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Post by mcharmed21 on Jan 8, 2005 0:40:02 GMT -5
Author: Aurora Nightstar
Sequel to Invasion of your privacy
Someone trashed Jason's house and threatened Jason. When Jason gave his grudge list to the police, mysteriously the list changed to give some incriminating evidence against Jason.
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Phoebe walked down the isle all dressed up in her wedding dress. Jason stood waiting for her at the altar. He smiled warmly. The priest conducted the usual wedding vows. Paige and Piper stood as brides maids. Phoebe was nervous because this is the first time a Halliwell wedding went down without a hitch. Perhaps there really was something to that curse and now it truly was broken, she thought to herself. When the priest said the part about “does anyone see cause why these two should not be joined in holy matrimony, let him speak now or forever hold their piece,” Phoebe turned around half expecting to see Cole come barging in. But at last, nothing. Was it true? Was Cole truly over her? Nah! She thought to herself.
Phoebe and Jason both said there I dos. Then the priest got to the good part. “You may kiss the bride,” he said. Phoebe leaned in and prepared to give Jason a kiss to remember! Phoebe started getting one of her premonitions. She saw Jason wearing the same tuxedo he was wearing now laying dead on the floor of the men’s bathroom and the back of the head of a tall dark haired man. She didn’t see the man’s face, but only the back of his head. She didn’t need to see that, she already knew who it was, or at least she thought she did!
Meanwhile down in the underworld, the blond called together a meeting of demonic fraction leaders. “How dare you summon us here!” the grimlock leader stated.
“A nasty temper like that just might get you killed,” the blond stated coldly. She hurled an oversized energy ball at him. Then she reversed time by only about 10 minutes but made certain the demons in this room remembered what just happened. “You were saying?” she said.
“To what do we owe the honor of this meeting,” The grimlock leader asked.
“You boys are going to make me the next source,” she said.
“But we can’t. We don’t have the grimiore and besides you have no linage to the source, by blood or magic,” another fraction leader said.
“Wrong on both accounts, I have the grimoire,” she said. All the leaders looked up in shock.
“Ok, then the coronation will be” one of the leaders began.
“Tonight, it has to be tonight,” the blond cut him off.
“There is so much to do,” the leader said.
“Then get your buts in gear,” the blond said. She shimmered out.
“Are we really going to let a seductress rule the underworld?” another of the fraction leaders spoke out.
“You saw what she did,” another said. “She isn’t just a seductress anymore.”<br>
Jason went off to the bathroom. Phoebe saw Cole standing in the hall. She ran over to him. “If you hurt Jason, I swear to god..” Phoebe screamed at him. The look in her eyes showed pure hate.
“Good grief,” Cole said. “I have no interest in Jason.”<br>
“Then why are you here?” Phoebe said. “I had a premonition. I saw you killing Jason!”<br>
“Your premonition needs glasses,” Cole responded. “I am just here to talk to Chris.”<br>
“You stay away from him too!” Phoebe responded.
“Or what?” Cole responded shrewdly.
“Just get out!” Phoebe said. She went to punch Cole in the face. Cole put up some kind of electric shielding. Phoebe let out a yelp in pain.
Cole looked at his ex-wife with such a familiar cold icy stare. Phoebe recognized it as the same way she looked at him. “Serves you right,” Cole stated. He turned his back on her and walked way.
“Cole,” Phoebe screamed for him.
Jason stepped out of the bathroom stall greeted by a tall dark haired man. “You remember me?” the man said. “The one you fired?” Jason looked up and realized he had a gun pointed at his head
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Post by mcharmed21 on Jan 8, 2005 0:41:55 GMT -5
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finaly you started your sequle can't wait for more
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please, please, please continue!!!!
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Sequel to Invasion of your privacy
Someone trashed Jason's house and threatened Jason. When Jason gave his grudge list to the police, mysteriously the list changed to give some incriminating evidence against Jason.
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Phoebe walked down the isle all dressed up in her wedding dress. Jason stood waiting for her at the altar. He smiled warmly. The priest conducted the usual wedding vows. Paige and Piper stood as brides maids. Phoebe was nervous because this is the first time a Halliwell wedding went down without a hitch. Perhaps there really was something to that curse and now it truly was broken, she thought to herself. When the priest said the part about “does anyone see cause why these two should not be joined in holy matrimony, let him speak now or forever hold their piece,” Phoebe turned around half expecting to see Cole come barging in. But at last, nothing. Was it true? Was Cole truly over her? Nah! She thought to herself.
Phoebe and Jason both said there I dos. Then the priest got to the good part. “You may kiss the bride,” he said. Phoebe leaned in and prepared to give Jason a kiss to remember! Phoebe started getting one of her premonitions. She saw Jason wearing the same tuxedo he was wearing now laying dead on the floor of the men’s bathroom and the back of the head of a tall dark haired man. She didn’t see the man’s face, but only the back of his head. She didn’t need to see that, she already knew who it was, or at least she thought she did!
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finaly you started your sequle can't wait for more
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please, please, please continue!!!!
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Meanwhile down in the underworld, the blond called together a meeting of demonic fraction leaders. “How dare you summon us here!” the grimlock leader stated.
“A nasty temper like that just might get you killed,” the blond stated coldly. She hurled an oversized energy ball at him. Then she reversed time by only about 10 minutes but made certain the demons in this room remembered what just happened. “You were saying?” she said.
“To what do we owe the honor of this meeting,” The grimlock leader asked.
“You boys are going to make me the next source,” she said.
“But we can’t. We don’t have the grimiore and besides you have no linage to the source, by blood or magic,” another fraction leader said.
“Wrong on both accounts, I have the grimoire,” she said. All the leaders looked up in shock.
“Ok, then the coronation will be” one of the leaders began.
“Tonight, it has to be tonight,” the blond cut him off.
“There is so much to do,” the leader said.
“Then get your buts in gear,” the blond said. She shimmered out.
“Are we really going to let a seductress rule the underworld?” another of the fraction leaders spoke out.
“You saw what she did,” another said. “She isn’t just a seductress anymore.”<br>
Edited by: Aurora Nightstar at: 2/8/04 11:37 am
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Jason went off to the bathroom. Phoebe saw Cole standing in the hall. She ran over to him. “If you hurt Jason, I swear to god..” Phoebe screamed at him. The look in her eyes showed pure hate.
“Good grief,” Cole said. “I have no interest in Jason.”<br>
“Then why are you here?” Phoebe said. “I had a premonition. I saw you killing Jason!”<br>
“Your premonition needs glasses,” Cole responded. “I am just here to talk to Chris.”<br>
“You stay away from him too!” Phoebe responded.
“Or what?” Cole responded shrewdly.
“Just get out!” Phoebe said. She went to punch Cole in the face. Cole put up some kind of electric shielding. Phoebe let out a yelp in pain.
Cole looked at his ex-wife with such a familiar cold icy stare. Phoebe recognized it as the same way she looked at him. “Serves you right,” Cole stated. He turned his back on her and walked way.
“Cole,” Phoebe screamed for him.
Jason stepped out of the bathroom stall greeted by a tall dark haired man. “You remember me?” the man said. “The one you fired?” Jason looked up and realized he had a gun pointed at his head.
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cool so far post more really really soon
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Can't wait for more! This is great! Update soon!
"United we stand, divided we fall.
Together we are, what we can't be alone."
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awesome!
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Great job as always, keep going!!!
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omg that is awesome
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awesome as always
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..... still waiting for the rest of the story...
Don't mind me if you think I'm bein pushy...
I'm just bored and you've got a gret story goin on here....
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Post by mcharmed21 on Jan 8, 2005 0:42:50 GMT -5
“Please don’t,” Jason pleaded.
“In the head will be too quick,” he said as he shot Jason in the leg. Then he pulled out a base ball bat and whacked Jason several times.
Several people heard the commotion, but the door to the bathroom was locked. Chris decided not to use a door. He orbed into the bathroom. The man watched as Chris orbed in. “Don’t move!” he told Chris. The man glanced over at the door as people were clearly trying to break in. Chris took advantage of the distraction and telekinetically knocked the assailant against the wall causing him to drop his gun. Chris ran to Jason’s side and tried to feel for a pulse. Nothing!!! Chris screamed for Leo.
Leo orbed in. Chris telekinetically held the door shut because he didn’t want anyone to see Leo orb in. Leo tried to heal Jason, but it was too late. Jason was already dead.
“I tried to save him, but I was too late,” Chris told Leo.
Chris stopped holding the door shut and Darryl was the first to barge in. He arrested the man. Piper and Phoebe gasped as they saw the man dragged out. They both recognized him immediately. It was none other then Cal Green. “That was the creep that came on to me at the Christmas party,” Paris said.
“Who is he?” Paige asked.
“I don’t know,” Paris replied.
“The future had it so right, I am going to kill that guy!” Phoebe stated.
“No you are not,” Piper said. “We can’t risk it!”<br>
“What is that about?” Paige asked.
“Long story, we will explain later,” Piper said.
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Post by mcharmed21 on Jan 8, 2005 0:46:23 GMT -5
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great story....
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dang, i wasn't expecting them to actually kill him... i thought phoebe would save him... oh well, your story (and i never really liked Jason anyways)... keep up the good work!
It's been a long, hard road without you by my side. Why weren't you there all the nights that we cried? Your broke my mother's heart you broke your children for life. It's not ok, but we're alright. I remember the days, you were a hero in my eyes, but those are just a long lost memory of mine. I spent so many years, learning how to survive and now I'm writing this to let you know I'm still alive
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Sorry, I thought the title was a give away that someone would die. This is part of an ongoing series and the next part won't make any sense if this didn't happen. Also, I had been building for this in the previous stories in subtle and not subtle ways.
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loved it post more soon
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Post by mcharmed21 on Jan 8, 2005 0:47:39 GMT -5
Phoebe walked over to Cole. “This is all your fault,” she declared.
“My fault,” Cole repeated. “No, Phoebe, it is your fault. If you knew this was going to happen, you should have been in there defending your man instead of bickering at me!”<br>
Phoebe’s jaw dropped as she stood there speechless. Cole just left her there dumbfounded.
Cole approached Chris. “What do you want?” Leo demanded from Cole.
Cole laughed. “I am here to talk to Chris. I have some information about Wyatt, I know he would be interested in.”<br>
“Ok, I am listening,” Chris stated.
“Don’t talk to him Chris,” Leo said.
“Shut up Leo,” Cole said. With a wave of the hand, everyone but Chris and Cole froze. “Listen kid, this is my mess and I am really sorry you are stuck with the task of cleaning it up.”<br>
Chris turns to look at Cole. “How long will that freeze last,” Chris asked.
“Until I decide to cancel it,” Cole stated. “This is a long story.” Cole went to into the reception room and got himself a glass of spiked fruit punch and some chocolate covered strawberries. Chris took a drink also. That sat down at a table.
“Last time I saw you, you said you have been watching me since I got here. You are not going to tell them anything are you?” Chris pointed toward the frozen Leo and Piper.
“Of course not,” Cole said. “I like you, kid.”<br>
“Good, that is a relieve. Now you said you have some information about Wyatt,” Chris inquired.
“Wyatt was born evil. It is his destiny to be evil and there is nothing you can do about that,” Cole stated.
“That can’t be true,” Chris retored.
“Oh, but it is true,” Cole stated. “If you don’t believe me, there is a spell in the book of shadows to enchant an item so evil cannot hide. Last time the girls used it, they enchanted a pair of sun glasses. Use that spell again and then look at Wyatt. I can almost guarantee you he will have a dark aura. After you see that I am right, come find me and I will give you the rest of the story!” Cole shimmered out and everyone in the room unfroze.
The party broke up and everyone returned home. Chris went to that attic to try Cole’s suggestion. He had little trouble finding the spell. He took out a pair of sun glasses and cast the spell.
“Magic forces far and wide,
Enchant these so those can't hide,
Allow this witch to use therein,
So one can reveal the evil within”
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Post by mcharmed21 on Jan 8, 2005 0:48:20 GMT -5
He walked over and looked at himself in the mirror. Then he put the sun glasses on. He didn’t look any different. He went to Wyatt’s nursery. Leo was playing with Wyatt. Chris looked over at Wyatt. “Oh my god!” he said.
Leo turned around. “What is with the sun glasses in the house?” Leo asked.
“Oh, nothing,” Chris took off the sun glasses and stuffed them in his coat pocket. Chris turned and left. Leo continued playing with Wyatt.
Mean while down in the underworld, the blonde received her coronation as the next source. With her newly acquired source powers combined with all the stolen powers from fallen demons, she was definitely the most powerful source ever! She smiled in satisfaction as she knew the moment she had been waiting for had finally come. Time for her to succeed at what many before her had failed to do; break the charmed circle.
End of story
Sequel
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Post by mcharmed21 on Jan 8, 2005 0:48:42 GMT -5
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HOLY MACKERAL!!! That was so, *so* awesome!! As you explained to someone else, I'm sure you had to kill off Jason in order to set up something else (I'm assuming that Phoebe will somehow end up with Cole)
OMG!! I think I just figured it out. I won't post it and spoil it for anyone else, but I hope I'm right, because it would make *so* much sense and help out with some of the arguments going on around here in other sections!!! Again I'm hoping the real writers are reading this!!!
And I'll bet if I'm wrong, the answer will be even better!!! But I still want to know who the blonde is and even more, how Paris is related to the Halliwells!! I sure hope you actually answer those questions before your fictional Season 7 (or better, fictional Season 8!) is over!!
Edited by: Esmeralda at: 3/19/04 12:21 am
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