Post by Lady on Jan 9, 2005 21:17:23 GMT -5
yingandyang
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Reply The Charmed Spinoff
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Hello all Charmed Fans
This is my idea of a Charmed Spin off:
This story will have a bit of "The Bride with White Hair" and a reference to "Heavenly Sword and Dragon Sabre".
This story begins like this:
Leo is still an Avatar and he and Piper hade a third son named Daniel.
Paige and Kyle married
Phoebe... let's just say she is single and very upset!!
In the future, a powerful Avatar (Lien Su Bac) with violent white hair killed Piper, Phoebe and Leo. With Paige's help, she orbed herself, Kyle, Wyatt, Chris, and Daniel away from danger. But Lien was quick and he stabbed her with his hair. Lien tried to kill the family but he suddenly remembered the pac Leo made with the previous Avatars. The family must remain alive for the third son to gain control of the Avatar throne and ultimate powers since he was the chosen one.
"In ten years, I will return for your youngest nephew," said he. He jerked away his hair and released Paige. "You are poisoned. Take this antidote and it will cure the poison." She forced the pills down her throat and added: "You are cured, but you have lost the ability to have children of your own!" With an evil laugh, Lien disappeared.
Paige was deeply saddened, but she and Kyle raised Piper and Leo's sons as their own.
Daniel grew up to be a intellegent, out-going, open-minded, and magical ten year old boy. He discovered that he has the ability to "Fly" and "Walk on Water" like the Martial Artists in Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon. Wyatt grew jealous of his brother, but Chris was there to quell his elder brother's jealousy.
Suddenly after the stroke of Midnight, Lien appeared before Daniel's bed. He paralyzed Daniel using his pressure point techniques. Paige, Wyatt, Chris and Kyle tried to stop him, but he easily made his escape and disappeared into the night with the frightening wails of a kidnapped child.
They mourned their loss, especially Kyle. He admitted that even though he loathed Avatars and he still does, Daniel was his favorite nephew. Wyatt admired his brother's strengths and abilities and Chris remebers Daniel's kindness toward others. Paige loved her nephew because of all the qualities his has and how much reminded of Phoebe and Piper. Suddenly, their memories of Daniel disappeared from their hearts and mind.
Daniel was raised in a Different Dimension for six years and he was trained in the cruelist of the martial art techniques, espcially the dangerous Heavenly Arts and the deadly Dragon's Palm. He secretly conjured his own technique through his sword, made of metal that is stronger than any metal on Earth or the Magic World. In fact, his technique was so strong, it ripped and revealed an escape portal... to Earth!
Daniel escaped and the portal suddenly closed behind him. It was strange to see the city. Everyone stared him because of his ragged clothes. He barely remembered the faces of his family but he knew that they were here... and he must find them
There was no place to sleep at night. He slept in the tree and he overheard fighting and commotion. He saw two male figures and a middle aged woman fighting a demon. They threw vials at the leviathen, but it charged at them at full might. Daniel itched for a fight. He raised a sash over his nose and mouth. He jumped down and struck the creature with his Straight sword. The demon instantly died.
The three thanked him. Daniel suddenly realized that these people are his family, Paige, Wyatt and Chris. He lifted off his sash and welcomed them. He added: "Do you know a person with the name Daniel?"
"No, sorry," answered Wyatt.
Sadden and hurt, Daniel turned away to hide his tears. He leapt away into the night, leaving his memory wiped family in an awkward mood.
If we hold on together,
I know our drams will never die
Dreams pull us through to forever
with clouds rolling by,
for you and I....
The Land Before Time
To be continued....
