Post by Nite Owl on Jan 9, 2005 22:37:29 GMT -5
Author: LilBittiPiper
Okay, I love this song and when I thought about writing a songfic to it, it sounded much better in my head than on paper, so bare with it, please.
~*~*~
Breakaway
(C) Amy
Grew up in a small town
And when the rain would fall down
I just stared out my window
Dreaming of a could-be
And if I'd end up happy
I would pray (I would pray)
“Hey! Watch where you’re going!” A jock shoved her, knocking her books to the floor.
“Sorry.” She replied timidly, bending down the reach for her books. “God, I can’t wait to get out of here.”<br>
Trying not to reach out
But when I'd try to speak out
Felt like no one could hear me
Wanted to belong here
But something felt so wrong here
So I pray (I would pray)
I could breakaway
“Hey Four-Eyes!” A popular girl taunted.
“Metal Mouth!”<br>She ignored them as she took her seat in the back of the classroom. “Why can’t they just accept me? I just want to fit in for once!”<br>
I'll spread my wings and I'll learn how to fly
I'll do what it takes til' I touch the sky
I'll make a wish
Take a chance
Make a change
And breakaway
Out of the darkness and into the sun
But I won't forget all the ones that I loved
I'll take a risk
Take a chance
Make a change
And breakaway
“I’ll show them. One of these days, I’ll show them. I’ll be famous and then, everyone will know my name. Everyone will be nice to me, no more ‘Four-Eyes’ or ‘Metal Mouth’. I can’t wait.” She thought to herself as she left the building for lunch.
Wanna feel the warm breeze
Sleep under a palm tree
Feel the rush of the ocean
Get onboard a fast train
Travel on a jet plane, far away (I will)
And breakaway
Dozing off during her free period, she dreamt of places far from here, far away from this little town. She dreamt off cities, with skyscrapers, bustling with people. People who were always there, always cheerful, and always nice.
I'll spread my wings and I'll learn how to fly
I'll do what it takes til' I touch the sky
I'll make a wish
Take a chance
Make a change
And breakaway
Out of the darkness and into the sun
But I won't forget all the ones that I loved
I'll take a risk
Take a chance
Make a change
And breakaway
“My time has come. I know it’s time. Time to leave this town behind.” She said as she packed her bags. “No one will miss me. Not my grandmother, not my sisters, maybe the cat…no, not even the cat. No one.”<br>
Buildings with a hundred floors
Swinging around wild indoors
Maybe I don't know where they'll take me but
Gotta keep moving on, moving on
Fly away, breakaway
“Where did she goes, Grams?” A younger sister asked, confused. “How come she didn’t want to stay and play with me? Does she hate me? I wasn’t mean, I shared all my toys with her.”<br>“I don’t know, honey, I don’t know.” A sad grandmother replied.
“I do.” Another sister, this one older, said. “Everyone teased her, she thought no one liked her. Not even her family. I tried to talk her out of it, I really did. I thought I had her convinced that we needed her here, but it didn’t work. I’m really sorry. I hope she’s safe. Where ever she is.”<br>
I'll spread my wings
And I'll learn how to fly
Though it's not easy to tell you goodbye
I gotta take a risk
Take chance
Make a change
And breakaway
Out of the darkness and into the sun
But I won't forget the place I come from
I gotta take a risk
Take a chance
Make a change
And breakaway
“This is more like it. This is where I belong.” She said to herself, standing outside a broken and abandoned nightclub in San Francisco. “This is my life now.”<br>
Breakaway, breakaway…<br>
~*~*~
What'cha think? All feedback is appreciated.
HorseFreak91
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(8/25/04 9:50 pm)
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I like it! the song was creative and stuffs
Wanna feel the warm breeze
Sleep under a palm tree
Feel the rush of the ocean
Get onboard a fast train
Travel on a jet plane, far away (I will)
And breakaway
that's my favorite part I think.......... no I defiantly liked the hole thing
~!~Brittany~!~
Edited by: HorseFreak91 at: 8/25/04 9:52 pm
LilBittiPiper
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(8/28/04 10:34 pm)
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thanks! the song is by kelly clarkson if anyone is wondering, its from the princess diaries 2. (very good movie )
Gabriela
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(8/28/04 11:48 pm)
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wow..that was really good... is there more? You should really turn this into a big story!
LilBittiPiper
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(8/29/04 5:06 pm)
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Hmm, I could but I dunno how to...any ideas?
Gabriela
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(8/29/04 5:48 pm)
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hmm....make it 'her' journey to whatever and the others finding her or something?
LilBittiPiper
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(8/29/04 6:02 pm)
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Hmm, sounds good. I actually think that I just thought of something off that idea. Lemme try to write it all out.
LilBittiPiper
Posts: 3365
(8/29/04 6:11 pm)
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Okay, I'm gunna do this in diary entries. They're going to alternate so from one sister to another. Phoebe won't be in it as much, only because she's my least favorite character and I don't know how to write from her view. So this will be from Piper and Prue's views.
~*~*~
Dear Diary,
It's been a month since she left. I miss her so much. I look all over town everyday. I've even skipped school before. I need to find her. I'm going to find her. In fact, I plan on leaving tomorrow. I'm going to find her if it's the last thing I do. She never knew that it was her that kept me sane in school. With all those cheerleaders and jocks, I always knew she'd be there to listen and now that she's not, I'm going crazy. She made the biggest impact on my life and when I find her, I'm going to help her. She's going to come back and we're gunna go through it together. I'm going to find her and bring her back. If she won't come back, I'm going with her. I'm gunna stay with her, I need her and she needs me. We're sisters. We need each other.
~Prue
Gabriela
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Posts: 820
(8/29/04 8:41 pm)
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Sweet...glad no Phoebe...I HATE HER!!!
Diary's are good....so far so good.
LilBittiPiper
Posts: 3366
(8/29/04 8:55 pm)
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lol I'm not too great at diary entries but I'll do my best.
Okay, I love this song and when I thought about writing a songfic to it, it sounded much better in my head than on paper, so bare with it, please.
~*~*~
Breakaway
(C) Amy
Grew up in a small town
And when the rain would fall down
I just stared out my window
Dreaming of a could-be
And if I'd end up happy
I would pray (I would pray)
“Hey! Watch where you’re going!” A jock shoved her, knocking her books to the floor.
“Sorry.” She replied timidly, bending down the reach for her books. “God, I can’t wait to get out of here.”<br>
Trying not to reach out
But when I'd try to speak out
Felt like no one could hear me
Wanted to belong here
But something felt so wrong here
So I pray (I would pray)
I could breakaway
“Hey Four-Eyes!” A popular girl taunted.
“Metal Mouth!”<br>She ignored them as she took her seat in the back of the classroom. “Why can’t they just accept me? I just want to fit in for once!”<br>
I'll spread my wings and I'll learn how to fly
I'll do what it takes til' I touch the sky
I'll make a wish
Take a chance
Make a change
And breakaway
Out of the darkness and into the sun
But I won't forget all the ones that I loved
I'll take a risk
Take a chance
Make a change
And breakaway
“I’ll show them. One of these days, I’ll show them. I’ll be famous and then, everyone will know my name. Everyone will be nice to me, no more ‘Four-Eyes’ or ‘Metal Mouth’. I can’t wait.” She thought to herself as she left the building for lunch.
Wanna feel the warm breeze
Sleep under a palm tree
Feel the rush of the ocean
Get onboard a fast train
Travel on a jet plane, far away (I will)
And breakaway
Dozing off during her free period, she dreamt of places far from here, far away from this little town. She dreamt off cities, with skyscrapers, bustling with people. People who were always there, always cheerful, and always nice.
I'll spread my wings and I'll learn how to fly
I'll do what it takes til' I touch the sky
I'll make a wish
Take a chance
Make a change
And breakaway
Out of the darkness and into the sun
But I won't forget all the ones that I loved
I'll take a risk
Take a chance
Make a change
And breakaway
“My time has come. I know it’s time. Time to leave this town behind.” She said as she packed her bags. “No one will miss me. Not my grandmother, not my sisters, maybe the cat…no, not even the cat. No one.”<br>
Buildings with a hundred floors
Swinging around wild indoors
Maybe I don't know where they'll take me but
Gotta keep moving on, moving on
Fly away, breakaway
“Where did she goes, Grams?” A younger sister asked, confused. “How come she didn’t want to stay and play with me? Does she hate me? I wasn’t mean, I shared all my toys with her.”<br>“I don’t know, honey, I don’t know.” A sad grandmother replied.
“I do.” Another sister, this one older, said. “Everyone teased her, she thought no one liked her. Not even her family. I tried to talk her out of it, I really did. I thought I had her convinced that we needed her here, but it didn’t work. I’m really sorry. I hope she’s safe. Where ever she is.”<br>
I'll spread my wings
And I'll learn how to fly
Though it's not easy to tell you goodbye
I gotta take a risk
Take chance
Make a change
And breakaway
Out of the darkness and into the sun
But I won't forget the place I come from
I gotta take a risk
Take a chance
Make a change
And breakaway
“This is more like it. This is where I belong.” She said to herself, standing outside a broken and abandoned nightclub in San Francisco. “This is my life now.”<br>
Breakaway, breakaway…<br>
~*~*~
What'cha think? All feedback is appreciated.
HorseFreak91
Charmed Cafe Member
Posts: 219
(8/25/04 9:50 pm)
Reply
Re: Breakaway
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I like it! the song was creative and stuffs
Wanna feel the warm breeze
Sleep under a palm tree
Feel the rush of the ocean
Get onboard a fast train
Travel on a jet plane, far away (I will)
And breakaway
that's my favorite part I think.......... no I defiantly liked the hole thing
~!~Brittany~!~
Edited by: HorseFreak91 at: 8/25/04 9:52 pm
LilBittiPiper
Posts: 3349
(8/28/04 10:34 pm)
Reply Re: Breakaway
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thanks! the song is by kelly clarkson if anyone is wondering, its from the princess diaries 2. (very good movie )
Gabriela
Charmed Cafe Member
Posts: 599
(8/28/04 11:48 pm)
Reply Re: Breakaway
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wow..that was really good... is there more? You should really turn this into a big story!
LilBittiPiper
Posts: 3352
(8/29/04 5:06 pm)
Reply Re: Breakaway
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Hmm, I could but I dunno how to...any ideas?
Gabriela
Charmed Cafe Member
Posts: 801
(8/29/04 5:48 pm)
Reply Re: Breakaway
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
hmm....make it 'her' journey to whatever and the others finding her or something?
LilBittiPiper
Posts: 3364
(8/29/04 6:02 pm)
Reply Re: Breakaway
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Hmm, sounds good. I actually think that I just thought of something off that idea. Lemme try to write it all out.
LilBittiPiper
Posts: 3365
(8/29/04 6:11 pm)
Reply Re: Breakaway
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Okay, I'm gunna do this in diary entries. They're going to alternate so from one sister to another. Phoebe won't be in it as much, only because she's my least favorite character and I don't know how to write from her view. So this will be from Piper and Prue's views.
~*~*~
Dear Diary,
It's been a month since she left. I miss her so much. I look all over town everyday. I've even skipped school before. I need to find her. I'm going to find her. In fact, I plan on leaving tomorrow. I'm going to find her if it's the last thing I do. She never knew that it was her that kept me sane in school. With all those cheerleaders and jocks, I always knew she'd be there to listen and now that she's not, I'm going crazy. She made the biggest impact on my life and when I find her, I'm going to help her. She's going to come back and we're gunna go through it together. I'm going to find her and bring her back. If she won't come back, I'm going with her. I'm gunna stay with her, I need her and she needs me. We're sisters. We need each other.
~Prue
Gabriela
Charmed Cafe Member
Posts: 820
(8/29/04 8:41 pm)
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Sweet...glad no Phoebe...I HATE HER!!!
Diary's are good....so far so good.
LilBittiPiper
Posts: 3366
(8/29/04 8:55 pm)
Reply Re: Breakaway
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lol I'm not too great at diary entries but I'll do my best.
