The Revenge ( Updated 11/14/2004 )

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The Revenge ( Updated 11/14/2004 )
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Chris crept slowly into this underground safe haven. Ducking the water droplets as they hit his head, he opened the door to his safe house. His place of refuge. Chris knew he’d be killed or made an example of if they found this place. So far the amulets, Chris had stolen held fast keeping evil out. Carefully, Chris took the paper out from his worn jacket pocket. So many years of planning, waiting to read this, to change the way that the world was going. To stop the evil that was decimating earth. The paper was frail, barely readable. Yet, Chris knew the words, knew the rhyme.

I call upon the ancient power
To help us in this darkest hour.
Let the Book return to this place,
Claim refuge here in this space.

Almost out of dream the book orbed with bright lights, landing on the coffee table. Chris mentally flipped each page, hoping for the answer. The key to breaking this endless darkness. The key to finding Wyatt, the lost twice blessed child. Then joining and summoning the Halliwell line and ended the rage and terror Leo was inflecting on this earth. Chris knew how this had to end. The son would kill the father. Or the son would die trying.

( Flashing back, Manor First Floor )

Chris, 18 at the time had just walked thought the manor doors. College was going to kill him, looking around things were too quite for the Halliwell Manor, “What the hell?” Noticing fresh blood on the floor, Chris following the blood trail into the kitchen. At the end of the trail the Charmed Sister’s lay dead, mutilated on the floor, blood pooling all around the bodies. Chris resisted the urge to throw up backing out of the kitchen. “ Leo, Wyatt!” Chris felt helpless, numb. He was the only the couldn’t heal. Couldn’t help. “ DAD, Wyatt! Please, their dying We need you. They need you.” Chris couldn’t get him self to go back in there. Chris knew he should be there, in the last moments of their life. The scene was awful, tragic and brutal too see.

(Orbs in Leo, follow moments later by Wyatt)

Chris just pointed turning towards the room then turned and threw up. Wyatt, walked briefly in the kitchen, he knew they were dead. Wyatt, too backed away from the kitchen green and ran for the bathroom. Leo just sat there, rage filling his heart. Moments past as he held Piper’s limp body, Leo’s eyes glazed over with hurt anger and rage, orbing out Leo thought of nothing but murder and spilling the blood of those who did this. Whoever stood in the path of vengeance and revenge was dead themselves.

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Wonderful! more soon

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(Chris’s underground domain)

Bianca walked out of the kitchen, her hands trembling ever so slightly “Has everything been arranged. Decided upon?” Bianca handed Chris a glass.

Chris nodded drinking from his wine glass, “Yes.”

Chris looked in to Bianca’s worried eyes, feeling a deep pain in his heart. Chris wished he could make this her hurt and fear go away. “ Bianca,” Chris said taking a deep breath, “ It is a very real possibility I will die doing this. I will die trying to restore what I knew as a teen.”<br>
Bianca sat down on the small chair. Their home was furnished quite well, basically whatever they looted after the world feel to evil. “ Chris, what makes you think that you can find Wyatt? He’s been gone for seven long, terror filled years. Wyatt, doesn’t want to be found.”<br>
Chris glared at Bianca, “ Seven long years is too long. I will find him Bianca. When I do find him, it’s a basic three steps after that. Summoning mom and my aunts and using the power of the Halliwell line to vanquish my father. The evilness that has corrupted this world.” Chris cocked his head to the side, “ How could you not what our son to raised as a Halliwell? As the magic that is his birth right. His gift. His legacy.”<br>
Bianca didn’t dare look Chris in the eyes. Chris had a temper, that had Bianca had seen a few too many times. Since before the baby was even thought about, Bianca had bound her own powers. Tempted to go back and do the evil she was trained to do, she rid her self of those horrible thoughts. “ Chris, I can’t lose you. This world is going to hell and a handbasket day by day, hour by hour. When Leo’s men find you, they will turn you or kill you.”<br>
Chris slammed the glass into the ground, shattering it into a million pieces. “Bianca...” Chris stood up, walking to the chair and tilting her head up holding it tightly, “ Your either with me and what I stand for. Or walk. There is no other choice. Not now, not ever.” Chris pulled his hand back glaring a moment before walking into the bedroom.

Bianca sat sobbing. She’d bound her powers for the love of Chris. Mentally, all he ever did was yell and make her feel like she was evil. Physically, Chris never hurt her. Bianca stood up trying to use the mentality of what she used to be, a proud Phoenix witch, and followed moments later Chris into the bedroom.


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ooohh good one.



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(Chris’s bedroom)

Bianca laid her head upon the pillow, as tears rolled down her face. What had happened to Chris? When did his obsessions make him so unreasonable?

Chris ignored Bianca’s womanly tears. The world was in too bad of state to deal with her issues. What happened to the women he loved? What happed to the strong fearless person he’s fallen in love with all these years ago. “Bianca. Stop. If your going to act like a coward, sleep elsewhere. Go back to your family. Just don’t to fall apart now. Now that I am so close to bring the Halliwell family back together.”<br>
Bianca yelled, “ Chris, what are you doing? Wyatt’s never, not in this life and sure as hell not in any other coming back. He’s gone! If he were a man he’d face your father. Vanquishing the evil that brought you into this world. But Wyatt’s not a man he’s a coward. A coward he hid from the world when the world got rough!”<br>
Chris turned over after turning the light on. Whispering in a deep harsh voice, “ I swear that this the last time I saying this.” Chris wrapped his hand around Bianca’s hair, pulling her head close to his mouth. “ You’re either with me or I’ll kill you, because you’re with him.” Chris almost viciously let Bianca’s hair go and threw his hand at the light turning it off.

(Wyatt’s apartment down town San Francisco)

Wyatt sat throwing darts with some of his buddies.

“ Dude, you couldn’t hit the bull’s eye if it was a big as the moon. You’d need some sort of magic power even to hit it close.” One of the guys said laughing.

Wyatt tried not to show any reaction. That word, “magic” ticked him off. Every single time someone said that word something with to hell and a hand basket around him. Smiling “ Is this where I say magic doesn’t exist and magic is for kids?”<br>
The friend said, “If you didn’t say that, I’d be seriously worried”<br>
Wyatt felt like saying, ~Be afraid, your friend is twice blessed and has powers beyond your wildest dreams~ But he didn’t. Wyatt just let it roll off his back. “ Dude, if there were powers in this world, I’d want to vanquish them.”

The friend laughed, “ Yeah right.” Downing a bottle of soda.

Wyatt, laughed “ Yeah, right I guess.” His father was evil. He’s brother was dating evil. His mother was dead. Wyatt felt alone and abandoned.


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ooh poor Wyatt! so alone... again, update soon

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(Halliwell Manor, Deserted)

Wyatt orbed in, looking around everything was how he’d left it. Walking over to the kitchen, even the potions bottles where his family last stood alive were still there.

(Flashing back)

Chris stood across from Wyatt who was holding a suitcase,. “ Your just going to walk away. Leave this family. Leave your heritage. Leave your future.” Chris shook his head, “ What are you thinking Wyatt? What is running though you head? Because seriously I have no idea. For once in our lives I have no idea.”<br>
Wyatt sighed, “ Chris, don’t you see? Are you that dense? That stupid? Or just crazy. Mom was right. This family has one fate in life. That is to die. Be slaughtered like pigs. Being magical isn’t a blessing. It’s a curse. A curse that has coast almost our entire line nothing but hurt, heartache and tears. Starting with Melinda Warren and ending with our mothers and aunts in that kitchen.” Pointing toward the kitchen. “I don’t want to die. I want to finish school, get a normal job, find a women who will make me go weak in my knees, get married and have kids. Magic isn’t...”<br>
Chris waved his hand in anger, sending a picture flying off the wall, “ What are you doing Wyatt? You’re the prophesied twice blessed child. Your..”<br>
Wyatt deflected the picture, “ And you’re a moron. I don’t want to be with this family in anyway. I’m Wyatt Matthew. No last name. No ties, nothing to this family.” Wyatt orbed out

Chris waved his arm leveling the room, “ Wyatt, I didn’t give up on you. Why did you give up on me. This family.”<br>


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great story. keep it going!

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Every time I see the title of this story, I think it's my story Leo's Revenge and it takes a second to realize it's not. But I decided to read your story and I have to say that so far, it's really good. I like the gritty edge you have going in it. Keep up the good work

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( Back to reality)

Wyatt walked into the living room. Chris’s telekinetic wave had leveled the room. Wyatt thought about Piper. She used to keep the house spotless. Wyatt shook his head, “ Let the object of objection become but a dream. As I cause the site to be unseen.” For the first time since his mother had died Wyatt had used magic. The room set a glow, Wyatt looked around not understanding what was happening. Moments later, Wyatt looked around. Wyatt felt whole. His full powers were back. Looking up, “ I didn’t want these. I didn’t need you to put me back on your radar.”<br>
Wyatt shook his head, walking up the stairs. On the second floor, he opened the door to his mothers room. The room smelled like her. It was designed just like his mother. Wyatt walked in picking up the few items that were on the floor.

(Black orb of Leo appears)

Wyatt saw the black orb appear, stepping back he created and energy ball. ~Darn dark lighters just can’t leave well enough alone~ he thought. Wyatt watched the formation of his father come to full focus.

Leo glared at Wyatt, “ Finally, you decide to use your powers. Its only taken you years to decided that you can’t deny what you are. Have you decided to come home Wyatt. We need you. The underworld is waiting the ascension of its new Source. There waiting for you Wyatt. To take you rightful place” Leo walked to stand squarely in front of Wyatt.

Wyatt closed his hand and the energy ball dissipated. “ Nice to see you too dad or should I call you the Source? Its only been seven years since you last saw me and the only thing you can say is, “ Come home to evil?” How’s about a how you doing son? Or even, how’s your life without magic?” Wyatt sighed, “ I’m not using magic. I don’t have any reason too. My life is completely fine without it. I picked my side. Mortal. No strings attached.”<br>
Leo walked past Wyatt toward the hallway, “ To the best of my best demonic resources, you still have your powers. You haven’t taken that power stripping potion you made seven years ago. Its still sitting in the box at the base of your closet at your apartment on the far side of town. As long as you have your powers and actively are using them, you would be a great benefit to conquer good.”<br>
Wyatt shook his head disbelieving his fathers words, “ Haven’t your spies told you? I’m not using magic period. Didn’t I just confirm what they have told you? I refuse to live the legacy of the Halliwell line. I won’t be the twice-blessed son that everyone wants me to be on the good side. And I sure as hell won’t be the twice-blessed son that evil wants me to be either. I’m just me. I don’t use magic, cause don’t want it.”

Leo created a fireball, flipping it in the air. “ You have no choice Wyatt. You never did. You were born, destined to be a Charmed One. Actually, so I hear the new legacy. The new prophesy. Three in One. Three in one leads me to believe that you will eventually develop premonitions and time elements. You already have telekinesis and telekinetic orbing. When the moon is right and the bewitching hour befalls San Francisco, the Book of Shadows will seal your fate. I’m betting that you will turn to evil. Because your going to be all....”<br>
Wyatt yelled, “ How many ways do I have to say it Leo. You chose your road. And I’ve chosen mine. I’m choosing mortality and humanity over twice-blessed anything. I will not be on a side. Ever.” Wyatt orbed out as Leo threw the fireball at him.

Leo growled, “ You will soon see, my son, an example of what people that betray me get. Your brother once he is found will be murdered by my hand. Chris is the weaker and once he’s out of the way, no one will stop you from being evil. I will have you at my side, Wyatt.” Leo flamed out.


Edited by: MCharmed21 at: 10/16/04 1:23 am

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Very cool. It looks like a future in which Wyatt is good (or at least not evil) turned out to be as bad, if not worse, than the one Chris originally came from, making Chris a decidedly darker, more obsessive character, Leo flat-out evil, and Wyatt stuck in the middle. He'll have to come down on a side some time, but with the way both Chris and Leo act, I'm not sure which side I'd want him on. Great that you've created that indecision.

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mcharmed! as always, great update! i agree with what scifi said:


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very realistic! cant wait for your next update!

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(Chris’s underground Home)

Chris stormed into the room. “ I thought for a brief moment I felt Wyatt use his powers!”<br>
Bianca, walked out of the bedroom, “ Chris, you’re going to wake the baby.”<br>
Chris glared at Bianca, “ Did you not hear a word I said? I thought I sensed Wyatt use his powers. It was a fate blip on the whitelighter radar, but it was there! I want to know where he is. (Looking around) What did you do with the book?

Bianca, “Stop being so angry at me, I have doing nothing but stand by your side even when no one else would!”<br>
Chris glaring at Bianca, “ Where is the book of shadows?”
Bianca, pulled out the book from under the sofa. “ Here’s your beloved book.” Throwing it at him.

Chris tked the book on the chair, walking over to Bianca, “ Get out. I am done dealing with your attitude towards everything ”<br>
Bianca pulled back, “ Don’t you realize your obsession is driving you mad?”<br>
Chris, “ Get out. Take the baby and leave. I gave you your choices and you have chosen not to hear my words. Get out!”<br>
Bianca shook her head, walking back to the bed room. A few moments later Bianca carried a bundle in her arms and a small bag on her shoulder. “ I’m going back to my family.” Chris didn’t even look up. Bianca walked out the door, as tears rolled down her face. All she had now was their daughter and no guarantee that Chris, the man she loved, was ever coming back.


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Chris, “ Get out. Take the baby and leave. I gave you your choices and you have chosen not to hear my words. Get out!”<br>--------------------------------------------------------------------------------



poor Bianca. that Chris is just like Piper, so obssessive!

update soon!