Kill It Before It Dies

[~*Alicia*~]

(Melinda and Paige are in the attic, gathering all the stuff they need)

Melinda
Aunt Paige, do you think it'll work?

Paige
Melinda if there's something I learned over the past years is that no matter what, magic always work.

(Prue and Penny come in with Piper and Phoebe, Piper is holding Prue's hand)

Prue
Do we have it all ready?

Melinda
Yep, all set.

Phoebe
Then we should start.

Penelope
But shoudln't we get Peyton and Henry? After all they are her siblings.

Piper
That makes sense. Paige could you go and get Henry? Phoebe, Peyton is downstairs, would you?

Paige and Phoebe
Sure.

(Paige orbs out and Phoebe hurries downstairs)

Prue
Melinda, are you sure you have all set?

Melinda
yes, I am not 5. I can tell when I have things ready.

Prue
She inherited your character, Piper.

(Paige orbs back with Henry and Phoebe comes in with Peyton)

Henry
OK, where is my sister? Is she alright?

Peyton
Henry, you need to calm down, we are all trying to reach her and get her here safe.

(Barbas shimers in)

Prue
Barbas.

Barbas
Prue Halliwell, long time no seen.

Piper
What do you want?

Barbas
Simple, your daughter.

(He then threw some ropes that tied Melinda down)

Barbas
And then they were two.

(He said and shimered out with Melinda)

Phoebe
Great, just what we needed! My demonic ex-husband, Barbas and my two nieces lost.

Prue
Don't worry, we'll find them and bring them here safe.

(Prue placed an arm around Piper, whose face was now pale)

[jate88]

well that explains the astral projecting

[Esmeralda]

Oh, Alicia! I just read this and I love it! No, I ADORE it! I'm usually that nuts on Second Gen fics, but this is really, *REALLY* good!

The only suggestion is one made by someone else...since you're doing this like a script, do a cast list at the beginning (pictures and actors not necessary, just names of the kids, their parents and their ages). That way if we lose track of which kid is which, we can always use that as a reference.

Another possibility. As long as you're doing this in color, use a different color for each family. That would also help us keep track.

But PLEASE, update soon!! I SOOOO want this completed so it can be at ALTERNATE CHARMED!!

[~*Alicia*~]

OMG! Es, I am glad you like it. Wow! Coming from you it is a great compliment that you like this. And if you want me to finish it I'll do my best to try. Thanks

[Esmeralda]

Thank you SOOO much, Alicia! I haven't had that great of an online Christmas for a number of reason, but your reaction totally made my online Christmas!

Now start working on it!

[**Teyla_Emmagan**]

Really nice story I do like it...