Post by charmedfreak92 on Mar 28, 2006 8:49:52 GMT -5
Please leave comments. Even if you hate it. That way I could improve!
I was bored during school today, so I made up this fanfic. It is not dont yet. It is an alternate version of Generation Hex, taking place right after Paige's wedding in 8.16!
NOTE: I decided to make this alternate version a two-parter, and it might even become a three parter. After this I'll try to make an alternate series of episodes up until the last episode of Charmed, and then maybe even do an original spin-off fanfic series, inspired by Mars Investigations' (Brynn's) idea.
8.17A: Generation Hex, Part One!
TEASER:
CUT TO: Underworld cave, palace-like.
(Candor is sitting in a throne. A minion, Bakshor, shimmers in. Bakshor bows down.)
CANDOR
Speak.
BAKSHOR
My liege, we have an issue.
CANDOR
Rise.
(BAKSHOR rises.)
CANDOR
You may go on.
BAKSHOR
She is saying the dragon has been defeated; that, The Source's essense has joined that of Xar's, Asmodeous', and Belial.
CANDOR
That would make them more powerful than me! Blasphemy!
(BAKSHOR cowers.)
BAKSHOR
Sir, I speak only of what I hear. The Looker is saying that this new...entity, is more powerful that the Seer/Source's fetus itself. More powerful than The Charmed Ones, The Key, The Ultimate, and The Twice Blessed...combined! She also saw that it was someone close to a Charmed One.
CANDOR
Who?
CUT TO: HENRY's apartment. PAIGE is laying in bed slightly away.
Suddenly, something enters HENRY's body. He moans slightly. PAIGE stirs.
CUT TO: HENRY's bathroom. Suddenly, he yanks his head up, and yells at the top of his lungs. PAIGE orbs out. His eyes fill with fire, turn to dark red, then black, and return to normal color.
Voice Over:
BAKSHOR
Yes, my leige. We are searching.
(CUT TO: Closeup of HENRY's face.)
HENRY
This shall be interesting.
(HENRY menicingly laughs.)
CUT TO: PAIGE's room.
(PAIGE orbs in, onto her bed. A ray of sunshine dances in her face, as her eyes flutter open.)
PAIGE
Henry?
(PAIGE feels around for him. Awkwardly, she gets up, and looks around.)
PAIGE
How did I get here?
CUT TO: Manor Porch.
PIPER
Coming.
(PIPER opens door.)
PIPER
May I help you?
CUT TO: Shot of two Teenagers are there. One slightly bleeding.)
TEEN1
Hello. We are looking for Professor-- I mean Master-- Leo Wyatt.
END OF TEASER.
CREDITS ROLL.
ACTS ONE TO FOUR:
(PIPER chokes up)
PIPER
Who may I ask is speaking?
CUT TO: Stairway.
(PAIGE is talking to herself.)
PAIGE
So I was at Henry's house yesterday, we had fun, we went to sleep. At which point did I come back home?
(PAIGE is on the first floor.)
PAIGE
Piper! You home?
PIPER
Paige? Weren't you at Henry's?
PAIGE
Don't ask. Why are you eyes teary eyed?
PIPER
Oh, its nothing. Paige, meet Jen, Ryan. Jen, Ryan, this is my sister Paige.
JEN
What an honor: to meet two Charmed Ones in one day!
PAIGE
Thanks. Are you here for Phoebe?
RYAN
No, we're here for Master Wyatt. We used to be his students before...Magic School (Not!warts :rolleyes )...yea...
(PIPER chokes up again, while PAIGE gets teary eyed.)
PIPER
I see. You might want to come in. Paige, I'm gonna go to my room for a few minutes. I feel kind of tired.
PAIGE
You just woke up?
(A tear drops from PIPER's face, visible to PAIGE, but not to JEN and RYAN. )
PAIGE
Oh. Yeah, yeah. I'll try to meet you up there as soon as I can.
CUT TO: PHOEBE's apartment.
(PIPER is shown getting orange juice out of the fridge. She is about to take out a glass, but then...what the hell?...just gulps a few. COOP "cupids" in behind PHOEBE.)
COOP
Phoebe!
(PHOEBE spills the carton of O.J.)
PHOEBE
Jesus, Coop!
(COOP puts on a mysterious smile)
COOP
It worked!
PHOEBE
Umm, okay?
COOP
I found a match for you. He is powerful, evil, tall, and well, powerful.
(PHOEBE laughs.)
PHOEBE
Hey, that is so funny! You're describing a demon!
(COOP changes form...into CANDOR!)
CUT TO: PIPER's room.
(PIPER gets out a portait of herself and LEO, on their late honeymoon.)
PIPER
Leo. Where are you?
(PIPER starts crying.)
PIPER
We killed the Triad, damnit!
CUT TO: PHOEBE's apartment.
CANDOR (mockingly)
That's right, My Charmedness!
(PhOEBE looks up)
PHOEBE
PAIGE! Oh, god.
(PhOEBE gets up and back kicks the X-Triads face. PAIGE orbs in. CANDOR staggers back.)
CANDOR
Time to pay!
PAIGE
Phoebe!
(CANDOR freezes PAIGE.)
PHOEBE
What did you do to her?!
CANDOR
Nothing. That is, compared to what she is about to do to you.
Cut to: PPAIGE through PHOEBE's eyes.
(PAIGE unfreezes.)
PAIGE
You always....
(PAIGE TKO's PHOEBE into fridge. PHOEBE starts bleeding in her back.)
PAIGE
Gotta leave us....
(PAIGE lifts PHOEBE into air, telikinetikally orb choking her.)
PAIGE
For your stupid, men. There was Cole, then Jason, then that stupid Leslie. What did you even see in him? Then Drake. Dex. COOP!
(A beat.)
PAIGE
Well, I've had enough!
CUT TO: Normal view of room.
(Shot of PAIGE, still frozen, who hasnt even moved ever since she was frozen? Is PHOEBE hallucinating?)
CANDOR
This is so fun!
(Allusion PAIGE turns to side-kick PHOEBE in stomach. CANDOR raises his hand, and PAIGE stops five inches from impact.)
PHOEBE
What is going on? What the hell did you do to my sister?!
CANDOR
While your sister keeps you in the air, listen very carefully.
(PHOEBE tearfully nods.)
CANDOR
I need you to remember back four years ago. Right after you chose your sisters over Belthazor, and gave up your name as Queen.
PHOEBE
What does this have to do with me?
CANDOR
SHUT UP AND LISTEN
(CANDOR lights up an energy ball in his hand. PHOEBE squirms.)
CANDOR
Your Ex never died, as his soul kept him alive, but bearly, and he eventually got all his powers back, and collected other demons' powers too. Then, remember, he escaped the wasteland, and you turned into a mermaid, and you know the rest. You know that part.
(PHOEBE puts on a confused face, afraid to talk.)
CANDOR
Lets just say, that the same thing happened to The Source that you just recently vanquished last year, along with the two Ex-Triad Members, and A Council. Before the Triad, we were the Council, but then Xar, the Council member, turned rebellious, and we kicked him out; thus, we were known as the Triad. This is the best part: While The Source, and the other demons I just told you about were in the wasteland, the Source was able to stay alive, somehow, although he doesn't have a soul. I guess he is powerful.
PHOEBE
And the others?
CANDOR
They joined the essences of the Source, but lost their bodies, which makes them more powerful...than you, or me. They escaped the wasteland, and my Looker, you know, my Seer, predicted that it would possess someone close to you, or your sisters.
PHOEBE
I don't have a clue as to who it possessed.
(Behind CANDOR, visible to PHOEBE, but not to CANDOR, PAIGE unfreezes.)
CANDOR
Then its time to die, Phoebe.
PAIGE
Over my dead body!
(CANDOR turns around.)
CUT TO: HENRY's apartment.
HENRY
I have all my credentials on that resume, and my powers are greater than The Last Source's and Queens powers combined!
THE LOOKER
And what great magic do you possess, exactly?
HENRY
Your're a Seer, the famous Looker. Check yourself.
THE LOOKER's eyes turn to mist.
(Someone enters the apartment, and it is shown that it is JEN, RYAN, and PIPER.)
PAIGE
Are you here? Paige? Henry?
HENRY
Piper, what are you doing here?
PIPER
I'm looking for Paige. Is she here.
HENRY
You just made a grave mistake coming here.
(PIPER looks at him in confusion.)
RYAN
Meaning?
(THE LOOKER enters the room)
HENRY
What did you see?
PIPER
Hi, Im Piper. What's your name?
THE LOOKER
I saw, her demise, along with her sister.
PIPER
What?!
(HENRY looks at PIPER, and his eyes fill with hatred, and fire. Evilness fills his face, and HENRY's eyes turn dark red, and then back to normal.)
PIPER
Aw, crap. The Source.
HENRY
No. I'm more powerful. I, am the Entity.
CUT TO: PHOEBE's apartment.
(PHOEBE is next to PAIGE, and PAIGE is TKO'ing CANDOR into the wall. Then again. And Again….)
CANDOR
Enough!
(CANDOR forms an energyball, and throws it toward PHOEBE, who ducks, and PAIGE orbs it back to him.)
PAIGE
I guess its war.
CUT TO: Stairway. HENRY is chasing after JEN, RYAN, PIPER.
JEN (out of breath)
Who is that?
PIPER
That should, be my brother-in-law!
RYAN
But its not??
PIPER
I'm thinking.
CUT TO: Top of stairway. HENRY is throwing fireball after fireball towards PIPER.
Henry: Yo, PIPER. You wanna die like your mother?
(HENRY starts throwing Waterballs towards PIPER. RYAN is TKing them back.)
PIPER
Dont you dare talk about her!
CUT TO: HENRY chasing PIPER.
HENRY
Fine, maybe I'll just freeze you like Leo!
(HENRY switches to Iceballs, and blasts them towards the 3.)
PIPER
Please, stop! Paige!
CUT TO: PHOEBE's apartment.
(CANDOR continues throwing them towards PAIGE. PAIGE continues orbing them back, and TKOing things towards CANDOR, and CANDOR into furniture. CANDOR calls out for his minion, BAKSHOR.)
BAKSHOR
My liege.
CANDOR
Kill them all!
(PAIGE turns around towards BAKSHOR, and TKO's the fridge toward him.)
CANDOR
Foolish witch!
(CANDOR fires an energyball towards PHOEBE.)
PHOEBE
Paige!
(PAIGE turns around towards PHOEBE.)
PAIGE
NO!!
(The energy ball is inches away from PHOEBE. Everyone stops: PHOEBE in fear, PAIGE is panic, BAKSHOR in amazement, and CANDOR in excitement, when suddenly, out of instinct, PHOEBE levitates out of the way!
PHOEBE
My god! Its back!
(PHOEBE, realizing her advantage levitates, kicks BAKSHOR, CANDOR both with each one of her feet. Both are knocked out.)
CUT TO: PIPER, JEN, RYAN racing way from building, into a forest. HENRY is not to far behind.
(PIPER starts to lag behind.)
JEN
C'mon Piper. We're almost there.
RYAN, PIPER
To where?
JEN
My mother's. She's a powerful witch.
HENRY (shouting so Piper could hear her)
I got it, Eureaka! I'll just blast windballs towards you. You'll join your sister Prue in heaven, and woopdidoo!, you'll even die the same exact way!
(PIPER stops.)
PIPER
Now you've gone too far.
(PIPER blasts him. Then Again. Again. One more. Then another.)
CUT TO: PHOEBE's apartment.
(CANDOR and BAKSHOR are knocked out in the background.)
PAIGE (joking)
It's been one hell of a day, hasnt it, Pheebs?
PHOEBE
Yea. Umm, Paige? Was I hallucinating, or did you really call me a very *friendly* person for being away from you and Piper too much.
PAIGE
What?! No. I'd never say that. Everyone is searching for their lovemates.
PHOEBE
I'm so sorry, I never meant to.
PAIGE
No, no, no. I love you more than anything, sis.
PHOEBE
But the thing is that its true. I realize that Im searching for men too much these days, and if love is meant to find me, itll find me.
(PAIGE and PHOEBE smile.)
CUT TO: Middle of Forest.
(PIPER is blasting HENRY.)
PIPER
Paige! Where the hell are you?!
CUT TO: PHOEBE's apartment.
PHOEBE
Do you sense that? I think Piper's calling us. I guess I've earned empathy back too.
PAIGE (hearing PIPER's call)
Piper. She's in trouble. C'mon.
(They orb out.)
CUT TO: Forest.
(PAIGE, PHOEBE orb in. PIPER is blasting Henry continously.)
PAIGE
Stop, Piper! Henry!
(HENRY collapses.)
PAIGE
Henry!
(PAIGE rushes down to HENRY.)
PAIGE
Oh, god. No. Please. (She starts crying.)
PIPER
Paige, I'm sorry. Maybe it wasnt meant to be. He was destined for evil.
PAIGE
Noo! No! No!
(PAIGE falls onto HENRY’s chest, and sobs.)
END OF ACTS ONE TO FOUR.
END OF EPISODE.
TO BE CONTINUED.
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8.17B: Generation Hex, Part Two
TEASER:
CUT TO: Paige's Bedroom.
(Paige is crying, as she looks at a wedding picture of Henry and her.)
CUT TO: Generation Hex, Part One:
Piper: I'm sorry, Paige. Maybe it wasn't meant to be. He was destined for evil.
CUT TO: The 7 Year Witch:
Phoebe: We are blessed as witches, but cursed as women.
CUT TO: Paige's Room.
(Paige is still crying. Piper enters, with tears. Paige looks away.)
Piper: Look, I'm sorry.
(Piper sits on the bed. Paige turns around.)
Paige: You know, you'd think I'd actually find happiness. I get married one day, and everything all nice, and then I go to sleep. Next time I see him, he collapses. I don't get it. Why didn't he blow up?
(Paige turns around and falls into Piper's lap, sobbing.)
Piper: Oh, honey. It'll be okay. I promise you, if magic did this, we will fix it.
(Paige sobs.)
Piper: Look at me.
(Paige looks at her in the eyes.)
Piper: We will fix this!
CUT TO: Phoebe's Apartment.
(Bakshor is crawling over to a beaten up Candor.)
Bakshor: My liege. How can I help? How do you feel?
(Candor throws a waterball at Bakshor. Bakshor collapses and water consumes him. He melts into the ground, and the water flames up, leaving ashes behind.)
Candor: Like Hell.
(Candor looks at Bakshor's ashes.)
Candor: But don't worry, my friend. The half-blood will pay.
(Candor laughs, and ashes away.)
CU TO: Forest.
(The Entity escapes Henry's body. The Entity circles around Henry's body, whispering..)
The Entity: The oldest will die!
CUT TO: Underground Layer
(The Entity is seen merging into Candor's body. Candor smiles.)
Candor: They will all pay.
END OF TEASER.
CREDITS ROLL.
PARTS ONE TO FOUR:
(The Looker walks towards Henry, chanting something.)
The Looker: Actos Aboleos Rectar Asheres. Actos Aboleos Rectar Asheres.
(The Looker reaches Henry's dead body, and starts circling around him.)
The Looker: Actos Reviles Rector Aboleos.
(The Looker throws some ashes at him.)
CUT TO: The side of Henry's face.
(Feet walk past the screen, still circling around Henry. Ashes fall upon his face.
CUT TO: Directly about Henry's body.
(The Looker stops circling around Henry, and stops so that his face, and his legs are aligned proportionally with where she is standing.)
The Looker: Actos Reviles Revives Shaktoren. Shoterak Kalaken Actoren Revives!
(Henry's body rises into the air. The camera zooms in onto his face, and his eyes open.)
The Looker: It has begun.
Henry: Who are you? How did I get here? Am I dead?
CUT TO: Billie's Dormitory Room.
(There is music going on, with people dancing. While the party is going on, you see Billie kissing a guy.
Guy: Wow. You are so hott. And wild!
(They kiss some more.)
Billie: You wanna find out?
(Guy smiles. Billie's phone rings. Billie picks it up.)
Billie: Excuse me.
(Billie talks into phone.)
Billie: (Pause) Who died? (A pause) Oh god, I'll be right there.
(Billie puts away phone. )
Billie: Im sorry. I gotta go. It's a friend emergency.
(Billie leaves. You can see the same guy flirting with another girl passing by.)
CUT TO: Halliwell Manor.
(Billie emerges from a door, and meets Phoebe in living room.)
Billie: Okay, I was about to score. This better be good. Who are you?
Jen: Im Jen, this is Ryan. You may wanna sit down.
CUT TO: Stairway.
(Paige, Piper heading down stairs. 2 Demons shimmer in. Piper trys blasting him, but he only stumbles. Demon1 fires a water ball at Paige, while Paige TK splits it in half, sending them to both demons. The demons look like they blow up, but somehow really reconstitue like a Phoenix Witch.)
Paige: I've never seen that before. It looked like a ball of water?!
(They orb out.)
CUT TO: Halliwell Manor Living Room:
(They are discussing something.)
Billie: So these demons was torturing both of you, and you both escaped?
Ryan: But now there after us.
Phoebe, at Billie, sarcastically: Isn't this better than scoring?!
CUT TO: Paige, Piper orbing in.
(They look at Phoebe.)
Piper: We got attacked.
Paige: We're in trouble.
Piper: But they didnt look like they were after us.
(Jen and Ryan exchange glances)
CUT TO: MAGIC SCHOOL.
(2 Demons reconstitute, and angrily throw waterballs at furniture.)
Demon2: Those d**n Charmed Ones!
Demon1: Time for revenge.
Demon2: What do you have in mind?
(Demon1 smiles)
Demon1: If we get access to the Throne, all of the demons, from all over the Underworld will be by our side. Not even The Charmed Ones will be a threat once that happens. Besides, the Underworld is in chaos now, so who do we need to get past?
(Demon2 smiles, as Candor flames in)
Candor V.O: Me: The Intity. And thanks for the idea, but been there, done that! I am, after all, the former Source.
Demon1, realizing what's going on: My leige.
(Demon1 bows, Demon2 speaks up)
Demon2: Blasphemy. He's lying!
Demon1: No, he isn't.
Demon2, to Candor: Okay, fine, My liege. Prove it!
(Candor/The Entity's eyes flash with fire, Hatred, and that alone vanquishes Demon2.)
Candor: There you go. (to Demon1) You've just been upgraded. Consider yourself as the Brains behind my Master Plan.
CUT TO: Halliwell Manor.
..........
NOT DONE!
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I was bored during school today, so I made up this fanfic. It is not dont yet. It is an alternate version of Generation Hex, taking place right after Paige's wedding in 8.16!
NOTE: I decided to make this alternate version a two-parter, and it might even become a three parter. After this I'll try to make an alternate series of episodes up until the last episode of Charmed, and then maybe even do an original spin-off fanfic series, inspired by Mars Investigations' (Brynn's) idea.
8.17A: Generation Hex, Part One!
TEASER:
CUT TO: Underworld cave, palace-like.
(Candor is sitting in a throne. A minion, Bakshor, shimmers in. Bakshor bows down.)
CANDOR
Speak.
BAKSHOR
My liege, we have an issue.
CANDOR
Rise.
(BAKSHOR rises.)
CANDOR
You may go on.
BAKSHOR
She is saying the dragon has been defeated; that, The Source's essense has joined that of Xar's, Asmodeous', and Belial.
CANDOR
That would make them more powerful than me! Blasphemy!
(BAKSHOR cowers.)
BAKSHOR
Sir, I speak only of what I hear. The Looker is saying that this new...entity, is more powerful that the Seer/Source's fetus itself. More powerful than The Charmed Ones, The Key, The Ultimate, and The Twice Blessed...combined! She also saw that it was someone close to a Charmed One.
CANDOR
Who?
CUT TO: HENRY's apartment. PAIGE is laying in bed slightly away.
Suddenly, something enters HENRY's body. He moans slightly. PAIGE stirs.
CUT TO: HENRY's bathroom. Suddenly, he yanks his head up, and yells at the top of his lungs. PAIGE orbs out. His eyes fill with fire, turn to dark red, then black, and return to normal color.
Voice Over:
BAKSHOR
Yes, my leige. We are searching.
(CUT TO: Closeup of HENRY's face.)
HENRY
This shall be interesting.
(HENRY menicingly laughs.)
CUT TO: PAIGE's room.
(PAIGE orbs in, onto her bed. A ray of sunshine dances in her face, as her eyes flutter open.)
PAIGE
Henry?
(PAIGE feels around for him. Awkwardly, she gets up, and looks around.)
PAIGE
How did I get here?
CUT TO: Manor Porch.
PIPER
Coming.
(PIPER opens door.)
PIPER
May I help you?
CUT TO: Shot of two Teenagers are there. One slightly bleeding.)
TEEN1
Hello. We are looking for Professor-- I mean Master-- Leo Wyatt.
END OF TEASER.
CREDITS ROLL.
ACTS ONE TO FOUR:
(PIPER chokes up)
PIPER
Who may I ask is speaking?
CUT TO: Stairway.
(PAIGE is talking to herself.)
PAIGE
So I was at Henry's house yesterday, we had fun, we went to sleep. At which point did I come back home?
(PAIGE is on the first floor.)
PAIGE
Piper! You home?
PIPER
Paige? Weren't you at Henry's?
PAIGE
Don't ask. Why are you eyes teary eyed?
PIPER
Oh, its nothing. Paige, meet Jen, Ryan. Jen, Ryan, this is my sister Paige.
JEN
What an honor: to meet two Charmed Ones in one day!
PAIGE
Thanks. Are you here for Phoebe?
RYAN
No, we're here for Master Wyatt. We used to be his students before...Magic School (Not!warts :rolleyes )...yea...
(PIPER chokes up again, while PAIGE gets teary eyed.)
PIPER
I see. You might want to come in. Paige, I'm gonna go to my room for a few minutes. I feel kind of tired.
PAIGE
You just woke up?
(A tear drops from PIPER's face, visible to PAIGE, but not to JEN and RYAN. )
PAIGE
Oh. Yeah, yeah. I'll try to meet you up there as soon as I can.
CUT TO: PHOEBE's apartment.
(PIPER is shown getting orange juice out of the fridge. She is about to take out a glass, but then...what the hell?...just gulps a few. COOP "cupids" in behind PHOEBE.)
COOP
Phoebe!
(PHOEBE spills the carton of O.J.)
PHOEBE
Jesus, Coop!
(COOP puts on a mysterious smile)
COOP
It worked!
PHOEBE
Umm, okay?
COOP
I found a match for you. He is powerful, evil, tall, and well, powerful.
(PHOEBE laughs.)
PHOEBE
Hey, that is so funny! You're describing a demon!
(COOP changes form...into CANDOR!)
CUT TO: PIPER's room.
(PIPER gets out a portait of herself and LEO, on their late honeymoon.)
PIPER
Leo. Where are you?
(PIPER starts crying.)
PIPER
We killed the Triad, damnit!
CUT TO: PHOEBE's apartment.
CANDOR (mockingly)
That's right, My Charmedness!
(PhOEBE looks up)
PHOEBE
PAIGE! Oh, god.
(PhOEBE gets up and back kicks the X-Triads face. PAIGE orbs in. CANDOR staggers back.)
CANDOR
Time to pay!
PAIGE
Phoebe!
(CANDOR freezes PAIGE.)
PHOEBE
What did you do to her?!
CANDOR
Nothing. That is, compared to what she is about to do to you.
Cut to: PPAIGE through PHOEBE's eyes.
(PAIGE unfreezes.)
PAIGE
You always....
(PAIGE TKO's PHOEBE into fridge. PHOEBE starts bleeding in her back.)
PAIGE
Gotta leave us....
(PAIGE lifts PHOEBE into air, telikinetikally orb choking her.)
PAIGE
For your stupid, men. There was Cole, then Jason, then that stupid Leslie. What did you even see in him? Then Drake. Dex. COOP!
(A beat.)
PAIGE
Well, I've had enough!
CUT TO: Normal view of room.
(Shot of PAIGE, still frozen, who hasnt even moved ever since she was frozen? Is PHOEBE hallucinating?)
CANDOR
This is so fun!
(Allusion PAIGE turns to side-kick PHOEBE in stomach. CANDOR raises his hand, and PAIGE stops five inches from impact.)
PHOEBE
What is going on? What the hell did you do to my sister?!
CANDOR
While your sister keeps you in the air, listen very carefully.
(PHOEBE tearfully nods.)
CANDOR
I need you to remember back four years ago. Right after you chose your sisters over Belthazor, and gave up your name as Queen.
PHOEBE
What does this have to do with me?
CANDOR
SHUT UP AND LISTEN
(CANDOR lights up an energy ball in his hand. PHOEBE squirms.)
CANDOR
Your Ex never died, as his soul kept him alive, but bearly, and he eventually got all his powers back, and collected other demons' powers too. Then, remember, he escaped the wasteland, and you turned into a mermaid, and you know the rest. You know that part.
(PHOEBE puts on a confused face, afraid to talk.)
CANDOR
Lets just say, that the same thing happened to The Source that you just recently vanquished last year, along with the two Ex-Triad Members, and A Council. Before the Triad, we were the Council, but then Xar, the Council member, turned rebellious, and we kicked him out; thus, we were known as the Triad. This is the best part: While The Source, and the other demons I just told you about were in the wasteland, the Source was able to stay alive, somehow, although he doesn't have a soul. I guess he is powerful.
PHOEBE
And the others?
CANDOR
They joined the essences of the Source, but lost their bodies, which makes them more powerful...than you, or me. They escaped the wasteland, and my Looker, you know, my Seer, predicted that it would possess someone close to you, or your sisters.
PHOEBE
I don't have a clue as to who it possessed.
(Behind CANDOR, visible to PHOEBE, but not to CANDOR, PAIGE unfreezes.)
CANDOR
Then its time to die, Phoebe.
PAIGE
Over my dead body!
(CANDOR turns around.)
CUT TO: HENRY's apartment.
HENRY
I have all my credentials on that resume, and my powers are greater than The Last Source's and Queens powers combined!
THE LOOKER
And what great magic do you possess, exactly?
HENRY
Your're a Seer, the famous Looker. Check yourself.
THE LOOKER's eyes turn to mist.
(Someone enters the apartment, and it is shown that it is JEN, RYAN, and PIPER.)
PAIGE
Are you here? Paige? Henry?
HENRY
Piper, what are you doing here?
PIPER
I'm looking for Paige. Is she here.
HENRY
You just made a grave mistake coming here.
(PIPER looks at him in confusion.)
RYAN
Meaning?
(THE LOOKER enters the room)
HENRY
What did you see?
PIPER
Hi, Im Piper. What's your name?
THE LOOKER
I saw, her demise, along with her sister.
PIPER
What?!
(HENRY looks at PIPER, and his eyes fill with hatred, and fire. Evilness fills his face, and HENRY's eyes turn dark red, and then back to normal.)
PIPER
Aw, crap. The Source.
HENRY
No. I'm more powerful. I, am the Entity.
CUT TO: PHOEBE's apartment.
(PHOEBE is next to PAIGE, and PAIGE is TKO'ing CANDOR into the wall. Then again. And Again….)
CANDOR
Enough!
(CANDOR forms an energyball, and throws it toward PHOEBE, who ducks, and PAIGE orbs it back to him.)
PAIGE
I guess its war.
CUT TO: Stairway. HENRY is chasing after JEN, RYAN, PIPER.
JEN (out of breath)
Who is that?
PIPER
That should, be my brother-in-law!
RYAN
But its not??
PIPER
I'm thinking.
CUT TO: Top of stairway. HENRY is throwing fireball after fireball towards PIPER.
Henry: Yo, PIPER. You wanna die like your mother?
(HENRY starts throwing Waterballs towards PIPER. RYAN is TKing them back.)
PIPER
Dont you dare talk about her!
CUT TO: HENRY chasing PIPER.
HENRY
Fine, maybe I'll just freeze you like Leo!
(HENRY switches to Iceballs, and blasts them towards the 3.)
PIPER
Please, stop! Paige!
CUT TO: PHOEBE's apartment.
(CANDOR continues throwing them towards PAIGE. PAIGE continues orbing them back, and TKOing things towards CANDOR, and CANDOR into furniture. CANDOR calls out for his minion, BAKSHOR.)
BAKSHOR
My liege.
CANDOR
Kill them all!
(PAIGE turns around towards BAKSHOR, and TKO's the fridge toward him.)
CANDOR
Foolish witch!
(CANDOR fires an energyball towards PHOEBE.)
PHOEBE
Paige!
(PAIGE turns around towards PHOEBE.)
PAIGE
NO!!
(The energy ball is inches away from PHOEBE. Everyone stops: PHOEBE in fear, PAIGE is panic, BAKSHOR in amazement, and CANDOR in excitement, when suddenly, out of instinct, PHOEBE levitates out of the way!
PHOEBE
My god! Its back!
(PHOEBE, realizing her advantage levitates, kicks BAKSHOR, CANDOR both with each one of her feet. Both are knocked out.)
CUT TO: PIPER, JEN, RYAN racing way from building, into a forest. HENRY is not to far behind.
(PIPER starts to lag behind.)
JEN
C'mon Piper. We're almost there.
RYAN, PIPER
To where?
JEN
My mother's. She's a powerful witch.
HENRY (shouting so Piper could hear her)
I got it, Eureaka! I'll just blast windballs towards you. You'll join your sister Prue in heaven, and woopdidoo!, you'll even die the same exact way!
(PIPER stops.)
PIPER
Now you've gone too far.
(PIPER blasts him. Then Again. Again. One more. Then another.)
CUT TO: PHOEBE's apartment.
(CANDOR and BAKSHOR are knocked out in the background.)
PAIGE (joking)
It's been one hell of a day, hasnt it, Pheebs?
PHOEBE
Yea. Umm, Paige? Was I hallucinating, or did you really call me a very *friendly* person for being away from you and Piper too much.
PAIGE
What?! No. I'd never say that. Everyone is searching for their lovemates.
PHOEBE
I'm so sorry, I never meant to.
PAIGE
No, no, no. I love you more than anything, sis.
PHOEBE
But the thing is that its true. I realize that Im searching for men too much these days, and if love is meant to find me, itll find me.
(PAIGE and PHOEBE smile.)
CUT TO: Middle of Forest.
(PIPER is blasting HENRY.)
PIPER
Paige! Where the hell are you?!
CUT TO: PHOEBE's apartment.
PHOEBE
Do you sense that? I think Piper's calling us. I guess I've earned empathy back too.
PAIGE (hearing PIPER's call)
Piper. She's in trouble. C'mon.
(They orb out.)
CUT TO: Forest.
(PAIGE, PHOEBE orb in. PIPER is blasting Henry continously.)
PAIGE
Stop, Piper! Henry!
(HENRY collapses.)
PAIGE
Henry!
(PAIGE rushes down to HENRY.)
PAIGE
Oh, god. No. Please. (She starts crying.)
PIPER
Paige, I'm sorry. Maybe it wasnt meant to be. He was destined for evil.
PAIGE
Noo! No! No!
(PAIGE falls onto HENRY’s chest, and sobs.)
END OF ACTS ONE TO FOUR.
END OF EPISODE.
TO BE CONTINUED.
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8.17B: Generation Hex, Part Two
TEASER:
CUT TO: Paige's Bedroom.
(Paige is crying, as she looks at a wedding picture of Henry and her.)
CUT TO: Generation Hex, Part One:
Piper: I'm sorry, Paige. Maybe it wasn't meant to be. He was destined for evil.
CUT TO: The 7 Year Witch:
Phoebe: We are blessed as witches, but cursed as women.
CUT TO: Paige's Room.
(Paige is still crying. Piper enters, with tears. Paige looks away.)
Piper: Look, I'm sorry.
(Piper sits on the bed. Paige turns around.)
Paige: You know, you'd think I'd actually find happiness. I get married one day, and everything all nice, and then I go to sleep. Next time I see him, he collapses. I don't get it. Why didn't he blow up?
(Paige turns around and falls into Piper's lap, sobbing.)
Piper: Oh, honey. It'll be okay. I promise you, if magic did this, we will fix it.
(Paige sobs.)
Piper: Look at me.
(Paige looks at her in the eyes.)
Piper: We will fix this!
CUT TO: Phoebe's Apartment.
(Bakshor is crawling over to a beaten up Candor.)
Bakshor: My liege. How can I help? How do you feel?
(Candor throws a waterball at Bakshor. Bakshor collapses and water consumes him. He melts into the ground, and the water flames up, leaving ashes behind.)
Candor: Like Hell.
(Candor looks at Bakshor's ashes.)
Candor: But don't worry, my friend. The half-blood will pay.
(Candor laughs, and ashes away.)
CU TO: Forest.
(The Entity escapes Henry's body. The Entity circles around Henry's body, whispering..)
The Entity: The oldest will die!
CUT TO: Underground Layer
(The Entity is seen merging into Candor's body. Candor smiles.)
Candor: They will all pay.
END OF TEASER.
CREDITS ROLL.
PARTS ONE TO FOUR:
(The Looker walks towards Henry, chanting something.)
The Looker: Actos Aboleos Rectar Asheres. Actos Aboleos Rectar Asheres.
(The Looker reaches Henry's dead body, and starts circling around him.)
The Looker: Actos Reviles Rector Aboleos.
(The Looker throws some ashes at him.)
CUT TO: The side of Henry's face.
(Feet walk past the screen, still circling around Henry. Ashes fall upon his face.
CUT TO: Directly about Henry's body.
(The Looker stops circling around Henry, and stops so that his face, and his legs are aligned proportionally with where she is standing.)
The Looker: Actos Reviles Revives Shaktoren. Shoterak Kalaken Actoren Revives!
(Henry's body rises into the air. The camera zooms in onto his face, and his eyes open.)
The Looker: It has begun.
Henry: Who are you? How did I get here? Am I dead?
CUT TO: Billie's Dormitory Room.
(There is music going on, with people dancing. While the party is going on, you see Billie kissing a guy.
Guy: Wow. You are so hott. And wild!
(They kiss some more.)
Billie: You wanna find out?
(Guy smiles. Billie's phone rings. Billie picks it up.)
Billie: Excuse me.
(Billie talks into phone.)
Billie: (Pause) Who died? (A pause) Oh god, I'll be right there.
(Billie puts away phone. )
Billie: Im sorry. I gotta go. It's a friend emergency.
(Billie leaves. You can see the same guy flirting with another girl passing by.)
CUT TO: Halliwell Manor.
(Billie emerges from a door, and meets Phoebe in living room.)
Billie: Okay, I was about to score. This better be good. Who are you?
Jen: Im Jen, this is Ryan. You may wanna sit down.
CUT TO: Stairway.
(Paige, Piper heading down stairs. 2 Demons shimmer in. Piper trys blasting him, but he only stumbles. Demon1 fires a water ball at Paige, while Paige TK splits it in half, sending them to both demons. The demons look like they blow up, but somehow really reconstitue like a Phoenix Witch.)
Paige: I've never seen that before. It looked like a ball of water?!
(They orb out.)
CUT TO: Halliwell Manor Living Room:
(They are discussing something.)
Billie: So these demons was torturing both of you, and you both escaped?
Ryan: But now there after us.
Phoebe, at Billie, sarcastically: Isn't this better than scoring?!
CUT TO: Paige, Piper orbing in.
(They look at Phoebe.)
Piper: We got attacked.
Paige: We're in trouble.
Piper: But they didnt look like they were after us.
(Jen and Ryan exchange glances)
CUT TO: MAGIC SCHOOL.
(2 Demons reconstitute, and angrily throw waterballs at furniture.)
Demon2: Those d**n Charmed Ones!
Demon1: Time for revenge.
Demon2: What do you have in mind?
(Demon1 smiles)
Demon1: If we get access to the Throne, all of the demons, from all over the Underworld will be by our side. Not even The Charmed Ones will be a threat once that happens. Besides, the Underworld is in chaos now, so who do we need to get past?
(Demon2 smiles, as Candor flames in)
Candor V.O: Me: The Intity. And thanks for the idea, but been there, done that! I am, after all, the former Source.
Demon1, realizing what's going on: My leige.
(Demon1 bows, Demon2 speaks up)
Demon2: Blasphemy. He's lying!
Demon1: No, he isn't.
Demon2, to Candor: Okay, fine, My liege. Prove it!
(Candor/The Entity's eyes flash with fire, Hatred, and that alone vanquishes Demon2.)
Candor: There you go. (to Demon1) You've just been upgraded. Consider yourself as the Brains behind my Master Plan.
CUT TO: Halliwell Manor.
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NOT DONE!
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