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Hello all mcmfelement here finally i can post now so i decided to contiune my fan fic renamed it 2 the the epic battle

ill give u a little insight and teaser into whats going to happen

*****wyatt comes back to the past seeking revenge, taking control of the underworld uniting all deamons he will start a epic battle that will determine the fate of the world. Can the charmed ones gather enough strength and allies to defeat wyatt and hs armies? what will happen to good magic and the innocents? who will help the charmed ones? all will be revealed in a massive climax all out war between evil and the rest of the world............

hope i got u guys intrested plz review people to let me know if i showed keep it going

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CHAPTER ONE--GOING BACK

*****In the future, in the attic of the Manor*****

“Nooooo!” Wyatt screams, as the portal Chris has just leapt through
instantly vanishes. Breathing deeply, full of rage, he turns and heads
towards Bianca. He looks down with delight as he stares at the large,
thick piece of wood impaled right through her stomach.

“Fools, did you think you could really out-smart me?” Wyatt asks with
a smug expression across his face. “I wrote that spell myself. I don’t
need a piece of paper to rhyme it, but I suppose because of your
insolence and betrayal, I will personally have to sort out this mess
once and for all,” as he stands up, hovering over her body. “If Chris
doesn’t come to me, then I will go to him. Pity you won’t be around to
see it!” and with that, Wyatt starts laughing as he and the Book orb
out of the attic.

Bianca lies alone, shivering, slowly dying in the corner of the attic. No,
no, this can’t happen, she thinks to herself. Not after everything that’s
happened! I can’t lose him again!

Then out of the corner of her eye, she notices the swirl of bright blue
energy lights forming into a figure.

“Bianca! Bianca?” the guy shouts as he runs over to her side. “What
the hell has he done to you?” he whispers as he places his hand on
her chest.

He closes his eyes as blue swirls start to appear around his and
Bianca’s body, then they both vanish. Almost as soon as they vanish,
they reappear in the middle of the attic in the same position as they
are before. However, this time the piece of wood impaled through
Bianca’s stomach is gone. He places both hands over the gaping
wound in her stomach. As he starts to concentrate, a warm golden
glow radiates from his hands, healing her wound.

After several seconds, the glow dims and vanishes from sight.

“You OK?” he asks as he stands up. “That was a close one.” 
Bianca, lying on the floor, shimmers out and shimmers straight back
in, this time standing up, dusting herself off. “Yeah,” she replies.
“Thanks, but we got a problem. I need your help, Marc. He’s going
back to kill Chris! We’ve got to stop him!” 
Marc looks at her. “But how? We don’t know the spell he’s using, and
we can’t fight him. We wouldn’t stand a chance--not with all his
powers--not to mention his guards.” 
Bianca starts walking towards the triquetra symbol on the wall, left by
the portal. “I know, but I remember the spell Chris is using--I
memorized it the first time we used it, just in case, but we can’t do this
alone.” She spins around and starts walking back towards Marc. “But
I’ve got a idea., C’mon, let’s go!” She grabs Marc’s arm and both of
them shimmer out of the attic.

*****In a big well-lit cavern******

“My lord, your army is ready,” a demon whispers to Wyatt, and with a
smirk, Wyatt replies, “Good. Enough time has passed. Let’s go,” as
he spins around to the triquetra symbol marked on the wall of his lair,
identical to the one found in the attic of the Manor.

He starts reciting his spell. As more words of the rhyme are recited,
the symbol swirls and opens into a blue vortex. Wyatt glances at his
demon guard and walks through the portal, followed by his army of
demons. As the last demon walks through, the portal flickers and then
closes behind them.

*****Somewhere else******

Bianca and Marc shimmer in, in front of an old worn-out cave.

“You sure about this, Bianca?” Marc asks.

“It’s our only hope” she replies as she enters the cave.

They both walk through the long and twisted passages until they
appear in a large open light-lit room.

“Who goes there?” booms a loud, fierce voice.

Bianca steps forward and shouts, “ I am Bianca. This is Marc. We
come for your help.” 
“Why have you disturbed me?” booms the voice once more.

Bianca takes several minutes to explain the situation and her plan,
while Marc stands there, looking at the pictures of all these woman
warriors on the wall.

After several minutes of discussion, a young woman appears and
walks over to Bianca and hands her a medallion and a crystal. “These
will help with your quest. I wish you good luck,” as she turns and
fades back into the darkness of the cave.

Bianca turns and heads toward Marc. “OK, let’s do this,” as she takes
his arm and both of them shimmer out.

*****Back at the Manor******

Marc and Bianca both shimmer in, in front of the triquetra symbol in
the attic. Marc stands, glaring at the symbol.

“Marc, you OK?” Bianca asks.

“Yeah, just a bit nervous. I don’t know what I’ll say to them. Especially
her.” 
“Don’t say anything. Chris wouldn’t have mentioned you. He’s trying
to minimize the amount he changes in the future, and besides, if
anyone knows what you’re feeling, he does,” Bianca replies
sympathetically.

Bianca looks up at the symbol and starts reciting Chris’ spell. As more
words of the rhyme are recited, again the symbol swirls and opens
into a blue vortex. Bianca turns to Marc. “Ready?” 
“Ready,” replies Marc, as they both pass through the portal.

********Back in the present, at a park************

Piper, Phoebe, Paige, Leo, Wyatt, Chris and Baby Chris are having a
family day out at the park. “It’s about time we do something normal for
a change,” says Piper, obviously relieved to be away from the magical
hectic that surrounds their life.

“Yeah,, it’s a pity, though, Gideon escaped. I still can’t believe that; it
still leaves a sour taste in my mouth every time I think about it,” grumbles Paige.

“Paige, enough magic talk! I want to enjoy this while I can, you got
me?” asks Piper, lying across a blanket, looking at Paige.

“Yeah, yeah. OK, I won’t mention another word,” she responds,
standing up. “Well, I’m going to get some ice cream. Anybody want
some?” 
However, as soon as Paige stands up, at least 80 demons suddenly
appear on the opposite end of the park. People start screaming and
running, bedazzled and terrified by what they have just seen.

“Oh **** where the hell did they come from?” Phoebe shouts as she
stands up.

“Leo, grab Wyatt! I’ll get Chris,” Piper shouts as she hurriedly swoops
Chris up out of his carriage.

“What are they waiting for?” Paige asks.

“Dunno,” responds Leo, with Wyatt now firmly in his arms.

A swirl of blue lights appears between the demons and the Charmed
Ones. A man appears, standing there with his back to them. As he
turns around and looks at them, he wickedly smiles. “Thought you
could avoid me forever, Chris?” 
All heads turn to Chris, anticipating an answer.

“No, you can’t be here!” cries Chris. “I took the spell with me! There’s
no way you could have came back, Wyatt! It’s impossible!” 
“Wyatt!” Piper and Leo both shout in amazement.

Wyatt stands there, looking at his family. “Hi. Mom, Dad” he says
looking directly at Piper and Leo while forming an energy ball in his
right hand.

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would like to thank Esmeralda for the improved literature version of this chapter. As i am a engineering student from Britian my mathematics is excellent and as you can tell my English is terrible so thx again Esmeralda

Chapter 2 SHOWDOWN

Wyatt looks at his parents one last time before turning his sights
straight at Chris. “I told you I don’t need you. Now you will all die
today because of you!” 
Wyatt releases his energy ball straight at Chris, who is still in shock
and can’t move. He stands there, watching this bright blue ball in slow
motion heading straight for him. Duck, dive he thinks to himself, but
still his legs won’t move.

“Chriisssss!” Piper shouts, horrified, raising her free arm in his
direction. Phoebe and Paige can’t manage to say a word; they just
stand there; dumbstruck at what is happening.

As the energy ball gets closer, Chris just simply closed his eyes. This
is it, he thinks, it’s all over, as he waits for the bolt to hit.

`Crrrrssshhhh` he hears. Startled, he opens his eyes and sees a blue
field in front of him. What, what happened? he thinks as he turns
around to look at his family. who are also surrounded by this bright
blue field. It’s Wyatt’s force field, he thinks, I don’t believe it! as he
looks at his baby brother who is staring back at him concernedly, not
fully understanding what’s going on.

“Damn that force field!” Wyatt shouts as he looks as his family who
are surrounded by it. “It might absorb one bolt, but it won’t last
forever,” he says confidently. He turns to his army. “You ten, disable
that shield!” he orders the demons standing directly behind him.

The demons respond by creating fireballs and launching them directly
at the shield. The fireballs hit the shield which absorbs their impact.

One of the demon turns around to face Wyatt. “My lord, our fireballs
have no effect!” 
Wyatt looks at him in disgust “I can see that ,you idiot!” as he forms
an energy ball and incinerates the demon for annoying him with his
stupid comment. “The rest of you, keep firing,” he commands to the
remaining demons.

The demons continue forming fireballs, ready to continue hitting Baby
Wyatt’s shield, when two of them instantly blow up. Wyatt looks up
and sees Piper standing there with tears streaming down her face,
gesturing with her open arm, blowing up everything she can aim at.

“Wyatt, what the hell is wrong with you?” shouts Leo.

Wyatt just grins at Leo and starts forming energy balls with both
hands, firing at Baby Wyatt’s shield.

Leo thinks to himself, “No, this can’t be happening! Not my son!” Panicking, he looks around. “We’ve got to get out of here,” he thinks
and with a wave of his wrist, they all start to orb out.

“Not so fast!” shouts Wyatt, who flings his right arm out telekinetically,
hitting the last orb pattern that falls to the ground and re-materializes
as Phoebe.

“Aunt Phoebe,” Wyatt grins, “Going somewhere?” 
“Wyatt what the hell are you playing at? Are you insane? You can’t
do this to your own family!” Phoebe says, scampering back, trying to
make more distance between them.

“Why?” Wyatt asks. “It wouldn’t be the first time,” Wyatt says, walking
towards her.

Phoebe suddenly stops and looks at him and stands up. “What! “No, I
don’t believe you! You couldn’t do that! Not to us!” 
Wyatt smiles. “What? Chris forget to tell you that little detail, did he?
Typical.” Wyatt forms an energy ball in his right hand. “Well, Aunt
Phoebe, it’s been good, but--” and with that, he fires an energy ball
straight at her.

Phoebe puts out both arms, trying to use her empathy power to divert
the energy ball straight back at Wyatt, but Wyatt’s powers are just too
strong, and she only manages to slightly defect it. Phoebe is flung
back with the power it takes to deflect the energy ball, and she is
slammed to the ground, hitting her head and knocking her out cold.

Wyatt walks up triumphantly, ready to make the final blow, when he
hears one of his followers shout, “Lord, behind you!” As he spins
around, he sees Marc, who has just orbed in, aiming an energy ball
right for him, which strikes Wyatt full on the chest, knocking him off
his feet and slamming him onto the grass.

Marc spins to see four demons making fireballs and throwing them in
his direction. Marc quickly raises his right arm in a swinging motion,
telekinetically throwing the fireballs back and incinerating the four
demons.

Marc runs over to Phoebe and stands above her. He spins around to
look at Wyatt, who is getting back to his feet. Marc smiles, and with
that, he places a hand on Phoebe and orbs out.

Wyatt walks over and stands where Phoebe has just lain.

“My lord, why didn’t you just destroy them? It seems like you are
holding back,” a demon asks.

Wyatt glares. “Of course, I held back, you imbecile! I can’t exactly kill
my younger self, now can I?” 
“Of course, my lord, forgive my stupidity,” the demon begs.

“Not to worry. I already have a plan on how to separate my younger
self from the Charmed Ones, and then we can destroy them all!” Wyatt starts smiling, turns and orbs out

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Very interesting -- I like how you've done an alternative to the season finale -- where Chris didn't die, Gideon wasn't killed, so there's still a reason for Chris to stay around and protect Wyatt.

And I love that Bianca survived! I have a feeling that your version of her and Marc are going to be very interesting characters, indeed. And I'm wondering who the "she" Marc spoke of is -- how is he connected to TCO -- he's a whitelighter, obviously, but full-blooded or not is the question. Looking forward to seeing what you have planned.

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would like to thank Esmeralda for the improved literature version of this chapter. As i am a engineering student from Britian my mathematics is excellent and as you can tell my English is terrible so thx again Esmeralda

CHAPTER 3--FIND A LOST LOVE

***************An open woodland area************

Marc has orbed in with Phoebe, who is still unconscious, and whom
he lays on the ground. He places his hand over her head, and with an
orange glow, heals her wound to help her regain consciousness
quicker.

Phoebe puts her hand on her head. “Ouch! That is sore,” she says,
rubbing her head, opening her eyes. Phoebe quickly jumped back
“Who the hell are you?” she demands, rolling herself over, trying to
distance herself.

“My name is Marc. I’m a friend of Chris’,” Marc replies, smiling at her.
“Good to see you’re OK.” 
“Whoa! Back up there! You’re a friend of Chris’?” Phoebe asks
suspiciously, looking at Marc.

Marc smiles. “Yeah, I’m from the future as well. Bianca and I came
back to help you guys against Wyatt. You’re the empath. Sense me.
You’ll see I’m telling the truth.” 
Phoebe stares at Marc, concentrating, trying to get a hit off his
feelings. “I’m not sure. I can feel that you are sincere, but you’re
hiding something from me,” Phoebe replies.

“I can’t let you see everything of the future, Phoebe; thought Chris
would have explained that to you.” 
Phoebe looks Marc up and down. “Well, guess I got to trust you. After
all, you did save my life.” 
Marc holds out his arm to help Phoebe to her feet. “Thanks, I think,” he says as Phoebe rises.

“You said Bianca is here with you. How’s that possible? Chris says
she died.” 
“I managed to save her once Chris had went back through the portal,” Marc replies, looking around at the open area.

“We have to get back to my sisters” Phoebe says, dusting the dirt off
her jeans.

“No” replies Marc. “Wyatt will be in the underworld, recruiting all the
demons to strengthen his army, I need your help, Phoebe. We need
to find someone who will help us. Someone powerful, but it will be
difficult to get to him.” 
“Who?” asks Phoebe,

Marc turns, facing directly at Phoebe. “We’ve got to find Cole” 
Phoebe’s heart jumps. Cole, she thinks to herself, and all her
memories of him came flooding back. All the love and pain rush
through her all at once, overwhelming Phoebe. As her head starts to
fuzz, wobbling, she collapses onto the ground.

“Phoebe, you OK?” Marc asks, grabbing hold of her, trying to break
her fall.

“Yeah, just got a little light-headed there,” as she regains her
composure, standing back up. “We vanquished Cole; he’s gone.” 
“Phoebe, of all people you should know there is always a way. How
many times have you vanquished Cole and he managed to come
back?” 
“But how?” Phoebe asks.

“The well,” Marc replies. “The well will take us down to the Valley of
the Cursed,” Marc adds as he spins around, looking directly at an
abandoned old well.

“Down there?” Phoebe asks as she approached the well, looking
down it.

“Yes,” replies Marc. “Phoebe, getting in is the easy part; it’s getting
out that’s the problem. Only you can convince him to help us, and
without him, we won’t be able to get out of there.” 
Phoebe looks directly at Marc, pondering, thinking. “Let’s do it! “she
says.

“Are you sure?” Marc asks.

“Yes,” replies Phoebe.

Marc takes Phoebe’s hand, and blue swirls of energy engulf both of
them. The blue swirls rise, then disappear down the well.

*******Down in the underworld*********

Wyatt stands on a ledge in front of thousands of demons. “This is
your time! No more will you be forced to hide down here! Today will
we rise, and we will take the world by force, destroying anyone who
stands in our way!” Wyatt proclaims.

A loud roar erupting from the demons, chanting their approval of their
new leader. “Wyatt! Wyatt! Wyatt!” the crowd cheers.

Wyatt stands there triumphantly, looking over the thousands of
demons now under his control. “Go now, bring the world to its knees!” Wyatt shouts.

A final roar erupts at his command as all the demons start to shimmer
and flame out, up towards the earth.

Wyatt turns and walks off the ledge and turns to the last remaining
demon. “They won’t know what hits them!” he snickers.

The demon replies, “But what about Marc? How did he mange to get
back here? He could be a problem.”

“I’m not sure. Yes, he could, but I’ve killed him once; I can do it
again,” Wyatt replies, then he adds, “Now, my friend, let’s go up and
pay a visit to the Elders!” Wyatt places a hand on the demon’s
shoulder and orbs out.

As soon as Wyatt orbs out, Gideon de-cloaks himself “What have I
done?” he asks himself. “I must try and fix this, but how?” he wonders.
“Without the other Elders, I cannot do much,” he ponders. “I need to
do something now, but the only thing I can do is.. yes, yes, that will
help them now until I can get back up there.” 
Gideon spins and raises his arms:

“In this darkest hour I call to thee
Bring forth the light force that we see
Although undestined it may be
Charm all the Charmed Ones
So they posses the same as me.” 
A bright swirl of light escapes from Gideon’s hands, rushing up,
straight through the walls and vanishes. Gideon lowers his hands,
turns and orbs out.

*******On the island of Valhalla*********

Bianca shimmers in and starts to walk towards the huts. Soon she is
surrounded by Valhalla warriors.

“How dare you come onto our island?” one of the warriors shout.

“I am here to see your leader, Shia,” Bianca shouts, looking around at
the warriors, determining if she could defeat them.

Two warriors separate, opening a gap in front of Bianca. “What
makes you think I would speak to you?” a woman demands as she
approaches Bianca.

Bianca unclips the medallion given to her and throws it at the woman.
“You did,” she says confidently.

The woman picks up the medallion and studies it and looks back at ,
Bianca. “Explain yourself quickly” she demands.

Bianca looks around at all the warriors “Your battle, the one that you
have been preparing for, has arrived. I hope you’re ready.”

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Oh, my -- I didn't realize you had more of the story posted!

I still think it's really cool -- and you just keep pulling things out of the hat. I love that you're going to try to bring Cole back, and that Gideon has (maybe) seen the error of his ways. Interesting spell -- I hope it does what I think it will! And Bianca + Valkyries = super fight coming up!

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CHAPTER 4--BATTLE ZONE

Marc and Phoebe re-materialize down at the bottom of the well.

“EWWWW! What’s that?” Phoebe asks, pointing at a wall made of a
slimy silver liquid.

“It’s the passageway,” Marc replies. “Once we walk through it, our
powers will be useless,” he adds.

“Typical; nothing is ever easy in my life,” Phoebe sulks. “OK, let’s get
this over way” she says as she walks through the liquid passage.
Marc follows and they re-emerge on the other side.

They emerge in a small room with a passage opposite them with a
bright light coming from it. Phoebe walks up to the passage and
gasps as she see demons in all shapes and sizes chained to the
walls, being constantly burned alive.

“It never ends; they are always in pain,” Marc says quietly to Phoebe,
looking around.

“I had no idea” Phoebe replies, overwhelmed.

“Yeah,, we’ll be safe as long as we don’t go near them,” Marc says as
he walks through the passageway into the cavern. “C’mon, we’ve got
to find him quickly,” he adds, looking back at Phoebe.

“I’m coming,” she replies as she slowly enters the cavern.

*******On the island of Valhalla*********

“I have alerted the other tribes. We will be ready in approximately one
hour.” 
Bianca turns. “Good. there will be lots of them, and remember, he has
no quibbles about exposing magic--that is of no concern to him, so be
prepared for an open battle.” 
“We will be ready,” the Valkyrie leader replies.

“Good, then I shall leave. I must gather more allies if we are to win.” 
“We shall see you on the battlefield,” the Valhalla leader replies. She
bows, then turns and walks away.

Bianca takes one last look around then sighs. “Okay, here we go,” she says to herself as she shimmers out.

******** In a large barn*************

Thirty or so people stand in a circle, all wearing cloaks. One of them
walks into the center of the circle and dehoods herself. “It is the
Charmed Ones; they attack myself and my daughter, Bianca.” 
“Are you sure?” one of the other hooded people asks.

“Yes, I am” the woman replies.

“Are we exposed? Are they after us?” another hooded person asks.

“I’m not sure; it is complicated.” 
“Explain yourself,” another voice booms.

“Well--”

The woman is interrupted in mid sentence. “--they are after me!” a
voice shouts from the background. Everyone turns to see Bianca
standing there, leaning against a post. “You’re getting sloppy if I can
gain entry without detection so easily,” Bianca says with her arms
folded across her chest.

“Intruder!” one of the cloaked people shouts as she conjures an
energy ball in her right hand and throws it directly at Bianca.

Typical, Bianca thinks to herself as the energy ball approaches her.
Bianca shimmers out as the energy ball screams through the air
where she once stood and hits a wooden post, blowing it in half.

Bianca shimmers in, directly behind the hooded person and kicks her
as hard as she can. Instinctively she spins through the air, kicking
another one in the face. As she lands, she rolls and leaps up,
undercutting the final cloaked person standing there, knocking her
high off her feet and into the air.

Bianca turns and faces the rest of the hooded people who have
conjured energy balls but are still watching her every move. Bianca
raises her right arm, exposing her phoenix birthmark to all. “Well,
thank for the welcome-home party; now can we talk?” Bianca calmly
asks.

The woman who is standing in the middle of the circle pushes her
way to the front until she is directly in front of Bianca. “Bianca, is that
you?” she asks.

“Hi, Mom; I’m back. Miss me?” Bianca says with a smirk across her
face. The rest of the hooded people look at each other and extinguish
their energy balls and de-hood themselves. Bianca probes the crowd,
looking from left to right, addressing everyone at the same time.
“Fellow Phoenixes, we are in grave danger, and I need your help.” 

********Back at the Manor*******

Piper frantically paces up and down the living room. “Where is she?” she keeps asking Leo, who is concentrating, trying to get a fix on
Phoebe.

“I don’t know, I can’t pin her down, but she is alive, I can feel her.” 
“Oooohh, mister, you’re going to get your little a$$ spanked!” Piper
cries, pointing in the direction of Baby Wyatt.

“Can’t we just bind Baby Wyatt’s powers? That will stop Adult Wyatt
from getting his, won’t it?” Paige asks.

“No,” replies Chris. “He used the same spell as I did, so his powers
are protected through time. Even if we did bind Baby Wyatt’s powers,
it’s too late; Adult Wyatt would still retain his powers.” 
Baby Wyatt, using his telekinesis, turns on the TV.

“What the hell!” Chris cries, panicking, watching the news which
shows thousands of demons strolling through the streets, destroying
everything and everyone they come across.

“Uh oh, their goes the magic secret!” Paige adds.

Piper stops and stares at the TV, when the purple swirl of light
appears, coming through the ceiling and engulfing her and Paige.
Nobody notices, not even Piper--they are all too busy watching the
events on TV.

“C’mon, let’s go” Piper says as she grabs her coat. “Leo, stay here
and watch the kids. Chris, Paige, you’re with me.” she adds.

“Where are we going, Mom?” Chris asks.

“To do our job,” Piper replies calmly as she takes his hand. “We’re
still the Charmed Ones. It’s up to us; you know that!” Piper says
looking at Paige.

Paige nods in agreement as they all orb out.

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******On the streets of San Francisco*******

Paige, Piper and Chris orb in at the park to see a large group of
demons chasing several innocents around, drawing out the kill for
their own amusement and pleasure.

“Hey! Pick on someone your own size!” Piper shouts as she gestures
towards a demon, who cries out in pain as he is blown to pieces.

Piper’s action draws the attention of the surrounding demons, who
relay the message that the Charmed Ones are in the park to the other
demons causing carnage down the adjacent streets. Suddenly
hundreds of demons shimmer and flame in, surrounding Paige, Piper
and Chris.

“Stupid witches!” one of the demon shouts confidently. “You really
think you can take all of us?” he adds. Other demons laugh at this
remark, knowing that even the mighty Charmed Ones can’t kill
hundreds of demons at the same time.

“Guess we’ll find out!” Piper shouts while gesturing her wrists, blowing
up the loudmouth demon.

The other demons growl and snarl at the three of them and start to
advance on them when a large, bright-blue portal appears directly
behind them.

“What is that?” Paige asks.

“I dunno,” Piper answers.

“I didn’t do it!” adds Chris.

The portal flickers, then five Valkyrie warriors come running out,
followed by another five, followed by another, and another. The first
five warriors lift up their spears and throw them at the closest
demons, impaling them and incinerating the demons. As the spears
drop, they magically disappear and reappear in the Valkyries’ hands
once again. The demons pause, slightly confused, then raise their
arms and conjure their energy and fire balls and start attacking the
Valkyrie warriors who keep pouring out the portal.

Chris looks around and notices that portals are appearing all over the
adjacent streets, and that a full-scale battle is about to commence.

“Where did they come from?” Page asks.

“Who cares? Let’s take advantage of it!” Chris replies, running up and
telekinetically throwing a couple of demons’ fireballs directly back at
them, incinerating them.

Paige, agreeing with Chris, spins around and calls for the energy ball
that is in mid-flight, heading for a Valkyrie warrior, and directs it back
at the closest demon, killing him instantly.

Piper runs, continually gesturing her wrists, blowing up every demon
that crosses her path. As she runs, gesturing with her wrists, she
doesn’t notice the demon that has shimmered in, directly in front of
her. As she looks up, she catches the sight of a fist coming directly for
her, smacking her hard, right on the cheekbone. This sends Piper
flying upwards, then crashing down onto the grass. Several demons
converge on her and produce energy balls.

“Time to die, witch!” one of the demon says as they all raise their
energy balls and aim for Piper.

Chris, running by, telekinetically throwing demons high into the air,
stops as he sees the demons bringing down the energy balls directly
at Piper, who has managed to sit up and can see the energy balls
coming for her. Chris’ heart stops. He feels the tears quickly filling his
eyes. “Moooooooom!” he manages to scream as the energy balls are
released, heading straight for Piper.

Piper raises her hand and looks away, accepting her fate, when a
swirl of purple energy surrounds her, and she orbs out as the energy
balls fly through her purple orbs and hit the ground. Piper orbs back in
next to Chris, who is speechless. Piper, looking confused, looks at
Chris, then looks at the demons, who are baffled. Piper’s anger grows
as she quickly gestures at them, blowing them up, two at a time.

Chris, still speechless, looks at Piper, puts out his hand and hits her
shoulder. “Mom?” he asks, still shocked.

“Yeah,,, yeah, now stop hitting me or I’ll blow up your ass!” Piper
responds, trying to sarcastically play down what has just happened.

Paige runs up to both Chris and Piper, out of breath from the fight.
She gasps, “Piper, what the hell! I just saw you orbing in beside
Chris! When the hell did you start orbing?” 
“Don’t ask me,” Piper responds as Chris flings his arms around her,
finally catching on to what has happened.

“Don’t ever do that again!” Chris says, hugging Piper firmer.

“OK, OK, just don’t choke me to death!” Piper responds, smiling at
Chris when he finally lets her go.

Paige turns to see a group of about fifty demons who have broken off
from the fight with the Valkyries warriors, heading towards them. “Uh
oh,” she says as she tries to get Piper and Chris’s attention.

The demons are heading towards them when thirty hooded people
shimmer in, directly in front of the Paige, Piper and Chris, all
immediately conjuring energy balls and throwing them at the demons,
instantly vanquishing thirty of them. Again twenty of the hooded
people conjure more energy balls and take out the remaining demons
without even one of the demon having time to fight back. All of the
hooded people run directly for the closest battle, happening at the
other end of the park, conjuring athames as they join the fight.

“Huh,” Paige says as she stands there, looking at the single hooded
person standing there with its back to them. The hooded person turns
to face them and takes her hood down, showing her face.

“Bianca?” Chris asks in shock.

“Hi, Chris,” Bianca replies, smiling in his direction.

Chris stares at her for a few seconds, then looks at Piper, then back
to Bianca. As he does, he rolls his eyes back and faints.

[The big wussss!]

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thx scfi awesome to know that ure likeing this fic i have huge respect for ure work and the witch and assain 1 ure doing is definetly the best ive read so far so thx again

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Chapter Five: POWER BOOST

“Chris, Chris!” Piper shouts, gently slapping Chris across the face.

“Huh?” Chris responds, starting to come around. “Oh, man, what
happened?” he asks, rubbing his head.

“You fainted,” Bianca says, looking sincerely into his eyes.

“Bianca!” Chris shouts, still shocked.

“Yes, it’s me” Bianca responds lovingly. “Now, please don’t faint
again,” she teases.

“But how? I thought--” Chris starts to ask.

“It’s a long story. I’ll tell you later,” Bianca replies, putting out her hand
for Chris to grasp.

He takes her hand and slowly gets to his feet, smiling and staring at
her. “I still can’t believe it,” he says, rubbing his hand across her face.

“You didn’t think I’d let him win, did you?” she responds, putting her
hand onto his, which is still rubbing her cheek. “Don’t you have
something for me?” she asks, raising her left hand, indicating her
finger.

His smile grows. “I keep it with me always,” he says as he puts his
other hand into his pocket and takes her engagement ring out and
slides it onto her finger. “Back where it belongs!” he adds as he slowly
and passionately leans over and kisses her, as she kisses him just as
passionately back.

“Uhhhhh.” Paige says, looking at the both of them. Piper throws Paige
a look and quickly elbows her in the side to shut her up. “Ah, that hurt” Paige responds, rubbing her ribs as Chris and Bianca turn to face
them.

Piper just looks at both of them. “Lots of questions,” she says.

“Yeah,” replies Chris.

“But not now, later,” Piper adds.

Both Chris and Bianca just smile, and Chris responds, “OK.” 
Paige butts in. “Look, hate to break up this touching reunion, guys,
but in case you forgot, there’s kinda like a war going on!” 
“Yes, the Valkyries and the Phoenixes are on our side. Hopefully
more will come as news of this spreads,” Bianca responds.

“Well, let’s go and make sure we win,” Piper says as they all turn and
head back into battle.

****On the other side of town*******

Other good witches and their whitelighters have orbed in throughout
the city, and battles are appearing everywhere. The Charmed Ones’ friend, Darryl Morris, is on a rooftop with fifteen sniper police under
his command. “Take out the ones that make fireballs, understand?” he commands.

His team responds, then peer into the scopes. Two of the officers
open fire at the closest demon, but the bullets just seem to bounce
straight off him. The demon turns to see the officers on top of the
building, then shimmers out and shimmers back in on top of the roof
along side Darryl and his team. Darryl turns and immediately opens
fire with a handgun, but once again the bullets are useless. The
demon snarls and creates a fireball and aims at one of the officers,
incinerating him on impact. Darryl backs away, worried, when another
swirl of blue orbs appears beside him.

“Don’t ask,” the whitelighter says as he smashes a potion onto Darryl’ gun, making it glow green. “Shoot him,” the whitelighter adds.

Darryl doesn’t even pause for a second. With all his experiences, he
knows to trust the whitelighter completely, and on the whitelighter’s
command, he raises his gun and fires a few bullets, straight at the
demon. This time the bullets lodge straight into the demon’s chest.
The demon screams in pain before being engulfed by the flames as
he explodes.

The whitelighter dumps down the backpack. “There’s more of those
potions in there; can you make sure you radio around and tell all your
men?” the whitelighter asks.

“Sure” responds Darryl, who seems a bit surprised and overwhelmed.

“Other whitelighter will be orbing in with more of these potions to give
to the other officers throughout the city,” the whitelighter adds as he
turns and orbs out.

Darryl goes over to the bag and opens it up, taking a few bottle of the
potion out. “You heard the man!” Darryl says to his officers as he
starts handing out the potions.

*******Up in Elderland**********

Wyatt orbs in with his trusted demon friend. “Ah, I love this part,” Wyatt says as he conjures an energy ball and aims for the nearest
whitelighter he can find. Some of the passing whitelighters try to run,
only to get blown up with the flying energy balls being produced by
both Wyatt and the other demon. Panicking, some of the whitelighters
try to fight back, trying to hit Wyatt with their telekinesis, but it seems
to have no effect on him. He just smiles and continues blowing up
every whitelighter he can find.

One whitelighter manages to avoid the energy balls and makes it out
of the room. Running as fast as he can, he heads towards the Great
Chamber. Forcing the doors open, he bursts in to the Great Hall
where the Council of Elders is in session. “We have a--” the
whitelighter shouts, only to be blown up in mid statement.

Wyatt and the demon calmly walk in “Ah, the Great Hall of the
Elders,” Wyatt says, looking around the place. “I forgot what it looked
like,” he adds.

“Who are you? What do you want?” one of the Elders demands.

Wyatt smiles and starts walking towards them “Well, I created that
little distraction down there on Earth, so I could come up here
relatively unnoticed,” Wyatt beams. “So where is it that you store your
powers again, the Greek-god powers, to be exact.” Wyatt smiles and
turns. “But here’s me talking too much again, as usual “he adds
looking at the demon who takes that indication to create an energy
ball and aim at the Council of Elders. “Well, Elders, what can I say?
You can’t win them all!” Wyatt adds as he starts creating energy balls
of his own, incinerating all of the Elders present.

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The reunion of Chris and Bianca was just . . . awwww!

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CHAPTER 6--THE ESCAPE

**********Valley of the Cursed************

Marc and Phoebe are still walking around, trying to find Cole, “There!
I can see him” Marc says, pointing directly ahead.

“Where?” Phoebe asks, looking in the direction that Marc is pointing.

“Over there,” Marc says, pointing again.

Phoebe stares harder. Finally she notices Cole, engulfed in flames,
screaming in pain, but unable to hear his own voice.

“Cole,” Phoebe says softly, feeling the guilt rushing through her.
“We’ve got to get him out of there!” she says, looking around, trying to
find something that she can use to put the fire out.

“If we break him out, the guards will sense it and come after us
immediately,” Marc tells her. “Without our powers, we’ll have to break
him out the old fashion way,” he adds.

Phoebe nods in agreement. “OK, so how do we get him out?” she
asks.

“There’s only one way,” he replies, lowering his head.

“Which is?” she asks.

“Stand back!” he shouts as he moves her back and out of the way. He
takes a long deep breath, then turns and runs full speed towards the
fire and jumps straight in!

“Marc!” Phoebe screams as she sees Marc grabbing Cole, and then
the both of them leaping out of the fire. They both slam onto the floor.

“Ahh, that was a great idea,” Marc says as he rolls over and sit up,
grinning.

“Cole,” Phoebe gasps as she flings herself down towards him and
rolls him over.

Cole, who is dazed, starts coming around .“Phoebe? Phoebe. is that
really you?” he asks.

“Yes, Cole, it’s me; I’m here” Phoebe replies, tears filling her eyes.
“I’m so sorry,” she adds, taking his hand.

“Look, we haven’t got time for this. The guards will be here any
second,” Marc says as he gets to his feet.

“He’s right,” Cole responds, trying to stand up with Phoebe’s help.

“Look, I know you guys have a lot to talk about, but right now, I need
your concentration. We are gonna have to fight our way out of this,” Marc says, looking at both of them.

Cole nods his head, acknowledging that he understands what Marc is
saying, and Phoebe just turns to look at Cole.

“Here they come!” Cole says as six demon-like guards come running
at them with swords.

Marc is first to react. Stepping forward, the first guard swings his
sword for him which he ducks, Marc quickly responds by punching the
first guard on the right cheek, knocking him off to the left. As soon as
his punch lands, he follows through, spinning his body around and
kicking the second guard in the face.

Phoebe and Cole both quickly run towards the rest of the oncoming
guards. Phoebe, in mid stride, jumps and flies through the air,
smacking the third demon, bang, right in the middle of the chest,
which knocks him back onto the other two guards.

Cole runs towards the last standing guard who swings his sword
straight at him. However, Cole is too fast and manages to get close
enough to the guard to flip him over, grab his sword arm and snap it
in two. Cole quickly takes the sword the guard was carrying, turns it,
and drives it right through his heart. Cole pulls out the sword and
spins around to help Phoebe who is getting up from her earlier move.
She is first to her feet, quickly kicking the sword out of the closest
guard’s hand.

“Phoebe! Move!” Cole shouts as he runs up behind her.

Phoebe steps to the side to let Cole through. He draws back the
sword and cleanly slices off the guard’s head. Phoebe picks up the
other sword and drives it into the chest of one of the other guards who
is still trying to get to its feet. Cole flings his sword through the air at
the last remaining guard. The sword embeds itself straight into the
guard’s skull as he goes limp then drops.

Marc who has veered off to the left, grabs one of the guard’s arms.
“Phoebe! Catch!” as he throws the guard in Phoebe direction. She
doesn’t waste any time in quickly picking up a sword and driving it
through the guard’s stomach. Marc turns to duck a punch from the
last guard. He responds by opening his fist and ramming his open
hand hard into the base of the guard’s nose, breaking it, forcing it
upwards into the guard’s brain, killing him instantly. The guard slams
hard onto the floor.

Marc turns and picks up two swords, then tosses one to Cole. “Let’s
go, before more of them come,” Marc says, looking at Phoebe. She
nods in agreement as they start heading back towards the exit.

The three of them run all the way back to the exit. “There it is!” Marc
shouts, pointing at the exit. He is the first one to the narrow exit. He
runs through it, out into the small room. “C’mon!” he says as Phoebe
is next to run through the exit, out into the small room. They both turn
as Cole starts running through the narrow passage, when he falls in
pain.

“COLE!” Phoebe screams as she sees the sword sticking out of the
his back.

“Phoebe, grab him! Help me drag him through the passageway!” Marc shouts as he grabs Cole’s arm and starts dragging him.

Phoebe responds to Marc’s plea and grabs Cole’s other arm and they
drag him through the silver-liquid passageway. As soon as they
rematerialize, Marc orbs the three of them out of the bottom of the
well up to the woodland that surrounds it.

As soon as they orb in, Phoebe drops to her knees “COLE!” she
screams again.

“Move,” Marc commands as he bends down, grasps the sword and
yanks it out of Cole’s back. Marc flings the sword down, then places
his hands above the wound and tries to heal him.

Phoebe, too pre occupied with Cole, doesn’t notice the flutter of
purple orbs above her that zoom down and engulfs her then
vanishes. An orange glow emanates from Marc’s hands for quite
some time, them dims as Marc moves away.

Cole gasps, then began breathing heavily.

“Cole,” Phoebe quietly says, looking into his eyes.

“Hi, babe,” Cole replies, smiling at her.

Phoebe places her hand where Cole’s wound used to be. “You
completely healed him. How is that possible? Cole is half-demon. I
thought whitelighters couldn’t heal demons?” Phoebe asks Marc.

“It’s because we--” Marc replies, stopping in mid sentence.

“We what?” Phoebe asks.

“Nothing. It’s complicated, C’mon, we’ve got to get back to your
sisters,” Marc says, standing up.

Phoebe helps Cole to his feet.

“You feel strong enough to shimmer?” Marc asks Cole.

“Yeah,, I’m OK,” Cole responds.

“OK, I’ll meet up with you shortly. There’s something I’ve got to do
first,” Marc says as he quickly turns and orbs out.

Cole turns to Phoebe, “That’s one strange whitelighter,” he says as he
takes Phoebe’s hand and shimmers out.

******Up in Elderland************

Marc orbs in to see the Great Hall obliviated. “Guess he’s already
been here,” Marc says to himself, looking around at all the dead
Elders. Marc quickly glances at his watch. “Gideon, I know you’re
there. De-cloak yourself, so we can talk.” 
Gideon de-cloaked himself in front of Marc “How did you know I was
here?” Gideon asks.

“Because you told me you would be,” Marc replies, staring at a
puzzled Gideon.

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And Marc is getting more and more interesting. Can't wait to find out who he really is and how Gideon is going to help fix the mess he had a hand in creating.

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I just read this story and its great! My guess is that Marc is Phoebe's future husband. I'm glad Bianca's alive and with Chris. I want to know what Gideon did. Im hooked so please update soon

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CHAPTER 7--FLASHBACK

“What are you talking about?” Gideon asks.

“Well, in the future I...” 

[Flash forward or flash back--depends on how you want to look at it!]

Marc, Chris, Bianca and Patricia are running down an alleyway with a
bunch of kids. “Keep running!” Chris shouts as a handful of demons
shimmer in behind them.

Marc and Patricia stop and turn to face them. “Keep going!” Marc
shouts towards Chris. “You’ve got to get them to safety! They’re the
priority!” he adds as he turns back towards the demons.

Two of the demons conjure fireballs and throw them at Marc. Marc
swings his right arm, sending the fireballs back at the demons with his
telekinesis. One of demons manage to shimmer out in time to avoid
the fireball, however, the other demon isn’t so lucky, taking a direct hit
with his own fireball knocking him flying high into the air. As the other
demon starts to shimmer in, Marc manages to conjure his own fireball
and sends it straight at the demon. The demon is to slow to react and
fireball strikes him on the chest, incinerating him in flames.

Patricia conjures an energy ball and flings it at one of the demons,
knocking the demon flying hard into the wall. Marc, responding to
Patricia’s attack, conjures a yellow flamebolt and flings it, using his
telekinesis to speed it up, hitting the two remaining demons at the
same time, instantly vanquishing both of them.

As the two remaining demons gather their senses and rise to their
feet, a swirl of orbs starts to appear before them as Wyatt orbs in.
Wyatt stares at both Marc and Patricia before turning towards the two
demons. “Leave us,” he commands.

“But, my lord!” one of the demons protests.

“Are you questioning my orders?” Wyatt asks angrily.

“No, my lord,” responds the demon as he lowers his head and bows,
then both of them shimmer out.

Marc quickly turns to Patricia. “Get out of here now!” he cries.

“No,” replies Patricia, “I won’t leave you!” 
“Patricia, leave! I’ll hold him off! You must complete the mission!
Now, go!” Marc pleads.

Patricia stares at Marc, takes at quick glance at Wyatt, who is
watching them. Patricia knows Marc is right, but she can’t leave--it will
mean a certain death sentence for Marc if she does. However, Marc
must obviously guess that she is having troubles leaving and decides
she has to leave now, because he gestures with his left hand, and a
swirl of orbs appears around Patricia as she orbs out.

Marc turns back to face Wyatt “Wyatt, long time no see” he says.

“You have caused me far too much trouble, Marc. It ends today. I will
destroy you just as I did your mother and father!” Wyatt says
triumphantly.

Marc’s anger grows as his mind is drawn to the memories of his dead
parents. Both of Marc’s fists clench up as he starts running straight
for Wyatt.

Wyatt, reacting, conjures an energy ball and throws straight at Marc,
who, still running, gestures with his arm and sends the bolt straight
back at Wyatt, who raises his protective shield that has always
surrounded him. The energy ball simply bounces off the shield and
vaporizes.

Marc conjures an energy ball in his left hand and an athame in his
right. He throws the energy ball to distract Wyatt, then launches the
athame at him, accelerating it with his telekinesis. The energy ball
bounces off the shield and vaporizes. However, the athame stuck into
the shield, glowed orange and manages to collapse it.

“My shield!” Wyatt screams as his anger grows. “What did you do?” he demands.

“You think I would really tell you?” Marc replies. “Let’s see how tough
you are without your stupid shield!” he adds as he conjures another
yellow flamebolt and throws it straight at Wyatt, again speeding it up
with his telekinesis.

Wyatt, too accustomed to having his shield protect him, is slow to
react, and it hits him hard on the chest, knocking him back against a
fence. He drop to his knees, obviously hurt and dazed. looking up at
Marc, his anger deepening as he quickly rises back to his feet,
conjuring several energy balls, one after another, and firing them
straight at Marc.

Marc reacts, using his telekinesis to send the bolt back. However,
Wyatt has adapted and uses his telekinesis to send them back
towards Marc again. Wyatt’s powers are too strong for Marc to
handle; he only manages to redirect one of the energy balls away this
time, which smashes against a wall and vaporizes. The other two
energy balls strike Marc head on, throwing him back against the
fence, where a loose metal rod impales itself right through his
stomach.

Wyatt grins and strolls up to Marc and stares into his pain-ridden
face. “You’re a fool! You could have been my right hand man!” Wyatt
says, showing no compassion. “Well, give my love to my family when
you meet them!” Wyatt adds, smiling, as he orbs out.

Marc tries to fight the pain, but he can’t. and he soon slips into
unconsciousness.

“Hello, Marc,” he hears as he finds himself in a great white hall.

“Who are you?” he asks the stranger, standing opposite him.

“My name is Gideon” he says.

“Where am I?” Marc asks.

“You’re in the in-between place,” Gideon responds. “Marc, I have
stopped you from passing over, because I need your help,” he adds.

“My help?” Marc asks.

“Yes,” Gideon replies. “Approximately one year from now, you will
travel back through time. When this happens, you must go to the
Valley of the Cursed and free your father, then from there seek myself
out, and help me call upon the powers of the Guardian, so we can
make a portal to speak with him.” 
“Huh?” Marc asks. The Valley of the Cursed? What’s that, and how
the hell am I gonna be able to sense you? And a portal? I think you’ve
lost it, old man!” 
“Time passes differently down here. I will explain all you need to
know,” Gideon replies…..

[Back to the present time]

“So there you go. We spent six months together in that place,” Marc
says.

“But I don’t know how to create a portal to the Guardian,” Gideon
protests.

“You taught it to me, so I will teach it to you. I will rhyme it--all you
have to do is recite it,” Marc says. “But, first, we’ve got to bring Chris
up here. he’s the only one who can do it.”

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CHAPTER 8--WHO ARE YOU?

“We’re not on the best of terms, the Charmed Ones and I” Gideon
says, lowering his head in self-disgust.

“I know, but it’s only Chris we need to bring up here. I’ll be able to
control him; just you concentrate on gathering your strength. You will
need it for the spell,” Marc replies as he turns and orbs out.

***********Back in San Francisco***************

Cole and Phoebe shimmer in beside Piper. “What the hell is going
on?” Phoebe asks looking around at the mayhem.

“Eh, no biggie; just an all-out war,” Piper responds, gesturing with her
wrists, blowing up random demons that pass her way. “Where have
you bee…..” Piper starts asking, pausing in mid-sentence when she
turns to see Cole standing besides Phoebe.

“Phoebe?” Piper asks.

“Long story,” Phoebe responds, cutting her sister off. “Basically Marc
says we need all the help we can get, and by the looks of things, he
isn’t wrong.” 
“Piper, look out!” Cole shouts as he starts to run towards Piper,
creating an energy ball in his right hand.

Piper spins to see a demon creating a fireball, aiming for her, when
Cole steps in front of her, throwing the energy ball at the demon,
blowing him up on impact. He quickly regains his composure, turning
to Piper.

“Thanks,” Piper says, looking confusingly at Cole.

“No problem, but seriously. Piper, if you don’t trust me, trust in my
love for Phoebe. I will never let any harm come to her, and that
includes letting her sisters die.” Cole responds, smiling.

“Eh, guys,” Phoebe shouts, looking in the direction of ten oncoming
demons.

Piper and Cole quickly turn and stand beside Phoebe, staring at the
demons. The demons kept approaching, when suddenly two of them
are flung high into the air. Piper turns to see Chris and Bianca,
running straight for the demons. Bianca quickly creates energy balls
in both hands and throws them at the remaining demons, one after
another, blowing two of them up, then in mid stride, shimmers out.
Chris again telekinetically throws two more of the demon high into the
air as Bianca shimmers back in behind the demons and conjures an
athame. Quickly plunging the athame into one of the four remaining
demon’s back, twisting the blade as the demon screams in pain and
blows up. Bianca quickly turns and slices another demon’s throat
wide open, watching the demon as it drops to its knees and
disintegrates. Chris, in mid-stride, conjures two energy balls and
throws them at the last remaining demons, blowing them both up.

“They’re good together,” Cole says, turning to Phoebe, who smiling
agrees.

“Chris, what the hell, I didn’t know you can do energy balls!” Piper
demands.

“Yeah, I just hardly use it; that’s all,” Chris responds as he and Bianca
approach Phoebe, Piper and Cole.

“They know each other?” Cole asks Phoebe.

“Chris is Leo and Piper’s younger son.” 
“Oh,” Cole responds. “You know that she is a Phoenix right?” 
“Yep, figured that one out,” Phoebe responds, smiling lovingly at
Cole, making it obvious to all that she still has strong feelings for this
man.

As Chris and Bianca approach, Marc orbs in behind them. “You get
uglier every day, Chris!” he shouts.

Chris turns to see Marc. “You’re still alive?” Chris asks jokingly as he
embraces Marc in a hug. “Good to see you!” 
“Likewise. Sorry, I’ve got to keep this short, but you have to come
with me, Chris.” 
“Why, what’s wrong?” Chris asks.

“You just have to trust me; we have no time to spare. We’ve got to
go,” Marc adds, putting out his hand for Chris to take.

“He’s not going anywhere without me,” Bianca says, butting in.

Marc rolls back his eyes, knowing it is pointless to argue. “OK, but
let’s just hurry up,” he says as Chris takes his hand, while with his
other hand, Chris takes Bianca’s as they all orbs out.

“So, who we fightin’?” Cole wants to know, putting his hands together.
rubbing them, smiling.

Both Piper and Phoebe turn to Cole, looking at him angrily.

“What?” Cole asks, looking back at them.

“Nothing. Let’s just find Paige,” Phoebe responds. as they walk back
into the carnage.

Piper turns to Phoebe. "Hey, Phebes, guess what! I can orb now!"
Piper says, smiling at her younger sister.

***********Back up in Elderland***************

Marc, Chris and Bianca orb in. “Wow, this place is a mess!” Chris
says.

“So this is Elderland,” Bianca adds, looking around.

“Yeah, Wyatt’s been here already,” Marc responds. “He destroyed
most of the Elders, and some whitelighters, too.” 
“Why did he come straight up here?” Bianca asks.

“Gideon says he took the power of the Greeks. He is more powerful
now than ever,” Marc replies.

“Gideon?” Chris asks angrily.

“Yes Gideon. I know you are really mad at him. Chris; I understand, I
really do, but in the future I met him, and he explained a lot, and the
truth is if we are to defeat Wyatt, we need his help.” 
“You spoke to him in the future?” Chris asks, still very upset.

“You never told me any of this, Marc,” Bianca adds.

“Yes, I did speak to him. Look, it’s a long story that we haven’t got
time for the now. How do you think all the Charmed Ones got their
whitelighter powers? Look, guys, you’ve got to trust me, I know what
I’m doing, now are you OK with this?” and both Bianca and Chris
slowly nod in agreement.

Marc smiles. “Thanks, guys. Then he calls out, “Gideon, Gideon,
where are you?”

“I am here,” Gideon responds, de-cloaking himself in front of Marc,
Chris and Bianca.

“Son of a @#%$!” Chris screams as he dives straight for Gideon,
jumping on top of him, forcing him onto the cloud, gripping him by the
neck, squeezing as tightly as he can.

“Chris!” Marc shouts as he gestures his wrist, telekinetically knocking
Chris off Gideon. Marc quickly runs in between Chris and Gideon.
“Chris! Trust me” he repeats towards Chris, who is rising to his feet.

“That son of @#%$ tried to kill my family!” Chris shouts angrily.

“Chris, focus! If you want to stop Wyatt, you need him! You need to
trust me,” Marc pleads.

Bianca takes Chris’s arm and looks into his face, putting her free
hand on his cheek. “He’s right,” she says softly towards Chris.
“Concentrate on the big picture.” 
Chris bows his head at Bianca’s words, knowing she is right as usual.
“Why are we here?” Chris asks, raising his head towards Marc.

“We need to contact the Guardian,” Marc replies, turning towards
Gideon “Are you ready?” he asks.

“Yes,” replies Gideon.

“OK, recite this spell after me,” and Gideon nods.

Marc: Through time and space we call--
Gideon: Through time and space we call--
Marc: the Guardian we seek for all--
Gideon: the Guardian we seek for all.
Marc: Come to us, hear these cries--
Gideon: Come to us, hear these cries.
Marc: we need your guidance now, as all we love dies--
Gideon: we need your guidance now, as all we love dies.

A portal suddenly appears before them, and a man appears from it as
the portal closes in on itself. “Hello My name is Trequ. I am a
Guardian of Good” the man says. “I am here to help you in your
battle,” he adds as he turns towards Chris. “You are the second child
of Piper and Leo?” he asks.

“Yes,” responds Chris.

“The one responsible for this is Wyatt, your older brother?” Trequ
asks.

“Yes, he is,” Chris answers, lowering his head in shame.

“Well, if I am correct, then you must know that the man you call Wyatt
is not your brother.” ……………………..

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I really liked how Chris and Bianca time their attacks so that they're working together instinctively. And what a bombshell at the end, that Wyatt's not his brother! We're going to need an update to explain that really soon!

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Wow, I just found this story today...Well actually you told me about it but anyways...it's really good. The only think I don't get is why Cole would be so nice to Phoebe, Paige and Piper after they vanquished him...again. I would think he wouldn't be so happy to see them, but oh well I love your story! Keep posting more updates please!

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would like to thank Esmeralda for the improved literature version of this chapter. As i am a engineering student from Britian my mathematics is excellent and as you can tell my English is terrible so thx again Esmeralda

Chapter 9 -DECISIONS

“What?” Chris gasps. “What do you mean, he’s not my brother?” he
asks, shocked.

“Do you know what a Guardian is, Chris?” Trequ asks. When Chris
shakes his head, he sighs and says, “Then I had better start from the
beginning.

“Before man, there were lots of demons and angels fighting an
everlasting war. However, as time went on, our powers grew to an
extent where we could no longer be killed or seriously injured. As
such, fighting is no longer an option, because It is useless. So an
alliance was formed between good and evil, and it was decided to
leave this dimension and move onto a higher plane, allowing younger
less-powerful species to evolve, which included humans.

“As time went on humans evolved again into angels and demons, and
we concluded that a cycle was being reproduced, and that neither
side would intervene, allowing the natural course to take place.
However, as there are still humans as well as angels and demons, we
believed that you have centuries of evolution to achieve before
humankind will have totally evolved into the situation that was faced
by ourselves eons ago.

“Not so long ago, there was a rebellious group within our ranks
named Showten, who was led by a Guardian called Reulogue, who
disagreed with the policy of non-intervention. We think we have
driven him and has group into hiding, as he has not been seen for
quite some time. However some of us believe that he found a way
back to this dimension and has taken possession of your brother’s
body, as he represents the most powerful being in your dimension.” 
As we can no longer survive in your dimension without the blessing of
Melodeon, which can only be performed by our oldest and wisest
Elders, it is with their permission that I was allowed to perform one
indirect intervention to prove my theory that Reulogue has indeed
possessed your brother. As time has no meaning for us I have been
to what you call your future and seen your world destroyed. I have
studied the key moments over and over to determine the best
strategic action I can take to expose Reulogue and stop the
destruction of your planet. I decided that by releasing Cole from the
Valley of the Cursed and speaking to Gideon to be the best approach,
because I have seen that by introducing Cole back into Phoebe’s life,
they will again fall in love and create a powerful offspring--you,
Marc--which will add two more powerful beings to your cause. Marc
contains all the instructions that I have set out, and by using this
dagger, you will expose Reulogue and allow me to directly intervene
in this conflict.” Trequ says.

Chris, shell-shocked, stands and pauses for a moment. “This is great
news! All we have to do is stab Wyatt, and we can stop this from ever
happening,” Chris says turning to Bianca who has a sad expression.

“You have never really understood the concept of time travel, have
you, Chris?” she asks.

“What do you mean?” Chris asks cautiously.

“If you stop Reulogue--Wyatt-- whoever--then this battle will never
occur, meaning that there will be no need to release Cole. Hence
Marc will never be born. Chris, to save your brother you must sacrifice
your cousin!!!” she explains sadly, as she turns to face Marc.

“Oh,” replies Chris softly, also turning to Marc.

Marc stands there, pondering. “Look, guys, don’t feel sad for me. I
mean it, remember what Wyatt, sorry, Reulogue, has done in our
future. We have a chance to change all that and it’s something I will
definitely give my life for.” 
Chris stands, deep in thought. “There’s got to be another way. You
can’t ask me to kill you to save him! You’re more of a brother to me
than he ever was! I can’t do it; I won’t do it” Chris declares.

Bianca lowers her head. “Remember, Chris, the needs of the many
outweigh the needs of the few.” Bianca mumbles, disgusted at her
own words.

Marc walks closer to Chris. “If it’s any consolation, you will cease to
exist as well--we all will. Our actions determine who we are. If there
is no evil Wyatt in our future, then we wouldn’t be who we are. You
might not even meet Bianca in this new future, but one thing’s for
certain, you will save millions of lives. In fact, you will help save the
planet, according to him,” Marc says, trying to lighten the mood. “And
you will finally be able to spend time with your Mom” he adds which
seem to really have an effect on Chris.

“I understand, but I still don’t like it--I never will--but I will do it,” Chris
decides.

“OK, you’re the only one that can get close enough to him. His
powers are the weakest when used against you. Stab him with this
dagger and it will expose Reulogue,” Marc continues, handing the
dagger over to Chris before turning back to Trequ. “What will happen
once he is exposed?” 
“I will be allowed to directly intervene and take him back to our
existence” Trequ replies.

Marc spins back around to face Bianca and Chris. “OK, we know what
we have to do. I’ll take care of Golean. Bianca, you rejoin the
Charmed Ones and help them. Gideon, we can really use your help
down there as well, but I think you should try to stay out of the way of
the Charmed Ones--I don’t think they would hesitate in blowing you
up as well at the moment. And, Chris, well, you know what you’ve got
to do. I’ll help you as much as I can. OK, everyone, ready? Good
luck!” Marc says as he orbs out.

Chris turns and takes Bianca’s hand and also orbs out, Gideon
following suit as well, leaving only Trequ standing there. “Good luck,
little ones,” he proclaims as he slaps his hands together and
vanishes.

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Yes, that is the conundrum with time travel -- if good things come of a bad situation, then fixing the bad situation messes with those good things. Poor Marc, and poor Cole -- he has become an ally to them by being released from the Valley of the Cursed, proven that he can be good. But if they save Wyatt, he will never have that chance to be redeemed. So who do you choose to save -- Cole and Marc, or Wyatt?

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ust decided to complete chapter 9 instead of breaking it nto parts if i over shoot the story il increase the chapter amounts
to 25

so chapter nne has been extended and modified

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would like to thank Esmeralda for the improved literature version of this chapter. As i am a engineering student from Britian my mathematics is excellent and as you can tell my English is terrible so thx again Esmeralda

CHAPTER 10--SACRIFICE

******Back in San Francisco**************

Wyatt and his trusted demon-friend, Golean, flame in on top of a
building, overlooking the Golden Gate Bridge. “Time to test these new
powers!” Wyatt beams to Golean. “What shall I test them on?” he
asks, looking around for a target.

“What about the Bridge? Look at all those innocent humans trying to
run,” Golean responds, pointing to the Bridge in delight.

“Excellent choice,” Wyatt replies. He raises both his hand, focusing
his new powers. The clouds darken above him, and lightning and
thunder start to crackle and boom. “I think a lightning bolt to the
Bridge should do the trick,” he says, smirking, enjoying the moment.
He focuses once more, and a bolt of lightning shoots from the sky
and hit the support beams of the Bridge. The Bridge shakes from the
impact; people start screaming in terror as the Bridge sways from
side to side.

Wyatt laughs. “Screaming won’t save you!” he shouts in delight as he
focuses once more, conjuring another lightning bolt that once again
strikes the Bridge. One of the support beams collapses and splashes
into the water, destabilizing the Bridge, making it flip unevenly to one
side. Voices scream louder as people and cars slide down into the
freezing cold water, most certainly to their doom.

“Third time’s a charm!” Wyatt says, still laughing, enjoying every
moment of his actions.

He focuses once more when Golean interrupts, pointing at the Bridge.
“Look! A whitelighter!” 
Wyatt opens his eyes to see the form of energy pattern rematerialize.
“Interesting,” he says softly.

******On the Bridge*********

Gideon looks around at all the screaming people, hanging onto
anything they can find, trying to stop themselves from sliding down
into the water. He uses his levitation to stop himself from falling while
he quickly weighs his options. As he turns, he sees a small child lose
his grip and start to slide down the Bridge, heading for the water,
while the child’s parents start screaming his name in desperation as
they helplessly watch in terror. Gideon instinctively throws his hand
out, using his telekinesis to throw the child back up into the arms of
his parents, who grab him for dear life. Gideon looks at the family,
and quickly acts, closing his eyes and raising both his hands as he
begins to chant.

******Back with Wyatt and Golean*******

Wyatt laughs out loud. “Look at that pathetic whitelighter,” he says,
turning to Golean. “Watch me take him out!” he adds as once again
he raises his arms, trying to conjure another bolt of lightning from the
sky. The sky lets out a huge roar as another bolt of lightning shoots
from the clouds, heading for the Bridge once more.

*******Back on the Bridge*********

Gideon is deep in mediation when he is disturbed by the awesome
boom from the sky. He realizes that with the power of the Greek gods
at Wyatt’s disposal, he now has full control over the weather. He
would have to act fast, he thinks to himself, if he stood any chance of
saving these people. Another loud noise is heard as Gideon quickly
raises his arms and begins chanting.

People from all over the Bridge started to disappear in bright blue
swirls. Gideon desperately tries to orb all the people stranded on the
Bridge but the amount of people strains even his awesome Elderly
powers. He falls to his knees in pain, still focusing on his orbing,
trying to save as many as he could. The pain that Gideon feels is now
excruciating. He can no longer keep this up! Most of the innocents
have been orbed, but some remain. With one final effort, he focuses
everything he has on orbing those people. Slowly they start to vanish
as another louder, sharper noise is heard from the sky, Gideon tries
to look up at it, but all he can feel is the pain flowing through his body.

*****On the rooftop******

Darryl is commanding his troops, picking off every demon they can
find. “That’s it, guys, keep it up!” he shouts towards his men, trying to
keep them calm. He looks up at the loud noise that can be heard
above as huge bolts of lightning came thundering down and strikes
the Bridge. Oh, my God, he thinks to himself. All those people i..

His thoughts are interrupted as he sees the familiar pattern of orbs
appear on the Bridge. A whitelighter! he thinks to himself. I wonder if
it’s Leo. He quickly discards his thoughts and turn back to the task at
hand. “Focus!” he says.

Don’t let it get to you, he reminds himself, when he hears another few
loud noises, then one big noise as another, even-bigger lightning bolt
strikes the middle of the Bridge, instantly snapping it in half. I sure
hope that whitelighter got them out of there, he thinks to himself as he
watches San Francisco’s most famous landmark slowly sink into the
water. Angry, with rage building inside of him, he turns and lets off a
few rounds, quickly taking out a few more demons. He’s determined
to stop them all, but deep down he knows the only real chance they
have is his friends, the Halliwell sisters.

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I love your characterization of Gideon. While I know on the show that his portrayal left little leeway for us to identify with him or pity him, you have definitely brought across that Gideon was an Elder for a reason. You've taken the hints of remorse that the show gave us and fleshed out this character to give him dimensions we didn't know he had. Bravo.

I am confused on one point. On the show, Inspector Sheridan was a woman...is your Sheridan just another officer who shares the same name?

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Wow great job....I love how everything comes together. But one question: How is Marc a whitelighter? I have my theory...you wanna hear it...okay!

I was thinking that Marc did die in the past and came back as a whitelighter...uh...yeah anyway...Great job. I can't wait to see where this story is gonna go. Please continue!

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hi scifi

thx for the great reviews again also phew, thx scifi for pointing that error out lol must have had you scratching your head for awhile.

i have edit the posts which have reference to inspector sherdian and replace them with inspector Morris (Darryl) as it was meant to be hope that will clear those paragraphs up lol
thx again scifi

hi pheonix

first off thx for the review and to answer your question i have left hints all over the story as to how this came around in particular pay close attention to chapter 3 hope tis helps

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Oh, ok...thanks for clarifying!

Any updates soon?

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well with lots of help from Esmeralda all chapters are cleaned up and updated expect new updates shortly (in good english this time )

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First, Mcm, thanks so much for letting me edit your story--I had *so* much fun reading it a second time, which tells you how good it is! And it's truly one of the best stories going!!

Can't wait until you send me another section, so I can edit it and you can post it SOOOOOOOOOOOON!!

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Chapter 11 Just not enough

***Back on the streets of San Francisco with the charmed ones********

Chris, Bianca and Marc all orb in next to the charmed ones, looking around all they could see was bodies of dead humans and fallen witches littering the street.

“Looks familiar doesn’t it” Bianca whispered to Chris,

Chris felt a sudden chill come over him maybe this is how it starts?
Maybe we can’t stop him? He thought to himself,

No this can’t be it I can stop him, I will stop him he reassured himself

turning to Bianca giving her a weak smile Which Bianca didn’t buy as she just stroke his forearm and stared into his pain ridden eyes.

Piper turned to see the three of them orb in

“Where were you mister?” she asks with a look of concern but mostly annoyance at Chris.

“We’ve got a plan” Chris responded quickly trying to get in a explanation before piper asks more question as he knew she would

“Bianca will stay here with you guys to help” he added as he looked around at all the battles still taking place beside them. Chris slowly walked over to Bianca and gave her one final last kiss “be careful” Bianca said softly “I will” Chris responded as he turned and orbed out with marc following.

Bianca turned to the rest of them “right lets go kill some daemons” Slightly turning to Cole “no offense”, “none taken“Cole replied smiling

“whoooho there” piper interrupted “we aren’t going anywhere until you explain what the hell he was talking about” piper continued folding her arms, as all four of them turn to Bianca waiting for an answer

****On the roof top with Wyatt and Golean********

Chris and Marc orbed in behind both Wyatt and golean.

“Took you long enough, little brother” Wyatt said turning to face Chris.

“You aren’t my brother, Reulogue” Chris responded angrily and self assured.

Wyatt responded clapping his hands together with a confident smile as always,

“Bravo, took you long enough, fitting you should know the truth at the end” he added staring coldly at Chris before turning to golean,

“He’s all yours” Wyatt said looking in marc’s direction
“I’ll finished what I started” golean responded before turning to face marc

“catch me if you can” golean shouted towards marc before flaming out. Marc turned towards Chris who gave him a nod, then marc orbed out in pursuit of golean. “Now brother I guess it’s just you and me” Wyatt said smiling confidently in Chris’s direction

****On the roof top above the charmed ones with golean and Marc*******

Golean flamed in, turning to catch marc orbing in behind him. Quickly he conjured a fireball and threw it at the emerging orb patterns.

As marc materialized he saw the fireball heading straight towards him, instinctively he threw himself to the ground ducking the on-coming, rushing wave of fire. As marc got back to his feet golean let out an evil loud, laugh

“Ha-ha forgot to mention that Wyatt gave me a power boost not so long ago” golean said looking at marc
“I’m going to enjoy this just as much as I enjoyed taking your sisters life” golean added looking satisfied as he drew back memories to his best kill.

Marc clenched both fists as rage engulfed his body as he was drawn back to the memories that he has been trying to suppress all his life

“She was just a child, defenseless she was no threat to any of you” Marc screams as his mind was drawn back to those memories that he wished he could forget.

“It was easy and I made it long and painful” Golean added while circling marc intent on inflict as much pain as possible.
“I slid the knife slowly as I could across her little neck, she screamed for what seem hours in dire pain” he laughed
“squealed like the little pig she was” he added as he turned back to face marc.

Golean smiled dropped as he saw marc whose eyes had turned dark, dark red and a red glow had engulfed his entire body.

*****Battles on the street*******

It seemed that every corner, on every street fireballs and energy balls where flying crisply and repeatedly through the air with no let up.

Everywhere everyone looked there was someone fighting for there life. A group of young witches had formed a circle, a last stand against the wave of oncoming daemons fighting bravely and heroically they stood there ground until they were over run by the huge number of daemons desperate to rip there insides out

The valkire warriors were fighting as hard as they could but even with the other good magic creatures and witches not to mention the legendary phoenix’s they couldn’t seem to vanquish all the daemons.

Every time they vanquished one daemon, three more appeared to take their place. It looked like every daemon on the planet had decided to join in this epic battle on the streets of san Francisco and they largely out numbered there opposition it looked hopeless for the good side as the numbers of the daemons arriving seemed to grow minute by minute.

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This just keeps getting better and better and better, MCM!! I love it!!! Please update soon!! Can't wait to see how they get themselves out of *this* mess!!!

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(11/26/04 4:57 pm)
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Re: Just not enough
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Cliffhanger! Something somewhere’s got to give. Can’t wait to see how you resolve the various face-offs!

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