Charmed a New story

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This is a story that I have been working on for a while. I created back when 5 season was going on and have been tweaking it every since. I have prequel to this that I have lost and am tryin to find.
I will only post more if I get response from people.



Charmed
New Story

Written by Aj Charles
Pg-13

This the story of Piper and Phoebe’s children, twins Patrick Micca and Prudence Melinda Halliwell and Mackenzie Pride and Mitchell Parker Halliwell.

18 years have passed and the twins have grown to be very wise and powerful. Yet they are humble about their magic. Patrick Halliwell has grown to the height of 6’2 and weighs a solid 180lbs. He inherited his father’s dirty blonde hair and hazel eyes. An intelligent young man who has a clever since of humor, and a hint of sarcastic wit to which he uses as much as possible. Very even tempered, another thing he got from his father.
His sister, who is just as intelligent as her brother, has their aunt’s pretty blue eyes and their mother’s beautiful brown hair. Prue was gifted with her mother’s ability to cook and be strong, her aunt Phoebe’s need to be free, her aunt Prue’s need to take charge, and her aunt Paige’s need to be kind to others. At 5’8 she is taller then all of her female relatives. She weighs a healthy 120lbs
13 year old twins Mackenzie Pride and Mitchell Parker Halliwell are the children of Phoebe and a Mulato Whitelighter named Ryan Franklin.
He was made elder before he knew that Phoebe was pregnant. Both children have brown hair. Mackenzie has hazel eyes while her brother has green eyes. Just like her mother, Mackenzie is very out going while her brother is shy with a dry since of humor. Mackenzie is 5’4 and weighs a fit 105lbs. Her light brown hair is shoulder length. Mitch is 5’7 and weighs a nice 130lbs. His hair is almost to his shoulders.
The Sisters were killed by an unknown demon 9 years ago, when the younger twins were just 3. With the help of Darryl the kids were allowed to stay in the house with Leo. Since then both sets twin don’t see the other as cousins but as brother and sister. Even Leo treats then as if they were his own.
The older twins are in their freshman year of College while the younger twins are in their last year of Middle school.
They are visited by their mothers often.
Both sets of twin take Tai chi, Tai kwon do, and gymnastastics.
For them it’s just being extra ready just in case attacks happen even though they have never had one. Both Pat and Prue take care of the house while their father runs the club, their main source of income. Life for them has become very predictable but that’s all about to change.

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Here is the first chapter I guess. I don't know.


The scene opens to the sun rising in front of the Manor. As the alarm goes off the clock reads 6:30. From underneath a giant mound of covers a hand reaches out for the alarm and misses. As the hand continues to search, the owner gets frustrated and the clock shorts out. “Crap” mumbles Prue. We see Prue arise from under the mound. She picks up the clock and tosses it in the trash while muttering “That’s the third d**n one this week.” As she heads towards the bathroom she tears off her skimpy night shirt. She enters the bathroom and turns on the shower.
As she walks down the stairs you see she is wearing a nicely fitted tee shirt that says “You’re unique just like everyone else,” and beautiful light blue jeans. She enters the kitchen and admittedly starts cooking. 15 minutes goes by and you see a lovely display of pancakes on a plate. As she flips the last pancake she yells “Mac Mitch get your asses up!”
Up stairs we see Mitch mumble in his sleep “No, go away”.
His room is an amazing dark blue with a black ceiling filled with stars. Posters are scattered across his walls of his favorite artist, painters, and sports. His room is very neat. The only article of clothing on the floor is a shirt. In the corner of his room on the right lies his computer desk. On his shelves in front his bed are books on subjects differing from motorcycles to the anatomy of the brain.
Unlike her brother, Mac’s room floor is littered
with articles of clothing. Her room color is a cool dark green.
On her walls are pictures of friends and posters of her favorite bands. Her bed lies right across from her windows.
Prue makes her way up the stairs and heads right towards Mac’s room. She knocks on the door. When there is no answer she opens it to see Mac’s alarm smashed to pieces on the floor and Mac with her head underneath her pillow. Prue picks up the alarm and murmurs “This family sucks at turning off clocks”. She rubs Mac’s back and says “get up, Kiddo”. Mac removes the pillow and groans. “Why did you destroy your clock?” Prue whispers. “The d**n thing asked for it. Why did you destroy yours?” Mutters Mac. “Because hormones suck and we suck at controlling them.” said Prue. “Says who?” mutters Mac. “Says me, now get up and get dressed” “Fine but I’m not gonna enjoy it” said Mac. As Prue walks out she asks “Do you ever”?
Mac mutters “No” as she rolls out of bed. “Now see we’ve learned something new already”. Under her breath Mac whispers “Freak”. Prue walks down the hall to Mitch’s room. Again she knocks and hears no answer. She opens the door to Mitch fast asleep. “Mitch get up” shouts Prue. Mitch admittedly rolls over, sits up, and says in a very groggy voice “I’m up I’m up”. “Good, now get dressed” said Prue. She walks out and he continues to sit there. She walks back in and shouts “Wake up”! He stands up and says “Oh come on Prue. Would you let me stay home if I said I had cramps and was bloated”? She says “No, now suck it up young lady and get dressed”. She walks back into hallway to see her brother standing in his doorway. He has his hair in a short ponytail and is only wearing some navy blue boxer briefs. “Morning beautiful” said Pat in a sing-song voice. “Morning asswipe” said Prue in a very chipper voice. “Awe don’t you just love pms”? “Oh I do! It’s my fave” said Prue. “Well then let me finish up with the brats. You deserve a nice break”. “Thank you Mic. Guess what? I made your favorite, chocolate chip pancakes”. “Wait that’s not my favorite, that’s yours”. “Oops my mistake, hurried it up with them, I don’t want them to be late. Oh and put on a shirt.” “Yeah yeah” mumbles Pat. “Sure sure” said Prue. She walks into her Dads room and opens the curtains. “Dad wake up”. “I’m up Prue.” “You need to get to P3 and fire the old manager and then hire a non-stealing manager.” “Non- stealing it is”. As she walks out she blows out three candles sitting a top his dresser then heads down stairs.

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In the hallway we see Mitch wondering to the bathroom. Before he opens it his sister stops him. “Beauty before age please” said Mac. “Dude I’m only a minute older”. “So” and she orbs into the bathroom. “That is so not fair” whines Mitch. “Get use to it, Kid.” Said Pat from behind. “She does this every time. For once I would like to Go First” Said Mitch as he shouts at the door. “Just go use the downstairs bathroom” “Fine” said Mitch. He starts to orb but Pat stops him. “Dude use the stairs.” Mitch turns around and walks down stairs. Pat heads to his room and grabs a shirt sitting on the edge of his bed. As he heads down stairs he pulls the shirt over his head. It’s a black shirt that says “Don’t worry guys I have some chocolate in my pocket”. He enters the kitchen to see Prue sitting at the table eating and reading a news paper. She looks up at his shirt. “You know I hate that shirt”. “Yeah I know that’s why I love it.” “Who knew you were so funny” said Prue. “I did but I choose to ignore it” says Mac as she walks in wearing dark blue jeans and very pretty strapped flower shirt. She grabs a plate and some pancakes, she settles in a seat right next to Prue. “So how many clocks does Dad need to pick up from the store?” Both Prue and Mac put up two fingers. “Thought so” said Pat. “Why does this family suck at turning off clocks?” “Don’t ask me” said Mac. “Is it really that hard?” said Pat. “Apparently so” said Mitch as he walks in. He is wearing khaki pants with a green shirt. He has his hair in a short ponytail as well. “It’s easier just to blow the d**n things up rather then look where it’s at” snickered Prue. Both her and Mac start giggling as her their father walks in. “What is so funny?” asked Leo as kisses all of his children on the forehead. “Oh nothing Dad, it’s just that Prue and Mac both broke their clocks again” said Pat. “Interesting’’ chuckles Leo as he grabs a pancake from the stack sitting on the counter, then rolls it and proceeds to say “So what time does class start for you two?” asked Leo with his mouth full. “10:30” said Prue. “Ok well I’m off I’ll be sure to get two more clocks. And don’t worry Prue I will hire a new manager” said Leo as he cuts off Prue. “Bye children” said Leo as he orbs out. “Finish up you guys so I can take you to school. And for the last time don’t use your magic in school’’ said Prue. “Yeah yeah” said Mac. “Sure sure” said Mitch. “I mean it. That school has dealt with two sets of Halliwell twins. Try and leave them with something good to remember” said Prue. “Well I don’t think we will be able to out do you two” said Mitch. “Yeah, they still talk about it” said Mac. “They do” said Pat with a hint of pride. Prue shoots him a look. “What do you mean, we never did anything” said Prue. “You guys are hella bad at lying” snickered Mac. “You guys stole the last Vice Principle’s 30 foot boat and put it in the middle the pool” said Mitch. “It was 35 and you have no proof” said Pat. “Well duh. That is why it’s so amazing” said Mac. “You think it was amazing” said Pat in fake crying voice. “Why would think it was us” said Prue. “Do you really think we’re that dumb?” said Mitch. “Well” said Pat. “Don’t finish that. Let’s go you two.” They put their plates in their in the sink and head towards living room. Mac and Mitch both grab their bags which are sitting on the couch. “Go to the car and I’ll be right there” said Prue “Ok” said both kids and they head outside. “I will be ready by the time you get back” said Pat. “I seriously doubt you will be ready in 10 minutes” laughed Prue. “Maybe not but I will be ready by the time you get back, fix the ozone layer, stop global warming, and cure famine. “Ok now that I can work with” said Prue. “Alrighty I’ll see you when you get back” said Pat. “Ok” said Prue as she walks out the door. Pat heads to the kitchen and starts cleaning up. He puts the remainder of the pancakes in the fridge. He then heads up stairs and to take a shower.
In the car Mac is the front seat while Mitch is in the back. Mac starts flipping through the stations on the radio. She comes across a song that both she and Prue like. “Oh God change it! This song is horrible” protested Mitch. Both girls turn around and shoot Mitch an evil look. “Never mind I love it” said Mitch. They pull up to school and both kids get out. “I’ll be here waiting when school ends ok. Bye” said Prue. Before she can drive off another woman in a car pulls up along side of her. “Hey Prue” said the woman. “Hi Peggy” said a nervous Prue. “We miss you at the PTA meetings. How come you haven’t been?” said Peggy. “Oh you know I’ve just been busy with school and stuff” said Prue. “Yeah well I hope to see you at next week’s meeting” said Peggy. “I’ll try and be there ok. Bye” said Prue as she drove away.
She gets back to the Manor and heads into the house. “Oh my God, that was scary” shouted Prue. “Did Peggy ambush you again?” said Pat as he walk down the stairs wearing nice pair of blue jeans, a light blue button down shirt with a dark blue shirt underneath, and a black tailored jacket. “Yes. I swear that woman is evil” said Prue as she slumps down onto the couch. “Well at least you’re not having the nightmares anymore” said Pat as sits down on the coffee table picks up Prue’s legs and puts them on his lap. “Wow ya know who knew bake sells could be made scary. I use to love them” said Prue. “Your fine now remember, just breath in and out” whispered Pat. “I’m calm I’m calm. What time is it?” said Prue. “Umm 8:30 we’ve got lots of time” said Pat as he looks at his watch. “Did you clean up kitchen and put away the food” said Pat as he cuts off Prue. “Yes Mel of course I did”. “Just checking” said Prue. “So what do you wanna do? We could go to the mall, get a tour of the new Hospital, or maybe we could build a small house” said Pat. “You know what I wanna do” said Prue. “Race you up stairs” shout Prue as she rushes up stairs. Pat takes a short cut and decides to orb. Prue gets to the attic to see her brother sitting in a big arm chair scrying with Mac’s laptop computer. “Cheating was always gonna be your best skill” said Prue who is barely even winded. “Now why would I wanna go up against the best runner in our High school?” said Pat. “Flattery will get you no where with me” said Prue as she sits down in the chair across from him. “Oh well I had to try” said Pat. The crystal hits a location on the map and they both look down. “Oh look it’s by the mall” said Pat in an eager voice. They grab hands and orb out. They arrive behind the mall. They peek around corner to see a very large demon harassing a young woman. Pat freezes the area then looks at Prue. “So what’s our game plan?” “What?!” shouts Prue. “Never mind” said Pat has he rushes over the woman and the demon. “On the count of three, 1 2 3” said Pat as he unfreezes them and kick the demon in the stomach away from the woman. Prue shout at her to run away which she does. Prue then lifts the demon into air with the wave of her hand while Pat throws a fire bomb towards him. He slams up against the wall then slides down. He stands back up then charges toward Prue. She flip kicks him and he falls back. He then shoots two fireballs at them. They both deflect it. Prue shoots ice at his feet. Pat once again kicks him and he flies backwards. Pat grabs his sister’s hand. The demon is suddenly lifted into the air. He burst into flames and disappears. “That was fun” said Pat. “Come on dork face” said Prue as they both orb out. Prue orbs up to the attic as she is walking she grabs at her stomach but she ignores it. Prue continue straight for the Book of Shadows and starts flipping through the pages. “Ha! We killed another skull demon” shouts Prue. “I knew it!” shouts Pat as he walks up the stairs he too grabs for his stomach. “No you didn’t” says Prue. “Yeah I didn’t but did you see that sucker? Damn, he was huge” said Pat. Yeah he was. That was the 5th one this month, were on a hot streak. Hey what time is it?” asked Prue. “Umm it’s about 9:08. We made awesome time” said Pat. “Yeah not bad but we can do better” said Prue. “True but” before he could finish Pat grabs at his head. Prue rushes to him. “What’s wrong?” asked Prue. “It’s Mitch, he has been attacked” strained Pat. “Where is he” asked a scared Prue.

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Pat grabs her hand and orbs to behind the school. Where they see a very large demon has Mitch over his shoulder and has his hand around Mac throat and has her up in the air. Pat and Prue call for them and they both orb into their arms. Prue hands Mac to Pat. “Get them out of here!” shouts Prue. He orb out to the club. “Dad!” screams Pat. Leo runs in from the other room. “What happened?” asked Leo in panicked voice. “They were attacked” said Pat. “By who?” asked Leo? “A demon” said Pat. Back at the school Prue decides that practice is over and uses all her power to destroy him. She combines water and electricity into a giant ball that she launches at him. He flies back hard on his back but he gets back up quick. She is caught off guard that he has gotten up so quickly. He shoots an energy ball at her. She tries to duck but wasn’t fast enough and hit catches her hard on the shoulder. Just then Pat orbs in and runs up and kicks him hard in the face. Again he goes back but this time he shimmers out. Pat runs back to his sister. “Oh my God Mel, talk to me baby” said Pat as he heal her shoulder. “I’m fine I’m fine. Where are my babies?” asked Prue. “They are the club with Dad. Come on” Pat grabs her hand and orbs her to the club. Both kids are sitting on the couch with Leo. As soon he sees the orbs Leo gets up. “Are you all right?” asked Leo as he hugged his daughter. “I'm fine Daddy” said Prue. She finishes hugging her father and heads over to Mac and Mitch. She kneels in front of both them and gives them both hugs. “Are you ok sweetie?” ask Prue. “Yeah I’m fine” said Mitch in a shaky voice. Mac has tears streaming down her face. “Oh baby what the matter? Are you hurt?” asked Prue. “No Dad healed me but I could have done something. Because I froze I could have lost my brother. I…I” she starts to cry harder. But before Prue can console her Mitch grabs her hand orbs out. “Where’d they go” asked Leo. Pat and Prue both close their eyes and say “The Park”. “Should we go after them?” asked Prue. “No give them some space” said Pat. In the park Mitch leads Mac to a swing. “Sit down” said Mitch. Mac does as her brother says and sits. “Why are we here?” asked a tearful Mac. “Do you remember when were 7 and those guys took my toy truck?” asked Mitch. “Yeah, you ran crying back to Dad” said Mac. “Do you remember what you did?” asked Mitch. “Not really why?” asked Mac. “Well you got off this here swing and smack the hell out of those to boys. Then you lit their shoes on fire” said Mitch. “I remember that, Prue had to put them out before anyone noticed. (Laughing) I got in so much trouble. Why are you telling me this?” asked Mac. “You’re my protector Mackenzie, you have and you always will be. (Voice breaking) I love you so much and would never leave you” said Mitch. “Oh I love you too” said Mac as she gets off the swing to hug her brother. Mac looks over Mitch’s shoulder and sees Prue and Pat. “It looks like we have an audience” said Mac. Mitch turns around. Mitch waves them over and immediately gives them hugs. “Couldn’t stay a way now could ya?” said Mitch. “I could but our hormonal sister insisted on coming to bug you” said Pat. Prue has her hands cupped around Mac’s face. “Are you ok now?” asked Prue. “Yeah I’ll be fine” said Mac as places her hands on Prue’s wrists. “Can we go get some kettle corn?” asked Mac. “What?” said Prue with a confused look on her face. “Yeah I’m in the mood for something sweet and salty” said Mac. “Sure, whatever you like. I’m gonna stick with an old favorite” said Prue. “What’s that?” asked Mac. “Chocolate” said Prue. “Mmm chocolate” said Mac. “Hey ladies are you ready to go?” asked Pat. “Yeah we’re ready” said Prue. They orb back to the Manor and head into the conservatory. Pat goes to sit down on the couch and Mac lays her on his lap. Prue sits on the other couch across them and Mitch plants himself between her legs on the floor. “Kettle corn” shouts Mac. A small bag of kettle corn orbs into her hands. “Want some?” asked Mac as she offers some to Pat. He declines. Prue starts playing with Mitch’s hair. “Book Of shadows” said Mitch. The magical book lands in his lap. “Ouch” said Mitch. “Oh sorry” said Prue. “No it wasn’t you it was the book. This sucker is heavy” said Mitch as starts flipping through pages. Pat starts stroking Mac’s hair. “Do you remember what the demon looked like?” asked Prue. “Yeah, I will never forget his face” said Mitch. “Are you breading my hair?” asked Mac. “Yeah, sorry” said Pat. “It’s ok I was just wondering what you were doing” said Mac. “Found him!” shouted Mitch. “What his name?” asked Pat. Both Prue and Mitch say “Morgan King of the Skull Demons. Both Mac and Pat say “Morgan”.“Wow with a name like that I wonder how he became king” said Mac."He probably got teased alot then started taking steroids to bulk up and " Pat notices that everyone is staring at him and shuts up.“This can't be right, from what I’m reading here he shouldn’t have attacked us. His kind usually goes after mothers of unborn children not two teenagers. Prue and Pat glance at each other. “I think I know why he went after you” said Pat. “Why?” asked Mac as she looks up at him. “Pat and I have been secretly hunting demons for the pass few years. This passed month we’ve killed off many Skull demons” said Prue. “How come you’ve never told us? Ask Mitch. “Screw that, how come you’ve never taken us along?” ask Mac. “You two are too young to be fighting demons” said Prue. “And plus we’d never forgive ourselves if you ever got hurt” said Pat. Prue looks down at her watch and see that’s its 10:45. “sh!t Pat we’re late” said Prue as she stands up and runs to the next room. “Dad!” shouts Pat. Leo orbs in. “What?” “We need you to watch the kids” said Prue as she comes back in the room caring two shoulder bags. “Sure ok” says Leo as he sits down next Mac. Prue hands the red shoulder bag to Pat and they both head to car. “Call us if you need anything” said Prue. “Bye Dad” said as he close the door behind him. “For god sakes you’d think they were the Parents” said Mitch. “Nope I’m the only Parent here” said Leo. Pat and Prue sneak into a dark class room. A lecture on Political Science is discussed by slide show. Back at the Manor Leo is making Mac and Mitch lunch. “Hey Dad, can you cut my grilled cheese sandwich into 4 square?” asked Mac. “Sure sweetie” said Leo as cut the sandwich. “What are you 6 or something” said Mitch. “No 6 ½” said Mac. The phone rings. “Play nice you two I’ll be back” said Leo as went to go answer the phone. Mitch steals one of Mac’s squares. “Hey give that back” shout Mac. But before she can get it a demon shimmers in shots two small energy balls at them. It knocks them both to the floor. The demon picks up both children and throws them over his shoulder. Leo walks in stops in his spot. The demon shoots a energy ball at him but Leo ducks out of the way but the demon is to quick for him and shoots 3 at once in his fallen direction. Leo is out cold. The demon shimmers out.

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Back at the school Pat again grabs at his head again. Telepathically she speaks. “What’s the matter? Is it the twins again?” asked Prue. “Yes” said Pat. She looks around and then waves him to get up. They slip out of class and head out to the parking lot. They find the car, get in, and raced to the house. 10 minutes later they arrive at the house. “Holy crap that was fast” said Pat as he raced up the steps. They run into the Manor and shout for the twins. Pat runs up stairs while Prue runs towards the kitchen. There on the floor next to the table lies her father out cold. “Dad!” shouts Prue. She shakes him awake. “Pat I found Dad” shouts Prue. Pat orbs from upstairs. “Oh my God Dad are you ok?” asked Pat. “Just a little headache” says Leo. “Dad where are the twins?” asked Prue. “They were taken” said Leo as he tries to sit up. “It looked like a Skull demon” said Leo. “How do you know?” asked Pat. “You’re Mother and her sisters have fought them before. When you were very young, but they were never that big” said Leo. “I think that was the King you saw Dad” said Prue. “Come on” ordered Pat as he stood up from his kneeled position. “Where?” said Prue as she helps her Father stand. “To go scry” said Pat. “Your not gonna find them that way. You have to go down to the Underworld” said Leo. “What? How are we gonna be able to find them down there?” asked Prue. “With sensing ability” said Leo. “Let’s go then” said Pat. “Are you gonna be all right Dad?” asked Prue. “Yeah I’ll be fine just go get your brother and sister” said Leo. “Ok” said Prue. They hug their father then orb out. Just as Leo sits down on one of the kitchen chairs they orb back in “Umm how do we get there” asked Pat. “Come on I’ll show you” said Leo as he grabs Pat’s hand and orbs down to the Underworld.
“Dad where are we?” asked Pat. “We are in the last Source lair” said Leo. “What? Why did you orb us here?” said Prue. “Did you sense anyone?” asked Leo. “No” said Prue. “That’s why. No one is here to catch us and it’s a great area to sense from” said Leo. “Oh” said Pat. “Now just close your eyes and think of them” ordered Leo. They both close their eyes. Minutes go by and suddenly they open their eyes and say “We know where they are”. “Go get them then” said Leo. They hug their father and rush out of the lair. They sneak their way through the halls for hours. They finally come up to a giant lair guarded by two skull demons. Pat and Prue both become invisible and sneak by them Brown bricks make up the walls that reach all the way up to the ceiling. They walk down a long corridor until they come across large room where they see the twins in shackles against a wall. Prue stars to run towards but Pat stops her. Telepathically he speaks to her. “What are you doing? Wait and sense first” said Pat. She closes her eyes. “Oh god” said Prue. “Give me your hand said Pat. They become visible and walk into the room and start electricity and fire every which way. They here multiple screams as they see invisible demons become visible within flames. They run up to they twins. Prue freezes both their locks while Pat blows them up. “Took you long enough” said Mac. “Sorry the map quest directions were sort of wrong” said Pat. Admittedly both kids start fighting along side their brother and sister. They are down to the last few demons. Left and right Mac is blowing up one after another. She turns around to see Morgan standing behind her. He slaps her and sends her flying cross the lair but before she lands Pat catches her. “Thanks” said Mac. “No problem” said Pat as he puts her down. Prue grabs Mitch’s hand run toward Pat and Mac. “You have destroyed what I’ve work so hard to make” yelled Morgan. “Sorry?” said Pat. “Two did a pretty a stupid thing when you decided to
come after my family” shouts Morgan. “As did you” said Prue. The 4 of them grab hands and Morgan lifted into the air. “Time for a family reunion” said Mitch. Morgan starts screaming in agony then burst in flames. “You may destroy me but you will never destroy Nanic!!!” shouts Morgan as he disappears. “Time for a family reunion?” said Pat. “What? It sounded really good in my head” said Mitch. “You poor poor boy said Pat as he grabs him by the shoulder and gives him the biggest hug. Prue does the same to Mac. They switch off and Pat picks up Mac in his arms. “You kicked some major butt little girl” said Pat. “You didn’t do so bad yourself” said Mac. “You were so brave” said Prue to Mitch as she hugs him. “Yeah I was. I had an awesome teacher” said Mitch. “Come on guys” ordered Pat. “Let’s get out of here” said Mac. They orb out. It is now night fall when they orb back to Manor. “Showers all around” shouts Prue. But before they run up stairs they see their Mother’s and aunts standing at the top of the stairs.

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“Hi my babies” said Phoebe. Mac and Mitch run up the stairs to hug there mother. Piper walks down and hugs both Pat and Prue at once. “How are my big babies?” asked Piper. “We’re doin fine Mother” said Pat. At the top of the stairs you can hear Mac and Mitch are telling her all the cool stuff they did tonight. “Wow you did all that. That is cool you two. I am very proud of you” said Phoebe. “So am I” said Piper. “Am proud of all of you” said Phoebe. “We wanted to come congratulate for doing stuff a beautiful job at rescuing your brother and sister” said Paige. Big Prue walks down and hugs each of her nephews and niece but especially hugs Little Prue. “You showed such courage” said Prue. She touches Pats face. “You guys are doing an amazing job by taking care of these two and your father” said Prue. “I am very proud of you” whispers Prue. Tears run down Little Prue’s and Pat’s face. Piper hugs them again. Paige and Phoebe walk down and hug Little Prue and Pat. They then hug Mac and Mitch. “Time to go ladies” said Prue. Piper and Phoebe blow kisses at both twins and shimmer out. Pat hugs his sister and whispers in her ear “What are we gonna do tonight Brain?” said Pat. “The same thing we do every night pinky” replys Prue in the same whisper. “Try to take over the world” said Mitch and Mac as they walk up the stairs.
Through an Oracle’s crystal ball you see Mac and Mitch walking up the stairs. On the other end ball we see a short and very skinny man dressed in a slight toga type wear. “What would you like me to do now master? I think you should attack them now” said the short man. “If I want your opinion Croner I will give it to you” said a hooded being sitting a very large chair sitting in front Croner. “Yes Master but” before he can finish his sentence Croner catches on fire. With the wave of the being’s hand a new Oracle is summed. A taller man with dark brown hair answers “Yes master” said the man. “Find me whatever you can on the new Charmed ones” said the being. “Yes Master” said the man as he shimmers out. “This is only the beginning” said the being.


The End.

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Since no one has commented I'm just gonna do it myself.

Like oh my god! This story was so cool and funny. I wish I had written it. That Pat guy seems so hot in my mind.
Lol I love this story. Good job.
And scene.

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I wonder did anyone actually like this story?

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LOL your funny and I lvoed the story i'm going to blss you for it and happy birthday.