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Post by mcharmed21 on Jan 3, 2005 19:07:40 GMT -5
Disclaimer: I do not own Charmed nor would I like to. Hope you guys like the fic.
I gazed at him from the sand I was lying on the ground bruised from a demonic attack. We had been on a boat arguing and the next thing it exploded. He saved my life though probably with the cost of his own. I was eight and a half months pregnant and it’s with the one I love.
I crawled to him with every bit of strength feeling pains hopefully not contractions cause I couldn’t go into labor now. It wasn’t possible.
He was bleeding from his head and blood dripped from his mouth. Tears formed in my eyes.
“No” I choked out.
I called for Leo for about ten times but no one came. I heard sirens in the distance. I pulled him up to me.
“We’re going to have a baby” I whispered. “Please hold on for us, for the baby, for me”<br> I saw EMT’s running up.
“Miss you’ll have to move” said one of the EMT’s.
I couldn’t get myself to move away. I tightened my hold but I also knew every second counted. I let him go as the EMT’s worked on him.
Another one came up.
“How far along are you?”<br> I was confused at the question staring as they worked on him. I shook my head.
“What?”<br> “How far along?”<br> “Eight and a half months” I said.
Two stretchers were pulled are way.
I didn’t want to go away from him.
They lifted him on one as he wore a neck brace and they pumped air into his lungs. They rushed him to the ambulance. They also put me on a stretcher. Luckily we were loaded on the same one and the sirens blared as we took off. I grabbed his hand tightly. Another wave of pain and I winced.
“I love you” I whispered.
“Miss” said one of the EMT’s. “Your name?”<br> My name…oh right
“Prue” I answered.
“Last name?”<br> “Turner” I said. “My name is Prue Turner”<br>
A/N: Tell me what you think. Good fic or not.
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Post by mcharmed21 on Jan 3, 2005 19:08:08 GMT -5
My One and Only
Nine months ago
Cole and Phoebe were to be married in a week. I wasn’t in for the idea of having a demon in the family. The all-powerful Halliwell line to be contaminated by the Source’s prized assassin. It was disgusting but I had to hide my disappointment after Piper had a lecture with me.
I couldn’t break their love I knew that. That didn’t mean I had to accept him. Everyone was at work when I came home that afternoon. I walked upstairs to go and get the numbers for the florist. I was in charge of the church preparations. This time no astral biker Prue. I heard moaning coming from Phoebe’s bedroom.
I roll my eyes aren’t they supposed to be at work. While I’m doing all the work they are messing around during the day.
“Jason we should get back to work” said Phoebe.
Whoa! I stopped at the door. Jason and Phoebe. Jason Dean as in her boss. Eww I felt really sick. Piper and I were wasting money for this wedding while Phoebe was having an affair. I went back downstairs and out the house. I saw Cole pull up. Uh-oh. Finally this wedding could be called off.
He got out with a smile on his face.
“Hi Prue” said Cole walking up the stairs.
“What are you so happy about?” I asked.
“In a week I’m getting married to the love of my life” answered Cole.
I sighed I couldn’t just let him walk in there like that.
“Cole” I called.
Cole stopped at the manor door.
“I have to tell you something about Phoebe” I said.
The manor door opened and Phoebe was grinning dressed and looking at me. She kissed him and he broke away and looked at me. I stood there looking like a dunce.
“What about Phoebe?” asked Cole.
“That she doesn’t make a good housekeeper” I made up. That sounded so weird. They guy has been living with us for a year. “I have to get back to work”<br> Phoebe shook her head. “Come on Cole I want us to take a drive”<br> “Phoebe I’m really tired” said Cole.
“Fine well we can go to our bedroom and I’ll message your shoulders” said Phoebe seductively. She pulled him in the door and shut it as I stared dumbfounded. What happened to Jason I wondered. I got back in my car and drove back to work.
***That night***
I didn’t tell Piper and I didn’t confront Phoebe. I wondered what should I do though. I found myself being nicer to Cole cause that demon had no clue what the hell was going on which made me feel sorry for him.
I know it isn’t right cause I’ve been cheating on and it was connected with Phoebe but that’s in the past. I brought the bowl of mash potatoes to the table. Everyone was already seated. I being the fifth wheel as the two couple smiled at eachother. I frowned lightly trying not to spoil anyone’s mood. Truth is I haven’t made love in two months. Yeah that’s how pathetic my life is. I set the bowl down no one acknowledging my presence yet till I clear my throat.
“Let’s start eating now” I announce.
I sit at the end of the table as the family leader. Phoebe is squeezing Cole’s leg tightly as he blushes she once told me he was ticklish. I had rolled my eyes but secretly thought it was funny.
“So Prue is everything cool with the florist?” asked Phoebe.
“Yeah you’re bouquet and ours will be ready by next week” said Prue. “They’ll deliver it on the rehearsal dinner”<br> “That’s all taken care of” said Piper watching as Phoebe was checking off things in her bridal book. Phoebe pushed her glasses back.
After we finished desert Cole and I were stuck with dishes. He washed as I dried.
“I’m sorry Phoebe is putting so much stress on you” said Cole.
I looked at him confused. Was he apologizing? Yeah Phoebe has been running me down with her stupid wedding plans but I wasn’t expecting this.
“I can handle it” I said quickly recovering. “Even though she won’t admit it she’s been planning this day ever since she saw a wedding”<br> “Well I hope it turns out great” said Cole.
“Me too Phoebe deserves this” I said.
Cole held up his hand. “Please don’t give me another one of your you better take damn good care of her or I will torture you before vanquishing you limb by limb”<br> I pursed my lips tightly.
“I was just going to wish you two luck” I said tightly. He is such an arrogant man.
“Oh” said Cole obviously busted. “Sorry”<br> “Whatever I know I can be a tight ass” I said. “But you know with your history…”
Suddenly I felt a spray of water and shrieked loudly. Cole was laughing while holding the water sprayer from the sink.
“You demon!” I screamed angrily.
“You witch” he retorted.
I snatched the spray away from him.
“I’m not playing this game” I said huffing. I was wet from the shoulders up. He let his guard down and I wasn’t going to let it go. I sprayed him and he cried out. I busted out laughing it was too hard to resist. He turned cupped his hands under the faucet and splashed me. We were laughing and drenching eachother. I started to slip and Cole caught me but he was laughing so hard we both fell on our butts.
We were turning red. What was so funny? I have no idea maybe it was the tension breaker. I gathered myself up and cleared my throat.
“We surely made a mess” I said.
“Yeah” said Cole helping me up. He held on to my elbows till I got my footing.
“That was unusually fun” I admitted.
“You don’t get out much” said Cole smirking.
“Don’t remind me” I sighed. I handed him a mop and got another one.
We cleaned up the water and the kitchen and headed upstairs.
“Night Prue” said Cole walking into his bedroom.
“Night Cole” I said. I was still smiling after drying up getting into my pjs and climbing into my bed.
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Post by mcharmed21 on Jan 3, 2005 19:08:27 GMT -5
Chapter 3
It was the night before the wedding would take place. Everything was light and funny. I felt at ease for once and no signs of demonic attacks. I put every charm and spell on that church and P3 with lots of apples. I was going to let my little sister have her dream wedding.
Dishes were done and Cole had just been sent off home. I stared at my bridesmaid’s dress and imagined myself in Phoebe’s dress marrying Cole. Ok that didn’t really happen. I was sulking again about my lack of soulmate. My phone rang and I picked it up.
“Prue here” I answered.
“Prue” said Cole.
“Hey Cole” I said. “What do you want?”<br> “Just want to know how Phoebe’s doing” said Cole yawning.
“Sleep already?” I asked. It was only 8.
“Yeah pretty tired and I ate a lot” said Cole.
“Phoebe’s in her room” said Prue. “Primping and trying on her dress”<br> “Good you’ll watch over her right?” asked Cole.
I took a breath. “Umm yeah sure I will”<br> “Night Prue” said Cole yawning again.
“Night Cole” I said. I hung up my phone and paced the room before going to bed. Little did I know tomorrow was going to be a very eventful day and the day that would change my life forever.
***Next Day Church***
Everything was in place and the wedding would start in five minutes. I couldn’t believe my little unstable sister was going to get married before me. I was happy for her though she deserved this. All the hell she went through literally for this. So little sis good luck.
The church was packed with Cole’s friends demonic reformed ones and co-workers. I couldn’t wait till the reception this was so nerve wracking. I don’t know how many pictures the photographer took ugh this was so annoying.
Next thing I knew Cole and his bright blue sexy eyes and his broad…**clears throat**. I’m not supposed to love him yet.
Anyway Cole walks down the aisle looking like he won the lottery. He smiles at everyone but his smile sort of falters on me. I give him a reassuring nod and when Leo and Darryl take their place everything is ready to go.
Ready to go until Dad opens the doors and looks at everyone apologetically. I also do the same as I rush up the aisle.
“Dad where’s Phoebe?” I ask.
“In the bridal chambers she said she would be out in a minute” said Victor.
“We don’t have a minute” I say as Piper, Cole, and Leo joins me.
“I’ll get her” said Cole.
“Wait you can’t see the bride” says Piper catching up to Cole.
He ignores her and uses his powers to open the door. We pile in there like the mafia and pretty soon see Phoebe looking like a deer caught in headlights.
That’s because she’s with Jason
In her wedding gown
And was caught in a lip lock
She was busted
And the Phoebe and Cole world came crashing down
A/N: How did you like please review!!!
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Post by mcharmed21 on Jan 3, 2005 19:09:13 GMT -5
My One and Only 4
A/N: I’m back with my fic. I love this fic but I think Forbidden still beats it. Once I get done with this fic and with Isolation:2 which will be done soon I will get back to Forbidden. I have the Prologue to Part 2 done so I’m ready. The reason I’m waiting is so I don’t get writer’s block with Forbidden again so I want to write as much first. Please Review and thanks to those other reviewers.
Silence and sharp gasps filled the room. Jason turned towards the door and turned red with embarrassment. Phoebe stepped away from Jason. How beautiful she looked this morning only to look so disgraceful now.
“W…Why?” asked Cole. “H…How?”<br> Everyone could hear his heart breaking in his voice. I could not look at him. For some reason I felt ashamed of myself. To this day I do not know why. I was yelling in my head for Cole to punch Jason, get angry, do something, but he seemed frozen in place.
Piper and Leo were standing to the side watching the scene not making a sound.
“Cole I was breaking it off with Jason” said Phoebe. “He kissed me!”<br> “WAIT A DAMN MINUTE!” screamed Cole. “Breaking it off you did this more than once”<br> Phoebe looked down.
“I can’t stay here” said Cole stumbling back. He ran out. I glanced at Phoebe before running after Cole. As I called his name he shimmered out.
“@#%$” I cried. Oops I was In a church I silently apologize and walk back into the room.
Phoebe was crying and Jason ran out embarassly but not before I tripped him to the ground.
“I h…have to find him” sobbed Phoebe. She was crying hysterically.
“Alright I’ll go take care of the crowd and Leo you orb Phoebe and Prue home” said Piper. “Then come back and get me”<br> That’s what happened Leo orbed us and we heard crashing upstairs where Phoebe ran holding up her white dress.
“Oh Leo what’s going to happen?” I asked.
“I don’t know we can’t interfere” he says.
Leo orbs away to retrieve Piper and I just sit on the edge on the couch.
“COLE I LOVE YOU” shouted Phoebe.
“OH RIGHT THAT’S WHY YOU MAKE OUT WITH YOUR BOSS!” screamed Cole.
Leo orbed back with Piper as Cole and Phoebe came downstairs. Cole was carrying a suitcase as Phoebe was trailing behind him. Her mascara running down her face.
“Cole wait!” cried Phoebe.
Cole turned around slowly.
“I’m sorry” said Phoebe. “I only slept with him once”<br> “It was once too many” said Cole shaking his head. I saw tears falling from his eyes. Did the demon just cry?
“So you’re just going to leave me” said Phoebe. “Not give me a chance when I gave you a whole bunch. I thought our love could overcome anything”<br> “Except your selfish sexual desires” said Cole. “Was I not good enough for you? Was it the fact that I’m tainted or cause there’s a monster in me?”<br> “No” sobbed Phoebe.
I felt myself tearing up and I saw Piper crying trying to hold back her tears. Cole turned away to leave and Phoebe grabbed his arm. He flinched his arm away and glared at her coldly that would make anyone cower.
“Don’t you ever touch me again” said Cole angrily before going out the manor and slamming the door.
Phoebe fell to the floor in tears and Piper comforted her. I turned to Leo.
“I’m going to find him” I volunteered. “I might be back late”<br> “You?”<br> “Yes me” I said rolling my eyes. “Just take care of Phoebe”<br> I went to my room and changed then I scryed for Cole with the Balthazar skin. I didn’t trust him that much.
***30 minutes later***
I was in front of the hotel door. It was supposed to be Phoebe and Cole’s honeymoon suite. I knocked on the door.
“Cole” I called I heard the tv and used my powers to open the door.
I walked in and shut the door. Further in Cole was in the bedroom on the bed holding a champagne bottle and laying on the bed. He glanced at me.
“Come to vanquish me?”<br> “No” I said. “You had a right to be angry”<br> I saw a cart full of food, lobsters, strawberry shortcake, bowl of cherries, fries, and clams, plus another bottle of champagne. I licked my lips I was so hungry.
“Help yourself” he muttered. “I lost my appetite”<br> “Thanks” I said grabbing a piece of cake and put some fries on the side. Then I sat on the bed. He was watching a game show.
“Why would she do this to me?” asked Cole.
I looked at him. “I don’t know but everything will work out”<br> He handed me the bottle and I took a swig and handed it back. He cleaned out the bar brought the small bottles of whisky and vodka. Seven hours later that turned out to be a mistake.
I was drunk and so was Cole and the other Cole next to him. I hiccuped. We had talked, laughed, and cried the last seven hours about our life and mines didn’t seem so bad compared to his.
One thing he couldn’t swim either, he almost drowned when he was 7 and his mother beat him for sneaking out of the underworld and almost getting himself killed.
I don’t think he wanted me to know that. I told him things about me and Andy that I didn’t want him to know. We laid our weaknesses out on the table made ourselves vulnerable to eachother. Damn it why was he so charming?
He smiled at me and turned up the radio.
“Want d…dance wit me” sputtered Cole.
“K” I said laughing. We got up somehow and I leaned into his warm body. We were just rocking back in forth feet staying in place.
“Prue” said Cole.
“Hmm” I said opening my eyes and looking at him.
“Thank you” he whispered.
“No **hiccup** problem” I said.
He moved his leg and we fell to the floor laughing for no apparent reason. He smiled.
“This is the best time I had in awhile” he said closing his eyes.
I grinned and climbed on top of him.
“Hey it’s one in the morning” I said. “Hope no one stayed up for me”<br> I leaned down towards Cole’s face. He was reeking with alcohol but so was i. I ran my hand down his chest and kissed his face down to his neck. He opened his eyes and moaned as he ran his hand through my hair. He kissed my face and brought my lips to his.
That night changed our lives forever
Phoebe was out
I was in
In the beginning regrettably
A/N: Please review and tell me what you think. Prue and Cole?lol.
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Post by mcharmed21 on Jan 3, 2005 19:09:38 GMT -5
I guess it doesn't make you feel guilty to like this fic like Forbidden did charmedone89, lol. I had alot of Piper/Leo fans feeling guilty and telling me Piper/Leo belonged together but also loved Forbidden,lol. Please Review...
My One and Only 6
A week later
I had been avoiding Cole at all costs and Phoebe for that matter. I pretended to have the flu and tried to get out of the manor anytime possible. You don’t know how close I was to getting an abortion. I actually was sitting on the chair waiting and thinking.
How could I kill a life growing inside of me. I realized no matter who the father was that I couldn’t kill an innocent. I vowed to protect the innocent. My baby shouldn’t have to die because of one night.
So I’m done developing photos and put them in my portfolio. I wanted no needed to tell someone. But who?
Piper
She would just tell me to tell Phoebe who would kill me.
Phoebe
Uh no
Leo
He would say the same thing as Piper not to mention bite my head off
Then there’s Cole Turner the father of my **cringe** child. I had to tell him. It was the right thing to do for something so wrong. I grabbed my purse and headed to my car. I thought all I would say to him as I drove there.
How would this turn out? Visitation rights. Did I want him in the delivery room? Well I guess he has to be. I pulled in front of his new penthouse. It was closer to the firm. I got out butterflies in my tummy.
I don’t even remember going up to the elevator. I was now knocking on his door hoping he wasn’t home.
One
Two
Three knocks
He wasn’t home I turned to hurriedly walk away and I felt someone grab my arm lightly.
“Hey Prue” said Cole surprised. “Long time no see”<br> “It’s only been a week” I said a bit harshly. “May I come in?”<br> He raised an eyebrow and wiped his hands on the dishtowel he held. Cole stepped aside and I walked in. It was nice and luxurious looking.
“Can I have some water?” I ask sitting down on the couch.
“Sure” said Cole walking into the kitchen.
I raised a nervous hand to my head. I’m gradually gaining a headache. He comes back with the water and hands it to me. I drink half of the glass in nervous swallows as he watches me with those blue eyes of his. He sorta reminds me of Andy.
I placed the glass on a coaster and look him in the eye.
“So Prue any reason for this stop by?” asked Cole.
I couldn’t beat around the bush. Keeping this from so many people was causing me stress and once my pregnancy gets out to The Underworld I’ll have even more stress.
“Cole you remember that night that we would love to forget but can’t” I said.
“I already forgot” said Cole casually.
Whoa my ego was bruised. I know I gave him the time of his life. Anyway…<br> “Well so did I” I said in a third grade sort of tone.
He chuckles and I want to punch that smirk of his away. He’s the reason I’m no we’re in this mess.
“Unfortunately we can’t” said Prue. “I do not have the flu. My blood test revealed something different”<br> He cleared his throat and sat on the other couch arm.
“Cole I’m freaking pregnant” I said.
“Excuse me!” cried Cole.
I stood up. “Yeah that’s the consequence”<br> “You’re pregnant?” asked Cole.
“Yeah”
“With my child”<br> “Yeah, pregnant, your child”<br> “You’re pregnant”<br> “Cole I think we already established that fact”<br> “So you’re pregnant from that night with my child” he said to himself.
“Yeah it comes as a shock to me too” I said leaning my head on my hand.
“What will Phoebe think?” asked Cole.
“I think we have bigger problems to be worried about than Phoebe, ok” I said. “Like The Elders, and The Source. What about the fact that this child is half demon”<br> “Well if you have such problems with half breeds than you should have never set your eyes on me” said Cole obviously hurt. He got up and walked towards the french doors overlooking the bay.
I sighed. “I didn’t mean it like that. Our child would be half human, quarter witch, quarter demon”<br> “I’m sorry Prue” said Cole.
Sorry?…Was he going to abandon me with this kid? Oh no mister I expect child support on this one.
“I’m sorry for not having better judgement that night” said Cole.
Oh.
I silently gasped.
“You were hurt” said Prue. “And what’s done is done so let’s not dwell on the past”<br> “We need to tell your sisters and Leo so they can protect you” said Cole turning to face me.
“Wait, so soon!” I cried.
“Yeah so soon” said Cole. “We cannot keep this a secret any longer and I can’t keep this from Phoebe”<br> After all the heartbreak he went through with Phoebe her feelings always comes first with him.
“I’ll come over tonight to the manor” said Cole. “At around seven and we’ll tell them there”<br> I sighed. “Fine”<br> I left the penthouse feeling worse than ever.
Tonight was going to be a disaster.
A/N: Please Review. Tell me what you think!
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Post by mcharmed21 on Jan 3, 2005 19:10:16 GMT -5
A/N: Well here it is the big dinner moment. Hope you guys like it. Look out for the Phoebe bomb...
My One and Only 7
Dinner was very nerve wracking for me. There was a lot of conversation going. Phoebe was talking about her job and Piper about the club.
“Prue are you alright?” asked Piper as the clock struck 7.
“Yeah” I said nervously. “Why wouldn’t I be?”<br> Piper started clearing off the table when the doorbell rang.
“I’ll get it!” cried Phoebe.
“Phoebe” I called. I stood up and played with my hands.
“I’m not here for you, Phoebe” said Cole as he walked into the living room.
“Cole what are you doing here?” asked Leo sighing.
Phoebe glared at him and I slightly glared at her. Piper crossed her arms looking weary.
“Cole what is this about?” asked Piper a little rudely. I guess we all had to be behind Phoebe. Yeah Phoebe was the one who cheated on Cole but Cole was just a demon and wasn't family. I expected Piper or even Leo to be a little more sympathetic. My excuse was that I had experienced being cheated on.
Cole looked at Prue. “You want to tell them or should I?”<br> He looked a bit annoyed which was starting to anger me. Like this was all my fault.
“I will” I snapped. Cole shrugged and I sighed.
“Well I’m pregnant” I said smiling lightly.
“Pregnant!” cried Piper smiling widely. “But I didn’t know you were seeing anyone. Oh Prue what are you going to do?”<br> “Who’s the father and why is Cole here?” asked Phoebe sharply.
Leo stood there half-stunned. “Prue this is really huge”<br> I nodded.
“Well who’s the father?” asked Phoebe. “Or was this a one night stand”<br> “Yeah” I said. “It was only a one night thing”<br> Cole was impatiently waiting for me.
“Prue do you know who the father is or…”
“I’m the father, okay” said Cole coolly.
Gasps went around the room and so did a loud and sharp smack. I turned and saw Phoebe putting her hand down. Cole was holding his cheek.
“It’s no totally his fault” I said.
“When, how, WHY!” screamed Phoebe angrily.
“The night after the wedding” I said lowly.
“A…after the wedding!” cried Piper. She glared at Cole.
“Look we had too much to drink ok” I said tripping over my words. “We can’t take it back”<br> “Prue you can’t have this child” said Phoebe. “You have to get an abortion”<br> “An abortion!” cried Cole angrily. “No such thing we be done. You got that Phoebe”<br> He stepped up beside me.
“No I don’t know who the hell you think you are but you will not tell Prue and me to kill our child” he said heatedly. “You cheated on me, you gave up on us”<br> “So what you go and bang my sister” said Phoebe hysterically.
“Now what a damn minute!” I cried.
“EVERYONE SHUT UP!” cried Piper.
We turned to look at her.
“Thank you” said Piper. She looked at Leo. “Will The Elders have something to say cause if they were angry about us getting married”<br> Leo nodded. “Maybe, this child will be very powerful indeed. I wish you two wouldn’t have done this”<br> “Thanks Leo we didn’t really schedule it” said Cole sarcastically. “We’ll manage somehow”<br> I nodded. “I mean we have to take this pregnancy through, got it Phoebe”<br> She glared at me nastily.
“Cole I think you can leave now” said Phoebe. “What me and Prue have to discuss is a family manner”<br> He looked hurt and simply walked to the door hurriedly and slammed it.
“What is your problem Phoebe?” I asked. “Why are you treating him like you haven’t loved him and almost married him for a year and a half”<br> “He gave up on me Prue” said Phoebe hurt her eyes filling with tears. “Ok yes I’m being a @#%$ and I was a @#%$ for doing that to him but I begged, begged him for forgiveness like he always did to me. He left me the first mistake I did. Now tell me if he loved me”<br> I sighed and reached out to touch her. She flinched and stepped back.
“Don’t touch me” she said shaking her head. “You betrayed me too. I still love him I wanted to start over again. Do you love him Prue? No you don’t”<br> She ran upstairs in tears. I felt more stressed and more like the situation just exploded in my face. Piper hugged me as Leo finished clearing off the table quietly. Why wasn’t he offering me advice, wasn’t he my whitelighter? But what he said shook me up a bit. What would the Elders think or say, what about the Underworld?
I went upstairs and thanked Piper. Phoebe was still crying in her room. I was the source of those tears, but I knew she wasn’t the only one heartbroken tonight…<br>
A/N: Please review! How was this chapter? Phoebe is sooo mean
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Post by quino on Nov 27, 2005 14:25:11 GMT -5
Well, I loved your work so far! From all the fan fictions I've read this is by far the best(but I haven't much "experience" yet). I admit I was a little sceptical at the beginning (Prue Turner!) but the more I read the more I like it! Maybe you were right and it's easy to accept cause Phoebe with Cole are not like Piper with Leo. The way she just gave up on them really made me dislike Phoebe ever since, when everything Cole did was out of love for her (how did he end up with the Source inside of him in the first place? Saving her!)! I really like the respect you have for the characters, Piper, Cole, Leo, they all remind me of how they were in the early seasons, exept Phoebe, thats exactly how she has ended up, a @#%$ (sorry but its true, let alone that she is increadibly selfish with the whole child thing, off-topic though). In a nutshell, I loved it!
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Post by prue on Nov 28, 2005 20:26:33 GMT -5
This is a very interesting plot! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Post by myast05170210 on Jan 29, 2006 21:13:58 GMT -5
i really loved it i can't wait to find out what happens next. please don't stop writing you are great..................
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Post by barmyoncharmed on Mar 26, 2006 13:22:40 GMT -5
I want more please i wanna find out how come they ended up hurt
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Post by jeytharani on Mar 30, 2006 2:52:24 GMT -5
hey...where's the continuation....I want more It is so good
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Post by charmedgoddess on Jun 27, 2006 13:59:41 GMT -5
I love the overall plot of the story : ) after all in real life Shannen and Julian dated
but the fact is, Phoebe would never, and I mean never cheat on anyone!! But hey this is your fan-fic. Phoebe and Cole were doomed from the beginning. It wasn't anyone's fault it just wasn't mean to be.
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Post by p3freak on Apr 14, 2008 12:13:41 GMT -5
all i can say is LOVED IT
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Post by ~*Charmed Loyal *~ on Apr 17, 2008 10:33:46 GMT -5
Good story so far. Hope to see an update posted soon.
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Post by prueturner61 on Sept 11, 2012 18:03:30 GMT -5
Magnificent
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