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Post by kaleyfan245 on Mar 23, 2006 11:00:23 GMT -5
Hello billie fans, i decided that i should write a spin off b/c no one else is going to. Hope you like it, this first ep is called 1.01 A new destiny awaits
*Teaser*
A darkened street comes into view, there isn't a soul in sight. There is a light but it comes from a lonely street lamp, a girl walks out of the darkness and looks around at the houses. The girl's face is hidden in the darkness, she walks toward this one house and steps up to the porch. The porch lights flicker on as she reaches the porch and stands there. She hesitates, takes a deep breath then slowly reaches out for the door bell. It's hollow ring echos thought the house behind the door. As the ring stops the door slowly creeks open, the girl looks inside and sees a dark house. She sees not a soul in there, she turns and starts to leave but a voice calls out to her. "Bille, we've been waiting for you!" It said though the darkness. Billie turns and with a deep breath walks into the house. The door closes as billie is sucked into the darkness.
HOPE YOU GUYS ENJOYED THE TEASER FOR THE SPIN-OFF, PLEASE GIVE ME FEED BACK OR YOU WON'T SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! THE REST WILL BE POSTED LATER THIS WEEKEND!
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Post by carlylenz on Mar 23, 2006 12:09:10 GMT -5
Thats awesome! Please keep posting more! I wanna see what happens next!!!
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Post by Piper Halliwell on Mar 23, 2006 20:28:58 GMT -5
Wow I wanna read more, keep posting
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Post by IheartBillie..Billie Saved Leo on Mar 23, 2006 20:40:03 GMT -5
Yes...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post more!
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Post by rebeccamatthews on Mar 25, 2006 17:33:51 GMT -5
it may sound interesting, but the show may last an eppie or two. keep it up and I may say other wise about this eppie.
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Post by kaleyfan245 on Mar 27, 2006 1:05:50 GMT -5
Thanks for the reviews everyone, here is the next part of the story! Sorry for not updating in a long time, i have been very busy
The door closes and the lights flicker on, billie squints getting use to the light and gasps. She sees a long hallway, she takes a deep breath and slowly walks down the hall. As she walks she slowly looks around and sees that the walls are bare and full of cobwebs. She continues to walks down the hall, she looks ahead and sees the wall glow then turn into a door. She finally reaches the door then stops. She asks her self if she should but tells her self she has to find "them". She slowly reaches for the door and opens it, a room is set ajar. In the middle of the room are 2 people tied in rops, on the other side a person stands with her back against billie. Billie slowly walks into the room and toward those people tied up, The person asks why she didn't come earler. He waves his hand and the people in the middle of the room dissapear, Billie startled ask what did he do with them. he replies that she doesn't need to find them just yet, Billie asks why him why not. He reples that she is not ready and she will find out that and a horrible secret when she is ready, but now she has to leave. Billie who is startled by the news asks her what horrible secret, the person doesn't answer but just turns around. Their face is hidden in the darkness,he smiles and sends a ball of lighting toward her. It hits billie and she goes flying backward, the creature looks at billie then waves. Billie reaches out her hand and tells him to wait, her voice ecos around the room. The creature smiles, waves again and dissapears. As billie is screaming out for him the screne goes blurry, it returns to see billie in her bed. She is screaming, sweat driping from her head, A voice tells her to wake up. Billie jurks then wakes up to see Christy stading beside her, Christy asks if she is ok, for a minunet billie doesn't answer then after she took a grasp of air she took a breath then tells her no.
hope you enjoyed that! Please again review if u want me to cont. Thanks
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Post by IheartBillie..Billie Saved Leo on Mar 28, 2006 11:23:44 GMT -5
That was awesome! I did not see the dream coming!
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Post by carlylenz on Mar 28, 2006 11:56:57 GMT -5
I love it! Keep posting
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Post by kaleyfan245 on Mar 29, 2006 11:25:53 GMT -5
Thanks for the updates guys, i just wanted to tell you that i will update this story either tonight or on Fri! (Very busy, Sorry!) Anyway..... just wanted to tell you. Thanks
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Post by kaleyfan245 on Apr 3, 2006 0:26:06 GMT -5
Sorry for the long post, super busy any way....thanks to who all replied to this. and here goes another part of the story
Christy hands billie a glass of water, she tells her to sip it. Billie does then lays it down and looks at her sister. Christy asks if it's the same dream that she has been having, billie confirms it but tells her this time it felt like she was there standing beside them. Christy getting worried pats her sister on the back, she tells her that it's ok and she will find out what it means. Billie knowing her sister is getting worried tells her thanks, and not to worry about it, she tells her sister good night then heads up stairs. Christy knowing something isn't right follows her sister up the stairs. We look out the window and see a person stading in the shadows watching them, he smiles then shimmers out.
In a dark cave, the 2 people from billies dream are in the middle, the servent shimmers in and calls for his master. A figure comes from the shadows, we can't see there face b/c its hidden in a black hood. THe servent bows as the master comes closer, he tells his master that it worked. She had the dream and she is acting just as his master thought she would. The master for a moment is sligent then replies that it's apart of the plan. His master tells him to continue to watch her and just when the time is right they will grab her. He smiles and shimmers out. The figure walks over toward the people and smiles, it tells them not to worry it will be over soon enough.
There you go, sorry it was so short but that's all i have. Hope you enjoy!
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Post by carlylenz on Apr 3, 2006 0:29:27 GMT -5
Love it! Cant wait for more!
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Post by kaleyfan245 on Apr 6, 2006 13:50:04 GMT -5
Thanks for the review.. Thanks!
Billie craws back into bed and falls asleep, the people from the dream cross in and out telling her the same thing to save her. Billie stands infront of them and asks them how, they don't reply but just keep repeating to save them. A lighting bolt strikes and billie jurks out of her sleep, she sits quiet for a minuet. She knows that they are going to continue to haunt her intill she saves her. Billie gets out of her bed and starts to get dressed. She gets dressed fast then hurries toward her living room. Once she gets in there she grabs a pen and writes down a spell. It only takes a few minuets then gets finished. SHe stands up and looks around, even though she is leaving her sister behind. She is doing this to protect her, she takes a deep breath and starts to say a spell. White orbs appear and enjulf her in a white light.
The orbs dissapear to show billie standing in a dark cave, she calls out for the people who were in her dream but nobody answers. She walks in closer but she stops when she hears a voice calling behind her. A hooded figure and a demon walk out of the shadows behind her. The figure tells her she should of been here sooner. Billie walks closer and tells the figure that she only came to save the people he traped. The demon beside him smiles and tells her what these people. He waves his hands and the 2 people in her dream appear infront of her, he continues to tell her that he will never stop his master b/c he is very powerfull. Billie tells him yeah lets see, she tries to tk him but he sticks out his hands. It rebounds back and sends billie flying backward, the figure walks closer toward billie. The figure tells her that she will never stop me, he is the ultament. The figure forms a fireball in his hand and gets ready to fire it. Suddonly the fireball flies backward and sets him on fire.Christy appears beside billie and helps her up. Christy asks if she is ok and billie saids yes. They join hands and look at the demon, a huge fireball forms in the air. Billie looking happy asks if he is confident now, the figure just stands there and watches them. Billie closes her eyes and consentrates. The ball shoots fire toward them, the master grinds and raises his hands. Time slows down, the figure looks amused at what he did. He moves his hands and the other demon appears infront of the ball. He tells the demon he is sorry but he doesn't need to die now when his plan is almost comming together. He plucks a hair out of his head and tosses it on the floor, after a beat it changes into him. He smiles then fires out. As he does time gets reset, the fire hits the fake figure and the other demon vanquishing them in a firery blast. Christy lets go of her hand and asks billie what she was thinking, billie replies telling her that she needed to save these innocents. Christy makes her prommise that next time she goes with her and not by her self. Billie aggres and gives her a hug. They seperate and billie turns toward the people on the ground, billie tells them it is going to be ok. Billie unraps them and looks at there face. Mom...... She saids. Christy looks at her sister shocked
Billie, Christy had already asked what happened. Her parents told her that they were captured looking for them, they tried to contact them but they couldn't. Billie asks where they were staying. They reply in a hotel 15 min from here, billie saids that is crazy and they need to stay here. Her parents look at each other then at there daughter. Billie asks what, her parents dont reply but stare at there daughters. They finally tell them that they arent' staying, since they found each other they need to get a way for a while. Find out some things. Billie asks what do they need to find and they just reply with something that happened a long time ago. Billie and her sister don't understand but her parents say they will be ok, they continue to say that billie and christy both need to go to there grandparents house. Billie asks why and her mom replies with that she has indeed been trained, but they need to learn a lot more. And that is something her parents will teach her. Her parents look at her tear eyed and hug there daughters. THey tell them that they will be home soon, they promise. They depart and walk down to there cars. They wave at there daughters then drive away in the sun set. Billie and her sister cry as there parents drive away.
A screen is watching as billie and christy watch there parents go away. The hooded figure from before turns around, his face still hooded from the hood griends.
Hope you enjoyed my 1st ep of The billie spin off! the next ep will be April 14,2006! Hope you enjoyed!
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Post by IheartBillie..Billie Saved Leo on Apr 7, 2006 14:31:08 GMT -5
SO GOOD! I loved that epi! Can't wait for the next one!
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Post by Piper Halliwell on Apr 7, 2006 17:02:38 GMT -5
This story is great!! I want to read more.
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Post by carlylenz on Apr 8, 2006 23:46:02 GMT -5
I love it! Can't wait for the next ep!
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Post by IheartBillie..Billie Saved Leo on Apr 14, 2006 14:48:21 GMT -5
I'm bumping this!
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Post by xcharmedx on Apr 21, 2006 17:17:20 GMT -5
That was such a good episode!!! cant wait for more! your such a good writer!!!
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Post by simplypoo83 on May 7, 2006 2:10:51 GMT -5
moving to fan fiction.
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