please continue!
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oh nice twist! i cannot wait for more. update soon
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This looks like the begining of a really great fanfic C2008, I SOOOO hope you continue it!
Prue21
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C1008 you are a great writter!
it is a good story!
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nice please update soon ow ow ow ow ow ow
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Yay!! You posted it!! It's fantastic! And it's off to a really interesting start, please please PLEASE update soon, or I'll annoy you by saying it over and over again!
Roxy
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Thank you everyone who reviewed!!!
The Elders told me that I was never to contact or to see my sisters ever again, and if I did contact them, then I would have my wings clipped and sent to hell. I was assigned to a middle aged women that was designed to be a witch but didn’t know she was one yet. So I had to become friends with her, her name was Paige, Paige Matthews. I was told to watch her carfully and closely, for she was to have a greater future than me. Prue hunny are you ok said Andy her husband. Yes Andy I’m fine, I’m just thinking about my sisters. Like always Andy said softly to where Prue couldn’t hear him.
Sorry if its not long, i havent had much time to updte it.
Esmeralda
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Oh, C2008! Just when I thought I'd run into a fanfic that had a chance of being one of my favorites, you had to write conversation and forget all about new paragraphs, quotation marks, commas, etc., all the things that makes it readable. Oh, well! What I usually do with stories like these, that intrigue me, but that I find hard to read, is wait until it's totally completed, set a good-sized block of time, and work my way through it. So I'm looking forward to when you write "Completed" after it! Because there's no doubt I want to work my way through this one! I love the idea of Prue becoming a whitelighter, and, even more, being Paige's whitelighter, even if Paige is younger than Prue, so her being middle-aged doesn't make much sense, and even the fact that Andy is her husband. Yeah, have fun writing it!!
See ya in the chat room!!
Edited by: Esmeralda at: 8/12/04 12:57 am
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aww thanks Es, but you wont have to wait, someone has offered to put all that stuff in there for me!
Esmeralda
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YES!!! I'm *so* very glad! Actually, depending upon your answer, I was going to make the same offer myself!!! But if someone else wants to, that's fantastic! Coz I truly like the premise of this story and didn't want to have to wait until it's done! Hope between the two of you that you update soon!!!
