Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Mar 20, 2006 16:50:59 GMT -5
Here is a new story I worte about a week ago. I hope you all like it.
The charmed ones do not belong to me.
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Chapter 1: Piper's death
Halliwell Manor: Int. & Ext.
Prue Halliwell was panicking. Her younger sister was just shot in the chest and she doesn’t know what to do. She was taking in deep coarse breaths, trying to control herself and to help her sister.
“Your going to be okay!” Prue cries, caressing her sister’s head in her hands’.
“Prue..,” Piper whispers.
Prue lifts her sister gently off the floor and runs to the front door. She tries to help her sister walk down the front steps but her feet drag.
Reporters from all different stations are gathering around Prue and Piper, asking all sorts of questions. Prue opens the back door of the car and lies her across the back seat.
Prue gets very frustrated as pain and anger fills her heart.
“Move!” Prue demands, holding her head in her hands.
“What’s wrong Miss Halliwell? Is everything all right?” A reporter asks quickly.
Reporters continuously get in her way and Prue can no longer take it. She flings her arms sending reporters and people who are standing by onto cars and the streets. Once the area is clear Prue jumps into her car and drives away quickly.
San Francisco Memorial Hospital: Int.
Prue is running along the corridor as the doctors and nurses push Piper through some doors and into the emergency room.
“Piper your going to be okay, they are going to help you!” Prue stutters, pushing Piper’s hair out of her face.
“Prue…,” Piper stutters. “I’m cold…”
“Leo!” Prue yells, as tears flow down her face.
Prue looks into Piper’s eyes.
“I love you,” Piper whispers, as her heart beat flattens on the monitor.
The nurses quickly rush to the monitor and grab the paddles. They press them against her and give her a shock.
Prue is standing on the side crying histeracally.
After two more paddles the doctor stops and looks at the clock.
I’m sorry she’s gone!”
“No…No…she can’t be gone!” Prue screams.
Prue runs over to wear Piper’s lifeless body and places her hand on her face.
The doctor and the nurses stand near by.
“Get out!” Prue demands coldly. “Get out!” Prue screams.
The doctor and the nurses rush out of the emergency room.
Prue is standing near Piper’s body when Leo orbs in.
“Leo. They killed her!” Prue says slowly. ‘
“What?!” Leo exclaims, rushing to Piper’s side and crying.
“We need to do something!” Prue exclaims. “Go back to Phoebe!” Prue demands.
Leo stands there with shock, looking at Piper.
“Now!” Prue yells.
Leo orbs out.
:Prue walks up to Piper’s body. “Don’t worry Piper, everything will be okay, we’ll fix this.”
Seconds later men rush in from the FBI with shields and guns in hand.
“Miss…hold up your hands and no one will get hurt,” a cop says.
Prue looks angrily at him and flings him through the swinging doors of the emergency room. Another cop comes in and she throws her arm and he flies into the room. Prue runs to the door and puts a metal bar through the doors.
Prue goes to Piper again and places her hand on her forehead.
On the other side of the wall a cop is getting a heat sensory gun ready to shoot Prue.
Prue is pacing back and forth in the emergency room. She places her hand on her forehead with frustration and depression.
“Target ready?” A cop asks.
“Yes sir,” the FBI cop replies.
“Alright, take the shot,” The cop demands.
The FBI cop aims the gun at Prue, through the wall. The cop presses the trigger, releasing the bullet towards Prue. Prue senses it but can’t stop it in time. However, the entire room suddenly freezes. Not only is the bullet froze in mid-air, but the whole hospital and outside of the hospital was frozen too.
Prue takes a few steps back with fear evident on her face as she telekinetically flicks the bullet that was two inches from her face.
Prue recover quickly and her instincts make her turn towards Piper, thinking that some how her little sister came back to life and froze the room just in time. However, she hasn’t yet realized that San Francisco was entirely frozen, and Piper doesn’t have that kind of power.
“Piper?” Prue gently asks, approaching her sister. Prue touches her sister’s neck where her pulse would be and she doesn’t feel anything. Her face was still a bale blue as ever. Prue knew she couldn’t have done it when she glanced at her sister. There was no way that she froze the room. The only question was who did, and who else could have froze the room?
Prue glances around the room again. “What’s going on?” Prue wonders.
For some unknown reason Prue crosses to the other side of the room and looks out the window. There was no movement outside. People who were walking on the side walks were frozen in place and the traffic lights were green and all cars weren’t moving. She also looked straight ahead and there were birds frozen in mid-air.
“What the hell is going on?” Prue exclaims aloud, getting ready in battle stance.
“I thought you would ask that question,” a young girl announced.
“Who said that?” Prue questions, looking around the small room but she doesn’t see anything.
“I did,” a young girl replies, appearing suddenly next to Piper, and a sadden expression stretches across her pretty features when she looks at the lifeless body of Piper. She had shoulder length, brown hair and brown eyes.
Prue lifts her hand to telekinetically fly her into a wall.
“Please don’t,” The young girl pleads. “I’m only here to help!”
Prue lowers her hand and looks at the young girl cautiously.
Prue slowly walks toward her.
The young girl continues to stand her ground but then places her right hand on Piper’s wound area and her left hand behind her back.
“What are doing?” Prue asks quickly, not knowing what to do.
“What your brother-in-law couldn’t do,” The young girl replies quietly.
At that short moment Piper’s body begins to glow and within short seconds Piper’s entire body is engulfed in bright, golden light.
Prue is in such shock that she stands to watch.
The light begins to fade and the young girl pulls her hand away from Piper and takes a few steps to the side.
Prue walks slowly toward her sister when Piper gasps for air then begins to cough, her color in her skin starts to turn pink and she sits up.
“Piper!” Prue yells out with joy, then runs to her little sister and embraces in a hug.
“I’m okay,” Piper replies happily, glad to be alive.
The young girl smiles happily, glad that Piper is okay.
Prue turns to The young girl. “Who are you?” Prue questions.
“You do not need to know that right now,” The young girl replies. “Stay her and I’ll go get your white lighter, your sister, and her boyfriend.
“Prue?” Piper says.
“yeah?” Prue asks turning to her sister.
“What happened?” Piper asks.
“Umm,” Prue ponders. You almost died but this girl”-
Prue turns to where the girl was standing seconds ago but she was gone.
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Did you like it? Please tell me what you thought if you would like me to continue!
[glow=red,2,300]All Hell Breaks loose: Time Not Reversed[/glow]
The charmed ones do not belong to me.
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Chapter 1: Piper's death
Halliwell Manor: Int. & Ext.
Prue Halliwell was panicking. Her younger sister was just shot in the chest and she doesn’t know what to do. She was taking in deep coarse breaths, trying to control herself and to help her sister.
“Your going to be okay!” Prue cries, caressing her sister’s head in her hands’.
“Prue..,” Piper whispers.
Prue lifts her sister gently off the floor and runs to the front door. She tries to help her sister walk down the front steps but her feet drag.
Reporters from all different stations are gathering around Prue and Piper, asking all sorts of questions. Prue opens the back door of the car and lies her across the back seat.
Prue gets very frustrated as pain and anger fills her heart.
“Move!” Prue demands, holding her head in her hands.
“What’s wrong Miss Halliwell? Is everything all right?” A reporter asks quickly.
Reporters continuously get in her way and Prue can no longer take it. She flings her arms sending reporters and people who are standing by onto cars and the streets. Once the area is clear Prue jumps into her car and drives away quickly.
San Francisco Memorial Hospital: Int.
Prue is running along the corridor as the doctors and nurses push Piper through some doors and into the emergency room.
“Piper your going to be okay, they are going to help you!” Prue stutters, pushing Piper’s hair out of her face.
“Prue…,” Piper stutters. “I’m cold…”
“Leo!” Prue yells, as tears flow down her face.
Prue looks into Piper’s eyes.
“I love you,” Piper whispers, as her heart beat flattens on the monitor.
The nurses quickly rush to the monitor and grab the paddles. They press them against her and give her a shock.
Prue is standing on the side crying histeracally.
After two more paddles the doctor stops and looks at the clock.
I’m sorry she’s gone!”
“No…No…she can’t be gone!” Prue screams.
Prue runs over to wear Piper’s lifeless body and places her hand on her face.
The doctor and the nurses stand near by.
“Get out!” Prue demands coldly. “Get out!” Prue screams.
The doctor and the nurses rush out of the emergency room.
Prue is standing near Piper’s body when Leo orbs in.
“Leo. They killed her!” Prue says slowly. ‘
“What?!” Leo exclaims, rushing to Piper’s side and crying.
“We need to do something!” Prue exclaims. “Go back to Phoebe!” Prue demands.
Leo stands there with shock, looking at Piper.
“Now!” Prue yells.
Leo orbs out.
:Prue walks up to Piper’s body. “Don’t worry Piper, everything will be okay, we’ll fix this.”
Seconds later men rush in from the FBI with shields and guns in hand.
“Miss…hold up your hands and no one will get hurt,” a cop says.
Prue looks angrily at him and flings him through the swinging doors of the emergency room. Another cop comes in and she throws her arm and he flies into the room. Prue runs to the door and puts a metal bar through the doors.
Prue goes to Piper again and places her hand on her forehead.
On the other side of the wall a cop is getting a heat sensory gun ready to shoot Prue.
Prue is pacing back and forth in the emergency room. She places her hand on her forehead with frustration and depression.
“Target ready?” A cop asks.
“Yes sir,” the FBI cop replies.
“Alright, take the shot,” The cop demands.
The FBI cop aims the gun at Prue, through the wall. The cop presses the trigger, releasing the bullet towards Prue. Prue senses it but can’t stop it in time. However, the entire room suddenly freezes. Not only is the bullet froze in mid-air, but the whole hospital and outside of the hospital was frozen too.
Prue takes a few steps back with fear evident on her face as she telekinetically flicks the bullet that was two inches from her face.
Prue recover quickly and her instincts make her turn towards Piper, thinking that some how her little sister came back to life and froze the room just in time. However, she hasn’t yet realized that San Francisco was entirely frozen, and Piper doesn’t have that kind of power.
“Piper?” Prue gently asks, approaching her sister. Prue touches her sister’s neck where her pulse would be and she doesn’t feel anything. Her face was still a bale blue as ever. Prue knew she couldn’t have done it when she glanced at her sister. There was no way that she froze the room. The only question was who did, and who else could have froze the room?
Prue glances around the room again. “What’s going on?” Prue wonders.
For some unknown reason Prue crosses to the other side of the room and looks out the window. There was no movement outside. People who were walking on the side walks were frozen in place and the traffic lights were green and all cars weren’t moving. She also looked straight ahead and there were birds frozen in mid-air.
“What the hell is going on?” Prue exclaims aloud, getting ready in battle stance.
“I thought you would ask that question,” a young girl announced.
“Who said that?” Prue questions, looking around the small room but she doesn’t see anything.
“I did,” a young girl replies, appearing suddenly next to Piper, and a sadden expression stretches across her pretty features when she looks at the lifeless body of Piper. She had shoulder length, brown hair and brown eyes.
Prue lifts her hand to telekinetically fly her into a wall.
“Please don’t,” The young girl pleads. “I’m only here to help!”
Prue lowers her hand and looks at the young girl cautiously.
Prue slowly walks toward her.
The young girl continues to stand her ground but then places her right hand on Piper’s wound area and her left hand behind her back.
“What are doing?” Prue asks quickly, not knowing what to do.
“What your brother-in-law couldn’t do,” The young girl replies quietly.
At that short moment Piper’s body begins to glow and within short seconds Piper’s entire body is engulfed in bright, golden light.
Prue is in such shock that she stands to watch.
The light begins to fade and the young girl pulls her hand away from Piper and takes a few steps to the side.
Prue walks slowly toward her sister when Piper gasps for air then begins to cough, her color in her skin starts to turn pink and she sits up.
“Piper!” Prue yells out with joy, then runs to her little sister and embraces in a hug.
“I’m okay,” Piper replies happily, glad to be alive.
The young girl smiles happily, glad that Piper is okay.
Prue turns to The young girl. “Who are you?” Prue questions.
“You do not need to know that right now,” The young girl replies. “Stay her and I’ll go get your white lighter, your sister, and her boyfriend.
“Prue?” Piper says.
“yeah?” Prue asks turning to her sister.
“What happened?” Piper asks.
“Umm,” Prue ponders. You almost died but this girl”-
Prue turns to where the girl was standing seconds ago but she was gone.
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