The New Witch

[thetriforever]

This story "The New Witch" takes place in the third season. You remember Jenny, Dans neice, well you're about to.
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THE MANOR-

Morning when all three sisters are out of bed.

Phoebe comes in on Piper and Prue in the kitchin and says "Goodmorning Halliwell witches, what will it be for breakfast tody? Will you be having the flame'ondemon or would you rather have the ceral with demon flakes"
Prue then jokes "I would rather have a roast wicth, with a side of preminitions.
Then Prue and Phoebe start laughing.
Piper then looking anoyed says "Will you to shut up for a moment. I think Dan is coming over and I wan't you to out of here. I hope he doesn't bring over Jenny. It might be a little uncomfortable for her to see us together.
"O really" the two sisters reply.
Just then they here the doorbell ring. Piper then pushes Prue and Pheobe out the back door and opens the front door.

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Sorry realy short running behind be back tommarow to make soom more.

[thetriforever]

Okay Im back.


Prues Photo shoot-

Prue was taking pictures of a famous model when Darryl came in and said "Do some holkus Pulkus of yours and find out who is killing all of these kids."
"What kids?" Prue asks.
"Six girls from age 8-14 were all found dead with minor wounds and burn Marks. The FBI says that thier estimated time of death was all around 1:00 this morning, but they were found minuets apart from each other."
"Okay let me call Piper and Phoebe and we will try to help." Prue stated

Manor-
"So, no Jenny after all." Piper said to Dan as she watched him walk in and shut the door behind hisself.
"Nope it is just us. She said she watch over herself for a couple of hours.'' He quickly repied.
Piper then thought Mabye she is playing sick. What if she is just ditching school ang getting just the opertunity to get away. Just then the phone rang. It was of course Prue.
"Piper", she said, " we kind of have a problem. There has been some demon attaks and we need to get to the botom of them. I all ready called Phoebe and shes on her way there.
"Hi, everybody" Phoebe shouted as she came in the front door.
"I stand corrected she is there" Prue said.
Just then they heard screams coming from nextdoor. "HELP!!!"
It of course as you can probably guess was Jenny. So then Prue gave them a command "You two go over there. I'll astro there." And then she hung up.

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[thetriforever]

Dan's House-

Piper and Phoebe walked up the walk and were just about open the door when Prue's astro spirt apeared behind them. Phoebe screamed and almost kicked her sister but Prue moved out of the way and Phoebe kicked the air.
"Geese I didn't mean to scare you. Well what are you waiting for, go in.", said Prue.
So, they opened the door. And as soon as Piper went in everything went blank for her. She was knocked unconcious by a demon. She was pulled into the house by this weird looking red demon.
"Piper", Prue yelled, "come on we have to go save her" Prue said grabbing Phoebe and pulling her into the house. They went into the living roomand there was Jenny and Piper both unconcious. The Demon was nowhere in site so they went and tried to wake Piper and Jenny up.

[thetriforever]

I am sorry they are short but I have things to do. If you want me to cotinue then write back

[hollypop]

I really love that you're taking the character of 'Jenny' and bringing a new aspect to her.

I'd really like to read more but please, take your time - writing is such a fun challenge. If you don't have the time to post right away, that's okay.

[thetriforever]

Yeah, I have a new reader!
Sorry it has been along time.
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Prue and Phoebe in the Manor (attic)
Piper and Jenny still recoring in the living room-

"So, find anything abot that red guy", Phoebe asked Prue, then she added "I wonder why he kills kids for no apperent reason?"
"Not for any reason", replied Prue, "It says here that this demon, Thade,an upper level demon, steals childrens souls by burning them. He steals their souls for their youth and as long as he has the souls he is practicly imortal".
"Is there a vanquish or summoning spell?" Phoebe asked.
Prue fliping the paige replied "Um, No it doesn't look like it."
"Let's get to work then.Where's some paper" Phoebe asked.

FadeOut

An Hour later-

"Done?" asks Phoebe.
"Almost." Prue responded, OK done," she said after bottling the poition to summon Thade. The two walked down the steps and walked by the still frozen Dan, out of their house and into their neighbor's.
"Ready," said Piper standing up.
"You aren't going to freeze her," said Prue straying off topic ang looking at Jenny.
"No, she siad she wants to see this, and she does have a right to, the demon did knock her unconcious." Piper stated
"All right" Prue said.
All three started chanting togther
"Spirt of dark, Demon of night,He who kills just to have life,
The power of three, now summons thee
Come to us so we can clame victory"
All of a sudden a ball of red shoots in the room. In a deep voice he says " Oh look I see my trophey again this time I will kill you." He started walking twords her and Jenny yelled "get away" in a terified voice and moved back. Then the demon all of a sudden banged against the wall.
"Prue" said Piper,"Did you do that?"

[Jamison]

Nicely done...I always wondered what happened to Jenny...lol

[thetriforever]

Im sorry I can't write my story but maybe tomarrow by the lalest it will be Sat morn. before I can write something that will keep you reading. Keep cheking in and be free to give me suggestions.
Triquetrapo3pppp

[jules1]

very interesting, please continue!

[thetriforever]

Hey everyone I dont know if I am going to have time to post evey week. I see I have some new readers. And thats not all that happened.
Dont know how long this will be. I have to leave for a funeral in a while.


Manor (evryone with Dan unfrozen)-


"What in the hell just happened?", Phobe asked Piper.
"I think we have ourselves a new witch", Piper told her sister, "I wonder If Leo knew about this, LEO!!!!!!!!!!."
Leo apered before them in a couple of secons. "Piper," he said, "You know I can't be here all the time, and I was just in a meeting with my boses."
"Yeah, well I have a bigger problem." she snapped, "Did you know anything about a new witch?"
"No. Who is it?" he asked
"Me," Jenny said walking around the corner, "So what power do I have? Can I blow people up? 'Cause I know someone who I want to" she said thinking of her science teacher.
"We think you have telekinesis, the power to move things with your mind." Piper told her.
Leo all of a sudden looks up and says "I have to go. There calling."
In a flash of bright light Leo vanishes.
Dan barges in on the conversation and says "You people are all crazy come on Jenny lets go home."
"Piper freeze him." said Prue quikly just as he got up.
Fade out


Demon world-

Thade says "I didn't know she ways a witch, my lord. Please trust me.
"How can I trust you when you are a lying cheating backstabing demon whose asistance I need only to find the carmed ones but instead goes around feeding on children in broad daylight." a shady figure says.
"Thats it I have found the Charmed Ones.

[thetriforever]

I really could use some help If anyone wants to post then feel free to

[thetriforever]

5 minutes later

Leo came back in a great show of blue lights, and looked at Dan who was still frozen , and said "Man how can she like this man" under his breath. "Well it looks like they are sending a demon after you four..."
"You four there is only three charmed ones remember the power of three?" Piper enterupted
"You three plus Jenny means four doesn't it?!"
"How can they send a demon after a witch whoose power haven't came into grasp yet without knowing that she is even a witch."
"Huh", said Phoebe confused.
How do you know that they all know that Jenny is a witch, unles thst demon is helping them but didn't the book say he worked alone?" Piper explained.
"Uh," said Prue, "you might want to think that over Piper" pointing behind her.
And, of course she was pointing to, you know who (but Piper didn't, that is until she turned around.) behind her. Piper all of a sudden turned around and kicked Thade right in the face and made him fall back a couple of feet. Thade rising to his feet said "Just give me the witch and I'll leave you alone."
You want me well come and get me" Jenny said coming out of nowhere.

[thetriforever]

Then Thade turned around and vanished. Jenny said "that was all, he didn't even attack..."
Thade glimored in and grabbed Jenny with a dagger under her throat. "Anyone moves and she dies, here and now. You three witches are some of the easiest people to fool...What are you doing witch?" he said with question.
Jenny then apeared out of no-where from her body
"Ha, so you can astral project, What use will your spirit be if you dont have a body to live in" he said starting to slit her throat.
"No stop!!!" Prue called out, "kill... kill me instead."
"So the charmed ones eldest sister wants to exchage her life for the girls. I knew you where weak. If that's want you want I guess I can grant you that wish."
"Prue," exclaimed Jenny, "don't do this. It's not your battle to fight its mine." she stated with a few tears dripping down her face.
"If there's one thing I've learned is that you can't be afraid of death. You have to be strong and vanquish him after I...I..."
"You die," Thade laughs out," you know you cant get me vanquished without the power of three and your time has ran out. Oh, and another thing, don't tell me your plans to vanquish me." He then walked over and without strugle he took the dagger and pluged it into Prue's heart. Immediatly she went limp and fell to the floor. At that he was gone.
"Prue, No, come on you cant... cant" on that sentence she broke down and infront of Jenny, Phoebe, and Leo, and she started to cry.

[thetriforever]

Write back if you want me to continue
And I need some ideas you see I am getting slower

[prue]

not bad... i do hope you plan to bring prue back to life!

[thetriforever]

Dont worry Im in her Fan Club you think I would do that to her
So what if I might you dont have to know the deatails



Underworld-
"I did it the job is complete now give me the powers that you promised me" Thade told the source.
"All in good time all in good time" the shadow figre said, "go and finish the job it should be easy, now that the eldest is gone.
"You told me that I had to kill one of them.
"Go before I vanquish you" the source commanded.
In a cloud of black Thade vanished.


Manor-
"Come on, come on you cant be dead. Heal!" Leo demanded.
"Leo, would you give it up theres only one way to save her" Phoebe said crossly, ''We have to vanquish Thade."
Its all my falt I should have never gotten these powers Jenny said.
No, its not your fault, sweety, you didn't have any control over what happens, Piper said sounding enthusiastic.
Thade come crashing in the door (for the second time)
"Damn it" Piper said loudly


Sorry I got to go Ill try to post something tommarow

[prue]

look, i was just making a comment. i wasn't trying to offend you or anything.

as for your story, it looks good.. as i mentioned earlier. and take your time. a great story takes time, and life sometimes gets in the way. i look forward to your next posting. *smiles*

[thetriforever]

Sorry if you think I was, I mean I wasn't and you didn't read it in the right manor. I just mean that I wouldn't do that untill the time is right and maybe just maybe then anst like her and I wouldn't do that to her~ And again, SORRY if you thought I was being a little rude, wich I probobaly was when I wrote it but I didn't mean it in an offensive way
And I need some critisism!!!!!!!!!

[thetriforever]

"Oh, look at the little witches. They all gathered round the dead body You know she's not coming back.... Ever... unless"
"Unless what you sick..." Piper interupted, only to be interupted by Jenny, "Take me instead, give her back her life."
"Brave little witch, arent you, Couldnt do that if I wanted to, know could I"
All seemed hopeless, like, like they were going to die, all of them, but then Jenny remembered something, something that would turn out to be a spell, that she created while she was dreaming, which the dream was actually a preminition of her saying the spell(confusing right)
Demon that kills, and lives to tell,
I burn your flesh along with this spell
Your body no longer be, Your spirit now, let be free
No one sees it again, till time comes to an end
Destroy it and take it away from me

Thades body caught on fire, he screamed, and vanished to the place of eternal deaths, in the bible it is forseede as lake of flaming sulfer, that the devil is thrown into. Prue's body then magickly heals and she becomes one with the mortal plane again, I guess I could put it.
She mumbles without hesitation "that son of a bit**, he's such a..... oh, uh hi," she says looking at Jenny.
Piper brakes out laughing and runs to her sister to help her up.

[hollypop]

pretty good

I really liked your story.

I'm really glad that you didn't give up on it. I know it can be hard to think up ideas but there is no time limit for posting an update. Sometimes it's good to leave us readers 'hanging' for awhile