A Reversed Generation.

[RP Muse]

Teaser:

What if something you fought so hard to prevent, caught up with you? Then you ended up being the very thing you tried do hard to stop?

Chris Halliwell tried to save his brother from becoming evil but what if he can't save himself?

Okay I decided to resurrect my old fan fic. "A Charming Generation of Halliwells"

I will have to start over, because I don't see the thread here anymore, except the comments.

This fanfiction is like an alternative reality.

Chris and Wyatt are in their 20's. Melinda is also in her 20's. Piper and Leo are now dead. Much like my new RP I'm starting I will kick off the fiction with the funeral. Phoebe and Paige died a few years ago. Neither had children.

Now instead of Wyatt going bad it will be Chris that starts shifting towared evil. It will not happen overnight though.

I'm also going to add a Bianca like character to the plot. If you think I play her well enough to actually be Bianca the char I will make her Bianca. For now though she will be a completely made up character.

[RP Muse]

Chris Halliwell stared into the mirror. It was nearly time to leave, leave for his parents funeral. It wasn't supposed to be like this. He wasn't supposed to lose them not like this. Chris continued to gaze into the mirror. His face deep from sadness that quickly turned into anger. Chris took one look and punched the mirror. The mirror shattered making a loud racket.

Chris felt the pain in his hand as it started to bleed from colliding with the glass. Wyatt immediately ran up stairs the moment he heard the glass break.

“Chris? Chris! Are you okay? What happened?” Wyatt said looking at the mirror then to the look on Chris's face and then his wounded hand. “Chris what's the matter?”

“Nothing just back off Wyatt I don't need this right now!” Chris snapped at his brother before orbing out.

Wyatt stood there stunned. It wasn't like Chris to have outburst like that. He knew he was upset and needed time to breathe. Wyatt would have to talk with him later. No reason to upset his brother even more. He just hoped he would not miss the funeral.

[RP Muse]

Melinda started to rummage through her closet. Not sure what to wear. “No” She said throwing the item of clothing toward her bedroom floor. “No” Melinda said throwing more clothes, until there were clothes all over her bedroom.

“Damn it look at this mess!” Melinda said looking around at the mess she created. “Stupid!” she said as the tears started to roll down her face. Wyatt walked past the door and noticed Melinda and the mess in her room. He hated to see his siblings in so much pain. He had his own share of pain, but being the oldest he had to be strong.

“Mel?” Wyatt asked quietly hoping she would not blow up like Chris had.

“Look at this mess!!!” Melinda screamed as her tears got heavier.

Wyatt quickly walked over to his sister and wrapped her arms around her. “I know it's going to be okay, don't worry about it.”

“I know but it's not fair why did this have to happen!” Melinda said through her tears

“I don't know Mel but we are going to get through this, but we have to stay strong. Mom would have wanted it that way. Do it for her” Wyatt said trying to calm his sister down.

“I know I know, it's just hard. It just happened so quickly. Melinda said then wondered where Chris was. “Where is Chris?” Melinda asked looking up to see a worried Wyatt. “Wyatt?”

“I don't know Mel, just get ready okay. It's almost time to leave” Wyatt said not wanting to upset her even more at least not right now.



Meanwhile, Chris had orbed on top the Golden Gate Bridge. This was his usual spot when he needed solitude. Right now he needed it more than ever. Chris gazed out upon the cars passing by, underneath him as the tears started to well up in his eyes. He couldn't understand why they had to leave him. d**n them how dare they!? Chris thought,starting to stand up.

“HOW COULD YOU DO THIIS!”Chris yelled out. “WHY DID YOU ABANDON YOUR FAMILY!!?” Chris yelled out in anguish then kicked the railing on the bridge. Chris slumped down as the tears started to fall more abundant. His outburst of anger turning into general sadness. He didn't understand why he was so mad, but he did not understand why they had to die either. There was a lot Chris did not understand at the moment.


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I also would appreciate some feed back on how my story is doing so far. I know there is not a lot up yet but I would love to hear comments!

[italiannna]

Oh Holley! I am loving this fic! I love how you captured Chris's outburst... Awesome job! Can't wait to read more.

[Stormythomas]

I'll start out by saying I'm not the biggest Melinda fan. But that said, the story is appealing so far. Good read. I happen to think 'being the only ones left' is always an interesting concept. Fun to play with.

I also like the reversing roles between Chris and Wyatt. It'll be interesting to see Chris shifting toward evil. And Wyatt having the job of trying to save him (which I'm guessing he will, try that is, not necessarily succeed). Must also say, even with my slight anti-Melinda feelings, my favorite scene was that of Melinda's (maybe the brother-sister bond thing is growing on me). It's just a scene I could see happening: a small frustration leading to despire over the loss of family. And Chris's emotions are done great, as well. Being angry at those who left him (kinda like Piper was about Prue).

Suggestions: At times it all seems rushed a bit. Like everything happens too quickly. I'm not sure how else to explain it. Maybe what I mean is that it would be better to have more detail and try and spread the scene longer.

In all: great start