Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 21:08:01 GMT -5
Author: power of piper
okay, this happened between me and one of my friends, so it is a true story.
Chapter One: Finding the Secret
I stay awake, looking at chat. And me and my best friend emilee are chatting about a boy. A certain boy. (he shall not be named) he had pretended to kiss us for a playful joke. Nothing more. Then When i looked in the secrets forum....that is when i found out. she had always insisted that she didn't love him. after the kiss, she posted. She told me and him and his girlfriend taht she loved him. I had never really loved him. as he loved me. But suddenly, i got over raged and jelous! I didn't want her to love him. I had only loved him as a friend. He didn't find out yet. She raged at me because he loved me and his girlfriend. and not her. As she ranted and raved, I sat taking all of the blame. Then I decided, i wasn't going to take the crap, that i certainly didn't deserve. " Is it my fault he loves me!" I shot back, bolting. She didn't answer. I figured she ment yes. But it wasn't...was it? was i responcible for his love? I had not loved him back...and i told him many times before. But somehow all i coould do was stare...and think. Then she signed off. I got so outraged at what she had done. I had to blame him for this. he shouldn't have said he loved me. I hated that she was angry, for somthing as natural as love. I had not stolen him! I didn't have him either. He had another. Seeing as how i rejected him. I wanted to hit her, slap her, do anything to knock sence into her. But i senced fault. For I couldn't do it. I had known her personally at school. I knew there would be hell to pay come monday moring.
END of teaser. What do u ppl think?
WiccanDude413
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it's good, keep it going.
power of paige
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hey carrie i think that was pretty cool!:bye
okay, this happened between me and one of my friends, so it is a true story.
Chapter One: Finding the Secret
I stay awake, looking at chat. And me and my best friend emilee are chatting about a boy. A certain boy. (he shall not be named) he had pretended to kiss us for a playful joke. Nothing more. Then When i looked in the secrets forum....that is when i found out. she had always insisted that she didn't love him. after the kiss, she posted. She told me and him and his girlfriend taht she loved him. I had never really loved him. as he loved me. But suddenly, i got over raged and jelous! I didn't want her to love him. I had only loved him as a friend. He didn't find out yet. She raged at me because he loved me and his girlfriend. and not her. As she ranted and raved, I sat taking all of the blame. Then I decided, i wasn't going to take the crap, that i certainly didn't deserve. " Is it my fault he loves me!" I shot back, bolting. She didn't answer. I figured she ment yes. But it wasn't...was it? was i responcible for his love? I had not loved him back...and i told him many times before. But somehow all i coould do was stare...and think. Then she signed off. I got so outraged at what she had done. I had to blame him for this. he shouldn't have said he loved me. I hated that she was angry, for somthing as natural as love. I had not stolen him! I didn't have him either. He had another. Seeing as how i rejected him. I wanted to hit her, slap her, do anything to knock sence into her. But i senced fault. For I couldn't do it. I had known her personally at school. I knew there would be hell to pay come monday moring.
END of teaser. What do u ppl think?
WiccanDude413
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it's good, keep it going.
power of paige
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(10/24/04 5:27 pm)
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hey carrie i think that was pretty cool!:bye
