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Post by BiteMeIamFresh on Nov 22, 2005 23:57:56 GMT -5
Ext. Bar on a dark highway Ashley and Sam are outside in the car waiting for Dean. Sam has his head in a newspaper as Ashley is getting tired of waiting
Ashley: “So what’s he doing in there?”
Sam: “He’s running low on money. So he’s hustling pool.”
Ashley: “Ever here of day jobs?”
Sam: “I tried telling him that. We move around to much.”
Ashley: “True..”
Sam: “So how you holding up.”
Ashley: “Better then I thought I would be.”
Sam: “If you want to cry..”
Ashley: “No trust me I think I’m done with that.”
Sam: “Ok”
Ashley: “Sam your such a sweet guy. Why don’t you have a girlfriend?”
Sam: “I used to…Her name was Jessica and well Dean told you how are mom died?
Ashley: “Yeah the ceiling burning thing. O is that what happened to her.”
Sam: “Yeah I have to know what did it.”
Ashley: “Understandable. I was just curious cause I know why dean doesn’t have one.”
Sam: “Why’s that.”
Ashley: “He’s an arrogant not a very nice person most of the time.”
Sam laughed a little and the car door opened as Dean got in with money.
Dean: “What’s so funny.”
Sam: “Ashley told a joke.”
Ashley: “you wouldn’t like it.”
Dean: “Ok then I see I missed girl chat.”
Sam: “Shut up.”
Dean: “Easy boy it was a joke so where to next?”
Sam: “Iowa.”
Dean: “Why?”
Sam: “Local man’s brain is missing. Along with a few other strange deaths.”
Ashley: “Ewww.”
Dean: “It happens more then you think. So lets go farming.”
He starts the car and drives off.
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Post by hollypop on Nov 23, 2005 0:10:07 GMT -5
'Let's go farming'.... I love it!!! Can't wait to read more
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Post by Jamison on Dec 22, 2005 1:52:07 GMT -5
Nicely done.
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Post by hollypop on Dec 29, 2005 10:58:44 GMT -5
seriously.. the characters were coming along so well and I think your story is coming along pretty good. I'm looking forward to a new submission- whenever you're ready
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