thekiwicharmed
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Since Charmed it's been Veronica Mars!
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Post by thekiwicharmed on Oct 3, 2005 3:25:34 GMT -5
Here is the preview for the episode. A lot of things have changed in this version - so try and wipe your memories clean of the old version as there will be subtle character changes (and even changes in the names of one or two characters).
Expect the rest of the episode to be posted in around two weeks. Cheers.
As you might have noticed, i've taken some dialouge out of an existing scene and moulded it in. There will be about 1/2 of the script's dialouge in this new version, just heaps of other changes.
Let's just say CHRIS'S depression dosen't bog down two episodes anymore. Although his mother remains dead, something happens that lets him move on quicker.
also, BLACK NIGHT's name is now INFERNAL SHADE.
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Post by Astral Echo on Oct 3, 2005 10:49:29 GMT -5
I really love this new start to Episode One and like any good writers I'm glad that two copies were made. I think it was good that Chris's depression won't kind ruin the starting episodes and I love the new the name for Black Night. Can't wait for the rest! I guess you won't carry on writing episode two as you are going to tweak that too, am I right?
Dan
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thekiwicharmed
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Since Charmed it's been Veronica Mars!
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Post by thekiwicharmed on Oct 3, 2005 22:31:43 GMT -5
No I will not be writing episode two and that episode might be written out fully. Without his depression, none of the plots in episode two will appear. I'll keep the final scenes though - where they are confronted by the infernal shade. There are some other scenes which I might also use.
I'm not sure whether to keep eangelous in the story - it might be too early. If I do then i'll deffinitly be changing his name.
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Post by BarbReader on Oct 11, 2005 23:51:53 GMT -5
I'm confused. This is clearly NOT all of the revised Episode 1. I assume we are still waiting on that, and I haven't missed it, right?
I thought you were going to only post whole episodes going forward.
I'm confused.
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thekiwicharmed
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Since Charmed it's been Veronica Mars!
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Post by thekiwicharmed on Oct 13, 2005 1:56:42 GMT -5
edited to say:
Disregard my post.
Barbreader: That teaser was not featured in the first version and is merely a backstory of what happened BEFORE PIPERS DEATH.
I'm taking scenes from the original and crafting into this new version.
New character names:
Black Night >> Infernal Shade
Eppie >> Eva
After ive posted act one this will make more sense.
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Post by charmedfreak92 on Oct 22, 2005 21:00:53 GMT -5
hey kiwicharmed. you have a great site, but i cant register for some reason. can u tell me how? and i love your site, and your fanfic!
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