Post by oddball7 on Jan 9, 2005 21:08:18 GMT -5
Author: phoebe and piper rule
Ok my friend wrote this and i edited it for her i really hope you like it its the first one that we have made plz! give me feedbak even if its bad it doesn't really matter!
Chapter 1
Piper walks downstairs and into the kitchen. “Coffee” Prue asked. “Always” Piper replied.
“Where’s Phoebe??” Piper asked.
“ Oh she’s at work with Leslie.”<br>“ I thought that she wasn’t working for a while”<br>“ Well now that she’s like madly in love with him she’s always there”<br>“ Oh interesting”
“ Ya have you seen Chris” Prue asked taking a slip of coffee.
“Yeah it is like I can’t get away from him” Piper replied taking a sip of her coffee.
“Can you call him for me” Prue asked nicely.
“Sure” Piper said to her sister.
“CHRIS” Piper yelled.
“What is wrong?” Chris said as Piper exited the room.
“Chris we need to talk” Prue said quietly.
Chapter 2
Up in Piper’s bedroom “LEO!!! LEO WYATT I KNOW YOU CAN HEAR ME NOW GET UR A** DOWN HERE!!” Leo finally orbed and in his calm down to earth voice he started to say
“What is wrong…………..” but trailed off when he saw her pregnant stomach. “Is that I mean it….” He managed to get out.
“Yes he is yours, ours I mean that is one reason I called you the other is that Chris is your son!” She said
Leo still in shock “So it that……Chris inside you?”<br>“Ya its him and he’s going to be born in 2 days and I kno how and ur not there!”<br>
hope u like it! srry i like the guys that stick their tounge out o and if some stuf isn't writen properly its cuz i'm used to msn if u want 2 add me i'm blink182_roxs@hotmail.com thanx plz give me feedbak!!!
Edited by: phoebe and piper rule at: 12/2/04 6:09 pm
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hey guys we need feedbak plzzzzz!!!!even if its bad!!
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Hey phoebe and piper fan, I just read ur fic. It's interesting. Keep it up, I'm curious to see where it goes. See ya,
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sry about the spelling if it is wrong. i am not a good speller.
Chapter 3
"Prue that is huge how come you wanted to talk to me" Chris asked.
"Because i want to know if me and andy are suppose to be together and since your from the future i figured you would know" Prue replied.
"well i can tell you it is meant to be but you will have to work at it like all relationships" Chris said.
"thank you" Prue said.
they hear Leo's voice.
"Hello" leo says as he enters the room with Piper.
Prue happy to see runs up and gives him a huge.
Chris not so fond of seeing his dad orbs away.
Chapter 4
Chris is sitting on the golden gate bridge watching the sun set. He is still so mad at his dad but he knows that he will have to return to the manor at some point.
Back at the manor
Prue,Piper and Leo still staring at where Chris oncen stood.
"What happened" Piper asked alittle confused at where her son went.
"I'm not sure but i don't think he likes Leo very much" Prue said.
"I don't think he lkes me ethier"Leo said looking alittle hurt.
"don't be so hard on yourself it hasn't happened yet" Piper said.
"I know but how do i keep it from happening" Leo asked his wife. Piper shruged.
sry it is so short i will update asap
Ok my friend wrote this and i edited it for her i really hope you like it its the first one that we have made plz! give me feedbak even if its bad it doesn't really matter!
Chapter 1
Piper walks downstairs and into the kitchen. “Coffee” Prue asked. “Always” Piper replied.
“Where’s Phoebe??” Piper asked.
“ Oh she’s at work with Leslie.”<br>“ I thought that she wasn’t working for a while”<br>“ Well now that she’s like madly in love with him she’s always there”<br>“ Oh interesting”
“ Ya have you seen Chris” Prue asked taking a slip of coffee.
“Yeah it is like I can’t get away from him” Piper replied taking a sip of her coffee.
“Can you call him for me” Prue asked nicely.
“Sure” Piper said to her sister.
“CHRIS” Piper yelled.
“What is wrong?” Chris said as Piper exited the room.
“Chris we need to talk” Prue said quietly.
Chapter 2
Up in Piper’s bedroom “LEO!!! LEO WYATT I KNOW YOU CAN HEAR ME NOW GET UR A** DOWN HERE!!” Leo finally orbed and in his calm down to earth voice he started to say
“What is wrong…………..” but trailed off when he saw her pregnant stomach. “Is that I mean it….” He managed to get out.
“Yes he is yours, ours I mean that is one reason I called you the other is that Chris is your son!” She said
Leo still in shock “So it that……Chris inside you?”<br>“Ya its him and he’s going to be born in 2 days and I kno how and ur not there!”<br>
hope u like it! srry i like the guys that stick their tounge out o and if some stuf isn't writen properly its cuz i'm used to msn if u want 2 add me i'm blink182_roxs@hotmail.com thanx plz give me feedbak!!!
Edited by: phoebe and piper rule at: 12/2/04 6:09 pm
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hey guys we need feedbak plzzzzz!!!!even if its bad!!
Edited by: phoebe and piper rule at: 12/5/04 1:31 pm
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Hey phoebe and piper fan, I just read ur fic. It's interesting. Keep it up, I'm curious to see where it goes. See ya,
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sry about the spelling if it is wrong. i am not a good speller.
Chapter 3
"Prue that is huge how come you wanted to talk to me" Chris asked.
"Because i want to know if me and andy are suppose to be together and since your from the future i figured you would know" Prue replied.
"well i can tell you it is meant to be but you will have to work at it like all relationships" Chris said.
"thank you" Prue said.
they hear Leo's voice.
"Hello" leo says as he enters the room with Piper.
Prue happy to see runs up and gives him a huge.
Chris not so fond of seeing his dad orbs away.
Chapter 4
Chris is sitting on the golden gate bridge watching the sun set. He is still so mad at his dad but he knows that he will have to return to the manor at some point.
Back at the manor
Prue,Piper and Leo still staring at where Chris oncen stood.
"What happened" Piper asked alittle confused at where her son went.
"I'm not sure but i don't think he likes Leo very much" Prue said.
"I don't think he lkes me ethier"Leo said looking alittle hurt.
"don't be so hard on yourself it hasn't happened yet" Piper said.
"I know but how do i keep it from happening" Leo asked his wife. Piper shruged.
sry it is so short i will update asap
