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Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 21:57:00 GMT -5
Author: oddball7
The demon wouldn’t blow up. If that wasn’t bad enough, a darklighter showed up. The weekend wasn’t going as planned. Everyone was back for a little family get together. The darklighter pulled out his bow. Piper was trying to freeze the demon. She was too busy to notice that Leo wasn’t able to orb out, and that the darklighter now had an arrow in the bow. The demon took out an atheme. The darklighter aimed. Piper was cornered at the middle of the stairs. The darklighter shot the arrow. The demon threw the atheme. They both tried to get away, but it was too late.
Edited by: TrojanPrincess6975 at: 10/4/04 4:20 pm PiperMGrl Posts: 5248 (6/1/04 5:57 pm) Reply Re: Life Can't Get Any Better, Right? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- wow..........cliffhanger in the first post is soo mean!! u have to update this soon trojan Ahabslilstarbuck42 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 577 (6/1/04 5:57 pm) Reply Re: Life Can't Get Any Better, Right? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- OMG! sounds really good hope you continue soon!! 4th Charmed One Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 2097 (6/1/04 9:38 pm) Reply Re: Life Can't Get Any Better, Right? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- UH OH who is dieing now?? lol charmed2008 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 1070 (6/1/04 9:58 pm) Reply ezSupporter
Re: Life Can't Get Any Better, Right? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- That was really good start! UPdate soon! oddball7 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 593 (6/1/04 10:10 pm) Reply ezSupporter Re: Life Can't Get Any Better, Right? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ....
update?...
please? TrojanPrincess6975 Posts: 8928 (6/17/04 1:34 pm) Reply Re: Life Can't Get Any Better, Right? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Phoebe and Paige walked into the house. “Hel...” Paige trailed off, as she saw her oldest sister and brother-in-law, lying on the stairs and floor. They both froze where they were, too stunned to move. Jason walked in a few minutes later. “What’s wrong?”<br> Phoebe moved out of the way, so her husband could see what was wrong. Jason was silent for a few minutes, and then whispered, “How did that happen?”<br> “We’re not sure. We walked in, and there they were,” Phoebe said, through tears. Jason put his arms around Phoebe, holding her tight. Paige regained movement in her legs, and walked up to Leo first, since he was the closest. As she got closer, she noticed the arrow. “Oh my god!”<br> “What is it, Paige?” Jason asked. “Darklighter,” she said, plainly. Phoebe ran to her, and took out the arrow. “This…he’s…” but she couldn’t say what she wanted. Jason went up to the middle of the stairs, to where Piper was. He slowly, carefully, took out the atheme, and laid it down besides them. “I don’t think a darklighter was the only thing here.”<br> “What do you mean?” Paige said, looking up at them. Jason held up the atheme. “Oh,” Phoebe said, trying to control her tears. PiperMGrl Posts: 5608 (6/17/04 2:10 pm) Reply Re: Life Can't Get Any Better, Right? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- so omg, are they dead?! oddball7 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 944 (6/18/04 2:07 am) Reply ezSupporter Re: Life Can't Get Any Better, Right? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- they're... they're... they're dead? nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo this is charmed they have to find some way back to life!!!!!!! i luv drew Posts: 291 (6/26/04 10:04 pm) Reply life can't get any better right? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- wiat..they're dead?interesting..*strokes imananary beard* nope.i can't come up with anything..you have my attention completly.must..read..next..chapter oddball7 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 1220 (7/10/04 5:57 pm) Reply ezSupporter Re: life can't get any better right? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- trojan... u must continue this fic.... pleeeeeeaaaaseeeee i'm begging u!!!! marysmary Posts: 1852 (7/11/04 12:00 pm) Reply Re: life can't get any better right? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Whoa!
Jason,holding athame..Will he kill Phoebe?lol
Please don't tell me that Chris and wyatt are gone.. TrojanPrincess6975 Posts: 9755 (7/13/04 2:40 pm) Reply Re: life can't get any better right? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- *LIGHT BULB* Good idea, MARY....*laughs *
I'll continue writing.... and u'll find out more later. TrojanPrincess6975 Posts: 9788 (7/20/04 2:38 pm) Reply Now What? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The kids were at the park. The boys were throwing a football around, while the two sisters were sitting on the green grass. This was one of the few times everyone was together. Daniel and his parents lived in New York City. Peyton never really hung out with her siblings. Prue tried to be with Peyton, but the older sister didn't want to be with her 12 year old sister. The boys had basketball together, which seemed to be their only thing in common. Wyatt had his eyes on his sisters, but nothing more. He prefered football and basketball over family. Chris and Prudence were semi-close. If she wanted to do something, she always went to him or Piper. Peyton was watching the clouds, when her oldest brother's voice cut through her tain of thoughts, " Let's go back. It's getting late." Prue got up, off the grass, happily. Daniel came up to Peyton, extending his hand. She saw his hand, grabbed it, and let her older cousin help her up. Chris and Wyatt smiled at the youngest, watching her skip and flip around. As they turned onto their street, everyone was in an ok mood, ready and waiting for Piper's fab. cooking. When they reached the house, Wyatt noticed the front door opened, and wasn't sure what to think. None of them were prepared for the sight ahead of them. oddball7 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 1498 (7/28/04 1:27 am) Reply ezSupporter Re: Now What? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- awwww poor kids.... but hopefully they will be able to save their family!!!! update again trojan!!!!! TrojanPrincess6975 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 13355 (9/29/04 10:31 pm) Reply Re: Now What? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- As the kids entered the house, the air shifted around everyone, making the adults turn to look at the five. Wyatt got angry, fast. Chris stood, looking from one parent to the other, dumb-folded. Prudence’s eyes started to well up with tears. Peyton fainted, and Daniel caught her from behind. The room was silent for what seemed like hours when in reality, it was only a couple of minutes. Peyton flickered her eyes open, just as a warlock blinked into the Manor, besides Wyatt. Excalibur appeared into the oldest’s hands in less than a second. The warlock turned to the blond haired boy. The teen swung at the dark haired warlock, as he stepped back, dodging Wyatt and Excalibur. This kept up for another couple of minutes. Paige was down, next to Phoebe and Jason. When her nephew and the warlock started fighting, Paige took a step towards the two. Phoebe put her hand out, trying to block her, whispering, “No. He’s very angry, Paige. If you try to get involved, you’ll get hurt.”<br> Paige stepped back and watched, ready to strike if need be. The warlock formed an energy ball and threw it at Wyatt. Before Phoebe or Paige could even think about it, Chris tked it right back, hitting the warlock smack in the stomach. The oldest took the chance, slashing the evil being right in the chest, vanquishing him. oddball7 Global User Posts: 2589 (10/3/04 5:59 pm) Reply ezSupporter
Re: Now What? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- gooooo chris!!!!! Way to kick some rear end!!! But oh thats so sad.... so is Paige and Phoebe still alive? But Piper and Leo and Jason are dead?
Sry its been awhile since I read it so I coudln't remember.
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Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 21:57:40 GMT -5
Phoebe Halliwell rushed down the stairs of the manor, and into the kitchen. She greeted Paige, who was sitting at the table.
Phoebe sat down with her, and then looked at the table. Something was wrong, terribly wrong. “Paige, where is the coffee?!”<br> Paige looked up from the morning paper, and gave her sister a sheepish smile. “I uh…..I don’t think the coffee machine works anymore.”<br> “You broke our coffee machine?”<br> “It’s not my fault. I really tried, it’s just…Piper normally makes the coffee around here. Because she is staying at the magic school, I wasn’t sure what to do.”<br> Phoebe examined her sister’s face, which contained a genuinely guilty look.
“Okay, I have an idea.” Phoebe digs a twenty out of her purse. “Chris!! Chris, I know you hear me!”<br> Chris orbs in. “What Aunt Pheebs? It’s 7:30 on a Saturday morning.”<br> “You’re not busy, are you?”<br> Chris scans his Aunt’s face quizzically. “Did a demon attack? If you need any help….
Phoebe cuts him off. “Not exactly, but Paige and I do need a favor.”<br> “What?”<br> “Can you go to Starbucks, and Get two Cappuccinos?”<br> Chris stares at his Aunts. “You woke me up this early so I could buy you two coffee? I’m your whitelighter, and I am supposed to be protecting you, not doing your chores.
Paige grins at him. “Well actually, we would have gone ourselves. It’s just we are so out of it without our coffee, that we would have probably hurt ourselves going out. So….in a way, you are protecting us.”<br> Chris raises his eyebrows at his aunt. “That is a really sorry excu….
Again, Phoebe cuts him off. “There’s a free coffee involved.
Chris waits about 5 seconds, than speaks. “Fine, but you owe me.”<br> Chris orbs out. _____________________________________________________ Underworld
Wyatt is staring at a whirlpool of water that is showing him the events taking place. He grins as he sees Chris orb out for coffee. “Still fixing their petty little problems, little brother? Don’t worry, soon enough that will be the least of your troubles.”<br>Wyatt flips through the future BOS, and finds a page that tweaks his interest. With a flip of his wrist, the vanquished demon appears before him. “Hello, Jeremy. I need a favor.”<br> __________________________________________________ Meanwhile at the manor
Phoebe, Paige and Chris are still sitting at the kitchen table. All three of them have coffee in their hands. Phoebe stands up, and grabs her keys. “Ok, I should probably go. Piper gave me a list of things I should buy before she has the baby. Do either of you care to go?”<br> Paige looks up at her sister, than makes up an excuse. “Well actually, I should probably be cleaning out Wyatt’s old nursery.”<br> Phoebe glances at Chris. “Don’t look at me, I have to check on mom at the magic school.” With that, Chris orbs out.
Phoebe rolls her eyes, and then picks up her keys. “Well okay, I should probably be back in a couple of hours. Do you need anything while I’m gone?
“Not that I can think of. Do you need me to orb you there?”<br> “No, I can take my car.”<br> Paige walks her sister to the door. “By honey. I’ll see you later.”<br> “Bye.” Phoebe opens the large, wood door, and heads to her car. ______________________________________________________________________-
Police office
Cole is setting up his desk, and humming a tune. Daryl looks up at him. “Could you please stop that?”<br> Cole stops his humming, than looks up at his new partner, and passes him a sheepish grin. “Sorry, but if you don’t mind me asking, what’s got you so heated this morning?”<br> Daryl gets up, and grabs his coat from the rack. “Nothing important. We have to go; it’s our turn for the morning shift.”<br> “Finally, some action.” Cole grabs his coat also, and follows his new partner out the door.
Both cops head to the car, and fasten their seat belts. They start to make their morning round of things, and Daryl finally breaks the silence between them. “Sorry man, I shouldn’t have snapped at you this morning.”<br> Cole smiles again, as he tries to win over Daryl’s appreciation. “No big I………<br> Cole is left speechless as he catches a glimpse of his true love. Phoebe, he thought. She’s still as beautiful, and as vibrant as ever. I liked her hair better long, he thought with a chuckle. She still had a glow about her……
Daryl interrupted Cole’s train of thought, as he swerved to a park. “Looks like we have trouble, partner. Let’s Go!”<br> Cole jumped out of the car, as his attention was drawn to a Purse snatcher. The guy was a big hefty man, and had to be at least “6”3. The lady he snatched the purse from was on older woman, with no chance against him.
“You take the left, I’ll take the right!” Daryl yelled at Cole! ____________________________________________________
Meanwhile….
Phoebe burst after the man who just stole an elderly woman’s purse. She’d thrown off her sandals, since they would just slow her down, and was catching up to the thief.
“Get away from me witch!” the guy screamed at Phoebe.
“Oh you have no idea.” Phoebe muttered under her breath.
Phoebe glanced out of the corners of her eyes, and saw Daryl and another cop about thirty feet away. The thief was rounding up a corner, and Phoebe knew this would be her last chance to stop him. In one jump, she leapt on the man’s back, and tumbled him to the ground. He tried to fight off the woman who was half his size, but it was no use. He had one last resort. His fingers slipped into his pocket, and grabbed the flip knife firmly in his hand. In one quick thrust, it was heading strait to her stomach. The knife stopped, and slipped right out of the man’s grasp.
“Not so fast, slick guy.” Cole said as he twisted the man’s arm to pull him up. “You are under arrest for thievery, and……
Daryl walked up, out of breath. He had one glance at Phoebe, and anger sizzled in his eyes. He didn’t have the time or patience to deal with her. Daryl stopped Cole in mid sentence.
“I’ll take the thief, and the lady’s purse, so I can return it to her. Why don’t you draw up a police report on what Miss Halliwell has to say?” Daryl said the last part of his statement with a glare towards Phoebe.
“Sure,” Cole said. He shoved the thief towards Daryl, and handed him the lady’s purse. Daryl headed off to the police car, leaving Cole and Phoebe alone.
“So,” Cole said while staring at Phoebe. “You want to tell me what’s got my partner so annoyed with the looks of you?”<br> “Uh….” Phoebe stared at the broad shouldered man. For the first time she noticed his strong build, and the way amusement was tugging at the ends of his smile. “It’s a long story….I…wait, your Daryl’s partner? He works alone.”<br> “I just started today,” Cole said with a smirk. “Now, Miss Halliwell…..
“Phoebe.” She interrupted.
“Phoebe,” he said. “Do you want to tell me what’s got a woman half that man’s size chasing after him to get another woman’s purse back?” Cole knew the answer to that, he mused. But what was being a cop without having a little fun now and then?
“I….Uh.” Phoebe stuttered at Cole again. It was then that he took off his sunglasses, and stared at her with these brilliant eyes. They were a bright, vibrant, color. They looked so pure, as if she could see through them. Almost trusting……
“Phoebe, Hello? Are you listening to me?”<br> “Uh, yeah.” Phoebe said as her mind stumbled back to earth. “I um, I like to help People. I know how to protect myself, and I know how to look after others who don’t.”<br> “Shouldn’t you leave that business to the Cops?” Cole asked.
“Not when they never would have tackled that guy.” Phoebe said with a smile.
“Point taken.” Cole said. Her hair may have been cut, but that’s about the only thing that’s changed since I last saw her, Cole mused.
“Well, Phoebe. Would you allow me to reward you with lunch for your good deed?” Cole said this on impulse, not thinking about her answer.
“Well, I don’t think…..” Phoebe was about to refuse his offer when she looked up in his eyes once more. There it was again, the trust……
“So…” Cole prompted. “Okay, I’ll go on one condition.” Said Phoebe.
“And what would that be?” Cole asked.
“You give me your name.” Phoebe announced.
“Alright.” Cole said in half a heartbeat. “The name’s Phillips, Michael Phillips.”<br>
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Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 21:58:15 GMT -5
Part Four By: Aurora Nighstar
Darryl put the perpetrator in the police car and wandered back over to Phoebe and Cole. He called in the crime. He glared coldly at Phoebe. "So you got all you need?" he asked his new partner.
"Yeah, I think so," he looked at Phoebe's face. His desire to be with her just one more time welled up inside of him like a virus he could not control.
Darryl glanced at his watch. "Almost lunch time and I had not even had breakfast yet," Darryl noted.
"How about we take an early lunch?" Cole suggested.
"Good idea," Darryl agreed. "Lunch is on me. Chinese food!"
"How did you know I liked Chinese food?" Cole asked.
"Oh, I called your previous employer," Darryl responded with a grin.
Phoebe herself didn't have much of a breakfast either, just some coffee. An early lunch sounded good to her. "Chinese food sounds great," Phoebe agreed.
"What! Now you are just inviting yourself along? Unbelievable!" Darryl assumed sounding disgusted.
"No, Darryl, see..." Phoebe started in.
"Ah, actually I invited her along," Cole interrupted.
"But you are welcome to come, too, Daryl," Phoebe suggested. Cole forced a smile even though he desired to be alone with Phoebe.
"No way!" Darryl declared. "I told you; I am through with you people!"
"You people?" Cole muttered to himself.
"I will meet you after lunch," Darryl stormed off to a nearby restaurant.
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Cole took Phoebe to a very classy Chinese restaurant. Phoebe looked around noting the romantic atmosphere, candlelight, fresh cut flowers, soft music, and even a simulated water fall. The waitress was a true Chinese, who even spoke the language.
Phoebe didn't know what to say, so she tried to strike up some small talk while they waited for their food. "How long have you been in San Francisco?" Phoebe asked.
Cole paused and thought for a moment. He remembered he had an out-of-state drivers license and it was only his first day on the job. "Only just moved here," Cole stated.
"Pretty impressive," Phoebe said.
"What is?" Cole asked.
"You manage to pick the best Chinese restaurant in San Francisco and you only just got here," Phoebe said.
"Really," Cole forced a smile.
"Yeah, the Bay Mirror did an opinion poll," Phoebe said. "This place won. The paper's food critic also gave this place rave reviews!"
"Wait, you are Phoebe, Ask Phoebe?" Cole already knew but he desired to move past his mistake of supposedly being new in town and yet he already knew the best Chinese place in San Francisco.
"That would be me," Phoebe smiled with pride. The waitress presented platters filled with popular Chinese appetizers including beef teriyaki, egg rolls, spare ribs, crab Rangoon.
~ Perfect timing ~ Cole thought to himself as another thought struck Cole "I would like an order of Pork fried rice, Beef Teriyaki and sweet and sour pork, and egg rolls to go," Cole told the waitress. The waitress nodded. "Actually it was my uncle that told me about this place. He can't get around much anymore; so I will pick him up a little something."
"Wow, that is so thoughtful of you," Phoebe said. She smiled and gazed in his eyes.
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Wyatt watched over his whirlpool. "Good boy, Cole, even ordering an extra meal to add creditability for your story," Wyatt grinned.
"He will betray you," the Seer warned Wyatt. "He loves Phoebe more then anything!"
"If he betrays me, I will simply kill him; besides, I have enough leverage over him," Wyatt shifted the vision in his whirlpool to Cole's father.
Cole's father sat scrunched up in a prison too small to even consider sitting up. His hands were bound in cord that delivered low voltage electric shocks when he tried to move too much.
With a wave of the hand, Wyatt returned to watching Cole's date.
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The waitress returned with a bill and two fortune cookies. Cole opened his cookie and read his fortune to himself. As those words struck him he just felt the entire universe was laughing at him. He gave Phoebe a meek smile.
"What does is say?" Phoebe asked playfully.
"Oh, nothing," Cole said as he started to scrunch the paper.
"Oh, come on, let me see it," Phoebe smiled at him. She grabbed for the crinkled fortune and read it. "Anything that is built on a lie is destined to collapse."
"I don't believe in that stuff, do you?" Cole grinned at her.
"That is not the point. It is just for fun," Phoebe smiled back almost seductively. She briefly wondered if he was hiding something. Then she looked in those brilliant eyes again. She knew she would trust him.
Phoebe cracked open her fortune cookie. "What does yours say?" Cole asked. He remained calm, but was desperate to change the subject.
"When there is Trust, no Proof is necessary. Without Trust, no Proof is enough," Phoebe read hers. Phoebe's fortune caused an unsettling feeling in the pit of Cole's stomach.
"I should probably get back to work," Cole told Phoebe.
"Yeah, me too," Phoebe agreed.
Cole looked Phoebe deep in the eye. "Can I see you again, soon?" Cole smiled.
Phoebe felt almost entranced by those eyes. "Yes, definitely," Phoebe agreed to a second date.
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Chris, baby Wyatt and Paige were hanging around the conservatory. “Since this is going to be one of your last nights here, what would you like to do?”<br> “How about more demon hunting,” Chris suggested.
Paige rolled her eyes. “Look, you already got the one that is after Wyatt,” Paige declared.
“I am not so sure about that,” Chris added nervously.
Paige ignored his comment. “Where this is going to be one of your last nights here, you will loosen up and have a little fun for once!”<br> “Is that an order?” Chris asked sounding a bit shocked.
“As a matter of fact it is,” Paige declared.
A few moments later Phoebe returned home, she was smiling. “Isn’t it a beautiful day?” she said blissfully.
“What are you so happy about? Did you get laid or something,” Paige bluntly asked Phoebe. Chris sighed as he was a bit put off by Paige’s bluntness.
“Can’t a girl just be happy,” Phoebe positively glowed.
“Oh come on, you can tell us. What is his name?” Paige asked.
“Michael Phillips,” Phoebe said. “He is Darryl’s new partner.”<br> “Are we getting along with Darryl again,” Paige asked.
“Nooo!! We are not,” Phoebe declared with an odd lack of concern in her voice.
“I see and this new partner of his,” Paige said.
“Ummm, yummy!” Phoebe said. A few moments later, Jeremy appeared before them.
“Phoebe, look out,” Paige yelled.
Phoebe turned around and kicked Jeremy in the stomach. “Oh my god, we need the power of three on this one,” Phoebe declared.
“Chris, get Piper,” Paige yelled.
Chris orbed out. Jeremy stood up and tossed a fireball at Phoebe. Paige grabbed her and orbed her to the attic. Jeremy blinked in after them. “Looks like you are one down on the power of three!” Jeremy declared.
Chris and Piper orbed in. “Better count again,” Piper mocked him. “The power of three will set us free! The power of three will set us free.”
Paige and Phoebe joined in. “The power of three will set us free!”<br> Jeremy vanished in fire and smoke. “How did you know what spell to use?” Chris asked.
“We already vanquished him,” Phoebe explained.
“Yeah, twice actually,” Piper stated.
“What? How did he come back?” Paige wondered.
“The first time was when a demon got a hold of the book,” Piper said.
“This time, I have no idea!” Phoebe added.
“But we are going to find out,” Piper and Phoebe said at the same time.
“I think I will take a little trip to the underworld and find out,” Chris said.
“No Chris, you already did your job,” Piper said. “You are not taking any more risks!” Chris already orbed out. Piper dropped her arms in fraustration.
“He’s got the Halliwell ear,” Paige said. Phoebe snickered at that remark.
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The real Michael Phillips was now starting to regret missing breakfast this morning. He had searched this place he had been dumped and could not find any way out. He had a room with a bed it in it, a mini-kitchen, and a bathroom. Electricity seemed to work, but there was no phones, no CBs, nothing that could be used for communication. He continued to search for a way out.
Cole appeared in the kitchen. He made a table setting for one presenting the Chinese food he had picked up from the restaurant. He went and found Michael still searching for a way out.
“Where am I?” Michael asked Cole.
“This is an old bomb shelter,” Cole stated. “Don’t waste your energy looking for a way out. There isn’t one.”<br> “There must be, if there isn’t how did you get in,” he asked.
“I think you already know the answer to that,” Cole responded.
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Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 21:59:11 GMT -5
“Yeah,” Michael nodded. “Why are you here? To kill me?”<br> “If I wanted you dead, you already would be,” Cole snapped back. “I just thought you might be hungry,” he led Michael to the kitchen.
Michael wondered what kind of slop he would bring him. He looked and couldn’t believe it. “You, you got me Chinese food!” Michael exclaimed. “I love Chinese food!”<br> “I know,” Cole said. “Enjoy, I will have the fridge stocked for you tomorrow!” Cole shimmered out.
Part 5 By: Jediya
“Piper would you relax!” Phoebe said, trying to calm down her irate sister. “It’s not that bad.”<br> “Not that bad? Not that bad!!!” Piper all but yelled, throwing her hands in the air, “Phoebe, my ex-warlock boyfriend has been resurrected again and you’re still on a power outage!”<br> Paige frowned and looked quizzically at her eldest sister, “Whoa, wait a minute. Ex-warlock boyfriend!?!”
“Don’t even go there!”<br> “Piper…”
“Don’t Piper me Phoebe. I’m moving back and that’s that!”<br> At that moment, the argument was interrupted by the familiar sound of someone orbing into the room. The blue and white lights merged together and eventually took the form of Leo.
“I just heard what happened,” Leo said, concern etched across his face, “Are you all ok?”<br> “We’re fine, but Piper thinks she should move back in,” Phoebe supplied.
“It’s true Leo,” Piper said, as the elder turned his attention on to her, “I need to be here if things like Jeremy are happening.”<br> “But Piper, you’re only an orb away…” Paige interjected.
“But what if Chris, Leo or you couldn’t get me in time…”
“Honey,” Leo spoke softly, “you should stay at the school. It’s safer for you and little Chris”<br> “Ooo, Cruel playing the little Chris card!” Piper huffed, knowing she had just lost her argument.
“Where is Chris anyway?” Leo asked, just realising that the future version of his youngest son was missing.
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Back in the underworld, Wyatt looked disgusted at the revelation that Jeremy had been vanquished so effortlessly.
“Urgh! What a pathetic excuse for a warlock. What an easy vanquish – Oh well!” Wyatt shrugged and turned his attention to the future version of the Halliwells’ Book of Shadows. “Let’s see, what else do we have in here?”<br> He flicked through a couple of pages until he found a particular one that held some interest to him.
“Hmm…could be promising.” He waved his hand and a man appeared in front of him. “Welcome back to the land of the living Lucas!”<br> The man, Lucas, looked down at himself and then back up at the person who had resurrected him.
“I have a task for you, “Wyatt began, pleased that he had Lucas’s attention, “it involves a little revenge on the ones who vanquished you!”<br> Lucas’s eyes clouded over with anger and hate and then he grinned evilly. “I think I like the sound of this task.”<br> “Good. Now they’ll be seven people at the Halliwell Manor. Give me a while to set it all up and then you can do your thing!” Wyatt said with one of his own evil grins before disappearing.
“I look forward to it!” Lucas added darkly after Wyatt left.
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“So let me get this straight,” Sheridan said, looking at the tall figure before her with a hint of fear and scepticism, “you want Morris and Phillips AKA Turner to be at the Halliwells’?”<br> “That’s right,” the figure replied, keeping well in the shadows so as not to be seen by anyone else, “I need them there as soon as possible!”<br> “I’ll see what I can do,” Sheridan replied, turning to leave.
“No Sheridan!” the figure growled, stepping out of the shadow slightly to reveal long unruly blonde hair and cold blue eyes, “you’ll do what I tell you to!” With that said the figure disappeared from where he had come from.
“Yes…boss!”<br> Sheridan exited the empty office and walked over to Darryl’s work desk.
“Morris…Phillips,” she said in greeting, earning a nod from Darryl and a smirk from Phillips/Cole. “Chief needs you to head over to the Halliwells’, “she began, the lie rolling easily off of her tongue, “apparently they want a further statement from Phoebe Halliwell.”<br> Sheridan had Darryl’s full attention now, he looked at her with an expression akin to disgust or anger – it was hard to tell which.
“You’re kidding right?” he cried, “Can’t someone else do it?”<br> Sheridan had been expecting the question and so had her answer ready and waiting. “It was yours and Phillips’ case Morris!”<br> Phillips/Cole got up from his chair and moved to the edge of the desk next to Sheridan. “Come on Darryl…buddy,” he said, “if it bugs you that much, I’ll do the talking.”<br> “Oh I know why you wanna do the talking alright!” Darryl retorted, earning a grin from his colleague who was looking forward to seeing Phoebe – again.
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Wyatt nodded in satisfaction as he watched Sheridan’s handy work in the whirlpool. He then turned away and waved his hand again, summoning yet another ‘dead’ demon.
“Andras I believe?” the demon nodded slowly, “I have something in mind for you! You infect people through their anger correct?”<br> “That’s right!” Andras confirmed, “I turn their anger into rage. Rage continues until they commit an act of violence!”<br> “Excellent…Once Lucas infects them; you can focus on the one emitting anger!” *I hope that person will be you little brother!* Wyatt added silently.
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At that moment, Chris returned to the Halliwell Manor. Even before he was fully formed, he could hear the sound of his mother’s angry voice.
“You! Next time you listen to what I say!” Piper yelled as Chris orbed in.
“Piper…” Phoebe warned her sister gently and then turned her attention to her nephew, “What did you find out Chris?”<br> Well…” Chris began, trying to ignore the daggers Piper was throwing at him, “there’s word of a powerful force of evil that has risen up in the underworld.”<br> “I haven’t heard anything” Leo interjected rather indignantly, gently placing baby Wyatt in his playpen as he had been trying to quiet him down during the sisters’ argument. “How can this go unnoticed by the Elders?”<br> “Leo, think about what you just said,” Paige said.
“Oh…right!”<br> Chris rolled his eyes, “Anyway….”<br> Just then there was a knock at the door and Chris groaned, not happy at being interrupted again.
“I’ll get it” Paige said, walking out of the room to answer the door.
“Powerful force of evil?” Piper spoke thoughtfully, “That settles it…I’m moving back!”<br> They all heard the door slam shut and then Paige walked into the room followed by Darryl and a handsome brown haired man.
“Pheebs, apparently they need to ask you some questions,” Paige said, indicating that ‘they’ were the two cops, “referring to a statement you made earlier.”<br> “Oh…well ok then,” Phoebe said, rather distractedly as she looked dreamily at Darryl’s partner.
“Just so you know I’m not thrilled about this” Darryl spoke, anger evident in his voice.
Piper looked like she was going to say something but was stopped by the sudden arrival of Lucas.
“What the hell?” Darryl cried, as both he and his partner went straight for their guns.
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“Oh don’t worry,” Lucas said, his eyes flashing with hate as he grinned evilly, “I’m not here to hurt anyone!”<br> “Lucas?” Piper and Phoebe cried at the same time.
“You err know him?” Phillips/Cole asked.
“Umm….well, more like knew…” Phoebe explained.
“I have the perfect gifts for all of you!” As he said this, Lucas flicked his hands sending balls of coloured light towards all present. Six found their mark but the seventh, which had been heading for baby Wyatt, was deflected as the toddler activated his shield. The deflected sin ball hit Phoebe, who was standing right near the playpen.
“Have fun!” Lucas laughed as he disappeared from the Manor.
“You have got to be kidding me?” Piper cried, throwing her hands up in the air.
“What?” Chris and Paige asked both equally confused as each other.
“Yeah, what?” Darryl added.
Phoebe suddenly moved towards Cole, “Umm….Michael, would you come with me for a minute?”<br> “Err sure,” Cole replied, shaking his head in slight disorientation as he followed Phoebe into another room and out of earshot.
“That, was Lucas…the guy we vanquished who infected us with some of the seven deadly sins!” Piper snapped angrily. Leo muttered an ‘Oh yeah’ before sitting down on the sofa.
“Are you telling us that’s what just happened?” Chris asked in bewilderment.
From his position on the sofa Leo spoke up. “Unfortunately yes. It looks like all seven of us – including Darryl’s partner, have been infected.”<br> “Great. See this is why I didn’t want to get involved with you people again” Darryl groaned.
“Wait a minute,” Paige said, “how do we know which sin we got?”<br> “The sins are drawn to our predispositions,” Leo explained, “So, what had we all been feeling lately?”<br> “Oh god…” Chris moaned loudly.
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“They’re infected,” Lucas announced, on his return to the underworld, “You’ll know in a little while who got what.”<br> “Shouldn’t you already know?” Wyatt asked impatiently.
“I threw them all at once…I only know the ones whose emotions were near to the surface.”<br> “So…”
“The Elder wants to have a break from ‘work’. He’s probably been infected by Sloth” Wyatt nodded, so his father had gotten sloth once again.
“Now Turner, His desire for his new girlfriend was unbelievable. It was almost suffocating – he most definitely got hit with Lust!”<br> “Interesting…” Wyatt mused, “Good work Lucas. Now as soon as they all take affect, I can initiate stage two of my plan.”<br>
“Phoebe, what’s going on?” Cole asked, trying to dislodge the fuzziness in his head, “What just happened?”<br> “I’m not too sure,” Phoebe replied, rubbing he left temple.
“You’re not sure?”<br> “I…” Phoebe began but stopped suddenly, for she had just seen the man before her glow pink for a split second and he wavered slightly.
“Are you ok?”<br> “Me? Fine, now you’re here and we’re alone” He said and then grabbed Phoebe, pulling her close to him and kissed her passionately.
“Wyatt, honey…you can put the shield down now. It’s…” Piper stopped talking as she felt a strange heat go right through her body and she glowed a soft reddish hue.
“This is ridiculous!” Darryl cried, “Obviously I’m not infected with these sin things.”<br> “Oh of course, cause your invulnerable to sin,” Piper bit out.
“Hey I don’t have to listen to you…”
“Err hello! Who are the experts on everything magical?” Piper yelled, her raised voice causing Wyatt to begin whimpering softly, “Wyatt. Honey. Shush.”<br> “You’re experts alright…at getting me into trouble!”<br> “And we do our damn best to get you out of it! Wyatt SHUT UP!!!”<br> “Hey!” Leo whined lazily from his place on the sofa, where he was now laying flat on his back, “Do you mind keeping it down please?”<br> “Well I guess we know who got sloth huh Leo?” Paige said, as she exited the kitchen, carrying a plate with a large sandwich on it.
“Yeah and anger,” Chris added, as he stood watching the argument between Piper and Darryl. *Why is she only getting angry at Wyatt?* Chris thought to himself, *Typical, he always gets the attention!*
“Wyatt quit showing off!” Chris said, “Just 'cause you got a shield, don’t mean you have to flaunt it!”<br> “Leo get up! Now!” Piper growled at the lazy Elder.
Leo stretched and yawned, “In a little bit honey!”<br> “Paige, what are you doing?” Piper questioned her younger sister, as she bit into the sandwich.
“Wha’ I vas ‘ungry!” Paige replied with a mouthful of food.
“Helloooo Gluttony!”<br> They all look in the direction of the hall as they heard the front door slam.
“Darryl’s gone,” Chris stated the obvious as he continued to glare at Wyatt, who still had his shield up.
“Oh great! Could this day get any better?” Piper growled angrily.
Suddenly Andras appeared before the group.
“Well well, someone’s certainly angry.” He said and conjured a ball of light letting it fly at Piper. As it hit her he disappeared.
“Wha’ Jus’ ‘appen’d?” Paige asked between mouthfuls.
Part Six By: HollyHalliwell
Paige looks in confusion, after Andras Dissapeared. "Ah, what just happened?"
"That was Andras. Can't these fricken frackin demons choose some other day to come back to life? But no, they choose today, of all days."
Leo looks up from the TV. "Well that's too bad honey."
Piper looks at him with pure anger. "Too bad? You did not just tell me too bad! Leo, I am a pregnant Halliwell. Plus, I have been infected with sin. On top of all that, Andras just infected me with more anger! You know what, i am sick and tired of you!" Piper gestures with her hand and Blows Leo up.
Leo's orbs reappear. "Hey Piper. That...." Leo is cut off when Piper blows him up again.
"Now for you." Piper looks over at Paige. "You need to learn to get some control like I have. That means no more food!" Piper blows up Paige's sandwich.
Paige looks up, startled at the remains of her sandwich. "Hey, that was not very nice."
Piper looks up. "Well, I am not feeling like a very nice person." She looks up at Chris, Paige, and Leo. Leo flinches, thinking she will blow him up again."I want all of you out of this room. Now! I need some time to talk to Wyatt."
"Okay fine, your a meanie anyway." Paige leaves the room.
Piper looks up at Leo. "I said go!"
Leo frowns. "But pumpkin, I'm too tired to orb out. Just let me finish watching the game."
Piper looks disgusted. "I said go! before I blow you up again!" Leo orbs out quickly, not wanting that to happen.
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Piper looks up at Chris. "Why aren't you gone? I said I needed some alone time with Wyatt."
Chris raises his hands. "Typical! Wyatt is always getting all of the attention! Haven't you noticed that I am starting to feel like a neglected child,mom?" Chris trys to hold in his tears.
Piper laughs. "Like I really care. Now leave!" Chris orbs out crying. Piper looks down at Wyatt, who still has his sheild up. "It's just you and me, little boy, and let me tell you, I am sick and tired about your complaining. You may not be able to talk much yet, but don't think I never catch you rolling your little Halliwell eyes at me! now it's time for some Payback!" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Manor hallway
Phoebe and Cole are still kissing passionately in the hallway. Finally, Phoebe pulls back. "Micheal, listen to me. me and my sister are witches who fight demons. You have been stucken by a sin ball, called lust...
Cole interupts her. "I don't care who or what you are but I love you, and I want you."
Phoebe smiles. "Are you serious? It's so nice to hear you say that."
Cole nods, as he kisses her neck, "Yep."
Phoebe pulls back again. "But this will have to wait, because I have been infected with greed, and I'm lookin to succeed. Chow!" Phoebe waves as she leaves the house, and heads towards her Bay Mirror job.
"I'll see you again Phoebe." cole mutters this to himself, as he shimmers out.
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Later that day, Phoebe was looking up at Elise. "What do you mean I need to tone it down? I am your prize employee for this newspaper, so I do deserve the right for the best pay, office, and advertisement. Why is that wrong?!"
Elise looks at her. "Because you are being just plain greedy! I admit you are good for this company, but if I have to replace you, I will. Ever since you walked in today, you have been acting like you owned the whole darn newspaper!"
"Maybe I should!" Phoebe storms from her office, ignoring Elise's demands. 'I'm to good for them.' she thought to herself, as she walked out of the building. She climbed into her car. 'I desrve better, and I will have it.'
Phoebe stopped her car, when she got to an ATM. It was on a really busy city street, but Phoebe didn't care. On the walk there, she caught something out of the corner of her eye. It drew her attention. 'A 100 dollar bill,just laying on the street.' she thought, 'I better grab it before someone else gets their greedy eyes on it.' was her next thought. She started to walk in that direction, when she noticed something else from her other eye. A little girl was running into the street, and a truck was heading strait toward her. 'oh no.' was what came to mind. Then she thought of the 100 dollar bill, lonely and scared, in the other direction. She had a very important decision to make fast. 'Either go get my 100, or save a little girl from death.' Phoebe started to make her way to the bill, when her conscience tugged at her. 'oh fine' in a split second, Pheoebe rushed to the girl, and pushed her out of the trucks way.
They landed on the side of the street, and people started to crowd. Phoebe glowed, as the sin ball was released.
"You saved that girl's life!" said an old man.
"oh it was nothing." said Phoebe. Then a thought ocurred to her. Micheal. She told Micheal what she really was. What would she do? "I got to go." Phoebe said as she rushed to her car. She had to go see Micheal, and straiten out this mess. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Police office
Phoebe comes rushing into the room, panting from the lack of breath. 'oh, i'm in big trouble' she thought. 'Not only did I tell Micheal about me being a witch. Him, Daryl, and the rest of my family are also infected with sin. On top of that, vanquished demons are being conjured every day to try their best to vanquish us!'
"Not you again," said daryl when he saw Phoebe rush into the building. "I am sick and tired of your enire family!"
Phoebe rolled her eyes. "Where's Micheal? I need to talk to him."
"I'm right behind you." Phoebe turned, startled, when Micheal wrapped his arms around her. he started to kiss her neck when she turned.
"Listen, Micheal, I need to talk to you." said Phoebe. When Daryl didn't move, Phoebe added, "In private."
Cole nodded, "That's just what I was thinking. follow me."
Phoebe and Cole left the building, and got in his car. When they finally stopped, the car was ontop of a big green hill, that overlooked the city. they climbed out of the car, and Cole wrapped his arms around her. he starts to kiss her. "Finally, we are alone."
Phoebe pulls back. "Listen, Micheal. this isn't you. Remember when I told you about the sin balls? well, you were infected with lust. You..."
Phoebe is cut off when a demon appears. He throws a lethal fireball, right towards Pheoebe's heart. She was about to levitate when she forgot she still ahd her powers striiped. I t was to late to do anything but get hit.
Cole jumped in front of Phoebe, and rolled them aside. He missed getting hit with the fireball by an inch. The demon started forward them, and dodged his second fireball. In a split second move, Cole removed a flip knife from his pocket, and jammed it into the demon's stomach. He burst in flames, as he was vanquished. Cole took a deep breath, as he glowed. Phoebe stepped forward.
"Your sin ball was released. You saved my life, a selfless act." Phoebe rushed toward Cole, and embraced him in a bear hug. "You could have died saving me."
Cole looked down at Phoebe. "I meant what I said before, Phoebe. It wasn't the sin ball. I love you."
Phoebe smiled, "And I love you too." She took a breath. "Are you sure you can handle me, magic and all? it's a lot for me to ask of you."
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He looked down on her. "I don't care if you have four heads, Phoebe Halliwell. It dosen't make a difference. I love you for who you are, not what you are."
She looked up into his gorgeous eyes. The trust....she wasn't sure what she saw in his eyes, only that she knew he would keep her secret. The whole week's events, and the other sin balls, melded away from her mind, as his lips touched hers.
They spent that night together.
Part Seven By: Aurora Nighstar
Cole woke up the next morning with Phoebe sleeping beside him. He threw on a bathrobe exited for the balcony. Wyatt orbed in beside him. “Well done,” Wyatt smirked.
“What do you want?” Cole said with a scowl.
“Oh, just to congratulate you,” Wyatt said.
“You have been watching the whole time,” Cole stated with much disgust.
“Oh, but of course,” Wyatt declared. Cole rolled his eyes. “Anyway, I have a job for you, and it will be one you will enjoy!”
“Oh, I doubt that,” Cole said crossing his arms.
Wyatt ignored Cole’s defiant attitude. “Quit being so negative. All I want you to do is take Phoebe to Disney Land for the day!”
“Huh?” Cole asked.
“Yeah that is it,” Wyatt declared. Wyatt handed Cole an envelope containing day passes for Disney Land.
“Why?” Cole shook his head unable to understand.
“You do this and your father goes free,” Wyatt declared. “But, if you don’t, he dies!”
“Why do you want Phoebe to go to Disney Land,” Cole looked at Wyatt very puzzled.
“Yours is not to reason why, yours is to do or die,” Wyatt orbed out.
The Seer flamed in. “He is even more insane then the old source,” the seer declared. Cole flared up an energy ball. “I wouldn’t do that if I were you. You wouldn’t want my screaming to wake up your witch, now would you?” Cole put out the energy ball. “We worked together in the past, we can again!”<br> “Go to hell!” Cole declared.
“Ok so you don’t want to know what Wyatt’s plan is,” the seer gave Cole a malevolent smirk.
“Ok, ok, I am listening,” Cole begrudgingly mumbled.
“That’s better,” the seer gave the same kind of plastically fake smile frequently seen on politicians and stewardesses. Cole rolled his eyes as he listened. “Wyatt is going to send a demon after the charmed ones. One that requires the power of three, the only one to actually successfully kill a charmed one in fact!”<br> “Shax!” Cole instantly knew.
“Of course, and with Phoebe out of the way,” the seer continued.
“There whitelighter will just heal them,” Cole discouraged her.
“No, he has a plan for him too,” the seer declared. Cole and the Seer heard Phoebe stirring in the next room. The seer left quickly.
Piper fired a few shots of her exploding power at Wyatt. Wyatt had his force field up and he cried. Chris orbed in. “Oh sure, you have time for Wyatt and me,” Chris said.
“Shut up,” Piper said. She took another shot at Wyatt.
"See it's always Wyatt....Wyatt had powers from the womb....Wyatt gets all the attention.....Wyatt gets attacked all the time!" Chris pouts.
Piper rolled her eyes. “Chris, tell it to someone who cares! Oh I forgot, nobody cares about you, but can’t you see I am busy?” Piper said. She tried to blow up Wyatt again.
Chris cried. “I will go find dad,” Chris orbed out.
“God, if that dam kid won’t stop screaming!” Piper said.
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Paige went to the Indigo Restaurant. She skipped right past the dinner menu and went right for the desserts. The waitress came to take her order. “Oh, I can’t decide she told her. I think I will have the Caramel Creme Brulee with Chocolate Cookies and the Blueberry-Caramel Upside down cake with Vanilla Gelato.”
“Ok, anything to drink,” the waitress asked.
“No,” Paige said. The waitress started to walk away. “But I would also like the Chocolate Decadence Cake with Frangelico Whipped Cream and hazelnut toffee.”
“Ok, got it,” the waitress walked way rolling her eyes. “She eats like that and still looks like that” she mumbled under her breath. “Would you also like the Expresso-Kahlua Cheescake in chocolate shortbread crust with hazelnut whipped cream and choclate sauce too?” she asked sarcastically.
“That would be lovely,” Paige shot back with a smile.
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Leo intended to orb back to elderland, but he didn’t quite make it. He just orbed into Piper’s room climbed into bed and rested his head against the pillow. A woman appeared before him. He had vague recollections of her, kissing her. “Hey,” he simply said.
She started to hum her seductive tone. ~Piper ~ Leo thought to himself. He smiled at her, but didn’t budge. The siren advanced on him and pressed her lips against his. This brought a smile to his face but failed to stimulate much of a reaction from Leo. She propped Leo up. She threw her arms around him. “This is boring,” the siren said softly.
“What,” Leo asked in a half-dazed state. The siren continued to hum, much to Leo’s delight, but his docile nature just spoiled everything.
Chris orbed in. “Oh sure dad, you get all the fun!” Chris crossed his arms and pouted.
The siren rolled her eyes and turned around. Her gaze fell upon Chris. She smiled seductively. “Oh you can have fun too!” she advanced on Chris humming.
“Bianca,” Chris said softly. He grabbed around the siren’s waist and engaged her in a passionate wanting kiss. Leo just rolled over and looked toward the walls, too lazy to move.
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Wyatt observed from the pool. “No, no no!! She is supposed to be distracting Leo, not Chris!!” Wyatt complained as he slammed an energy ball against the wall. Wyatt considered the siren to be his girl. He could tolerate her distracting Leo, but her going for his little brother by her own choice, he could not stomach. “Chris is going to pay for this!!” Wyatt tossed another energy ball with a near miss at the seer.
“Easy, my liege,” the seer said. “Your plan should still work, Leo is much too lazy to go heal them!”<br> Wyatt glared at seer. “Shut up, when I want your opinion, I will give it to you!” Wyatt was too discussed to continue to watch Chris and the siren. She changed the vision back to his mother.
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Wyatt’s force field was up and he was crying. “Shut up,” Piper ordered. She continued to try to blow him up. The baby inside of Piper started to act up. He kicked at Piper constantly. Piper grabbed for her belly in pain. A tear streamed down her face.
Now that the attacks had stopped Wyatt lowered his force field. Andras took advantage of this opportunity and stepped into baby Wyatt. Paige was home again after her dessert binge. She walked in with a pint container of Ben and Jerry’s Chunky Monkey ice cream. She saw Piper reeling in pain. She dropped the ice cream container. “Piper,” she yelled. She raced to her side.
Shax suddenly appeared in a gust of wind. Wyatt put his force field back up. Shax blew the both Paige and Piper around. Paige orbed just in time to avoid impacting the wall. Piper slammed into the wall with full impact. “Oh my god,” another awful thought occurred to Paige. She could have lost the baby.
“Evil wind that blows, That which forms below. No longer will you dwell, Death takes you with this spell.” Paige said the spell.
Shax disappeared, for now. “Leo, Piper’s hurt, come quick,” Paige yelled.
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Since baby Chris was afflicted with anger, adult Chris suddenly became afflicted with it too! “You betrayed me, @#%$,” Chris told the siren. He made a fist and focused. The siren’s heart began to implode. He watched as she burst into flames and disappeared. Chris turned to his dad. He was about to attack him too, but then he noticed his hand was starting to turn transparent. “Oh, no not again,” Chris cried.
Leo heard Paige’s call. “So tired,” he said. Pillow or wife.. Leo orbed down stairs and healed Piper. Leo glowed and his sin was released.
“We need Phoebe,” Paige declared.
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“Drats!” Wyatt said as he watched his plan falling apart. “Cole will do his part,but we can’t have the charmed ones looking for Phoebe.” Wyatt made Kiya appear before him. “Go down there and pretend to be Phoebe, at least until Shax attacks again. Bye the time they figure this out, you are not Phoebe, it will be too late,” Wyatt declared.
“Anything to make you happy baby,” Kiya replied. She shimmered out.
“I need a new plan for Leo too,” Wyatt said. He summoned a dark lighter. “Do not make any moves against the elders until he tries to heal the girls. Once he does, shoot him.”
Kiya looking like Phoebe knocked on the door. Paige answered. “Why are you knocking, you live here,” Paige asked.
“I forgot my keys,” Kiya said.
“The door wasn’t even locked,” Paige said.
Kiya twirled her hair. “Oh, I am such a ditz!” she said.
“That’s ok,” Paige said. “Listen, Shax just attacked again. We need the power of three here. I know you have something going with Michael, but we need really need you here! It won’t be long before Shax comes back.”<br> “Ok,” she said as she walked in. Wyatt decided to go back to watching Phoebe and Cole.
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“So how do you feel about a little trip to Disney Land today,” Cole asked Phoebe.
“Sounds like fun,” Phoebe said. “Sure.” Then she remembered her sisters were probably still infected with sins. “But I think my sisters are still infected with sins. I need to take care of them first.”
Wyatt orbed to the surface and called for Piper’s cell phone to him. He called Phoebe. Phoebe answered her phone. Wyatt made his voice sound just like Piper’s. “Listen Paige and I vanquished Lucas, all the sins are gone. Just wanted to let you know.”
“Thanks Piper,” Phoebe said. They hung up. “Looks like I am free and clear to go!” Phoebe smiled brightly.
Convenient, too dam convenient, Cole thought to himself. He knew Wyatt was spying on them and there was no way that was really Piper. Phoebe was surprised Michael didn’t seem happier at the news.
“Is something wrong,” Phoebe asked.
“No, nothing,” Cole answered. “I love you.” He kissed her.
Part Eight By: Jediya
Piper stood up weakly, placing an arm across her stomach and wincing in pain.
“Damn, does this kid have a mean kick!” she wheezed, while still doubled over.
Leo went over to her and helped her straighten up. “Are you ok?”<br> “Oh absolutely fine!” Piper snapped, pushing his helping hands away, “Besides the fact that I have one brat that won’t stop trying to deafen me,” she growled, indicating Wyatt,” or that my unborn little brat is kicking my kidneys!!!! – Wyatt…SHUT UP!!!”<br> “She’s still infected” Paige groaned. She didn’t think she could take any more of this. Normal hormonal Piper was bad enough but add sin infested with an anger boost Piper – god, better hide the knives!
“Y’ think” Leo sighed sarcastically. “Look, why don’t you get the power of three spell ready before Shax comes back” he continued, rubbing his temples.
*I guess even Elder’s get headaches* Paige mused silently, “What are you going to do?”<br> “I’m going to check on Chris!” Leo said simply before orbing out.
“Oooo that was right in the kidney, damn it!” Piper screeched, “Leo, you bring that son back with you so I can give him a piece of my mind!”<br> “Oook…well come on Pheebs, we have a spell to get ready!” Paige said, cursing Leo for leaving them to cope with his psycho wife.
“Phoebe?”<br> Kiya suddenly started and realised ‘she’ was being addressed, “Oh right! Phoebe…me!”<br> “Yeah….Phoebe…you!” Paige said, rolling her eyes at her ‘sister’, “Come on!”
Paige grabbed Kiya’s arm and they both disappeared in a flurry of white and blue orbs.
“Argh!!!” Piper growled, “My kids are brats…..I blame the father”<br>
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Cole sat in the driver’s seat of ‘his’ car. The real Phoebe was sitting next to him, trying to get him out of his sudden sullen mood. Cole still couldn’t get the fact that the phone call from Piper had seemed way too coincidental. Something wasn’t right.
“Michael, do you mind if I put the radio on?” Phoebe asked suddenly, she was beginning to find the silence unnerving.
“No sure…go ahead!”<br> “Are you ok?” she asked concerned, as the car came alive with the sound of music. “You seem a bit…detached.”<br> “Sorry, I’m just caught up in thought”<br> “Oh…” Phoebe sighed and looked out her window. What she saw then made her gasp in astonishment. “Hey, does that look like Darryl?”<br> Sure enough, there was Darryl surrounded by a whole gang of angry thugs.
“It is Darryl” Cole said, stopping the car on the side of the road. He got out and walked other to his partner, closely followed by Phoebe.
“Come on,” they heard Darryl say, waving his gun at the thugs, “I don’t want to have to hurt you.”<br> One of the thugs, probably the leader of the gang, sneered cruelly. “One pig against six of us…no chance!”<br> “Count again!” Cole said calmly, as he and Phoebe approached the group.
“No…no. I don’t need any help” Darryl said angrily, “I can handle this on my own!”<br> “Darryl if this is about…”
“Phoebe this has nothing to do with that…for once. I just don’t want…need any help.”<br> “Now!” he continued, turning his attention back to the thugs, “Put down your weapons and give yourselves up!”<br>
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“Better do as he says…” Cole spoke again, glaring at them. Something in his eyes makes the thugs shiver with fear. They suddenly lost their boldness and dropped their weapons and placed their hands on top of their heads.
“That’s more like it” Darryl said smugly, “See you back at the station partner…like I need one!”<br> “That was not Darryl!” Phoebe said, as they walked back to the car.
Cole shook his head, “No you’re definitely right, that wasn’t like Darryl at all,” Phoebe gave him a strange look, “I mean from what I’ve gathered while being his partner.”<br> “I think I need to go home. I’m starting to wonder if that call from Piper was real…”she said, getting back into the car and shutting the door.
“Yeah, me too” Cole whispered.
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Back at the Manor, Leo orbed back up to Piper’s room just as a vase hit the wall, shattering right near his head.
“What do you want?” Chris growled angrily, upset that he had missed Leo’s head.
“I came to see if you were alright!” Leo replied, *which you obviously aren’t* he thought to himself, as he surveyed the damage to the room.
“Yeah right!” Chris scoffed, “You must have me confused with your other son. Why don’t you go and see the more powerful, twice-blessed, favourite son!”<br> Leo flinched at the slight, “I came to see you Chris. You need to work on getting rid of your envy.”<br> “Envy? Hey I’m not envious of anyone. Least of all Wyatt. Sure he may be more powerful and get all the attention but I’m not envious!”<br> “Oh of course you aren’t”<br> “What the hell do you care anyway?”
“I do care Chris…”
“Yeah right!”<br> “Chris,” Leo sighed deeply, trying to keep his anger in check, “look you’re obviously feeling…”
“Don’t you dare try to tell me how I feel!” Chris yelled, TKing some kind of ornament at Leo. Leo orbed out and back in and the ornament shattered against the wall.
“Would you calm down…”
“Stop telling me what to do!” Chris was breathing hard now, “You never told your favourite son what to do. Always let him do what he wanted. No wonder he turned evil!!!”<br>
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Paige and Kiya appeared before Piper downstairs, making her jump slightly.
“Ok, we have a spell,” Paige said triumphantly, waving the bit of paper in the air.
“Uh huh” was the only response.
“Piper, stop trying to blow Wyatt up!”<br> “Well he won’t shut up!”<br> Paige sighed and rolled her eyes, “look, we have the vanquishing spell ready for when…”
Suddenly Shax appeared in a tornado, with thunder accompanying him for good dramatic effect.
“He comes back! Quick say the spell”<br> Paige, Piper and Kiya recited the spell, but nothing happened.
“Why didn’t he blow up?” Piper snapped, “Did you write down the right spell?”<br> “Of course I did!” Paige snapped back.
“Well it didn’t work”<br> “No, really?”
Shax growled at the bickering siblings and threw energy balls at them, causing them to once more hit the wall hard.
“Oh dear,” Kiya said, changing back to her real appearance, “now why ever would a power of three spell not work? Oh yeah…cause I’m not really Phoebe!”<br> “No, but I am!”
Kiya turned round to see both Phoebe and Cole standing in the doorway.
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Meanwhile two darklighters appeared in a swarm of black lights in Piper’s room, just as Leo ducked another object thrown by Chris.
“Chris…darklighters!”<br> One of the darklighters shot an arrow in Chris’s direction, who just flicked his wrist and sent it straight back, vanquishing the darklighter.
“Die Elder!” the second darklighter sneered, firing an arrow at Leo.
Leo had no time to orb out before the arrow would hit him, so braced himself for the impact that never came. At that moment Chris jumped in front of him, taking the arrow meant for his father.
“No! Chris!” Leo yelled, pointing his hands at the darklighter who was hit by several bolts of lightning.
After vanquishing the darklighter, Leo bent over his future son and healed him.
“What did you do that for?” he asked, relieved when the wound finished healing.
“Gee I dunno” Chris winced, “Maybe I couldn’t bear to hear you’re useless advice?”<br> As Leo helped him up, Chris glowed brightly as his sin was released.
“Hey, you lost you’re sin!”<br> What ever reply Chris was about to give was cut off as he doubled over in pain and suddenly began slightly transparent.
“Oh my god!” Leo gasped, “Piper!” He grabbed Chris’s arm and orbed them both to Piper.
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“Look out!” Cole cried, pushing Phoebe out of the way of an energy ball.
“Thanks,” she breathed out. She spotted Leo and Chris orb in by Paige and Piper’s side and decided the best course of action was to distract Shax and Kiya, while Leo healed her sisters.
“You’re going to die like your sisters witch!” Shax growled.
“Yeah!” Kiya interjected unnecessarily.
“Oh shut up!” Phoebe snapped, “I really don’t know how my sisters thought you were me?”<br> “Well y’know…” a disembodied voice said, as Paige and Piper orbed next to her, “she was kind of a convincing look-alike!”<br> “Yeah yeah,” Piper hissed, “Can we skip the yammering and get straight to the vanquishing?”<br> Phoebe, Piper and Paige say the spell and watch satisfied as Shax blew up.
“Uh oh!” Kiya squeaked.
“Yeah you betcha, Uh oh!” Piper said, as she raised her hands and blew Kiya up.
“Right, now we need to get Lucas!” Paige said.
Piper grinned, “Yeah I’d like to show him some anger…ow!”<br> “Piper are you ok?” Phoebe asked concerned.
“Yeah, just the little brat’s kicking again!”<br> “Hey!” Chris yelled indignantly.
“Oh be quiet!” Piper snapped, “Ow, god that hurt….OW!!!”<br> “Piper I don’t think the baby’s kicking!” Leo said, moving over to help her.
“No you’re right! He’s playing the damn drums!”<br> “Piper! I think you’re going into labour!” Leo sighed.
“Oh don’t be silly” she said, waving him off, “He would’ve told us if he was born early. He would’ve told us his birth date right?”<br> “Sure!” Chris said, cringing as Piper did a ‘see I told you so’ look, “It’s today by the way!”<br> “Excuse me?” Piper snapped, “You didn’t think …ow…to tell me this…ow…sooner?”<br> “You never asked!”<br> “Why you little…”
“Honey, let’s get you to the hospital shall we?” Leo said, taking hold of Piper’s arm.
“Don’t you call me honey! This is all your fault! You did this to me! I hate you!” Was all that was heard as Leo and Piper orbed out.
“Michael, can you check on Darryl?” Phoebe asked Cole, “If he’s got Pride, who knows what he could be getting himself into!”<br> “No problem!” Cole said, smiling down at her, “What are you going to do?”<br> “Me, Paige and Chris have an appointment with Lucas!” she said, as the three of them orbed out.
“Oh well! Have fun!” Cole sighed, as he shimmered out.
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“Hello Lucas” Paige said, as they orbed down to the underworld.
“What are you doing here? You shouldn’t have been able to find me!” Lucas couldn’t believe it; Wyatt had promised that he would be protected from the charmed ones finding him.
“Cocky isn’t he?” Chris said, “Are you sure he didn’t get pride?”<br> “How did you get infected with anger? The eldest witch had that!” Lucas asked confused. Two people shouldn’t be able to have the same sin.
“Just lucky I guess!”<br> “He’s got anger?” Phoebe whispered to her sister.
“Maybe the sin infected little Chris as well as Piper?” Paige whispered back.
“Weirder things have happened!”<br> “Shall we get our nephew angry?”<br> “Ooo Lets!”<br> Paige winked at Phoebe as she turned her attention to Lucas, “Lucas, you’ve got nothing to worry about with Chris here…he can’t hurt you!”<br> “What?” Chris snapped.
Picking up what her sister was doing Phoebe spoke up. “Yeah, he’s the weak one. Second born…shame! It’s his brother you should worry about!”<br> “Who are you calling weak?” Chris snarled.
“Oh yes…that force field…” Paige interjected.
“Powers from the womb!”<br> “He’s just a big show off!” Chris was all but shouting now.
“And all Chris has is telekinesis and orbing…tsk!” Phoebe shook her head in mock disgust.
“So, he’s an inferior witch…and I shouldn’t worry about him right?” Lucas asked, grinning cockily.
“Right!” the two sisters replied.
“Wrong!” Chris growled angrily. He began to slowly clench his fist and Lucas’s hand went to his chest in pain. “I’m not inferior!” Chris clenched his fist as tight as possible. Lucas screamed in agony as he exploded.
Phoebe and Paige high fived each other. “Way to go sis!” Phoebe said.
“I’m the weak one?” Chris asked, with a raised eyebrow. For a moment Phoebe and Paige were worried, because they hadn’t seen Chris glow, but when he grinned they sighed in relief.
“Let’s go and see how Piper is” Paige said and the three of them orbed out.
Part Nine By: HollyHalliwell
"You fricken frackin Jerk! Don't tell me to take it easy, when you're not the one who is feeling like a......just shut up already!"
These were the precious words that Phoebe, Paige, and Chris heard as they entered the delivery wing of the hospital.
Phoebe walked up to the desk, only to be sat down again by the nurse.
"You can see your sister after she's delivered the baby." Said the elderly lady. She didn't seem to have much patience.
The nurse pursed her lips as Piper let off another paragraph of colorful phrases. "As you can hear, your sister sounds as if she's getting very close to giving birth."
The lady scooted back off to her cluttered filled desk, and left the three Halliwells to talk quietly. Chris winced as he heard his mother call him a few creative names from the delivery room.
"So." said Paige, trying to pick something that could occupy their minds. "Looks like everything is fixed. Daryl's sin should be gone since we killed Lucas. And we all got rid of our sins too."
Phoebe shook her head. "Not yet, we haven't. Piper is still infected with anger. We killed Lucas, which normally gets rid of all the sins. The problem this time is Piper allowed the sin to take over her."
Paige gave Phoebe a confused look.
"You see." said Phoebe. "I read in the BOS that sins can either enter unwillingly into the body, or they can be accepted into the body. In Piper's case, her hormones were all out of sinc. Her little bit of anger at the time was able to escalate further, making her symptoms a whole lot worse. This caused her body to accept the sin, rather than fight against it. The only way now that she can get rid of her anger is to perform a selfess act." Phoebe paused. "Didn't you notice she was still infected when you heard Piper curse Leo for being a guy?"
"I thought that was normal Piper." said Paige with a bit of amusment. Paige looked up at Chris, who was nervously biting his finger nails. "What are you so worried about? You're here now, so that has to mean that Piper delivers you fine."
"It isn't every day that I'm able to be 20 feet away from my own birth." stated Chris.
Phoebe and Paige giggled at this, and conversation drifted off to the mysterious vanquished demons that had been appearing.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Meanwhile...In the Delivery Room
Piper's face was as red as an apple, as she worked her way to squeezing off every one of Leo's fingers with her sweaty palms. As her contraction ended, the doctor spoke.
"Ok Ms. Halliwell, when your next contraction hits, push."
Piper looks at Leo and the doctor. "No. I'm not going to push."
"What?!" they asked in unison.
Piper looks at Leo. "I'm mad at Chris for always being a pain in my a$$. All he has done since he came back from the future is whine,whine whine. I'm tired of it."
The doctor looks bemused, but Leo keeps his gaze on Piper. "So you're just not going to let him be born? Isn't that going to be a little hard?" Leo glances down at Piper's bulging belly.
"Nope. I've told you before, and I'll tell you now. I'm a Halliwell, and Halliwells can do anything." Piper's defiant gaze changed into a pained expression as her contraction hit.
"Ms. Halliwell, you need to push now, or your baby could die." said the doctor urgently.
The words 'I hope he will" were about to leave Piper's lips, but then halted. Realization hit her. She didn't want her son to die! Horror of that thought hit her, followed be the remeberance of her anger sin.
Piper glowed, as her sin released itself. She looked into Leo's Pleading eyes.
"I'm ready." were the last words that escaped her as little Chris recieved his first glimse of the world.
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Cole stands before Wyatt as he listens to him speak.
"I'm ready now." said Wyatt. "I had my fun with the little demons and warlocks I sent after the sisters, but now I think it's time to make my big move. And from the information I gathered from the seer, Chris is about to make a very important desicion. I don't want to miss it."
Wyatt rubbed his fingers through his scruffy chin in thought. "I want you to continue to get close to Phoebe. Oh, and you did take care of the real Michael I presume?"
"Yes Sir." said Cole, still fully knowing that the cop was at the bomb shelter Cole left him in. Of course he was nice enough to set up cable for Michael so he was able to watch today's football game.
"Good." said Wyatt as his lips curled into an evil grin. "Then lets get started. Little brother is about to make a little road trip himself. A road to death."
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Phoebe looked at the test strip one more time. 'It's true,' she thought. 'I'm....I'm pregnant."
She quickly stuffed the box under her sweater when she heard a knock at the bathroom door. "Phoebe! Hurry up already, I need to get to work." cried Paige.
Phoebe opened the door, and left quickly with the pregnancy box and strip. She knew all to well what happened when Piper took the test a couple years Ago. Phoebe found the box, then thought her sister was having a demon child!
Her hands still shaking, she went downstairs to give Chris a final farewell before Piper and Leo sent him back to the future. Phoebe was glad he was getting to go home, but somehow she had a nagging feeling he wouldn't stay there for long. Call it a gut instinct, but she just knew something bad was about to happen.
Phoebe entered the conservatory, and held onto her nephew. "I'm going to miss you!" she wailed. She continued to say her goodbyes, but waited for Paige to some downstairs before she spilled the news.
"Before you go Chris, I want to ask you something. Why didn't you tell me I was going to have a kid?!"
Chris gave her a bemused look. "Because your not supposed to, well at least not for a while."
"Why'd you ask?" questioned Piper.
"Because I'm pregnant! I just found out, but please don't tell Michael, he'll be upset that I told all of you first." Phoebe continued to babble, until Piper shut her up.
"Are you happy about this?" asked Piper.
"I'm..I'm.....yes. I'm happy. But at the same time I'm terrified. I don't want anything to go wrong."
"It won't." said Paige. "We'll make sure of it."
The sisters shared a sisterly moment, but little did they know something terrible was about to happen. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Underworld
Wyatt stood alone, watching the Halliwells through the seeing pool. "What do you know." he said. "Another bun in the oven." Of course, never did it occur to Wyatt that this bun in the oven was related to Cole.
Wyatt rubbed his hands as he watched a portal open for his little brother to go back to the furure. Chris walked through it, but never realized that it had been effected by his older brother.
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Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 22:04:50 GMT -5
"Perfect." said Wyatt. "Get ready to enter the word of your greatest desires little brother. You won't be able to live for long If I'm correct."
Edited by: oddball7 at: 10/19/04 10:08 pm hollyhalliwell Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 233 (4/9/04 10:03 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This sounds like an awsome idea. I definately have a few ideas in mind, but I will have to think about it.
P.S. I asked an admin to post this to the top of the page. charmedone89 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 615 (4/9/04 10:38 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Here are my vote: 1. Charmed Fan12 2. THE WYATT HALLIWELL 3. hollyhalliwell
THE WYATT HALLIWELL Posts: 558 (4/9/04 10:44 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- awww thanks Charmedone89 here is my vote:
1. HollyHalliwell 2. Aurora NightStar 3. MarysMary
charmed2008 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 417 (4/9/04 10:50 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- i think its a wonderful idea!!!
1. Charmedfan12
2. Jediya
3. oddball 7 TrojanPrincess6975 Posts: 4950 (4/9/04 11:09 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Wyatt Halliwell 4th Charmed One PiperMGrl
Location: ~My Board~ It's only a mouse click away.
Halliwell Household, HT3, Hogwarts Gets Charmed, Power of Three, Charmed Goddess
Pic made by PiperMGrl, w/out even me asking. I guess people really do pay attention to us. 4th Charmed One Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 737 (4/9/04 11:15 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Charmed Lit Witch
Jediya
TrojanPrincess6975
PiPeRhoLlY Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 77 (4/9/04 11:46 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I'M not sure of my third vote yet, but here are my first two:
HollyHalliwell Esmerelda THE WYATT HALLIWELL Posts: 559 (4/9/04 11:53 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- thanks trojan princess
SoulessFreaks Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 24 (4/10/04 1:03 am) Reply Re: U PICK! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Aurora NightStar
Thats all i can think of so far ~Emma~
Charmed Ficcies
Somebody Save Me
Wyatt comes to the past to finally defeat his brother when he's just 2 months old, but will The Charmed ones be able to Save Chris.
Shutting Out The World
UPDATED 4/7!!!! Chris must adjust to the guilt of killing Wyatt. Can the Charmed ones save him from himself?
scififantasychic Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 93 (4/10/04 1:12 am) Reply Re: U PICK! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I would say Aurora Nightstar, Esmeralda, and hollyhalliwell. Charmed LitWitch Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 80 (4/10/04 8:08 am) Reply Re: U PICK! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 1. 4th Charmed One 2. Rina Keaton 3. CharmedMale3
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Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 22:05:51 GMT -5
Nightgirl Posts: 120 (4/10/04 10:24 am) Reply U PICK -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Wow, that was really well written!
1.Aurora Nightstar 2. Jediya 3.Marysmary
chrisperry Posts: 6 (4/10/04 11:25 am) Reply U PICK -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 1. Jediya 2. marysmary 3. hollyhalliwell marysmary Posts: 308 (4/10/04 1:15 pm) Reply Re: U PICK -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Wow!!sounds great!!Thankies for people who voted for me!!
1.Jediya 2.Aurora Nightstar 3.The Wyatt Halliwell
thanks to Slayer I Am !!
Edited by: marysmary at: 4/11/04 9:28 am CharmedAgainPiper Posts: 108 (4/10/04 3:36 pm) Reply sd -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 1. CharmedFan12 2. HollyHalliwell 3. DrTroyswife PiperMGrl Posts: 3739 (4/11/04 6:20 pm) Reply Re: sd -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 1: CharmedPiper23 2: 4th charmed one 3: trojanprincess6975 in no specific order lol
"Only you can decide what you are capable of" ~Holly Marie Combs~
What the Future Holds THE WYATT HALLIWELL Posts: 566 (4/11/04 10:01 pm) Reply Re: sd -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- thanks marysmary i luv your stories too!
Esmeralda Posts: 273 (4/11/04 10:48 pm) Reply My Picks -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- First, what a great idea, oddball7!!!
Second, thank you to those who voted for me, but if I'm chosen, I'd have to decline, because I'm terrible at writing conversations, if I don't steal it from somewhere else, although if you guys wanted me to write the outline of a plot and let the other winners write the conversations and other details, I could certainly do that!!
Third, here are mine:
1. Aurora Nightstar 2. Holly Halliwell 3 Can't say--I keep changing my mind, because there's so many good ones!!
As for story ideas--go into the Season 6 forum and find the thread "Drop the Girls Into Another Show", where people suggest stories where they combine Charmed with another show. Choose one of the shows that the three winners all know and like, and let them go at it!!! I think that would be *great* fun, especially if my two are among the winners!!
Edited by: Esmeralda at: 4/13/04 1:07 pm mkp3mom Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 14 (4/12/04 2:19 pm) Reply Re: My Picks -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- charmed fan 12 charmed addict Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 183 (4/12/04 4:28 pm) Reply Re: My Picks -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Wow oddball, that is such a cool idea!! Ok, here are the ppl who I nominate:
1) CharmedFan12 2) Jediya 3) Souless Freaks
Ok, that's it!
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Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 22:06:35 GMT -5
charming and wicked Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 600 (4/13/04 12:23 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- here are my three
Charmed Fan12 Charmed Lit Witch Aurora NightStar
Ideas lets see here .......maybe something in chris's time after he saves wyatt...i'll have to think about this some more.
thanks for the awesome signture LetseyX Esmeralda Posts: 304 (4/13/04 8:42 pm) Reply Re: U Pick -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Had another idea for the story the winners could write--have them take their favorite of their own stories and then combine them into one, following oddball's earlier idea. I think that would be great, great fun!!! SoulessFreaks Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 30 (4/14/04 12:40 am) Reply Re: U Pick -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- oh i got nominated hehe I doubt i'll have time on the off chance I win, gots a joint fic coming up though anyway ~Emma~
Charmed Ficcies
Somebody Save Me
Wyatt comes to the past to finally defeat his brother when he's just 2 months old, but will The Charmed ones be able to Save Chris.
Shutting Out The World
UPDATED 4/7!!!! Chris must adjust to the guilt of killing Wyatt. Can the Charmed ones save him from himself?
Jediya Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 41 (4/15/04 5:18 pm) Reply Re: U Pick -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ok my three people.........thanks to the people who nominated me I'm astonished
1) HollyHalliwell 2) Aurora Nightstar 3) Marysmary
marysmary Posts: 532 (4/19/04 5:53 pm) Reply Re: U Pick -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I wanna read the Battle between Chris and Wyatt!!
thanks to Slayer I Am !! hollyhalliwell Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 243 (4/19/04 7:08 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! PLEASE CHECK MY NOTE IN THIS FIRST POST 4/19!!! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- First, I would like to say that this is probaly one of the best ideas on this forum. I have an idea for a possible story plot.
I don't want to get too in depth, because if the story gets chosen, I want the writers to be able to use their ideas as well.
This would be a Cole story.
Cole comes back to the world somehow. He can be magical or human. After Phoebe and him have one night together (Phoebe may or may not know it was Cole who she slept with.) Phoebe ends up pregnant. After she finds out about Cole (if she dosen't know already) the fic will be about her carrying the baby, and if or if not she falls back in love with Cole. The story will lead up all the way to the baby's birth.
Some of you may not like this idea, but if it is chosen, like I said the story will have lots of space for the writer's ideas. Please tell me what you think! Esmeralda Posts: 385 (4/19/04 10:00 pm) Reply Story Idea -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- You can agree that this is what the writers of Charmed were up to or not (I personally don't think so--I don't think they're smart enough to put all of this together!), but I'd love to see the winners run with it anyway. It's the idea that eating the chocolate that set Phoebe up to attract the Source's child also set up Piper, so when they accepted the Angel of Destiny's offer to continue their destiny and he agreed, also announcing that Piper was pregnant when she thought she wasn't, it was actually that same bad seed that was planted in Piper and became Wyatt, setting Wyatt up to attract the spirit of the Source and become the new Source!
That's the background. Here's the question this story would answer: How will TCO find out? Will TCO really be able to vanquish the boy they see as Piper & Leo's son, or will they (and Big Chris--and Big Melinda, if the winners want) find a way to vanquish the spirit of the Source for good without killing the boy? And what will happen to Big Chris (and Big Melinda) after it happens? I have absolutely totally no idea, but I'd love to see what the winners come up with!!!
Edited by: Esmeralda at: 4/20/04 9:32 pm Jediya Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 45 (4/20/04 11:22 am) Reply Re: Story Idea -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Esmeralda! I love this idea!
I'm so voting for this one Esmeralda Posts: 394 (4/20/04 11:26 am) Reply Re: Story Idea -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Jediya,
If this story idea isn't chosen, it's all yours! I'd *love* to see what *you* do with it!! This is what I'm best at--coming up with ideas and no idea how to put them to use, unless I have something to fall back on, like Charmed by Love used the TV episodes. So if it doesn't get chosen, GO FOR IT!! Esmeralda Posts: 433 (4/24/04 3:16 pm) Reply Another story idea -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is another one that I've been thinking about, but not quite sure how I'd handle or if I'll have time. So I'll throw it out as an idea for this, and if it's not chosen and someone else wants to write it--GO FOR IT!!
The premise is relatively simple. While going through the attic, Piper find a notebook. It ends up being Prue's diary! She reads it and finds out quite a few things about older sister that she didn't know, and some even more surprising things about what Prue thought about her &, Phoebe. Or it could be similar to my own Charmed by Love, where we get to see the earlier episodes of Charmed told from Prue's point of view. Later, Piper shares it with both Phoebe (who's very surprised by what Prue wrote) and Paige (who gets to know the older sister she never got to meet).
Also, if you really want to have some fun, you could let Prue tell whoever's reading this where to find a couple other notebooks--one the diary of Patty and the other the diary of Penny! I think those could be a lot of fun, too--maybe even a trilogy, huh?
Whatcha think? Esmeralda Posts: 434 (4/24/04 3:27 pm) Reply Other ideas -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Since I haven't seen too many ideas in here, and since I want to have something to vote for, I'll nominate the ones oddball suggested in her first post:
"The battle between Wyatt and Chris"
"The Next Generation of Halliwells"
"The story of Phoebe's baby"
"Chris as Paige's son" (or "Chris as PRUE's son!")
"What if Prue hadn't died?"
and I'll add a favorite of a lot of fans:
"The Return of Cole Turner"
and one last one:
"Paige, the Magic School Teacher vs Wyatt, the evil student"
I'm sure oddball7 will agree with me, if anyone wants to grab any of these for a story of their own, especially if the story isn't chosen as the winner--GO FOR IT!!
oddball7 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 122 (4/24/04 4:16 pm) Reply Re: Other ideas -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I do completely agree with you Esmeralda on other people using them ideas for stories. I know some of them already have been probably used, I just used them as examples and they're more than welcome to use them. And thank you greatly for all the story ideas you have posted, they all sound great. hollyhalliwell Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 251 (4/25/04 5:08 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! WINNING WRITERS POSTED & Vote 4 Story Ideas -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I am so happy that I was voted for to write this fic. I would love to do it! I will be on vacation during early June, but I think I will still be able to do it.
Oddball, I never did get your email. oddball7 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 136 (4/25/04 6:03 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! WINNING WRITERS POSTED & Vote 4 Story Ideas -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Okay I didn't think so... the whole only 5 emails a day from the EZInbox kind of stopped me. So I'll send it to you tomorrow, however, I don't think it has anything that isn't already in this post... but I'll send it to you anyway so you'll have it all in one spot!
And thank you for accepting and congratulations once again you truly are a very talented and creative writer!
And I don't think your vacation in June will be a problem if it does come up, however, then we will work around it.
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Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 22:07:15 GMT -5
hollyhalliwell Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 252 (4/25/04 6:13 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! WINNING WRITERS POSTED & Vote 4 Story Ideas -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- No need to send my emai, it came about 5 minutes ago. Thanks anyway! Esmeralda Posts: 436 (4/25/04 10:37 pm) Reply CONGRATULATIONS!!!! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------
CONGRATULATIONS TO THE WINNERS!!! I'M SO EXCITED!!! The two I voted for won, and so did two of my other favorite writers! I hope all four of you decide to write it--I think that would make for a fantastic story!!!
Oddball, you know I like having the stories broken up by the comments, the "commercials", but I think I'll make an exception for this one. Go ahead and post the sections of the stories in the top of your first post. Be sure to separate them somehow and be sure first to let us know who wrote the current sections, and second, who will write the next!!
I can't wait to read it!!!
And as for voting--I suggested too many and I love all of them, so I'm going to recluse myself from this one, although I may change my mind to help break a tie!!
I sure hope Aurora, CharmedFan12 & Jediya all agree to participate!! Aurora Nightstar Posts: 360 (4/26/04 11:04 pm) Reply Re: CONGRATULATIONS!!!! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I will most likely be able to do this too. If that changes, I will let you know shortly. Thanks everyone who voted for me.
Congratulations to all the other winners. I can clearly see why all of you were picked. Great job everyone! Esmeralda Posts: 453 (4/27/04 2:31 pm) Reply YES! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Oh, Aurora! I'm so glad that you're able to find the time to do this! I sure hope that CharmedFan12 and Jediya can do it, too; that would be so great!
C'mon, people, vote for your favorite plot, so these talented writers can write the tale!! scififantasychic Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 211 (4/27/04 3:32 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! WINNING WRITERS POSTED & Vote 4 Story Ideas -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ok, I'm officially going to vote for the Big Battle between Chris and Wyatt. That just needs to be done, and done right, and if anybody can, it's these writers!
But...these are all such cool ideas, it would be great to be able to combine some of them and build up to the climatic scene between the brothers. Just a suggestion to the writers, whatever topic officially gets picked! Jediya Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 47 (4/27/04 4:32 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! WINNING WRITERS POSTED & Vote 4 Story Ideas -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Well, at the moment I don't see anything stopping me from doing this...football/soccer season's ended and I only have 1 exam left (just coursework to worry about ) but not that taxing.
Thank you everyone who voted for me I'm really honoured, speechless and astonished And congrats to the other writers who won....and I voted for 2 of ya
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Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 22:07:44 GMT -5
PiPeRhoLlY Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 81 (4/27/04 4:43 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! WINNING WRITERS POSTED & Vote 4 Story Ideas -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I am so excited about this contest, and I can't wait to see what the writers are able to come up with! As for what story they use, I would definately say they shopuld go with story number 5. (the Cole story) Esmeralda Posts: 458 (4/27/04 9:59 pm) Reply Story Idea -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is a vote without being a vote. I like SciFi's idea--leading up to the battle between Chris & Wyatt, but using some of the other ideas to get there! Even the idea of Cole & Phoebe and their baby could be incorporated into that. Nightgirl Posts: 153 (5/3/04 4:21 pm) Reply U PICK! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I would love to see #4 written hollyhalliwell Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 278 (5/8/04 9:08 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! HURRY AND VOTE ON STORY IDEAS only 1 more day!!! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ok folks, I will vote for my own story idea, which is the Cole and Phoebe one.
I do like Esmeralda's idea. If we have a tie, maybe we could combine those stories.
Common people, please vote during the last hours of the contest!
Kate hollyhalliwell Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 279 (5/9/04 8:31 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! Results Posted & Please Read Notes -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Chris vs. Wyatt story sounds fantstic! Because I am a hopeless romantic, I do think it would be cool to combine the Phoebe and Cole story somehow. What does everyone else think?
I do have one request, because I am leaving on vacation on the first of June, and will be gone for two weeks, can I be the third person to post part of the story instead of the second? That way I won't miss my turn while I am gone.
Again, I would really would love to combine the Cole/Phoebe story with the Chris vs. Wyatt. I know it would be hard, but there are some very creative writers who are working on this story!
If nobody wants to do this, I do understand, I just thought it would be fun for the Cole/Phoebe fans to read!
Please tell me what you think! You could review, or send me an ezboard email regaurding this! oddball7 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 220 (5/9/04 9:41 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! Results Posted & Please Read Notes -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- okay hollyhalliwell... ill make you the third writer...
have fun on your vacation! Esmeralda Posts: 541 (5/10/04 8:03 am) Reply Re: U PICK! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I think combining ideas would be a great idea for a story that's different than a lot of the other ones going around. The fun of it is that each winner can throw in what they want to do. Best of luck, Aurora, Jediya & Holly!!! Can't wait to see what you come up with!!! Have fun on your vacation, Holly!!! Esmeralda Posts: 542 (5/10/04 8:09 am) Reply Re: U PICK! Results Posted & Please Read Note -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Oddball, I think someone should check with the Board and find out whether we can stick sticky-note topics. If we can, then I'd say go ahead and post a new topic for the winner's story, with it sticky-noted. If we can't, then go ahead and use this, but let them post it at the end of the thread, just like we usually do, so that people can respond, and we can find out how many people are reading it. PEOPLE, IF YOU'RE READING THIS STORY ONCE IT GETS GOING, *PLEASE* PUT IN YOUR COMMENTS, EVEN IF IT'S SIMPLY "THIS IS GOOD" OR "I DON'T LIKE THIS", JUST SO WE KNOW HOW MANY PEOPLE ARE READING THIS!! We wouldn't want the winners to be penalized for winning!!! Again, best of luck, winners, and, Aurora, I can't wait to read your first part!!! I *know* it will be better than Bad, Bad World sounds in the spoilers! Aurora Nightstar Posts: 392 (5/23/04 8:19 pm) Reply Part 1 started. Looking forward to Jediya's part -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “And the charmed ones were finally vanquished themselves,” the museum tour guide iterated. Those words echoed though Chris’s mind as he recollected the charmed ones bursting into flames and vanishing at the hands of Wyatt’s demonic minions.
Chris woke up drenched in a cold sweat. He could have sworn he saw future Wyatt standing over him. But as Chris’s blurred vision began to focus, Wyatt’s face and body faded away leaving only two dark eyes glaring at him. Those eyes too dissipated into the darkness. For a few moments, Chris was frozen in fear. After regaining his senses, Chris telekinetically turned the lights on. He wondered if the ominous presence he felt were truly his brother or not. Another awful thought occurred to him. What if he goes after mom? He could not get this idea out of his head. Chris orbed to his mother’s side. He watched her sleep peacefully.
As she started to come through, Chris began to orb out. All Piper saw was the orbing. “Leo don’t leave me,” Piper muttered in a half-dazed, almost-desperate tone.
Chris orbed back to his room at P3. “I am sorry mom,” he muttered to himself. He remembered why Piper and Leo broke up in the first place and the part he played in it.
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It had been about 6 months before Wyatt had offered his brother the chance to stay among the living by agreeing never to cross him again, but his thick-headed stubborn bother refused. Wyatt wrote the spell to return to the past, he didn’t need the entry in the book. He followed Chris back to the past, but left his presents unknown.
He took with him two tombs of magic, the book of shadows and the Grimoire. The book of shadows was identical to the original book except for the addition of many new spells and new demons.
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Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 22:08:10 GMT -5
Balthazar was just another demon as far as Wyatt was concerned. Wyatt did his usual show of power and brought Balthazar back demonstrated how easily he could kill him and then brought him back again fully expecting to put the fear of god in him. However Wyatt failed to realize Balthazar was not at all afraid of death, nor did he really feel he had much worth living for.
Wyatt read the notes in his Aunt’s handwriting and decided he had a use a special use for Balthazar after all. He vaguely remembered hearing about his Aunt’s great romance with Cole Turner and that this was in fact him. Wyatt decided Cole needed to rekindle that romance with Phoebe, so he could betray her.
“With the way things were left, there is no way,” Cole started to say. He still had more to say, but Wyatt cut him off.
“While you obviously charmed her once,” Wyatt said, as he snickered at the reference to Cole being ‘good in bed’ and ‘great stamina.’ ”You can do it again.”<br> “I can’t and I won’t,” Cole said. “You will just have to kill me again.”<br> “No, you can and you will,” Wyatt demanded.
“You can’t make me do anything,” Cole said.
“You are trying my patients,” Wyatt said.
“Then just kill me,” Cole said. Cole knew if he went to Phoebe again, she would just end up vanquishing him again. Betrayal from the one he still loved would hurt far worse then anything this lunatic could possibly do to him.
Wyatt lit up another energy ball expecting to see some fear. Instead Cole just looked him in the eye and smiled. He held is arms in an open position. “You really don’t want to live?” Wyatt asked.
“Don’t really have anything worth living for,” Cole replied.
“Why did you go after the charmed ones in the first place?” Wyatt asked.
“I was offered something in return,” Cole shot back.
“And what was that,” Wyatt asked curiously.
“My father’s soul,” Cole simply stated.
”I can do you one better.” Wyatt declared.
“But that is already…” Cole said,
“I can resurrect him for you,” Wyatt stated.
“What!!!” exclaimed Cole.
“Oh, now I got your interest,” Wyatt started in again. He put his arm around in him in a very buddy, buddy kinda of way. “Look, I don’t want you to kill Phoebe. I just want you to seduce her again and lead her into a trap. That’s it! Do we have a deal?”<br> “No,” Cole said. “Look with the way we left things, she will never give me another chance no matter what!”<br> Wyatt laughed. “Sure she will.” With the wave of the hand, Wyatt changed Cole’s appearance to that of a handsome man about that same age as Phoebe. “Now she will find you hard to resist. Deal?” Cole’s hesitation annoyed Wyatt. “I don’t have all day. I will kill the charmed ones with or without your help.”<br> Cole thought for moment decided if he played along he could possibly end up saving Phoebe. “Ok, deal, I would like to get revenge on my ex-wife anyway,” Cole lied.
“Now that is more like it,” Wyatt said. Then he resurrected Cole’s father. Cole looked his father in the face. “This is just to remind you why you are doing this.” He locked Cole’s dad in a cage. “He will be released when your mission is over. If you cross me, too bad for your father; you obviously don’t care about your own life, but his you do.”<br> Cole was dismissed.
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Wyatt was reluctant to resurrect the siren. A small part of him feared that she would have power over him. He remembered that her power was based in love. He no longer felt any love in his heart. He had not even been able to muster up enough love to make the healing power work since Chris betrayed him. Wyatt reasoned the siren would be unable to affect him, so he did in fact bring her back too. Normally he would immediately kill the demon right after resurrecting them just to demonstrate his power before bringing them back permanently. Just as Wyatt lit up an energy ball, the siren started her humming. Wyatt brought his hand down and the energy ball went out. Part of him wanted to kiss the siren but he didn’t. He rationalized that he needed her help. She would be the perfect demon to distract Leo while he enacted his revenge against Chris and his family. He certainly couldn’t have Leo healing Chris or the charmed ones. “I have a job for you,” Wyatt stated coldly.
“Anything,” the Siren glanced at him seductively. Wyatt could feel his heart racing.
“I should never have brought you back,” Wyatt blurted out.
“Oh, but I could serve you in so many ways,” the siren put her arms over Wyatt’s shoulders and began humming again.
Wyatt engaged her in slow passionate kiss. Then he pushed her away. “Keep your slutty hands off of me.”<br> “What is with the Dr. Jekyll and Mr.” the siren began.
“Oh, shut up. I have a job for you,” Wyatt demanded.
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Wyatt had spent the last six months going back and forth between the book of shadows and the Grimoire. He used the Grimoire to resurrect most of the demons mentioned in the book of shadows. He also summoned several demons which the charmed ones had yet to vanquish. Wyatt had amassed quite an army and the time for his revenge was imminent.
Wyatt warned the demons not to harm his brother, but woe to the demon that thought this was a sign of compassion. No, Wyatt wanted to kill Chris personally. He was not about to let any demon take that away!!
Edited by: Aurora Nightstar at: 5/23/04 9:23 pm oddball7 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 291 (5/23/04 8:34 pm) Reply ezSupporter Re: Part 1 started. Looking forward to Jediya's part -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- OMGOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wooooohooooo! you should have seen my face lit up when I saw Aurora Nighstar as the last poster in this story!!!! oh my!
That was soooooo goood!!!! I loved every bit of it. And we actually are getting to see this story from different point of views! I'm loving it! lol... okay I know I'm a little excited but I have been dying to read this and wow! And how you have brought back Cole to innertwine the two story ideas. Oh so clever! Keep up the great work...... and now I can't wait to read more of this and I think its Jediya's turn next.... waahooo!!!! Can't Wait!!!
By the way readers and writers: I already asked this but if you end up feeling like you would prefer the story in a thread all its own just say the word.
And pleeeeease review because we have three of your favorite writers writing this story!!!! Let them know what excellent job they are doing!!! charmed addict Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 276 (5/23/04 9:45 pm) Reply Re: Part 1 started. Looking forward to Jediya's part -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Amazing beginning! I loved it! It sent chills down my spine! I think that it would be a good idea to start a new thread with this story so that no one has to spend HOURS looking for the update! You could have a post for the story and the reviews could come to this thread! It's just a suggestion! Don't think it's dumb of something! But great beginning! Can't wait to read Jediya's addition to it!
Definition Of HERO: Chris Halliwell! hollyhalliwell Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 294 (5/23/04 9:47 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! PART 1 POSTED!!!!! READ AND REVIEW! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- You did a wonderful job writing the beginning of our story, and totally enjoyed reading it. i can't wait to see what jediah does with the next section, and I am really looking forward to writing my part. Again, you did a terrific job!
I think it would be a good idea to post this story in it's own topic. I took the time to come up with a few ideas for the name, but none of them have to be used.
The truth behind it all
What's Real?
Is it really you?
What happens now?
Battle temtations
Who's the hero?
Final War
Those are just some ideas, some represent what will happen in future parts of the story. Does anyone like any of them.(writers and oddball)
Thanks Holly Aurora Nightstar Posts: 395 (5/23/04 10:25 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! PART 1 POSTED!!!!! READ AND REVIEW! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I called it final War (for now) I am quite willing to change the title to suit you or Jediya. Anyway, Holly, I am looking forward to your piece to this too. I know you and Jediya will do a great job!!!
Edited by: Aurora Nightstar at: 5/24/04 12:17 am oddball7 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 298 (5/23/04 10:48 pm) Reply ezSupporter Re: U PICK! PART 1 POSTED!!!!! READ AND REVIEW! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I like both Who's the Hero and Final War for titles And for easy to find the link to the story is posted in the first post of this thread.
And here it is again : U PICK! Story Link Esmeralda Posts: 692 (5/24/04 1:09 pm) Reply Re:U Pick -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Great idea to both put this in a new thread and to post a link to it, Oddball!! I'd use a title something like "U PICK! PART 1 POSTED!! LINK'S HERE!" or something like that, so we don't have comments in two different threads.
Also great job of updating your own first post, since we don't need all that info anymore. You have my permission (not that you need it!!) to break your arm patting yourself on the back, because this is a *fantastic* idea!! And, man, has Aurora gotten it off to a great start!! Can't wait to see what Jediya does with it!!
Are you planning on having Jediya post his/her part in that same thread as Aurora's or a different one? If a different one, then you should put both links in your first one.
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Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 22:08:22 GMT -5
oddball7 Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 301 (5/24/04 5:10 pm) Reply ezSupporter Re: Re:U Pick -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- thank you, your welcome.... and yes I do plan on having jediya post her addition in the same thread as Aurora's. That way the story is all right there in one thread for people to read and review !
P.S. I can't wait for jediya's part either Esmeralda Posts: 696 (5/24/04 10:53 pm) Reply Re: UPick -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Good job with the title, Oddball!! Perfect!!! hollyhalliwell Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 297 (6/13/04 6:53 pm) Reply Re: U PICK! PART 2 POSTED! Check Here in 1st Post For Link -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I'm back from vacation, but you deleted the day my section was due. Do you happen to remember it?
Thanks a bunch, and I can't wait to write again! Holly hollyhalliwell Charmed Cafe Member Posts: 307 (6/17/04 11:44 am) Reply Re: U PICK! PART 2 POSTED! Check Here in 1st Post For Link -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I've now posted the next section of the upick story, and I hope everyone enjoys reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!
Thanks for reading Holly Aurora Nightstar Posts: 551 (8/13/04 6:58 am) Reply Re: U PICK! PART 2 POSTED! Check Here in 1st Post For Link -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I have my section done for UPick. Jediya approved it, so it is posted, thanks!!
Edited by: Aurora Nightstar at: 8/14/04 1:08 pm
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Post by Esmeralda on Feb 17, 2006 13:03:57 GMT -5
Just letting you all know that Aurora, Jediya & Holly have all found their way to The LIBRARY of CHARMED and are talking about working on this again!! Hopefully if there's enough interest here, they'll also post it here!!! WELCOME BACK, HOLLY!!! WE'VE MISSED YOU!!!
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