~*Alicia*~
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Feb 5, 2008 18:06:26 GMT -5
Scene I (Chris and his sister Melinda are in the attic looking at the Book of Shadows)Chris Mel, I just don't get you. A demon that could astral project attacked you? That's not possible.
Melinda I am telling you for the 11th time that it actually happened.
Chris OK, explain how he looked like again. Maybe I can help you locate him.(Suddenly Peyton *One of Paige's twins* orbs in)Peyton Mel, can I borrow the Book of Shadows for a while.
Melinda Sorry we are trying to find a demon.
Peyton A demon with funky breath, bad haircut and could astral project? Yeah,he attacked me on my way here.
Chris But that can't be..
Melinda See I told you,bro. someone is outhere trying to kill us and you were skeptical about it.(Penelope *Phoebe's eldest daughter* appears)Penelope A demon attacked you also?
Peyton Great now you. Who's next?
Melinda Wait!! Penny when did he attck you?
Penelope Like 5 min. ago he appeared inside my car.
Melinda And you, Peyton?
Peyton About the same time, why?
Melinda Chris, go and get Wyatt. Penny, you go and get both of your sisters. Peyton, you go and get Paxton and Henry. We need as much power as we can get. Go!! Hurry!!!(All 3 of them leave and Melinda hurries downstairs)Scene II (Melinda finds her mother in the living room)[/color] Melinda Mom are you busy?
Piper No, honey. What's wrong?
Melinda OK, I was attacked by a demon like about an hour ago, a demon who could astral project. Then Peyton and Penny were attacked by the same demon at the same time and they weren't together.
Piper So, you think the demon is after all of you?
Melinda No, I think that he is after our powers.
Piper Why do you say that, Mel?
Melinda OK, I posses your power and Aunt Prue's power, that makes teh power of 2 sisters.
Piper And Penny posseses the power of Phoebe and Peyton half of the powers of Paige, so his next target will be Paxton...because she posseses the other half of Paige's powers.OMG!!!
Melinda See what I mean? And I also think that they are more than one I think that they are 4 so each one gets a power. (Wyatt and Chris orb in)Wyatt Mel, what is wrong with you? I was in the middle of a date.
Piper Don't talk to your sister like that!! She needs you to stop some demon or demons...apologize!!
Wyatt Sorry, sis!!
Melinda Chris, thank God you are here. I need you to do some vanquishing potion.
Chris But we don't know the demons.
Melinda Then I trust that you'll make it extra strong then.
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 5, 2008 14:10:13 GMT -5
I can't believe no one has posted a comment yet. This is good. I do hope you continue to write for this one.
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~*Alicia*~
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 5, 2008 15:16:51 GMT -5
Thanks I thought it was really bad so I didn't continue the story but thanks, I'll work on the other part.
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Post by jenna on Apr 12, 2008 9:56:08 GMT -5
Yeah, i agree. I really need to check the fan fiction section more often. There's some good stuff here. ;D
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 12, 2008 13:36:31 GMT -5
Yeah, it's good. I can't wait for another story Alicia.
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 16, 2008 10:32:10 GMT -5
Scene III (Wyatt, Chris, Melinda and Piper are in the kitchen, Peyton, Paxton and Henry orb in) Henry OK, Prudence this better be good!
Peyton How many times do I have to tell you not to call her Prudence?
Melinda It's OK after all that is my first name.
Paxton OK, to much love! Why did you call us?
Chris Mel thinks that a demon that can astral project is going to attack us.
Wyatt Ha, talking about crazyness!
Piper Wyatt...
Wyatt Sorry, sis! (Penelope and her 2 sisters Patricia and Pamela appear) Penelope Here we are, Mel!
Pamela Hi, Aunt Piper!
Piper Hi, sweetie!
Peyton So what's the plan?
Melinda First we need to use someone as a bait, we need Pax.
Paxton What?
Melinda You're the only one that the demon hasn't attacked, we need you. And all you have to do is stand there and let us throw the vanquishing potion.
Paxton Why don't you let me throw the vanquishing potion?
Patricia It's not that we don't want to but, um, remember the last time?
Paxton I did great the last time, I vanquished that demon sorry butt!
Piper Well, actually, Paxton your cousins vanquished that demon before time because you let him out of the cristals.
Paxton He said he was not a demon.
Wyatt Yeah, because demons never lie, right?
Melinda Hey, where's Pam? (Suddenly they hear a boom in the living room and all run to see, a demon is standing there and has Pamela on his arms she is unconcious, when the demon turns around it is...) Piper Cole?
Cole Hello, Piper.
Wyatt Is this Cole, the Cole?
Piper You are the one trying to kill my daughter and nieces?
Cole No, I'm not the one after your daughter and nieces, remeber the Apocalypse Horsemen that you vanquished some time ago?
Piper Why should I believe you?
Cole Because I have your daughter and if you don't want to see her dead.
Piper Great try! But she is not my daughter, she is Phoebe's! (Cole puts the little girl down and shimmers) Penelope Pammy! Are you OK?
Piper She is fine, he didn't do anything more than put her to sleep.
Wyatt Was that Cole?
Melinda No, mom just felt calling him like that.
Piper Melinda...
Melinda Sorry, Wyatt.
Piper This is more complicated than I thought it would be. Penny, could you go and get your mother?
Peyton What for, Aunt Piper?
Piper If he's still the Cole I knew, it will work. Now go and get your mother. (Penelope disappears)
Piper Chris can you orb your cousins to the Magic School? Wyatt, Melinda, Peyton and Paxton I need you to stay here.
Wyatt Why me? The demon doesn't want me!
Piper But I need you to stay here in case something happens, you're in charge of protecting your cousins and sister.
Wyatt With my cousins I've got no problem but with my sister...
Piper Wyatt!
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Post by jate88 on Apr 18, 2008 23:35:51 GMT -5
this is really good. though it does get confusing keeping track of who's who's kid i'm going to go out on a limb and guess that melinda is your favorite character and that at least somewhat modeled her after yourself
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 20, 2008 12:11:55 GMT -5
(Penelope appears inside a house, a living room, she sees her mother *Phoebe* sitting there reading)
Penelope Mom! Mom!
Phoebe What's wrong, honey?
Penelope You need to come with me.
Phoebe Go, where?
Penelope Aunt Piper's house. Common, we need to go.
(She takes her mother's hand and disappears, then reappears back in the manor, Phoebe looks at Piper)
Phoebe Piper, what's wrong?
(Piper goes into the kitchen and follows her)
Piper Pheebs, I don't know how to say this, but today I saw Cole.
Phoebe Cole, Cole Cole?
Piper Yes, that Cole.
Phoebe But that can't be. He was vanquished years ago.
Piper But he was here, he tried to attack Pamela, thinking she was my daughter.
Phoebe He attacked my daughter? Oh, he is so dead!
(Leo and Coop enter the kitchen door)
Leo Who is so dead?
Piper Cole.
Coop Cole as in Phoebe's ex-demonic husband.
Piper The same one.
Leo But that can't be, Piper. Are you sure?
Piper I saw him with my eyes.
Phoebe And he tried to attack Pammy.
Coop Our daughter?
Phoebe Yes, our daughter.
(They hear a loud boom in the living room and they all ran to see, Penelope looks at everyone)
Penelope Sorry.
Phoebe How is it possible that one of my daughters got your blowing up power?
Piper Well, how is it possible that my daughter is able to levitate?
Wyatt Touche
Piper Wyatt!
Wyatt Sorry, mom.
(Looks around and don't see Melinda and Paxton)
Piper Where are Paxton and Melinda?
Wyatt They went upstairs a couple of minutes ago.
(Everybody looks around and suddenly they hear a loud boom coming up from upstairs Leo and Wyatt are the first to run up to see what happened, they go into the attic and see Melinda lying on the floor)
Leo What happened?
Melinda We came to get the Book so we could make the vanquishing potion for Cole, when we were about to go downsatirs a demon attcked us.
Wyatt Where's Paxton?
Melinda She's not here? That can't be! She was right there. OMG! The demon got her!
Wyatt Do we need to call Aunt Paige?
Leo Yes we do.
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Post by ♥ Frozen Piper ♥ on Apr 20, 2008 12:25:15 GMT -5
Alicia this is amazing!!! i cant wait until you post next one!
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Post by forevercharmed05 on Apr 21, 2008 7:47:13 GMT -5
I like it. It's really good. I can't wait for the next part
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 21, 2008 15:44:02 GMT -5
Fantastic. ;D
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 23, 2008 16:51:59 GMT -5
(A few moments later, Piper and Phoebe come running in. Followed by Coop, Penelope and Peyton)
Piper Is everything OK? Melinda are you alright?
Melinda I am fine, mom, but Paxton isn't.
Phoebe Where is she?
Wyatt For what we can see, the demon took her.
Peyton How did that happen, Mel?
Melinda I am not sure, we were leaving the attic and a demon shimmered in and next thing I knew. Wyatt and my dad came running in and Paxton was gone.
Coop Did you got a look at the demon?
Melinda Sord of. He looked a lot like the one that attacked me this morning.
Leo Well I think we need to call Paige.
Phoebe What for?
Leo I think that she deserves to know that her daughter is missing.
Piper You're right. Paige!
(Paige orbs in)
Paige Hey! What's up?
Phoebe Well, honey...um. Paxton is missing.
Paige What? That can't be.
Piper A demon attacked her and Melinda, and apparently the demon captured her.
Paige I need to sit down.
Peyton Mom, are you OK?
Paige Yes, honey.
Phoebe And that's not all.
Paige Is Henry Jr. alright?
Phoebe He is fine, he's at Magic School with Chris and the others. But, Piper saw Cole today.
Paige Cole? As in Cole?
Phoebe The same one.
Paige Could this day get any worse?
Melinda We'll find her, Aunt Paige. I promess.
Piper I'll go and make some potions.
Phoebe I'll scry for her.
Peyton I'll try to see if I can sense her.
Leo I'll go with Coop to Magic School to see how can Cole be back.
Paige Thanks. Not now!
Piper What's wrong?
Paige A charge is calling. Gotta go, keep me posted.
(Paige orbs out with a very worried look on her face. Everybody goes and do what they said they'd do, only Penelope and Melinda stay in the attic. Wyatt orbs out with Coop and Leo)
Penelope Poor Aunt Paige!
Melinda I know. Poor Paxton!
Penelope What can we do?
Melinda Don't know. But if he is the Cole I read about we're going to need as much help as we can get.
Penelope Who is going to help us? Everybody is doing something else.
Melinda Aunt Prue isn't.
Penelope Oh, no! No, Melinda! I am not going to summon her.
Melinda Penny, we need help and our moms are busy. Aunt Paige is busy, our fathers are busy. She's our chance. For what I've heard about her, she was really strong and we need help. Tons of it.
Penelope Fine. But it was all your idea, if we get in trouble.
Melinda It'll be my fault.
(They gather all the stuff they need and sit around the little round table, in the attic, Melinda gets a knife and looks at Penelope)
Melinda Ready?
Penelope I am in if you are.
(they prick their fingers with the atheme)
Penelope Prudence Halliwell blood of my blood. My aunt I summon thee.
Melinda Blood to blood I summon thee. Blood to blood return to me.
(White lights appear and Prue is there, with a big smile on her face)
Prue Hello, Melinda. Hello, Penelope.
(Both girls look at each other and then at Prue. They were truly amazed)
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Post by ♥ Frozen Piper ♥ on Apr 24, 2008 2:22:01 GMT -5
ohh it's amazing . what will happens next . can't wait until i figure out
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Post by jenna on Apr 24, 2008 13:19:09 GMT -5
Yay1 I'm so glad they thought to bring Prue back! Can't wait to see how this turns out! Keep it up! ;D
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Post by k8t09 on Apr 26, 2008 9:39:05 GMT -5
this is reali good;)
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Post by jate88 on Apr 26, 2008 10:20:52 GMT -5
hooray more updates don't forget your other story as well. they are both really good.
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 26, 2008 17:43:26 GMT -5
Gonna update Alicia. ;D
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Post by Ashiee Pie on Apr 27, 2008 0:46:22 GMT -5
This is good stuff you should write a book!!
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 29, 2008 19:44:10 GMT -5
(Prue looked at her nieces)
Prue Come, here! I won't bite.
(She said and stretched her arms out, both girls came running towards her and hugged her)
Prue Now, what do you girls need?
Melinda Well, there have been some demon attacks, Aunt Prue.
Penelope And, one of our cousins is sord of lost.
Prue You mean like captured, kidnapped, missing?
Melinda Yes, exactly. You see I was here with her and when we were about to leave the attic, a demon attacked us and next thing I knew, she was missing.
Prue That's a hard one, but I am sure we'll be able to figure it out.
(Paige orbs in, backwards to the girls and Prue)
Paige OK, where's everyone?
Prue You shouldn't worry that much, Paige. You'll get wrinkles.
(Paige turned around)
Paige What the...? Girls!
Penelope It was Mel's idea!
Melinda I thought that she might help us find Paxton, Aunt Paige.
Prue OK, Paige I get you're surprised but don't you think I deserve a hug?
(Paige looked at Prue and then went towards her)
Paige It is so great to finally meet you.
Prue The pleasure is all mine.
Melinda Now, can we all focus on Pax?
Prue Right! Well, I heard something about a portal that opens and lets vanquished demons out, but I am not sure about it.
Penelope But, if it's a portal then what if we don't get the demons back in?
Prue Then, they'll stay here, and you'll have to vanquish them all over again.
Paige But what about my daughter, Prue?
Prue Have you scryed for her?
Penelope My mom is doing that right now.
Prue Then, Melinda get everything to cast the spell for a lost witch, Paige could you stay with her. Penelope and I will go down to see how it's going.
Melinda But if my mom sees you, she'll kill me!
Prue No, she won't, trust me.
(Prue and Penelope left the attic and went downstairs, Melinda and Paige start to gather all the stuff they need. Prue and Penelope find Piper and Phoebe in the kitchen)
Piper Any chance, Pheebs?
Phoebe No, not a single hint.
Prue Well if she's in the Underworld, you won't get a hint on that map.
(Phoebe turns around and looks at Prue)
Phoebe Prue? Prue?
Piper What? OMG!
(Phoebe rans towards Prue and hugs her)
Piper But how?
Prue Ask your daughter and niece about it.
Piper Melinda! That girl doesn't stop for nothing.
Prue Just like you, sis. What have we got on Paxton?
Phoebe Nothing here.
Piper Working on the potion.
Prue Who else have we got working on it?
Piper Leo, Wyatt and Coop are at Magic School looking for a demon hints. Peyton, Paxton's twin, is trying to sense her and Paige is...
Penelope Upstairs with Melinda, getting everything ready to cast the spell for a lost witch.
Phoebe Do you think it'll work, Prue?
Prue Well, we lose nothing trying.
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Post by jate88 on Apr 29, 2008 21:45:05 GMT -5
lol the "omg it's Prue" reactions are priceless
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