Secrets of the forbidden chapter 1 posted 8/27....

[Nite Owl]

For all of y'all who read my triology, this is an extra fic I decided to write. It takes place after Destiny's Desire, and is about Prue's visit. (If you remember, the elders said that she would be able to visit as a reward.) Piper will be pregnant, and Phoebe getting ready for her marriage. As for Prue, she's going to be in Big trouble! How can she save the unthinkable, if it's forbiddon to begin with?

Forbiddon secrets....hmmmm

This story will most definately have some of my humor that i love to put in, but will also have some sentimental scenes, and some kick butt scenes!

It's coming very soon, but i didn't want to forget to post it, so this is basically my little reminder. Feel free to speculate....

Thanks
Holly

Edited by: hollyhalliwell at: 8/28/04 1:47 pm

Paige019
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Can't wait to read it!


Esmeralda
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Definitely sounds interesting, Holly!! You know how much I love your award-winning trilogy, so a sequel to that would be *much* appreciated!!!

Please get it going soon; just don't forget about your other story you got started!!! Although you've *always* been good at keeping two stories going at the same time!!

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I'm anxious.. Do update..



hollyhalliwell
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I know this is not much, but I wanted to get started. i have an early class tomarrow morning, but I'll type as much as I can. Please review!!!!!!

Joy lept through the bodies of the three Halliwells, as they grabbed tight onto eachothers hands. "I can't believe this is happening!" Piper exclaimed, "Prue is actually coming for a visit!" She looked down at her large stomach. "Looks like Miss Butch is excited to meet her other Auntie too."

A smile spread across Paige's face. "I can't wait to get to know her. This is going to rock."

Pheobe squeezed both sister's hands. "Not to mention that she's also bringing Andy. I can't believe that they actually managed to tie the knot!"

Piper smiled, "If anyone could convince the elders to let them get married in the afterlife, It'd be Prue."

"Can't argue with that." The sisters turn around in the attic,when they hear Prue's voice. Sure enough, Prue is standing by the window, her arm around Andy.

Phoebe's eyes widen, "Oh my God, you're here!"

"In the flesh." Said Prue.

Piper starts to run towards prue, to give her a hug. Prue stops her. "you know better than to run when you are nearly 8 months pregnant!"

"Jeesh, Prue. You haven't changed a bit. Besides, it's not like I was going to run. Even if I tried my best, I would have looked more like a sick, wobbly, penguin."

Prue runs to Piper, and embraces her in a giant hug, while andy does the same with Phoebe and Paige.

"I think you look cute." Prue pinches Piper's cheeks to emphasize."

"You're lucky I haven't seen you in years, otherwise you'd have no more fingers after pinching me."

Phoebe tiptoed ever to prue. "She's just a little cranky, because she hasn't gotten any sleep, knowing that you were coming to visit soon."

Before there is time to say anything else, sparkling orbs appear. "Leo, there you are." Said Piper, as she waddled over to give her husband a hug. He holds her, as he looks at Prue and Andy.

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"I've missed you guys around here." he said. Leo went over, and embraced Prue in a hug. Then he went to Andy, and gave him one of those one armed hugs that men are so fond of.

"Well, looks like this month is going to be a very memorable month." stated Paige.

Nobody knew how dangerously right she was. But soon, everyone was bound to find out.
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That's it for today, because I'm getting really tired. I really hope you guys liked the beginning of my fic, and that you will take the time to review!

Thanks,
Holly

WhisperingEchos2
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Dude.. that seriously, rocked! I love their personalities! I think you've hit them right on the head! whoa

Esmeralda
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I'm with WEcho, Holly--that definitely rocked!! Sounds like you have yourself another good one on your hands!! I know school (and UPick!!) has to come first, but please update soon; so far, I love this!!

hollyhalliwell
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(8/26/04 10:48 pm)
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Thankyou so much for all the reviews! I should have more posted tomarrow, so please keep your eyes open!

Thanks
Holly

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Here is my next installment, and I really do appreciate all my reviews, so please keep them coming!

3 days later, at Halliwell Manor
Kitchen

Piper's cooking eggs on the stove, while everyone else in the household is trying to entertain the four magical boys that Piper has given birth to.

Prue picks up Chris, and bounces him on her lap. Older Chris orbs in, than walks to the refrigerator, oblivious to Prue's actions with Baby Chris.

Prue looks down at the little bundle of joy. "You're so cute Chris! I can't believe how much you've grown!"

Older Chris lifts his head from the refrigerator, when he hears hit Aunt Prue talk to him. That's kind of strange, I doubt I've grown an inch since I last saw Aunt Prue. Unless she means... Chris looks down at his flat stomach. No, i'm safe...at least for now. thought Chris.

" I even brought you and your brothers some rubber duckies to play with in the tub!" said Prue.

Older Chris shuts the refrigerator. He looks at his Aunt. "Um, Prue, I don't know how to tell you this, but grown men don't usually play with rubber duckies in the tub. I appreciate the thought and all...

Chris is cut off when Piper waddles over to him. "Chris honey, Prue wasn't talking to you. Well she was, just not you. baby you."

Everyone in the kitchen cracks up laughing at this, and Chris blushes terribly.

"Okay, move over people. Hot pan, and tired, pregnant, Halliwell approaching the table."

Most people wouldn't consider the pregnant part too dangerous. It was that word mixed with halliwell that made a difference. Halliwell woman weren't too famous for their patients, especially when they're carrying a baby.

Everyone lept out of their chairs for Piper. Then they sat down and ate their breakfast, but Piper hurried through hers.

"What's the hurry?" asked Phoebe.
"I have a doctor's appointment this morning, and I want it out of the way. The elders won't tell us how long they'll allow Prue and Andy to stay here, and I want to save as much time as possible to spend with them."

Leo is "up there" so Andy helps Piper out of her chair.

"thank you, Andy" says Piper as she heads toward the door. "Leo!" she calls, "I'm ready!"

Leo orbs in immediately. "You're ready? now? the babies not due for another month in a half! Okay, don't panick, i'll orb you to the hospital, and maybe they can stop....

Piper cuts him off. "leo, I'm not in labor." she laughs. "I meant I was ready for you to take me to my doctor's appointment."

"Oh." he says. Leo smiles sheepeshly. "let's go than."

"Hold on." says Piper. "Phoebe!" she hollars. "I need to see you real quick."

Phoebe comes into the room. "Yeah?"

"I need you to do the dishes while I am gone."

Phobe's jaw opens wide. "Dishes? There were like nine people eating. that's way too many dishes for me...."

Piper cuts her off, as Prue starts to come over. Piper smiles sweetly, and talks so only Phoebe can hear what she is saying. "Phoebe, you better put a smile on your face, and a song in your heart, or I swear i'm going to jerk a knot in yout butt."

Phoebe dosen't have enough time to say anything back, because Prue reaches them. She accidently knocks into Phoebe, and Phoebe is hit with a rock hard premintion as she stands in between two of her sisters.

As she starts to shake violently, everyone rushes to her aid. Anxious that she isn't hurt, and axioux what this powerful primintion is telling her.
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All for right now! Please review!

Esmeralda
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You're doing it again, Holly--making me laugh, then scaring the tar out of me!!

So far, I love it, and am now dying to know what Phoebe's premonition was, that it is giving her such a reaction!!!

Please update soon!!!

hollyhalliwell
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(8/28/04 9:01 pm)
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Please review! I'd appreciate to have 1 or 2 more before I continue, even if it's just an 'I am reading this.' It boosts my spirits, and it's always fun to see which readers have read the entire series!

Thanks
Holly

Esmeralda
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You're not really going to start that bit about begging for readers, are you, Holly? You hardly ever reply to other stories, so you know how much that gets people to do it, and it's really irritating to people who *are* reading your stuff. We read it because we're interested, not coz the author's begging. That's the best way to turn me off of a story, and I really don't want to be turned off this one, coz it sounds like a good one!