Post by Lady on Jan 9, 2005 21:37:54 GMT -5
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Reply ~The Unexpected Halliwell~ Chapter 2 Please review!
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Ok i'd like you to keep in mind that this is my first fan fic and i hope you like it. and yes it ties into charmed. comments are welcome good or bad.
Disclaimer: i don't own anything charmed yada yada yada!
Chapter 1
As I walked out of my last class at my high school in Los Angeles I through my hands up in the air a shouted YES! As loud as I could, I had just finished my senior year in that hell school and couldn’t have been happier to be out of there.
I went to my locker and cleaned it out taking every thing out when I came to a old picture of my Ex boy friend I had broken up with last week I took a long hard look at it before I tore it in half and through it in the trash as I walked out of that school for the last time. That cheating son of a B**** didn’t deserve me and wasn’t worth my time mourning over him.
I got out of my car and walked into my apartment building, up to the fifth floor, down to the last door on the right. I stopped and looked through my bag for my keys, once I found them I put them into the lock and turned it opening my door I walked into my apartment it wasn’t much, it had a living room a kitchen, bathroom and a master bedroom, But it was home. I set my stuff down on the table and went into the bathroom turned on the shower; once it was warm I got in a let the warm water run over me. All too so it was time to get out and go to work. I grabbed a towel that was hanging near the shower and wrapped it around me as I stepped out of the shower. I went to the mirror and looked at my reflection. I had shoulder length black hair with mesmerizing green eyes, my skin was semi pale but I liked it that way. I pulled my hair back out of my face and put on my makeup, and then I walked into my bedroom and stood in front of my closet, I pulled out my black dress and put it on, then I walked out into the kitchen grabbed my cell phone and keys and headed out to my car.
I walked into Alexander’s a huge restaurant in L.A that I managed and occasionally cooked at, that’s what I wanted to do cook I was going to attended a culinary school in the fall. Your late Grace said Brendan Calaway. Your clocks fast I responded. Sorry excuse for a manager don’t you think he said trying to hide his smile. Nope not really I like it now get back to work I said with a laugh as I walked into the back office and flipped on the computer. I checked my mail and opened a letter from a detective I had hired to fined my birth parents. You see I was given up at birth and don’t know anything about my parents, and would like to get to know them if they’ll let me.
Letter
Dear Ms James,
I have been looking for your parents for sometime now and after many dead ends I think I’ve tack down your mother to the city of San Francisco it shouldn’t be long before I have some sort of a lead where to fined her. Sorry to keep this so short but I’m on a tight schedule hope you understand.
Detective Jack Thomson :?
I let out a deep breath and closed out of the letter. I was that much closer to finding my mother witch was something I had wanted to do for a long time now. I got up out of the chair and went back to work making sure everything went smoothly for the rest of the evening. It was soon time to closes up and as I was locking up the back Brendan snook up behind me and put his hands over my eyes, I about jumped out of my skin. Easy there it’s just me he said in a warm voice. God dam it Brendan don’t do that to me. Sorry I was just messing with ya. Well don’t next time. Ok ok well see ya tomorrow Grace. And he left; I then finished locking up and headed out to my car.
As I walked through the dark alleyway I could feel someone fallowing me. Dam it Brendan knock it off already it’s not funny any more. And I continued to walk only faster this time when someone, I don’t know how appeared in front of me. I came to an abrupt stop in front of him. Who the hell are you? And how did you do that? I asked shakily. What’s wrong witch never seen a demon before he said while pulling out an knife? I don’t know what your talking about I’m not a witch there not real I think you need to see a shrink I said as a slowly back away. Oh that’s right mommy didn’t want you, so you never got told about magic. He smirked as he approached her. You don’t know what the hell you’re talking about. I shout at him. I was now backed into a wall with no where to go. Looks like you backed your self into a corner with no where to run, this should be easier then I though. He through the knife at me But I put my hands up, I don’t know how but the knife turned a hit him instead. He then burst in to flames and you might say he was vanquished in them.
Edited by: charming and wicked at: 6/23/04 9:55 pm
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great beggining can't wait to know more
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Chapter 2
The next morning I woke shill shaken by the past days events. Was it real or did I just dream it I thought to my self. Don’t be crazy Grace things like that don’t happen witches aren’t real. I took a few deep breaths and reluctantly got out of my comfy bed, and made my way to the kitchen to fix myself some breakfast, I ended up just grabbing a toast and some orange juice I wasn’t in the mood to cook.
When I looked at the clock it was already nine, and I had to meet Mr. Davis the health inspector at the restaurant around ten. I finished my orange juice and headed into the bath room I showered quickly and put on a khaki skirt that hit just above my knees and a purple spaghetti strap top that tied in the back. I pulled my hair into a bun leaving a few bangs in my face as I rushed out the door.
I arrived a little after ten and the heath inspector was already there waiting for me. I put smile on my face as I walked up to him. I’m so sorry I’m late traffic was awful there was an accident… save it Ms. James I don’t want to hear excuses I’m on a tight schedule so can we please get this inspection under way. Yes of course fallow me. I lead him around
the restaurant insuring him that everything was up to code and running smoothly. Of course one of the freezers had quit running the night before and wouldn’t be fixed for a week and the pluming in the main bathroom broke. It looks like your have quit a few problems here Ms. James why don’t you close down for a few days and work on them and I’ll come back later next week. I assure you its all under control the Plummer’s coming later today to fix the bathroom and we have three other freezers we don’t need to close down. I don’t agree Ms. James but I’d be will to reconsider if you have dinner with me he said with a smirk on his face. I looked at him for a moment trying to contain my composure, but it didn’t last long. No way in hell would I ever go out with a scum bag like you! Now I strongly suggest that you inspected this restaurant professionally or I will call you boss and tell him what kind of low life he has working for him. I narrowed my eyes and I looked at the pen in his hand, thinking it should just leak ink all over him. Before I new it the pen splashed ink all over his shirt. I tried not to laugh but failed miserably; the inspector just turned around and left. Little did I know Brendan had been watching me the whole time and smiled when he saw what I did, She’s ready he said to him self as he walked out the back. He then made sure no one was around and orbed out.
Later that day I was at home and curiosity got the better of me so I cositrated on an apple that was on the table and lifted my hand, to my amassment the apple lifted slightly off the table into the air. I quickly dropped my hand and the apple fell. I took several deep breaths a little over come by what was happening to me.
I jumped as my phone rang. God Grace get a hold of your self I said before answering my phone. Hello Grace speaking? Hi Grace its Detective Thomas, I’ve found out who your mother is he said solemnly. I took several deep breaths, well that’s grate I replied excitedly. The thing is Grace she passed away three years ago. I could feel tears coming to my eyes but why it’s not like I new her she really wasn’t my mother only the blood. Can I ask what her name was? Prue Halliwell he answered.
