TheCharmedSons 1.01 PILOT .done. plz dont move yet

[thekiwicharmed]

This is a draft. The final version of TCS will be coming out later this month.


RATING: M-15
This fan fiction is suitable for mature persons over the age of fifteen years. Contains mention of Suicide, medium level language, medium level violence and adult themes.



TEASER


FADE IN:


INT. MANOR ATTIC- NIGHT

Fade in too the manor attic, night, uncultivated and full of old remnants. Pause, then the attic door bursts open to reveal Drew Fuller as Chris P. Halliwell.

CHRIS:
(Pacing)
I call upon the ancient power
To help us in this darkest hour
Let the book return to this space
Claim refuge in its rightful place…

CHRIS:
(Sits down)
It’s no use.

(Bianca shimmers in, confused)

BIANA:
Chris? Chris! What happened?

CHRIS:
Keep your voice down, Bianca.

BIANCA:
(Says slowly)
What happened!?

CHRIS:
(Looking up at her)
I… I don’t, I’m not sure.

(Bianca swerves around, as if looking for something)

BIANCA:
(Frustrated)
Where’s Wyatt?

(Chris gets up and stares at the stool that used too hold the coveted book of shadows)

CHRIS:
I call upon the ancient power;

BIANCA:
What the hell do you think you’re doing?

CHRIS:
To help us in this darkest hour;

BIANCA:
No.

CHRIS:
Let the book return to this space;

BIANCA:
That’s forbidden! Chris, what happened?
Cut too flashback – Close up of Piper’s horrified scream.

CHRIS:
Claim refuge in its rightful place.

(As Chris finishes the word ‘place’ a magnificent blue and white light shines through the ceiling and touches the floor)

CHRIS:
Oh my god.

BIANCA:
(Gasp)

(As the light quickly fades, an ancient book manifests into physical form)

INT. MANOR SECOND FLOOR STAIRS- NIGHT

CHRIS:
(Running down the stairs while holding the book in his arms)
You don’t understand.

BIANCA:
Understand what? What happened, Chris!

CHRIS:
(Throws the book at the wall)
I told you, I DON’T KNOW!

(Angle: Manor door)

(Doors fly open as a telekinetic “Zing” can be heard. Standing out in the porch covered in shadows)

WYATT:
Brother.

(Cut too flashback of Wyatt’s hand holding Excalibur)

CHRIS:
What? What are you doing… here?

WYATT:
That’s now way too be talking too your brother now is it Chris? This house both of ours.

CHRIS:
And Moms.

WYATT:
(Noticing the book of shadows)
Is that what I think it is?

CHRIS:
(Picks up the book)
No.

(Chris grabs Bianca’s hand and tries pushing past Wyatt with the book)

WYATT
(With a more deep-aggressive tone)
Where do you think your going?

(The book drops too the floor as Chris struggles too breathe)

BIANCA:
Wyatt. Wyatt!

CHRIS:
(groan)

WYATT:
This is for the greater good.

(Bianca, unable too determine what’s going on, shoves her hand inside Wyatt’s back)

WYATT:
Piss off your filthy Phoenix!

BIANCA:
Chris, get the book! – Ah!

(Wyatt throws her outside and telekinetically shuts the manor doors)

CHRIS:
No!

BIANCA:
Wyatt, let me in!

WYATT:
(Flings right hand)
Now she can’t even shimmer in. It’s just you, and me, Chris.

CHRIS:
What did you do?

WYATT:
Excuse me.

CHRIS:
Where’s Mom. What did you do?

(Chris lunges for the book, only too be knocked over by a TK blast and into the dining room table)

WYATT:
(Taking a hold of the book)
She won’t be getting in the middle of things this time. You won’t have “mommy” too protect you. You won’t have mommy to stop me. No, little brother. It’s my time this time.


BIANCA:
(Shimmering back outside the doors)
God help us.

WYATT:
(Clenching his fists, choking Chris with TK)
How do you like that?

CHRIS:
(Tries a telekinetic shot)

WYATT:
Do you ever learn? I’m twice blessed. Magic literally died the day I was too be born. Don’t try your childish tricks on me.

CHRIS:
(As Wyatt relieves the choke)
Help me.

WYATT:
Me, help you?

(Wyatt sends Chris flying across the floor. His scream is drowned out by the sound of a soul entering the physical plain)

GRAMS:
He wasn’t talking too you.

CHRIS:
Grams!?

GRAMS:
Enough.

(The matriarch of the Halliwell family barely lifts a finger, sending a howling Wyatt through the manor doors and on too the street)

(Angle: Road)

(Wyatt dissipates in black orbs)

(Angle: Manor)

CHRIS:
Grams?

GRAMS:
I’m sorry dear; I’ve already broken one too many rules coming here.
[Exit]

CHRIS:
Grams!
(Sighs)
GRAMS!

FADE OUT

END OF TEASER

[leigh19]

Very nice start. (I assume you're going to enter TCS's contest- but if you weren't, then I say go for it!) Looking forward to reading more, this first bit was rather suspenseful.

When ever I think of the spin off I picture good Wyatt, but it was cool to see your approach based on the premise that he is still evil. I'd love to see this play out on screen...if only the WB knew the meaning of decent TV
Cheers,
-Leigh

[Astral Echo]

Very Good, More soon,
Dan

[thekiwicharmed]

ACT 1:

ACT I

INT. PRESCOTT STREET- NIGHT

(Camera cranes down diagonally too Chris and Bianca on the sidewalk)

BIANCA:
Are you okay? What the hell has gotten into Wyatt? Were those black orbs!

CHRIS:
Stop asking so many questions, this isn’t the time Bianca. I have enough of my own too answer.

BIANCA:
I leave for three days and all of this happens. What caused you too summon the book from the ghostly plane? Wyatt’s been an behind lately but there’s no reason why…

CHRIS:
(Apologetic)
Look, I’m sorry. If I knew what had happened then maybe this would be different.

BIANCA:
Our one year anniversary.
(Changes subject)
Penny huh?

CHRIS:
Yeah. It was weird. I called out and she came. If Grams wasn’t there I would be dead now.

BIANCA: Don’t say that!

CHRIS:
Why not?

BIANCA:
Because Wyatt would never kill you!

CHRIS:
(Shutting the book)
Would he kill Mom?

BIANCA:
What?


Int. DEMONIC COVEN- night (present)

BLACK NIGHT:
I’m getting cold. I need a new witch, now. Cold…

EPPIE:
Right! Um, I think we have another one ready for you.

BLACK NIGHT:
She better be good this time.

(Enter Wyatt)

WYATT:
(Holding a young innocent witch by her hair)
I think you’ll be very pleased with this one.

BLACK NIGHT:
Interesting.

EPPIE:
Back so soon?

WYATT:
What’s it too you?

BLACK NIGHT:
Where is the charmed one?

WYATT:
Not yet, Black Hart.

EPPIE:
Failed again
(Smiles)

BLACK NIGHT:
Enough. Bring her too me. I’m cold.

CANDACE:
(Confused) Where’s my white lighter!?

EPPIE:
Right there.

WYATT:
I’m no white lighter.

(Wyatt throws his charge to the ground, knocking her unconscious)

BLACK NIGHT:
Nice. Leave all of you.

EPPIE:
Uh, ookay.

(Wyatt and Eppie exit)

BLACK NIGHT:
I’m cold.

(Close up of the witches eyes bursting open)

INT. DEMONIC COVEN EXTERIOR – night

EPPIE:
I wonder. What’s happening too black night? There seems too be a lot more demonic activity around then usual.

WYATT:
Yeah how’s that?

EPPIE:
You’ve probably upset the balance.

WYATT:
There never was a balance and there never will be.

EPPIE:
How is Chris?

WYATT:
I don’t know. I don’t care.

EPPIE:
Is that where you’re anger is coming from?

WYATT:
Anger? I’ve been angry ever since…

EPPIE:
Ever since?

WYATT:
Don’t worry. Why are you talking too me?

EPPIE:
What? Can’t a phoenix talk too a white… dark lighter. There aren’t any laws against that.

WYATT:
Shut up.

EPPIE:
Edgy. I guess it’s because there aren’t many people too talk too around here. Y’know. And you are cute you know.

WYATT:
Whatever, Eppie. Go and fly off somewhere. Do what you have to do. I’ve got more important things too deal with right now.

EPPIE:
When’s the funeral then?

WYATT:
You aren’t invited.

EPPIE:
You know, Black Night doesn’t ask me too be friendly too you. We have more in common then you think, Wyatt. Keep that in mind.

WYATT:
Your sister is a phoenix and my brother is a white lighter, that doesn’t make us common.

EPPIE:
(Getting up)
Look deeper.

WYATT:
Go and drown yourself.

EPPIE:
(Angry)
It’s not like I want too be here either.

WYATT:
Keep your voice down or I will kill you.

EPPIE:
That’s your answer too everything isn’t it?
(Raises voice)
Kill, kill, kill, kill, and kill.


INT GOLDEN GATE PARK - night.


(Bianca and Chris are pacing)

BIANCA:
That’s ridiculous!

CHRIS:
Is it?
(Stops and flicks through the book)

BIANCA:
I know he hasn’t been the same these days.

CHIRS:
None of us have been the same, but he...

BIANCA:
Some anniversary this is…

CHRIS:
Bianca!
(Puts his hands down on a page)

BIANCA:
What?

CHRIS:
The spell, it’s still in here.

BIANCA:
(Looks)
Too unmask clouded memories. Why don’t you just use the truth spell?

CHRIS:
That won’t work. Now be quiet and let me read.
(Studies the page carefully)
Too unmask clouded memories one must have strong desire. A pentagram and full moon are required as well as clear thought and mind.

BIANCA:
Okay Chris. You have a strong desire but that’s all you have.
(Looks up)
I can make a pentagram, but we have no full moon.

CHRIS:
Whatever. Do what you have too. I’ll try it.

BIANCA:
But it could be dangerous.

CHRIS:
I live in danger all day and night. Don’t worry.

(Bianca closes her eyes and concentrates. Suddenly the grass erupts in a pentagram shape of small flames)

BIANCA:
What about your state of mind?

CHRIS:
Just let me do this.
(Darkens voice)
I need too find out whether or not Wyatt killed our mother.

(Chris enters the middle of the pentagram and lays down)

BIANCA:
I love you…
(Kisses Chris passionately)

CHRIS:
I love you too.
(Enchants)
In this darkest hour I call too thee.
From this world to some past space
Offer peace of mind and state of grace
Let me fall into ghostly sleep.

BIANCA:
Oh no.

WYATT:
(Orbs in, a few steps away)
Oh yes.

BIANCA:
Chris, no, stop. Wake up!

INT – CHRIS MEMORY – MANOR KITCHEN – day.


WYATT:
Come on Mom, Please?

PIPER:
I don’t know how many times I’ve had too tell you Wyatt, No.

WYATT:
Why? What’s the worst that could happen?

PIPER:
(Carrying a water pot into the dining room)
Look, I don’t have too give you reasons! Why don’t you go and annoy your charge instead of constantly whining in my face?

WYATT:
(Yells)
Because I need it!

PIPER:
What you need is a time out.

WYATT:
Stop treating me like a child!

PIPER:
(Watering plants)
Why? You’ve been acting like one.
(Enter Chris – orbs through manor doors)

WYATT:
No I haven’t

CHRIS:
Hey Mom! Wyatt…

PIPER:
Hi honey.

WYATT:
Chris, help me out here! Convince our mother that the book of shadows is better off with us then in some ghostly plane!

CHRIS:
Not this again.

PIPER:
I don’t need to hear this.

WYATT:
(Angry)
This is getting nowhere.

PIPER:
(Angry)
Of course this is going nowhere.

(Wyatt makes a run for the manor doors)

CHRIS:
Wait,

(Attempts too go after Wyatt)

WYATT:
Don’t even try.
(Sends a small TK wave, throwing Chris into the grandfather clock)

PIPER:
Wyatt!

WYATT:
(Turns around shocked)
Oh my god.

(Piper gestures at the mirror next too the door and blows it up)

WYATT:
I didn’t mean too do that…
(Exit)

PIPER:
Chris, you okay?

CHRIS:
Yeah, I’ll be fine. I think Wyatt is the one you should ask.

PIPER:
I think he’s beyond help now.

CHRIS:
I think we all are.



INT – CHRIS MEMORY – MANOR CONSERVATORY – night.

(Camera is at a slight offset. Chris is not physically there but still watching the events he remembers them).

CHRIS [past]:
P3 is doing fine these days, unlike everything else.

PIPER:
(Hearing a crash in the attic)
What was that!?

CHRIS [past]:
Another demon?

(Angle manor bottom floor)

CHRIS [past]:
Mom, wait here I’ll deal with it.

(Exit of past-Chris. At that moment ‘ghost Chris’s’ eyes thicken)

INT – GOLDEN GATE PARK – night.

BIANCA:
Don’t go near him.

WYATT:
I don’t need too.
(Waves hand at pentagram of flames which dissipate)

BIANCA:
Bastard!
(Shimmers out then reforms a kick too Wyatt’s groin)

WYATT:
(One knee too the ground)
Oww!


INT – CHRIS MEMORY – WHERE WE LEFT OFF – night.

(Camera is now at an awkward offset – colors are in wrong places)

CHRIS (ghost):
What’s happening?

PIPER:
(Now holding an axe)
How dare you, how dare you!
(Hurls the axe into the manor wall)

CHRIS (ghost):
Mom, what are you doing!? This isn’t what happened. What’s going on? Mom!

PIPER:
(Eerie laugh)
Hahahaha.

CHRIS:
Bianca! Get me out of here!

PIPER:
(Laugh turns into a cry)
My life is over.

CHRIS (ghost):
Bianca…,

Int. GOLDEN GATE PARK –night

CHRIS (sleeping):
…, Help!

WYATT:
I’m not here to harm you or Chris if you get the hell out of my way.

BIANCA:
(Throwing confused looks at Chris and Wyatt)
Forgive me, both of you.
(Shimmers out)

FADE OUT

END OF ACT I

[P3CharmedWriter]

Very nicely done. I love the tension and drama through out the story. You write each brother, as ptrayed on the show, to a "T". You should most def enter this into the contest. Amazing.

[ejhoagie]

This is Great!!! Hope you keep on writing.

Noticed how you purposely didn't explain the time, actually good. It would be obviously in the future.

[thekiwicharmed]

For anyone wondering, yes I am entering the contest

Here are some tidbits:

Grams and Piper will appear in ACTS II and possibly III. Leo won't be in this episode. Chris and Bianca aren't married, their anniversary is mearely one year since they've met. No Phoebe, Paige or their children too make it on screen at the moment.

Act 2 too come at the end of the week

[Astral Echo]

Very Good and I love it, more soon!

[Master of Demon Slayer]

The story has me on a hook! Can't wait for more.

[thekiwicharmed]

Here is 2/3 of Act II


ACT II

INT. GOLDEN GATE PARK - NIGHT.

WYATT:
I can’t have you remember… just yet.
(puts hands on forehead of sleeping Chris)

CHRIS (unconscious):
Bianca.

WYATT:
Oh shush over your beloved Bianca. It seems she’s abandoned you in any case. Now…
(Hand glows over Chris’s forehead)
Let’s play shall we?

(Enter Eppie –shimmer in)

EPPIE:
What are you doing?

WYATT:
Just a simple mind walking hex.

EPPIE:
Your up too something aren’t you?

WYATT:
What makes you think that?

EPPIE:
A phoenix’s sense. Or rather, Black Night. He doesn’t trust you.

WYATT:
(Forgetting about Chris for the moment)
What? I just provided him with my charge.

EPPIE:
What about Piper?

WYATT:
What about her?

EPPIE:
The words out that you killed the last charmed one. Where’s the body?

WYATT:
You should know by now Eppie.

EPPIE:
Know?

WYATT:
…Not too piss me off
(Hurls a blue/white energy ball at her chest, hits)

EPPIE:
(sad, sarcastic)
Oh, you bastard.
(shimmers out)

WYATT:
(Looks into Chris’s weary eyes)
I’m so sorry brother. I never meant for any of this too happen.
(Wyatt’s eyes begin too water)

EPPIE:
(Leagues away but watching him)
Tears?

WYATT:
But I can’t have you ruining my plans.
(puts hands on Chris’s forehead, closes eyes and concentrates)

INT. CHRIS MEMORY – WHERE WE LEFT OFF – NIGHT.

CHRIS (ghost):
Bianca, wake me up! Get me out of here!

CHRIS (past):
Mom! Don’t worry. It’s nothing, something just fell off the bench.

(Camera swerves too past Chris’s face then back to Pipers. The camera goes back to a normal –slight- slant. No longer does she have an axe)

PIPER:
You sure?

CHRIS (ghost): Wait… that isn’t what happened either.
(Looks up)
What’s wrong with this?

INT. GOLDEN GATE PARK – NIGHT

WYATT:
Good.
(Changes tone)
Forgive me brother, but… let’s turn things up a notch.

INT. CHRIS MEMORY – WHERE WE LEFT OFF – NIGHT

(This time the camera is slanted the most, a real sick feeling can be felt)

CHRIS (past):
MOM, IT’S YOUR FAULT DAD DIED!

CHRIS (ghost):
What? I didn’t say that!
(breathes)
Did I?

PIPER:
Chris, why can’t you be like Wyatt. Stop blaming me constantly for EVERY LITTLE FREAKING THING!

CHRIS (past):
ALRIGHT I’VE HAD JUST ABOUT ENOUGH OF YOUR MOUTH, BITCH!

CHRIS (voice over):
(Shows a mid shot of ghost-Chris with a confused look)
I knew that I didn’t quite remember what had happened earlier that evening, but I was certain that I didn’t call my mother a bitch. Mom and I never used too fight. It was always Wyatt blaming her for everything. Something wasn’t right.

PIPER:
That’s enough!
(Gestures at her son, who swerves. Wall blows too bits)

CHRIS (past):
Die!
(Sends a telekinetic blow at his mother with such magnitude, that it throws her one floor up, through the stairs barrier and into the wall).

CHRIS (ghost):
(Traumatized)
Bastard!!!!
(lunges a tackle at his past self, forgetting none of it was real and he was not physically there)

INT – GOLDEN GATE PARK – NIGHT

EPPIE:
(Watching Wyatt)
Interesting…
(Shimmers out)

INT – DEMONIC COVEN OUTSIDE – NIGHT

(Close up shot shows hands wrap around Eppie’s neck and force her onto a cliff face)

BIANCA:
You little bitch.

EPPIE:
Arghhh.

(Bianca drops Eppie)

BIANCA:
What are you doing here? What is this place?

EPPIE:
(Getting up)
Would you let me explain myself before you attack me! I think you know where I am, Bianca. How did you get here?

BIANCA:
No. You don’t deserve explanation. I followed your blood.
(Serious)
Speak now or forever hold your peace.

EPPIE:
That’s not funny.

BIANCA:
It wasn’t meant too be. Again, what are you doing here?

EPPIE:
Can we go
(Looks around too see if there are any peeping toms)
talk about this someplace else?

BIANCA:
No, I know you know Wyatt and I need answers now.

EPPIE:
Wow, you really do have connections.

(Pause)

I’m undercover.

BIANCA:
Why?

EPPIE:
That’s none of your business, sis.

BIANCA:
I need too know what’s happening too Wyatt? Chris seems too think that something killed their mother.

EPPIE:
Oh. You haven’t heard have you?

EPPIE:
(Looks around too see if anyone is watching again then whispers)
Apparently Wyatt killed her, black and white plain and simple. Don’t shake your head at me.

BIANCA:
Oh my god, I have too get back too Chris!

EPPIE:
Well, apparently he killed her. If you ask me I don’t think he did it.

BIANCA:
(About too leave)
What? Speak.

EPPIE:
Wyatt can never do anything without my prying eye. If you ask me, I don’t think he did it. Neither does Black Night.

BIANCA:
Your not making any sense.

EPPIE:
And your not welcome here. Go before I get in trouble.

BIANCA:
(Turns around)
As you wish.
(Shimmers out)

BLACK NIGHT:
(appears out of the shadows)
Explain yourself.

INT. SOUL PURGATORY – UNKNOWN TIME

PIPER:
What’s going on?

GRAMS:
I’m sorry dear.

PIPER:
No.
(frantic)
This can’t be happening.

GRAMS:
(extends hands too her grand daughter)
Piper…

PIPER:
Sent me back, I need too go back.

GRAMS:
That’s impossible, you know that.

PIPER:
No. It can’t be, I can’t leave things in this state. Oh my God why is this happening too me. After all these years why now?
GRAMS:
Piper please, calm down.

PIPER:
No, I WON’T CALM DOWN! Chris is must be on the verge of suicide, or blaming Wyatt for what happened.

GRAMS:
Piper dear…
(pause)
Wyatt is what happened.

PIPER:
(Disgusted)
You of all people!?

GRAMS:
Excuse me?

PIPER:
Do you really believe that one of my own children would kill me?
(Laughs)
I thought you were a Halliwell.

GRAMS:
I know this is a hard time but I won’t accept rudeness.

PIPER:
I saw the looks in his eyes. One was soulful and innocent – I hadn’t seen that in a long time. But the other one was of pure evil. That wasn’t my son. Whoever killed me wasn’t my son.

GRAMS:
Wait… you think he was possessed or something?

PIPER:
I don’t know!

GRAMS:
Piper dear… your beginning to lose it. Come with me now, I promise you a nice afterlife
(awkward smile)

PIPER:
I don’t want too go. I want too be with my sons! I want too reverse the chaos that I can feel in both of them.
GRAMS:
Piper, they’re calling for us. You must come.

PIPER:
(dark)
I’m not going anywhere without my children. Chris!
(yells)
Chris!

GRAMS:
Sorry dear, if you won’t come with me then fine, but I have too go.

PIPER:
Chris! Wyatt?

(Grams fades out, leaving a distraught Piper calling out her sons names)

The last 4 pages of this act are coming tomorrow ;D

[Astral Echo]

Wow really good, more soon!
Dan

[Master of Demon Slayer]

I can't wait for more! Hurry! I want to know what happens in the end!

[thekiwicharmed]

Hey YingYang and Dantay, thanks so much foe the awseome feedback. (bless) (bless).
If anyone else is enjoying this so far, please comment as it helps inspire me too write more quickly.
Anyway, here is the last 4 1/2 pages of ACT II. Things are really starting too heat up.

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INT. GOLDEN GATE PARK – NIGHT

(Wyatt finishes messing with Chris’s memory but doesn’t realize that Bianca shimmers in pissed)

BIANCA:
Traitor!
(Tackles Wyatt with all of her force)
You deserve too die for what you’ve done!

(Bianca swings two punches, hitting Wyatt directly in the face but then refrains)

CHRIS:
(Distraught)
Stop!

BIANCA:
Chris?

WYATT:
It worked…
(instead of retaliating at Bianca, he gets up too look at his brother, one part of him glad that he had concealed his secret and maddened his rival in the process, the other part filled with agony and sadness)

CHRIS:
Don’t hurt him, it isn’t his fault.

BIANCA:
What are you talking about?

CHRIS:
I did it
(teary eyed)
I killed my mother!
(breaks down)

WYATT:
(smirks)
See.

BIANCA:
Chris, don’t say that!
(turns too look at Wyatt)
You did this?

CHRIS:
I killed her. I killed her. I was lying.

WYATT:
(Walks up too Chris and sends a TK blow at Bianca, throwing her into the distance)
Finally Brother, you see the truth.

CHRIS:
Wyatt!?

WYATT:
What? Are you going too kill me too? How could you do that Chris?
(Fake tone)
How could you destroy our family?

CHRIS:
(Screaming)
Stop it!

WYATT:
(Grabs his brother by his hair)
Why should I?

CHRIS:
(Tearful and screaming)
Why are you doing this too me?

WYATT:
(Eyes flame into deep black)
Because…
(Eyes turn into a soulful ice blue, innocent color)
I don’t know…
(steps backward and let’s go of his brother)

BIANCA:
(Comes up from behind and puts her hand into Wyatt’s back)
Chris, quickly – attack!

(Chris watches, unable too connect any sequential thoughts and does nothing)

BIANCA:
I can’t hold him for long, do what you have too do! Hurry!

(camera slows down to 4x- speed with echoed sound. Over the shoulder shot shows Chris with eyes wide open watching Bianca and Wyatt fight)

CHRIS(voice over):
I wish I knew at the time that my memory had been plagued by Wyatt’s meddling. I didn’t know why I just sat there. It was as if I were in suspended motion, couldn’t move. Couldn’t breathe.

WYATT:
Fool.
(Steps forward out of her grasp easily, swerves a powerful punch to her gut)

BIANCA:
Chri…
(Air knocked out of her as she falls forcefully into the grass)

CHRIS:
Bianca!

WYATT:
Ciao
(Exit Wyatt)

CHRIS (voice over):
We were fighting for no cause while the underworld were preparedly combining forces. We were the innocents this time, in a cruel unfair world. in a world without color.

BIANCA:
(getting up)
What the hell is the matter with you? Do I mean nothing too you!?

CHRIS:
You don’t understand.

BIANCA:
Understand what? That I risked my life for you again and you sat there and did nothing.

CHRIS:
I killed my mother!

BIANCA:
(calming down)
No, you didn’t. Wyatt messed up your mind. He is the bad one here, can you understand that.

CHRIS:
I remember it clearly, I felt it.

BIANCA:
(serious)
Chris. You’ve been the sweetest person I know… up until lately. You aren’t the predator here, you’re the victim.

INT. GATEWAY TOO THE AFTERLIFE – TIME UNKNOWN

PIPER:
We’re all victims.

GRAMS:
Patty, talk too your daughter.

PIPER:
Daughter? I hardly knew you.

PATTY:
(a bit hurt but understanding of the situation)
Piper, there isn’t much I can tell you yet but I’ll tell you this, it will all make sense once you come with us.

PIPER:
Why is it that all Halliwell witches end up dying? Is this the ‘great’ legacy that was promised too us?

PATTY:
Piper, please!

PIPER:
(casts a menacing stare at both of them)
Don’t force me too do anything.

GRAMS:
(given up)
Come on Patty, I’ll have too explain it too them.
(looks at her grand daughter)
She will have too come in her own time.

PATTY:
(to Piper)
I love you..
(Exit Patty, exit Grams)

INT. GOLDEN GATE PARK – NIGHT

BIANCA:
So much. Please believe me when I tell you, Chris.

CHRIS:
I don’t know what too believe anymore.

BIANCA:
That’s why I’m here. If you would just listen too me.

CHRIS:
(croak in voice)
I need some time.

BIANCA:
We don’t have time.

CHRIS:
I don’t care.
(gives Bianca one last look)
Don’t come looking for me.

(Orbs out)

FADE OUT

END OF ACT II
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ACT THREE IS BEGINNING PRODUCTION ON FRIDAY EVENING (GMT+12) AND WILL PROBABLY BE DONE BY THE END OF THE WEEKEND. FURTHER NOTICE OF ANY RELEASE WILL BE POSTED SOON.

[Master of Demon Slayer]

NOw this is the evil Wyatt that should have been used in Imaginary Fiends!! If he were my brother, I knock the crap out of him!! Although, he's talller than me...with powers.

Great! I feel sorry for Chris.

[thekiwicharmed]

Let's just say that things aren't resolved at the end of the episode. There is solace for Chris regarding one thing, but not for the other. Bianca may be affected by the happenings aswell. Piper may still not be in the afterlife, holding on too both of her sons. Black Night will deffinitly still be around, the truth will come out (the blind truth anyway) and I will be writing a second episode.

Hope that's enough too keep y'all goin!

[Astral Echo]

Yeah that was fantastic, well done. More soon and love how Chris is in this episode not whippy like he was in Season 6!

Dan

[thekiwicharmed]

HI GUYS! HERE IS 7 PAGES OF ACT THREE - please comment if you like the story. Cheers guys.

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ACT III

FADE IN

INT. DEMONIC COVEN DUNGEON – DAY

(Black night is questioning Eppie in the dungeon. Tiny snippets of light begin too beam through the holes in the structure of the old dungeon)

EPPIE:
She tried too attack me, again.

BLACK NIGHT:
Is… that all?

EPPIE:
Yes, Sir.

BLACK NIGHT:
Do you how I feel like when I’m cold?

EPPIE:
Yes. I know very well sir.

BLACK NIGHT:
Do you know how I feel when I know someone is lying?

EPPIE:
I am not lying.

BLACK NIGHT:
I didn’t ask if you were lying Eppie!

EPPIE:
No sir.

BLACK NIGHT:
I’ve only fed twice, and that was yesterday.

EPPIE:
That’s not good, you’ll need energy.

BLACK NIGHT:
If you were anybody else and were this rude I would kill you without a second thought. However, your status gives you advantage.

EPPIE:
Thank you.

BLACK NIGHT:
Don’t thank me. And don’t lie too me. Next time Bianca tries anything you alert me.
(Touches Eppie’s beautiful chin with sickly looking blue fingers)
Don’t forget how much I’ve taught you.

EPPIE:
(A bit nervous)
I, I wont.

(Black Night turns around and begins too shiver)

BLACK NIGHT:
The light, it’s making me cold…
Give me my potion, quickly.

EPPIE:
(Grabs a vile on a nearby wooden table)
Here.

BLACK NIGHT:
(Sniffs it first too see if it’s clean)
Very good.
(Drinks)

(Eppie sharpens the look in her eyes)

EPPIE:
(Feeling the awkwardness of silence)
So, what now?

BLACK NIGHT:
I want you too bring him too me. His… insolence is becoming unfathomable. It’s about time we teach Wyatt a lesson in the dark arts.

EPPIE:
With all do respect, but do you think maybe… it’s a bit early for that?

BLACK NIGHT:
For the average person yes. But Wyatt is different.

EPPIE:
It’s too bad most of his powers were bound before he could murder her.
BLACK NIGHT:
Still, the fact doesn’t eliminate itself. He has the power that I need that nobody else can provide. If I have too beat it out of him then so be it.

EPPIE:
Alright. What if it doesn’t work?

BLACK NIGHT:
It always works.

(Black night closes his stale eyes and leaves Eppie wondering what too do for a few seconds)

EPPIE:
Um,

BLACK NIGHT:
You may leave.

INT. GOLDEN GATE PARK – DAWN

(Bianca has passed from understanding too annoyed. Pacing, she calls for Chris each time becoming angrier)

BIANCA:
Chris! If you do not come back too me now I am going too throw you’re damn ass book into the river!

(Waits)

BIANCA:
Okay, I’m just kidding. If you don’t show yourself then I’m coming after you!
(Throws a look at the glistening sun, just rising over the water)

(Eppie shimmers in from above the ground and tackles Bianca)

EPPIE:
Are you stupid!?

BIANCA:
What is the meaning of this?

EPPIE:
(Exclaiming with reverent body language)
You nearly got me killed!

BIANCA:
(Snarls)
What?

EPPIE:
Black—my “boss” saw us talking. It knows who you are.

BIANCA:
Your boss?

EPPIE:
You think I’m going too tell you? He will be here in an instant if he hears me say his name too you.

BIANCA:
All right, Eppie. I’m sorry. There, you happy?

EPPIE:
(Smiles)
Thank you.

BIANCA
(Getting too the point)
Wyatt performed a-

EPPIE:
Mind hex on Chris, yes I’ve been following, literally.

BIANCA:
What you know? Why didn’t you do anything too stop him?

EPPIE:
I’m
(Whispers angrily)
U n d e r C o v e r!

BIANCA:
If you are undercover then-

EPPIE:
What am I doing here?

INT. P3 – DAWN

(Chris is shown sitting in a dark P3 with his legs up on a table. A bottle of jack Daniels is in his hand)
CHRIS:
(Appears too be talking too himself)
Hahahaha, I’m clearly unable to let this go.
(Takes a shot of bourbon)
I killed her, Wyatt killed her, I killed her, he killed her, he killed me, her, I killed him cause he killed her.
(Suddenly depressed)
What’s …the point? We’re all dead anyway, she’s dead. Dead, dead, dead, dead, dead as a mother-f-

(The sound of an old-soul entering the realm of the living can be heard as Grams makes her second, not supposed too, appearance)

GRAMS:
(Standing transparently in front of Chris)
Chris my dear, get up and put that drink away.

CHRIS:
(Squeezing his eyes open with his fingers)
Grrwwams?
(Smiles)
Sure thing.
(Puts his feet on the ground and throws the bottle of alcohol through her transparent-ness where it smashes all over the floor)

GRAMS:
Chris, you have to listen too me.

CHRIS:
(Struggling too stand up)
What? Listen to…
(Points finger)
You?

GRAMS:
(Becoming worried)
Look there isn’t any time! Piper has a message for you.

CHRIS:
Pi, pi, pi, Piper!
Hehe, I know her.

(Suddenly, Grams feels a sharp pain in her insides)

(Enter Eppie and Bianca, kicking over the front door)

GRAMS:
Chris! Listen too me. Don’t try and do anything too Wyatt, those were your mothers words. I’ve chosen too honor them and so should you.

(exit Grams)

CHRIS:
(drunken)
Whhhhaat evvvvvvverrrrr.

(Bianca makes eye contact with Chris and begins sprinting towards him)

BIANCA:
Chris! What the hell do you think you’re doing?

EPPIE:
Whoa now that’s just-

BIANCA:
(menacing)
Stay out of it.

(Eppie, out of what little respect she has left for Bianca chooses too stay silent and watches)

CHRIS:
Hey guys!

BIANCA:
(slaps Chris back down into his stool)
Chris, are you completely drunk?

CHRIS:
I think so!

EPPIE:
We better get him out of here.

BIANCA:
I know what I’m doing. Help me lift him up.

CHRIS:
Hey, ladies, ladies, ladies!

EPPIE:
Where are we taking him?
BIANCA:
To our mothers.

INT. BIANCAS MOTHERS APARTMENT – MORNING.

BIANCA:
You sure this will replicate an anti-hangover?

EPPIE:
Yeah,
(Almost sharing a moment)
Don’t you remember, it was Mom’s backup when we were young.
(Smiles)

BIANCA:
Dose him.

EPPIE:
(pours a liquid substance down Chris’s throat)
That should do it. Give him five minutes.

BIANCA:
Pass me the book.

EPPIE:
(tries too reach for it, but it rejects her and slides too Bianca on it’s own)
Oh.

(Bianca gives Eppie a glare)

BIANCA:
(Opening the book)
Interesting that after all it’s been through it can still tell the difference between good and evil.

EPPIE:
Shut up
(smiles)

BIANCA:
You can go now, I’d like too spend some time with my boyfriend.

EPPIE:
(bows)
As you wish.
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Don't miss the next 7 pages of ACT III that are going too be posted tomorrow!

[Master of Demon Slayer]

Great work so far!!

[Astral Echo]

*Does a Dance* I love it!

Dan

[traci26]

This is such a cool story... I can't wait for the next update. In a lot of the action parts, you had me sitting on the edge of my seat wondering what was gonna happen next. Post again soon.