Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 21:21:12 GMT -5
Author: piperluvsleo4eva
"The Choice: Piper's decision"
Chapter 1: Great News: "up there"
Leo was pacing back and forth wandering what the other elders had in store for him as they chattered amongst themselves. His mind was racing. What could they want? Why would they want whatever it is to happen? Leo thought to himself then his thoughts were interrupted by someone. "leo we are ready for you," an elder said. ''ok," leo said as he followed the elder and took a seat. "leo we have put you and your family through so much since you've became a whitelighter," another elder said. "ok what does that have to do w/ this?" leo asked. "well leo we have all voted well decided to make you a whitelighter again," the elder said. "what! are you serious?" leo asked stunned,"but why?" "well we thought we would repay you and your family since you gotten us through some sticky situations so to speak and since we have put you in a few," the elder explained. "so i get to go back to earth to my family to piper?" leo asked w/ hope in his voice. "of course," the elder said. Leo stood to his feet and ran his hand through his hair then sat back down again not knowing how to react. "thank you so much," leo said w/ a big smile,"you have no idea how much this means to me." "believe me we do," the elder said. Then he and the other elders orbed out of the room. Leo sat back down stunned.
Chapter 2: sister talk: the manor
Piper walked down stairs w/ a baby in her arms and a monitor in her hand. She put wyatt down in his play pen and set the baby monitor down on the table. "Phoebe, get down here your going to be late for your doctors appointment ive already rescheduled for you three times," piper called up to her sister. "I'm coming," phoebe said walking down the stairs, " i definately cant miss this appointment."
"why do you say that?" piper asked sounding a little confused. "well the reason why i took so long is that i took a home pregnancy test and it turned out positive," phoebe said. "wow phoebe this is great you need to get to the doctor to find out for sure,'' piper said. "i know but you cant let jason know that you know because he would be angry if i knew and you knew and he didnt know you know," phoebe said a little confused about what she just said herself. "yeah i guess so," piper said confused by what phoebe just said. "guess so what?" paige asked walking down stairs w/ her hair tosseled and her clothes all wrinkled she had clearly just woken up. "well i guess there is no harm in telling one more person," phoebe said, "im going to the dr. because i took a home test and it turned out positive." "phoebe this is great," paige said. "yeah i know but you cant let jason know that you know because he would be angry if i knew that you knew and he didnt know you know," phoebe said. "yeah i know," paige said. "you understood that?" piper said w/ a smile. "yeah," paige said smiling. "piper," phoebe said hitting her playfully and smiling then walking out the door.
this is my first fan fic so plzzzzzzzzzz reply!
piperluvsleo4eva
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(10/8/04 7:37 pm)
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Chapter 3: doctor's visit: Doctors office
Phoebe was flipping through a magazine when her cell rang it was jason. "Hello?" phoebe said. '' hey where are you i called home and paige said you were out so i called your cell so whats up?" jason asked. "oh hi sweetie im at the doctors office had an appointment today and i had to go get somethings from the store," phoebe said. "oh well what did he say?" jason asked. "i dont know havent seen him yet its just a yearly check up is all anyway," phoebe said. "ok well just thought id call and check in and tell you id be home around 5:00," jason said. "okay sweetie i love you," phoebe said. "love you too," jason said and then hung up. "mrs. halliwell-dean?' the nurse called. ''oh thats me i was talking to my husband," phoebe said walking back to the room. "thats okay dear now step onto the scale," the nurse said. "alrighty," phoebe said then climbed onto the scale. "126 pounds," the nurse said, "quiet normal just take a seat and dr. james will be right with you." "boy what fun," phoebe said to herself and started fliping through a magazine again. Then phoebe heard a knock on the door. ''come in," phoebe said. "hi and how are you today phoebe?" dr. james asked. "well we're going to have to do more here than usual.. i took a home pregnancy test and it turned out positive," phoebe said. "okay well we'll get a little blood work a urine sample and do the examination as usual to find out for sure,"dr. james said to phoebe, " now just put on this gown and put that sheet over you and a lab tech. will be in to take your blood and there is a bathroom right through that door so after you remove your clothing you need to give a urine sample and set it on that table." " alrighty," phoebe said. Then she got down off the table and went to change into her gown. Phoebe heard another knock at the door. "come in," she said. "Hi im here to get some blood if that's alright," the lab tech. said jokingly. "Sure go right ahead got plenty," phoebe said playfully. The lab tech. tied a rubber band around her arm and got an achahol rub and wiped her arm with it then took her blood. "ok the dr. will be back to confirm the results from the blood and urine test and then to examine you," the lab tech. said. "ok," phoebe said as the lab tech. walked out of the room.
Chapter 4: The run-in: supermarket
Piper walked through the supermarket w/ wyatt in the buggey and baby chris was in a carrier on chris's back. "Chris, could you grab that can of crab meat for me i cant reach it?" piper asked. "sure mom," chris said then grabbed the can of crab meat. "you know this is kind of weird me holding..me,'' chris said. "yeah i know but we havent found a safe way to get you back and leo said that he doesnt want us sending you back until he has a free moment so he can make sure your return is safe," piper explained. "yeah i know but dad is never around so how am i going to get back?" chris asked. "listen sweetie can we talk about this later? i mean we are kind of in a public place dont want to take a chance on exposure," piper said. "yeah sure thing mom.. whoa smells like i need a change," chris said. "oh ill get it," piper said. "no i got it you know.. i mean i did do it," chris said grabbing the diaper bag and heading to change the babies diaper. Then piper felt someone bump into her. "oh excuse me miss," a man said. "oh that's...Dan Gordan is that you?" piper said. "piper wow how have you been?" dan asked. "well good actually i have two kids two boys and u?" piper said. "oh real good i just moved back to town," dan said. " really thats great," piper said. "so you have two kids huh? so where is the lucky man?" dan asked. "oh well actually its leo and we're kind of split up right now," piper said. "oh sorry," dan said. But they were interrupted by chris."okay we're all done," chris said. "oh okay thanks," piper said, "well i have to go," she said to dan. "okay see ya around," dan said. "yeah," piper said. Then piper and the boys walked off and dan realized that he was still in love w/ her.
i decided to post more on the story so everyone could have a better idea of what its about!
hollyhalliwell
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(10/9/04 5:41 pm)
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Very good Job! I love you bringing Dan back, that will give Leo a run for his money! lol. It's nice that you have Phoebe settled down with Jason, she always needed something stable. And, you still have Chris! he was such a great character, and I am thrilled that you decided to keep him in your story. Please continue, because I cannot wait to see how Leo reacts whe he comes back to Piper, but then realizes that dan has moved back to town! (Just like old times. lol)
Again, great job and please continue!
Thanks
Holly
"The Choice: Piper's decision"
Chapter 1: Great News: "up there"
Leo was pacing back and forth wandering what the other elders had in store for him as they chattered amongst themselves. His mind was racing. What could they want? Why would they want whatever it is to happen? Leo thought to himself then his thoughts were interrupted by someone. "leo we are ready for you," an elder said. ''ok," leo said as he followed the elder and took a seat. "leo we have put you and your family through so much since you've became a whitelighter," another elder said. "ok what does that have to do w/ this?" leo asked. "well leo we have all voted well decided to make you a whitelighter again," the elder said. "what! are you serious?" leo asked stunned,"but why?" "well we thought we would repay you and your family since you gotten us through some sticky situations so to speak and since we have put you in a few," the elder explained. "so i get to go back to earth to my family to piper?" leo asked w/ hope in his voice. "of course," the elder said. Leo stood to his feet and ran his hand through his hair then sat back down again not knowing how to react. "thank you so much," leo said w/ a big smile,"you have no idea how much this means to me." "believe me we do," the elder said. Then he and the other elders orbed out of the room. Leo sat back down stunned.
Chapter 2: sister talk: the manor
Piper walked down stairs w/ a baby in her arms and a monitor in her hand. She put wyatt down in his play pen and set the baby monitor down on the table. "Phoebe, get down here your going to be late for your doctors appointment ive already rescheduled for you three times," piper called up to her sister. "I'm coming," phoebe said walking down the stairs, " i definately cant miss this appointment."
"why do you say that?" piper asked sounding a little confused. "well the reason why i took so long is that i took a home pregnancy test and it turned out positive," phoebe said. "wow phoebe this is great you need to get to the doctor to find out for sure,'' piper said. "i know but you cant let jason know that you know because he would be angry if i knew and you knew and he didnt know you know," phoebe said a little confused about what she just said herself. "yeah i guess so," piper said confused by what phoebe just said. "guess so what?" paige asked walking down stairs w/ her hair tosseled and her clothes all wrinkled she had clearly just woken up. "well i guess there is no harm in telling one more person," phoebe said, "im going to the dr. because i took a home test and it turned out positive." "phoebe this is great," paige said. "yeah i know but you cant let jason know that you know because he would be angry if i knew that you knew and he didnt know you know," phoebe said. "yeah i know," paige said. "you understood that?" piper said w/ a smile. "yeah," paige said smiling. "piper," phoebe said hitting her playfully and smiling then walking out the door.
this is my first fan fic so plzzzzzzzzzz reply!
piperluvsleo4eva
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(10/8/04 7:37 pm)
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Chapter 3: doctor's visit: Doctors office
Phoebe was flipping through a magazine when her cell rang it was jason. "Hello?" phoebe said. '' hey where are you i called home and paige said you were out so i called your cell so whats up?" jason asked. "oh hi sweetie im at the doctors office had an appointment today and i had to go get somethings from the store," phoebe said. "oh well what did he say?" jason asked. "i dont know havent seen him yet its just a yearly check up is all anyway," phoebe said. "ok well just thought id call and check in and tell you id be home around 5:00," jason said. "okay sweetie i love you," phoebe said. "love you too," jason said and then hung up. "mrs. halliwell-dean?' the nurse called. ''oh thats me i was talking to my husband," phoebe said walking back to the room. "thats okay dear now step onto the scale," the nurse said. "alrighty," phoebe said then climbed onto the scale. "126 pounds," the nurse said, "quiet normal just take a seat and dr. james will be right with you." "boy what fun," phoebe said to herself and started fliping through a magazine again. Then phoebe heard a knock on the door. ''come in," phoebe said. "hi and how are you today phoebe?" dr. james asked. "well we're going to have to do more here than usual.. i took a home pregnancy test and it turned out positive," phoebe said. "okay well we'll get a little blood work a urine sample and do the examination as usual to find out for sure,"dr. james said to phoebe, " now just put on this gown and put that sheet over you and a lab tech. will be in to take your blood and there is a bathroom right through that door so after you remove your clothing you need to give a urine sample and set it on that table." " alrighty," phoebe said. Then she got down off the table and went to change into her gown. Phoebe heard another knock at the door. "come in," she said. "Hi im here to get some blood if that's alright," the lab tech. said jokingly. "Sure go right ahead got plenty," phoebe said playfully. The lab tech. tied a rubber band around her arm and got an achahol rub and wiped her arm with it then took her blood. "ok the dr. will be back to confirm the results from the blood and urine test and then to examine you," the lab tech. said. "ok," phoebe said as the lab tech. walked out of the room.
Chapter 4: The run-in: supermarket
Piper walked through the supermarket w/ wyatt in the buggey and baby chris was in a carrier on chris's back. "Chris, could you grab that can of crab meat for me i cant reach it?" piper asked. "sure mom," chris said then grabbed the can of crab meat. "you know this is kind of weird me holding..me,'' chris said. "yeah i know but we havent found a safe way to get you back and leo said that he doesnt want us sending you back until he has a free moment so he can make sure your return is safe," piper explained. "yeah i know but dad is never around so how am i going to get back?" chris asked. "listen sweetie can we talk about this later? i mean we are kind of in a public place dont want to take a chance on exposure," piper said. "yeah sure thing mom.. whoa smells like i need a change," chris said. "oh ill get it," piper said. "no i got it you know.. i mean i did do it," chris said grabbing the diaper bag and heading to change the babies diaper. Then piper felt someone bump into her. "oh excuse me miss," a man said. "oh that's...Dan Gordan is that you?" piper said. "piper wow how have you been?" dan asked. "well good actually i have two kids two boys and u?" piper said. "oh real good i just moved back to town," dan said. " really thats great," piper said. "so you have two kids huh? so where is the lucky man?" dan asked. "oh well actually its leo and we're kind of split up right now," piper said. "oh sorry," dan said. But they were interrupted by chris."okay we're all done," chris said. "oh okay thanks," piper said, "well i have to go," she said to dan. "okay see ya around," dan said. "yeah," piper said. Then piper and the boys walked off and dan realized that he was still in love w/ her.
i decided to post more on the story so everyone could have a better idea of what its about!
hollyhalliwell
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Posts: 368
(10/9/04 5:41 pm)
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Very good Job! I love you bringing Dan back, that will give Leo a run for his money! lol. It's nice that you have Phoebe settled down with Jason, she always needed something stable. And, you still have Chris! he was such a great character, and I am thrilled that you decided to keep him in your story. Please continue, because I cannot wait to see how Leo reacts whe he comes back to Piper, but then realizes that dan has moved back to town! (Just like old times. lol)
Again, great job and please continue!
Thanks
Holly
