Jeepers Reapors!!!

[hydrokinisis]

Setting:Somewhere in Season 8!!!

Phoebe is a sleep at her job, Piper calls and tells her to get home!!! Phoebe asks what time is it, and it 12:00 in the moring!! So Phoebe hangs up and goes home!!! When she's at her car, she hears a woman screaming!!! Phoebe runs to a near by alley to see a woman being shreeded to bits, but Phoebe can't see the demon or what ever is attacking her!!! The woman screams, "HELP ME"!!! Phoebe trys to pull her away, but the attacker is to strong, and woman is dragged into the darkness!!! Phoebe falls to the ground...in FEAR!!!

Opening Credits

Piper and Paige find Phoebe the next moring alseep with the Book of Shadows open!!! They awake her, and Phoebe tells them about the innocent last night!!! Piper and Paige are shocked, while Phoebe is determained to find out what the demon was!!! Piper goes out with the boys, Wyatt is using his magic on a ball, when someone is about to see, Piper freezes them!!! Piper is mad at Wyatt, but then realizes, it was Chris!!! Then Piper hears a scream, a couple is being attacked be an inseen force!!! Piper freezes them, then Piper is attacked my the same thing, she blows it up!!! Piper and the boys return home and tells Paige about the attacks!!! Paige tells Piper that she was attacked too by some invislbe demon!!! Both of them realize that this is more serious than we thought!!! Paige, Piper and the boys orb to Magic school!!! They find Leo and Phoebe, tell them about new attacks!!! Phoebe aks them if they looked in Book of Shadows again, but the only invisible demon in the book had they vanquished!!! Leo tells the girls that his been searching all through magic school and found out what the attackers might be!!! He says they a Reapor Demons!!! Paige asks, so why aren't they in the book??? Leo says Reapor demons are the oldest demons to woalk the earth!!! Before the Source, berfore witches, even berofre the Titans, the Reapors were deadly creatures who walked in the darkness!!! When goodness and light came on earth, the elders and the reapors fought in war to clam earth!!! When the elders won, the reapors were banished to a alternate world between life and death!!! Piper, Paige, and Phoebe asks, so how are they attacking people in our world??? Leo thinks that Reapors are finding a way back into our world!!! Phoebe asks, then how do we stop them!!! They only way would be to go into their world and stop them there!!! Okay then lets, go, Phoebe says!!! Are you crazy, you want us to go into another world full of ancient demons that we have no idea how to vanquish!!! What if our powers don't work there, Piper says!!! It doesn't matter Piper, if we don't stop them there, then all hell will break loose here when they come into our world, Phoebe says!!! I know that may sound insane and crazy, but she does have a point, Paige says!!! Leo, Piper says!! I know it's crazy Piper, but it's the only way, Leo says!!!

Piper, Phoebe, Paige, Leo and boys are at the attic at the Manor!!! Are you sure this spell will work, Phoebe, Piper says!!! Yes it will, or we could end up vanquishing ourselves, Phoebe says!!! Wait, how do we get back, Paige says!!! Don't worry, I have one for that too, Phoebe says!!! Leo, please keep the boys safe, Piper says!!! I know you girls will be fine, you've been through worst, Leo said!!! Yeah, each of us died at least once and came back to life rememeber, Phoebe says!! Yeah and one of us sayed for 4 years, Piper says!!! Okay, lets get this over with, Paige says!!! " A world of darkness before us, two worlds inner twinded, let us go between their lines, to see a realm of another kind", Piper, Phoebe, and Paige say!!! Did it work, Paige says!!! Well, where still in the attic, Phoebe syas!!! Leo, Piper yells!!! Phoebe hears noises and looks down stairs to see reapor demons in their house!!! Phoebe runs back up to the attic!!! Uhh, you guys, I think it worked, Phoebe says!!! Piper and Paige look out the window to see the streets filled with reapor demons....over hundreds of them!!! Nooooo.....You think, Piper says sarcasticlly to Phoebe!!!

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I can't believe this, Piper says!!! How are we suppose to fight all those demons, Paige says!! I don't know, Phoebe says!!! We shouldn't have done this, I told you it was crazy going to a world that we have no idea about, Piper says angerily!!! I'm sorry, I guess we didin't think this through, Phoebe!!! You got that right, Piper says!!! Paige, you may want to calm down, Paige says!! How can I calm down when we living in a world which is 99% demon and 1% witch.....Piper raises her hand and the windows in the attic explode!!! Well....uhhh.... at least we have our powers here, Phoebe says!!! One of reapor demons hear the explosion up in the attic and goes up there!!! It sees nothing, then Phoebe is levating on the ceiling and jumps down and knocks out the demon!!! Piper and Paige then come out of hiddening!!! They capture the reapors and they begin to question him!!! "Do you know who we are??", Phoebe asks!!! You are witches, but not only just ordinary witches, your the Charmed Ones, it says!!! How are you reapors killing in our world, Piper asks!!! Hhahaha.....do you think I will tell you that!!! "For centuries, we reapors have been trapped in this hell for seeken world, not knowing what it feels like to live in the light, now we have been blessed with ability to temporaliy be in your world and you think I willl tell you, I despise all good and wish to never bow down to it again, it says!!! Well it's either you tell us, or I'll start blowing off your iddy-biddy demon parts, Piper says!!! Hah...We reapors know of your powers, we know of your arrival, our leader, The Devourer was informed by an ally from your world and knew you would be coming, it says!!! Who is this ally of yours......The reapor escapes and knocks all the girls aways!!! The reapor screams, and then the room is filled with the reapors and the girls are captured!!!

"Okay, I don't understand they have us, why don't they kill us, Paige syas!!! Don't give them any ideas, Piper says!!! Aren't you guys wondering about that ally, Phoebe says!!! Why were tricked into coming here, Phoebe says!!! Yeah, but I am more worried about getting out of here fast, Piper says!!! Not before we stop the reapors, Phoebe says!!! How are we going to do that again, Paige asks!!! I haven't the slighest clue, Phoebe says!!! The reapors come in and grab the girls!!! They are brought to the Reapor leader, The Devourer where he is with a mysterious person in a hooded rob!!! "The Charmed Ones my lord, a reapor says!!! My, my....They have come like you've said, the devourer said!!! Who are you, Phoebe says!!! Our ally will not respond to you, he only speaks me, the devourer says!!! The mysterious ally opens a partol!!! You see our ally came to us and made this portal to make us enter your world, the devourer!!! But the portal comes with a price, we wouldn't be seen in your world and we would have to return!!! The only way to keep us in your world is if we brought you here!!! You see we can only say in your world if the balance of good is weaked and with you here now!!! Nothing can stop us from returning to earth once again, the devourer says!!! What about your ally, what is in it for him, Piper says!!! All we had to do was bring you here, so he can destroy you......the ally from a BIG FIRE BALL and throws it at the girls!!! Piper freezes everyone and the fireball, then Paige orbs it at the devourer vanquishing him!!! Everyone unfreezes, Phoebe fights 2 demons, Piper blows up 2 demons, and Paige orbs the demon into one another!!! The ally then enters the portal.....HIS GETTING AWAY, Phoebe says!!! Then all the girls jump through the portal!!!

Where are we now, Paige says!!! The girls get up to realize that they are in front of the manor!!! I think were back, Phoebe says!!! Look, Paige says!!! The ally is in front of them, and says, the time will come then vanishes before Piper tries to blow him up!!! The girls go back in the house and tell Leo what happened!!! How do we know the Reapors won't attack again, Paige says!!! Well we vanquished their leader, plus I don't think that ally person won't try that plan again, Phoebe says!!! Yeah, but who knows what this ally person has planned for us next, Piper says!!! So I guess....WILL WAIT.....(a cloud is showing the girls conversation in the manor, the ally watching them!!!)

[hollypop]

There are sooo many unfinished fanfics here, please don't let this be one of them.

Can I offer one suggestion? How about going back to writing it as a script? You do have a talent for it just as long as the exclamation points aren't used all the time (don't throw things at me- lol)

It's such a good story and I hate to have it abandoned.

[hydrokinisis]

Wow, I really didn't like making this story so I stopped, but I'll update it later if you want.