Whatever happened to Prue? Updated August 7!!!!!

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Author: hollyhalliwell

As most of you know, I am in the middle of two series. Right now, I am earning a degree to become a screen writer, and have been practicing on this board. Another idea hit me, and I wanted to know what you thought.

If I start this fan fic, It will mean that I will be in the middle of 3 different stories. This will cause the updates to be slower, or sometimes shorter. Would you start this fic anyway?

Here is my idea. I don't want to give away too much, but this would have to do about what happened to Prue after she died. It would take place in the afterworld, and would be about Prue's troubles. This would most definately be a romance between Andy and Prue.

I wanted to try a fic from a different view, that nobody has really done. Should I write it? What do you think? Would you read it if I did? Please tell me! You may also send me an ezboard email, because I do check regularly.

Thanks again
Holly

WOW! Leave it to you, Holly, to come up with something so unique as Prue's story *in* the afterlife!!! Would that mean that Penny and Patty and Melinda Warren and some of the others would be there, too?

As for when to write it, that's up to you. I'd rather see frequent small updates as compared to infrequent large ones. But I absolutely *love* the two stories you have going on right now and wouldn't want them to be abandoned for the newer one. (As the oldest of 6, I know how the baby can get all of the attention, while the older ones get ignored. It's why I leave my baby nieces & nephews to my brothers & sisters & in-laws and play with my older ones instead.)

If you can continue to pay proper attention to the older stories (even if you don't get as many responses, as some people might get too interested in the new one that they may not read the older one) *and* work on oddball's contest idea *and* work on your schoolwork, then I'd say GO FOR IT!! But if not, I'd wait until one of the other stories are done. But as always, do what you think is best.

By the way, now we know why you're such a good writer and why you write your stories as scripts--you're going to school for script-writing!!! I'll bet you get *very* good grades!!!

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Here is the beginning, and I hope you really enjoy it! Please review, because my professer will be checking this story every day! (If there aren't as many readers, I may not do as well) Please be honest! If There are things you don't like about the story, please let me know. (That way, my writing will get better!

Here we go!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This takes place right after Prue dies!

Prue awakes in a white room. Gold doors are scattered to different places, but she has no idea where she is.

Prue: Hello?! Where am I?! Piper? Phoebe! Help me!!!
Patty: Don't worry, sweetie, we're here.

Prue turns around, and faces her mom and grandmother.

Prue: Mom, Grams?
Penny: We're here, honey.

Prue starts to get a terrible feeling deep down in the pit of her stomach. Prue asks the unbearable question, even though deep down she knows the answer.

Prue: Where am I?
Patty: Honey, there was an accident.
Penny: You were caught off-guard.

Prue starts to back away. Tears start to stream down her face.

Prue: No, you're wrong. I'm fine. I will wake up any minute now, and see my sisters.

Penny starts to speak, her voice is quavering, and she's not sure what she's about to say.

Penny: Honey, we'll find a way to get through this. Your sisters will be fine.
Prue: I can't be dead...I just can't!

Patty walks over to her daughter, and grabs her in one big hug. Penny comes too, and together they stand there for the longest of times.

Prue: I'm not...I'm not ready to die. There was...there was so much more to be done!
Penny: I know, darling, I know.
Prue: I just...I can't leave them.
Patty: You won't have to. You will always be in their hearts; you will always be watching over them.
Prue: It's just not the same. ....It never will be.
Patty: Come with us; we need to get back.
Prue: I just can't...I don't know how to let go!

Someone grabs her in a hug, but it is neither Patty or Penny.

Voice: I'll show you.

Prue turns around in amazement.

Prue: Andy? Oh my god, Andy it's really you.

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Prue: Andy? Oh my god, Andy it's really you.

She embraces him in a very passionate hug, and tears start to flow down her face more frequently.

Andy: Don't worry, Prue; I'm here.
Prue: It just happened so fast...I didn't mean, ...I don't want to die.

She totally breaks down now. If it weren't for Andy supporting her, she would have fallen completely to the ground.

Andy: It's not your fault, Prue. It was...I guess it was just meant to be.

A tear rolls down Andy's cheek as he tries not to cry along with Prue.

While Prue is wrapped in Andy's arms, Patty and Grams give him a look. Patty mouths words to Andy.

Patty: We need to go, before they find you here.

Andy mouths back.

Andy: I know.

He rests his hand on Prue's quivering chin, and tilts her head up so she can look into his eyes.

Andy: It's time, Prue.

Prue solemnly nods, and tries to stop crying. The crowd walks over to one of the gold doors, and opens it. Then they hear a booming voice, followed by a white-robed man.

Guy: Andy Trudeau, what are you doing here?!
Andy: Helping the women I love.
Guy: Nobody may leave now; you have broken the rule.
Andy: You know what? Screw the freakin' rules!
Guy: How dare you question the knowledge of those higher than you! Guards, get him!

Prue stares at Andy blankly as more robed men, these ones more muscular, orb into the room. They plunge to Andy, Prue, Penny, and Patty.

Andy: Prue, go now!
Prue: I can't live without you!

Tears are streaming down her face furiously.
Guy: Stop them!
Andy: Go now!

Prue shakes her head.

Andy: They're going to hurt you if you stay, leave..... I will love you forever, and I will find a way to see you again.

Prue: Come with us!

Before Andy has a chance to respond, the guards grab a hold of a struggling Andy.

Andy: Leave!!!!!!!!!

Relectantly, Prue, Patty, and Grams enter the gold door. Tears are streaming down Andy's face. He stares at the guards in disbelief.

Andy: How can you do this to me?!
Guard: You broke a rule by coming down here, and you would have broken more rules if you stayed with the witch.
Andy: I love her, damnit! She needs me.
Guard: Too bad.

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Here is the next installment, and I hope you enjoy it! Thankyou so much for the reviews, my professor was absolutely astounded at everyone who really reads my fics!

Patty, Grams, and Prue step out of the golden door, and into the afterlife. It looks much like the real world. There are some differences. The manor is now sitting alone at the top of a hill. Right in front of it is a stone water pool in the middle of the yard.

Patty grabs Prue's hand.

Patty: Come on Prue, let's go home.

Prue: I can't, not without Andy. What...what did they do with him?
Grams: Come with us, and we will explain it to you over a glass of tea.

Prue nods solemnly, and continues to walk up the large hill.

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Manor (spirit world)

Prue, Grams , and Patty sit on a couch drinking tea.

Prue's face is tear streaked, but now she is moving past sadness, and into anger.

Prue: What did they do with Andy?!

After a pause, Grams starts to speak

Grams: You see dear,Andy wasn't supposed to meet you in the gateway to afterlife. It's against the rules. Only family members can come.
Prue: But Andy is practicly family.
Grams: Yes, but not blood related.
Prue: Is that all he did?
Patty: No. You know when the elders said whitelighters couldn't be with witches?
Prue: Yeah.
Grams: Well, the same goes for the afterlife. Nobody is aloud to fall in love with eachother unless they were married in the real world.
Prue: But why?!
Patty: They didn't want any confusion. They said it would mess up the whole cosmic order of the real world, and the spirit world.
Prue: They can't just take Andy from me!!!! He was the only thing that kept me remotely sane after I found out....about the accident. I...I love him, I want to be with him.
Patty: I know honey. I'm so sorry.
Prue: What's going to happen to him?
Grams: If you brake a rule as important as that, they...they send you to jail for the rest of the after life. Nobody can ever see him again.
Prue: You wanna bet?! I getting Andy back, just watch me!

Prue stands up, and runs out the front door of the manor.

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Manor

Patty: Should we follow Prue?
Grams: No, Piper and Phoebe are summoning us. We haven't answered any of their calls, we must go.

With that, Grams and Patty sparkle out of the spirit plain.
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Hill.

A tear streaked Prue is standing on the top of a hill, crying her guts out. There is a view of the ghostly city before her.

Prue: I have to pull myself together. It's the only way I can save Andy. He needs me.

She stares into the city, and remembers her home...when she was still alive.

Prue: What would I do if I was still alive?......That's a stupid question, I'd ask Phoebe and Piper.

She sits there in silence.

Prue: Think Prue, think damnit!....Book of Shadows, can I use my magic when I'm dead?

Prue trys to use her TKO, and luckily It works.

Prue: Okay. I've got to get back to the manor.

When Prue reaches the top of the hill that the manor lies on, she looks into the large well in the middle of the yard.

Prue: Oh my god, that is what this does.

Before Prue's eyes is visions of what is happening in the real world. She sees a tear streaked Phoebe and Piper in the attic, talking to a ghostly Patty and Grams.

Prue: That's how they were able to keep an eye on us. I better hurry before Grams and Mom get back.

Prue enters the manor, and goes to the attic. To her amazesment, the BOS is sitting on it's stool, like always.

Prue: At least some things don't change.

She looks into the sky.

Prue: Don't worry Andy, I'm going to get you back.

She flips too a page in the BOS, and stops.

Prue: This will work. To find a lost love.

Bring me too
my lost love
being me there
together.

Prue vanishes in sparkling lights.

That's it for now, please review!

Prue sparkled into a completely white room with only one thing inside of it. It was a humungous cage with a cetain someone in it.

Prue: Andy, Oh my God! What have they done to you?!

Andy lay on the ground, inside the cage. He was unconcious, and had blood sprawled onto the floor.

Prue ran to the cage that beheld Andy. She started to shake the bars, but they wouldn't budge.

Prue: Common Andy. Wake up!

Right then, a loud, and rather testy voice sounded.

Gaurd: Intruder! What are you doing?!

Prue matched his anger with her own.

Prue: What the hell did you do to him?!

The gaurd raised his brow as he looked at an unconcious Andy.

Gaurd: Lets just say, he refused to cooperate.
Prue: Damn you!
Gaurd: Get out of here! You are not welcome, and you can never see this man again.

Prue stared at him simply.

Prue: Never challenge a charmed one, because we always win.

Prue unexpectantly landed a kick in the man's jaw. In fury,he used an electricity that shot out of his hand. It landed in the pit of her stomach, and caused blood to flow out easily.

Prue: You can't kill me. I'm already dead!
Guard: You think you have it all figured out. You may be dead, but you can die again. Only this time, your spirit will vanquish along with your body!
Prue: No.
Guard: Oh yes.
Prue:You jerk!

With all her might, Prue swings her foot again at the rather large gaurd. Before he has a chance to react, she uses the last of her strength to shove him into the medal bars. He falls unconcious with a large grunt. His spirit vanishes. He is dead. ...Gone.Prue slips to the floor, and right before she blacks out, she pronounces one sentence.

Prue: Obviously, you've never gotten between a Halliwell and her man.

With that, Prue slumps to the ground...into her own sleep.

That's it for right now, please review!

Again, I'm sorry about the delay, and after this week, exams will be over!

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Here you go! Exams are finally over, so now I can devote my self to my fics for a little while.

White room/dungeon

Andy: Prue, Prue?! Wake up honey. You have to wake up.

Prue's eyelids start to flutter open, as she looks up at Andy. Prue sits up.

Prue: Andy, your awake......

Andy cuts her off.

Andy:Prue, are you alright?

Prue looks down at her bloody stomach.

Prue: I'll be fine. There will be something in the BOS that can probaly heal me.
Andy: Well in that case, what in the hell are you doing here?
Prue: I'm saving your life.
Andy: In the expense of yours? You almost got yourself killed. How could you be so careless?

Andy let's out a deep breath.

Andy: Prue,I'm sorrry. I love you, and I just don't want anything more to happen to you. You deserve to have a happy afterlife.
Prue: Andy, I can't have a happy afterlife if you are not in it. Your going to be saved, even if I die doing it.

A grin spreads across Andy's face.

Andy: You're still as stubborn as always.
Prue:All Halliwells are.
Andy: Well than lets find a way out, before "they" get to us. Ever since "they" were corrupted by the evil spirits they'll use any excuse to kill us.
Prue: What?!
Andy: I'll explain later. Right now, we need to leave.
Prue: How about this?

My love and I
Spirit and spirit
Free us now
Let us go!

The bars that sorround Andy dissapear, and he gathers Prue in a passionate hug. Together they sparkle out of the dungeon room.

That's it for now. I know it's not much of a cliffhanger, but more will be posted soon.

Prue and Andy sparkled in on a humungous hill with a view of the Golden Gate Bridge. For a minute, they just stare into each other’s eyes, hoping to never break their gaze. Finally, Andy steps back.

Andy: Prue, this isn’t right, they’ll….they’ll find me. And when they do, they will find you. I don’t want you to get hurt. You can’t get hurt.

Andy gestures to the deep gash in her stomach.

Prue takes a deep and shaky breath. She tries to hold in tears as they swell into her eyes.

Prue: Andy I love you. When you were taken away from me once…I couldn’t do anything about it. I was always able to do something, but not this time. When you died, a part of my heart broken away.
I learned to live with that. But now that I’m dead, I don’t have to live with it. If there is a chance that we can be together in the after life, I need to know. I need you to tell me.

Prue winces as the deep gash in her stomach from her last battle brings pain.

Andy: Okay, but we are going to find a way to heal your stomach first.
Prue: No, tell me what happened first. You said that they’ll find us soon, and I can’t fight the guards without knowing what happened.
Andy: But…<br>Prue: No. I need to know first.
Andy: Okay, but at least sit down.

Together, they rest on the tip of the hill, and hold hands. Andy stares into her brown eyes intently, and starts to speak.

Andy: About 9 months ago, a coven of witches died from a demon attack. They were outraged to have left their loved ones, and their anger eventually took over them.
Because there was no way to resurrect themselves, they were angry at the powers that be. They were also mad at everyone else in the spirit world, because they were able to except their deaths.
Together, and between their powers, they were able to take on the powers that be. After all their planning, they were able to shift the powers of control. In other words, they took over. All of the spirit elders were killed, except those who agreed to join the dark side.
After they took power over us, they began to make us live miserably. Because they were no longer to be happy, the made sure neither were us.

Prue: That’s terrible. But how…how come you didn’t call us for help?
Andy: We tried, well at least some of your older ancestors tried. One of them was Melinda Warren. They were all imprisoned, and probably tortured as far as we know.
Prue: How come mom’s and Grams didn’t?
Andy: I’ve asked once before. They said there had to be another way to rescue everyone, without anymore innocent spirits dyeing.

Prue was about to ask another question when two guards shimmered in.

Guard1: Got you witch.
Prue: I don’t think so.

Prue starts to stand up, when she falls right back down on the ground. She has enough time to stare at the wound that was still in her stomach from the last encounter of a guard, before she blacks out.
Andy: Prue!

That’s it for now, and I am sorry for the humongous delay. I know many of you thought I quit my fics, as I have had many emails regarding so. Please read the topic titled Hollyhalliwell’s back. It will explain why I took so long.

Thanks for you cooperation, and as always, please review!
Holly

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Thanks for all the reviews I have received while writing this story, and I especially give thanks to CharmBffy for her email explaining how much she loved this fic. I wasn’t planning on updating this today, but because of her, I figured that I owed her my gratification. As always I love reading your reviews!
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Preview of Last time

Prue was about to ask another question when two guards shimmered in.

Guard1: Got you witch.
Prue: I don’t think so.

Prue starts to stand up, when she falls right back down on the ground. She has enough time to stare at the wound that was still in her stomach from the last encounter of a guard, before she blacks out.

Andy: Prue!
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Now for today’s update………..

Meanwhile at the Spirit manor

Patty and Grams are pacing the living room, with the book of Shadows.

Patty: I just don’t get it! We know Prue left to try to save Andy, but she still isn’t back. Something had to go wrong.

Grams nods her head in agreement, as she flips through the spirit BOS. She stops as a page tweaks her interest.

Grams: I think I found something.

Patty rushes to her mother’s side, and looks down at the BOS.

Patty: It’s a spell that fills in the blanks of unknown activities, of the ones you love.
Grams: Yeah, and I think it will work perfect for the case. Patty, go get a picture of Prue, so we can recite the spell

Patty walks over to a table, and picks up a frame that holds Prue’s picture in it. Together, Grams and Patty set up candles, and do the things that are needed for the spell. Finally, they recite it.

Show us now
What we need to know
Show us Prue
And what was bestowed.


Wind fills the circle of candles, and pictures start to appear. In a matter of minutes, everything that has happened to Prue during the day’s events flows into Patty’s and Gram’s minds.
They are worried at seeing the sights of what has happened to her, but get really troubled when they see the events taking place presently. Before their eyes, they see Prue collapse to the ground, as two guards start forward to her and Andy. The spell stops.

Patty: Oh my god!
Grams: We can’t worry now; we need to help Prue and Andy. Come on!

Grams grabs Patty’s arm as they both sparkle out of the spirit manor.
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Meanwhile With Prue and Andy….

The guards start toward Prue and Andy as soon as she collapses. Andy rushes to Prue’s side.

Andy: Prue!
Gaurd1: This is easier than I thought it would be.

They each pull out a spear, but one of the guards turns around as he feels someone tapping on his shoulder. Luckily enough, it's Penny and Patty.

Patty: Hi. Remember me?

Patty lands a punch across the gaurds nose, and then faces Grams.

Patty: Ready Mom?
Grams: You bet ya!

Grams and Patty step forward, about to start the fight of the death time.


That’s all for today, and I know it's not much! Please don’t think this is near the end of the story. I am only still at the beginning, and have plenty more to do!

Please review! It really boosts my spirits when people take the time to tell me they read my fics! A lot of people have taken interest in this one particularly, and the faster you review, the more faster I will update!

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You may want to re-read the last section I posted, since it has been a long time.

Here we go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And like I said, I really do appreciate your reviews. Even if it's a quick note saying that you are reading it, it makes me happy.
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Grams looks over to Patty.

Grams: Let's get em!

They both launch themselves at a gaurd, as Patty shouts to Andy.

Patty: Andy, get Prue out of here! Don't worry, Grams, and I will find you somehow.

Andy nods, and Picks Prue up. He starts to run with her down the hill.

Gaurd1: They're getting away!

Before he has a chance to move, Penny uses her TKO to throw him against a tree.

Gaurd1: AHHGGGG!!!
Penny: I've told you once before, and I'll tell you again. If you mess with my family, you gotta deal with me!

The gaurd starts to throw an Energy ball at Penny, but Patty freezes it.

In the once instant that Patty turned her head to help her mother, the second gaurd started toward her. Before Grams can warn her, he lands a kick across Patty's head. Patty crashes to the ground with a hardening thud.

Grams: Patty!

She looked back at the two gaurds.

Gaurd1: Looks like your out numbered little lady!
Penny: Oh you'll pay for that name! I may be small, but never forget that I am a Halliwell!

Grams launches herself at the first gaurd, and manages to land a very satisfying crack against his skull. When the second gaurd moved toward her, she used her TKO to throw him to the oppisite direction.

Grams: You two are going to be easy.

Than, using one hand for each gaurd, Grams raises them both in the air.

Grams: Any last words, boys?
Gaurd2: Go to hell!
Grams: AH! You two are so predictable.

With the rest of her energy, Grams continues to hold the guards in the air. They start to grab their necks as they realize she is using her TKO to choke them.

Gaurd1: You won't.....get..awa...

The guard never has a chance to finish his sentence, as he and his partner burst to flames. Grams nods her head in approval.

Grams: And that, is what you get for messing with a Halliwell.

Penny than rushes to her daughter. She starts to shake her.

Grams: Honey, wake up.

Penny starts to stir.

Penny: Mom? Are the gaurds...
Grams: Yes honey, I vanquished them. Are you okay?

Penny rubs the soar spot on his head.

Penny: I'll be fine. Now let's get out of here, we need to go home so we can scry for Prue.

Without another word, they sparkle out.
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Meanwhile...with Prue and Andy.

Andy set Prue down on an old wood table, and looked down at her.

God, she's beautiful, Andy thought to himself. There is no way I'm going to lose her again.

Andy starts to shake Prue.

Andy: Prue honey, wake up.

Prue dosen't move.

Andy: Cummon, Prue, you have to wake up. I'm not going to lose you.

Prue starts to stir.

Prue: Andy.
Andy: Your awake. Thank god your awake.

He starts to press kisses all around her face. Then he murmurs against her skin.

Andy: I thought I was going to lose you.
Prue: I'd never leave that easy. I'm Prue Halliwell, I'm invincibal.

Andy laughs at this, and Prue starts to sit up. Andy stops her.

Andy: Not yet, your not well.

Prue's first instinct is to disagree, but she knows what he says is true.

Prue:Andy, where are we?
Andy: We're in an old warehouse outside San Fransisco.
prue: What...what exactly happened before?
Andy: The gaurds tracked us down, and you stood up to fight. You fell immediately because of your wound.

He gestured to her stomach.

Andy: I thought...I thought we were doomed. But that's when your mom and Grams showed up. They held the gaurds off while I escaped with you. They said not to worry, because they could scry for you once they vanquished the gaurds. they are going to help heal your wound.
Prue: thank god, for both of us, because I'll let you know right now that I am not a good patient. I hate being sick.
Andy: I can tell.

They both laugh.

Prue: So what's the game plan?
Andy: Either we hide for the rest of our afterlife, or once you get better we go after the group of witches that started this whole thing, we save the after world. and we get worshipped for the rest of eternity.
Prue: Um...I like the second choice.
Andy: Good. Now let's get out of this dump, before we are tracked down again.
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That's it for now! Not much of a cliff hanger, but let the battle begfin. lol. As always, I appreciate your reviews, and expect an update on Thursday!

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Attic (spirit world)

Patty is sitting on a chair, scrying for Prue. Grams is at the BOS, but then looks over.

Grams: Did you find Prue dear?
Patty: Not yet, but we better get to her soon. Otherwise the gaurds will find her and Andy again. I doubt she'll be able to even stand on her own two feet with that gash in her stomach.
Grams: That's, why I have this.

Grams holds up a potion bottle.

Patt: What is it?
Grams: It's a healing potion.
Patty: A healing potion? That dosen't exist.
Grams: It does now. I created it.
Patty: But how? Whitelighters are the only ones who can heal.
Grams: Remember when the bad witches started out their pack, by killing every spirit whitlighter, so the witches couldn't be healed?
Patty: Yes, it was a terrible day.
Grams: Well remember when our whitelighter, Natalie, was killed in our own attack?
Patty: Of course.
Grams: She said that the only way we would have a chance of saving the afterlife was to take some of her whitelighter blood. If we used the right preserves, it could last a while.
Patty: But how, how did the witches not find out?
Grams: Because I'm a Halliwell, a woman with many secrets.

Patty starts to answer when the crystal pulled down onto the map.

Patty: I found them. They're at an old, abandoned resteraunt in china Town.
Grams: Well, than lets get our hides moving.

With that, they clasp hands, and sparkle out.
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"Up there" spirit world

A long, black buisness table sits in the middle of a completely white room. Sitting at the table are six figures. There are gaurds at every corner of the room. A bubble playing the events involving Andy, Prue, and the dead guards is playing. When it fades, the figure at the head of the table starts to speak.

Jessica: How dare they! Kill them!
Greg: Master Jessica, we are trying.
Jessica: I don't care if you are trying, Greg! The point is I want them gone. This is my afterlife, and us 6 rule it.
Alex: We are tracking them this second.
Jessica: Every extra second they have is a second they don't deserve. We may be dead, but we deserve it all. Andy and Prue deserve nothing!
Eric: Not to mention, that Patty and Penny Halliwell are butting in again.

This was said by a rather stubly man.

Jessica: Don't worry. They'll all be out of our way soon enough.
Gaurd: Madame?

Jessica looked up at a hefty gaurd.

Gaurd: We have located the whereabouts of Andy and Prue. We have also gathered information that Patty and Penny Halliwell are also on there way to the same location.

Jessica's lips curl into an evil smile.

Jessica: Perfect. I want 30 of our men to meet them there.
Gaurd: Then what?
Jessica: Then take them to the Dungeon Hall... I'll be waiting.

The gaurd nods at this, as him and his men shimmer out.
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That's the end of today's review! i hoped you liked it. And yes, if you happened to capture the name of the Halliwell's whitelighter, it was the same natalie who played Leo's friend.
More to come on Saturday!

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OK, i know it's not much, but it's something to entertain you for about 30 seconds. lol. I hope you enjoy this, and please review! I only got two reviews for my last update, and I would absolutely love it if I had at least 3 or 4.

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Prue ad Andy enter an abandoned Chineze retauraunt, and he sets her down in a chair. She covers her nose.

Prue: God, this place smells. I feel like a single, 45 year old man, whose living off of old takeout, and his only company is an blind, one eyed cat!

Andy laughs at her creative interpretation. only prue would come up with something to make you laugh at a time like this.

Andy: You know Prue.....

Andy is cut off when Patty and Grams sparkle in. Patty rushes to her daughter.

Patty: Thank god you're all right.
Prue: Mom, I'm fine. You worry too much.

Grams steps forward, and pulls a potion from her pocket.

Grams: Well someone has too. Here, drink this.

She passes Prue the bottle.

Prue: What is it?
Grams: Not enough time to explain, but it will heal your stomach.

Prue swallows the contents of the botttle, and her stomach heals instantly. Then she makes a face.

Prue: Gross!

While Prue is still suffering from the taste of the potion,when a whole swarm of gaurds shimmer in.

Gaurd1: Well, Well, Well, looks like you've finally lost the game of cat and Mouse.
Grams: Oh shut up. Besides, the mouse always finds it's way back to the cheese.

Prue stifles a laugh at Gram's, but before she has a chance to react, the gaurds step forward.

Andy takes a look at about 30 gaurds. "shoot" was the only thought that came to mind. Looks like they were going to have to get out the hard way. Andy rolls up his sleeves, as the gaurds lunge towards the group. this was going to be one hell of a fight.

Andy: Bring it on.

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The gaurds run towards the group, as the group starts towards the gaurds.

Prue: No one threatens the Halliwells!

Prue lands a kick across a man's jaw, as another gaurd grabs on to her other foot. Prue is about to get hit when the gaurd holding her foot vanquishes. She sees Andy behind him, holding a flip knife.

Andy: Hey, I needed some protection too.

She merely raises an eyebrow, as they have tons more gaurds to vanquish.

As Grams is fighting, a fireball gets thrown at her. Patty quickly freezes it, and then unfreezed it when another gaurd walked by. He was vanquished in a sizzling burst of flames.

Everyone keeps fighting, and protecting eachother for another ten minutes. Finally, there are about 15 gaurds left.

Grams: Shouldn't be that hard to finish the rest off. I have been keeping in shape with my daily yoga lessons.

Grams said this as she bloodied a gaurd's lip. Patty was able to vanquish annother 3 gaurds, while Prue handled another two. Andy vanquished one gaurd, all while saving Patty's life. As for Grams....she just made sure they suffered a good lot before the others got to them.

Finally, they were left with nine gaurds.

Gaurd 1: You may have vanquished some of the weaker gaurds, but don't think you'll be able to get through us. We're tougher than you'll ever be.

Grams: Oh will you put a sock in it already? I must've heard that line 20 times today.

She lunges at the gaurd, and manages to land a good kick across his jaw. But before she can get away, another gaurd grabs her from behind. She yells for help, but can't seem to break way from his grasp. However, she does manage to sink her teeth in to his beefy hand.

Gaurd1: Ow! Your gonna...
Grams: Pay for that? Like I said, your lines are a little repetative.

His grasp loosens some on her, but not enough to break free.

The gaurd screams when he feels a pain in his back. Grams turns her head, only to see Andy pulling his knife out of the gaurd's back.

Andy: Mess with someone your own size.
Gaurd 1: Oh I will. That is, when I come back.

The gaurd vaishes with Grams, and Andy curses. Suddenly, he feels a feirce pain on the back of his head, and touches it. He pulls back a bloody hand, right before he blacks out.

Prue: Andy!

Prue screams as the next gaurd shimmers out with an unconcious Andy. Only Patty and Prue were left. They had to deal with the last six gaurds by themselves.

A gaurd starts toward Patty, and Prue uses her TKO to fling him away. They manage to vanquish two more gaurds, leaving the last four. Half of them start towards Prue, while the others go towards Patty. Patty manages to kill another one, by kicking him into an old, rusty, coat holder, but gets punched from behind from the other gaurd. Finally, he manages to shimmer out, witha squirming Patty.

Prue was the only one left, and had the last two gaurds to vanquish. She was sure she would be able to do just that, but then thought of the others. How would she be able to find them? How bad were they hurt? It was best that they stay together, rather than....

Prue didn't have enough time to finish her thought, as something stabbed into her back. She fell to the gound, as her mind drifted farther....and farther into a deep black hole.

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The darkness was flowing over her, pleasent and painfree. But then...wait...where was she? The memories of her fight with the gaurds, and being captured started entering her mind. As Prue started to come out of her sleep, her pain started to come back. Faintly, she started to here speaking. Were they talking to her?

"Prue, honey, you need to wake up. The gaurds will be here soon."

"Andy, let me try." said Grams as she knelt down by Prue. "Prue, can you hear me? This is Grams speaking, and if you don't get your butt up this instant, I swear I'll...

Prue opened her eyes in a split second. "Fine, but you don't have to be so mean."

Andy and Patty smiled, knowing that Prue was going to be okay.

Grams smirked. "Of course I didn't have to be that mean, but's what's the fun in being your Grams if I don't get a try at you every once in a while?"

Everyone laughed, but then they started to hear footsteps.

"Okay, we should hurry." said Patty. "Mom, go ahead and heal Prue's leg for her. She won't be able to fight if she can't even stand up."

Grams spills part of the potion over Prue's leg, and Prue sighs at the sense of relief.

"ok Prue." said Grams. "Take this healing potion, and hide it in your clothing. I gave each of you one just incase you are hurt badly. No matter what, we should try to stick together. If we can't, we fight for our lifes. The least we can do is make the gaurds suffer."

They hear footsteps again. This time they are closer, too close. They look at the bars in front of them, when Jessica appears before them. She smiles wickedly

"I never thought I'd see the day. The mighty Halliwells have been captured." Jessica turned to Prue and Andy. "You two gave me quite the go around. I never realized you were so weak."

"You can shut the hel..." started Andy

Jessica, kept speaking. "It's a pity you two tried to risk your lifes for love. ha! Such a thing dosen't exist!" Jessica laughed at their stupidity. "Gaurds! Separate them! I don't want this group to get any ideas before they reach the ring of death."

Without another word, Jessica walked out of the chamber.

Andy looked up at Prue, worry appearent on his face. She merely sent him a look that said 'keep cool, we'll figure something out, eventually.

Two guards grabbed on to each prisoner. They weren't taking any chances of this group escaping.

One of the gaurds tugged tightly on Gram's arm, as they turned a corner of the prison.

Grams: Ouch, big guy. You don't have to twist my arm out of the socket to get me to turn a few corners. If you'd just ask politely, I would have done as you said.

The gaurd merely grunted, as he and his partner arrived to her cell.

Grams: Gee, guys. You'd think you could upgrade the living arrangements every once in a while. How am I supposed to entertain myself while I'm waiting to be tortured and killed?

This time, the second gaurd responded, anger apparent on his bulgy face.

Gaurd: You need to shut the hell up. Nobody likes a cranky old witch.

In a split second move, Grams used her leg to kick the gaurd in his stomach.

Grams: First of all, I am neither old nor cranky. Second of all, Halliwell's never take orders, especially from scum bags like you!

This sent the gaurd into rage. He pushed her into the cell, and before he shut the door, backhanded her across the room. He locked the door, as a wicked smile curled his lips. The gaurd took one last look at the unconcious Halliwell.

Gaurd: That'll shut her up....at least for a while.
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Prue's/Patty's cell

The cell door is locked, and the guards walked away. Prue turned to her mother.

Prue: These freaks still don't even have enough sense to seprate us each completely. No wonder good always wins, evil is always dumb as rocks.

Patty turned to her daughter.

Patty: We better figure out a plan. I'm betting they won't leave us here for long. And if my memory serves correctly, we do not want to enter the ring of death.

Prue: What is the ring of death?