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Post by pipercharmedphreak on Oct 27, 2007 16:45:45 GMT -5
I decided to write this in the form of an actual episode/script. let me know what you think. ENJOY!
Season 3 Before Piper and Leo are married Conservatory Piper: Don't you walk away from me Leo! Leo orbs out Piper: Coward! Piper lets out a heavy sigh and storms to the kitchen Kitchen Prue: Good Morning sunshine! (note the sarcasm in her voice) Piper rolls her eyes at her but can't help to smile. Phoebe enters kitchen. Phoebe: Wow, Piper! What was all that this morning? Piper: What? Oh Leo and I... we just had a little disagreement. Prue: Little?! Phoebe: Piper, the whole neighborhood could hear you two fighting. Piper: Geez Pheebes, quit exaggerating! It was nothing... I hope. Opening Credits Dining Room table is candle lit, lights are down low, a delicious looking meal is set on the table. Piper: Leo! no response Piper: Leo! I am sorry I yelled at you! Please come down here! Leo... She sits at the table and rests her head in her hands. An orbing sound is heard, Piper looks up hoping it would be Leo, only to be disappointed and startled Elder: I know I am not who you were expecting. Piper: Damn, right. Where's Leo? Elder: We heard you're little spat this morning. We have decided to assign the Charmed One's a new whitelighter. Leo is not coming back. Piper: What?! You can't just take away the love a girl' s llife, give him back, telling her she can marry him, then take him away again! It's not fair! Elder: Piper, you know as well as I, that this isn't about fair, this is about the greater good. Piper: I advise you to leave, NOW! Elder orbs out Piper blows out the candles Commercial Break Piper's bedroom that same night KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK! Prue: Piper, honey? Piper sits up from lying on her bed, she has obviously been crying Piper: Come in. Phoebe: Hey, we were worried. An uneaten dinner was sitting on the table. Where's Leo? Are you okay? Piper: (sniffling) He's not coming Prue and Phoebe sit on the bed, sandwiching Piper. Prue engulfs Piper in a hug Prue: He'll show up. He can't be mad at you for- Piper: (cutting Prue off) -No Prue. He's not! They took him away! Phoebe: What?! Why?! Prue: Phoebe, slow down! Piper why would they do this? Piper: How should I know? She only told me she heard us fighting this morning and we are getting a new whitelighter. Phoebe/Prue: She? Piper: The Elder Prue: Wait, you talked to an Elder without us? (sounding a bit jealous) Phoebe: Prue... Piper: I didn't know I needed your permission to find out what happened to my fiancee! Piper stands up. It is clear she is getting angry. Prue: Sorry, It's just that you've had more contact with them than both Pheebs and I combined. I am sorry Piper sits back down Piper: I just don't know why they would do this to me. Attic, the next morning. The girls are trying to find a solution to this problem Piper is sitting on the couch, Prue at the BOS, and Phoebe by the potions table calling up "there" Phoebe: Listen here, I want some anwers! Elder orbs in Phoebe: It is about time! Elder: Phoebe, why are you calling? Prue: Oh don't act so naaive. You know exactly why we called you. Elder: Oh, about Leo? Prue: Duh! Phoebe: Why would you do something so hurtful? We've done plenty of good risking our wiccan butts every week for you. Elder: Piper and Leo getting married will harm the grand design. Prue: How? Two forces of purely, good magic joining in marriage. What evil is in that? Elder: I am sorry girls, I am forbidden to tell you. Phoebe: What?! That is a load of bull- Piper interrupts Piper:- What if I proved to you, you are wrong? Elder: How?
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Oct 28, 2007 20:07:29 GMT -5
I like it. Please continue!
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Post by pipercharmedphreak on Nov 11, 2007 22:15:22 GMT -5
sorry its so short-been pretty busy
Out of the darkness a voice is heard Piper: What the hell?! A man's voice: I got it!! The Room is lit to reveal a group of people including the girls are in a poorly lit, dank underground room. Prue: Uh! You should have kept the lights out! Phoebe: No kidding! Piper: Focus! We are trying to prove that Leo and I should get married, not that the future looks horrible! Man (name unknown): Hey! Where did you come from?! Piper: Magic! Prue: Uh...Uh... excuse us a minute..please... (They turn around) Piper what are you doing? Piper: Well, he asked. Phoebe: This is NOT going to be helping your cause with the elders ANY! Man: Excuse me. Did you say magic? Piper: As a matter of fact I did. Why? Phoebe: (whispering) I hope you know what you are doing!
The girls are sitting around a table talking to Connor (Man). Connor: Magic has been gone from our lives for... oh... 5 years give or take a year. Piper: Wait, what is today's date? Connor: February 21, 2006, why?! Piper: (says to herself) Leo... Um go on. Connor: Today five years ago a Charmed One married her whitelighter. Prue: Charmed One? Whitelighter? (looks at Piper) Connor: Yes, so you are from the past. Right?! Phoebe: Yeah, in fact WE ARE the Charmed Ones. Connor: You, are the Charmed Ones? Prue: I think we have established that fact. But what does Piper and Leo's marriage have to do with the extinction of magic?
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Post by pipercharmedphreak on Nov 13, 2007 16:22:00 GMT -5
Connor: Well, I wouldn't know for sure. The only way to tell is to travel there. Phoebe: If magic is gone, how are we supposed to get there? Connor: Well, there is one possibility.
The manor is shown. Inside Cole and numerous "would be" demons have swarmed the house. Cole: I call hereby declare this session in order. Demon 1: Why have you summoned us here? Cole: I have discovered a source of magic. There is much mumbling and a slight uproar Cole: SILENCE! Demon 2: Who gave you the power to rule over us? The Source? (he snorts clearly sounding sarcastic) A womans voice speaks out from the shadows. The Oracle: The Souce's demise has brought much dissaray to the underworld. The loss of magic has affected us in more ways than you know. Demon 1: What do you know? You are only an oracle! Demon 3: We know plenty about what the loss of magic has done to us. Oracle: But do you know that Belathazor has succeeded. Uproar
The girls are shown outside the manor. It is late at night and they are wearing all black. Phoebe: (whispering) I can't believe that we are actually going to do this. Prue: I can't believe demons have actually succeeded in taking over the manor in the first place. Phoebe peeks in through the window Phoebe: Oh my god! Prue: What?! Phoebe: Cole. Piper: Pheebs now isn't really the time to be worrying about future Cole. Phoebe: No, Piper I failed. Cole is in there. It looks like he is the ringleader or something. Prue: Oh, sweetie. We are going to fix this. Piper: We better!
Commercial Break The manor door opens Phoebe: COLE!!! Cole: Phoebe? Is that you? Phoebe: No. Cole I am just Phoebe's secret twin that she never knew she had! Yes, it's Phoebe! Cole: What are you doing here? Phoebe: I'm home! Cole: You don't live here anymore and you know it! Phoebe: I do?... I do! Cole: Leave. Phoebe: What happened to us Cole? We used to be so in love! Cole: It's not my fault your sisters wedding unleashed an evil power. Phoebe: Huh? Oh yeah! About that! Word is circling that you have found some trace of magic left in the manor. Is it true? Cole: Why do you care? Phoebe: My sisters and I need it! Cole: Your sisters? Since when are you on speaking terms with them? Phoebe: You know what Cole... please? For me. Cole: Wait outside. I'll let you know when the demons are gone. Phoebe: Cole... Thank You! Commercial Break
Cole: The coast is clear Phoebe: Cole you don't know how much this means to Piper. Cole: I'm not doing this for Piper. Prue: Alright! Lets get this show on the road! The sooner we can get this over with the sooner I can make sure this never happens! Piper: So, where is it? Cole: The basement. Phoebe: The Nexus?! Cole: You got it!
Basement Prue: Are you sure about this? Cole: Positive. All you have to do is read this spell (handing Phoebe a piece pf paper) then your spell right after it. Phoebe: (to Cole) I don't know what happens to us in the future but I want you to know I won't let it turn out like this. I want us to be together! Thank You for everything you are doing for us... will do... whatever! The point is I love you! The spells are said and small white orbs pull the girl into the nexus. TO BE CONTINUED...
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Post by oldwitch on Nov 17, 2007 11:34:21 GMT -5
You have me hooked! Please add more!
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Post by pipercharmedphreak on Dec 12, 2007 22:34:36 GMT -5
more coming soon i promise! i have been REALLY busy! hopefully i will get something up this weekend!
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Post by pipercharmedphreak on Dec 28, 2007 18:04:40 GMT -5
Basement Piper's wedding day Prue: Is everyone ok? Piper: Shh! I hear someone coming! Leo and Victor walk down the stairs to change into their tuxes. Piper smiles, happy to see Leo again. Quietly, they sneak upstairs. Piper: We have to be more careful! Prue: Well, we need to find a place where we don't have to worry about being quiet and sneaking around every second. Phoebe: I've got a grand idea. Why don't we just tell us what is going on. Piper and Prue just look at her. Phoebe: Or we could find a place to stay. Piper: One thing is for sure, we have to stay in the manor. I know I want a demon-free wedding so the best shot we've got is the attic.
Attic Prue: Ok so here's the plan. We need to write a spell to stop time, being as Piper won't be able to freeze us Phoebe: I will get right on it. Piper: What if the Elders are right? Prue: Piper, they're not. How many times have we proved them wrong before? This is just another thing to add on the list. Piper smiles but quickly fades when she hears someone coming up the stairs. Piper: Great! Not even my wedding day is demon-free! Phoebe: Shut-Up and hide! They hide behind the couch hoping not to be seen. Future Phoebe: Prue, you've got to get some rest. Future Prue: We've been demon-hunting too long when Pipersays we have a certain look going upstairs to the Book. Piper chuckles. Prue shoots her a "SHHH" look Future Phoebe: I will look in the book, you rest. Don't sleep, only rest! Future Prue: I will try, but no guarantees I will feel better! Future Prue walks out of the room. Attention is turned onto Future Phoebe who is looking through the book. Piper whispers to Prue and Phoebe: We don't have time for this! Phoebe: I know! Your wedding is in an hour and a half. Prue: We better do something! Commercial Break
The Wedding Ceremony begins. Everyone is in their places. The girls are sitting on the steps overwhelmed by the beauty of the ceremony. Piper and Leo begin to recite their vows. The girls begin to whisper their spell: Master of Secrecy, show yourself to us now, Master of Hatred appear to us now. The wedding ceremony continues but a dark portal appears. White and blue orbs are pulled into the vortex. Piper whispers a spell to freeze time. *note Piper's powers would not work on freezing her future self, sisters, grams, and mom, only Leo, Cole, and Victor. Thus, a spell is used* The Girls stand up. Phoebe: Grab the Book! Prue: Got it! Piper: Found the spell? Prue: Nope but I am looking! Piper: Look faster! I don't know how long the spell will last! Phoebe: Unfreeze the portal! Piper: What?! Prue: I think she's onto something! Piper unfreezes the vortex. Phoebe: We're going in! Piper: What?! No....! Phoebe jumps through the portal followed by Prue. Piper rolls her eyes and reluctantly enters. Inside the portal. It becomes difficult to decifer objects until the orbs touch them. This reveals that the portal has led the to another plane, resembling their world. Piper: You better have a damn good plan! Prue: What now? Phoebe: Well, I was kinda just making this up as I go... Piper: Phoebe!! Prue: Okay, so let's use our brains. We need to get vanquish this portal giving us our powers back. Piper: But, if we vanquish the portal WE are vanquished too, we are inside the portal. Phoebe: (Premonition: Demon shimmers in. Throws fireball. Girls duck. Demon grabs Phoebe and Prue, shimmers out. Piper says spell and is removed from portal.) I think I just found a way. Piper you need to write a spell. Piper: No, Phoebe writing spells is your thing. Spells are your territory and potions are mine! Phoebe: You have to try before-(demon shimmers in)-he shows up!! Demon throws fireball. The girls duck. Piper tried to freeze the demon but nothing happens. Demon grabs Prue and Phoebe then shimmers out. Commercial Break
Piper: Damn it!!! Okay Piper focus. (She recites a spell and appears outside of the portal. Piper's wedding is still frozen The portal implodes releasing the white orbs back into their proper place. Phoebe and Prue are returned) Phoebe: What happened?! Piper: I think I just saved my weddding! (She smiles) The girls are transported back to their own time and the wedding commences. Time Lapse: Conservatory. That evening. Piper is pacing back and forth. Piper: Please! I did what you asked. I got rid of the portal. Get down here! I can't bear the thought of losing Leo this close to our wedding date. Elder orbs in Elder: Piper. Piper: Wh-Where's Leo? Elder: I told you the fight you two had this yesterday morning only proved that you two were not meant to be together. Piper: But I got rid of the portal! Elder: No Piper, you only got rid of the evil in that time, not proving to me you are meant for each other. Piper: I have an idea. Phoebe! Phoebe:(Enters room from downstairs.) Oh hey! (Seeing the Elder) Where's Leo? Listen, I am not saving another innocent until you return him! We saved magic, it is only fair you bring him back. Piper: (Taking a deep breath) Phoebe I need you to think back for me, of all the times Leo and I shared a moment together that proves our love. Phoebe: Okay. (She closes her eyes and is pulled into a premonition) Piper: Projuect your premonition to the Elder, leeting her see what you see. The Elder and Phoebe share a premonition: clips from episodes of "Love Hurts", "Awakened", "Animal Pragamtism" Elder: (sighs) Very well. I will send him back (Orbs out) Piper: Thank you so much (gives her a hug) You don't know what that meant to me. Phoebe: No problem sweetie. You and Leo deserve each other and I can't imagine you without him. (Exits Room) Orbing. Piper turns around to see Leo standing there. Piper: Leo! (Gives him a HUGE hug). I am so sorry about yesterday-I- Leo:-Piper. It's okay. It doesn't matter. I love you. Piper: I love you too! (She hugs him. Over Leo's shoulder the camera zooms into Piper's face. Her eyes glow white.) THE END!
hope everyone enjoyed. i am making a episode following this soo.."STAY TUNED"
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 11, 2008 1:07:34 GMT -5
Awww, this is such a wonderful story.
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Post by leofanatic612 on Aug 20, 2008 4:33:33 GMT -5
that was great!! i loved it!! ;D
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Post by Holly Combs on Aug 23, 2008 17:13:47 GMT -5
that was great!! i loved!! ;D i love it!!!
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