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Post by Prue's Empath on Mar 30, 2008 21:36:15 GMT -5
A Story I made all by myself! Hope all of you enjoy! ................................................................................Part 1 Piper always felt lonely on the weekends...specially now that Leo was...Once Again...taken away from her and their two beautiful boys,Wyatt and Chris Halliwell.Piper usually does the same thing every weekend: Check diapers when the boys wake up,feed the boys,put them down for nap,feed them again and change diapers,and then go to sleep for the whole night.
Although Piper was getting very used to and quite happy with this routine she began to feel more and more selfless.
Phoebe and Paige came into the Halliwell manor laughing as they entered the kitchen.The two sisters found their couplet of nephews in their highchairs eating their food.
"Uh...Piper...you want us to watch the boys tonight?"Phoebe asked as she wiped off some dribble ,rolling down Wyatt's chin.Although,Phoebe already knew the answer. she would never stop asking ,like every weekend.
Paige looked at her lonely sister and walked over to her.Piper was beginning to clean up the boys mess off of the floor,as Paige stuck her hands out."No...We will watch the boys tonight...you need to rest and go out tonight!"Paige said refusing to let Piper clean up anything else.
Piper looked at Paige and she stood up,"Paige,I can't...I have responsibility's...the boys need me!"Piper said trying to refuse Paige and Phoebe's offer ,like so many weekends before.
Paige shook her head"No...me and Phoebe will take care of the boys tonight...you need to go out and have some fun!"Paige said as she picked up Wyatt and checked his diaper."Wow!"Paige said taking him over to the changing table.
"Come on, Piper...Live a little...while you still can!"Phoebe said as she helped Chris eat.
Piper looked at her sisters,then she looked at her boys,"I guess one night won't hurt!"Piper said as she walked over to her boys and kissed each softly on their foreheads.She walked over and gave Phoebe and hug"Thank you,"Piper said as she gave Paige a hug as well,"both of you...I need this night out so much!"Piper said as she walked to the kitchen doorway ,to enter the dining room.She stopped and turned around.She stared at the boys and blew kisses"Mommy will be home in a few hours...Auntie Phoebe and Auntie Paige will take care of you...love you both!"She said as tears came to her eyes.
Piper finally tore herself away from the manor and got into her Jeep........................................................................................................... Reviews I would like very much! So please read and comment because I have wanted to write this story for Piper and Leo for so long!
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Post by ~.:Alysha:.~ on Mar 30, 2008 22:49:55 GMT -5
Good so far..cant wait to to read your next update.
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Prue's Empath
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Post by Prue's Empath on Mar 30, 2008 23:18:07 GMT -5
Thanks sweetie! I'm gonna update right now! ........................................................................
Piper arrived at P3 and turned off her Jeep's engine.She stepped onto the cold cement and closed her Jeep door.Piper took her purse ,walking away as she slung it over her arm.She walked into P3 and turned on the lights.Everything looked so abandoned.Piper frowned as she looked at the club."How could I let this happen?"Piper asked herself ,as she sat down at the bottom step of P3.
"Piper?"A Man's voice cut the silence.Piper looked to see the man that used to keep stock up."What are you doing here...it's 12:00 A.M. and P3 is dead?"He questioned as he came to sit beside her.Piper looked at him oddly.
"What are you doing here?"She asked ,as he was there in the same position as herself.
"I am taking away the last of the stock...the Rave wants it!"He said as he looked at her.He scratched his head and frowned."Whats wrong?"He said knowing from the look on her face something was going on.
"Oh nothing...I just feel so lonely...no man...only my boys and my sisters!"Piper said as she seen him frowning.
"Well you can't keep your head down...you'll find love again!"He said standing up and walking out of the room.
Piper looked up wide eyed."You'll find love again..."She said to herself.Piper remembered what the Elders said to her the day they took Leo away.
[scene] Elder looks at Piper,"Don't worry...You'll find Love Again!" Piper was crying tears streaming as Leo was crying as well. Piper dropped to her knees as Leo and the elders orbed away. [scene]
Piper looked down at the ground.She then stood.She turned and ran out to her Jeep,and got in.She quickly strapped on her seat belt and fled to the golden gate bridge.
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Prue's Empath
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 1, 2008 18:25:34 GMT -5
No reviews,Oh well here's an update! please review! ! .......................................................................................... Piper opened the door to her Jeep and got out.Leaving the door open,She looked up the bridges ladder.She placed one hand on it and closed her eyes."Come on Piper,You can do this!"She said as she opened her eyes and began climbing the long ladder.Sweat dripped from her nose and onto one of the handles.She placed her foot softly on it and began to climb again.
She was just reaching the top when she heard noise below her.She looked down and found a group of people had gathered.She stared at them as they began to look scared.One girl yelled out,"Do you need help?"Another person yelled,"It's not worth your life!"Piper rolled her eyes and climbed the last few handles and boosted herself on top of the bridge.
Piper quietly looked around.She stared up above at the clouds and began to yell,"I want your Elder A**es down here now!"Piper said as loudly as she could.She waited with no response."One of you will come down here now or I will say a spell to send me up the..."Just as she was finishing her last words an orb appeared,the orbs figured into a long white robe revealing a hood.She looked as they lowered the hood revealing the blond Elder that had taken Leo away.
"What is it Piper?"The elder questioned staring at her.Piper and her never got along very well ,since every time Leo was taken she was given the job to do so.She looked at Piper waiting to see what useless reason ,for Leo to come back, Piper had.
"I want to know where in your Elders rule book it says you can't have a family if the Elders approved of the marriage!"Piper said yelling at her.Piper hated the Elder and knew very well that she would come up with an excuse.
"Well Piper it doesn't exactly state that...and witches and whitelighters were never supposed to be together int he first place...it goes against everything!"The Elder fought back.She looked at Piper with a sad face."Piper I know you love Leo ,but you doing this every few months isn't going to solve anything!"She exclaimed to Piper.
"I will every day if I don't get not only my husband and not only the father of my children ,but the greatest Elder alive and the man with one of the greatest and purest souls!"Piper said as tears came to her eyes.She looked at the Elder."Me and Leo are destined now why do you Elders always have to come and ruin it?"Piper said looking at her still.Leo and her were always in love and were always destined.The only reason they seemed so not in love was because the Elders kept taking Leo away from Piper.
"Look Piper I believe you,I just don't think Leo coming back right now is best...you must learn to live without him...or find love again!"The Elder said as she orbed away leaving Piper alone on the top of the Golden Gate Bridge.Piper looked around as her eyes became more foggy form tears.
"Great!"She said as she turned and slowly inched her way down the ladder once again.She was halfway down when her tears began to pour onto the ladder leaving the ladder stained and wet.Her feet began to slip as her hands became numb from gripping so tightly.Piper felt her body began to fly as if she were falling.She looked down to see she was falling.She was now only a few feet from the ground.................................................................... Give me some reviews so I can post again!
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Post by charmedgirlchrissy on Apr 1, 2008 19:29:31 GMT -5
it is really good so far. have you ever thought of writing an actualbook? you are really talanted.
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 1, 2008 19:57:21 GMT -5
Thanks Charmedgirlchrissy I have actually once ,but my grammar slowly fades out of my mind with each birthday hehe I'm getting old!
I was thinking of it though and thank you for such a sweet compliment! I am happy out how this story is turning out so far! ..................................................................................................... Few More reviews maybe just one more and I'll post the Second Part 2 ...............................................................................................................
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Post by freebee on Apr 2, 2008 13:15:24 GMT -5
thats really good. you are very talented. i hope you write more? ;D
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 2, 2008 18:22:10 GMT -5
Thanks freebee I am posting more thanks to you and the other lovely members that have read and reviewed! Thank y'all so much! It means so much that other people enjoy my writing! ............................................................................................................... Part 2
Paige and Phoebe were at the house as Paige felt a sharp pain,throbbing like,in her whole body. "Phoebe!" Paige yelled as she clutched her head and fell onto the ground.She was feeling all sorts of sharp deadly pains.Tears came to her eyes as her heart felt like it was tearing."Phoebe...what going on!"Paige yelled as she felt more pains s tears bursted from her eyes.
Phoebe ran over to her, dieing sister."I don't know...unless!"Phoebe said as she thought of Piper."Piper!"Phoebe said as she took hold of Paige's arms."Wyatt...force field on anyone even uncle Coop and Grandpa!"Phoebe said talking to Wyatt as he placed a forcefield around him and his little brother,Chris.
"It's Piper...I think she is dieing!"Paige said as she orbed Phoebe and herself to Piper.Phoebe looked to see Piper laying on the ground.Blood began to surround her."Oh my god!"Paige yelled running over to Piper."I don't think I can heal her!"She said as the pain began to disappear.
"You have to try!"Phoebe said as Paige began to try and heal Phoebe's and her own sister.her hands glowed ,but almost instantly stopped glowing."What is going on?"Phoebe yelled at Paige as she felt Piper's pulse,"She's barely breathing!"
"I can't heal her...call an ambulance!"Paige yelled as a ambulance pulled up. Paige and Phoebe were now surrounded by a group of people.Paige took hold of Phoebe and backed out of the way,so that the ambulance people could take Piper to the hospital."She fell off of the bridge I think!"Paige said through her glistening shades of tears.The paramedic nodded as he closed the doors and turned on the sirens.
Phoebe and Paige looked at Piper's Jeep and got in it.The keys were still inside.They quickly got in and followed the ambulance to the hospital.As Piper entered on a stretcher they could hear her silent and distant voice cracking with words."Phoebe...Paige...what happened?"Piper was saying as they pulled open her shirt.there were burns and scrapes all over her.Her stomach was bleeding intensely.Phoebe looked at her slowly dieing sister.
"You fell off of the bridge!"Phoebe said as she cried exceedingly her tears never stopping.Paige was beside Phoebe as she was crying as well.Piper had tears rolling down her eyes and onto the head of the stretcher.
"Wha...t....I...I...I need...L...Le...Leo!"Piper said her breathing shorting.She reached a room as paramedics took out the shockers to bring her back to life and some wires they strapped to her chest and head."not...no...not...again..."She said thinking of the time before with Prue and herself in the same position.She looked at her sisters."I...I...love...you...tell...the...the..bo...ys...I...lov...e...them...t...o!"She whispered as her hand fell against her body.the machine beeped very high pitched.
Phoebe and Paige screamed as they heard their sister's last words.Tears were stained on their eyes as they grasped Piper's arms.
.................................................................. Give me some reviews and I will continue!
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 3, 2008 3:02:02 GMT -5
Fantastic. Really Good. Please update. ;D
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 3, 2008 21:20:34 GMT -5
Thanks Melissa! .........................
The doctors shocked Piper to try and bring her back to life.It beeps' again as Phoebe and Paige are dragged out of the room and into the waiting room.They were screaming as an hour passed.Phoebe and Paige had red swollen eyes.Doctors came out of the room to meet Phoebe and Paige ,at their heels.
Phoebe and Paige looked at him as he spoke,"We have gotten the heartbeat back and she is being bandaged now...we will say it may be a while before she can get back on her feet,so don't try to force her to much...she has internal damage done to the left side of the head...she may have a hard time remember some recent memories...keep her on liquids,soup,and other non solid-like foods...She may go home now,but remember she must be careful!"The doctor said as he found the girl's eyes full of hope and relief.
"Thank God!"Phoebe said as she and Paige ran into the room to see Piper in a bunch of bandages and in a wheelchair."Oh Honey!"Phoebe said racing over to her.A few hours later Phoebe,Piper,and Paige were at home.Paige softly orbed Piper onto her own bed.
"So now what do we do?"Paige asked turning to Phoebe.She was thinking of trying to heal Piper ,but wasn't sure if she could.She seen in Phoebe's eyes she was probably thinking the same thing.
"Take off some of the bandages and heal her!"Phoebe said as she bent beside her eldest sister and removed an arm bandage.Phoebe looked down at the arm.Piper's arm was scraped severely and the blood was lighting coming out,but not as bad as it was.
.................................................................................... Ok here's an update hope all of you feel much better!
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 5, 2008 14:01:17 GMT -5
Can't update till at least one review so sorry guys we may never know if Paige can heal Piper or not!
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 5, 2008 14:06:15 GMT -5
I'm finally getting to reading this.
I love this chapter. It's good. The way you wrote when Piper was in the hospital was brilliant. But now, I wanna know if Paige can heal Piper. I so hope she can. Update soon!
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 5, 2008 14:18:16 GMT -5
Thanks Melissa I'm going to bless you for letting me continue my story! ...............................................................................................................
Paige looked at Phoebe,but followed what her sister told her to do.Paige held her hands over Piper's arm.Paige started to cry as her hands would not glow."I don't think I can heal her!"Paige said as she tried again."I can't do it!"Suddenly there was an orb behind them Paige and Phoebe slowly turned to see Leo standing there.
"Thats' because I have to heal her!"Leo said as his eyes had tears in them.Leo looked at Paige and Phoebe as they stared oddly at him."The Elders said I have to heal Piper...not you Paige...that's why your hands won't glow right now"Leo said,"Now could ya move."Leo said as the girls stood up and moved out of the way.Leo walked over and placed his hands over her.The glowing went all over her body lighting every inch or her.Piper glowed in gold and yellow bursts.As Leo closed his eyes and focused completely on Piper's wounds.
Piper suddenly opened her eyes.She couldn't see nothing ,but light.Piper knew she was being healed she could feel the pain slowly going away.
Phoebe and Paige looked at Leo with their cheeks stained from tears.They both stood just standing their holding each other hoping,that Leo's calculations were correct.
Piper felt the pain now almost fully distant as her body slowly landed onto the bed and her vision captured Leo's image.Piper looked at Leo in dis-belief."Leo...?"She questioned quietly staring at him.
Leo looked at Piper as a smile lit his face.
Piper smiled and she got up and gave him a hug.They held each other tight.Leo closed his eyes as Piper's eyes began to water.Phoebe and Paige gave each other a hug as they began to cry.
......................................................................................................... OK so if you want the second to last update you better review me!
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 5, 2008 15:24:57 GMT -5
So cute! Love your story! Hope you write another story I love the way you write.
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 5, 2008 15:48:53 GMT -5
Thanks Prettywitch! I love your stories and I love the way you also write! .........................................................................................................Part 3
The Next day Piper walked down the stairs.She stopped as Leo orbed in front of her,"Leo...what are you..."Piper said as he was supposed to have went to see the elders to see if he can stay."You just left a few minutes ago!"Piper said concerned.As Leo looked at her happily.
"Piper...I talked to them...they said after what you did last night,they want us to be together...because without me you couldn't make it...they said you also showed great strength up on the Golden Gate Bridges Yesturday...they said as long as I agree to become and Elder,well remain an Elder,that my home is now here!"He said smiling.
Piper smiled and hugged him tight as Phoebe and Paige walked in,"So..."Phoebe asked looking at Leo.
"I can stay!"Leo said as the girls began jumping up and down.
Paige and Phoebe walked over to them and gave them a hug.Piper looked at Leo"Do you want to see your boys?"She asked as Leo nodded.They slowly walked into the babies nursery.Leo looked at the two little boys sitting in the floor playing with their little toys.
He walked over and began to give them hugs as they yelled,"Daddy,we missed you!"They gave him kisses as he smiled. Piper lay against the door frame as Paige and Phoebe stood behind Piper and looked inside.Piper smiled and giggled as her eyes filled with tears."Are you gonna leave again?"Wyatt asked his father.
"No Wyatt...I'm here for good!"Leo said as Wyatt giggled.Leo tickled Chris's tummy as Chris giggled and laughed.[/size] ........................................................................................................... Ok I decided this was gonna be the last post ,but there is gonna be a part two!
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 5, 2008 16:08:29 GMT -5
So cute!! I love it and I hope you write the part 2 soon. I am looking forward to it!
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Post by Prue's Empath on Apr 5, 2008 16:10:29 GMT -5
OK The story will continue when I have time to think! so leave me reviews and tell me if you have any ideas! thanks bye! .......................................................................................................
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 11, 2008 1:06:11 GMT -5
Man, I missed 2 updates. I love that Piper is well. That is a relief. I love babies, so that was cute Leo tickling Chris, & he giggled. Wonderful story.
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Post by ~*Charmed Loyal *~ on Apr 18, 2008 18:24:33 GMT -5
ice story, Hope to see more of it soon.
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