Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 21:22:52 GMT -5
Author: WiccanDude413
As A 16 year old Chris Halliwell sat out on the ocean on his surf board waiting for some waves, he was nervous. The Men's National Surfing Compition was in 7 days and every second before that seven days he shiverred in nervouness and fear. Of coarse it was a free vacation in Hawaii, but some times not is all what they seem.
Chris caught a wave and rode it in. He got back on the sand Phoebe sat their watching him walk up.
"You Okay?" she asked in a white binkini top and shrong.
"No I feel like I am about to throw up." he said puttin his shirt on.
"Don't worry, everything will turn out fine." She said with a smile.
"Easy for you to say...Where's Mom and Wyatt?" he asked.
"Piper went to the hotel to Check on Travis (Phoebe's future Son) and Melinda (Piper's future daughter)."
Chris turned around and saw an 18 year old Wyatt sitting in a white tang top, blue board shorts, and spiked hair. He was mkaing out with some hawaiian girl. Chris ever since he could remember, envy'd Wyatt. Not that he had more powers, it was the fact that Wyatt was the one withe muscles and looked more manly then Chris. Chris had a small body with only small muscles. No matter how hard he tried he could never get as big as Wyatt. He couldn't take it and he threw his shirt off and grabbed his board and went back out. Phoebe felt his pain and felt terrible.
"Phoebe, Travis got you a present." Paige said walking up behind her.
A short 10 year old walked up nedt to Paige. He had brown hair and tanned skin from the hawaiian sun. He gave Phoebe a small neclace which he made with a pearl shell on it. "I made it for you."
"Aww...thank you honey." She said giving her son a hug, "where's aunt Piper?"
"Up in the hotel with Melinda." Tavis said sitting next to Phoebe.
Chris was paddling out and before the big wav hit him, he dived and went under the wav. As the wave passed above him he felt the water across his face. The blue abuss was endless. As he came up he didn't see the other wave and he got caught. The Wave struck in dead in the chest, knocking the wind out of him.
Phoebe coughed. And coughed until she threw up water.
"Phoebe you okay?" Paige asked
"MOM?" travis said with a chill in his voice.
As Phoebe coughed she manged to say, "Chris".
Paige looked out towards the water adn she saw chris' board floating about 25 yards out. Chris couldn't be far.
Phoebe threw up more water.
Chris was caught in the reef below the water. The Cord from his board which was tied around his foot, was caught in the coral rock. Water kept going up his nose until he, had to breathe, and he glupped in water.
"Travis freeze the beach." Paige said.
Travis gestured and froze the beach.
Paige orbed out and orbed straight into the ocean. She wasn't to far from Chris. He floated in the water lifeless. She grabbed his wrist and orbed out. She and Chris appeared on the beach.
Paige now soaking wet, opened his mouth and put her cheek next to it.
"He's not breathing." She said
The beach unfroze. Paige breathed into his mouth.
"Chris?" Travis said worried.
Paige breathed into his mouth once more and performed CPR "one-two-three-"
She breathed again.
Wyatt finally looking up from making out saw Paige performing CPR, and Phoebe holding a nearly crying Travis.
"CHRIS!" Wyatt yelled. He dicthed the girl and ran over to Chris.
Piper walking over fromt he hotel to the beach saw Wyatt running and heard him yell. She picked up Melinda and ran too.
Paige was doing the breathing now and Wyatt was performing the CPR.
"one-two-three" he said
People from the beach noticed Chris laying their and started to walk over, in hoping assistance.
"CHRIS!" Piper yelled
"Come on buddy." Wyatt said he said pounding Chris' chest. Then finally he hands gave a glow. "YES!" Wyatt said with a smile. He placed his hands over Chris, so that people walking up couldn't see. In a few seconds, Chris' coughed and threw up Water, Paige turned him on to his side. He hyperventulated trying to breath once more. His skin pale, and lips blue.
Chris looked up at everyone in a dazed. Piper reached them with Melinda in her arms.
"Chris, are you okay? Honey?" Piper said putting Melinda down and collasping by Chris.
"Mom?" he said not seeing to well.
Piper took him in her arms.
"YOu okay man?" Wyatt asked
"Where's my board?" Chris finally said.
Phoebe looked out and saw it was about a 100 yards out drifting away.
"I got it." Wyatt said running towards wht water.
Chris spent the remainder of the day in the hotel room. Still feeling not well from his near death experience he looked on the internet and came across his proflie for the mens national surfing compition:
Chris Halliwell, san Francisco native,
is the best surferin the league and thrid in state finals.
However, his scores weren't high enough for Nationals,
he entered as a wildcard entry.
Chris just stared at the screen. Chris was still wearing his orange shorts and white shirt, but his hair still wet. And he kept coughing from the injury. Wyatt knocked and walked in. "You okay?" She asked
"I am okay." Chris said closing the internet windo.
"You know you kick ass out their. I've seen it." Wyatt siad sitting on the other bed.
"sure." Chris said
"It's ever since you were 8 years old, you've been the most cocky surfer I've known and now 7 years later your a nationals?"
Chris smiled.
"How about this, tomorrow we'll rent a jet ski and get you into some big waves."
"No offense, but you're not that good."
"I know, but you are."
Chris thought about it.
"I'll take you to pike-"
"I am not ready." Chris said in a worried voice.
"Yes you are. Look it's Seven Days until the pike masters and you need to get into the waves, get to know them."
Chris sighed.
"Well like or not I am taking out and getting a jet ski and we'll do it." Wyatt got up and almost left the room before saying, "Their is a hawaiian BBQ tonight, on the beach, come if you feel up to it." Wyatt left.
Chris got up and looked out from his balcony.
"Seven Days." he said
Edited by: WiccanDude413 at: 10/14/04 2:00 am
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Chris was the first one up. At 6:30am with his surf board, he went out to the water. He sat in the water for the while watching the sun come up, and saw others coming out for a day's worth of fun. He caught a few big ones, but he wasn't sure if he would paddle over to pike.
"Hey bro!" Wyatt said behind him
Chris turned around and saw Wyatt paddling up behind Chris.
"Hi" Chris said, not keep his eyes off the massive waves.
"Want to go?" Wyatt said
"I am not sure."
"Come on" Wyatt said starting the paddle over.
"Wait-"
"No Come On."
Chris wanted to use his telekinesis to throw him off his board, but Piper and Phoebe strictly said "NO MAGIC UNLESS IT'S URGENT!"
So Chris paddled over. The Sun was fully up by then, and it said 9:04 am on Chris' watch.
Chris and Wyatt watched the massive Waves.
Walls of water, 15 to 25 feet high. Back breaker waves they were called, because you cold break your back or even die! As a guy on a yellow surf board went up, he positioned himself to far in, and was to high on the wave, as it feel forward, he fell and was caught in the wave, his board was instantly snapped in two. Chris gave a bad gulp.
"Hi" said a Voice.
Chris and Wyatt turned around and saw a group of 4 girls paddle up.
"We've never seen you here before, what your names?" Said a girl with blonde hair.
"I am Wyatt; this is my younger brother Chris."
"Nice."
"Hot."
Said the two girls behind them.
"Well I am Ann." said the one with the blonde hair. "That’s Eden." She said pointing to the girl with a tan and short brown hair, "that’s Michelle" pointing to the one with ripped arms, brown hair, and with a look of try-me. "And this is my younger sister, Penny." She said pointing to a 15 year old girl that had blonde hair and ponytail.
"Where do sexy guys like you come from?" Eden asked.
"Where from San Francisco." Chris explained.
"Ahh, any reason your here?" Ann replied
"My little brother here is competing in Pike on Thursday." Wyatt said giving Chris a good slap on the back.
"Are you serious?" Penny asked with interested.
"So you’re the little punk everyone is talking about." Michelle said with a grim look.
"What do you mean?" Chris asked
"Well, you're the youngest competitor in 5 years, and everyone is talking about it." Michelle replied with a lighter look.
"Oh." Chris said, "And that’s bad?"
"Well No," Ann started, "it's just watch your back, that’s all I've got to say."
"Okay thanks."
Chris looked at Penny who looked at him with much interest. Ann and Eden looked at Wyatt with interested; Michelle looked like she could care less.
"So show us your stuff." Penny said
"What?" Chris said with a chill down his spine.
"Here, I'll get with yaw. I've surfed Pike before," Ann said.
She paddled on, and Wyatt gave Chris at little shove with his board.
"Good Luck!" Wyatt said
Chris swallowed hard and paddled with Ann...
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this is good,and I loved the surfing theme...but I'm just one voice in a chorus.I still love your stories.you can ,i mean you should write more if you want.
my life is still and will always be sad ~ ~
As A 16 year old Chris Halliwell sat out on the ocean on his surf board waiting for some waves, he was nervous. The Men's National Surfing Compition was in 7 days and every second before that seven days he shiverred in nervouness and fear. Of coarse it was a free vacation in Hawaii, but some times not is all what they seem.
Chris caught a wave and rode it in. He got back on the sand Phoebe sat their watching him walk up.
"You Okay?" she asked in a white binkini top and shrong.
"No I feel like I am about to throw up." he said puttin his shirt on.
"Don't worry, everything will turn out fine." She said with a smile.
"Easy for you to say...Where's Mom and Wyatt?" he asked.
"Piper went to the hotel to Check on Travis (Phoebe's future Son) and Melinda (Piper's future daughter)."
Chris turned around and saw an 18 year old Wyatt sitting in a white tang top, blue board shorts, and spiked hair. He was mkaing out with some hawaiian girl. Chris ever since he could remember, envy'd Wyatt. Not that he had more powers, it was the fact that Wyatt was the one withe muscles and looked more manly then Chris. Chris had a small body with only small muscles. No matter how hard he tried he could never get as big as Wyatt. He couldn't take it and he threw his shirt off and grabbed his board and went back out. Phoebe felt his pain and felt terrible.
"Phoebe, Travis got you a present." Paige said walking up behind her.
A short 10 year old walked up nedt to Paige. He had brown hair and tanned skin from the hawaiian sun. He gave Phoebe a small neclace which he made with a pearl shell on it. "I made it for you."
"Aww...thank you honey." She said giving her son a hug, "where's aunt Piper?"
"Up in the hotel with Melinda." Tavis said sitting next to Phoebe.
Chris was paddling out and before the big wav hit him, he dived and went under the wav. As the wave passed above him he felt the water across his face. The blue abuss was endless. As he came up he didn't see the other wave and he got caught. The Wave struck in dead in the chest, knocking the wind out of him.
Phoebe coughed. And coughed until she threw up water.
"Phoebe you okay?" Paige asked
"MOM?" travis said with a chill in his voice.
As Phoebe coughed she manged to say, "Chris".
Paige looked out towards the water adn she saw chris' board floating about 25 yards out. Chris couldn't be far.
Phoebe threw up more water.
Chris was caught in the reef below the water. The Cord from his board which was tied around his foot, was caught in the coral rock. Water kept going up his nose until he, had to breathe, and he glupped in water.
"Travis freeze the beach." Paige said.
Travis gestured and froze the beach.
Paige orbed out and orbed straight into the ocean. She wasn't to far from Chris. He floated in the water lifeless. She grabbed his wrist and orbed out. She and Chris appeared on the beach.
Paige now soaking wet, opened his mouth and put her cheek next to it.
"He's not breathing." She said
The beach unfroze. Paige breathed into his mouth.
"Chris?" Travis said worried.
Paige breathed into his mouth once more and performed CPR "one-two-three-"
She breathed again.
Wyatt finally looking up from making out saw Paige performing CPR, and Phoebe holding a nearly crying Travis.
"CHRIS!" Wyatt yelled. He dicthed the girl and ran over to Chris.
Piper walking over fromt he hotel to the beach saw Wyatt running and heard him yell. She picked up Melinda and ran too.
Paige was doing the breathing now and Wyatt was performing the CPR.
"one-two-three" he said
People from the beach noticed Chris laying their and started to walk over, in hoping assistance.
"CHRIS!" Piper yelled
"Come on buddy." Wyatt said he said pounding Chris' chest. Then finally he hands gave a glow. "YES!" Wyatt said with a smile. He placed his hands over Chris, so that people walking up couldn't see. In a few seconds, Chris' coughed and threw up Water, Paige turned him on to his side. He hyperventulated trying to breath once more. His skin pale, and lips blue.
Chris looked up at everyone in a dazed. Piper reached them with Melinda in her arms.
"Chris, are you okay? Honey?" Piper said putting Melinda down and collasping by Chris.
"Mom?" he said not seeing to well.
Piper took him in her arms.
"YOu okay man?" Wyatt asked
"Where's my board?" Chris finally said.
Phoebe looked out and saw it was about a 100 yards out drifting away.
"I got it." Wyatt said running towards wht water.
Chris spent the remainder of the day in the hotel room. Still feeling not well from his near death experience he looked on the internet and came across his proflie for the mens national surfing compition:
Chris Halliwell, san Francisco native,
is the best surferin the league and thrid in state finals.
However, his scores weren't high enough for Nationals,
he entered as a wildcard entry.
Chris just stared at the screen. Chris was still wearing his orange shorts and white shirt, but his hair still wet. And he kept coughing from the injury. Wyatt knocked and walked in. "You okay?" She asked
"I am okay." Chris said closing the internet windo.
"You know you kick ass out their. I've seen it." Wyatt siad sitting on the other bed.
"sure." Chris said
"It's ever since you were 8 years old, you've been the most cocky surfer I've known and now 7 years later your a nationals?"
Chris smiled.
"How about this, tomorrow we'll rent a jet ski and get you into some big waves."
"No offense, but you're not that good."
"I know, but you are."
Chris thought about it.
"I'll take you to pike-"
"I am not ready." Chris said in a worried voice.
"Yes you are. Look it's Seven Days until the pike masters and you need to get into the waves, get to know them."
Chris sighed.
"Well like or not I am taking out and getting a jet ski and we'll do it." Wyatt got up and almost left the room before saying, "Their is a hawaiian BBQ tonight, on the beach, come if you feel up to it." Wyatt left.
Chris got up and looked out from his balcony.
"Seven Days." he said
Edited by: WiccanDude413 at: 10/14/04 2:00 am
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Chris was the first one up. At 6:30am with his surf board, he went out to the water. He sat in the water for the while watching the sun come up, and saw others coming out for a day's worth of fun. He caught a few big ones, but he wasn't sure if he would paddle over to pike.
"Hey bro!" Wyatt said behind him
Chris turned around and saw Wyatt paddling up behind Chris.
"Hi" Chris said, not keep his eyes off the massive waves.
"Want to go?" Wyatt said
"I am not sure."
"Come on" Wyatt said starting the paddle over.
"Wait-"
"No Come On."
Chris wanted to use his telekinesis to throw him off his board, but Piper and Phoebe strictly said "NO MAGIC UNLESS IT'S URGENT!"
So Chris paddled over. The Sun was fully up by then, and it said 9:04 am on Chris' watch.
Chris and Wyatt watched the massive Waves.
Walls of water, 15 to 25 feet high. Back breaker waves they were called, because you cold break your back or even die! As a guy on a yellow surf board went up, he positioned himself to far in, and was to high on the wave, as it feel forward, he fell and was caught in the wave, his board was instantly snapped in two. Chris gave a bad gulp.
"Hi" said a Voice.
Chris and Wyatt turned around and saw a group of 4 girls paddle up.
"We've never seen you here before, what your names?" Said a girl with blonde hair.
"I am Wyatt; this is my younger brother Chris."
"Nice."
"Hot."
Said the two girls behind them.
"Well I am Ann." said the one with the blonde hair. "That’s Eden." She said pointing to the girl with a tan and short brown hair, "that’s Michelle" pointing to the one with ripped arms, brown hair, and with a look of try-me. "And this is my younger sister, Penny." She said pointing to a 15 year old girl that had blonde hair and ponytail.
"Where do sexy guys like you come from?" Eden asked.
"Where from San Francisco." Chris explained.
"Ahh, any reason your here?" Ann replied
"My little brother here is competing in Pike on Thursday." Wyatt said giving Chris a good slap on the back.
"Are you serious?" Penny asked with interested.
"So you’re the little punk everyone is talking about." Michelle said with a grim look.
"What do you mean?" Chris asked
"Well, you're the youngest competitor in 5 years, and everyone is talking about it." Michelle replied with a lighter look.
"Oh." Chris said, "And that’s bad?"
"Well No," Ann started, "it's just watch your back, that’s all I've got to say."
"Okay thanks."
Chris looked at Penny who looked at him with much interest. Ann and Eden looked at Wyatt with interested; Michelle looked like she could care less.
"So show us your stuff." Penny said
"What?" Chris said with a chill down his spine.
"Here, I'll get with yaw. I've surfed Pike before," Ann said.
She paddled on, and Wyatt gave Chris at little shove with his board.
"Good Luck!" Wyatt said
Chris swallowed hard and paddled with Ann...
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this is good,and I loved the surfing theme...but I'm just one voice in a chorus.I still love your stories.you can ,i mean you should write more if you want.
my life is still and will always be sad ~ ~
